商务英语自我介绍英语(汇总20篇)

我叫×××，来自02E1班，也就是电子商务专业的学生。下面是我的简单自我介绍：

本人就读于广东省对外贸易学校，将于200XX年6月毕业。我非常珍惜在校期间的学习机会，认真学习文化课程，较熟悉地掌握专业知识，与此同时，我还学会了许多做人做事的道理。三年来的学习生话磨练出一个自信和上进心强的我。

面对知识经济的到来，计算机技术也得到了广泛的应用。作为一个21世纪的中专生，面对的又是一个新的挑战。不仅要有扎实的专业技能，还需有更多方面的知识。所以中专期间我不断学习，不断拼搏，努力学习各种计算机网络，网页设计，互联网技术，2000 Server，微机原理，跟单信用证，英语函电，国际贸易实务等专业知识。除此之外还选修了案例分析，商务代理，photoshop图像处理以及物流知识等以提高自己的综合素质。鉴于此，我希望能在毕业后谋一职位，热切期望能用自己所学之技为社会做出自己的微薄之力。对待学习，我认真努力，对待工作我同样也能做到爱岗敬业，谨慎负责，一丝不苟。在生活方面我乐观，热情，诚恳，宽容。我自信能胜任自己的工作，本着“迎难而上”的精神，我将凭自己的能力克服各种困难，更好地胜任将

工作以来，在单位领导的精心培育和教导下，通过自身的不断努力，无论是思想上、学习上还是工作上，都取得了长足的发展和巨大的收获，现将工作总结如下：

思想上，积极参加政治学习，坚持四项基本原则，拥护党的各项方针政策，自觉遵守各项法规。

工作上，本人自xxxx年工作以来，先后在某某部门、某某科室、会计科等科室工作过，不管走到哪里，都严格要求自己，刻苦钻研业务，争当行家里手。就是凭着这样一种坚定的信念，我已熟练掌握储蓄、会计、计划、信用卡、个贷等业务，成为XX行业务的行家里手。

记得，刚进XX行，为了尽快掌握XX行业务，我每天都提前一个多小时到岗，练习点钞、打算盘、储蓄业务，虽然那时住处离工作单位要坐车1个多小时，但我每天都风雨无阻，特别是冬天，冰天雪地，怕挤不上车，我常常要提前两、三个小时上班，就是那时起我养成了早到单位的习惯，现在每天都是第一个到行里，先打扫卫生，再看看业务书或准备准备一天的工作，也是这个习惯，给了我充足的时间学习到更多的业务知识，为我几年来工作的顺利开展打下了良好的基础。

我工作过的岗位大部分在前台，为了能更好的服务客户，针对不同层次、不同需求的客户，我给予不同的帮助和服务，记得有一位第一次到我行客户，当我了解到他要贷款买二手房时，由于他不知该怎么办，只是有个想法，我便详细地向他介绍了个贷的所有手续。除了在服务客户上我尽心尽力，在行里组织的各项活动中我也积极响应，经常参加单位组织的各项竞赛，展示自我，并取得了优异的成绩，受到了单位的嘉奖。

学习上，自从参加工作以来，我从没有放弃学习理论知识和业务知识。由于我毕业财校属于中专，刚工作我就利用业余时间自学大专，并于xx年毕业，但我没有满足于现状，又于xx年自修东北大学金融本科，由于学习勤奋刻苦，成绩优良，学习中受到老师充分肯定，目前正在积极准备论文答辩。不但掌握和提高了金融知识，也有了一定的理论水平，完全达到了本科生所具有的水准。学习理论的同时，更加钻研业务，把学到的金融知识融会到工作中去，使业务水平不断提高，并于xx年参加全国中级经济师资格考试，顺利通过同时被行里聘为中级师。在多年的业务知识考核当中，每次会计业务资格考试都达到1级水平。

最后，我想说的是，上面只是我工作中取得的一点成绩，这与单位的领导和同事们的帮助是分不开的。我始终坚信一句话“一根火柴再亮，也只有豆大的光。但倘若用一根火柴去点燃一堆火柴，则会熊熊燃烧”。我希望用我亮丽的青春，去点燃周围每个人的激情，感召激励着同事们一起为我们的事业奉献、进取、立功、建业……

[电子商务专业毕业生求职自我介绍精编样本参阅

my name is . there are 4 people in my family. my father is a chemistryteacher. he teaches chemistry in senior high school. my mother is an english teacher. she teaches english in the university. i have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

i like to read english story books in my free time. sometimes i surf the internet and download the e- books to read. reading e- books is fun. in addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

i hope to study both english and computer technology because i am interested in both of the subjects. maybe one day i could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

我的名字是。有4人在我的家人。我的父亲是一个chemistryteacher。他教高中化学。我的母亲是一名英文教师。她教英语的大学。我有一个弟弟，他是一个初中学生，是联考的准备。

我喜欢阅读，在我空闲时，英文故事书。有时我上网冲浪和下载电子书籍阅读。阅读电子书籍的乐趣。此外，还扩大了，因为我的先进技术词汇和生动的动画。

我希望学习英语和计算机技术，因为我感兴趣的是两个科目。也许有一天，我可以把他们和今后适用于我的研究。

[面试中的英语自我介绍

Dear Sir/Madam:

Hello!

Thank you for your first start reading, giving me the opportunity to you goes to my cover letter.

I Jiangxi Vocational College of Economics an d Management Department of Logistics Management 2010 graduates with the same number of our students, graduate an d harvest in sight, waiting for the test of the community an d look forward to your choice.

I was born in rural areas, studying in the city, so honest an d generous Chinese farmers an d urban people”s traditional virtues of a strong confident personality in me to get the perfect combination, which I have good social adaptation. University for three years to hone more I experience the significant increase in overall capacity strengthening, personal qualities to be a qualitative leap.

Bao Jianfeng from sharpening out, plum blossom from the bitter cold, looking back, slowly an d study hard more than a dozen set, I split the air waves in the vast Xuehai cut, to seek the knowledge of the mountain. To pursue their studies of the exquisite, the pursuit of ambitions to achieve, manifestation of the pursuit of personal values, learning career, I have sought all-round development in physical an d moral. I sweat pour out of fruitful results. college three years, I have every year are very outstan ding professional achievements, an d received third-class scholarship. Not only that, but also repeatedly been assessed "outstan ding cadres” college, many times the individual literary works in the College of Competition award.

Knowledge while at the same time I did not forget to shape their own character, honesty, unity an d good to my usual style, aggressive, hard work is my unique personality. To accompany raising their overall quality, I have actively participated in school a variety of meaningful activities outside; addition to specialized courses, I was the other after-school elective courses, including literature, psychology, acCounting, management, etc., in order to broaden their knowledge. usually either studying or living, I have to deman ding their own, I will put this character to the work which, strive to improve their ability to work, make their businesses grow gradually with the growth.

"Decade of sword, frost edge never try ”, I sincerely hope to become a member of your organization, I will, with enthusiasm an d tenacity of character to work hard an d cooperate with colleagues, contribute to savings for many years as a unit wisdom an d skill. urge acceptance letter, is hope, I await your good news! I believe my ability, but I believe you are the right choice! give me a chance, I will have you a miracle!

[简单应聘英语自我介绍

Football is the world’s most popylar sport. We play football at the playground. We also have fun when we play football. We also call it soccer.

Our students must do exercises everyday to stay healthy, and I’ve found that play football is a very good way to stay healthy. Football players must be rugged. It’s one of the most popular sports all over the world. We can run on the ground for a long time and we also can prove our friendship with the members of our team.

More and more people like watching football matches. They can’t sleep or eat when their teams are playing. They shout for their players. I think many Chinese football players have done better match after match. But we will have a long way to go to Asia and to the world. We should learn from foreign teams. Foreign players and coaches must be invited. Dalian Wanda, Shanghai Shenhua and Guangdong Apollo are among the best teams.

I love playing football, because I can play football to stay healthy, football is a good sport.

Chinese New Year! Every place has different customs, and each has its own characteristics. I had the opportunity to back to my home in chongqing this year New Years day, let me introduce you to the Spring Festival customs of tujia.

New Years eve at noon, I saw my grandma cooked a lot of rice, just curious to ask: why want to cook so much rice, we also cant eat a meal? Grandmother replied: "want to cook some more, todays day cant cook fresh rice again. For tujia people seldom eat fish, so be about to cook more, it is also called more every year."

New Years eve afternoon, grandpa and father stick couplets, I also coincided with in the past. East, west to see see. When my father asked me: "do you know why do we need to stick couplets?" I answered: "know a little bit, festive bai." "Also right, couplet to express the good wish of people to pray for good fortune in the New Year. Now we stick couplets, cannot go toward outside throwing things, even cant throw rubbish, until annual lunar calendar to throw things. This means that circle the goods at home." Dad went on to say that.

On the evening of New Years eve, the home of the elder led the family to "worship the mountain ancestor worship". On the front of ancestors grave red candle and incense, placed offerings, to miss to ancestors. This also is respect for them.

These are the Spring Festival customs of tujia, I know you think its interesting.

过年啦!每个地方都有不同的习俗，并且都各具特色。今年我有幸回趟老家重庆过年，就让我给大家介绍一下土家族的春节习俗吧。

除夕的中午，我见奶奶煮了好多饭，就好奇的上前去询问：为什么要煮这么多饭，我们一顿也吃不了呀?奶奶回答道：“今天要多煮一些，大年初一可不能再煮新鲜饭。因为土家族人很少吃鱼，所以就要多煮饭，这也叫‘年年有余’吧。”

除夕的下午，爷爷和爸爸一起贴对联，我也过去凑热闹。东看看，西瞧瞧。这时爸爸问我：“你知道我们为什么要贴对联吗?”我回答：“知道一点点，喜庆呗。”“也对吧，对联是为了表达人们祈求新年福运的美好心愿。现在我们贴好了对联，就不能往外扔东西了，连垃圾也不能扔，一直要到大年初二才可以扔东西。这样就表示把财圈在家里了。”爸爸接着说。

除夕的傍晚，由家里的最长者带领全家去“拜山祭祖”。在先辈的坟前点上红烛和香，摆上祭品，以表对先辈的怀念。这也是对他们的尊敬。

这些就是我了解的土家人的春节习俗，你觉得有趣吧。

each examiner：

i call/**， come from shandong province。this year is 21 years old， ， is a student who will soon graduate。

passes the foundation knowledge that the teachers guidance controled a calculator with personal effort firmly in the school。mainly studied c language at the software aspect。 c#。 java etc。 plait the distance language， the data structure， vf。 access etc。 database is applied， calculator operate system。studied the dreamweaver web page manufacture and the asp network to weave a distance also。studied the calculator network at the hardware aspect， the calculator construction with www。oh100。combine many times to attend to pack machine， set the fulfillment of the net operation lesson， make me control the work principle of the calculator and the set of the calculator network net process。

in addition， i attend various activities of the school organization to come to the oneself of 锻炼 actively and do various part—time to increase social experience。the teacher is divided into the group to us in the experiment and practice of the lesson remaining to complete mission， make we the deep comprehension arrive the importance of the team。the and the rise time acquires the school scholarship during the period of school， three staffs。

however necessarily limited at the knowledge that the school learn， therefore i would ready to take advice study in the later work， the backlog working experience， the exaltation work ability。hope your company to give me a displays an own opportunity！

this with the result that。

salute

Good morning，ladies and gentlemen. I am Leo from Guangzhou Zhengxin International School. I am a sunny boy. My family love me and I love them too. My mom works very hard every day. She comes home very late in the evening. Do you know how to help the parents at home? Let me tell you about that.

女士们先生们早上好，我来自广州正心国际学校，我是阳光男孩，我们全家都很爱我，我也很爱他们，每天爸爸妈妈工作都很努力，晚上都很晚下班，你知道如何在家中去帮助妈妈吗？让我告诉你

Usually my dad cooks for us. Sometimes I help my dad to wash the vegetables. Sometimes I set the table. I always wash the dishes when we finish eating. After I finish my homework I often water the flowers. I also look after my pet fish. I feed the fish before I go to bed.

有时我爸爸会给我们煮饭，那我也会，帮助我爸爸去洗菜，摆餐具，饭后我总是习惯去洗碗，写玩作业后我会主动去浇花，以及在睡觉之前我会去喂鱼。

I really enjoy helping my parents at home. Do you think I am a helpful boy? I think so! Thank you! 我很喜欢帮助爸爸妈妈去做事，你觉得我是一个好帮手吗？我想我是！谢谢！

My family had two lovely Bo Mei dog, one called toot, one called Bo Mei, toot is a brother, Bo Mei is the sister. They are very smart as long as we see the dogs necklace, we know to take them out to play, so it will be very happy to shake the tail. Bo Mei will be afraid of firecrackers, and occasionally he is not good, my father to learn the sound of the firecrackers scare it, it will be afraid to clip the tail, it is really a fun dog ah!

I read the dogs book, the dog wagged his tail to show pleasure; if the tail to sag, then expressed fear. I asked my mother, said: Why does the dog stretch his tongue? Mom told me that the dogs body without sweat, had no choice but to stretch his tongue to disperse the body heat. There are dogs before the pee will first smell, if there is a powerful dog than him, they dare not pee there, so each dog has its own fixed pee site.

When I was young, my brother was not born, every day to accompany me is toot and Bo Mei. Beep is the most loyal puppy, Bo is the most favorite puppy, Bo often grab my hands in the biscuits, we eat you a mouthful of me, toot more old, the teeth have been bite , So I did not take long time to heaven, and then a few years, Bo is also the United States, the family is no longer a dog, and really miss that good time.

My favorite animal is Bo Yang dog, although my family of two Bo Yang dogs are heaven, but I still miss their lovely look!

I am . I was born in . I graduate from senior high school and major in Englh. I started learning Englh since I was 12 years old. My parents have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking Englh.

In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to Englh such as ltening to Englh songs, watching Englh movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some Englh clubs or institutes. I used to go abroad for a short- term Englh study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life Englh and saw a lot of different things.

I think language  very interesting. I could express one substance by using different sounds. So I wh I could study and read more Englh literatures and enlarge my knowledge.

Germany

Germans love to decorate their house sat Christmas.Many houses will have little wooden frames holding electric candles in their windows，and coloured pictures of paper or plastic which look beautiful from the outside at night.Father Christmas brings presents in the late afternoon of Christmas Eve(December 24th)，after people have been to a church meeting.The presents are then found under the Christmas tree.One person in the family will ring a bell and call everyone to come to the room.On Christmas Day，fish(carp7))or goose will be cooked.

德国

德国人喜欢在圣诞节装饰他们的房子。很多房子的窗户上都会有用小木架支起来的灯泡蜡烛以及印在纸上或塑料上的彩色图片，晚上从屋外看上去非常漂亮。圣诞老人在圣诞夜(12月24日)傍晚人们去教堂聚会之后带来礼物。礼物放在圣诞树下。每家有一个人摇着铃铛叫所有人去屋里看礼物。圣诞节人们烹饪鲤鱼或者家鹅。

good morning/afternoon,my name isyanghaiyan ,you can call me yanzi.i like the feeling flying in the sky like aswallow.it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, iwould like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a goodperformance today.

now i will introduce myself briefly.i am 20 years old,born inshandong province.i grow up in a sweet family,composed of my dad,mom,brotherand myself.i am an optimistic and confident girl.i have full confidence in abright future,and i believe i can do well in caac.punctuality and diligence arecrucial to most future careers,i will try my best. altough i just graduatedfrom school, i have confidence to venture my funture.scoaring in the sky as anairhostess has been a dream for me since childhood.this is why im longing fora job on a plane, and this is why im standing here for this interview.i hopemy application will be granted ,so that i will delive my best serviesthroughout the world as a airhostess member of caac and my dream can cometure.thats all.nice talking to you .thanks.

My family has a dog baby, it is purely German shepherd, very expensive. For the arrival of the whole family are very happy, this guy is too cute.

It is not covered with a trumpet, if you sleep in the snow, I am afraid that three days can not find. Its sharp ears, small and exquisite, vigilant up the vertical; black eyes, shiny light. That sensitive smell unparalleled, was V blood basin mouth is daunting, sharp teeth make it even more powerful. Its strong limbs support a strong body. See it so brave, I give it from the white tiger.

White Tiger Although it looks a bit scary, but actually not the case. Remember that my uncle had just given it to me, it opened his mouth, I can not help but be surprised: good sharp teeth ah! I do not know it bite or no bite. But after a few days, it is no stranger to me, and began to walk around me every day to the night market, I took it, provoke many curious talk about, some children also followed the white tiger to go, white tiger But gently walked in front of me open, not bite. I know that it is so gentle temperament.

White Tiger and I am familiar with, they became a good friend inseparable. Go to school every day, it must go with me. No way, I had to rush home again and again; every day after school, it ran out early to meet me, see me back, it put up his forepaws stretched out his tongue, shaking his tail stand downstairs wait for me. Whenever this time, I sorted out its white hair and went home with it.

My lovely white tiger is not big, but eat a lot of things. Every night, my mother will have to get another piece of meat to eat it, and the white tiger at this time to relish to enjoy the fragrant barbecue. But in order not to raise a fat dog, it should eat more vegetables. Every day the nutrition meal, by me to set.

Alas, my lovely pet dog! Really my good partner.

My Dream

I’m longing for a weekend. It’s happy and it’s free. This is my dream.

At this weekend, I don’t have to play the violin; I don’t have to draw pictures; Olympic Maths is far away from me; Handwriting doesn’t bother me.

I can play and I can sing; I can do everything interesting. No one can stop me.

Oh, what a happy weekend! But, it’s only my dream. I hope it will come true.

[初中英语我得梦想介绍作文

My new deskmate is a boy of sixteen. His name is Zhang Gao. He is 1.8 meters tall. His strongly-built body and sun-tanned skin make him look like a sportsman. He has two big dark eyes under a pair of thick eyebows. It seems that they are always smiling at you. Compared with my yellow hair, his hair is black and thick. He speaks a little bit fast but very clearly. However, he likes to gesture from time to time while hes talking. He has a dream of becoming a famous actor one day. I believe his dream will come true because of his handsome face and well-developed figure.

我的新同桌是一个16岁的男孩。他叫张高，身高一米八。结实的身材、晒黑的皮肤使他看起来像运动员。他浓浓的眉毛下有一双又黑又大的眼睛，似乎总是在对人微笑。与我的黄头发相比，他有一头浓密的黑发。他的语速有点快，但相当清楚，只是他说话时爱打手势。他的理想是当一名演员，我想他英俊的长相和匀称的身材定会让他好梦成真。

My name is Wang Xiaochuan. I’m eleven. I live in a small house in Taicang.

I study at Zhu Diwen Primary School. I have seven lessons every day. I study

Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Science, Art, Music, Social Science and Computer

Studies. I like Science, It’s interesting. I don′t like Art, I can’t draw very

well. I usually play games with my good friends, Sun Zhe and Gu Xu ,on Sundays.

I like swimming, playing badminton and playing table tennis.I like eating fruit,

just like strawberries, watermelons and peaches.

Lei Feng (December 18, 1940 - August 15, 1962) was a example of the soldier of the Peoples Liberation Army of the Peoples Republic of China.

雷锋(1940年12月18日-1962年8月15日)，被中华人民共和国政府树立为中国人民解放军的模范。

LeiFeng,formerly named Lei Zhengxing, was born in a poor farmers family in Dec 18 1940 in Jianjia Tang Disctrict,Wangcheng Town, Changsha City of Hunan Province. Lei was orphaned at 7 years old. He became a member in the Communist youth corps when he was young and joined a transportation unit of the Peoples Liberation Army at the age of twenty.

雷锋，原名雷正兴, 1940年12月18日，雷锋出生在湖南省长沙望城县简家塘一个贫苦农民家里。雷锋7岁成为孤儿。雷锋加入了中国共产主义青年团，20岁被分到人民解放军运输连。

Lei died in 1962 at the age of 22, when a telephone pole, struck by an army truck, hit him while he was directing the truck in backing up.

1962年，雷锋在指挥军车倒车期间，遭电线杆子击中而逝世，年仅22岁。

After Leis death, his diary was published, and Lei was built up as a good example to the Chinese people to be cheerfully selfless and noble in thought.

雷锋逝世，他的日记被发表。他成为中国人无私奉献精神的榜样。

On March 5, the anniversary day, many volunteers took part in various social commonweal activities at their spare-time. They could be seen everywhere, such as campus, public squares, residential communities and bus stops. They contributed their love in forms of teaching English, counseling in law affairs, taking care of orphans, cleaning notice boards, and so on.

每年的3月5日，许多志愿者都会利用业余时间参加各种社会公益活动。志愿者们的身影随处可见，校园、广场、居民小区、公交车站......他们教授英语，提供法律咨询，照顾孤儿，清理公告栏，他们用各种形式奉献自己的爱心。

奉献、助人名言：

Always put yourself in the others shoes. If you feel that it hurts you，it probably hurts the person too.

要设身处地的为别人着想，如果一双鞋你穿着夹脚，别人的感觉可能也一样。

Men are rich only as they give. He who gives great service gets great returns.

付出令人富有。给予越多，收获越多。

My Mother My Mother isa kind and gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have one brother and two sistets. So she gets four children in all. She gives us every comfort. We all love her and she loves us also. My mother has too much to do in bringing us up. As our family is too poor to keep a servant, my mother has always to do very much work. She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day. She works hard, yet without complaining. She is also a thrifty, and industrious woman. She saves every cent that she can and keeps everything in order. As she has been busy eversince she was young, she looks older than she really is. Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes silver white, but she works as hard as ever. Often she says to us, "work while you work, play while you play. If you do not work, you will become lazy and of no use to society." What piece of good advice this is! We must worth it well and always keep it in our mind.

My name is Jane.I like to go to school.I am in Class One,Grade Sven.

Our classroom is very beautiful and clean.There is a biackboard on the walland some beautifui flowers on the sill.There are two big trees behind our classroom .We often play games under the trees.

There are forty students in our class.Twenty students are grils and others are boys .We always help one another.We have five teachers.They teach us math,science,English,music and P.E.They all work hard.We like them very much.There are four classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon every day.We study very hard.I like our class.

My name is Li Haiqing. I am a local person who is 21years old. Iam from chongqing and I am of the opinion that my hometown is a beautiful city.

Moreover, I would like to say something about my family. I have my mother ,my father,and my elder sisther,they love me very much,I know my parents have so much hops and dreams for me。So I must study well.

I have the confidence because I have such ability! I am kind-hearted, patient, outgoing and creative. I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to resolve any problem no matter how difficult it is. I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.

In spare time, I like reading books, surfing on the Internet, listening to music like, classic, or light music, because they can make me feel relaxed. Nobody could keep on working efficiently, therefore proper amusement is a must. In addition, I insist on do some physical training such as running, and horizontal bar as well. By doing this, I can always stay healthy.

That’s all. Thank you for giving me such a valuable opportunity!

我叫李海清。我是本地人，21岁。我来自重庆，我认为我的家乡是一个美丽的城市。

此外，我想谈谈我的家庭。我有我的母亲，我的父亲，还有我的姐姐，他们非常爱我，我知道我的父母有很多的希望和梦想，所以我必须好好学习。

我有信心，因为我有这样的能力!我善良，有耐心，外向，有创造力。我是一个勤奋的学生，特别是做我感兴趣的事情。不管有多困难，我都要尽力解决任何问题。我一直相信一个人如果不继续学习就很容易落后。

课余时间，我喜欢看书，上网，听音乐，古典音乐，轻音乐，因为它们能让我放松。没有人能继续有效地工作，因此适当的娱乐是必须的。此外，我还坚持做一些体育锻炼，比如跑步，以及水平的酒吧。这样做，我就能一直保持健康。

这年代。谢谢你给了我这么宝贵的机会!

下面是语文迷小编为大家整理提供的英语写作技巧以及关联词，供大家阅读参考。

英语写作技巧之一：用介词短语替代从句，例：

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

英语写作技巧之二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：

句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

英语写作技巧之三：剔除你不需要的单词，例：

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。

关联词的积累

1.提出观点不要只用I think，要学会用：

As far as I am concerned

In my opinion

From my point of view

From my perspective

The way I see it

2.转折不要只用but， 要多用：

However,

nevertheless, nonetheless,

Whereas

Some people like fat meat, whereas other people hate it.

转折也可用比喻：as a coin has two sides(就象硬币有两面一样), …(陈述转折内容)

3.表递进的：

In addition, in addition to, additionally,

what is more, moreover, furthermore,

more importantly，

what is worse (更槽糕的是)

4.表示“事实上”：

In fact,

as a matter of fact,

actually

5.表总结：

in conclusion, as a result,

all in all 总而言之

In short,

In a word, 一句话讲

Taking into consideration,

Taking into account all the factors that I have mentioned above, it is safe to draw a conclusion that …

6.表示因此：

Consequently,

Hence,

Therefore,

Thus,

as a result,

resultingly

7.表因为：

because of

due to,

owing to,

thanks to,

as a result of,

8.虽然

Although, even though, even if, though

Proud as these nobles are, …

As flattered as I am, I would say no.

In spite of, despite

I love you in spite of that.

9.比较：

In comparison with,

compared to,

compared with

She’s nothing compared to you.

10.表最后：

Finally,

eventually,

in the end,

at last,

ultimately,

11.表示程度的副词词组亦非常重要，会使文章看起来比较成熟、辨证：

To some extent 在某种程度上讲

To some degree 在某种程度上讲

To a large part 在很大程度上说

In a sense 在某种意义上讲

In general, generally 大体上说

Generally speaking 一般地讲

In some cases 在有些情况下

Basically 基本上

Broadly speaking 宽泛地讲

12.其他(要尽可能多用在文章中。始终牢记内容次要，而语言形式第一位。内容服务于形式)：

Not only, but also

Neither nor, either or

Instead of, instead

For example, for instance (替换使用), take … for example

Be likely to

Be able to

Speaking of, when it comes to …

When it comes to food, he is really picky.

In terms of 根据

First of all, second of all

Above all,

Significantly,

The more, the more

Good morning everyone!Im Nickle. Im 24. I graduated from Hunan Normal University on XX Campus. My major is English Education. After graduation, I have worked for one year in Li Yang Kids English. My students are between 5 and 12 years old.Im outgoing and open-minded. In my spare time, I have broad interests. Such as reading, surfing the internet, listening to music and even chatting with foreign friends online if possible. I like children very much. I think children are active, innocent and pure. With them, I feel very relaxed, pleasant and younger. Therefore, I learned a lot from my one year working experience.Teaching children English is very interesting but it is also challenging. Because children are always active, even sometimes very naughty. So teachers need a lot of patience to deal with children. The most important that I have learned from my one year teaching experience is that a teacher should have the mind that always wants to go on learning. Teaching is a job at which one will never be perfect. If I have the chance, I will try my best to be a good primary English teacher.