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你甚至去过香港?这个暑假,我和许多其他学生前往香港。小编收集了my friend初一英语作文,欢迎阅读。

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初一英语作文:怎样保持城市的整洁

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City cleanness is the symbol and reflection of the civilization of that city. It is obvious that if one comes to a clean and bright city, he will have a comfortable feeling and will be in a joyful mood. On the contrary, a dirty and polluted city may drive him away. So the deanness is very important to a city. But how can we get it?

The key lies in the citizensawareness of the importance of deanness. Citizens are the owners of their city. If everyone dwelling in the city keeps the city clean enthusiastically just as they keep their house clean, then streets will become cleaner and cleaner, buildings brighter and brighter, and consequently, the city will surely become more and more beautiful.

Some measures must be taken to keep our cities clean. For example, we should set a limit to noises and exhaust gases, and invest in the planting of trees and flowers. Moreover, some education and punish ment are necessary too. I believe in the future our city will become more beautiful gardens in a common effort of all the urban inhabitants.

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篇1:初一关于旅游的英语作文

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Nowadays, more and more people like to travel in their holidays. The other day I read a report about the ways people spend their holidays. It is reported that in recent yiars several new holiday habits have been developed. Among them, the most interesting one is the growth of the so-called holiday camps.

如今,越来越多的人喜欢在假期旅游。前几天我看了一篇关于人们如何度过他们的假期。据报道,近年来新的假期习惯了。其中,最有趣的是所谓的假期增长。

From the report we can see that in 20XX,40 percent of people stayed at home for holidays. But now the proportion has reduced to 9 percent. More people go out for fun. The proportion of camping and traveling abroad was increasing steadily, from 10 percent in 20XX to 38 percent in 20XX, and 12 percent in 20XX to 26 percent in 20XX respectively. People enjoy the fresh air, clean Water and green hills when they go camping in the suburbs. In 20XX,38 percent people enjoyed going to the seaside while in 20XX only 27 percent prefer to go there. What great changes!

从报告中我们可以看到,在20xx年,百分之40的人在家里度假。但是现在这个比例已经降到百分之9。更多的人出去玩。出去郊游和出国旅行的比例不断增加,从百分之10到百分之38在20XX年20XX年,和百分之12至百分之26分别在20XX年20XX年。人们享受新鲜的空气,干净的水和绿色的山,当他们去郊区露营。在20xx年,百分之38的人喜欢去海边,而在20XX年只有百分之27选择去那里。多么大的变化!

Why did those changes appear? I think there are several reasons. First, it s because people can afford traveling. Second, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life. Third, their attitudes to relaxation have changed. Less people want to save much money by leading a simple life. In short, peoples living standard today has been rising greatly.

为什么会出现这些变化?我认为有几个原因。第一,因为人们能够负担得起旅游。第二,人们更愿意追求一种高质量、丰富多彩的生活。第三,人们对休闲的态度改变了。越来越少的人想过简朴的生活节省很多钱。总之,人民生活日渐变好。

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篇2:初一英语作文

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Inow living in a small house with my parents. Life for us is hard but

happy. I must study hard so that I can buy a big new house some day. I call it a

dream house.

It has three floors with five bedrooms, three bathrooms, two big dining

rooms and two living rooms. When my friends come to visit me, I will have enough

bedrooms for them. Well have a good time. Besides that, we will have a swimming

pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house. In the morning, my

parents can do some exercise in the garden. The air must be very fresh. When we

feel tired, we can have a swim in the swimming pool. Life will be easy for

us.

Ill study harder than before so that the dream can come true.

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篇3:初一英语作文:校服之我见

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导语:如今,几乎所有的初中生和高中生都穿校服,这引起了越来越多的关注。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Nowadays, almost all junior and senior students wear school uniforms which attract a growing number of attention. But the evaluation of students and parents on the school uniforms is always dissatisfied than commended. Don’t we want to wear school uniforms? Absolutely not. The real reasons are that the uniform style is old fashioned and the color is too dark. Besides, the school uniform is expensive but poor quality. In school, we are willing to wear school uniform, but we just hope that the style of uniform is what we like and suit for us.

【参考翻译】

如今,几乎所有的初中生和高中生都穿校服,这引起了越来越多的关注。但是,学生和家长对校服的看法总是不满多过赞成。我们想穿校服吗?绝对不想。真正的原因是校服的款式过时了,而且颜色太暗了。除此之外,校服又贵质量又不好。在学校,我们愿意穿校服,但是我们只希望校服的款式是我们喜欢并且适合我们的。

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篇4:初一年级英语作文:My enthusiastic students

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Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school,he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived,and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

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篇5:初一英语作文:我最喜欢的城市

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【范文】Shen Zhen is my favorite city. It is a young and promising city. I have been living in this city for over ten years. I love the seafood in this city as well as its beautiful scenes. In summer, I can go to the sea to see the sun rise, or enjoy the fresh cool sea water. On weekend, I can go to the park to have a walk. Shen Zhen is my hometown. When I grow up, I want to make contribution to this city and make it becomes a better city.

【翻译】深圳是我最喜欢城市。她年轻富有活力。我在这里居住了10年。我爱这座城市的海鲜和美丽的风景。夏天来的时候,我可以去海边看日出,或者去享受冰爽的海水。在周末的时候,去公园散散步。深圳是我的家。等我长大了,我要为这所城市作出贡献,让她变得更好。

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篇6:初一下册英语作文大全

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There are many kinds of animals in the world. What animal do I like? Let’s

know her.

Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She is

very cute. She doesn’t eat grass and meat at all. She eats bamboo every day. She

is so nice. She is black white. She has two big black ears and eyes. And she

also has black legs and arms.

What animal is she? She is a panda. I like panda very much. Do you like

her? What animal do you like?

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篇7:英语日记大年初一干什么

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Lunar New Years day morning, I and grandfather father they go to new years.

Many people on the road, some family dozens of people to the new year. Adults and children are wearing new clothes, a cheerful and said to each other "Happy New year".

To the elders at home, just the door loudly say: "Happy New year! To give you a pay New Years call!" The elders affectionately gave me the gift money and sugar. I took it and said: "thank you!"

Im really glad! And adults go to the new year!

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篇8:初一英语作文CarsorBikes

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初一年级英语作文:Cars or Bikes?

题目:有人选择骑自行车上学/班,有人选择开/坐私家车上学/班。你觉得哪种出行方式更好? 为什么?

Cars or Bikes?

Cars and bicycles are similar in that they are both privately owned means of transport. In other words, they have in common the fact that the owner can decide when and where to go. However, there are a lot of difference between them. A car costs a lot more to buy than a bicycle.

In addition, it is far more expensive to run. For example, a car has to be insured, and must be serviced regularly; furthermore, spare parts for a car cost a lot of money. A ear uses petrol, which is expensive, whereas a bicycle uses only human energy.

On the other hand, as far as comfort is concerned, a car is better than a bicycle. In a car you are protected from the weather, have comfortable seats and plenty of room to can? people and luggage. A car is not only more comfortable than a bicycle, but it is faster as well. With respect to convenience, it is difficult to say which one is better. A bicycle is certainly easier to park!

To sum up, each one has its advantages and disadvantages.(约180字)

[初一英语作文Cars or Bikes

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篇9:作文初一英语

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Computers are changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a

computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs,

play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to

join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest

information in all fields. We don’t need to leave home to borrow books from a

library or to do shopping in a supermarket.

Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of

computers, the word is becoming a large family.

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篇10:初一学生英语日记

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What Am I Going to Do in the Summer Holiday

The new summer holiday is coming. As we know, summer is a beautiful season. During the coming summer holiday, I am going to study English. Then I am going to borrow some science books from

the library and discuss problems with my classmates, I’ll help my parents do some housework in my house, and I’ll water the flowers and trees our garden. I am going to play basketball, volleyball and

badminton with my neighbours in the afternoon. At the same time, if my father has time, he’ll teach me to swim. I’ll have fun.

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篇11:初一英语上册作文写给Lucy的一封信

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假设你叫李红,请你给Lucy写一封,向她介绍你的家庭情况和学校情况,60词以上。

X. One possible version:

May 23th, 2005

Dear Mr Qiu,

Thank you so much for teaching me so well. You are very kind to me. During the last three years I have learnt a lot of knowledge from you. I’ll never forget you. I’ll keep on studying hard as usual in the senior middle school.

Wish you success in the future teaching work. Wish you a healthy body for ever. And wish you a happy life in the future. And I also hope that everything will go well in our school! Best wishes for you and for our school!

Your student,

Li Hong

[初一英语上册作文写给Lucy的一封信

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篇12:初一英语作文_电力的重要性

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The Importance of Electricity

When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights dont work, the traffic jam will certainly happen. A patient needs to be operated on at once. What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line. Electricity is closely related to our daily life.

How terrible it would be if there were no electricity!

关于电力重要性的初中英语作文

当你早上去上班,发现交通灯不工作,交通堵塞,肯定会发生的。一个病人需要立刻动手术。如果操作不能因为电力会发生什么。没有电,我们不能看电视,听磁带,也不能在网上聊天。电在我们的日常生活密切相关的。

如果没有电将会多么可怕

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篇13:初一英语作文

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My mother is an ordinary woman,who is 1.58 meters tall.With kind appearance

and good manners,you will feel that she is very amiable and noble if you meet

her. As far as I concerned,my mother is always helping our neighbours or

strangers,which makes her gain good honors in our villages.Whenever somebody

needs aids,she will give her hands as much as she can.One day I went back home

to see my mother,but she wasnt in.After some inquiring ,I knew that my mother

was looking after a child whose mother had to work.In my mothers oppions,only

when the sorrounding enviornment is harmonious and people in the society help

each other,we can live a happy life and work happily and effectivel.

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篇14:初一年级英语作文:Mothers love

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All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.

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篇15:初一英语作文RiverPollution

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River Pollution

Chinese people are now face to a serious problem--pollution. And this problem is a little bit different from others--the goverment can not solve it by themselves. We need everyone to protect our environment. But we also know that it is very hard to call everyone to join us to protect the environment. But it seems that they have found the way to let everybody know it. In a report, Anhui Daily called on residents to help protect the river against pollution. I am so glad about it. And i believe that somewhere the pollution must stop.

[初一英语作文River Pollution

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篇16:关于初一的暑期英语作文

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初一暑期英语作文:A Present For Mother’s Birthday

A Present For Mother’s Birthday

Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people. So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.

It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.

Why do you think it was a good present?

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篇17:初一关于端午节英语作文带翻译

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The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival ,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.

端午节,又称端午节,是庆祝第五个月的第五天,根据中国日历。人们总是吃粽子和观看龙舟比赛庆祝。

The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Its very popular.

该节是最知名的龙舟比赛,特别是在那里有许多河流和湖泊的南部地区。它很受欢迎。

The rice dumpling is made of glutinous rice,meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious.And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan. He is an honest minister who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.

粽子是用糯米饭,肉类等。你可以品尝不同种类的粽子。它们都是十分美味的。端午节是为屈原。他是一个诚实的部长谁是说已投江自杀了。

Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!

总的来说,端午节是非常有趣的!

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篇18:初一年级假期计划英语作文

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Im happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.

First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve my English study.Then, I will see some funny comedies . Mr.Bean or Tom Hankss movies all cool! They can relax myself!If I have enough time,I will go dancing swimming! I wanna keep fit,you know!And,I will spend some time on my math.I always be careless on the math exam.I want to be careful!

I really have a large number of things to do,maybe Its a bit busy nervous.but I like this sort of life.I will try my best to do these tings!I believe myself,I can do all of them!Its nice to have this kind of courage!

我很高兴有这样一个好暑假!当然,我有许多事情要准备。

首先,我需要制定一个计划关于我的假期。我将做我的家庭作业5小时一天,我想读一些著名的英语书来提高我的英语学习。然后,我将看到一些有趣的喜剧。Mr.Bean或汤姆·汉克斯的电影都很酷!他们能放松我自己!如果我有足够的时间,我将去跳舞游泳!我想保持健康,你知道!我将花一些时间在我的数学。我总是被粗心的数学考试。我想要小心!

我真的有大量的事情要做,也许这有点忙紧张。但是我喜欢这种生活。我将尽我最大的努力做这些事!我相信我自己,我可以做的!很高兴有这样的勇气!

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篇19:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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Mom was always right in my eyes before. This is what mom implanted into my mind. Every sentence she said to me was correct. So I got used to following her words. Then there came one thing lately, which made mom herself admit that she was wrong. The fact goes like this. Although mom loves me, she doesn’t like girls. So she wanted all along to have a boy.

But what she did violated the birth control policy of China. She was seriously condemned. It seemed that mom’s dream of having a boy had come to nothing. Mom, I really thought you were right at the beginning, but I was wrong.

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