中考英语梦想作文【热门20篇】

When you do your homework, you will worry because of the sitting position is not correct hurt eyes? Will you still racking their brains for difficult problem? You will also because of the changing seasons affect the rate of you doing your homework?

Inventing the future by my desk right now. The above problems one by one.

The desk of the future is an "eye" experts, whenever we do homework done an hour later, it will be the team into a large forest, make you full of beautiful things in the green. It will also help you to do eye exercises, deserve to go up again the elegant soothing music, let your eyes get sufficient rest.

The desk of the future is also a "teacher" experts, desk when you encounter problems like long mouth to teach you the right way, and can extrapolate, until you understand.

When the hot summer, do you think the whole body sweat? When the cold winter, you will feel the hand shivering, leading to write crooked, greatly slow down the speed of doing his homework? Dont be afraid, I invented book early table is a "temperature", it can be based on the change of season, and the surrounding environment to regulate the temperature. Let you in a most comfortable environment to learn happily.

I know good dream is need people to use the actual action to turn it into reality, let us work together to learn science and culture, and use our wisdom to realize our dream in the future.

当你做作业时，你还会因为坐姿不正确伤到眼睛而烦恼吗?你还会因为碰到难题而绞尽脑汁吗?你还会因为季节的变换而影响你做作业的速度吗?

现在就由我来发明未来的书桌。将上面的烦恼一一解除。

未来的书桌是一个“护眼”专家，每当我们做作业做了一个小时之后，它就会自支变成一片大森林，使你琳琅满目的绿色。它还会帮你做眼保健操，再配上高雅舒缓的音乐，让你的眼睛得到充分的休息。

未来的书桌也是一名“教师”专家，当你碰到难题的时候书桌就像长了嘴巴一样来教你正确的方法，而且还会举一反三，直到你弄懂为止。

当炎热的夏天，你是否觉得全身冒汗?当寒冷的冬天，你是否觉得手会颤颤发抖，从而导致写字的歪歪扭扭，做作业的速度大大地减慢?不用怕，我发明的书早桌是一个“调温”高手，它可以根据季节的变化，和周围的环境来调节温度。让你在一个最舒适的环境下愉快地学习。

我知道美好的梦想是需要人们用实际行动把它变成现实的，那就让我们一起努力学习科学文化吧，将来用我们的智慧来实现我们的梦想。

Mrs Wang decided to make a trip to Beijing.When she told her son about her decision,he was so overjoyed that he jumped up.They began to pack their luggage.When the day came,the son became worried,for noboday would take care of his flowers.They would die if they were not watered.Suddenly a good idea came to his mind. "Mum",he said to his mother, "we can use a piece of cloth to take care of the flowers". He showed her mother what he meant by putting one end of the cloth into the basin, full of water,and the other end into the flower pot.

Three days later,when they came back from Beijing, the flowers were still alive and even started to bloom.

导语：每个人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality.

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当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一，我们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

梦想是灯塔，指引船舶航行的方向;梦想是曙光，照亮夜行者的路梦想是沙漠中的一眼甘泉，让干枯的行者看到生的希望;梦想是石，敲出星星之火;梦想是火，点燃熄灭的灯;梦想是灯，照亮夜行的路;梦想是路，引领走向黎明。

我的梦想是成为一名科学家，成为一个对国家有贡献的人，每当我看到电视上播出新闻——某某科学家发明了一种神奇的药水;某某科学家成功制造出新式仪器，我就兴奋不已，盼着自己也有一天能够像他们一样，为人类作出贡献。

我会制造出一种可以放出冷、热两用的机器，在炎热的夏天可以把热气吸进机器里，这样夏天就不觉得炎热，在寒冷的冬天会把冷气收集到机器里，冬天不会觉得寒冷。利用这种机器，既改善了我们的生活环境，又能节约能源。

然而，要想成为一位举世闻名的科学家也不是一件容易的事：大名鼎鼎的发明家托马斯阿尔瓦爱迪生发明电灯泡的时候，先后试用过上千种材料作灯丝，可是都没有成功。面对他人的嘲笑，他却笑着说：“我并没有失败，因为我知道了很多种材料不适合做灯丝。”他那自信、乐观的精神激励了我，并使我了解到：自信使人勇敢、自信使人有克服困难的勇气和自强不息的力量、自信能使人发挥自己的潜能、自信是幸福的源泉……

科学家们的坚持不懈、百折不挠的精神深深感动了我，所以我要像他们一样!也许实现理想的道路上也许会布满荆棘，刺痛我们的手脚;也许会有许多艰辛，会让我们流下不少泪和汗。但我们还是一定要执著地走下去，因为只有有了这些努力，我们的生活才会更加丰富多彩，我们的理想也才会更加光彩夺目。

从小，我们都都一个们想医生、科学家、航天员、歌手、演员等等。而随着年龄的增长慢慢的就忘记了那个最初的梦想觉得什么狗屁梦想，全他妈的扯淡。

梦想是美好的，但是现实是残酷的，因此我们要坚持我们那个最初的梦想要为我们的梦想而努力。

现在，我在初三，每天还是那个昏昏的样子，我想要拟补我以前没有好好学习而错过的美好时光，以前的我学习并不好，考试在倒数之列。我现在认识到了我的过失想要好好学习，不辜负父母、爷爷、奶奶还有姐姐的希望考上一个好的大学，但是到了初三老师所讲的我一概不懂，所以我要考上高中就必须比别人付出的努力要多上10倍、100倍虽然这真的很累，但是我不想我人生中第一个转折点就这样失败，如果我要是考不上高中，那么我的知识就没有人懂的那么多，要想比别人更出彩就比别人更艰难。

记得前几天历史老师讲：“学历那么高都是给赚钱的，你赚的越多老板赚的越多，所以我们不应该只是学习，更多的是实践。老板那一类人大多数都是高中文凭，如果太低学到的知识有限必然不会成大器，而那些学历太高的人大多只是知道学习的bookworm，不知道怎么创业只要没有人领导就不知道怎么走。但我不同我在的学校是我们全县最垃圾的学校在这里想要考上高中而且是我这种倒数第一的存在要想考上高中是是有多么的艰难，而我也后悔自己我什么当初为什么没有好好学习，现在想起来真是气自己怎么那么的无知。

不过后悔虽然后悔，但是那已经过去了，再怎么后悔也没有用。最好的办法就是好好学习，考上高中，这是我最想的一件事，我一想起来我考不上高中那我的父母、爷爷还有奶奶姐姐是有多么的失望我就想掉眼泪，他们对我的希望就这样破灭，就对自己怎么那么不争气而气自己。

还有我们这里有一个叫政治的老师很让我气愤，她吧是一个叫政治的老师她要是交其它的我们就不说什么了，但她是交政治的，怎么能开口骂人呢，完全不当自己是一个交政治的老师，她有什么资格交政治啊!她不但不知道以身作则还骂人，这叫我们怎么能够容忍。

唉，可惜啊我有史以来觉得交的最好的政治老师还是交我初二的尚蓝蓝老师，她罢，就是很好的那种，就是很好的那种(我表达能力不好)

对了，想起来那天看的《那些年，我们一起追过的女孩》中男一号有一句很赞的一句话：世界以为我而有一点小小的改变(大体就这个意思)也是，如果这个世界以为我而有了一点小小的改变那么应该也就无憾了，当然不是那种负面的。

我呢，我想应该是时候好好学习了，也就冲着这个世界因为我而有一点小小的改变而努力了，虽然可能考不上高中，但是毕竟努力了，如果考不上就当老天给我开了一个小小的玩笑吧!

A great man said: "forget the past means betrayal!" Let usmove along the time tunnel, to feel this extraordinary history.

Since the founding of the people in every field, China hasmade great progress.

In agriculture, the father of hybrid rice in China famous yuanlongping, produced the planting, has many advantages such as highyield of rice, grain yield was obviously improved, now China notonly, and still can self-sufficiency in grain output a lot fromabroad. Also, that the Chinese are called "agricultural country",not fictitious.

In the military, on November 5, 1960, the first missile soaredinto the sky, 16 October 1946, spectacular RuYun sing to the sky,in Chinas rising rob from the atomic bomb has its own, Founding 50years, we also daqing to show the world our armed forcesmodernization of weapons and equipment. These are proved ourmilitary technology weaponry and equipment has greatlydeveloped.

In science and technology, shenzhou 6 manned spacecraftsuccessfully developed is a good example.

Students, we are happy new generation, also have importantresponsibility of the new generation. Our today determines therevival of the Chinese nation tomorrow. Let us of carrying forwardthe national spirit, the XiongHun. "Far, BuPaLei, inquisitive a"spirit, knowledge, skills, and strong physique, practice spirit ofpatriotism, trees, country and ready: for our great motherlandspeace and development.

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导语：我们每个人都有梦想，但如何使我们的梦想成真呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Dream is like a star in the sky,it shows the direction in the night.

every one of us has dreams,but how to make our dream come true?I think there are 3 ways to make our dreams come true.

first,never give up your dream.you should always do the things which will help you to make your dream come true.

second,keeping reading books every day.Books help us to know what we did is right and what wrong.

finally,be confident.every one should be confident in daily life,especially when faced with difficulties.

Dream ,the most beautiful word in the world.let work hard to achieve our dreams from now.

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梦就像天空中的一颗星，它在黑夜里指明了方向。

我们每个人都有梦想，但如何使我们的梦想成真?我认为有3种方法可以让我们的梦想成真。

第一，永远不要放弃你的梦想。要做这将帮助你实现你的梦想的东西。

第二，每天坚持读书，书帮助我们知道我们做的是对的，什么是错的。

最后，是一个confident.every日常生活应充满信心，特别是当面对困难。

在梦中，让努力工作从现在开始实现我们的梦想的最美丽的词语。

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

韩梅是我最好的朋友，我们从出生开始就彼此认识了。因为我们是双胞胎。她是我的姐姐。就像很多的双胞胎姐妹一样，我们长得几乎一模一样。最容易区分我们两个的方法是她在手臂上有一个伤疤。那都是我的错。在我们六岁的时候我们在楼梯旁边玩之后我们不小心把她推下楼梯。她受伤了，但是一点都没有怪我。这就是她的伤疤的来历。自从那时候起，我们的父母总是通过那个伤疤来区分我们。韩梅在学习上比我好。所以有时候我考试不及格被妈妈批评，她就会挡住那个标志冒充我去接受批评。我很感激她。所以有时候我也会冒充她去帮她参加钢琴课，因为她对钢琴一点都不感兴趣。玩这样的游戏真的是太有趣了。

When I was a younger, I used to dream aboutbecoming a fireman.I thought wow, wouldn’t it be great to ride around,and help people put out fires.

As I got older, I want to be like my father.He taught in a university, and I always look up him.So thats what I became a teacher.

My father and I have different styles, as do all teachers.And were both teachers and Im happy.In many ways, I feel that Im living my dream, I am luck.Sometimes the dreams weve when were younger,well, life may push it in another direction.And at last we actively pursue our dreams we have to adjust.

After all, your dream wont often pursue you,you have to cherish your dream and make it come true.Perhaps compromising a little is good, perhaps it matters to try different things.

We have to go through that positive limitations.For example, I tried to be a salesman, and I tried to be an invent manager.Finally I found the place I can grow is help others.Everyone has a dream, the question is can you make yours reality!

Talk about it:Are you living your dream?Do you have a dream to do something? What is it?What steps need be taken to achieve that dream?Would you ever quit everything to pursue your dream?

How hard it will be to change your mind to pursue your dream?What do you think of people who do this?Do you ever regret not following your dream?What stops people from pursuing their dreams?

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

Hello,Everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week. These days,Li Jia,our classmate,has kept practising spoken English hard with the teachers help. On Wednesday afternoon,she won the first prizein the English speech contest. How exciting it is!We should learn from her. Yesterday,we donated 200 books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan. He Li alone donated 500 yuan,the most of all. Thats good. I think that as a student,we neednt care how much we should give. Showing our love is the most important.

Thats all,thank you!

Pollution around us

In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. Its very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .

我们周围的污染

近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是，我们的环境越来越糟。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在很多人都有空调和汽车，他们生产的（出）废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在地球（只留下沙）。我们经常看到工厂把废水倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水的城市。现在我们有危险。这是非常必要和重要的保护好环境。我想，如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境，世界将变得更加美丽，我们的生活会越来越好。

You are writing a complaint to the manager about the hotel.

题目：你向饭店经理写信投诉酒店服务。

(以e-mail的形式出现)

On the whole, my stay here was satisfactory. The hotel was comfortable and the room was bright, but it was too dirty. Whats more the food was compeletely awful and the service was really terrible. I have stayed in your hotel for several times and everything is getting worse, though the price is fair.

总体而言，我在这边住得比较满意。酒店很舒服，房间也很明亮，但是太脏了。另外，这儿的食物太糟糕了，服务也很差。我已经在这里住过好几次了，虽然价钱还不错，但每件事都越来越糟糕。

Please try to clean the room a bit more often and find someone who is capable of cooking and who knows how to talk friendly to others.

请时常打扫一下房间，找个真正懂烹饪的和懂得跟别人和睦相处的员工!

本次英语考试以中考题型命题，加强对基础知识的考查，侧重考查学生综合运用语言的能力。命题材料贴近学生生活，难度适中。其中听力笔录要点和书面表达失分较多。我所教两个班级19班比20班在人平，及格率和优秀率方面稍高。

从本次考试所反映的现状来看，今后的教学中应注意：

1.加强单词听写和课文背诵的落实工作，多关注课文文本知识。

2.狠抓基础知识，加强写作训练。书面表达能客观地反映学生英语基础知识掌握情况，并且一直是学生的薄弱环节。

3.继续注重英语阅读教学。阅读理解在我们的各种测试中所占分值越来越大，而且选材也更趋广泛化。因此课堂教学中要侧重“篇章”，强调“含义”，将语篇教学贯穿于课文教学和阅读理解教学中，利用语篇教学扩大学生词汇量，增强语感，丰富文化知识，提高学生分析问题和解决问题的能力。

4.注重兴趣培养，慎防两极分化。从试卷分析中可以看出，每个学校都不同程度地出现了令人担忧的“两极分化”现象。初学阶段一定要注意激发培养学生的学习兴趣，关注学生的情感，营造宽松，民主、和谐的教学氛围，保护每个学生的自尊心和学习英语的积极性。只有这样，掉队的学生才会减少，也才可能大面积提高人平。

5.注重课堂“时效性 ”，在优化课堂组织教学、合理设计教学活动，加大训练强度和密度的基础上，注重因材施教、分层教学。既要使大多数学生掌握好基础的知识与技能，同时注重知识的扩展和规律性知识的总结与归纳，让好学生也能获得充分的发展。

6.加强听力训练，营造语言环境。课堂上一定要加强对学生的听力训练，坚持用英语组织教学，尽可能利用多种教学资源让学生接触地道的语音、语调，多听英、美人士的录音材料。

中考即将来临，英语作文一直在考试中占着重要的比例，想要英语成绩高分，作文是关键。下面小编给大家整理了一些往年的中考英语作文范文，欢迎大家进行学习参考。更多的优秀英语作文尽在学识网。

幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。

要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确， 字迹工整，80-100词。

范文

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents。

Everyone has dreams. Some want to be doctors. Some want to be scientists. Some want to be engineers. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. Because I’m good at talking to people. And I like the job. I would be nice to all my students. I would encourage them to be creative. I wouldn’t give them too much homework on weekends.Maybe I will be a manager. I would run a business and lead a team. I would work hard and make the company bigger and stronger. My teacher often says to us . “No matter what you will be ,you must work hard today”. The main thing is to know yourself and to choose the right path for you. Rich or poor, it doesn’t matter. Our biggest goal is to be happy. I think if we work hard ,our dreans will come true. We will have a good future.

My heart dont know how many times have such idea: to become a the excellent special-class teacher like grandma. Because whenever teachers day comes, see many, many from all directions, all classmates. I will not envy: if I am also a good special-class teacher it would be great!

In order to realize my ideal, Ill be the first to study hard and make progress, strive for to go to a good school. In the classroom, I like hunger, such as thirst in the ocean of knowledge to learn all kinds of knowledge, in the library, carefully looking at a book and a book. Do your homework at home, conscientious, steady groundwork, feet on the ground.

Although in real life Im just an ordinary primary school students, but in the dream, I have is an excellent superfine teacher. I have a dream: on the first day I came into the classroom, the students neat bunch of sitting, there are a bunch of beautiful flowers on the podium, also wearing a red note above, red note that read: "teacher, you are welcome." At this point I am extremely touched. Then I was in the mood to tell everyone about the lesson again. Finished class, the students to analyze, analysis is done I then asked: "did you understand?" The students said the 332 both understand and did not understand. I affectionately said: "dont understand, it doesnt matter, the teacher tell you again, as long as you listen to will understand." Play games together with students in their spare time, go outside and play with my classmates on Sunday, in the vast blue sky at school to more and better knowledge.

Im sure I this ideal will come true.

我的心里不知有过多少次这样的想法：成为一名和外婆一样的优秀特级教师。因为每当教师节来临时看到许许多多来自四面八方，五湖四海的同学祝福。我就不由地羡慕起来：如果我也是一位优秀特级教师该有多好呀!

为了实现我的理想，我首先要好好学习，不断进步，争取考上好学校。在教室里，我如饥如渴般在知识的海洋里吸取各种知识，在图书馆里，仔仔细细地看着一本又一本的书。在家里，认认真真写作业，稳打基础，脚踏实地不断进步。

虽然在现实生活中我只是一名普通的小学生，但在梦里，我已是一位优秀的特级教师了。我梦想着：我第一天走进教室时，同学们端端正正的坐着，讲台上放着一束美丽的鲜花，上面还系着一张红纸条，红纸条上写着：“老师，欢迎您。”此时我感动万分。接着我便怀着激动的心情给大家讲了一遍课。讲完课后，给同学们分析起来，分析完了我便问：“大家有没有听懂?”同学们三三两两地说懂了和没懂。我又亲切地说：“没听懂，没关系，老师再给你们讲一遍，只要大家认真听一定会听懂的。”在课余时间和同学们一起做游戏，在星期天和同学们一起去郊外玩，在广阔的蓝天下学到更多更好的知识。

我相信我这个理想一定会实现。

想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧，欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

Saturday My future XXX Everyone has a dream, me too. I want to be a computer programmer. This may be a different dream. There are some important reasons for me to choose this dream. First,this job is becoming more and more popular now. Almost everything needs IT, So many places needs computer programmer. It’s easier to find a job. Another reason is that this job can earn more money. Computer programmer’s salary is higher. However, the most important reason is that I am really interested in IT. I am good at Math and English. I sometimes make some small programmes for fun. would enjoy my job. I really love this. I →IT changed our life! But this is extremely hard and tired work. Many people have to work over 8 hours a day. They are called “Code farmer”. Well, there is no job relaxed, isn’t it? No matter what I will be in the future, I should work hard to make my dream be true. Let’s FIGHT FOR OUR DREAM!

梦想，是我们心中最美好的愿望，是我们前进的动力。有梦想的人生是光明的，是精彩的，而没有梦想的人生却是黑暗的，乏味的。 Dreams are the most beautiful wishes in our hearts and our motivation to move forward.Life with dreams is bright, wonderful, but life without dreams is dark and boring.

说实话，我到现在也没确定自己想飞去何方，因为我的梦想总是在随着年龄的增长而不断的变化，或许，我想做个十全十美的人吧!

现在，我有两个梦想，第一个是想当名数学家。我想成为数学家，可以说没有什么别的原因，只是在数学中，我体会到了学习的快乐。因为在上奥数课时，我听到老师的讲解，我感受到了快乐，感到自己的渺小，就如一个刚出生的婴儿，在数学浩瀚的天地中，努力去了解自己身边的数学知识，去一点一滴地积累。

在解决了一个个难题后，我会觉得无比轻松，无比畅快我总会把老师布置的奥数作业用心完成，即使有一两题不会做，我也会在老师、同学的帮助下努力去理解、去把握。当我每次在老师布置课堂作业后，第一个在同学们赞扬的目光中走上前交给老师查阅的时候;当老师批完后，用惊讶的眼神望着我，似乎在赞许我做得又对又快，我很开心，很自豪的时候;当我在老师肯定的目光下走上讲台为同学们讲解题目，我的心理会很紧张，但是在我讲解完后如释重负地吐一口气时，我会很快乐，很有成就感。

我的第二个梦想是想成就一位国际演讲家，拥有无数人的爱戴，自信而又自然地站在舞台上，在众目睽睽之下，用充满自信、充满激情的演讲“忽悠”听众。那时，我要“忽悠”那些濒临破产与咄咄逼人的金融危机斗争的企业家重新振奋起来，重新充满自信、充满激情地面对危机，用冷静的头脑一一分析并一一击破，用最自信的微笑告诉危机，你不会就此被它吓倒，你一定会重新站起来，比之前站得更高，走得更远;我会用言语告诉那些对任何不顺心的事情都抱怨的失败者，“心态决定一切，任何事情的发生都是伟大计划的一部分”。所以，从现在开始我一定要努力掌握各门知识。

让小小的梦想在我们心中萌发生长，让我们展开梦想的翅膀，飞到远方吧!我相信即使是最平凡、最不起眼的梦想，只要我们用一生的努力去追求它，它就一定会在我们心中开出一朵美丽的花。只有这样，你才能体会生活的意义，过的满足而安详。小心地对待你的梦想，因为一不小心它就会成为现实!

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse

★ 范文

Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.