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你甚至去过香港?这个暑假,我和许多其他学生前往香港。小编收集了my friend初一英语作文,欢迎阅读。

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初一英语作文:PlantingFlowers

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Spring is coming. Birds are singing and flowers are blooming. I wanted to plant spring in my home, so I, together with my dad, went to the market and bought some flower seedlings. We prepared to plant them in the yard. When we were back home, we went into action in no time. Some time later, we finished. I will patiently wait for spring to come to the yard now.

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篇1:mygoodfriend初一英语作文

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i have a good friend , her name is gina . she is a girl. she is 13 years old.she is a student in class 1 of no.1 middle school . she studies very well. her favorite subject is chinese , beacuse it is very interesting.her like strawberries best.

she usually gets up at 6:00am .then she brushes her teeth. next she goes to school at 7:40. she has four classes in the morning . her last ciass is history . that is her faorite subject , too.she goes to bed at 9:00pm.

she has a big family.she love her mother and father . and she also has a sister.she also like she.

this is my good friend . i want to learn about your good friend. please write and tell me about your friend.

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篇2:初一英语作文Mydreamhome

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初一英语作文 My dream home

My dream home is not very large.Its a wooden house. it is near the sea.Id like to have 5 rooms in my home.I have a kitchen ,a bathroom, a sitting room,a studyand my own bedroom. I like living near the sea because it is very quiet there. I can watch the sea and can always play on the beach.

The furniture in my house is all made of wooden.

It is good for our health. I like having a rest in my bedroom.I like listening to music of JJ while Im reading books in my room.I always ask my friends to come here.

[:初一英语作文My dream home

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篇3:初一作文:英语村

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也许长这么大,对我帮助最大的就是英语村了(English village)了。

英语村是我六年级毕业以后学校组织的一次英语活动。聘请外教来上课,吃住都在学校中,听说还可以在晚上搞搞活动,看看影片,其乐无穷。

于是,我动心了,便成为了英语村中的一名学子。好兴奋!虽说我的自理能力挺差的,不过,我更渴望一些自由,更渴望无拘无束地玩耍。我渴望与外教谈天说地,我渴望学到那纯正的英语……虽说我的英语水平说不上怎么好,但是,毕竟比别人多学了几年的剑桥英语,要是想表达一个意思,想法,那是绝对没问题的。想到自己在英语村中一定会很出色,不由地沾沾自喜。但现在想想,父母的忠告的确是对的:“你不要感觉太好了,离开了父母你会碰到很多困难的。”而我却说了一句:“我不是自我感觉良好,而是自我感觉优秀!”

回想一下,的确希望是越大,失望也就越大。在整个英语村中,我还是吃了很多苦的,当时当然也很后悔,但毕竟也锻炼了我的能力,让我学会了很多的知识,学会了生活。对自己而言,我是很成功的!

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篇4:教师节初一英语作文

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We wish to show our gratitude and thanks with a small gift. Happy Teacher‘s Day!

我们送您一件小礼物,以表我们对您的感激之情。教师节愉快!

You are like a third parent. We all love you and respect you.您就像我们的家长,我们都敬爱您。

We all like having you as our teacher. You have our respect and gratefulness.我们喜欢您做我们的老师,我们尊敬您、感激您。

This is Teachers‘Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers. This profession deserves the special recognition and respect. There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness.

We are more thankful than we can express.对您的谢意,我们无法用语言来表达。

You have been a qualified teachers and even better friend. Thank you for all that you have done.您不仅是一位合格的教师,更是一位好朋友,谢谢您所做的一切。

Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire.教育不是灌满一桶水,而是点燃一团生命的火焰。

The man who can make hard things easy is the educator.能使艰难之事变得容易的人是教育者。

Send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulness and thankfulness on this special day.在这特别的日子谨向您致以我们永恒的感激之情。

A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops.一个教师对人的影响是永恒的。

It is the most appropriate time to show you our thanks.现在是向您表达感激之情最为恰当的时刻。

This small gift is only a tiny token of our gratefulness. We all want to thank you.这件小小的礼物略表我们的感激之情。我们大家都很感谢您。

I am truly grateful to you for what you have done.我深深地感激您所做的一切。

Dear teacher, thank you for illuminating my voyage of life with your own light of life. My grateful sentiments come from the bottom of my heart.老师,感谢您用自己的生命之光,照亮了我人生的旅途,对您我满怀感谢之情。

The whole secret of the teacher‘s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.教师力量的全部秘密,就在于深信人是可以改变的。

No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.没有人比您更值得如此深厚的谢意。仅这一天远不足以表达我们对您的感激之情.

Thank you for making learning not a dull thing but a great joy.感谢您使我们把枯燥的学习变成了巨大的乐趣。

We all pitched to buy this gift. We are all grateful to you. Without your unselfish dedication could we achieve no success today.这是我们买给您的礼物,谢谢您,老师。没有您无私的奉献,就不会有我们今天 的成功。

Our beloved teacher, you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts. The love and care you have given us will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.亲爱的老师,您就像那春天的细雨,滋润着我们的心田。您给予我们的爱和关怀 将鼓舞着我们走过艰难困苦。

You are not only a good teacher but our close friend. Thank you for helping us make something of our lives.您不仅是一位好老师,也是我们亲密的朋友,谢谢您帮助我们奋发有为。

My heart felt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honour you sincerely.亲爱的老师,向您表达我最衷心的感谢。在人生旅途上,您为我点燃了希望之光 ,您所做的一切润泽了我

I wish to express my thanks to you for instructing my child.谢谢您对我孩子的教诲。

My sincere thanks to you for being my child‘s teacher.衷心感谢您,我孩子的恩师。

My child speaks highly of you. Thank you very much.我的孩子很崇敬您。谢谢。

As parents we recognize the value of you in our child‘s development. Thank you for what you have done.作为父母,我们深知您在我们孩子成长道路中的重要。谢谢您所做的一切。

One good teacher in a lifetime may sometimes change a delinquent into a solid citizen.一个好教师具有化腐朽为神奇的力量。

Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth; for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.教育儿童的教师应当享有比父母更多的荣誉,父母只给孩子生命,而教师则创造 了一个完善的生命。

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篇5:初一英语作文:我最喜欢的运动员

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There are many sports stars in the world. Do you know which is my favourite sport star? My favourite star is Yi Jianlian.

Yi Jianlian is a good basketballer. He is born in Heshan, Guangdong. He is 2.12 meters tall and 113 kilos. He is taller than many people, and he is hangsome and kind. He works hard in the match and in the training. So his coach and team friends all like him.

Yi Jianlian began his career quite early. When he was fifteen years old, he came into CBA. In 2002, he got the first gold medal——Asia Youth championship’s champion. After that, he helped Guangdong team win 3 gold medals from 2003 to 2006 CBA championships. And he von the CBA MVP from 2005 to 2006. In 2006 Asian Games, he got 16.6 points and 10.3 rebounds. He was the greatest basketball player in PRC, in 2006, I think.

On June 28th, 2007, Yi Jianlian came into NBA! All the Chinese people were excited. Because he is the fourth Chinese basketballer who came into NBA. All the people hope he can become better and better..

Yi Jianlian is good at playing basketball. And he is handsome, friendly, kind and so on. So he has a lot of basketball fans in the world. My mother and I are both his fans.

Yi Jianlian is my favourite star. I think, Yi Jianlian will be a famous basketball star in the world later. All the people on the earth will know him!

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篇6:初一年级英语作文:The most interesting thing

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To me ,the most interesting subject is English.But I find studying English is very difficult.So if you ask which subject is the most difficult to me.My answer will be English.Now I am a student,everyday I have more than one English classes,I like studying it very much and I hope I can study it very well,so I can talk with foreigners and know the foreign countries things,it is very useful.

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篇7:初一英语作文:我的校园生活

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导语:每个人都有精彩的校园生活,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Hi! I am a girl. I’m fourteen years old. I come from a small village of Guangxi. I am a student of Class 1, Grade 2. My School life is very interesting. Class begins at 7:45a.m. I have five classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I often have two or three classes. We learn Chinese, English, math, history, biology, geography, politics, physics and so on. I learn them with great interest. I like P.E. best. Because having sports is good for us and build us up. And we’ll have a sport meet this term, I want to take part in the long jump.

I have lunch at school at about a quarter to twelve, because my home is a little far from the school. After school, I often play basketball with my classmates on the playground. Sometimes, I go to the school library. In my spare time, I often practice speaking English with my good friends on the lawn. Because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic, English is very important. Speaking English will help me to make more foreign friends.

My teachers and classmates are very friendly to me. I like my school life very much. What about your school life? Can you tell me?

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嗨!我是姑娘我十四岁。我来自广西的一个小村庄。我是一名1年级2班的学生。我的学校生活很有趣。在7:45a开始上课。我上午有五节课。在下午,我经常有2个或三个班。我们学语文、英语、数学、历史、生物学、地理、政治、物理等。我很感兴趣。我最喜欢体育运动。因为有运动对我们有好处,把我们建立起来。这学期我们将有一个运动会,我想参加跳远比赛。

我在学校吃午饭大约四分之一到十二,因为我的家离学校有一点远。放学后,我经常和我的同学们在操场上打篮球。有时,我去学校图书馆。在我的业余时间,我经常练习说英语和我的好朋友在草坪上。因为北京将举办2008届奥运会,英语是非常重要的。说英语将帮助我结交更多的外国朋友。

我的老师和同学对我很友好。我非常喜欢我的学校生活。你的学校生活怎么样?你能告诉我吗?

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篇8:初一年级假期计划英语作文

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Im happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.

First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve my English study.Then, I will see some funny comedies . Mr.Bean or Tom Hankss movies all cool! They can relax myself!If I have enough time,I will go dancing swimming! I wanna keep fit,you know!And,I will spend some time on my math.I always be careless on the math exam.I want to be careful!

I really have a large number of things to do,maybe Its a bit busy nervous.but I like this sort of life.I will try my best to do these tings!I believe myself,I can do all of them!Its nice to have this kind of courage!

我很高兴有这样一个好暑假!当然,我有许多事情要准备。

首先,我需要制定一个计划关于我的假期。我将做我的家庭作业5小时一天,我想读一些著名的英语书来提高我的英语学习。然后,我将看到一些有趣的喜剧。Mr.Bean或汤姆·汉克斯的电影都很酷!他们能放松我自己!如果我有足够的时间,我将去跳舞游泳!我想保持健康,你知道!我将花一些时间在我的数学。我总是被粗心的数学考试。我想要小心!

我真的有大量的事情要做,也许这有点忙紧张。但是我喜欢这种生活。我将尽我最大的努力做这些事!我相信我自己,我可以做的!很高兴有这样的勇气!

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篇9:寒假初一英语日记

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The end of the year, on New Years Eve is the reunion night, every family is decorated, celebrate a peaceful year end, the new year started.

On the eve of new years Eve, all the family are busy with the Spring Festival couplets. Our family is no exception, and the couplets at home are still posted by me every year. In fact, the knowledge of this couplet is quite great. When you saw this couplet last year, you will know the hopes and intentions of the family in the new year, and you will know what happy events happen in the familys family in the past year.

In this day, the happiest of all the children, they were early to call for adults to meet the year, because after the end of the year, they can put fireworks. When the fireworks, several children are shouting, dancing in the side, that Gaoxing Jin jiubeng mention, and even adults are also infected with them. After the fireworks one family around the table to eat family reunion dinner, the most interesting thing is to eat dumplings, and it also can eat to eat dumplings, who eat the money that who will be the best in the new year of luck, so you are to eat, who also rob the rich dumplings. But whether to eat or not to eat or eating dumplings this atmosphere is the most unforgettable......

New years Eve is the most memorable night!

结语:可以说寒假是一个新的起点,正在离我们不远处等着我们全市界的小朋友们,当然,还会有我们学校的一些大同学。

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篇10:OurSchool初一英语作文

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Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building.

There are thirty classrooms, a modern library, a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard.

Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much.

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篇11:我们的学校初一英语作文

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Our school is very beautiful. there are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It's so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.the teachers work very hard.they love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

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篇12:祖国的变化初一英语作文_初一年级英语作文500字

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Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages.

The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasseshave been built in big cities. Chinese people’s life is much better than ever before. We have Tv sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc.

We’ll study harder and make our countrry stronger and more beautiful.

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篇13:有关交流英语初一

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Communicating with others is a big problem in daily life. Some people are

easy to talk to oters, but some others not. When you want to talk to someone,

firstly you should find some topics to talk about, but the topics should not

included the privacy,such as age, marriage or wage. Secondly, pay attention to

your attitude that do not make others feel uncomfortable. Comfort is the basic

of communication. Thirdly, pay attention to your body language. Body language

can transmit much information, such as your attitude, manners or something you

do not realize. Finally, focus on your pacing. Dont talk too fast or too

slow.

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篇14:初一英语作文TheWeekend

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It was Sunday and I didnt have to go to school. I finished my homework the day before. So I decided to help mother do housework. I washed some clothes after I got up. Then I went shopping with a basket. I bought some meat, eggs and some vegetables in the market. After I came back, I started to cook dinner for the whole family. In the evening, I sat at the table and began to write down on my notebook what I had done during the day.

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篇15:初一英语

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Everyone has a hobby. I like doing sports and I like playing basketball the

best. So I decided to play basketball every morning with my classmates. Today,

the weather was nice. Early in the morning, I got up and worn clothes quickly.

When I arrived at the basketball ground, my classmates have already been there.

First, we ran around the basketball ground so that we could play better in the

game. After that, we began to play basketball. In the end, we beat another team.

Although we all felt tired, we were happy and proud.

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篇16:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇17:初一圣诞节英语作文ChristmasDay

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Christmas is coming! I embrace both nervous and looking forward to the coming of the mood to greet it, I will receive a special Christmas gifts, but since the rise in grade five, I have never received, may be when I grow up; Or is my performance is not good, Santa Claus is not a gift to me >

"Jingle bells, jingle bells..." A bell sound when wake me up, a fat fat fat, have a big rub white beard "grandpa" to stand in front of me, he was red, how lovely! He kind of took me by the hand and lead me to sit in the sled, sledge before have a lot of moose! They each power, magnificent, good looks gentle, then we fly to heaven, looking at a white piece of land, I suddenly felt a little regret, but curiosity got the better of me regret it, so we will be an adventure.

After a while, and elk started slowly landing, the next scene to my surprise, a group of small winged genie is hard work, they face with a cheerful smile, like me, a beautiful elves and friendly like me to introduce myself, she is called "Helen", she is very good to me, and to introduce me to each elf, and the unfamiliar environment, I also quickly become one with all of you, help you packaging, production and combination together, work together, they finished the work quickly, finally went to "Santa Claus" freight!

I and Santas sleigh again, and will present one by one to those children are looking forward to the mood of her arms, and looked at their innocent face, I good gao xing! Finally Santa Claus will my peace back to my room, he also gave me a small gift, I didnt break gift right away, but I know that my heart was filled with great joy, burst out of tears, also dont listen to the servants, and it is the tears of joy! ? How I wish this dream continue to continue, but the ear is gently call me, in my lackadaisical climb up, this is a wonderful dream! The gift was quietly at the edge of my body, I opened the package, it is the Christmas tree ornaments as little angel, it shiny shiny, I use it to hang on the Christmas tree, looking at it ah wave. "Christmas" is how special this year!

圣诞节来临了!我抱着既紧张又期待的心情来迎接它的来临,每年的圣诞节我都会收到一份特别的礼物,但自从升上五年级后,我就再也没有收到了,也许是我长大了;或者是我表现不好,圣诞老公公才不送礼给我〈大人总是这么说〉!这天夜里,我一如往常的睡觉,接着我进入了甜蜜的梦乡……

“叮叮当、叮叮当……”一阵铃当声把我给吵醒,一个肥肥胖胖,有着一大搓白胡须的〝老爷爷〞站在我面前,他全身红通通的,好可爱啊!他和蔼的牵着我的手,并带领我坐到雪橇上,雪橇前有好多只麋鹿喔!它们各个威风、雄壮,看起来都好温驯,接着我们飞到天上,望着一片雪白的陆地,我突然有点后悔,但好奇心战胜了我的后悔,于是我们将展开一场冒险之旅。

飞了一阵子后,麋鹿开始慢慢的降落,接下来的情景令我惊喜万分,一群矮小有着翅膀的精灵正辛勤的工作着,他们脸上都带着愉悦笑容,一位美丽的精灵像我走来,并友善的像我自我介绍,她叫做“海伦”,她对我非常的好,并向我介绍每个精灵,和这个陌生的环境,很快的我也和大家打成一片,帮大家一起包装、制作和组合,大家同心协力,很快的便完成了工作,最后就交给〝圣诞老公公〞去运货 了!

我和圣诞老公公再次坐上雪橇,并且将礼物一个个送到那些抱着期待的心情的那些小朋友怀里,看着他们天真无邪的脸蛋,我好高 兴喔!最后圣诞老公公将我平安的送回我的房间,他也送给我一个小小的礼物,我并没将礼物马上拆开,但我知道我心里洋溢着无比的欢喜,泪水也不听使唤的涌了 出来,这就是喜极而泣吧!?我多么希望这场梦继续延续下去,但耳边正轻轻的在呼唤我,我庸懒的爬了起来,这是一场多美好的梦啊!那份礼物竟悄悄的放在我身 边,我打开包装,里面是圣诞树上的一样饰品小天使,它闪闪的发亮,我将它挂在圣诞树上,看着它摇啊摇的。今年的“圣诞节”是多么的与众不同啊!

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篇18:初一英语Myday

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My Day Today is sunny. I get up early and read some English. Then I have breakfast and go to school. In the morning we have four lessons, they’re two Enlish lessons, one Chinese lesson and one history lesson. I like English best. At noon we have lunch at school, we have rice and vegetables, but we don’t like them very much. In the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson. Math is difficult, but I study hard. And we sing a beautiful song. We finish school at a quarter to five. I play basketball with my friends on the playground. It’s fun! Then I go home and do my homework, next I have dinner with my parents and watch TV. I go to bed at nine o’clock.

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篇19:初一关于食品安全的英语作文

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As peoples living standard is higher and higher, people pay more and more attention to the food problem, is the so-called: "the food to Ann first." The food is indispensable in our life, is also what we most closely contact, so food safety becomes our life can not be ignored in safety. Take the things around me.

Our school gate, there are a number of vendors. Business is booming every day. Vendors some ice cream, and some also sell some pigment water... The delicious food in broad daylight, there seems to be a hand is extended in those little available to the school, but who knows whether the food is unqualified, is it safe?

In fact, a large number of outside food health situation is not ideal, there are many widespread substandard health food. Experts pointed out that these problems and no relevant guarantee food, great effects on the health of primary and middle school students. Although school everyday in said food safety problems, the students are still not care.

Ive heard of one thing: one day, a classmate after school, feel very hungry, although the teacher talked about or buy junk food today. But he is not on the heart, with fifty cents to buy ice cream. When buy, he was a good ideological struggle, finally, stomach protested in "cuckoo" sound, he bought ice cream. His side to the gourmet taste with relish, and marched to the home. Unfortunately things finally happened. The very next day, he have loose bowels, not only themselves, parents also worry! This is not obedient disorderly buy snacks.

随着人们的生活水平越来越高,大家也越来越关注食品的这个问提,正所谓:“民以食为天,食以安为先。”这食物可是我们生活中必不可少的东西,也是我们接触最密切的东西,所以食品安全就成了我们生活中不可忽视的安全问题。就拿我身边的事情说吧。

我们学校门外,有不少的小摊小贩。每天生意总是兴隆。小贩们有的冰激凌,有的还卖有色素的水......那些光天化日下香喷喷的食物,似乎有一只手在向学校里那些小馋嘴伸去,可谁又知道这些食物是否合格,是否安全呢?

其实,大量校外食品都是卫生状况不理想,还有许多食物普遍存在卫生不达标的问题。有专家指出,这些存在问题且无相关保障食品,势必对中小学生身体健康造成很大影响。虽然学校天天都在说食品安全问题,可同学们仍毫不在乎。

我听说过一件事:有一天,一位同学放学后,感到很饿,虽老师今天讲过要不买垃圾食品。可他不放在心上,用五角钱买了冰激凌。在买时,他做了很大的思想斗争,最后,肚子在“咕咕”地叫声中提出了抗议,他买了冰激凌。他边津津有味地品尝着手中的美食,边大步流星地向家走去。可不幸的事最终还是发生了。就在第二天,他就拉肚子,不光自己难受,家长也担忧啊!这就是不听话乱买零食的下场。

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篇20:初一英语简短

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I always think there is not enough time. For example, I have just taken a three-day holiday. But when I look back, I just feel that it’s only one day. There goes a proverb, “Time is money”. Now I want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. However, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.

Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But it’s a pity that I am always not aware of the importance of time until it’s too late.

So I think, I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting one’s life. Do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!

我总觉得时间不够。例如,我刚刚参加了为期3天的假期。但是当我回头看,我只是觉得这是唯一的一天。有句谚语说,“时间就是金钱”。现在我想说,时间比金钱更宝贵,因为当钱花掉的时候,我们可以再挣一些钱。然而,当时间流逝,它永远不会回来。

时间不被察觉。我们学习和工作的时间通常是有限的。所以我认为我们必须充分利用我们的时间。但遗憾的是,我总是不知道时间的重要性,直到一切都太迟了。

所以我想,我应该养成节约时间的好习惯,因为浪费时间等于浪费生命。不要把今天能完成的事拖到明天!

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