中考英语梦想作文最新20篇

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“I think”简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如,2008年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, Lin Haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:Being saved from the earthquake, two of LinHao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with Lin Hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

英语期中考试优秀作文：Hw t sta health（4篇）

If u want t sta health,u shuld eat re fruit and vegetables.If u want t eep health,u shuldnt eat t uch fried fd.We ust chage ur bad habits.And u shuld have enugh exercise ever da.I thin in this wa,we can eep health.

——孙xx

Health is ver iprtant t us.We shuld be health.If u want t be health,u shuld have enugh exercise,eat health fd and have a gd tietable.I used t watch a lt f TV ever da.But nw I dnt wacth uch TV an lnger.I exercise regularl.S,thats wh I ver health.

——王xx

Ever peple want t eep healeh.But a lt f peple are unhealth because the dnt have a gd diet and the dnt have enugh sleep.If u want t sta health,u shuld nt eat t uch fried fd.u shuld eat se vegetables instead.And u shuld g t bed earl and get up earl.The st iprtant ting is t exercise rugularl.But I dnt have enugh exercise,s I shuld exercise ever da.In this wa,I can sta health.

——毛xx

We shuld sta health.Staing health is iprtant.But hw can we sta health?If we want t sta health,we shuld eat a lt f fruit and vegetables.If we want t sta health,we shuld drin enugh water ever da.If we want t sta health,dnt frget exercise.We shuld exercise regularl ever da.In fact,we can sta health in an different was.Fruit,vegetables,water and enugh exercise are useful t help us t sta health.We als shuld have gd habits.I used t eat a lt f sweets.But nw I dnt eat t an sweets an lnger.Nw I health and teeth are health,t.S if u have bad habits,u shuld change bad habits quicl.If u want t sta health,it will be iprtant t change bad habits.Lets sta health,shall we?

——朱xx

I have many dreams, such as I am rich in the future. Therefore, I can buy all what I want.

But my greatest dream is that I want to be an astronaut. Our country develops fast and our space make great progress in the last several decades. It has great achievements. All of our country are proud of it.

Therefore, I want to be one of this amazing area. In order to make my dream come true, I must work hard now.

So that I can go to a good university to learn more knowledge. I hope my dream can come true one day.

我有很多梦想，比如我希望将来变得富有，这样我就可以买我想买的一切。

但是我最大的梦想是成为一名宇航员。我们国家发展得很快，而且在过去几十年中太空取得了巨大进步，有很多大成就，所有人都为之骄傲。

因此，我想成为这一神奇领域中的一员。为了使我的梦想成真，我必须从现在开始努力。这样我就能够去一所好的大学学习更多的知识了。我希望有一天能够梦想成真。

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

导语：写英语作文的时候适当引用一些名言警句，能够给我们的作文加分哦，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

01. Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧.

02. Time is money.

时间就是金钱

03. Easier said than done.

说来容易做来难

04. Where there is a will, there is a way.

有志者事竟成.

05. Look before you leap.

三思而后行.

06. Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量

07. God helps those who help themselves.

自助者天助.

08. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

心之所愿，无事不成

09. It’s never too old to learn.

活到老，学到老

10. No pains, no gains.

不劳无获

11. Once in a blue moon.

千载难逢

12. To make the impossible possible.

将不可能变为可能

13. Failure is the mother of success.

失败乃成功之母

14. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

患难见真情

15. First things first.

先做重要之事

16. Great minds think alike.

英雄所见略同

17. Rome was not built in a day.

成功并非一朝一夕的事

18. All that glitters is not gold.

闪光的未必都是金子

19. East or west, home is the best.

金窝银窝不如自家草窝

20. Time and tide wait for no man.

时间不等人

21. There is but a secret to success—Never give up!

成功只有一个秘诀—永不放弃!

22. Where there is life, there is hope.

有生命必有希望

23. Beauty will buy no beef.

漂亮不能当饭吃

24. Better late than never.

迟做总比不做好

25. Every little helps.

点滴都有用;积少成多

26. The shortest answer is doing.

最简短的回答就是行动

27. No news is good news.

没消息，就是好消息

28. Well begun, half done.

好的开始是成功的一半

29. All for one, one for all.

人人为我，我为人人

30. One false step will make a great difference.

失之毫厘，谬以千里

31. Facts speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩

32. As the tree, so the fruit.

种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆

33. To live is to learn; to learn is to better live.

活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着

34. Like and like make good friends.

趣味相投

35. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻

Everyone has his own ideal, engineer, teacher, an engineer... Every dream is so beautiful. In order to ideal, everybody diligently to strive, put the ideal into reality. My ideal is to be a doctor. In my mind, their career is great and noble.

Once, I was alone at home. Suddenly feel headache, taking the temperature. "Wow, 39 degrees!" I cant help but to himself. I want to tell mother: ok. Just want to pick up the phone, think again: forget it, dont bother mother. Today will take care of yourself! In order to let the body temperature rise no longer, I dont have got into the quilt, but took a small stool, sit by the bed ark and read a magazine, have a rest. After a while, I feel even more severe headaches, pull it specializes in running a high fever medicine, look at the instructions carefully, according to the common reagents, take for yourself. In a short time, have a headache seemed to reduce a lot. This medicine really works! My in the mind secretly glad. Half an hour later, I gave myself a temperature, the temperature is normal. Time passed quickly, not for a while, mother came back. She see on the table of medicine, is very confused, and asked me: "you have a fever?" "Yes, today I am take care of themselves oh, great!" Mother looked at me very happy appearance, but also echoed said: "yes, you are the best."

In order to achieve the goal, I must study hard the doctor this knowledge, after be a worthy of the name and save peoples lives or doctor.

每个人都有自己的理想，工程师、老师、驯兽员……每一个理想都是那么美好。为了理想，每个人都会坚持不懈地去努力，把理想变为现实。我的理想是做一名医生。在我心目中，他们的职业是伟大而高尚的。

一次，我独自一人在家。顿时感到头疼，就量了一下体温。“哇，39度!”我不禁自言自语起来。我想：告诉妈妈好了。刚想拿起电话，又想：算了，不打扰妈妈了。今天就自己照顾自己吧!为了让体温不再上升，我没有钻进被子里，而是拿了一个小凳子，坐在床柜旁看杂志、休息。过了一会儿，我觉得头疼就更加厉害了，就拿出专治发高烧的药，仔细地看说明书，按照平常的药剂，给自己服用。不一会儿，头疼似乎减轻了很多。这药还真管用啊!我心里暗暗高兴着。过了半小时，我给自己又量了个体温，结果体温很正常。时间过得很快，不一会儿，妈妈回来了。她看到在桌子上的药，很是疑惑，便问我：“你发烧了啊?”“是啊，今天我是自己照顾自己的哦，很棒吧!”妈妈看着我很高兴的样子，也附和着说：“是啊，你最棒了!”

为了实现目标，我一定要好好学习医生这方面的知识，以后做一个名副其实、治病救人的医生。

Now advocate low carbon life, as the primary school, I wont make much contribution to the earth, but in low carbon life that on the one hand, I also try to do things I can do.

Now I just have a holiday at home, will be the first to the family "operation"! Grandmother cooking meals every day dont pay attention to save, I say: "grandma, now advocate low carbon life", if you like rice, cook the rice for 20 minutes and then, can shorten the time, should be used when cooking in the fire; burn something to wipe pan, not easy to boil and boil food with a pressure cooker, and helps save gas. Also, wash dishes of water that clean out rice can be used to water the flowers, wash clothes of water can be used to mop the floor or flush the toilet." Grandmother surprise of say: "is that so?! Grandmother, dont know, just do what you say!"

Dad always play while the computer before you go to sleep, I have the chance to say: dad, advocated "low-carbon life", now playing computer not only a waste of electricity, is not good for your eyes, you know, there are a lot of countries is because there are many people of reckless waste of electricity, so they often power outages, the day was fine, have to have lights in the evening! Dad you look how poor they are, you still go to bed early! Dad said happily: "my daughter grow up, know more than me, has a point, I will try, also join your" low carbon gens ". My heart crossed.

In the evening, grandpa opened the TV, voice is very big. I said: "grandpa, now people are constantly improve low carbon consciousness, the voice is small, low brightness can power saving, and your mobile phone, the evening is turned off when not in use, can reduce the number of charging." Grandpa all smiles said: "you not the kui is a great granddaughter, I know at an early age saving, these I also thought, I will do." I am pleased to jump three feet high, grandpa is the "low carbon" crowd.

I cant ask someone to low carbon, oneself also want to do, I will immediately take action. Do drink plain boiled water more, drink less; Less with paper towel to wipe hands; Choose a day every week dont eat meat. Less to buy school supplies extra clothes and life; Book with the positive, dont use correction fluid and tape.

I hope everyone a low-carbon habit, low-carbon awareness, to achieve low carbon pacesetter.

现在，提倡低碳生活，身为小学生的我，虽然不能给地球做出多大的贡献，但在低碳生活这一方面，我也努力做好我能做的小事。

现在我正好放假在家里，就先向家里人“开刀”吧!外婆每天做饭不太讲究节约，我说：“外婆，现在提倡”低碳生活“，如果你焖米饭时，把大米浸泡20分钟后再煮，可缩短时间;做饭时要用中火;烧东西时要擦干锅，不易煮烂煮烂的食品要用高压锅，都有助于节省燃气。还有，洗菜淘米的水可以用来浇花，洗衣服的水可以用来拖地或者冲厕所。”外婆吃惊的说：“是吗?!外婆老了不知道，就照你说的办吧!”

爸爸睡觉前总要玩会儿电脑，我就趁机说：爸爸，现在提倡“低碳生活”，玩电脑不仅浪费电，对眼睛也不好，你知道吗，有好多国家就是因为有许多肆无忌惮浪费电的人，所以他们经常断电，白天还好，晚上就得打着灯了!爸爸你看他们多可怜啊，你还是早早的睡觉吧!爸爸高兴地说：“我女儿长大了，比我知道的还多，说的有道理，我试试看，也加入你的”低碳一族“。我心里喜滋滋的。

到了晚上，外公打开了电视，声音调的十分大。我说：“外公，现在人们都在不断提高低碳意识，声音小，亮度低都可以节电，还有你的手机，晚上不用时就关机，可以减少充电的次数。”外公满脸笑容的说：“你不愧是我的好外孙女，从小就知道节约，这些我还没想到呢，我一定照办。”我高兴地一蹦三尺高，外公也是“低碳一族”了。

我不能光要求别人低碳，自己也要做到，我要马上行动起来。做到多喝白开水，少喝饮料;少用纸巾擦手;每周选一天不吃肉;少买多余的衣服以及生活学习用品;本子反正面都用，不用修正液、修正带。

希望大家都养成低碳习惯，提高低碳意识，争当低碳标兵。

1. 不用说……

It goes without saying that …

= (It is) needless to say (that) ….

= It is obvious that ….

例：It goes without saying that it pays off to keep early hours.

不用说早睡早起是值得的。

2. 在各种……之中，……

Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …

例︰Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。

3. 就我的看法……;我认为……

In my opinion, …

= To my mind, ….

= As far as I am concerned, …

= I am of the opinion that ….

例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

在我看来，玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …

随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …

例：With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.

随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

5. ……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do/that …

…… 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that …

…… 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …

……是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

=It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

6. 花费 spend … on sth. / doing sth. …

例：We shouldn’t spend too much time on something we aren’t interested in.

我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。

7. how 引导的感叹句

例：At least it will prove how honest you are.

那至少可以证明你很诚实。

8. 状语从句

⑴ 如果你不…，你就会… If you don’t ..., you’ll ...

例︰If you don’t keep working hard, you’ll lose the chance.

如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。

⑵ 如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.

当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。

⑶ 每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.

每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.

每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.

每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.

每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.

例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.

= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.

每当我想到我家附近那一.��清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。

9. 宾语从句

我认为，…… / 我认为……不...... I think / I don’t think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

例：He doesn’t think I should stop him joining the club.

他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + S + 过去式, S + 现在完成式.

例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。

I have a dream, deeply rooted in my mind, that is when I grow up, I want to be a scientist, although I have no wisdom, no rigorous thinking, also does not have the accurate judgment, but I still wont give up work. Although this dream I very far away, but I still wont stop pursuing. Although in the process of realize the dream, there will be many setbacks and countless hardships, but Im still not discouraged. Because I believe that only through hell of polish, and to build to create the power of heaven, only through the blood fingers, to pop up to the swan song of time; Only through hardships and setbacks, to achieve your dreams!

Previously, whenever see scientists remarkable achievement, always feel envy and admiration. Is, they promoted the development of the society; Is, they make peoples living standards improve, But they, for the development of the motherland ushered in a brand new tomorrow!

So, I want to be a scientist, become a contribution to the country, to become the pillars of the country.

Had this dream, I will continue to be so hard, never give up, have the dream, is to grasp their own life course, will not be lost. Had this dream, like a lamp, light up my way forward, has been to the pinnacle of victory!

我有一个梦想，深深扎根于我的脑海中，那就是长大后，我要成为一个科学家，尽管我没有过人的才智，没有严密的思维，也没有准确的判断能力，但是我仍不会放弃努力。尽管这个梦想据我很遥远，但我仍不会停止追求。尽管在实现梦想的过程中，会有很多挫折和无数的磨难，但我仍不会灰心丧气。因为我相信，只有经历地狱般的磨练，才能练出创造天堂的力量，只有经过流过血的手指，才能弹出时间的绝唱;只有经历磨难和挫折，才能实现梦想!

以前，每当看到科学家们令人瞩目的成就时，总会感到羡慕和钦佩。是他们，推动了社会的发展;是他们，使人们的生活水平提高;更是他们，为祖国的发展迎来了一个崭新的明天!

因此，我想成为一个科学家，成为一个对国家有贡献的人，成为这个国家的栋梁。

有了这个梦想，我就会一直这样努力下去，永不放弃，有了这个梦想，就等于把握了自己的人生航向，不会在迷失方向。有了这个梦想，就好像一张明灯，照亮了我前进的道路，一直通往胜利的顶峰!

我有很多个梦想，小时候的梦，是想能多玩一会，能够希望自己考试成绩能更好一点，长大了，是想作业留少点，现在变成熟了，开开心心过完美一天就好了。 I have a lot of dreams. When I was a kid, I wanted to play more for a while. I could hope that my test scores can be better.Leave less, now it becomes mature, just be happy for a day.

我的梦，希望不用上学，每天可以躺在床上睡懒觉，不起床，不用7点就起床洗漱准备上学，不想那么早就走路上学，可以在床上多呆一会，不想离开温暖的床，让自己伸个懒腰，再睡一会，想得到自己心爱的玩具，想得到好吃的东西，这都是我的梦想，可惜，现实是残酷的，现在只希望一家人能团团圆圆的在一起。

生活多姿多彩，在学校，希望能早点下课，能少留点作业，早点放学。在家，希望能快点写完作业，下楼玩一会，晚点回去再呆一会。放假，希望家长不在家，让自己为所欲为，想干什么干什么，乃是我的黄金时段。

每个人都有梦想，有人想一夜成名，有人想腰缠万贯，有人想一人之下万人之上，还有人希望自己成为万众瞩目的人，也有一些爱国人士，希望国家辉煌，不过，他们的梦想都没成功，因为他们只是凭空想，并没有实际行动。

我想写完作业，我就拼命的写，不到20分钟，我就写完了，我想考高分，我就拼命的复习，哪怕是死记硬背，我也要记到脑子里，上课的内容不会?下课也要厚着脸皮问同学，老师说过，作文不会的要来问，不要自己在这瞎写一切，不会的要问，幼儿园希望自己快上小学，小学时却想回到幼儿园，或许每个年龄段的梦想都不同，长大的时候可以的找到一份好工作，可能我想得太长远了。

这就是我的梦想，可能你们不相信，但是这就是我的梦，不要质疑。

haheard from people who said: "great because of drea" some dreamare out of reach, but humanto the moon inot also achieved the dream of one thousand years, enough to prove that the "period".

mdream ito become a musician, clarinet in the school team, from the beginning are ignorant to blow out the right note, eversong from the unfamiliar to the watch can also like flowing smoothly, pleasing to the ear. songlike i dress, dresup for them, and onlthe birth of new life in mhands, and the notefloating in the air, beautiful melodhugged me, from this, i get a great deal of joy.

i waattracted wonderful piano chords, melodiousound, so sign up piano lessons. see someone playing, fingerdancing in black and white keyjump, chord idressed up, foil, song just like the gorgeoupeony, rose, whether happy, sad, lively, passionate; emotions, piano ilike a magic can expresincisiveland vividly, so, i am happto in them, even if the practice coming first to exercise a superpiano art, believe that along athe efforts, will have a dream come true one day.

the essence of the musicianplaa musical instrument, writing songs, all of these can bring people happiness, good mood, and comfort the soul, ithe gift of god give the world the most beautiful, ialso mdrea.

曾听人说：“人因有梦而伟大。”有些梦想虽是遥不可及，但人类登陆月球不也实现了千百年来的梦想，足以证明“事在人为”。

我的梦想是成为一位音乐家，在学校参加竖笛队，从刚开始的完全不懂到能正确吹出音符，每首曲子从生疏到不看谱亦能如行云流水般的顺畅、悦耳。歌曲就像是我为他们穿衣、精心打扮，在我手中才诞生的新生命，而音符飘荡在空中，美妙的旋律拥抱着我，从这当中，我得到莫大的喜悦。

我也被钢琴美妙的和弦、悠扬的琴音吸引，所以报名钢琴课。看到别人弹奏，十指在黑白琴键飞舞跳跃，和弦的装扮、衬托，歌曲就犹如牡丹、玫瑰般的华丽，无论是快乐、哀怨、轻快的、激昂的;各种情绪，钢琴都像变魔法般能表达的淋漓尽致，因此，我乐于投身其中，纵然要练千百首才能锻练出精湛的琴艺，相信只要努力不懈，终有美梦成真的一天。

音乐家奏出乐器的精华、创作的歌曲，这些都能带给人快乐、愉悦的心情和安慰人的心灵，是上天给世人最美丽的礼物，也是我的梦想。

关于首都北京也是一个相当热门的话题，在中考的时候是很多老师拿来当题目出给学生练习的。下面YJBYS给大家一篇范文。希望对大家有帮助。

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.

Dear Li Lei,

I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad totell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijingis a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such asplaces of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

Dear Tommy,

Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.

Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largestcities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the SummerPalace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful andwell-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since wesuccessfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.

Now, people pay more attention to the environment. Moretrees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient forpeople to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have beenbuilt. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly andhelpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really anattractive city with a long history.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

范文要多看多背才会有效果，希望这篇关于首都北京的范文能帮助大家对北京有跟多的了解。也祝愿大家在中考英语作文上能取得好成绩。

I have a wonderful dream in my heart. Its to speak English very well. Since English is everything for me. English is my best friend. English is my soul. English is my power. Without English, Im nothing at all. Nothing. Now, I can think in English, speak in English, and write in English. Some people think Im an Indian. Some people regard Im a Pakistan. And some people even consider that Im an Egyptian. But if I could speak English as good as an American, my future would be brilliant. So I work very hard.

在我心中有一个美丽的梦想。那就是说一口流利的英语。因为对我来说英语就是我的一切。英语是我最好的朋友。英语是我的灵魂。英语给予我力量。没有英语，我什么都没有。什么都没有。现在，我可以用英语的方式思考，用英语说话，用英语书写。有些人以为我是印第安人。有些人以为我是巴基斯坦人。有些人甚至认为我是埃及人。但如果我能说英语能像美国人说的那么好，我的未来会很美好。所以我很努力学习。

[一年级英语作文：我的梦想

一、假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。

上午 你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花，放在花瓶内

下午 你去市场买菜，为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜

完饭后 你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡，并祝她节日快乐；告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康，不要过度劳累；你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动；母亲感动得留下了眼泪

注意：

1. 词数80—100 个左右

2. 日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3. 日记必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以假如适当细节和适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯。

参考词汇：pocket money 零花钱vase 花瓶overwork 过度劳累be moved to tears 感动得流泪

11th May Sunday

Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.

In the morning, I bought …

….

Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：

1. 衣着整洁;

2. 保持环境卫生;

3. 待人有礼，乐于助人;

4. 遵守交通规则;

5. ……

要求：

1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

3. 词数：80词左右。

范文

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

Its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Dont throw litter or spit about. Its good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

[中考英语作文热门欣赏

英语写作要拿高分其实并不是很难，只要掌握了一定的词量以及写作方法就有可以能拿到高分。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语写作高分秘诀，希望对你有帮助。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长(微博)和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

Everyone has his own ideal, I also have their own ideal, this ideal, like a destination, waiting for you to; This ideal, is a peak, waiting for you to climb.

Since the childhood I had many ideal, or naive or funny, more whimsical unrealistic, but every ideal is I at the beginning, the bottom of my heart the most sincere act, has been accompanied by I walk long or short for a long time. Now think of, also have a beautiful memory. Medicine with its own unique charm to attract me, it has a unique significance: the patient back from the disease, back from death. Ideal became doctors had never wavered in my heart, because I believe it wont leave me, painstakingly pursue it will let me bathed in the sunlight. Whenever see dad open prescriptions, whenever see out of dads clinic in the healing of patients, time always remind me: my ideal is far from me, there will be many obstacles on the road, step on the gas! Through these tough! Toward my ideal!

Ideal is a big dipper in the sky, to trek directions; Ideal is the beacon, light homing shore road! Ideal is fire, lit my ideal male-male fire!

每个人都有自己的理想，我也有自己的理想，这理想，就像是目的地，等待你前往;这理想，就是一座高峰，等待着你去攀登。

从小到大我有过很多理想，或幼稚或搞笑，多是异想天开不切实际的，但每个理想都是我当初，心底最真诚的驿动，都曾伴随我走过或长或短的一段悠悠岁月。如今想起，也不乏一场美丽回忆。医学以它自身的独特的魅力吸引着我，它有独特得意义：把病人从病魔手中抢回来，从死神手中抢回来。成为医生的理想在我心中不曾有过动摇，因为我相信它不会抛弃苦心追求的我，它会让我沐浴在阳光之中。每当看到爸爸开的处方单，每当看到从爸爸的诊所里走出来的全愈的病人，总是时刻的提醒我：我的理想离我还很远，路上会有许多坎坷，加大油门!就能冲过这些坎坷!奔向我的理想!

理想是天空中的北斗星，为迷航者指点方向;理想是灯塔，照亮归航者靠岸的路!理想是火种，点燃我的理想的雄雄大火!

Everyone has his own dream, and each are not identical. My dream is to be a glorious peoples teacher, use white chalk to impart knowledge, to take care of students with broad mind.

I am the students and teacher in the study, but in life I is of concern to their friends.

I in to the students in the class, must be combined with the content of the textbook, told them one after another interesting story, to fill the whole classroom with laughter. Next class, I will be on time class is over, let the students make full use of the recess this precious ten minutes, to play, go to bask in the sun, let them in a more full spirit to meet the next class.

After class, I rarely few homework, get the kids to recall the knowledge that the day will be ready to go out to play. Let them play in learning, play high school.

I also want to lead the students to observe the secrets of nature in nature: watching ants and how to communication between the ants; See how insects crawling; Take a look what the grass can blossom, which cant... Let the students into life, understand the nature.

In order to this dream, I must study hard, do a admirable good teacher in the future.

每个人都有自己的梦想，而且各不相同。我的梦想是当一名光荣的人民教师，用洁白的粉笔来传授知识，用博大的胸怀来关爱学生。

在学习上我是学生们的严师，但在生活上我却是无微不至地关心他们的大朋友。

我在给同学们上课时，一定结合课本的内容，向他们讲述一个又一个生动有趣的故事，让欢笑声充满整个教室。下课时，我一定会按时下课，让学生们充分利用课间这宝贵的十分钟，去玩玩，去晒晒太阳，让他们以更饱满的精神去迎接下一堂课。

课后，我会布置很少很少的作业，让孩子们回忆当天学过的知识就可以出去玩了。让他们在学中玩，玩中学。

我还要带领同学们到大自然中观察自然界的奥秘：看蚂蚁与蚂蚁之间怎样交流;看昆虫们怎样爬行;再看一看哪些小草能开花，哪些不能……让同学们走入生活，了解自然。

为了这个梦想，我一定要好好学习，将来做一名令人敬佩的好老师。

梦想是什么?梦想像天空中的繁星，璀璨夺目，闪耀在星际，一生不会褪去。梦想是多姿多彩的，在卖火柴小女孩的眼中，梦想可能是一顿热腾腾的饱饭，躺在奶奶温暖的臂弯中熟睡;在苍键的雄鹰眼中，梦想或许是经历过千百次的死亡后的振翅高飞，与苍穹作伴的壮举。 What is the dream? Dreams are like stars in the sky, bright eyes, shining in the interstellar, and will not fade in their lives.The dream is colorful. In the eyes of the little girl selling matches, the dream may be a hot meal, lying in the warm arm of the grandmas warm arms and sleeping; in the eyes of the eagle of the keys, dreams may have experienced a thousandAfter hundreds of deaths, the wings flying high and feat with the sky.

“梦想”二字萦绕嘴边，这简短的两个字，又似乎凝聚了生命所有的力量。倘若我们失去了它，恐怕只会是行尸走肉般地苟延残喘于世。它闪烁着熠熠的光辉。在你跌倒受伤的时候，它就像远方诱人的风景，让你擦干眼泪，继续迎着荆棘奔跑。它无时无刻不为干枯的生命注入鲜活的能量，让激情在全身的每一根神经末梢传递，潮水般覆盖住年轻的生命。我们要有执著追求的梦想，要让原本白纸般的生命开出五彩斑斓的花朵，回首以往，使得内心盛满充实与感动。

我们的梦想：有想考上一个好的高中学校;有想成为一个精通电脑技术的人;有想长大后找一份好的工作;有想长大后成为一个著名的歌手;有想考到好成绩让父母安心;还有想要成为一个作家……

那么让我们坚持追梦的动力，是什么?是勇气、自信、坚强和爱。

追梦的路，是一条未知的路，可能会有一路的疑问，可能会有一路的荆棘，但这是你的梦，咬咬牙吧，人生就这么一次，再累再苦，哪怕是跪着也要走完，对得起自己的良心。没有梦的人，给自己寻一个梦吧，作为一个独立的个体，应该去做自己生命的拓荒者、先锋部队。

去探寻自己知识与技能的上游，如此才能为自己的人生，从一开始就走出不一样的一步!庄周梦蝶，梦的是内在的宁静;慧能参禅，参透的是仁者的心态，找到真正属于自己的乐园，拿出心灵的钥匙，才能徜徉于那专为自己建造的无边海洋之中。因为，梦在那里，路在脚下，人在途中，心，也就在那里，成功，就在前方。

My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers an plants for the four seasons.

There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. on the first floor, There is a big hall when you enter the gate. on the right of the hall is a sitting room, There we can relax, Have a rest, watch tv and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a computer room and a study belonging to me. On the second floor, there are six bedrooms with bathrooms.

The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, Such as security alarms controlled by computers, Vision phones, Lifts an automatic doors. Well, That is my dream house.

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning，listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice，such as listening to tapes，watching English TV programs. And I found it really helpful. In fact，there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example，I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.