春节作文英语带翻译初中【优秀20篇】

Dear MrYang,

亲爱的杨老师，

How iseverything going! Tomorrw is Teachers’ Day.I would like to express my sincerely wishes to you. You taught me English inthe primary school. That is the time to lay our foundation. And you help me laymy interest on English, which make me feel learn English easily in middleschool. I’m very appreciated that. Thank you very much. If it is convenient foryou, I would like to visit you this National Day. Happy Teachers’ Day again.

一切可好!明天就是教师节了。 我相向你表达我衷心的祝福。你在我小学的时候教我英语。那是打基础的时候。 是你让我对英语感兴趣。这让我在初中学习英语变得容易多了。我很感激。非常感谢你。如果方便的话，我想在今年国庆节去拜访你。再次祝你教师节快乐。

Best wishes,

Lucy

露西

In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the

air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain

all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friends home to play,

the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to

his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in

the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and

eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!

早上，天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山，山上的空气非常清新，花草树木在山上都显得格外美丽。在下午，我去了朋友家玩，朋友热情地招待我，给我看了他的很多书，给我听了他的CD，然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚上回到家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果，全家其乐融融。

hobbies are very important to a person。 without having any hobby， life wont be as colorful as it should be。 i have a variety of hobbies， such as collecting stamps， playing musical instruments， reading， and doing sport activities。

when i am free， i will spend time on my hobbies。 when i am in a blue mood， i will also do my hobbies to cheer myself up。 hobbies can help us improve our moods。 many hobbies requires devotion。 for example， when you play a musical instrument， you have to practice over and over in order to perform good music。 after a period if you still enjoy it， gradually it will become a hobby of yours。 but， remember: a hobby is like gold under the ground; no hobby will come to you unless you dig it out yourself。

if you can treat study as one of you hobbies， learning will be more enjoyable。 i hope all of you can find your own hobbies and also have fun from them。

[我的爱好初中英语作文

每逢春节，我们老家的小镇上都要放烟花。烟花燃烧后，会释放出难闻的烟土味，整个小镇都笼罩在浓浓的烟雾中，我们的环境受到了严重污染。我朝思暮想，怎样让这个古老的习俗——放炮，不会“失传”呢?

“时间飞逝，岁月如梭”。我已是一个年轻的小有名气的炮竹专家，发明了“环保烟花”，深受大家的喜爱。新年一到，大街小巷又响起了久违的炮竹声，夜晚的天空被五颜六色的“环保烟花”点缀得格外妖娆。

说起这种烟花，我引以为荣。我设计的造型五花八门，有“福娃”、“孙悟空”、“猪八戒”、“喜羊羊”、“门神”、“李逵”……再不是单一的圆形或长筒型;颜色更是数不胜数，除“赤橙黄绿青蓝紫”外，还有粉色、玫瑰色、姜黄色……小朋友见了爱不释手。它的引线被点燃后，冒出的不是黑烟，而是五颜六色的果香味。因为我对烟花里的“火

药”进行果香味的配制，再加些金属元素——镁等，经过合成，就成了新型的无毒无烟的烟花，而且不会发生火灾。

新年的钟声敲响时，各家各户一齐点燃手中的烟花，它像一枚枚小火箭“通通通”地喷

射出去，把黑黑的天空变成了“火树银花”的景象，如一个美丽的大花园。有的还在地面上一边飞快地旋转着，一边奏起“新年快乐”的乐曲，像一个个小仙女跳着迷人的圆舞曲，小朋友乐得直叫：烟花跳舞了!喊声一落下，那烟花像直升飞机似的飞向天空，“喷”烟花四溅，如天女散花。接着，一阵阵迷人的果香味飘了出来，连一里外的人们都能闻得到这诱人的香味。天空中、地上都见不到一点纸灰，一定让你惊讶万分!跟以前的烟花炮竹一飞上天空，就会有碎片掉落下来的景象截然不同。我经过反复试验，把它们都穿上了“特殊衣服”，一遇到空气后，像一只只彩色蝴蝶冲击你的视觉——给人留下了美的印象!，等你大饱眼福后，它会自动消失得无影无踪，但浓浓的果香味却弥漫在空气中。人们吸了也没事儿，它一点都危害不了人体的健康。

只要我好好学习，就一定可以创造奇迹!耳边又响起了“环保烟花”的声音……

I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my

study.I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano,

surfing the Internet.

One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many

years,since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time but also,

more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can

learn a lot.Reading Shakespear’s works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading

Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xu, I

come back to the old time of China.

Reading really affect my life.

Christmas is also known as Christmas, translated as "Christ mass", western

traditional festival, every year in December 25th. Mass is a kind of church

service. Christmas is a religious festival, because regard it as to celebrate

the birth of Jesus, named "christmas".

Most of the Catholic Church will be first in the 24, Christmas Eve, i.e.,

the early morning of December 25 at midnight mass, and some Christian will be

held caroling and on December 25 to celebrate Christmas; Christian another

branch of Orthodox Christmas celebration in the annual January 7.

Christmas is a public holiday in the western world and in many other

regions, such as Hongkong, Macao, Malaysia, and Singapore in Asia. The Bible

actually did not record the date of birth of Jesus, Christmas is a public.

Environment protection

Today,I went to the park with my mother,when we walking along the lake,I

saw a couple was siting on the bench at the edge of lake, eating snacks and

casting the packaging into the lake.I was so anger to see that!I think their

behavir is very shameful.The park is a place for all citicens to enjoy beautiful

scenery ，not a place for them to cast rubbish casually.All of us should take

actions to protect our environment,only in this way can we have a clean and

beautiful world.

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保护环境

今天，我和我妈妈逛公园，当我们沿湖边散步的时候，我看到一对夫妻正坐在湖边的长椅上，一边吃零食，一边把零食包装往湖里扔。看到这种情况我非常生气。我认为他们的行为非常可耻。公园是一个提供公民欣赏美丽风景的地方，而不是一个他们可以随意扔垃圾的地方。我们每个人都应该采取行动去保护我们共同的环境，只有这样我们才能拥有一个干净美丽的世界。

一阵噼噼啪啪鞭炮声把我从睡梦叫醒，一年一度除夕又来到，一大早，爸爸就喜气洋洋地贴上我写春联和年画，妈妈则在厨房忙个不停，而我决定上街去转转。

大街上，欢笑人们三五成群地涌上街头互相拜年，祝福声声声入耳，到处是五颜六色、喜气洋洋身影在晃动，像宽广无边大海，前不见人头、后不见尾。空气都有浓浓烟火气息，街上摆满摊：有卖气球;跳绳;有卖烟花炮竹;还有卖小吃、点心、水果;穿用吃样样俱全，真是大世界，无奇不有。每间店铺前都挂着大红灯笼，走进超市，在柔和灯光下，各种各样、琳琅满目年货和小朋友们天真、可爱笑容融为一体，停下脚步这里有我梦寐以求：飞机模型、望远镜、电动汽车……。我想等晚上拿到压岁钱，初一我一定来买这摇控飞机。

超市外面人声鼎沸，鼓声、鞭炮声、人们欢叫声混成一片。我赶忙出来一看，只见一条金色龙在震天鞭炮和欢快锣鼓声中上下翻腾，龙头跟着龙珠舞动，龙身随着龙头起伏，仿佛在翻滚、在飞腾。舞龙者个个抖擞精神，巨龙在他们手中变换着各种造型，滚龙、串龙、跪龙、高塔盘龙、直躺舞龙，精彩绝伦技艺赢得大家阵阵喝彩。

准每到一处，“龙”都要绕上一圈，摇头摆尾，欢悦跳跃，腾舞翻滚，此外，龙队还会送上一副“扁”，祝福大家新一年吉祥如意、心想事成、身康体健、财源滚滚等等。

吃年夜饭，一串串鞭炮在人们手中点燃，一阵阵爆竹声接连断，噼里啪啦，热闹非凡，声音真大，四处飞溅，仿佛要把每一个祝福送到千家万户，

八点钟到，我和家人拿着各式各样烟火，燃发着，只听见几沉闷声音，一个个烟花带着红红火星窜上天空，几声脆响，夜空绽放出几朵美丽花朵。它们形状和颜色各不相同，有五颜六色满天星，金黄色蒲公英，紫色牵牛花，火红玫瑰花，粉红月季、银色百合……，绚丽多彩。

当新年钟声敲在十二正时，大街小巷鞭炮齐鸣，夜空星闪耀，节日礼花五彩缤纷，祝福随着人们欢声笑语，随着不时响起鞭炮声飞出大街小巷，飘荡在20__年节日夜空……。

I like to eat different kinds of delicious food , however, my favorite

food is dumplings. In my spare time , I like to make dumplings with my mother .

I think home-made dumplings are more delicious than those in supermarket .My

mother knows I love to eat them ,so she makes dumplings at every weekend . I

prefer eating dumplings . How about you

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我喜欢吃各种各样的美味的食物,但是,我最喜欢的食物是饺子。在我的业余时间,我喜欢和我妈妈包饺子。我认为自制的饺子比超市更美味。我妈妈知道我爱吃,所以她在每个周末做饺子。我喜欢吃饺子。你呢？

I want to be ateacher in the future, because I think teacher is a good job.

My teachers arevery good. Some of them are gentle, but some of them are not. But

I think theyall care for students very much. I want to be a good teacher like

them. I thinkI will be strict to my students in the class. But after class, I

want to betheir friend and help them in study and life. Besides, it can help me

to keep ayoung heart to stay with young students. I must work hard for my

dream.

将来我想成为一名老师，因为我觉得老师是一份好工作。我的老师都很优秀，他们有的温柔，但有的不是这样。但是，我觉得他们都很关心学生。我想成为和他们一样的好老师。我认为在课堂上我会对学生严厉，但是课后我想成为他们的朋友，在生活和学习上帮助他们。除此之外，与年轻的学生呆在一起能够使我保持年轻的心态。我一定要努力实现我的梦想。

如何减肥 how to lose weight

it seems that many people today are overweight. no one wants to carry around extra pounds, lout few people know how to slum down effectively. they look for miracle pills and magic cures. in the end, they fail and the pounds come back. but the most effective way of losing weight is actually very simple. it is a combination of a good diet and proper exercise. what makes it work is determination. it requires discipline and commitment to succeed. here is an example that proves the truth of these words.

现在似乎有许多人的体重都过重。没有人会希望身上有多余的重量，但是很少人知道如何才能有效地瘦下来。他们会去寻找特效药，以及神奇的治疗法。最后不仅失败，而且反弹了。但是事实上，最有效的减肥方法非常简单。主要就是结合均衡的饮食，以及适当的运动。成功的关键就是要有决心。成功需要自制和投入。以下这个例子，可以证明这个方法是正确的。

my aunt had been trying to lose weight for years. she went on one diet after another, but none of them worked. she lost a lot of weight quickly only to have it come back. finally, she followed her doctors advice and began to eat a simple, well-balanced diet. she ate lots of fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat foods. in addition, she joined an exercise class. she worked out three times a week. at first, my aunt wasnt happy because the weight came off so slowly. but her classmates encouraged her to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. best of all, she was able to stay at her ideal weight. that was because she had developed healthy new habits.

我阿姨试图减肥已经好多年了。她一次又一次地节食，但是没有一次成功。她的体重会快速地下降，但没多久就又反弹了。最后，她听从医生的建议，开始吃简单、均衡的饮食。她吃大量的蔬果，并避免高脂肪的食物。除此之外，她还去参加运动课程。她一星期运动三次。起初，我阿姨并不是很开心，因为体重下降得很慢。但是她的同学们鼓励她坚持下去，最后她终于达到目标。最棒的是，她能够维持她的理想体重。因为她已经养成健康的新生活习惯。

I have many friends. Do you know who they are? Are they my pet?No.Are they

my classmates? no. let me tell you:they are my favourit books.

I like books very much.I like reading Chinese book,cartoonbook so on.not

only let me know how wonderful the word is but also teach me how to be a good

person in the society,they give me great pleasure.

I love books!

我有很多朋友。你知道他们是谁吗?是宠物吗?不是，是我的同学吗?不是，让我告诉你们吧，是我最喜爱的书籍。

我非常喜欢书籍，我喜欢阅读运输，漫画书等等。它们不仅让我学到了很多美妙的词语并且教会我如何在社会上成为一个优秀的人。它们给了我极大的乐趣。

我爱书!

The Spring Festival is a traditional festival in our country. Every Spring Festival, people always want to paste Fu characters, couplets, firecrackers. You see, every family has a decorated, the scene bursting with happiness.

Our family is no exception. I picked up a pair of spring couplets, stuck the glue on the door and put it neatly. Dad will "blessing" upside down on the door. Her sister was also busy in the room. She picked up a few red lanterns and hung them in the room, and put a bunch of small colored lights on the wall. The small color lights flicker like a small star in the blink of an eye.

"The year" the sound of firecrackers, the new year has passed. I love fireworks and love the Spring Festival more.

With the improvement of living conditions, more and more people can live

longer. However, many old people always suffer from loneliness, which is one of

the major problems in today’s society. To make the old people live better, some

good advice must be followed. Firstly, the young should spare more time to talk

and communicate with their parents, so as to relieve their loneliness. Secondly,

the old ought to understand the work pressure and family burden of the young.

Furthermore, the society are supposed to organize more activities for the old,

so that they can make more friends and have more joys and happiness in their

life.

I like playing basketball .It’s very interesting . I often play it with my friends. It’s a team work.. Everyone needs to work together with others. (每个人都需要和别人合作). I can also make many new friends in the game. My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. He is very tall and plays basketball very well. I want to play in NBA one day like him.

我喜欢打篮球。它非常有趣。我经常玩它与我的朋友们。这是一个团队的工作..每个人都需要与其他人一起工作。 （每个人都需要和别人合作）。我还可以在游戏中交到很多新朋友。我最喜欢的篮球运动员是姚明。他非常高，篮球打得非常好。我想在NBA玩上一天像他一样。

[关于我的爱好初中英语作文

“你今年什么时候回来过年？”手机上突然弹出一条来自发小的信息，我顺手翻了翻桌上的日历，发现腊月都要过完了，儿时的这时候正三天两头粘着奶奶去市场赶集囤年货，往年的这个时候也已经在家里烤火看电视唠家常，今年由于工作原因要推迟回家的时间，想到这不由得感叹一句，好想回到儿时啊。

谈及春节，最难忘的就是儿时的春节了。那时候年味很浓重，一进入腊月，家家户户就开始忙着准备过年的事项了。趁着还没到年底，物价还没疯涨，奶奶经常会在赶集的日子去市场上带年货回来，有时候是瓜子饼干，有时候是饮料蔬菜，有时候是烟花鞭炮，零零碎碎的屯着。小时候看见零食就两眼发光，时不时的就去储物间抓两把瓜子，拿几包饼干，奶奶怕我们这些小孩子在年前就把零食吃完，就用一个大箱子装起来，放在衣柜的最上层，导致儿时的我们每天都眼巴巴的看着那口大箱子，祈祷着新年赶紧到来。

儿时的春节最让我开心的不是有许多的零食吃，而是会有新衣服新鞋子。小时候的我很臭美，一到过年，全身上下都要换新的。新年的新衣服是早就买好了放在我的衣柜里的，没有到过年那一天我都舍不得穿，每天都要打开衣柜瞅上好几眼，爱不释手的摸摸领子再摸摸袖口，新鞋子也是擦了又擦，反反复复跟奶奶确认到底哪一天才过年，等着出门拜年的时候一展风采。

儿时的春节十分隆重，大年初一那天早晨，要乖乖的早起和爷爷奶奶爸爸妈妈道新年好，吃完丰盛的早餐（我们那叫过早）后和大家去祠堂祭拜祖先，祈祷新的一年风调雨顺，家人身体健康，四季平安，大人事业有成，小孩学业进步。村里还安排了人舞狮，家家户户准备好茶水点心等着“狮子”进门，寓意着这一年的鸿运来。除此之外村里还会组织很多的贺新年活动，沉寂的村子焕然一新，大家脸上都是洋溢着喜庆的笑容……

“我已经回家了！你也快点回来吧，大家都等你呢！”发小的信息打断了我的思绪，我回复了道“好的，我也快要回来了！”，并在日历上的除夕那天画了个圈。

儿时春节的记忆十分美好，让我久久不能忘怀。而现在，好友的等候，家人的盼望，让我也忍不住的开始期待起今年的春节来……

celeberate the 55th national day chinese people will welcome the 55th national day two days later,october 1th.

in beijing,the tiananmen square is decorated by more than 300,000 pots of flowers,the chairman maos old icon is changed by a new one hanging on the tiananmen building.

in nanjing,sweet-scented osmanthus festival,misty rain culture festival in mochou lake,barbecue festival in gulin park will be held during the national day.

in chongqing,more than 2,000 of lights on bridge are renewed to welcome the national day.

during the national day period,raising the national falg ceremony,a concert of national music and an exhibition of patriotic films will be held in hangzhou,zhejing province.

happy national day!

盼啊！盼啊，终于盼到了鸡年的春节。想到这，我不由得笑了起来，在春节前，人们个个喜气洋洋，个个精神饱满。逛街的人络绎不绝，有的在买年画，有的在买年货，有的坐着火箱围着火炉看电视，还有的人在打麻将打扑克，等等不一而足。

反正街上五彩缤纷，各种各样的人都有，各种各样的货物都齐全，琳琅满目，人们恐怕想买什么都难选择！

春节前，家家户户都灯火通明，家家都把房子打扮得别具一格，各有各的个性。他们把买来的年货放得满地都地。买来的年画怎么贴法，那就各有自己的风格和喜好了。有的正着贴，有的倒着贴，还有的歪着贴，各有千秋。人们把买来的菜全部都弄好了，只等春节一到，就可一饱口福了。家家备有鞭炮，人们穿上新衣服，准备迎新年，在春节前，人们一出门，如果遇上了好朋友，总是口中不忘说一句：上街啊！

人们杀猪宰羊，忙碌地准备着春节大吃大喝一番。

春节到了，小朋友们便早早起床，来到爸爸妈妈的房间，开始了传统的拜年仪式了。小朋友们对父母说着一些吉祥话儿，爸妈就拿出压岁钱，让小孩子们高高兴兴。大家都希望今年能够吉祥如意，招财进宝。

一些亲朋好友欢聚一堂，品尝着美酒佳肴，谈着一些开心的话儿。而最高兴的则是我们，可以大把大把地攒取压岁钱，然后就欢天喜地跑到街上去买很多好玩的东西，如小汽车、四驱车、玩具枪、足球等，而我们只要嘴巴甜一点，多说些祝福的话儿，那可就大赚一笔了！

人们一直玩到深夜，嘴里啃着美味水果，手里燃放鞭炮烟花……大人小孩们载歌载舞，忘情地玩个痛快！

Different people have different career outlooks. Some people want to become

civil servants; some people hope to start their own business; some people dream

of being freelancers, and so on.

However, my ideal job is teaching. Firstly, I’m told that teachers have a

high income. With the high income, I can open a training school to help the

children in poor families with their education. Secondly, teachers always have

summer and winter holidays, thus I will have more free time to relax myself.

More importantly, teachers are angels to students, who can pass on the knowledge

to students as well as help them develop their hobbies and interests. I can’t

imagine how happy I will feel when I see my students become elites.

In order to be a qualified teacher, I should read more books to acquire

more knowledge, and train my patience and improve my communication and

handwriting abilities.

with the development of technology, people can do some operations to make

their faces look prefect, even to look much younger than their real ages. when

we see the commercial ads, we can find the stars look gorgeous, we are so envy

about their young faces. but to me, i think the secret of keeping young is not

by surgery operation, but to keep a healthy lifestyle. today, young people are

living an unhealthy life, they like to stay up and wake up at the noon. young

people form the habit of taking activity at night while sleeping in the day. how

terrible it is, they are damaging their bodies, their bodies will get older than

the normal speed. if people sleep early and wake up in the morning, do some

exercises and keep the balance diet, they will look young. so don’t expect the

surgery to help look young, it is harmful, only the healthy lifestyle does.

随着科技的发展，人们可以通过一些手术来让他们的脸看起来完美，甚至看起来比实际的年龄年轻。当我们看到商业广告时，可以发现明星看起来很漂亮，嫉妒他们年轻的容颜。但是对于我来说，我觉得保持年轻的秘密不是通过外科手术，而是保持健康的生活方式。今天，年轻人的生活方式很不健康，他们喜欢熬夜，中午才起床。年轻人养成了在晚上活动，白天睡觉的习惯。这是多么糟糕啊，他们是在损害自己的身体，他们的身体比正常的速度老化得快。如果人们早睡早起，做运动，保持平衡的饮食，他们会看起来年轻。所以不要期望通过外科手术来变得年轻，那是有害的，唯有健康的生活习惯才能让你年轻。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。