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中考英语梦想作文(汇编20篇)

导语:您认识自己吗?您了解自己吗?也许您会想,怎么可能会不了解自己呢?那么,您知道您要的是什么的,人生的目标又是什么呢?下面我们一起来看看关于自己的满分作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴。

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我的梦想英语作文

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When the teacher needs to have abundant knowledge and enough patience, you also need to have a selfless love. Our teacher in charge teacher Chen has these. Whenever the students learning state is abnormal, she will talk with us in time. And during the summer and winter vacation or at ordinary times many times to come to visit, understand the students family situation, to communicate with their parents. To help students through individual learning situation.

Our teacher has enough knowledge. Every time we put forward a variety of problems, they can be easily answered. When we were puzzled, they very patient according to their own teaching experience, from our point of view, speaks bother to pass through.

My dream is to become a good teacher. To be a teacher because I think is happy. When you see my students leave school, on each post show of his own life; When saw them set up their own career success: when they have a harmonious family; When she saw her students in their respective field, pieces gain honor... It feels like to see their own orchard, fruit trees blossom, "plum full world" this is when the teacher happiness. This is the reason I determined to want to be a teacher.

In order to complete the dream, I want to be in a good learning at the same time, a lot of reading various books, increase his knowledge. And I want to participate all kinds of public welfare activities, and cultivate their patience and love. In order to this dream, I decided to start from now.

当老师需要具有丰富的学识和足够的耐心,还需要有无私的爱心。我们的班主任陈老师就拥有这些。每当同学们的学习状态出现异常,她会及时和我们谈心。并且在暑假和寒假期间或平时多次上门拜访,了解学生家庭情况,与家长沟通。帮助学生度过一个个学习难关。

我们的任课老师都具备足够的学识。每当我们提出各种各样的难题时,她们都能轻而易举的回答出来。当我们还是迷惑不解时,她们十分耐心的根据自己的教学经验,从我们的角度考虑,不厌其烦的讲通讲透为止。

我的梦想是当一名优秀的老师。因为我觉得当一名老师是幸福的。当看到自己的学生离开学校,在各个岗位上展现自己的人生;当看见他们成功的建立起自己的事业:当看见他们拥有和睦的家庭;当看见自己的学生在各自的赛场,获得一项项荣誉……这种感觉就像看见自家的果园里,一颗颗的果树开花结果,“桃李满天下”这就是当老师的幸福。这也是我立志想当老师的原因。

为了完成梦想,我要在好好学习的同时,大量的阅读各类书籍,增加自己的知识面。另外我要多多参加各类公益活动,培养自己的耐心和爱心。为了这个梦想,我决定从现在开始。

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篇1:梦想中考

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每个人都有自己的梦想,在我的心里也有一个梦想,它深深地埋藏着一颗孕育着我理想的种子,在我心底生根、发芽。

我们的童年充满了幸福;我们的童年充满了欢乐;我们的童年充满了对理想的追求。

我从小就有许多的梦想,比如:当一位救死扶伤的医生,当一个外交官,或者当一名教师。但我最喜欢的就是教师这个职业!

教师是一个非常神圣而又受人尊敬的职业。罗国杰曾说过这样一句话:“教师就像一只蜡烛,不断地燃烧、消耗着自己,照亮别人前进的道路;又像一根粉笔,散播着智慧的种子,把知识传授给别人,而渐渐的磨损着自己;又像一只梯子,让人踩着自己的肩膀攀上高峰,去采摘胜利的果实。”尽管当教师是很辛苦的,可是每当学生在各个方面有了成绩时,都会感到十分欣慰、高兴。

我为什么想当教师哪?

原因是:老师说什么就是什么,我全都听老师的,没有半点违抗的意思,总觉得老师是对的,我那个时候想当老师,或许是看上老师的威风了吧。当我长大一点儿的时候,我就发现其实老师并不是那么神圣,也有一些缺点,有时也会犯错,但我仍然坚定地认为,当老师绝对行。在大一点儿的时候,我明白了更多,懂得了一些事理,知道了老师只不过是一个普通人。老师就好像一杯水,杯子里的水是老师的学识,老师教给我们的只有一滴水,而知识无穷无尽,要靠自己探索,所以老师教给我们的是方法。我此刻还认为老师是伟大的,我还是要朝着这个方向前进。这就是我想当教师的原因。

所以,我要好好学习,学习更多的知识,朝着我这个“教师之梦”而努力、加油了!

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篇2:学会放松自己中考英语作文

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中招考试即将到来,许多学生感到压力很大,为此很烦恼。你校的校刊特意进行了课后放松方式的调查。请你以”Learn to relax yourself “为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示:

1)学生压力大及其表现

2)学会放松很重要

3)常见的放松方式

4)最适合的自我放松方式

5)我的建议

Learn to relax yourself

Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.

It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favourite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after a good rest.

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学会放松自己

现在许多9年级的学生压力太大。上课时他们总是觉得太累了以至于不能认真听老师讲课。

对学生来说放松是很重要的。只有这样他们才能学习健康。这里有一些不同的方法来放松自己。例如,他们可以尝试有足够的睡眠,或者他们可以听他们喜欢的音乐课后。他们也可以读一些书或做一些运动。对我来说,我经常和朋友们出去玩。

当你在学习的时候,不要忘记放松。好好休息后你会学得更好。

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篇3:中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析

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俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功,必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动,偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊,所以出现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致,包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识,他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要。例:

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累,所以考生应该从平时练习出发,每天坚持写英语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析

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I have a dream that is to become an English teacher when I grow up. Because being an English teacher, I can influence lots of students. They can not only learn language but also know what is right from wrong. Besides, I can learn from my students and I will always feel young to be with my students. Whats more, I will have lots of free time to do whatever I like, such as traveling, reading, retraining and so on.

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If you start preparing for the exams ahead, you’ll feel a lot better about getting everything accomplished.

Here are some ways to help you prepare your mind and body for a successful final exam season:

First,you should focus your time on difficult classes.

If you always do well in a course,then you obviously don’t need to spend as much time studying for that course.You should spend most of your study time on the difficult courses where your grade is borderline.

Second,spending time reviewing notes is also necessary.

By simply going over all your class notes, you’ll get a good overview of the specific areas you should start studying. This will also provide your mind with a good summary of everything you’ve been learning

Besides,you can design a study schedule and stick to It.

By setting aside time now to focus on the final exam, you’re preparing your mind for what’s ahead. And you’ll also find areas that you have questions about. This will provide you plenty of time to get answers from your professors.

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导语:每个人都来自不一样的地方,而这个地方就是家乡,你会怎么跟大家介绍你的家乡呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关作文素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

My hometown is a beautiful place, it is in the countryside, because it is far away from the city, so the environment is very natural. The water is very clean, I can even see the fish and the mountain has many green trees. But I like the morning best, because the air is very fresh and there are voices from nature. The frogs and other animals always are calling in the morning, I like listening to their voices, they sound like the songs for me. What’s more, the fog makes the country look like the wonderland, I will never know who will come to me until it is close to me, I like this mysterious feeling.

我的家乡是个美丽的地方,它在乡村,由于它远离城市,因此那里的环境很自然。水很清澈,我几乎能看到鱼,山上有很多绿油油的树。但是我最喜欢早上的时候,因为空气很清新,还有很多来自大自然的声音。青蛙和其它动物总是在早上叫,我喜欢听到他们的声音,听起来像在为我歌唱。而且,雾气让整个乡村看起来像仙境一样,我永远都不知道谁向我走来直到它走进我,我喜欢这样神秘的感觉。

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Winter has gone,and spring is coming on .

Watching the ice melting,I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter. A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance .It is a feast for our eyes and souls. The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring .

Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine,enjoying the beautiful scenery,listening to the wonderful music,drinking the new tea,my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire. Spring is the most fantastic season in the year .It means so much to the other three seasons.

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导语:请以学生会文体部的名义为一场篮球友谊赛写一份海报,下面是yuwenmi小编为还在备考的同学整理的优秀英语素材,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

海报是一种带有装饰性的宣传广告。有时配以绘画图案。内容以影讯、展览、演出信息、友谊赛等为主。为了尽可能使更多的人知道,海报往往贴在醒目之处。

看例文:

请以学生会文体部的名义为一场篮球友谊赛写一份海报,内容如下:

1. 参加者:美国北地中学校队和我校校队

2. 地点:水泥球场

3. 时间:2005年11月20日(星期天)下午4点

4. 组织者:我院学生会文体部

5. 海报发出时间:20XX年11月14日

POSTER

Friendly Basketball Match

Under the auspices of the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students Union of our school,a friendly basketball watch will be held between the visiting U.S.Northfield Team and ours on the cement basketball count on Sunday, November20th 2005 at 4:00 p.m.

the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students Union

November14th 20XX

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篇9:初二我的梦想英语作文

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What will our world be like in x yearsI can’t imagine. It must change a lot. If I meet myself who comes from the future, I will ask her whether my dream comes true or not.

My dream is to become an excellent interpreter. When I was in Grade 1, I began to study English. At that time, I was so excited for learning a new language. Because of English, I know that America is a beautiful and polite country. From then on, I hope I can speak English very well and have chance travel to America some day.

Nowadays, English is widely spoken throughout the world. What’s more, plenty of people have realized its importance. In order to make my dream come true, I try my best and work much harder. I start to watch America drama to practice my English. And I also read some English books now. I talk with others to practice my oral English as possible as I can. But the path to the success isn’t smooth. Sometimes I want to give up. But it’s my dream, I can’t give up easily. Shelley said” if winter comes, can spring be far behind”

On the other hand, with the development of China, more and more people are interested in our culture. Some enjoy Beijing Opera, some study Chinese Kongfu, some even learn to speak Chinese, etc. As a Chinese, of course I will help them to know more about Chinese culture. I want to be an envoy of cultural exchange between China and America. So if I am an interpreter, I will introduce China to the world. I believe if I work hard enough, my dream will come true.

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篇10:2024年中考关于代沟英语作文

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Nowadays, there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date, while parents can’t approve of what their children say and do. Thus, a big generation gap is formed.

如今,往往是缺乏了解父母与子女之间。孩子们总是抱怨他们的父母都是过时的,而父母并不赞同他们的孩子说的和做的。因此,形成一个大的代沟

The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends, select their own classes in school, plan their own future, earn and spend their own money, and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also, young children wish to be understood by their parents, but most parents don’t quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school. Therefore, misunderstanding often arise from parents’ tendency to interfere in children’s daily activities.

产生代沟的原因有很多。孩子们想要自由的选择自己的朋友,选择在学校自己的班级,规划自己的未来,自己挣钱自己花,和一般运行自己的更独立的生活方式比父母允许的。同时,年轻的孩子们希望能够得到父母的,但大多数父母不太了解他们的孩子。他们认为这是他们教他们的后代的传统信仰的责任。他们想让他们听话,在学校做得很好。因此,误解往往从父母倾向于干涉孩子的日常活动。

In my opinion, most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.

在我看来,父母和子女间的代沟问题可以通过双方的共同努力,增进相互理解的解决。

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篇11:2024年中考英语作文万能模板汇总:图表式

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As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____。 From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________。

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______。 On the one hand, ________。 On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________。 In addition, ________ is responsible for _______。 Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________。 But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______。 I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

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篇12:以梦想为主题的中考作文600字

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追梦!追梦!追梦!每个人都有一个梦想。可有些人一旦发现前方是个梦境,就会停止追梦的步伐。就算前方亦是个梦,我也决不停止我的步伐,我会努力地把梦变成现实。 dreaming! Dreams chase! Everyone has a dream.But once some people find a dream ahead, they will stop the pace of dreaming.Even if it is a dream ahead, I will never stop my pace, and I will try to turn dreams into reality.

题记

我喜欢摄影,喜欢拍摄这世间一切美好的事物和人;也喜欢旅行,我希望各个地方都能留下我的足迹你猜对了,我的梦醒就是背着背包,挂着单反相机去云游四方。

“原谅我一生放荡不羁,爱自由。”从小我就有一颗流浪的心,就像一朵花拼命地想要汲取养分。

我想到彼得。梅尔笔下的普罗旺斯,亲自体验一下那种远离喧嚣的宁静美好的生活,如陶渊明的“采菊东篱下,悠然见南山”的悠闲舒适,想看看一大片薰衣草在阳关照拂下的美好。我想去丽江,想去感受一下这个被众人誉为”疗伤圣地“的古色古香和民族特色,更重要的是要到玉龙雪山上看一米阳光(不知是否真的有一米阳光,看电视有看过。很美)。

我想去草原,躺在草原上,感受来自大自然的抚摸,看那蝴蝶在空中振翅飞舞着,鸟儿也应景地唱起了歌,羊儿咩咩叫,牧羊人赶着牛羊群,热情地唱起了歌。那一定是幅和谐美好的大自然画面。我想去。我想去的地方还有很多很多,我希望有生之年都能去一遍。

对于我来说,旅行的意义是丰富人生经验,民族文化和放松自己的身心和心灵。“要想有世界观就先要观世界”这句话说得不无道理。只有在不断探索和行走的过程中,你才能更好地开阔自己的视野,认识到更多的东西,不同的人不同的生活方式和处世方式。董其昌也曾说过“读万卷书,行万里路”,读书和行走劳逸结合才能更好地把我们所学的知识学以致用。

人可怕的不是梦想破灭,最可怕的是空有一颗做梦的心,却没有一颗为梦想努力拼搏的心。

后记:亲爱的,别怕你的前方只是个梦境,谁都不能阻挡我们激情澎湃的心。因为梦想,我们的`生活才如此美好,所以,勇敢地去追你的梦吧。只有你不放弃,总有一天它会变成现实。

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篇13:我的梦想英语词及翻译

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I have a dream, a very different dream, that is when a boss.

Though I admire actors of colorful, star of the ten thousand people, but I prefer the bosss commanding feeling.

I admire Bill Gates, so I determined to be a boss like that, when a everyone respected, I want to make a lot of money, let mom and dad for me proud.

Words and not of deeds is not, of course, in the past of the old days, as long as you dare to struggle, dare to rush, to dare to fight, is likely to be successful, but now not line, what matter all must have the knowledge, without knowledge is difficult, so I must study hard from now on, day day up, fighting for my goal, so you can be successful.

In order to achieve my goal, in addition to knowledge, also need courage, because I ordered this goal, I have from the timid before I become brave. Once, when shopping at the mall, I had become separated from his mother, if before, I will be scared to cry, but this time, I walked to the front desk, consumedly square square to call the waiter aunt for me to put a broadcasting station, indeed as expected to find his mother.

In order to my dream, I must study hard, do a famous boss in the future.

我有一个梦想,一个很与众不同的梦想,那就是当一个老板。

虽然我很羡慕演员的多姿多彩,球星的万人瞩目,但是,我更喜欢老板的威风凛凛的感觉。

我很崇拜比尔.盖茨,所以我立志要当一个他那样的老板,当一个人人尊敬的人,我要赚很多的钱,让爸爸妈妈因我而自豪。

当然,光说不做是不行了,在以前的旧社会,只要你敢争、敢闯、敢拼,就可能成功,可现在不行了,作什么事都得有知识,没有知识是寸步难行的,所以,我要从现在开始就好好学习,天天向上,为我的目标而奋斗,这样才可以成功。

为了达到我的目标,除了需要知识外,还需要勇气,因为我定了这个目标,我已经从以前那个胆小怕事的我变勇敢了。有一次,在商场购物时,我与妈妈走散了,要是以前的我,一定会怕得哭起来的,可是这一次不一样了,我走到总台前面,大大方方叫服务员阿姨为我放了一个寻人广播,果然找到了妈妈。

为了我的梦想,我一定要好好学习,将来做一个大名鼎鼎的老板。

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篇14:中考英语满分的作文:visitng

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Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

Thank you.

[中考英语满分的作文:visitng

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篇15:2024中考英语作文写作指导汇总

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英语写作中考学生的一个盲点,缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思,老师的工作量大,造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象,因此学生学得也不具体、不深入,忽略写作技能的提高,甚至误认为只要句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文,而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导

一、写作决窍

总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;

关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;

组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;

字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿,后抄写。

三、习作点评

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求:

1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[高分突破]

①文体:记叙文。

②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错,写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求:

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺。

3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示:

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源,再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]:

①文体:记叙文。

②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。

③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]:

①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。

②时态:一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

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篇16:梦想为话题中考中学生

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如果没有梦想,怎会有高山的雄伟壮阔。 If there is no dream, how can there be a magnificent and magnificent.

如果没有梦想,怎会有流水的汩汩不息。

如果没有梦想,怎会有英雄的丰功伟绩。

梦想,让我们的生活更美好。

拥有梦想,一个人才会活得更精彩。因为拥有梦想,俞敏洪不畏两次名落孙山的恐惧,坚持第三次参加高考,最终以优异的成绩考入北大。这也为他后来成为新乐方教育集团的董事长奠定了基础。是梦想让他名扬中外,因为拥有梦想,2014感动中国人物黄旭华成为中国核潜艇之父,为中国的科研事业发展做出了不可估量的贡献。更是因为一份音乐梦想,贝多芬弹奏出一曲曲美妙的人生华章,即使他失语、失聪又怎样?梦想是心中想做之事,是一个人日思夜想想实现的目标。

梦想是一个人的信念与坚持。因为对体育事业的热爱。体坛战将李娜法网夺冠。创造一个又一个不可战胜的神话。试想没有李娜对体育事业的执著与坚持,她又怎么会有如今的辉煌。是梦想给予她前行不退的动力,是梦想成就了李娜,更是因为梦想,使我们中国人扬眉吐气,是梦想捍卫了我们的尊严。

百年前,他抛头颅,撒热血。奔走呼号,热衷于革命事业。为了心中的梦想祖国的未来,就在刀刃接近头颅的那一刹那,他已将生命置换成永恒。从此,一个红色的姓名赫然立于历史的扉页之中谭嗣同。他的精神至今仍执著的闪烁在历史的天空,激励一代又一代的热血青年。是他告诉我们应该坚持梦想,即使为之付出生命也毫不含糊!是梦想使他彪炳史册。因为怀着拯救国人思想的梦想,他弃医从文,一笔划开了万仗天幕,是长期黑暗的旧中国得以有了一点点星光。至今,穿越百年,他的声音仍气镇风云。没有他的梦想,我们又怎会看到一篇篇《拿来主义》、《祥林嫂》似的传世之作。

如今那些先贤早已作古,振兴中华,超越自我的重任早已落在我们身上。我们又怎能萎靡不振,自我堕落?拥有梦想并为之不懈努力才是我们青年人真正的本色。我们有什么理由不去为梦想奋斗呢?

是梦想给我们生活注入了一丝活力,梦想给予我们动力,给予我们未来。

是梦想让一个个追梦人的丰功伟绩长存不逝。梦想给予他们扬名中外的社会,给予他们穿越时空的力量。

是梦想引领着我们的成长,民族的独立,乃至中国社会的发展。

梦想从来都不应该被放弃?应是执著地去坚持它、实现它。

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篇17:我的梦想工作英语作文

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Everyone has a lot of dreams。 Some people want to be rich, dreaming of being millionaires overnight。 Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame。 I have a lot of dreams,too。 When I was a young girl, I dreamed of being a scientist like Hua Imogen in future。 However, I knew very well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts。 So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal。

After graduating from, college, I found a job as a teacher。 Although I was very busy with teaching, I never gave up my goal。 I read a lot of books to get more knowledge。 I made experiments to practise and apply what I had learnt from the books。 Sometimes, I was so deeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time。 Now I have made great progress。 Several of my research papers have been published。 The methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems。 I am very happy。 The ladder of being a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway。

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篇18:四年级我的梦想英语作文

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I have a dream, although I want to pay for it hard, price, but I wont give up!

My dream is to become a musician, a great musician; But I am like a headless fly, on the rampage, dont know where to start. Even being laughed at......

One day, I softly sing at home, mom heard, upset of say: "dont have a toothache!" Listen to this sentence into my ears, in fact, nothing, is often? Can be next, but sister said rudely: "if you dont want to be a musician, you go to a concert, I go to buy earplugs!" And she went over eyes and continue to jokingly said: "will certainly make a lot of money." I sad cry all the afternoon.

I told it to a friend, but she doesnt care about the said: "adult, often the. They are really in give you some good, indirect tell you cruelty of reality, we should work harder! Dont you just defeated?" I shook my head and said: "not, I will stick to my dream. Thanks."

I decided to, later must be a good day to do, every exercise seriously, there will be progress! He who laugh at me.

A month later, I think I really has the progress, really happy!

Dream is a diary "watch", as long as you insist, will be a success; We need to stick to our dream, insist on is victory!

我有一个梦想,虽然我要为它付出辛苦、代价,但是我不会放弃的!

我的梦想是当一名音乐家,一名伟大的音乐家;但我就像一只无头苍蝇,横冲直撞,不知从何做起。甚至被嘲笑……

有一天,我在家里轻声唱歌,被妈妈听到了,很心烦的说:“别牙疼了!”这句话听进我耳朵里,其实没什么,常有的吗。可接下来,姐姐却毫不客气地说:“你别想当音乐家了,你要是去开演唱会,我就去买耳塞!”说完她就翻个白眼,继续开玩笑地说:“一定会大赚一笔。”我伤心的哭了一下午。

我把这事告诉了一个朋友,她却不在乎的说:“大人吗,常有的。他们其实都在给你一些厉害,间接告诉你现实的残酷我们应该更努力才对!难道你就这样被打败了吗?”我摇摇头说道:“不,我一定会坚持我的梦想的。谢了。”

我决定了,以后一定列好一天要干的事,每一项认真练习,一定会有进步!管他谁嘲笑我呐。

一个月以后,我觉得我真的有进步了,真高兴!

梦想就是一个“观察日记”,只要你坚持,一定会取得成功;我们要坚持我们的梦想,坚持就是胜利!

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篇19:提高中考英语写作水平的方法

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一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题,题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说,不同的写作题材,它的人物,时间,写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主,首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系,对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性,尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主,通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等,弄清写作的意图,通过分析思考把握逻辑联系,找出主题并借助所给的文字,把图中的信息转化成文章,但要注意,文章不能停留在图画的浅表,而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确,重点也很突出,只要把各个提纲加以发挥,注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式,英文书信格式与中文有所不同,(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期,地址应按从小到大的顺序排列;(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名;(3)、正文部分;(4)、祝愿的话;(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写,不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异,但是都包括以下几个方面:整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分,争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手,常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制,只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性,抓住写作要点,也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚,要把时间固定下来,如:记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致,首尾呼应,不要随意改动,以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇,对这些一知半解的词你不会用,不知道如何搭配,结果可能适得其反,使文章显的生硬、不协调,甚至错误百出,所以要使用有把握的词,避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件,我们通常用“have an accident”来表示,不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯,也是写好英语作文的重要环节,如“我的理想是做一名歌手”,很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer,”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”,“to make”表示“制作”,而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”;又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”,而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此,平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯,切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句,写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去,如:定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型,关键时用上一、二个,就能使文章不同凡响,更有文采,特别是对关联词的使用,如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等,会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚,更能显示出你的英文功底,但要做到这些并非一日之功,要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象,在扣分时自然会“手下留情”,而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫,得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节:

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画,明确文章的中心思想,弄清题意,确定写作体裁,掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数,避免随心所欲,文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点,然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序,分出层次。如果是看图作文,则要按图构思,这样做既可避免要点遗漏,又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯,构成写作的整体框架,进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后,写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来,多用简单句,用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短,避难就易。若遇到表达障碍,可换一种说法,将一句变成两、三句,只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来,注意上下句的逻辑关系,适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语,使短文浑然一体,层次分明,过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后,默读1~2遍,检查修改,尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误,要点有无遗漏,文句有无语病,词数是否恰当,行文是否连贯。

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篇20:中考英语作文MyfavoriteplaceatSchool

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导语:相信大家对于学校都很熟悉,说说哪个地方给你留下了美好的回忆,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以”My favorite place at School”为题征文,请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并请说明原因。提示词语:Classroom, reading-room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve My favorite place at school

【参考范文】

My favorite place at school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of useful books, newspapers and magazines there.

I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.

I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to. Reading helps me forget all my troubles.

For me, the reading room is the place I like best.

【参考译文】

我在学校最喜欢的地方是阅览室。它是非常大和明亮。那里有许多有用的书、报纸和杂志。

我喜欢在那里读书和杂志,因为他们不仅给我提供了许多知识,而且还帮助我了解了世界各地正在发生的事情。有时我甚至觉得我可以和书中的人交谈。

我也可以在和平的环境中放松自己。当我感到疲倦和不开心时,阅览室是最好的地方。阅读帮助我忘记所有烦恼。

对我来说,阅览室是我最喜欢的地方。

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