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+ 加入清单高考英语作文 世界无烟日 World No Tobacco Day
This years observance of World No Tobacco Day focuses on "Gender and tobacco, with an emphasis on marketing to women".
今年的世界无烟日,关注“性别与烟草,强调对女性的营销”。
Although fewer than 1 out of 10 women are smokers, that still adds up to an estimated 200 million women around the world. Moreover, that number could grow, since the tobacco industry is spending heavily on advertisements that target women and associate tobacco use with beauty and liberation.
虽然不到10名女性中有1名女性吸烟者,但仍有200000000名妇女在全世界估计有名妇女被吸烟。而且,这个数字可能会增长,因为烟草业在广告上投入巨资,针对妇女和联想烟草使用的广告与美和解放。
According to a recent study by the World Health Organization (WHO), the number of girls and boys who smoked was about equal in half the 151 countries surveyed. This finding is even more worrisome since young people who smoke are likely to continue in adulthood.
据世界卫生组织最近的一项调查显示,有一半的女孩和男孩在调查的151个国家中大约有一半是平等的。这一发现更令人担忧,因为吸烟的年轻人很可能在成年后继续继续下去。
Evidence indicates that the prevalence rate of tobacco use among women is on the rise in some countries. Governments everywhere must take action to protect women from tobacco advertising, promotion and sponsorship, as stipulated in the WHO Framework Convention on Tobacco Control.
有证据表明,在一些国家,妇女使用烟草的患病率在上升。各国政府都必须采取行动,保护妇女不受烟草控制的“世界卫组织公约”规定的烟草广告、促销和赞助。
The Convention also calls on Governments to protect women from second-hand tobacco smoke -- especially in countries where women feel powerless to protect themselves and their children. As WHO data show, of the 430,000 adults who die each year from second-hand smoke, nearly two thirds are women.
该公约还呼吁各国政府保护妇女免受二手烟草烟雾的保护,特别是在妇女认为自己无力保护自己和子女的国家。正如世卫组织数据显示,每年死于二手烟的430000名成年人中,有近三分之二名是女性。
Around the world, more than 1.5 million women die each year from tobacco use. Most of these deaths occur in low-and middle-income countries. Without concerted action, that number could rise to 2.5 million women by the year 2030.
在世界各地,每年有超过1500000名妇女死于烟草使用。大多数这些死亡发生在低收入和中等收入国家。如果没有协调一致的行动,这一数字可能会上升到2500000,2030岁的女性。
We must turn back the global tobacco epidemic. On World No Tobacco Day, I urge all Governments to address this public health threat. Tobacco use is not stylish or empowering. It is ugly and deadly.
我们必须把全球烟草流行化。在世界无烟日,我呼吁各国政府应对这一公共卫生威胁。烟草使用是不时尚的或授权的。它是丑陋和致命的。
Would My Father Have to Operate父亲得动手术吗
I was waiting for the doctor to finish his examination.I was worried and nervous.Would my father have to operate?Would a blood transfusion be necessary?What would he have to say?
Dr Lin was a heart expert.He was an excellent doctor and his examinations were always complete.He listened to the patients heart,took his blood pressure and temperature,gave him an X-ray and examined his eyes and ears.The doctor finall completed his examination and spoke to me.He told me that heart trouble is never a minor illness,but this wasnt a serious heart attack.He advised losing weight,getting plenty of sleep and eating good meals.Smoking and drinking would be harmful,of course.Dr Lin said it would be necessary to be careful for a while,but he was confident that there was nothing to worry about.
I felt much better after I spoke to Dr Lin.I was certain that my father would be up and around again very soon.Hes seventy five years old now,but he can still live for a long time if he takes good care of himself.
我在等医生来完成他的检查,我很担心,紧张,我父亲必须要手术吗?输血是必要的吗?他要说什么?
林博士是心脏病专家。他是一名优秀的医生,他考试总是完成。他听病人的心脏,把他的血压和体温,给他X光检查了他的眼睛和耳朵。医生finall完成他的考试和我谈话。他告诉我,心脏问题从来不是一个轻微的疾病,但这并不是一个严重的心脏病。他建议减肥,获得充足的睡眠和饮食。吸烟和饮酒会是有害的,当然。林博士说,就必须要小心而,但他有信心,有什么可担心。
我觉得好多了之后我说林博士,我是一定的,我父亲会很快再四处走动。他的七十五年现在老了,但他仍能活很长一段时间,如果他需要好好照顾自己。
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篇1:英语四级写作高分方法集锦
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+ 加入清单【提要】英语四六级四级信息 : 20176月英语四级写作高分黄金句式【1】
▌列举法
列举法是四级写作中常用的方法,一般用first, second等一系列标志词引出原因或者可能的影响等。列举法常用的素材有:
引出列举
1. There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/are responsible for/can explain ______. 也许有一些因素造成/可以解释______。
2. There are probably three/many/several/a variety of reasons for this dramatic/significant increase/decline in ______.引起______显著增长/下降的原因有三个/许多/几个/很多。
3. Some reasons can explain this trend. 一些原因可以解释这一趋势。
4. Why ______ ?为什么______?
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6. The reason for this is not far to seek. 这一问题的原因不难发现。
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8. There are numerous reasons why ______, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. ______的原因有很多,这里我只想探讨其中几个最重要的原因。
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分条列举
1. In the first place, ______. In the second place______ .首先,______。其次,______。
2. First,______ . Second, ______ . 首先,______。其次,______。
3. To begin with, ______. Secondly, ______. Last but not least, ______.首先,______。其次,______。最后但并不是最不重要的,______。
4. The first reason is that ______. The second one is ______. The third is ______. 第一个原因是______。第二个原因是______。第三个原因是______。
5. First of all, ______. Secondly,______ . Furthermore,______ .首先,______。其次,______。另外,______。
6. For one thing, ______. For another, ______.一方面,______。另一方面,______。
7. Firstly, ______. Secondly, ______. Thirdly, ______.首先,______。其次,______。再次,______。
8. Another reason why I disagree with the above statements is that I believe______.我不同意上述观点的另一个原因是我认为______。
▌对比法
对比法是指通过对比两种截然不同的观点来陈述其中的利弊,从而得出自己的结论。对比法常用的素材有:
1. The advantages gained in ______ outweigh/are much g
篇2:有关感恩的高考英语
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+ 加入清单When I watch the TV series, there always present the rich familys life,
but I dont feel envious about the rich life. It is obvious that though these
people live the better life, the cost is that their parents spend less time to
play with them. The time to stay with our parents is really important, while the
rich parents have much work to do, so they dont have much private hours. I was
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篇3:高考作文写作方法:游记怎么写
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+ 加入清单同学们在旅行当中不仅可以领略美丽风光,也可以学习文化,但写好一篇游记作文是不容易的,同学们怎么才可以写好游记作文呢?
写好游记,要注意以下四点:
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游记的写作犹如蜜蜂采花酿蜜,素材主要来源于游览见闻。细心观察,就是要抓住有特色的景观和对表达中心有重要作用的事物。世界上没有完全相同的两片树叶;事物的特色都是在比较中显示出来的。游览过程中我们就是要善于运用比较的方法,捕捉眼前的景物与其他地方的景物有什么不同之处。有些同学只顾热闹或贪玩,常常忽视景点中的人文资料,如神话传说,乡风民俗,名人轶事,诗词典故,碑文楹联等等,结果是丢了西瓜抓芝麻,写起? 自然内容贫乏,索然无味。所以,必要时还必须心记手写,也可以回来后查看有关资料,以保证内容的丰富充实。
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三、紧扣游踪,疏密有致
游记的内容往往多而杂,写出来怎样才能做到清晰而不繁乱呢?最常用和最简便的方法就是:移步换景。即以游踪的变化为线索,随着时间的推移和地点的转换,完整有序地写出重要的游览过程。当然也要避免写成一本流水账或一幅游览路线图。所以,写作中要用浓墨重彩突出重要的点,跳出一般性的过程交代,使整篇文章成为几个主要景点活动的有机组合体。为了使这个组合体结构匀称,我们还要运用一些穿插的技巧,将与景点有关的资料、数据等内容,通过游览者的交谈或引用等方式适时介绍,这样,就可以调整文章的结构,消除看上去有些部分“臃肿肥胖”、有些部分又显得“面黄肌症”的毛病。
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我们南通是个依江傍海、景色宜人的花园式城市,狼山更是名闻遐迩。星期日早晨,我们一家三口前往游玩。上午我们先去了啬园,午餐后就直奔狼山。
一路上爸爸告诉我们,狼山古称狼五山、紫琅山,相传有白狼踞其上,所以又叫白狼山。据史籍记载:唐天宝年间,鉴真东渡日本,曾经过此山以避风浪。它位居全国佛教八小名山之首呢!
我们在车上远望狼山,只见一片翠绿,雄伟的宝塔屹立在山顶,十分壮观。不一会儿,到了山脚下,我们没上缆车,沿着花岗岩铺成的台阶向上攀登。山上人来人往,喜气洋洋。山路两旁古木参天,千姿百态,不禁令人暗暗称奇。狼山不高,父亲说才104.8米,面积18公顷,在多山的地方,根本就算不上什么山。但在南通,却是大名鼎鼎。真是应了那句:山不在高,有仙则名;水不在深,有龙则灵。
说笑间,不知不觉我们就登上了山顶。从山上向下俯视,马路四通八达,楼房一幢接一幢,江面上传着几艘豪华的大轮船,码头旁的大吊车犹如长颈鹿玩具,好一片壮观景象。
狼山因为落座在一马平川、沃野千里的江海平原之上,耸立在一望无垠的长江之滨,所以显得特别突兀高大。尤其是它山势陡峭,拔地而起,临江高耸,直插蓝天,气势更加非凡。登上支云塔,仿佛觉得不是站在一座百米小山之上,而是置身于九霄云外了。辽阔的江海平原,从脚下一直伸展到无边的远方;滚滚的万里长江,犹如一条闪光的缎带,从遥远的天际蜿蜒而来,奔腾入海;那海,那长江入口处的大海,更是水天相连,烟波苍茫,好一派江天寥廓、沧海浩瀚的壮丽景象。怪不得宋朝大诗人王安石来此,情不自禁地发出这样的赞叹:“遨游半是江湖里,始觉今朝眼界开”。想起萃景楼前两根石柱上的那副楹联:“长啸一声山鸣谷应,举头四顾海阔天空”。我们的胸怀也顿觉无限宽广!这样的山,怎能不名闻遐迩呢?
狼山之名所以闻名,更因为它和历史文化名人联系在一起。如唐初四杰之一的骆宾王,近代革命先驱、教育家、实业家张謇,就葬在狼山。又如法乳堂内的十八高僧巨幅瓷砖画像,出自南通籍画家范曾之手,同样令人敬仰。
傍晚,回程途中,妈妈感慨地说,一切为中华民族作出杰出贡献的人,人们是永远不会忘记他们的。——说的是啊!
快乐的狼山游,真是难忘而甜美的记忆。
点评:
这篇游记的一个突出优点是善于挖掘和引用了大量人文资料,从自然山水写出了人文内涵,写出了狼山与其他旅游景点不同的个性、特点和意义。其中的神话传况、名人故事、经史典籍、古人诗文、墓葬文物、景点楹联、地理数据等等,大大提升了文章的文化品位和阅读价值。作者记述游览见闻是有选择的,不是只顾自己的玩兴,什么开心就写什么(其实那天,他们在狼山脚下的水上乐园玩得很“疯”,文中就只字未提),可见写作态度很认真:又因为善于穿插,所以结构匀称,毫无堆砌之感。文笔优美,语言精炼是本文的又一特色,作者从不同角度描写出来的狼山景色,都生动形象,充满豪情,又各有千秋!这一点也值得称道。
篇4:高考英语谚语大全
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+ 加入清单导语:学点英文谚语会让你写作增色不少!物以类聚,善有善报、恶有恶报,英雄所见略同……下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
1、Ill news travels fast.
坏事传千里。
2、From saving comes having.
富有来自节约。
3、No cross, no crown.
不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹。
4、A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难之交才是真朋友。
5、He that climbs high falls heavily.
爬得越高,摔得越重。
6、Experience is the mother of wisdom.
实践出真知。
7、East or west, home is best.
在家千日好,出门时时难。
8、Dont trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.
不要自寻烦恼。
9、Dont teach your grandmother to suck eggs.
休要班门弄斧。
10、Doing is better than saying.
行胜于言。
11、Birds of a feather flock together.
物以类聚,人以群分。
12、Barking dogs seldom bite.
吠犬不咬人;爱叫的狗很少咬人;善吠的狗很少咬人。
14、As the tree, so the fruit.
长什么树,结什么果。
15、An idle youth, a needy age.
少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
16、A good wife makes a good husband.
有好妻子就有好丈夫。
17、A good medicine tastes bitter.
良药苦口,忠言逆耳。
18、A good fame is better than a good face.
美名胜于美貌。
19、A good conscience is a soft pillow.
不做亏心事,不怕鬼叫门。
20、A good conscience is a continual feast.
白天不做亏心事,夜半敲门心不惊。
21、A good beginning makes a good ending.
良好的开端就是成功的一半。
22、Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.
逆境出人才。
23、A constant guest is never welcome.
久住非佳宾,常来不欢迎。
24、A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
一鸟在手,胜似二鸟在林。
25、A bad workman quarrels with his tools.
拙匠常怨工具差。
26、A man cannot spin and reel at the sametime.
一心不能二用。
27、It is never too old to learn.
活到老,学到老。
28、Readingis to the mind while exercise to the body.
读书健脑,运动强身。
29、Knowledge starts with practice.
实践出真知。
30、Complacency is the enemy of study.
学习的敌人是自己的满足。
31、A little knowledge is a dangerous thing.
一知半解,害已误人。
32、Laugh and the world laughs with you, weep and you weep alone.
欢笑, 则世界与你同乐; 哭泣, 则独自悲伤.
33、Ill news travels fast.
坏事传千里。
34、From saving comes having.
富有来自节约。
35、No cross, no crown.
不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹。
36、Friends must part.
天下无不散之筵席。
37、A bad thing never dies.
坏事传千年
38、Every minute counts.
分秒必争。
39、A years plan starts with spring.
一年之计在于春。
40、How time flies!
时光飞逝。
41、Nature teaches us to love our friends but religion our enemies.
自然教我们爱朋友,宗教却教我们爱敌人。
42、Life without a friend is death without a witness.
在世无朋友,死后无证人。
43、In time of prosperity, friends will be plenty; In time of adversity, not one amongst twenty.
富在深山有远亲,穷在闹市无人问。
44、He is rich enough who has true friends.
有真朋友的人是富翁。
45、He is a good friend that speaks well of us behind our backs.
背后说好话,才是真朋友。
46、Have but few friends though many acquaintances.
结交可广,知己宜少。
47、God defend me from my friends; form my enemy I can defend myself.
防友靠天,防敌靠己。
48、Friends may meet, but mountains never greet.
朋友可相逢,高山永分离。
49、Friendship the older it grows the stronger it is.
友谊地久天长。
50、Everything is good when new, but friend when old.
物莫如新,友莫如故。
篇5:高考作文写作方法:新颖标题的拟法
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+ 加入清单标题是文章的眼睛,是文章内容和读者情感之间的第一个接触点,是让人一见钟情的因子,也可提供给读者审视文章内容的独特视角。要想在作文拟题时得心应手,就必须在平时的写作实践中不断摸索、训练。下文是小编整理的相关内容,欢迎阅读参考!
话题作文在近几年的高考(微博)命题中一直独领风骚。而自拟题目则是话题作文的一个重要写作要求。一个好的标题犹如一双靓丽的眼睛,透过它可以洞悉文章的思想感情、具体内容。所以拟好一个让阅卷老师“一见钟情”的作文题目,是作文得分的至关重要的一步。
一、附加法
就是选取话题中的关键词,在其前后补充成分,使之成为标题。这种方法特别适合于以一个词为话题的作文。如以“声音”为话题,可以拟为《板书的声音》《生命中的声音》等;以“幸福”为话题,可为《追求幸福》《体味幸福》等。
二、修辞法
1.比喻法。如《理解是路,爱是桥》,把爱和理解比喻成缩短心灵距离的桥梁和路,极富文采;《拔除心灵的杂草》,把人类心理的不健康因素比做“杂草”,使文章显得形象生动。
2.比拟式。如《诚信“漂流记”,把“诚信”拟人化,通过诚信巧遇“快乐”“地位”“竞争”的遭遇,可以得出富有哲理的结论。再如《诚信喊冤》《天空的诉说》等,使人如闻其声,如临其境。都运用了拟人的手法,形象生动,别有韵味。
3.夸张式。如那个障碍粉碎了我(“挫折”话题)等。
4.借代式。如以黑白债为题,紧扣母亲乌黑发丝中的白发展开叙述,揭示岁月无情、母爱无价这一真谛,借色彩代本体,寄托深情。
5.反问式。如以“相容”为话题,可以拟题为谁说不相容等。
6.设问式。用设问引起读者的思索,如《顺境出人才吗》〈我是谁》等。
7.引用式。文题中恰当的引用一些名言警句,能达到言简意赅的效果,又使作文增加一定的文化底蕴,如《己所不欲勿施于人》;还可以引用一些流行歌词,如《一笑而过》(以宽容为话题)、《一千零一个愿望》(以心愿为话题)等。
8.双关式。语义双关,如《冬日暖阳》等。
9.对偶式。如《读智慧之书,做有用之才》,《高高山顶立,深深海底行》(人生感悟话题),《斩断亲情,昭显正义》(“人与我”话题等)。
10.反复式。如以“探索未知世界”为话题,就可以拟题为《生命的萌芽,萌芽的生命》等。
作文拟题的方法还有很多,这里就不再一一赘述了。教师可根据教学实际,指导学生采用各种方法拟题以增加文采。
三、矛盾法
培养学生具有逆向思维的能力,这样拟出来的题目,往往会收到意想不到的效果。如《近墨者未必黑》《“闲书”不闲》等题目,用了形贬实褒来命题,反而更能吸引人。
四、符号法
如数学中的等式《1+1=?》,不等式《金钱 幸福》《成绩 素质》等。这样的拟题给人简洁明了的感觉,还会让人产生一睹为快的阅读欲望。
[高考作文写作方法:新颖标题的拟法
篇6:澳大利亚高考优秀英语作文
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+ 加入清单australia, the largest country in oceania, lies on the south coast of the pacific. it covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. it has a population of over 10 million. most of its people live in the east of the country by the sea. canberra,the capital of australia,is a beautiful city. sydney is the biggest city in australia, which has many places of interest. the opera house is well known all over the world.the olympic games were held in sydney.
澳大利亚是大洋洲最大的国家,位于太平洋南海岸,国土面积760万平方公里,人口超过1 000万,大多数居民居住在东部地区,濒临海洋。首都堪培拉是一座美丽的城市。悉尼是全国最大的城市,有许多名胜,悉尼歌剧院闻名于世。奥运会就是在这里举行的。
篇7:英语日记的写作指导及例文
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+ 加入清单导语:要学好写英语短文,就必须经常练习写作。记日记是提高书面表达能力的有效方法之一。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文指导,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
一、日记的格式
英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况,如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy,Windy,Snowy,Cloudy等。
1、日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时,通常以月、日、年为顺序,月份可以缩写,日和年用逗号隔开。例如:
A)September 1,2004或September 1st,2004也可省略写成Sept. 1,2004或Sept. 1st,2004;the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以缩写)
B)只有月、日:September 1或September 1st(月份可以缩写)
C)只有年、月:September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以缩写)
以上的1或1st都应读作the first.
2、星期也可以省略不写,可将其放在日期前或后,星期和日期之间不用标点,但要空一格,星期也可缩写。如:
Saturday,October 22nd,2004;October 22nd,2004 Saturday
3.天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy,Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后,用逗号隔开,位于日记的右上角。如:
Saturday,March 4,2004,Windy;1st January,2004,Fine
二、日记的要求
日记的正文是日记的主要部分,写在星期和日期的正下方,可以顶格写,也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。由于记载的内容通常已经发生,谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况,用其它时态。如:记叙天气、描写景色,为了描写生动,可以使用现在时,以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了,有连贯性。若有文字提示,则应重视提示,把握要点。在句式上尽量使用简单句,以防繁杂,造成语法、句型错误。
三、日记的类型和训练
日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中,可按以下步骤进行:
①将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来,不附加任何感情色彩,这是最简单的记日记的方法;
②阅读别人的日记,并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。
「范文与点评」
March 12th,2003,Tuesday Sunny (Fine)
Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7∶30 in the morning,all the students in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard,and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired,we still felt very happy.
这是一篇记叙型的日记。结构严谨,中心突出,有选择地记录当天的见闻(人或事),并加以分析和评论。
篇8:高考高分作文的写作方法指导
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+ 加入清单高考是争分夺秒的战场,对写作手法熟悉,不仅能的高分,也能提高你的速度。下面由小编为大家提供关于高考高分作文的写作方法指导,希望对大家有帮助!
高分作文的写作方法一、结构模式要简
高考作文先要整体构思。开头结尾,过渡照应,主体展开,材料选取等,在动笔前要通盘考虑。只有自己想清楚了,才能写清楚;自己写清楚了,阅卷老 师才能看清楚;阅卷老师看清楚了,给分才能给清楚。笔者认为,考场作文的结构应该简明,因为教师阅卷时,每篇作文平均阅读的时间仅为一分钟。因此,一篇应 试的议论文最好只包括三大部分,五到八段文字:第一部分,简要提引原材料,在这个基础之上引出自己的感悟,作为中心观点,这个观点要明明白白,旗帜鲜明; 第二部分,分三至五段,前两段(或三段)从古今中外不同角度各取一个例子,紧扣观点进行正面论证;后一段(或两段)可从反面选取事例与前文进行对比论证; 第三部分,对全文论述的观点进行总结升华,给人以完整感。这样结构文章既简明又严谨且不呆板,还能让阅卷老师一目了然。
高分作文的写作方法二、列提纲要快
高考既考能力又考速度。考场上列作文提纲,可先写出简单的结构模式,然后把可能能用上的词句和例子,如名言警句、古诗词、古今中外的事例(尤其 是带有时代气息的当今事例),简省写出,只要自己看得懂就行。写于卷面之前,可边浏览边修改,择优录用。这样既能节省时间,又能一气呵成,避免文面多处涂改。
高分作文的写作方法三、内容要新
1.题目要新颖别致。“题好文一半”,许多阅卷老师就是根据学生命的题目来判定他的审题能力和写作水平的。因此,能拟一个独具特色的题目,就能以一道亮丽的风景线吸引住老师的视线,分数自然偏高。
2.开头要新颖独特,结尾要深刻感人。从题目实际出发,选取自己最拿手的文体,精心打造开头和结尾,确保获得高分。
3.素材的选取要新鲜贴切。材料新颖又切合题意,那就能显示自己敏捷的思维能力和深厚的文化底蕴,让阅卷老师耳目一新,作文分数自然就能上一个 档次。我们要力避大众化和过于平淡的素材,要善于从现实生活、历史典故、文学名著中去搜寻别人没有用过的材料,而且要注意材料的贴切性、典型性、新颖性、 多样性。
高分作文的写作方法四、立意要深
1.要扣命意。高分作文必定是扣题行文的。扣题能力其实就是审题能力,如果扣题不紧,得的分数会很低。
2.立意要有深度,要“掘地三尺”。“千古文章意为高”,不少考生的应试作文往往是蜻蜓点水,浅尝辄止,立意没有深度。立意,我们可以从历史和 文化的沃野中去找寻理论的“掘地三尺”的深度。通过纵向和横向的比较,理想和现实的观照,偶然和必然的分析尝试辩证地寻找理性的答案。阅卷老师一般对深具 慧眼、富有哲理的作文情有独钟,给分较高。
3.立意不能浅俗,思想不要幼稚,态度不要“嬉皮士”。每年的高考作文都有一些境界低下、思想庸俗之作。我们要明白,高考体现国家意志,而国家 意志则重在弘扬真、善、美。有些同学喜欢唱反调,不管写什么都用调侃嘲讽的口气来写,显得很不严肃。高考作文立意要境界高雅、胸襟阔大,力避市侩气息、低俗趣味。
高分作文的写作方法五、感情要真
文章不是无病呻吟的“涂鸭”,而是酸甜苦辣感情的寄托。诚挚朴实的情感,读来是一种享受,品来是一种惬意。真情实感的自然流露,常能打动阅卷者。要让阅卷老师感动,自己首先要投入,要动真感情。真情实感的文章往往能得高分。
高分作文的写作方法六、语言要美
流畅优美的语言给人赏心悦目的感觉,这种语言能力要靠平常的努力锻炼。无错字、病句,词句洗练流利,语脉首尾贯通,文意开合自如,是做到语言美的第一关。词语生动、句式灵活、文句有意蕴是语言美的真正体现。作文的语言美,可以从以下几个方面来练就:
一是恰当引用古今中外名人名言、诗词名句、谚语、典故等;
二是综合使用多种修辞手法,比如排比、比喻、反问、设问、对偶、夸张等;
三是综合使用各种句式,如多用短句,变式句,倒装句,双重否定句等。
四是丰富自己的生活和文化积累。因为“腹有诗书文自华”。
五是锤词炼句,以铺陈、抑扬、排比、反问等手法增强文章气势。总而言之,润饰好了语言,能寓繁于简,寓抽象于具体;能使文句更形象生动,更含蓄幽默,更有意蕴;能使文意更鲜明突出,更富有哲理,更耐人寻味。
高分作文的写作方法七、文面要洁
文面如人面,它是敲开阅卷老师心扉的第一块砖。高考阅卷时间紧,天气又热,评卷老师每天面对电脑屏幕,心态很微妙。字迹清楚、端正,字体美观大 方,无明显涂痕的试卷,能立即获得评卷老师的好感,这样一来印象分就高了。试想:一份字迹潦草、卷面不整洁的试卷出现在工作强度极大又十分疲累甚至有点焦 躁的你的面前,你岂愿卒读?太潦草的作文,往往只看了首尾,可能三类作文偏下的分数就出来了。当然,我们所写之字不一定是练过书法的(练过当然更好),而 只是要求所写之字大小一样,一笔一画认真书写,不潦草,不涂改(实在需要修改时也应用笔轻轻划去,切不可重重涂写,乱打叉),要让阅卷老师知道你所写的字 是什么字,以求一个整体效果。
这里所谈的高考作文七“要”,多少有一些“急功近利”、“离经叛道”的味道,但它确实是获取应试作文高分的有效策略。希望高三学子予以重视,针对自己的实际状况,采取相应的措施,使作文复习备考更具针对性,也更富有成效。
篇9:常用写作方法帮助你高考作文获得高分的技巧参考
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+ 加入清单高考作文是非常重要的一个试题,是高考语文拉开分数的题目之一。记叙文是高考作文常考的文体,掌握一定的记叙文写作技巧是得高分的必要手段。下面文章为大家介绍高考记叙文的写作技巧。
一、一线串珠
内涵:记叙文的线索是贯穿全文、将材料串联起来的一条主线,它把文章的各个部分联结成一个统一和谐的有机体。如果说丰富而生动的材料是一颗颗珍珠,那么线索就是将这些珍珠串联起来的一条线。
记叙文的线索主要有实物、人物、事件、时间、地点以及作者的思想感情等。无论采取何种线索,都必须从表现文章的中心思想和体现各种材料之间的内在联系出发,灵活巧妙地确定。这是高考记叙文的写作技巧之一。
二、以小见大
内涵:就是以小题材表现大主题的方法。生活中有些材料看起来似乎很平常,却包含了深刻的意义。
“一滴水也可以反映太阳的光辉”。只要善于透过现象发现本质,小材料同样能反映深刻的主题,所以以小见大也是高考记叙文的写作技巧。在写作中对形象进行强调、取舍、浓缩,以独到的想象抓住一点或一个局部加以集中描写或延伸放大,以更充分地表达记叙文主题思想。这种艺术处理以一点观全面,以小见大,从不全到全,给写作者带来了很大的灵活性和无限的表现力,同时为读者提供了广阔的想象空间,获得生动的情趣和丰富的联想。
以上内容是对高考记叙文的写作技巧的介绍,希望能够给同学们提供帮助。高考作文光有技巧也不能成就高分,所以,同学们在平时应该多阅读优秀文摘,注意词句积累,临摹好的写作手法,并且在复习过程中经常进行写作练手。
篇10:高考英语满分作文:母亲的眼睛
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+ 加入清单(Mothers Eyes)
My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.
When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mothers eyes alwaysgave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.
我母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。那双眼睛能洞察我的心情,给我鼓励,促我坚强,因此我能面对一切困难。
孩提学步时,妈妈总是帮助我,鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠地扑进她怀抱时,她的双眼充满了赞扬之情。成长过程中,我遇到了很多困难,但灰心失望时,妈妈的双眼总给我以希望和鼓励。一次我考试不及格,妈妈没有责备我,而是鼓励我找出原因,提高我的成绩。最后我终于度过了难关。现在,我长大了,不用再让她操心了。但每当遇到挫折时,妈妈的眼睛总是伴随着我,给我鼓励。
篇11:2024年高考英语写作常用句型素材
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+ 加入清单1.According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. 依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet. 没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
4. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
5.写信的开头:Very glad to receive your letter of July 13.
6.One day after school,XiaoMing passed a Café on his way home.
7.The boss had no choice but to let him in.
8.How he enjoyed himself on the computer!
9.Walking home full of fear,he was sure that he would be scolded.
10.However,other students are against the idea.
11.Sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.
12.today’s activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of LeiFeng:sharing with others what you have—you time,energy,or knowledge—makes you fell warm in you heart.It has truly a difference in how I feel about myself.
13.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.
14.No matter what he says,I won’t believe.
15. Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.
16. At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.
篇12:3浙江卷高考创新
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+ 加入清单今天,我们班的九个小组还有编辑开了一个特别的会议———作文改进会。作文改进会就是编辑来评讲我们的作文。
我一直都等待着我所在的小———第三小组讲评。所以别的小组的讲评,我是“左耳进,右耳出”。也不知过了多久,我都快睡着了,才终于到第三小组。
我跟着其他组员一起上台,准备接受编辑的“批评”。
这次,我排在了小组第二,往后退了一名。有些不高兴,但还是细心地听编辑对我的评价。编辑说我,有些文章字数很多,但废话较多,就例如《小记者当选记》。后面还说我和蔡榕楠也有一个共同的问题。
等编辑说完,我知道我的作文也许有些罗嗦;有些不该要的需要做点删改。
我想,我这些毛病是该改改了。但在这里,我还有一些话想对编辑说:
我认为,我的文章虽说是有些多话,但是我觉得那不是罗嗦,而是细致的描写。这些描写,也许就是我写作的特色吧。就像陈樱诗说的:老舍的文章也很长啊,他也是一些细致的描写,对于下文有着很重要的连接效果。我认为我也是这样。
通过这次作文改进会,我学会了改进我的作文,也希望大家多多为我的文章做些点评,让我的文章越写越好!
篇13:高考英语作文加分的句子汇总
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+ 加入清单导语:好的开头能使文章生色,激发读者阅读的兴趣;好的结尾,能增强表达效果,使读者思索、回味文章的思想内容。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
在这个迅速发展的世界里,对每个人来说,学好英语是非常重要的。
同样句型包括:It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.
2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
你工作越努力,你取得的进步就越大。
(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...
(2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)
3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界会变得更加美好。
类似的句型还有:If necessary…, they can…
4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.
记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。
5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic
我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。
6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.
人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
7. I had a great first impression of American people.
我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。
8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.
我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。
9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.
随着现代科技的迅速发展,互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。
10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.
大家应该尽可能的多读书。
11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.
由于实施了改革开放政策,中国变得更加繁荣了。
12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.
我们都需要呼吸清新的空气,我们都需要饮用洁净的水,我们都需要绿地来享受。
13. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.
让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。
14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.
我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。
15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.
我们应该养成一个好习惯,明智地利用时间。
16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?
我的确想知道的是,他是否会在下个月出国?
17. Television is harmful to developing minds.
电视不利于开发心智。
18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized
孩子们都有很大的潜能,而父母却没有意识到这一点。
19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.
在过去的10年里,我们学校发生了巨大的变化。
20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.
那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。
21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quite half way.
这份工作太辛苦,差点使我半途而废。
(1)直接使用:so… that…
The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
这份工作太辛苦、太无聊,而且没完没了,这使我非常累,差点半途而废。
(2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有:
(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)
22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980’s.
生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂,始建于1980年。
23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.
我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室,对老师和同学都同样开放。
24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.
我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。
25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高级词汇:increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.
工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人,而且他们有80%都是大学学历。
26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.
在校园内,学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。
27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.
现今,在农村地区还有很多孩子失学。我认为原因之一就是他们的家庭太贫困,而无法供应他们上学。
28. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.
人们应该增加对儿童教育的重视,因为他们会在祖国的未来扮演重要的角色。
29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.
到2008年,我们会看到北京像花园一样,有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。
30. How nice to hear from you again.
能再次收到你的来信真是太好了。
31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
敬盼早日回复。
I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.
我期待与你早日相见。
32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.
如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。
33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.
不管你将来做什么,英语都是最重要的。
34. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。
35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.
毫无疑问,玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。
36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.
显然,早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。
写作高手使用的高难度表达:
I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.
我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。
37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.
吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.
有句名言说道:风暴使树木深深扎根。
41. It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.
很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友,刘翔。
42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.
出于英语教师世家的她,对英语有着特别的兴趣。
描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下:
diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的
modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的enthusiastic热情的
43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.
我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。
44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!
我觉得电子字典很方便,但会使人们变懒。
45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.
总之,出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。
46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.
现在,我想这真是一次成功的经历,并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。
47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.
通过这次的地震,我认识到了群众的力量是无穷的。
高级名言谚语活学活用。
解释:“群众的力量是无穷的”这句名言是我们自己造的,极具威力,然后再安在毛主席的头上,更显力量。最后为了增加真实性加上时间和地点,使判卷老师误以为真,根本不敢怀疑。于是,心想:“这个句子太棒了,我都没听说过!”
造句:In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.
48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.
如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客,我会非常乐意做你的导游。
49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about the student’s using the Internet.
如今,老师和家长都对学生上网现象极为担心。
50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.
对于该问题的看法因人而异。
51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.
我们被赋予新的机会和面临着新的挑战。
52. Thank you for your consideration.
感谢你的体谅。
53. I really appreciate what you’ve done for my family and me.
我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。
We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.
如果你帮助我们小孩学英语,我们将感激不尽。
54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.
我们永远都不会忘记在一起度过的日子。
55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.
很多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性了。
56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.
报告将在10月12日3:30在报告厅举行。
57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.
学生应该知道如何利用他们的时间。
58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.
我厌倦了日复一日地做一些例行公事。
59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.
征服英语不亚于征服一座高山,都需要决心,勇气和毅力。
60. I’m disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.
我对我们队在运动会上的表现感到失望。
61. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.
到目前为止,我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。
更多表示“决心”的高级句型:
I’m determined to…
I have made up my mind to complete the task.
62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.
这个城市位于长江畔。
63. I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
两星期前收到了你的来信,我真是太高兴了。
64. I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London.
我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。
65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
最近,我们班展了开一场讨论,是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。
66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.
我不知道你是否方便多告诉我一些有关旅行的事。
67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.
可以肯定,如果开车的人少一些,空气污染就一定会减少。
68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.
我个人认为教师是世界上最重要的职业。
69. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.
我们无法想象没有纯净的水,这个世界会变成生么样子。
70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
当我沿着公园路往东走的时候,有一个老人在街的另一边从公园里走出来。
71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.
在大城市,有更多的学校和医院供人们使用。
72. Some people think that we should read extensively.
有一些人认为,我们应该有选择性地阅读。
73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.
在我看来,你结束留学后应该回国。
74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.
另一个原因,我认为你回国可以更方便地照顾你日渐年迈的父母。
75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.
我们学校通常下午四点下课。
76. I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend tomorrow’s lecture on American history.
我很抱歉,明天我不能参加那场关于美国历史的演讲。
77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
花在教育锻炼上的时间是25分钟,只有12分钟的时间用来做家务。
78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.
你可能忘了昨天下午你花钱买了其他东西。
79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.
好习惯是成功的捷径。
80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
那个年轻的小男孩深深地感动着我,因为我相信雷锋一直活在我们的心中。
81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.
很多新的楼房建了起来,路也都拓宽了。
82. It is more than ten months since we last met.
从我们上次见面到现在已经有十个多月了。
83. It’s very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.
每天帮助我复习功课,你真是太好了。
84. Nothing can live without air and water.
没有空气和水,任何东西都不能生存。
85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.
我宁愿住在农村,而不愿住在城市。
86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.
应阻止人们往河里扔脏东西。
87. Peter sets aside some money every month so that he can buy a new car.
彼得每月留出一点钱以便购买一辆新汽车。
88. Linda didn’t go to bed until midnight so that she could finish reading the book.
为了看完这本书,琳达直到午夜才睡。
89. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.
早睡早起有益于健康。
90. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.
越来越多的人意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。
91. Mrs. Brown is an Australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of China.
布朗女士是一个澳大利亚的老师,她有一头金黄色的头发和一双蓝色的眼睛,她去过中国的各个地方。
92. On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years.
5月8日,星期天,我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。
93. I think students should balance well between work and study.
我认为学生应该平衡好工作和学习两方面。
94. Friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.
在我们的生命中,友谊其中的一种非常珍贵的感情。
95. It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
不言而喻,青春一去不复返。
96. Last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.
最后而又很重要的一点,它必定给市民带来福利。
97. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.
随着日益迅速的经济发展,更多的问题受到我们的关注。
98. The preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern
保护森林引发人们的广泛关注.
99. As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that…
就我而言,我赞同…的观点
100. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.
不仅仅是为了我们,更是为了我们的后代,政府和普通市民应该联合起来,使这个世界变成更美好的家园。
篇14:大学基础英语写作诀窍
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+ 加入清单写作是英语的第二大重头戏,仅次于阅读。但是这部分又经常被考生忽略,考前不动手,依赖临考模板,很难写出高分作文。下面是小编为大家整理的大学基础英语写作诀窍,欢迎阅读。
1、灵活改变句子开头
在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。
- You can do it well only in this way.→ Only in this way can you do it well.
只有这样你才能把它做好。
- A young woman sat by the window.→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女
2、避免重复使用词语
为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
- I like reading while my brother likes watching television.→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。
3、合理使用省略句
合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。
- He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要 是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?
- If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.
如果天气好,我们就去;如果天气不好,我们就不去了。
- She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。
4、运用非谓语结构
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。
- When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。
- As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。
5、结合使用长、短句
在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
-At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。
6、使用短语代替单词
使用短语代替单词。
- He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已决定长大了当老师。
- He doesnt like music.→ He doesnt care much for music.
他不大喜欢音乐。
- He told me that the question was now under discussion.→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.
他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。
7、套用某些固定表达
套用某些固定表达
- He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
- The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。
- Your son is old. He can look after himself now.→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。
8、使用地道英语
使用地道英语
- Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.
别担心,大胆试一试,你很快就会学会的。
-Thank you for playing with us.→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
谢谢你陪我玩。
9、综合使用“高级”结构
综合使用“高级”结构
- We had to stand there to catch the offender.→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.
我们所能做的只是站在那儿,设法抓住违章者。
- If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.
如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话,至少也不会比她老师的差。
10、引用名言警句点缀
在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。
- As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.- There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.- In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”
篇15:英语作文写作范例之我的班主任
全文共 958 字
+ 加入清单题目:请以“My Class Teacher”为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。
My Class Teacher我的班主任
My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years.我的班主任是王老师,他是一个要求严格而亲切的老师。他已经教了我们两年语文。
He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." I think he is a good class teacher.他总是告诉我们要好好学习,但不是时时刻刻学习。有时他会和我们一起玩。他说:“只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。” 我觉得他是个很好的班主任。
点评:这篇文章取材的是身边熟悉的人,作者也有东西可写,更具有可读性。另外,写人时把主语稍作调整,读起来轻松多了。
I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is [ename]Cherry[/ename]. Now I am studying in the middle school. I want to be an actress because I think it is a funny and exciting job...
写人的常见句式如:
This is my friend, Mary.
She is... years old.
She is a teacher/ an artist/ a singer...
She/ He gets up at 6/5... / early/ late.
She/ He has sports at school.
She/ He likes...
She/ He is strong/ fat/ slim/ kind/ thin/...
She/ He looks like...
She/ He is good at English/ maths/ Chinese/ physics...
篇16:高考优秀英语邀请函:摄影展
全文共 997 字
+ 加入清单导语:忙绿的高考已经结束了,全国各地高考英语满分作文也相继出来了,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文:Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to .
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Lihua
【参考译文】
我们学校摄影俱乐部将举办国际高中学生摄影展。主题的展示是环保。它将从6月15日开始,持续三周。有兴趣的学生参加。我知道你拍了好的照片,你总是想做一些环保的事。我记得你告诉我,你上一次主题的一些照片visitedour学校。这无疑是一个很好的机会让更多的人看到他们。如果你想加入,你可以发送你的照片。
希望不久能收到你的来信。
篇17:高考英语作文热门话题:网络用语
全文共 1260 字
+ 加入清单导语:在我看来,生活在信息时代,如果我们不知道互联网语言,我们似乎落后于时代。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
目前,一些诸如GG、MM、 Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行,并且出现在家庭作业报告,甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited (禁止)?”为题,根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文,并谈谈你自己的看法。
注意:
1. 短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100-120左右
Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited?
At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”, has become popular among the teenagers.
There are different opinions on Internet Slang. Some students think Internet Slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence. Besides, it makes chatting on the Internet quicker.
However, some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple. Also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people. The words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.
Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we don’t know the Internet Slang, we seem to fall behind the times. It will be OK as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.
【参考译文】
应该禁止网络语言吗?
目前,网络语言,如“GG,MM,夏咪”,在青少年中已经流行起来。
关于网络语言有不同的看法。一些学生认为网络俚语生动,时尚,充满幽默和智慧。此外,它使上网聊天更快。
然而,另一些学生认为网络语言缺乏思想深度,过于简单。此外,它是很难理解和不被大多数人接受。这些话有时会使人迷惑,甚至造成误解。
每件事情都有两面性。在我看来,生活在信息时代,如果我们不知道互联网语言,我们似乎落后于时代。只要这些术语在适当的场合正确使用,就可以了。
篇18:有关雾霾haze的高考英语作文
全文共 1953 字
+ 加入清单导语:近年来,雾霾天气已经成为日常生活的一个正确的在中国的很大一部分。人们不得不戴上口罩避免呼吸有毒空气。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Recently,Hazeweather has become a daily one right here in large part of China.People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air.So it is necessary to find out the reason why leads to that and work out the resolution.If we trace the cause for haze weather ,the main points are as follows ,first,china s air quality standards are rather lax and evaluation factors are limited,so you will see that current air appraisal system has defects.Second,some people just go for economic interests instead of turning out products according to relevant law and regulations.They tend to use obsolete equipment in which they are high likely to emit a great deal of wasted air.
Third,across our society ,relevant protection awareness has not built up so that people havent formed a habit of using green product and saving energy as much as possible.Just for the sake of convience to go out,people rely more and more on travelling and working by car while car is the main cause for the haze weather
To settle this problem,a series of meaures should be taken as follows.First ,we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate pollutants.Second,we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people s daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze.
【参考译文】
近年来,雾霾天气已经成为日常生活的一个正确的在中国的很大一部分。人们不得不戴上口罩避免呼吸有毒空气。因此有必要找出原因,导致和解决的决议。如果我们跟踪灰霾天气的成因,主要有以下几点,第一,中国的空气质量标准是相当宽松的评价因素是有限的,所以你会看到,目前的空气评估体系有缺陷。二,有些人只是为了经济利益而出的产品根据相关的法律法规。他们倾向于使用陈旧的设备,他们有很高的可能发出大量浪费的空气。
第三,在我们的社会中,相关的保护意识还没有建立起来,人们已经形成了习惯使用绿色产品和节能的尽可能多的。只是为了方便出门的缘故,人们越来越依赖于旅行和工作的汽车,而汽车是雾霾天气的主要原因
为了解决这个问题,应采取一系列措施如下:第一,我们应该加强空气监测的微粒污染物浓度降低。其次,我们应该制定更加严格的法律法规,不断完善我们现有的环境保护法律规范人们的日常行为和工业生产和惩罚那些工厂忽视保护和保持发射危险材料造成的阴霾。
篇19:5浙江卷高考创新
全文共 703 字
+ 加入清单除了做出一定的努力,要取得好的结果还需要必要的学习方法。与其死记硬背和机械地应用,我们应该找到一些合适的和创新的学习方法。创新不仅意味着改变,还包括超越。只有通过学习别人的技巧和消化差距,我们才能进一步创新和超越别人。
总有一些学生讨厌英语,但是当我们意识到英语的重要性时,学习英语是必要的,我们决心克服这个困难,我们必须尽最大努力投入我们的时间和精力,我们不愚蠢,我们有足够的智慧和大脑来消化和存储ABCD,其他人可以学习它,我们也可以学习它,不要走那些奇怪的和长的单词,而是想一些小窍门。
家庭经常被同学拼错,这样我们就可以展示我们足够的智慧。因为我们是一家人,所以我们可以说父亲母亲你的父亲通常取前两个字母,其他的取第一个,这样一个单词就不会在我们的记忆中消失。“国际米兰”这个词曾经让我头疼,但是当我找到这个技能时,它并不真的很难。使用单词切分,例如in+tere+s+ting,我们想象人们根据发音将蜻蜓吹死。当然,非常有趣!这样,所有的发音单词都会被记住。
如果你想学好数学,你还必须找到某种方法。对于那些做数学的人来说,不可避免地会做错误的问题。如果有错误,你可以进步。因此,你必须做好修改和收集错误问题的工作,这是一个好方法。但是不要把它当成一项任务。重做错误的问题是一个修改的过程。此外,错误习题集的另一个优点是,它们为将来的复习提供了重要的内容,这可以节省时间,希望我们能养成做错误习题集的好习惯。但有时我们会忘记我们做过的一些问题。这时,我们准备一个笔记本,写下典型的问题,当我们遇到它们时,把它们放在一起。这样,我们就不会忘记它们并方便地复习它们。
学会不断创新,这样我们才有机会超越他人。
篇20:高考英语作文TheValueofTime
全文共 4464 字
+ 加入清单Nobody knows what time is like, for we cannot see it, nor can we touch it.
没有人知道时间是什么样的,因为我们看不见它,也不能碰它。
Time is abstract, which we can only imagine in our mind.
时间是抽象的,我们只能想象在我们心中。
But we do know that time passes very quickly. Some students, however, do not know the value of time, nor do they know how to make the best use of it, for they waste it in going to films, playing games and doing other useless things.Why do we go to school early in the morning? Why do trains run so fast? Why do most people prefer taking buses instead of walking? The answer is very simple: we wish to save time because time is precious.
但我们知道时间过得很快。一些学生,但是,不知道时间的价值,他们也不知道如何充分利用它,因为他们浪费在电影,玩游戏和做其他无用的东西。为什么我们去学校早在早晨?为什么火车跑这么快?为什么大多数人喜欢坐公交车而不是步行?答案很简单:我们希望节省时间,因为时间是宝贵的。
Today we are living in the twentieth century. We know that time is life.
今天我们生活在第二十个世纪。我们知道时间就是生命。
When a person dies, his time has ended.Since life is short, we must devote our time and energy to our studies so that we may be able to serve our country and the people. But since time is invisible, we often neglect it. Lazinss. is the thief of time, for lasiness not only brings us a lot of harm, it also brings us failure. If it is necessary for us to do some work today, let us do it today and not leave it until tomorrow. Remember that time is more valuable than money.
当一个人死了,他的时间已经结束了,因为生命是短暂的,我们必须把时间和精力投入到学习中去,这样我们就可以为我们的国家和人民服务。但由于时间是无形的,我们经常忽视它。懒惰。是时间的盗贼,它不但给我们带来许多危害,也会使我们失败。如果我们今天做些工作是必要的,我们今天就把它做,而不是把它留到明天。记住时间比金钱更宝贵。
英语口语考试必要吗?Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
六级作文题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The first sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and bas your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1. 很多认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是......
2. 也有人持不同意见,......
3. 我的看法和打算
Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).
时间胶囊 Time capsule
Everyone dreams about the future. I also have a dream about my life in 20 years. I will live in Shanghai with my family because we like it very much. It will be more beautiful. I will teach in a middle school. I will be a good English teacher. I will love my students, and my students will love me, too. We will be good friends. I will do sports with my students every day. Swimming and running will be my favorite sports. I will be healthy and strong. There will be more robots everywhere. They will help us do many things. I believe we will have more time to study and play. This is my future dream. What do you think of it?
每个人对未来的梦想。我也有一个梦想,我的生活在20年。我将和我的家人住在上海,因为我们非常喜欢它。它将更加美丽。我将在一所中学教书。我将成为一个好的英语老师。我会喜欢我的学生,我的学生也会喜欢我的。我们会成为好朋友。我每天都会和我的学生做运动。游泳和跑步是我最喜欢的运动。我将是健康的和强大的。到处都会有更多的机器人。他们会帮助我们做很多事情。我相信我们会有更多的时间去学习和玩耍。这是我未来的梦想。你觉得怎么样?
世界上最重要的东西是什么呢 What is the most important thing in the world.
The Most Important Thing in the World
Directions:
A)Title:The Most Important Thing in the World
B)提示:有人认为,世界上最重要的东西是“钱”。许多人不同意这个看法。
请就这个问题谈谈你的意见。
C)Time limit:30minutes
D)Word limit:150~200words
E)Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet.
The Most Important Thing in the World
世界上最重要的事情
In my opinion,the most important thing in the world is TIME.However long one may live,his life consists of a certain number of years,and a year has only12months,a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour,you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.
在我看来,最重要的是时间。只要一个人活了,他的生活是由若干年,一年有only12months,一month30days一day24hours。一旦你浪费一小时,你不能拿回来,不管你会付多少钱。
Even though you are the richest person in the world,you can not afford to waste your time,because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world,one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.
即使你是世界上最富有的人,你不能浪费你的时间,因为这意味着你在浪费你的生命。即使你是世界上最强大的人,一个小时has60minutes你就像每个人挣扎在社会底层的人。
Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion,if you have enough money,you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question:Can you buy time?
有些人认为世界上最重要的是金钱,在他们看来,如果你有足够的钱,你会拥有你想要的一切,我想问他们一个简单的问题:你能买时间吗?
The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency,you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.
我们可以争取更多的时间是效率,如果你工作效率很高,你可以在一段时间内做更多的工作,而不是其他人。
Warm flowers 温暖的花