初一英语作文范文(经典20篇)

We grew up in a happy times, living conditions have made a lot of improvement than before. But the environment around us has suffered severe damage, human homes, earth is facing ecological crisis, if not protect the environment, human will be faced with a major disaster.

In recently listen to TV news said: our capital Beijing area and more dust storms have taken place in the city, these economic developed city almost was huge sand "bury", the oasis is gradually reduced, we human beings that only themselves to blame disorderly cut down trees, destroy the environment, make the soil and water loss. Dont, only the forest into the barren hills, grassland into desert, humans will suddenly realize?

Now the most polluted on earth resources, is the water. River that the original clear float above is full of garbage, plus factory emissions of industrial wastewater, the water is now dark and smelly, passing from the river to wu wear the nose, the fish in the river ah, shrimp had long ago lost.

Just take a look at the sky, is always a grey, which is called the blue sky white clouds, it is grey day ash cloud. Can only look at the moon at night, the stars are gone. See the most is the factory, thick tall a black smoke from the chimney. Took to the streets, often can smell exhaust frying. Recipients pollution everywhere around us.

Man is the master of the earth, but also its destroyer, is the final victim. As the owner of the new century, we cant let environment continue to be polluted. Environmental consciousness is the people should have modern consciousness of the 21st century, in order to in the new century to create a beautiful and pleasant environment, let us take action immediately: save a drop of water, save electricity, once more take a tree... To protect our home together!

我们生长在一个幸福时代，生活条件比以前有了很大的改善。但是我们周围的环境却遭到严重破坏，人类的家园——地球正面临生态危机，如果不保护环境，人类将面临着重大的灾难。

在前不久听电视新闻说：我们首都北京和区多城市都发生了沙尘暴，这些经济发达的城市几乎被巨大的风沙“埋没”，绿洲正在逐渐减少，这只能怪我们人类自己乱砍树木，破坏环境，使水土流失。难道，只有等森林变成了荒山，草原变成了沙漠，人类才会恍然大悟吗?

现在地球上受污染最严重的资源，就是水资源。原来那清澈的小河，现在上面飘满了垃圾，再加上工厂排放的工业污水，河水现在又黑又臭，从河边路过的人都要捂着鼻子，小河里的鱼呀、虾呀早就消失得无影无踪了。

再抬头看一看天空，总是灰蒙蒙的，哪叫蓝天白云，简直是灰天灰云。晚上也只能看看月亮，星星都不见了。看得最多的还是工厂那又粗又高的烟囱里冒出的一股黑烟。走到街上，经常可以闻到汽车排出的油烟味。我们周围到处都受者污染。

人类是地球的主人，但也是它的破坏者，又是最终的受害者。作为新世纪的主人，我们不能再让环境继续被污染下去了。环保意识是21世纪人们应有的现代意识，为了在新世纪里创造一个优美宜人的环境，让我们立刻行动起来：节约一滴水，节约一度电，多载一棵树……共同保护我们的家园吧!

I like going to school by like, because I think I can keep healthy by riding.Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. Some foreigners buy bicycles to ride.But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles.In fact the exhaust gas from cars makes the air dirty and they waste energy.I think bicycles are better than cars.

我喜欢骑自行车上学，因为我可以通过骑车保持健康。自行车在北京依然很流行，一些外国人也买自行车骑。但是越来越多的人买汽车，因为他们认为汽车比自行车快。汽车的尾气污染了空气，浪费了能源。我认为自行车比汽车好。

My name is Susan. Im 12 years old.My favorite subject is Math.

Because I think its difficult but funny.I like green very much.I often

play volleyball after school.I think its interesting .I like

playing the violin and the piano.My favorite day is Sunday.Because in that

day I dont go to school.

It is time for sports It is about half past four.It is time for sport.The

students are on the playground.

They are playing a football match.LiDong is one of them.He is good at

football.He plays well.He is on the school football team.LiDong says,"I like

playing football.It is my favourite sport."LiDongs friends,PanChen and

WangHaisay,"Hes a football fan.Ronaldo is his favourite player."

Look at the boys around the basketball court.Many boys are watching a

basketball match.The tall boy,Tanglin,is very good at playing basketball.He is

very fast and he plays well.Many of his friends say,"He is a good basketball

player.His favourite basketball player is YaoMing.His team is sure to win.

I hope they can be the good players of our country,too.

Mothers love

All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.

Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

Hello, everyone. This is my English teacher. His name is Wang Nengmin. His English name is Frank. He is a very good English teacher. He speaks English very well. Hes full of humor, too. Hes over 30 years old. He has two small eyes and a small mouth. He is near sighted so he wears glasses. He likes playing computer games and swimming. He also loves reading. He usually reads newspapers after school. His lesson is very interesting. We always learn a lot of things in his lessons. We all like him very much, although he is very strict with us.

Our school is very beautiful. there are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It＇s so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.the teachers work very hard.they love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights dont work, the traffic jam will certainly happen. A patient needs to be operated on at once. What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line. Electricity is closely related to our daily life.

How terrible it would be if there were no electricity!

Hello!My name is Liu Ya Min.I am a Chinese girl.I am fourteen.I am a middle school student.Frankly speaking,Irene is not beautiful.I like autumn,the ground is covered with fallen leaves.I like basketball,but I dislikes sports.I very love sit in the sun.I like sduty,sing and shopping,too.I think I am a happy girl.My family is not big.There are my parents,my two brother and I.Being the eldest,I must look after my brothers.My desire was to become a writer.

你好!我的名字是刘丫Min.I是个中国女孩。我十四岁。我是一名中学学生。坦率地说,艾琳不是美丽的。我喜欢秋天,地面被落叶覆盖着。我喜欢篮球,但我不喜欢运动。我非常喜欢坐在太阳底下。我喜欢sduty,唱歌和购物。我认为我是一个快乐的女孩。我的家人并不大。有我的父母,我的两个哥哥和我。老大,我必须照顾我的兄弟。我的愿望是成为一名作家。

Chinese food is colorful, varied, delicious, and nutritious. Chinese people

cares not only about the taste of the food, but also about its color and smell.

Food in different places has different flavors. Beijing food is quite oily and

salty; Shanghai food is sweet and light; Sichuan food is spicy and hot; and

Cantonese food is fresh and tender. Whats more, there are some popular local

snacks. For example, Beijing Roast Duck has a good reputation for its tender

meat, while the steam buns in Shanghai are well known for their juicy

ingredients.

The story created a classic tough guy image. Tells the story of Santiago Cuba old man in the boundless sea fish caught eight days, but in the eighth day of the story, he caught a big marlin in the open sea, the old man in fighting with the marlin hand slashed, but he never give up, finally around three days later, will it uniform.

However, Santiago is not good luck, because he after uniform marlin, a grey whale sharks can smell the flavor of the marlin, he swam down to Santiagos fishing boat, ready to eat the marlin, so injured Santiago was at grey whale sharks and picked up the spear, when the moment of the assassination of grey whale sharks, have bite a piece of fish meat, grey whale shark defeated, but as a result of marlin tail meat is bitten off, so much more blood flow, it will let more sharks smell marlin, to marlin. Later, again there are two sharks come, really narrow scalloped hammerhead, shovelnose, but were Santiago uniforms, can be on the way back to Hong Kong, Santiago and ran into a large group of sharks, at this time of Santiago was exhausted, but Santiago also forcibly hold himself with the shark fight, even though he went the full, but in the end the big marlin was eaten, the old man back to the port of big marlin only a skeleton.

So I understand the life road twists and turns, long and full of challenge, but as long as our unremitting efforts, no matter the result is failure or success, is worth people respect.

故事塑造了一个经典的硬汉形象。讲述了古巴的桑提亚哥老人在茫茫的大海钓了8天的鱼都一无所获，然而在故事的第8天，他在远海中钓到了一条巨大的马林鱼，老人虽然在与马林鱼的搏斗中手被割破，但他始终没有放弃，最后在周旋了三天后，将它制服。

然而，桑提亚哥的运气并不好，因为他在制服马林鱼后，一条灰鲸鲨就闻到了马林鱼的味道，便游到了桑提亚哥的渔船旁，准备吃掉马林鱼，于是，受伤的桑提亚哥便又拿起了鱼叉朝灰鲸鲨刺去，当灰鲸鲨被刺的一瞬间，已经咬下了一块鱼尾上的肉，灰鲸鲨被打败了，但由于马林鱼的尾巴上的肉被咬掉了，所以血就流得更加多了，这便让更多鲨鱼闻到马林鱼的气味，过来吃马林鱼。之后，真的又有两条鲨鱼来了，分别是窄头双髻鲨、铲鲨，但都被桑提亚哥制服了，可在回港的路上，桑提亚哥又碰见了一大群鲨鱼，这时的桑提亚哥已是筋疲力竭，但桑提亚哥还强行地撑着自己与鲨鱼搏斗，虽然他使出了全力，但最后大马林鱼还是被吃掉了，老人回港时大马林鱼只剩下一副骨架了。

由此我明白了人生的道路曲折、漫长、充满了挑战，但是只要我们坚持不懈努力过，不管结果是失败还是成功，都是值得人们尊敬的。

January 1st is considered as the New Years Day.most companies,shops,school,and government offices are closed during that time.People prepare for New Years Dayfrom late December.Firt,people spend a few days to clean their houses completely.Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January.

The New Years meal is also prepared from the end of ecember.During the New Years Day,people usually do not cook and relax at home. On New Years Eve,it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year.New Years Day is one of important days for many people in the word during the year.

Most people spend the New YearsDay in hotels.On New Years Day,people fiest greet each other. Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health theoughout the New Year.Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives.

[初一英语作文：迎新年

I have a white cat. it is a present from my mother on my birthday. it’s very beautiful. i call it mimi.

mimi is very naughty. she likes to play with me. she often runs here and there and likes running after something. mimi’s favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. i love it very much. sometimes, mimi is very gentle. she likes to wash her face and doesn’t play with me. after lunch, mimi often lies on the sofa to sleep. when i go home, mimi often jumps onto my knees. i like to give a bath to mimi.

oh, my baby the cat brings me much happiness. we are good friends. i love mimi.

"Low carbon" start small, since the sixth grade, as long as I dont save, mom and dad will speak of the words in my ear. To this end, I decided that I really want to be a low-carbon life. Remember once, mom after using the mask, just ready to throw away, just let me see, I hurriedly shouts to prevent a mother: "mom, cant throw away!" Mother heard after, immediately stop. I ran over and took the mother in the hands of the mask. Then said to his mother: "mom you have finished using the mask cant throw, said on television the mask after use can wipe furniture, not only a bright shine, and its fragrance.

"After listening to his mother, smiled and patted my head say:" my daughter really understand low carbon life. "I cant agree in front of dad, in a few days ago, because our wardrobe very damp, mom and dad are there, then I thought of my grandma often use newspaper mat in the wardrobe, she told the newspaper can be moistureproof, still can absorb peculiar smell, so I went to the newspaper, but used the newspaper all let me away, now also really didnt have the newspaper in the home, the somebody else all say" books to time square hate less "but I want to say today" newspaper when hate nothing ". Well, by the way, today I thought I saw daddy came home from work with a newspaper, I hurriedly found the father, "dad you back a newspaper today? "Dad puzzled nodded, I cant wait to say:" quick contribution out, I have an idea. "

When dad see me the paper pad in the wardrobe, harm my dad cant find newspapers and buy one. Now, I walk to school every day, no longer let father motorcycle send me; Every time I go shopping bring your own bag... I want to live a low-carbon life. Low carbon starts from me, lets construction of a new civilization, happiness, charm, donggang.

“低碳从小做起”，自从上六年级以来，只要我不节约，爸爸妈妈就会在我耳边说起这句话。 为此，我决定真的要做个低碳生活的执行者。 记得有一次，妈妈用完面膜之后，刚准备要扔掉，恰巧让我看到了，我连忙大喊一声阻止妈妈：“妈妈，不能扔掉!”妈妈听见了之后，立即停下。我飞快跑过去，夺下了妈妈手中的面膜。然后对妈妈说：“妈妈你用完的面膜不能扔，电视上说面膜用完之后可以擦家具，不仅擦得亮，而且还有香味。

”妈妈听了后，微笑着拍拍我头的说：“我女儿真的懂得低碳生活了。” 在爸爸面前我也不能服输，就在前几天，因为我们家的衣柜很潮湿，爸爸和妈妈都无计可施，这时我想到了奶奶常常用报纸垫在衣柜里，她说过报纸可以防潮，还可以吸收异味，于是我就去找报纸，但是以前用过的报纸都让我扔掉了，现在家里还真的没有报纸，人家都说“书到用时方恨少”今天我却想说“报纸用时方恨无”。嗯，对了，今天我好像看见爸爸下班时拿回来了一张报纸，我连忙找到了爸爸：“爸爸你今天是不是拿回来一张报纸?”爸爸疑惑不解的点点头，我迫不及待的说：“快贡献出来，我有办法了。”

当爸爸看我把报纸垫在衣柜里时，害的我爸爸找不到报纸又买啦一张。 现在，每天上学我都步行，再也不让爸爸摩托车送我;我每次逛街都自备口袋……我要过真正的低碳生活。 低碳从我做起，让我们一起来建设文明、幸福、魅力、新东港吧。

The bell rang and the class was over. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom. I was just chatting with some of my classmates when Li Hong came to me. She smiled and said to me, "Whats four minus four? Do you know?" "Its zero. That is easy." answered I.

But Li Hong shook her head and said "Its wrong. Its eight." "Why? Thats impossible!" "You will understand if you cut down four corners of a desk." said Li Hong. "Is that a joke?" "Oh, yes." We all laughed. During the class break, we had a good rest. We often have a pleasant break.

today is my grandpas birthday. our family went back to my grandpas home in the morning. we got together to have a big family dinner to celebrate his birthady. we bought a big birthday cake and gave some presents to my grandpa.

in the afternoon, we went to the park to go boating. we had a good time. my grandpa had a nice time on his birthday.

Hello, everyone!Let me introduce myself, I was a student in the *** school, seven Eight, my good grades, teachers, students and I are good, I like them, my after school with mystudents to play together, we are very happy together, we learn subjects: geography, politics, history, language, mathematics, English, computer and science as well as some other subjects, class schedule and at eight at night school at five 40a week eight lessons, we learned a very hard, has an extra-curricular activities after school, some students to participate, some students go home every day we had a wonderful time.

[初一英语自我介绍优秀作文

在教棒和粉笔的共同飞舞中，在老师声声叮咛，鼓励和无微不至地呵护下，多少位良师被学子深深地印在心里啊！

——题记

我在这里写的是一位普普通通，平凡得不能再平凡的人民教师，５０来岁，由于终日为我们不辞辛苦的操劳，脸上布满了皱纹，她的两眼黑得发亮，锋利的目光，仿佛要把什么刺穿似的。我有点害怕。她只教我们还不到四个月，但是，每当我想起她时。她对我们的严就像教练训练运动员那样一丝不苟；她对我们很关心，体贴，就像对待自己的儿女一样。 但是，那一次，我尽对她起了怨恨。那是一节自习课，英语老师让同学们把作业本Ａ订正好交到办公室去批改，作业本Ｂ作好的也去批改。我怀着喜悦的心情拿着作好的Ｂ去批改，＂报告＂＂进来＂她的声音很平稳，我走了进去，队伍并不长，我跑到英语老师右边去批改，无意间发现了电脑里有语文竞赛的成绩，我便很期盼得到自己的成绩，不听话的手尽往鼠标地区前行，不经意间，我触摸到了，这下手更不听使唤，一直往下翻动着，＂啊＂我目瞪口呆，倒数第三，我的喜悦心情沉淀了下来，＂谁呀，谁在动我的电脑？＂一声果断而又严厉的语言向我发起进攻，我吓了一大跳，我心里想：哎呀，这下怎么办呀，不如来个死不承认，或者，英语老师的教棒在桌上＂吃吃＂作响，＂把手拿过来。＂我害怕极了，真想使用一下神仙的仙术，把英语老师的教棒变成长长的棉花棒，只有我能看见，而老师看不见，软软的棉花棒触摸了我一下，＂哇！＂教棒落下来了，打得好痛呀，我有点生气，心里暗暗想着；你这个老太太，太坏了，我只不过碰了一下鼠标，看了电脑屏幕一眼，也不过如此，您竟打我，只要教育几下就行了嘛，我可是个怕痛的女孩。我心中的怨恨一直不能平静。但刚想完，那教棒的滋味和对老师的怨恨跑掉了，我寻找着，发现它屹立在英语老师身上展现出来的无可抗拒的人格魅力上。

她总穿着比别人温暖的衣服，长得虽不出众，但是她的人格魅力在我心中是最出众的，那一次英语课，因我们作业做得不好，而被英语老师斥责了一翻，最使我深受教育的是这样一句话：我做事情，要做就要做到最好。＂这声音在教室里久久回荡，震撼着我的心灵。一颗＇作一个高尚的人＂的种子便埋下了，自从那节课后，我猛然发觉自己长大了好多好多，幼稚正向我告别。我的心底默默地感谢这位教我如何做人的英语老师。

in the spring,everything become green,the grass come out,there are flowers everywhere.

in the summer,its very hot,you can hear birds chirping in the tree and frogs singing in the riverside.

in the autumn,everything become yellow,the fruits are mature,and wheat is ripe,its the harvest time.

in the winter,it snows here.everything is covered with whiteness.

how beautifel my hometown is!but i like winter the best.i can make a snowman and play outdoor.it is so exciting.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

This morning I get up, I heard dad shouted: "snow, what a big snow!" I dont believe at first, I looked out of the window, if its snowing, I was immediately fascinated by the beautiful scenery and see all the scenery is so beautiful outside, white printed deep shallow footprints on the ground.

Walk on my way to school, I raised his head and looked at the sky, snow, clouds, swirl falls, many light snow HuaChao, I fell on my cute little face. Snowflakes drifting into the trees, the ground and the roof, I stretch my hands to pick up the white angel, but snowflakes fall on me on the double "claws" into the water.

At noon after school, still swirl of snow, I saw, the grass on the ground, like a big, big bed on the shop of white bed, covered all of the original things, I see the dry leaves on the tree, dragging pieces of cotton in the snow, like carrying countless cream cake and cotton candy, really want to have a bite. Snow is like a butterfly dancing in the air. Remind me of "the snow" lesson learned in the text inside the sentences. "In the winter, the sky floating snow, blanket, covered with snow the tree is covered with silver, a piece of white everywhere."

Under the heavy snow didnt stop until after school in the afternoon, a day after a beautiful world? Sky blue, silvery white Snow White heads, students make a snowman, snowball fights on the snow, everybody laughed, play of very happy. I want to say to snow: "thank you for your beautiful, bring you happiness."

今天早晨我一起床，就听见爸爸大声喊：“下雪啦，好大的雪啊!”起初我还不相信，我向窗外望去，果真下雪了，我立刻被眼前的美景迷住了，只见外面的一切景物都变得那么美丽，雪白的地上印出深深浅浅的脚印。

走在上学的路上，我抬起头，望着天空，雪花一朵朵，一团团，纷纷扬扬飘落下来，许多小雪花朝我扑面而来，落在我那可爱的小脸上。雪花飘到树上、地上、房顶上，我伸出双手去接这洁白的天使，可是雪花一落到我这双“魔爪”上就化成了水。

中午放学后，大雪还纷纷扬扬的下着，我看见地上、草地上，就像铺上了一床很大很大的白被子，把原来的东西全盖住了，我看到树上干树叶上，拖着一朵朵棉花一样的雪，就像捧着无数个奶油蛋糕和棉花糖，真想咬一口。雪花还像蝴蝶在空中飞舞。让我想到了课文里学到的《看雪》一课里面的句子。“冬天，天上飘着雪花，地上铺着雪毯，树上披着银装，到处一片洁白。”

大雪下了一天直到下午放学后才停，雪后的世界真美啊!天蓝蓝的，雪银白银白的，同学们在雪地上堆雪人、打雪仗，大家都哈哈大笑，玩的很开心。我想对雪花说：“谢谢你那么美丽，给大家带来了快乐。”