英语高考作文问候语【汇编20篇】

due to darwins "evolution", man, willingly or not, has to admit that he is not descendents of adam and eve but rather a species equal to the monkeys, the cats and dogs in nature. although human beings claim to be the most sapient species, it is undeniable that they have a close kinship with the chimpanzees.in a word, we are animals, though more advantageous in mind than our wild or domesticated fellow living beings. but, is this a privilege of human beings to dominate the destinies of other spedes? sorrowfully, some people disregard the natural diversity and many species are in the danger of etinction due to human activities. no longer can the righteous people look on withouttaking an action.

human beings have always overrated themselves in that they assume they are superior creatures whose destiny is granted by god. in the early times, nature was antithetical to human activities. no longer can the righteous people look on without taking an action.

human beings have always overrated themselves in that they assume they are superior creatures whose destiny is granted by god. in the early times, nature was antithetical to human cultures. people set out to conquer nature: they plowed the soil for grains to feed themselves; they fought against storms and tornadoes to safeguard their properties; they made use of tools to eploit natural resources. this struggle against nature precludes the understanding that nature is so generous to humans and it is harmony rather than conflict that has made human lives so comfortable. if the ancestors had not found ways to cope with natural disasters and bucked up again and again in face of peril, it would have been likely that human race might have gone etinct on the way of evolution.however, as human beings get more and more used to the development in their own societies, they,on the contrary, contribute to a nature that is increasingly dissonant and hostile, where other co-eisting species are on the edge of etinction.

it is not the natural evolution, like the glaciers, that caused many species to disappear. it is human activities that is to beblamed. deforestation deprives many bird colonies of their habitat. water pollution destroys the natural environment of aquatic animals. unimaginable numbers of species have to migrate and in search of new habitat, and they die. gulls and other seabirds stranded in the crude oil from ships could not fly to collect food,they die. when furs and hides of cheetahs, rhinos, and crocodiles are sold at good prices on the international market, they die. the prosperity of human society is bloodily indebted to lives of other plants and animal species, yet human beings keep from saving the animals and plants. the money spent on protection of endangered species is money spent worthwhile. so is the effort and time. just imagine one day another intelligent species wearing the leather of human skin.

in the history of human civilization, people have always relied on nature to achieve something of value. fundamentally, we breathe the oygen released by the plants; we enjoy the ravishing beauty of nature in our arts;we even rely on animals to produce eperimental evidence in developing medicines. we owe too much to the plants and animals. it is high time that we did something to prevent the world from becoming a drab and colorless planet, with only the human species living in sheer loneliness.

my favourite pop star is zhou huajian. i like him not only because he is very handsome, but also his songs are very beautiful.

on october 18, he gave a performance in tianjin. about 2500 fans went to the stadium to see him. almost all of them were students. some of them were even from beijing, the capital city of china ,which is about 200 kilometres from tianjin. i really wanted to watch the performance,but unfortunately,i didnt get a ticket. so i watched him on tv.zhou is one of the most popular stars in china. he is living in hong kong. his family is very happy. he has a good wife and three lovely children. he liked playing football when he was a university student. however, he has no time to play football now.

i hope he will be happy all his life, for he is loved by all of us.

一.开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned

2.It goes without saying that...

3.It can be said with certainty that...

4.As the proverb says，

5.It has to be noticed that...

6.It`s generally recognized that...

7.It`s likely that ...

8.It`s hardly that...

9.It’s hardly too much to say that...

10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

11.There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that...

13.what’s far more important is that...

二.衔接句型

A case in point is ...

As is often the case...

As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述

But the problem is not so simple. Therefore然而问题并非如此简单，所以……

But it’s a pity that...

For all that...In spite of the fact that...

Further, we hold opinion that...

However , the difficulty lies in...

Similarly, we should pay attention to...

not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势

As has been mentioned above...

In this respect, we may as well (say)从这个角度上我们可以说

However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即…

摘要：2011高考英语作文提高15分的8个实用句型……

三.结尾句型

I will conclude by saying...

Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...

All things considered,总而言之

It may be safely said that...

Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….

The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….

It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

四.举例句型

Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明

let’s take the above chart as an example to

illustrate this.

Here is one more example.

Take … for example.

The same is true of….

This offers a typical instance of….

We may quote a common example of….

Just think of….

五.常用于引言段的句型

1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.

3. I believe the title statement is valid because….

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …. I believe….

5. My argument for this view goes as follows.

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.

六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.

3. A and B differ in….

4. A differs from B in….

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….

7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….

8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….

11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….

七 演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5. The reasons are as follows.

八 因果推理法常用句型

1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.

4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.

6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.

7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.

8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

清明节即是节气又是节日。从节气上来说，它是24节气之一。

The Qingming Festival is a Chinese holidays. In solar term, it is one of 24 solar term.

我国2000多年前的秦汉时期已基本形成了24节气。24节气综合了天文学和气象学等方面的知识，编排了"春雨惊春清谷天，夏满芒夏暑相连。秋处露秋寒霜降，冬雪雪冬小大寒"的歌谣。其中清明被排在歌谣的第五位。也是农历历法中的第五个节气。

In China 2000 years ago during the Qin and Han Dynasties has basically formed the 24 solar terms. 24 solar astronomy and meteorology etc. comprehensive knowledge, arranged a "spring cleaning day at spring, summer manwang summer. Autumn dew autumn frost, snow snow winter chill "ballad. The Qingming Festival is ranked in the fifth songs. Is lunar calendar in fifth solar term.

此时，天气转暖，大地回春，万物复苏，一片生机盎然，家家门口插柳条，祭扫坟墓和郊外踏青。农谚中也有"清明忙种粟"的说法。作为以花信为标志的花信风。清明的花期为一侯桐花，二侯麦花，三侯柳花，充分点明了清明节气的花期和花种。《岁时百问》说"万物生长此时，皆清洁而明净，故谓之清明"。

At this time, the weather gets warmer, Spring returns to the earth, the recovery of all things, a vibrant, every door willow, sweep tombs and in the countryside. Farmers proverb there is "clear and bright in favor of millet" argument. Huaxinfeng as marked by florescence. The flower is a Hou Aegiceras, Rohmer spent two, three Hou Liu Hua pointed out, full flowering and Flower Festival air. "When the hundred year old question" that "all things are growing at the same time, clean and bright and clean, so that the Qingming festival".

Grain rain, that is, in the spring, this time we are most likely to lack of vitamin B2 and vitamin C, sometimes we often thirsty, cigarettes and corners of the mouth foaming. We should eat more of these symptoms of yellow bean sprouts. Have nourish Yin nourishing the stomach, the effect such as antibacterial anti-inflammatory, qingrejiedu, as long as the appropriate not only can prevent these symptoms can also lay a good foundation for the in order to improve physical fitness, etc.

Grain rain season eat cedar is the most appropriate. In the grain rain season, cedar taste is very good, is also very high nutritional value. Especially at the time of incense ChunYa is more suitable for eating ChunYa contains abundant sugar, protein, fat, carotene, and a lot of vitamin C and other rich nutrition. We after eating more enhance human immunity. (need to explain to everybody here is higher nitrate is contained in cedar, so as far as possible before eating cooked in boiling water after eating).

Grain rain also suitable for consumption before and after some food can ease the mental stress and regulate mood. Eat more a few contain the food with vitamin B group is more to improve the depression has obvious effect.

When grain rain we also should eat more vegetables. Gu yu, according to traditional Chinese medicine, want to take time to recuperate liver blood. Begin to understand in the eye, liver blood is insufficient, cant go to note in the eyes and see things not clear, or diseases with ease hot, on the one leader is dizzy. At this time of the diet points on liver, nourishing liver clear. And vegetables is one of the best choice.

谷雨也就是春天，这个时候我们最容易缺的是维生素B2和维生素C，我们有时常常口干舌燥，上火，嘴角起泡。对于这些症状我们应该多吃一些黄豆芽。具有滋阴养胃、抗菌消炎、清热解毒等功效，只要适当的话不仅可以预防这些症状还可以为提高体质等打下良好的基础。

谷雨时节吃香椿是最合适的。在谷雨时节，香椿的口感非常好，营养价值也非常高。尤其在那个时候的香椿芽是更为适合食用的，椿芽中含有丰富的糖、蛋白质、脂肪、胡萝卜素和大量的维生素C等多种丰富的营养。我们在食用后更有提高人体免疫力等功效。(在这里需要向大家说明的一点是香椿中含有较高的硝酸盐，所以在食用前尽量用沸水煮了以后在食用)。

谷雨前后还适宜食用一些能够缓解精神压力和调节情绪的食物。多吃一些含B族维生素较多的食物对改善抑郁症有明显的效果。

在谷雨的时候我们还应该多吃一些蔬菜。谷雨，按照中医的说法，要抓紧时机调理肝血。肝开窍于目，肝血不足，不能上注于目而视物不清，或肝气郁结化热，上扰头目则头晕目眩。此时的食疗要点重在养肝清肝、滋养明目。而蔬菜绝对是最好的选择之一。

提出建议:

It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.

It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.

Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that …

显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we … 只有这样，我们才能……

It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……

预示后果:

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.

很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.

No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that …

毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.

很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.

论证

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.

I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点……

Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边.

I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……

In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do ….

在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智.

Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why …

给出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …

这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先，……;第二,，……;第三，……

Why did …? For one thing …，for another …. Perhaps the primary reason is…

为什么会……?一个原因是……，令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是……

I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.

我十分赞同这一论述,即……，其主要原因如下:

列出解决办法:

Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.

The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.

批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言，……

It was obvious that …很显然,….

It may be true that …, but it doesn’t mean that …

可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn’t ignore that …

认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……

There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……

如何连接

强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.

比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.

对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.

开头：

Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern. 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.

The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.

Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.

It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为……

Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……

With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……

A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……

引出不同观点:

People’s views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……，然而其他人却认为……

People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.

Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.

There are different opinions among people as to …关于……，人们的观点大不相同.

Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

结尾

Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……

Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that …

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……

There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.

All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

About the Chinese as a foreign educator, is one of the good things of Chinese students are so eager to learn from you. They are trained since childhood is a knowledge of the sponge, we hope as much as possible to absorb new information from their teacher, they can. Second, the Confucian education requires high degree of respect for the teacher. The title "old history" is one of the worship in our society, but the teacher is often low wages. In China of foreign teachers or foreign experts "respect", because they are called. Although most of the foreign experts in China not as a teacher of English as a foreign language professional knowledge, but before, therefore, our country government welcome dont give them a title of respect for their contribution to employment. As a result, Chinese students hold attaches great importance to, in particular, this may be why so who has a lot of people in China to live here dean ended their foreign teachers.

It will be difficult to find such appreciation level between the American student teachers. In the United States has a young peoples attitude toward education worker is different, they are taught the problem, rather than simply absorb, so they decide for themselves, if a teacher is credible. American students may lead to the rejection of their teacher, they even openly against dont agree with them, as part of the learning process. American young people dont accept The face value of information, rather than their evaluate whether or not The teacher said is true or useful. The eastern and western education teachers status The way have a significant effect on The students responsibility for their learning. Chinese students become highly dependent on their teachers to give them the "right" information and can easily blame the teacher, if they do not in the classroom and said, "the teacher did not teach me enough." American students tend to be more independent learners, teachers encourage them to do themselves, form the teams research, and to seek the answer to external sources. This makes the American students in collecting data greater flexibility, and encourage them to be responsible for their own learning. In this responsibility does not only mean the rote learning of "right" answer to pass the exam, it refers to the ownership, to make learning meaningful significance.

In China, people have said, they gave all the knowledge back to the teacher of humility. This means that the person never actually have knowledge in the first place, but just borrowed from the teacher it to pass the exam. However, this also means that people will never cherish these knowledge, because he or she never had it, so they ignored it, and eventually forget it. Its like living in a dormitory, differences in their own home life. No one who lives in the dormitory needs to be well taken care of it, especially in public places. However, once you have a home, you keep beautiful and clean, because it has more value. This is the pride of ownership, is to have what is cherish. What is a treasure.

As much as Chinese students understand their foreign teachers, they should not forget that learning responsibility from within, not from the outside. The teacher cant "to" others English. No one can "get" or as a book from the teacher can get a cold English. Learning can only come from learners, responsibility, his or her own freedom to choose his or her learning experience quality, or borrowed rely on the experts knowledge.

关于在中国作为一个外国教育家的美妙的事情之一是，中国学生是如此急于向你学习。他们被训练从小是知识的海绵，希望尽可能多吸收新的信息从他们的老师，他们可以。其次，儒家教育要求对教师的尊重程度很高。标题“老史”是我国社会的崇敬之一，但教师往往是工资低。更是在中国的外籍教师或“外国专家的尊重”，因为它们被调用。尽管在中国大部分外国专家作为一门外语不作为英语教师的专业知识，但以前因此，我国政府欢迎不给予他们尊重他们的贡献称号就业。因此，中国学生尤其是持有高度重视，这也许是为什么那么谁中国有很多人来教长住在这里结束了他们的外籍教师。

这将是很难找到这样的美国学生教师之间的欣赏水平。在美国有一个年轻人对教育工作者的态度有所不同，他们被教导的问题，而不是简单地吸收，因此他们自己决定，如果一名教师是可信的。美国学生可能会拒绝他们的老师，他们甚至公开对抗与他们不同意，作为学习过程的一部分。美国的年轻人不太接受信息的面值，宁可自己评估是否或不是老师说的是真的还是useful.The的东部和西部教育教师地位对学生采取的方式产生重大影响责任为他们的学习。中国学生成为高度依赖于他们的老师给他们的“正确”的信息，可以方便地责怪老师，如果他们不这样做在课堂上也说，“老师没有教我就够了。”美国学生往往更独立的学习者，教师鼓励他们做自己，形成研究组的研究，并寻求外部来源的答案。这使美国学生在收集资料更大的灵活性，并鼓励他们对自己的学习负责。在这方面的责任并不仅仅意味着死记硬背的“正确”的答案通过考试，它指的是所有权，使学习有意义的意义。

在中国，人民对此表示说，他们给所有的知识回到老师谦虚。这意味着此人从来没有真正拥有的知识摆在首位，而只是借用了老师它通过考试。但是，这也意味着，人永远不会珍惜这些知识，因为他或她从未拥有过它，所以他们忽略了它，并最终忘记它。这就像在一间宿舍，生活在自己家里生活的差异。没有人谁在宿舍生活需要很好的照顾它，尤其是公共场所。但是，一旦你拥有一个家，你让美丽和保持清洁，因为它有更大的价值。这是所有权的骄傲，是拥有什么是珍惜。什么是珍惜下去。

高达中国学生了解他们的外籍教师，他们不应该忘记，学习的责任来自内部，而不是来自外部。老师不能“给”别人英语。没有人可以“得到”从老师或像一本书可以得到一个寒冷的英语。学习只能来自于学习者，责任时，他或她自己的自由选择他或她的学习经验的质量，还是借来的依赖专家的知识。

导语：随着互联网的发展，网站慢慢取代了报纸的作用，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

报纸

1.传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠 2. 携带方便，随时随地可以阅读 3.仅有文字和图片

网站

1.新兴媒体，信息更新速度快 2.依赖于电脑及互联网 3. 包含文字、图片、音频和视频

注意：

1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥; 2. 词数：100-120 3. 参考词汇：更新update;音频audio;视频video

Newspapers and Websites

Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information. But theyre different in some ways.

Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information. They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like. So many people like reading them. But they can only contain texts and photos.

On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people. Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting. Whats more, they are updated from time to time. So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers. But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.

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报纸和网站

报纸和网站是当今世界上的两大新兴媒体，它可以为我们提供大量的新闻和信息。但他们在某些方面不同。

报纸有着较长的历史，每天都会出现更可靠的新闻和信息。他们可以携带和阅读几乎任何地方你喜欢。这么多人喜欢读。但它们只能包含文本和照片。

另一方面，网站是新的和流行的，尤其是在年轻人。网站不仅有图片文字，还有音频和视频，这使得故事更有趣。更重要的是，他们不时更新。所以最新的新闻总是出现在网站上而不是报纸上。但是没有电脑连接的人从网站上获取信息并不太方便。

请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。

Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer, you will learn.

注意：

1.无须写标题;

2.除诗歌外，文体不限;

3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;

4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

in some countries where racial prejudice is acute, violence has so come to be taken for granted as a means of solving differences, that it is not even questioned. what is really frightening, what really fills you with despair, is the realization that when it comes to the crunch, we have made no actual progress at all. we may wear collars and ties instead of war-paint, but our instincts remain basically unchanged. the whole of the recorded history of the human race, that tedious documentation of violence, has taught us absolutely nothing. we have still not learnt that violence never solves a problem but makes it more acute. the sheer horror, the bloodshed, the suffering mean nothing. no solution ever comes to light the morning after when we dismally contemplate the smoking ruins and wonder what hit us.

the truly reasonable men who know where the solutions lie are finding it harder and harder to get a hearing. they are despised, mistrusted and even persecuted by their own kind because they advocate such apparently outrageous things own kind because they advocate such apparently outrageous things as law enforcement. if half the energy that goes into violent acts were put to good use, if our efforts were directed at cleaning up the slums and ghettos, at improving living-standards and providing education and employment for all, we would have gone a long way to arriving at a solution. our strength is sapped by having to mop up the mess that violence leaves in its wake. in a welldirected effort, it would not be impossible to fulfil the ideals of a stable social programme. the benefits that can be derived from contructive solutions are everywhere apparent in the world around us. genuine and lasting solutions are always, possible, providing we work within the framework of the law.

before we can even begin to contemplate peaceful co-existence between the races, we must appreciate each other’s problems. and to do this, we must learn about them: it is a simple exercise in communication, in exchanging information, ‘talk, talk talk,’ the advocates of violence say, ‘all you ever do is talk, and we are none the wiser.’ it’s rather like the story of the famous barrister who painstakingly explained his case to the judge. after listening to a lengthy argument the judge complained that after all this talk, he was none the wiser. ‘possibly, my lord’ the barrister replied, ‘none the wiser, but surely far better informed.’ knowledge is the necessary prerequisite to wisdom: the knowledge that violence creates the evils it pretends to solve.

假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：

优点：1. 话题广泛;

2. 图片丰富;

3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。

建议：适当降低词汇难度。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

满分作文

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.

In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.

However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.

Best regards,

Li Hua

亲爱的编辑，

作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。

在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。

然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。

最好的问候，

李华

高考后的打算

高考结束之后，有的同学想去旅游，因为蓝天和美景能够使他们放松;也有的同学想趁这个机会体验一下生活，他们认为考上大学就真正开始走上社会了。

请你用英语写一篇短文简述以上内容,并谈一下你的打算。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、为使行文连贯可适当发挥。

范文：

After the college entrance examination, some students would like to have a trip, because they think the blue sky and the charming scenery can make them relax. Some others prefer to stay at home to enjoy the matches of the 2012 Olympic Games, which they have been longing for. And also there are some students who intend to observe and learn from real life. They consider that they will really step into society after passing the college entrance examination. As for me, I plan to learn a skill such as driving, which I think will be useful in the future.

There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。

Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。

The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。

[高考英语作文必备黄金句

in my opinion，the most important thing in the world is time.however long one may live，his life consists of a certain number of years，and a year has only12months，a month30days and one day24hours.once you waste one hour，you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.

even though you are the richest person in the world，you can not afford to waste your time，because it means that you are wasting your life.even though you are the most powerful person in the world，one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.

some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.in their opinion，if you have enough money，you will have everything you want.i would like to ask them a simple question：can you buy time?

the only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.if you work with high efficiency，you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.

I. 用于文章主题句 1. 不用说，…

It goes without saying that子句 = (It is) needless to say (that)子句 = It is obvious that子句 = Obviously, S. + V. 例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

2. …是不可能的; 无法… There is no Ving

= There is no way of Ving. = There is no possibility of Ving. = It is impossible to V. = It is out of the question to V. = No one can V. = We cannot V.

例：不可否认的，成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。

There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.

3. 我深信…

I am greatly convinced (that)子句 = I am greatly assured (that)子句 例：我深信预防是于治疗。

I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.

4. 在各种…之中，…

Among various kinds of …, … = Of all the …, …

例：在各种运动中，我尤其喜欢慢跑。

Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

5. …是很容易证明的。

It can be easily proved (that)子句

例：时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。

It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.

6. …无论如何强调都不为过 … cannot be overemphasized

例：交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。

The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.

7. 就我的看法，…;我认为… In my opinion, … = To my mind, ….

= As far as I am concerned, … = I am of the opinion that子句

例：就我的看法，打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。

In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

8. (A) 每个人都知道… Everyone knows (that)子句 (B) 就我所知，…

As far as my knowledge is concerned, … 例：就我所知，下列方法对我帮助很大。

As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.

9. 毫无疑问地，…

There is no doubt (that)子句

例：毫无疑问地，近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。

There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.

10. 根据我个人经验，…

According to my personal experience, … = Based on my personal experience, …

英语写作过程中我们经常会用到一些短语，下面请看语文迷整理的高级英语短语，希望对你有帮助。

1. feel frustrated (挫折的)/ discouraged

2. a precious (宝贵的) experience

3. raise / arouse the awareness of …

4. acquire knowledge and skills学习知识和技能

5. a growing /increasing tendency

6. have a desire for sth / to do sth

7. put sth into practice

8. be closely related to…与…息息相关

9. be essential to sb 对某人来说必不可少

10. in a society with more competitions and challenges / in a competitive society

11. be keen on… 热衷于…

12. broaden one’s horizons开阔眼界

13. a large variety of / a wide range of …

14. make one’s dream come true

15. lay a solid/firm/stable foundation for/in…为…/在…方面打下坚实的基础

16. listen to teachers attentively

17. make a practical plan

18. motivate sb to do sth

19. bury oneself into study埋头学习

20. our determination and efforts

21. express my gratitude to her sincerely

22. be strict with sb in sth

23. achieve the final victory

24. encounter/face some difficulties

25. neglect the disadvantages

26. With the great efforts we’ve made, …

27. enhance/improve his ability of singing

28. be optimistic about

29. hold the strong belief that…

30. I’m confident / I’m convinced that…

31. with iron will and perseverance

32. pursue one’s dream 追逐梦想

33. arouse one’s passion for…唤起对…的热情

34. resist the temptation of good food

35. change one’s original mind

36. spare no effort to do sth 不遗余力做…

37. redouble one’s effort 加倍努力

38. leave a deep impression on sb

39. turn to sb for help / advice

40. relieve/lessen/reduce/ease one’s burden

41. with time going by=as time goes by

42. cherish/treasure/value our lives

43. vary from person to person

44. a boarding school 寄宿制学校

45. What surprised me most was that…

46. cause severe consequences(后果)

47. pay their tuition/school fees/schooling

48. physically and mentally

49. Some in favor of it think that…., while others are against it, holding the opinion that…

50. Success stems from hard work as it can help us accomplish the goal we’re striving for.

51. establish a special fund to help the poor

52. its negative aspect/impact is also obvious.

1. To cherish the enviroment is to love ourselves.

爱护环境就是爱护我们自己。

2.Water is the source of ourlives

水是生命之源。

3.I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation

我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状。

4.Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution.

我们政府正努力制定措施与污染作斗争。

5.We are sure that well win the battle.

我们坚信我们能赢得战斗。

6.Its high time that we should protect our enviroment from being polluted.

是时候我们应该防止环境污染了。

7. Keep our mountains green，the wate clean，and the sky blue.

使我们山更绿，水更清，天更蓝。

8.However，natural resources are not inexhaustible.some reserves are already on the brink of exhaustion.

然而自然资源并不是无穷无尽的，一些储量已经到了穷尽的边缘。

9.If we do something with no thought for the furture . The later generation would be in danger.

如果我们不为将来考虑，后代就会受到威胁。

10.Our earths days are numbered without urgent help.

没有及时的帮助我们的地球就屈指可数了。

11(Sth.)are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blink eye to them.

如果我们继续睁一只眼闭一只眼的话，……一定会有恶劣的后果。

第一：简单句的罗列和堆砌

S1+V1…S2+V2…S3+V3…

第二：并列连词连接简单句

S1+V1…and/or/but/also/whereas S2+V2…

第三：复合句

S1+V1…which/that/where/when etc./because/if/in order that etc. S2+V2…

第四：独立主格

S1+V1…，S2+V2…

S1+V1…，S2+V2ing/V2ed

第五：非谓语动词作修饰成分

S1+V1…，S1+V2…

S1+V1，V2ing/V2ed…

如果你觉得上面的这堆“公式”看起来有些枯燥难懂的话，那么不妨给你举两个例子，同样的话，用不同的句子说，看看有什么不同的效果。

【例1】将这些措施付诸实践，水资源的短缺问题就可以解决。

1.简单句+简单句：

These measures are put into practice. The shortage of water can be solved。

2.并列句：

These measures are put into practice and the shortage of water can be solved。

3.复合句：

If these measures are put into practice, the shortage of water can be solved。

4.独立主格或复合结构：

(With)These measures put into practice, the shortage of water can be solved。

5.强调句：

It is only when these measures are put into practice that the shortage of water can be solved。

6.倒装句：

Only if these measures are put into practice can the shortage of water be solved。

【例2】只有老龄化问题得到很好地解决，我们才可以创造稳定、和谐的社会。

1.简单句+简单句：

The old age problem is well handled. Thus we can maintain a stable and harmonious society。

2.并列句：

The old age problem is well handled and we can maintain a stable and harmonious society。

3.复合句：

As long as the old age problem is well handled, we can maintain a stable and harmonious society。

4.独立主格或复合结构：

(With)The old age problem well handled, we can maintain a stable and harmonious society。

5.强调句：

It is only when the old age problem is well handled that we can maintain a stable and harmonious society。

6.倒装句：

Only as long as the old age problem is well handled can we maintain a stable and harmonious society。

一篇文章通常可分为三个部分，即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体，直接影响到文章的质量。

文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下于引起读者的兴趣。

作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：

1.开门见山，揭示主题

文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如How I Spent My Vacation的开头可以写成：

I Spent my last vacation happily．

Honesty的开头可以写成：

Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a liar，and is looked upon by honest people．

2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头

在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如A Trip to Jinshan 的开头可以写成：

The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.

3. 回忆性的开头

用回忆的方法来开头。例如A Trip to the Taishan Mountain的开头是：

2013年山东高考英语作文题目：给美国朋友Tom的回信

第二节：写作(满分30分)

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件：

1. 未及时回复的原因;

2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

注意： 1. 次数：120~150;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【试题点评】

今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。

【经典套路】

第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的

第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)

第三段：“假期安排”部分

第四段：补充说明+客套话

【高分范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)

How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)

导语：如今，盗版问题变得越来越严重。书籍，磁带，光盘和其他高科技产品已盗版。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Nowadays,the problem of piracy has become more and more serious. Books,tapes,VCDs and others high-tech products have been pirated. For instance,when a new product comes onto market,most probably,its pirated counterpart will soon put on its appearance in the market,too. Piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers,inventors and writers in many ways. To start with,the pirated products often cost much less than the genuine ones so that they enjoy a better trading position in spite of their relatively poor quality. The genuine products,on the contrary,sell poorly. Whats worse,pirated books sometimes do great harm to the authorsreputation due to some misprints. In the long run,pirated products may have a negative impact on customers. Those legitimate producerscreativity and enthusiasm may be deeply hurt by the fact that some customers are more interested in the pirated products for the sake of small gains. In my opinion,its high time that everyone started the battle against piracy.First,customers should develop their consciousness to resist the pirated products. Second,the government should take effective measures to put an end to piracy. Finally,laws must be strictly enforced to completely ban piracy. Only in this way can we wipe the pirated products out of our life.

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如今，盗版问题变得越来越严重。书籍，磁带，光盘和其他高科技产品已盗版。例如，当一个新产品出现在市场上，最有可能的是，它的盗版产品很快就会出现在市场上。盗版行为在许多方面给合法的生产者、发明家和作家造成了巨大的损失。首先，盗版产品通常要比那些正版的要低得多，以至于他们在质量相对较低的情况下享有较好的交易地位。相反，真正的产品卖不好。更糟糕的是，盗版书有时危害巨大，由于一些作者错误的观点。从长远来看，盗版产品可能会对客户产生负面影响。那些合法的生产者的热情，也许是因为有些客户是在盗版产品为了少的收益更感兴趣，深深的伤害了。在我看来，每个人都开始了打击盗版的斗争，第一，客户应该发展他们的意识，抵制盗版产品。其次，政府应采取有效措施，结束盗版。最后，法律必须严格执行，完全禁止盗版。只有这样，我们才能把盗版产品从我们的生活中抹去。