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小学生英语作文带翻译:假期生活

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假期内虽不曾去旅游,可宅在家内的生活,也是百般有趣!

I did not have to travel during the holidays at home, but in life, but also a variety of interesting!

在暑假开始时,我制定了一份学习计划。可是还没实行几天我就不按计划实行了。我心想:暑假本应是玩的,我为何要这样一眼一扳呢?

At the start of the summer break, I make a study plan. But not a few days I will not carry out according to the plan. I thought to myself: this summer is play, why do I look down?

每天,上完学习班,我都是玩。后来,听奶奶说,别家的孩子都考上清华大学了。我决定要努力学习。

Every day, after class, I always play. Then, listen to my grandma said, other children are admitted to the Tsinghua University. I decided to study hard.

因此,我每天都会自学六年级的数学。我越来越觉得,学习是一件极为有趣的事情。如果你学会了,你会觉得十分高兴!

Therefore, every day I will learn the sixth grade mathematics. I feel more and more, the study is a very interesting thing. If you learn, you will feel very happy!

每天,我都会有不同的感受。听了爸爸的笑话,我会开心;听了奶奶说各处的悲哀事情,我会伤心……自然也会有不同的收获。

Every day, I will have different feelings. Listen to my fathers joke, I will be happy to listen to my grandma said; all the sad things, I will be sad...... Will naturally have different results.

暑假的时间一天天流失过去,我学的东西也渐渐多了,我的感受也不同了。

The summer time is lost in the past, I learned more and more, I feel different.

盼望下次的暑假会更有趣!

I look forward to our next summer will be more interesting!

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篇1:初一学习总结英语作文

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——阅读量大了,对语法和单词的掌握必然会更加熟练,通过阅读来理解和记忆单词语法比死记硬背效果好得多。阅读水平上去了,写作水平自然会跟着提高。

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第一步,是先看问题。问题下面的选项可以稍微扫一下,不用认真看。这样做的目的是快速了解整篇文章的大概意思和考点。也就是说你把题目看完了之后,基本就知道这篇阅读理解在讲什么了。因为有的阅读文章它的写作方式不是“开门见山”式的,往往会先闲扯两句,然后慢慢的导入主题。很多人上来先看文章,一看开头——看不懂,不知道作者想要说什么,然后就晕了头,后面的内容也就跟着糊里糊涂起来。所以我们先看题目,知道全文大意和考点,即使看文章的时候有些地方看不懂,也影响不大了。

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但是,在平时练习中,也这样做收效不大。因为只阅读一遍,看个半懂不懂,糊里糊涂的选择几个选项,然后对一下答案。这样我们花了时间,实际上没有什么收获初一学生英语学习总结初一学生英语学习总结。花了很多时间做了很多英语题目,却还是停留在原来的水平。所以说在平时练习中,既然做了一篇,就要吃透一篇,理解一篇,收获一篇。这样即使在某一篇文章上花的时间多一些,效率却比流水一样的做很多篇阅读理解要高得多。

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篇2:我的假期英语作文

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My holiday a very full life, do as the stars of heaven in number, fishing, playing basketball, reading, make me the deepest impression is the matter of...

That day, sunny, I held a basketball game with my friends.

First to choose teammates, mora ways to decide, who is not willing to choose high skill when teammates? Im lucky points in the team. The official start of the game, less than a minute, li Ming last pass the ball to me, I just close to the ball basket, a basket, into the!

Wonderful is below, and then I pass the ball to Wang Yijie outside the three-point line, he see the direction he came running, and also outside the three-point line will be shot out, into the! Its so incredible. Wang Yijie said: the more dangerous situation, I threw the ball more exact. " just that thing really proves that he has said this sentence.

Wang Yijie into triumphant, we started to serve, I had been sent to Wang Yijie he prepared to cast, but there are three people in front of the defense, even if yao Ming also helpless. Wang Yijie thought, you are less than the Yellow River dont lose heart, I will give you shine! He had three people defense, put the ball into the basket. Wang Yijie is really skilled.

At the back of the game, the two sides each have wonderful goal, a game, when a loud ringing noise across the sky, the end of the game! Although reluctantly, but everyone still reveal a sweet smile on her face.

我的假期生活过得非常充实,做的事就如天上的繁星那样多,有钓鱼,打篮球,看书,当中令我印象最深的是这件事......

那天,阳光明媚,我和几个朋友举行了一场篮球赛。

首先要选队友,用猜拳的方式来决定,谁不愿意选球技高的当队友呢?我很幸运的分在强队。比赛正式开始,不到一分钟,李明上个妙传将球传给了我,恰好我离球筐很近,一个投篮,进了!

精彩的还在下面呢,接着我传球给在三分线外的王以杰,他见对方向自己跑过来,还在三分线外将球投出去,进了!真是太不可思议了。王以杰说:越危险的情况下,我投的球越准。刚才那件事确实证明了他说的这句话。

王以杰投进之后洋洋得意,我们开始发球了,我发给了王以杰,他准备投,可前面有三个人防守,就算姚明也束手无策。王以杰心想:你们是不到黄河不死心,我就给你们露一手!他一下子过了三个人的防守,将球送入了篮筐。王以杰真是技艺高超。

后面的比赛,双方各有精彩的进球,说是时那时快,一声清脆的响声划过天空,比赛结束!虽然有些恋恋不舍,可每个人脸上还是透露出甜美的笑容。

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篇3:初一下册英语

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In recent years our life is becoming better andbetter. But our environment

is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for ourlife. Now many people have

air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off )waste gas. More and more

trees are being cut down. There are so much sand onthe earth (leaving only sand

) . We often see factories pour waste into riversor lakes. Water in the river is

quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water todrink in cities. Now we are in

danger. It’s very necessary and important toprotect the environment well. I

think if everyone tries his best to protect theenvironment, the world will

become much more beautiful , and our life will bebetter and better .

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篇4:我的假期英语

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last summer,we went to a lake with my grandmother and grandfather.i swam in the lake and i played on the beach.i liked playing on the beach.

this summer holiday,i think we will go on a trip to the ocean.i will play on a beach again!i will like swimming in the ocean!

this summer holiday went by really fast, and i am already looking forward to my next summer holiday.

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篇5:五一假期的英语

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Sunny May Day, our whole family to go to the wolong mountain park to play. Along the way the grass as if in a nod to us, floret in dance for us, the birds are singing for us, we was very happy, in the car, we soon arrived at wolong mountain park.

An enter a door, a lot of green green tree caught my eye, for the countless, how like the stars in the sky! There was a very, very big tree, Im curious thoughtfully looked at this tree, and then solemnly said: "mom, I know that what was the name of a tree." Mother said, "well you say what is the name of the tree is so big." I blurted out, "climb the lion". Mother smiled, said "yes, is getting the lion."

We laughed as he said, soon came to the bridge, the bridge above is very beautiful, the vast lake, tall building loomed as what on the surface of the water like underwater city! Soon we came to the place by boat, I asked uncle still have how long, can we turn a boat? "The uncle said:" about half an hour! I listen to the stunned, but no way, only slowly, etc., etc. For a long time.

Looking forward to finally to our ship. I immediately jumped into the boat and rowing happily, my heart is like to eat the honey as sweet, sail, I see Derek fisher is say "hello" to us, the ducks in blessing to us, bless our happy May Day. Quickly for over an hour, go back, because of the water is too big! Some water in my hand as if to remind our next remember to go to this beautiful place to play.

Ah! This is May Day, our whole family had May Day!

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篇6:有关交流英语初一

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Recently, I was so shocked by the news that a young boy died of violence

after his parents sent him to a private school. The slogan of the private school

was to help parents correct kids bad behaviors. A lot of parents choose to send

their kids here after they giving up educating their kids. The public blamed the

parents for not educating their children in the right way. There is no doubt

that the root of kids problems come from family. Many parents always force the

children to do what they want and ignore the kids feelings, so they will go

against the elders thoughts. Finally, the parents lose temper. The elder should

show respect to the kids. Communication can solve the problem. When the children

receive love and understanding from parents, they will be nice persons.

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篇7:假期旅行大学英语

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So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group。

Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don’t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal。

As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better。

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篇8:五一假期的英语

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week-long holidays,good or bad?whats your opinion?

our national day is coming. we shall have days of rest,presumably weeklong holidays again just like the weeklong may day holidays. many people welcome weeklong holidays and are busy planning where and how to spend the seven days;whereas many other people do not applaud. as to me, weeklong holidays mean a span of dullness, boredom, melancholy and helplessness, and i think anyone who had experienced the holiday sufferings in may would share my feelings.

i well remember that from may day, to be more exact, a few days earlier than may day, the shopping season started.most shops extended their shopping hours to respond to their overwhelmingly enthusiastic customers. there were special sales with discount coupons and instant lucky draws and various sales promotions in nearly every big store to lure po tential customers into spending more. crowds of shoppers flocked towards department stores, enjoying their high purchasing power.

there were traffic jams almost everywhere, people waited in long queues at bus-stops:and taxi-stands? looking entirely exhausted.tempers flared when people gotpushed or if someone else cut the queue.impatient drivers honked at each other every now and then.

the railway station was congested with travelers who rushed to the platform like a swarm of bees and then squeezed their way into the train for seats as if there would be no tomorrow.

in the restaurants, tables were shared. a platoon of waiters filed out from the kitchen armed with various containers of eatables. orders were taken feverishly and then shouted across to the kitchen. excitement reigned everywhere as waiters ran hither and thither to fill the orders.

the above are just some vivid scenes that happened a few months ago. everywhere was chaos and chaos everywhere. i am really afraid the drama will soon be repeated.

true,weeklong holidays help activate economy, but what about after-holiday depression? no doubt, people can have a lot of leisure, but leisure does not always bring a lot of pleasure.

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篇9:初一英语作文Mydreamhome

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初一英语作文 My dream home

My dream home is not very large.Its a wooden house. it is near the sea.Id like to have 5 rooms in my home.I have a kitchen ,a bathroom, a sitting room,a studyand my own bedroom. I like living near the sea because it is very quiet there. I can watch the sea and can always play on the beach.

The furniture in my house is all made of wooden.

It is good for our health. I like having a rest in my bedroom.I like listening to music of JJ while Im reading books in my room.I always ask my friends to come here.

[:初一英语作文My dream home

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篇10:我的假期高二英语作文_高二年级英语作文1400字

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My holiday, do not have some fun.

During the holidays, I can do a lot of things, for example, watch TV, playing to the students home, homework, read a book, anyway, to do what they want to, take ones ease, good ah!

In the holidays, I can do they like to do things, as for me, I like to watch TV, look at it for hours, I also like to play computer games, as long as no adults at home, they can with the desire for.

In the holidays, can also not be learning problems, can be properly self-cultivation heart, express the yearning for a better future, how good ah!

My holiday do lots of things, these things make us love life more, in fact, at home on holiday, relaxing, this is not a good thing? What is there against it? What a lovely holiday ah?

Holiday, each child is longing for the day, not only can do what I want, and also my classmates to play, so free!

You like to join?

In general, the holiday is every child s idea of heaven, everyone would want to holiday to come, like a holiday!!

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我的假期,没有一些乐趣。

在假期里,我可以做很多的事情,例如,看电视,玩学生回家,作业,读一本书,不管怎样,做他们想做的事情,以舒适,好啊!

在假期,我可以做他们喜欢做的事情,至于我,我喜欢看电视,看几个小时,我也喜欢玩电脑游戏,只要没有大人在家,他们可以与渴望。

在假期,也可以不学习问题,可以适当的修养的心,表达了渴望一个更好的未来,多好啊!

我的假期做很多的事情,这些事情让我们更爱生活,事实上,在家里度假,放松,这不是件好事吗?有什么对吗?什么可爱的节日呀?

假期,每个孩子都渴望一天,不但能做我想做的事情,和我的同学玩,那么自由!

你想加入吗?

一般来说,这个节日是每一个孩子的天堂,每个人都想要假期,喜欢度假! !

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篇11:英语作文难忘假期AnUnforgettableHoliday

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Luckily, last summer my family went to my uncle's farm.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday. During the holiday, I didn't have to get up early, nor did I need to finish many exercises. I rode the horse in the fields. I milked the cows on the farm. To my GREat joy, my uncle invited me to go fishing. Life on the farm is quite different from that at school. I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.

[英语作文难忘假期An Unforgettable Holiday

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篇12:初一关于环境的英语作文最新

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Last weekend, my family and I went to a beautiful xixi wetland.

Although there is beautiful scenery let us ecstasy, but we also saw a shocking scene.

That day, I took familys hand off the small wave rolled ship. I carefully step, on the wave rolled the ship, and also rickety at the beginning, but after sit tight, boat slowly calm down, rocking boat rowing OARS, calm water suddenly rolled up ripples. But the ship opened to open water, water quality is very bad, I saw the water no longer sparkling, but cloudy oil floating on the surface, packing box and plastic and other trash littering, originally clear water becomes cloudy. So muddy water at this moment, I think that must be a box of oil flow into the water, so will only be so dirty!

On the way back, I said to himself: "if everyone care for the environment, protecting the rivers, that every environment clean and beautiful, every river bottom!"

Lets do it together five water to rule the propagandist and executor, let us take good care of the environment, protect our home together.

上个周末,我和我的家人一同前往美丽的西溪湿地游玩。

虽然那里的优美风景让我们入迷,但是我们也看到了令人震惊的一幕。

那天,我拉着家人的手走了那小巧的摇撸船。我小心翼翼地迈出一步,踏上了摇撸船,一开始还摇摇晃晃的,但坐稳后,船便慢慢地平静下来,摇船者划着桨,平静的水面顿时卷起波纹。可是船一开到开阔的水面,水质则非常糟糕,只见水面不再波光粼粼,而是浑浊的油污漂浮在水面,包装盒和塑料袋等其他垃圾随地可见,原本清澈的水变得浑浊不堪。这时的我想,水这么浑,一定是包装盒的油污流进了水中,所以才会这么脏吧!

在回去的路上,我自言自语地说:“如果所有人都爱护环境,保护河流,那每一处环境都会干净、美丽,每一条河流都会清澈见底!"

让我们一起做五水共治的宣传者和执行者,让我们一起爱护环境,共同守护我们的家园。

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篇13:IThoughtYouWereAlwaysRight初一英语作文

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Mom was always right in my eyes before. This is what mom implanted into my mind. Every sentence she said to me was correct. So I got used to following her words. Then there came one thing lately, which made mom herself admit that she was wrong. The fact goes like this. Although mom loves me, she doesn’t like girls. So she wanted all along to have a boy.

But what she did violated the birth control policy of China. She was seriously condemned. It seemed that mom’s dream of having a boy had come to nothing. Mom, I really thought you were right at the beginning, but I was wrong.

[I Thought You Were Always Right初一英语作文

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篇14:万圣节的英语作文英语手抄报

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Halloween always falls on 31 October.Its a holiday for children.On that day,children always wear fancy clothes and masks.And then,they go from house to house to say "Trick or Treat",so that people will treat them with candies.If they dont receive any candies,theyll play a trick on people.But sometimes if the people are going out,when the children come,theyll put the candies in a carved pumpkin lanterns.Children will take the candies themselves.All of the children enjoy this holiday very much.

Halloween is for the "All Hallows Evening".

However,due to various reasons, Halloween has become the years most popular and one of the most popular festivals,and many players with great enthusiasm to celebrate this holiday.

Halloween is a holiday celebrated on October 31. By tradition, Halloween begins after sunset. Long ago, people believed that witches gathered together and ghosts roamed the world on Halloween. Today, most people no longer believe in ghosts and witches. But these supernatural beings are still a part of Halloween.

The colors black and orange are also a part of Halloween. Black is a symbol for night and orange is the color of pumpkins. A jack-o-lantern is a hollowed-out pumpkin with a face carved on one side. Candles are usually placed inside, giving the face a spooky glow.

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篇15:小学六年级假期生活英语作文

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How I Spent My Summer Vacation The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.

暑假有来了。我很高兴我能忘掉学校至少一段时间。免得我我浪费了这个暑假,我做了一个计划如何度过我的暑假。首先,我认为我应该复习所有我的老师一学期教的那些东西,这样我就可以有更好的理解。然后我想我应该参加一些不同形式的运动,如散步、跑步划船、让我身体强壮。它的原看在这样的一个很好的计划,我应该好好利用我的休假。事实上我也这么 做了,因此我没有辜负了我的计划。

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篇16:2024初一暑假英语作文:暑期难忘的一件事

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An unforgettable thing during Summer vacation

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

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暑期难忘的一件事

今天天气不错,太阳天.当我早上醒来,我决定去看看爷爷奶奶,所以我乘巴士中午到了那里,爷爷奶奶看到我很开心,而且我也很开心。

下午爸爸叫我帮他给植物浇水,看到那些在风中微笑的花儿我很开心。

总的说来,今天是难忘的一天.因为我去看了亲戚也帮助了他人。

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篇17:初一英语作文:mybusyday

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Today is my busy day.Let me tell you the plan of me .

In the morningI must get up very early to makes breakfast for my family .They have breakfast at about 7:00.Then will I play badminton outside with my good friend at 8:00.

In the noonI should back home and make lunch for them .After having lunch I will wash the dish.Then I will take part in a gathering of friends after 2:00.At 7:00pmI should make supper.

At nightI should clean the room and do some homework.

今天是我忙碌的一天。让我告诉你我的计划。

早上我必须很早就起床做早餐为我的家人。他们大约在7点吃早餐。然后将八点我和我的好朋友在外面打羽毛球。

在中午我回家应该为他们的午餐。午饭后我将洗菜。然后我将参加一个朋友的聚会在两点之后。我晚上7:00应该做晚饭。

在晚上我要打扫房间和做一些作业。

[初一英语作文:my busy day

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篇18:英语作文假期的一件事

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Summer Vacation

I enjoy summer vacation very much. Because summer vacation is the longest vacation of the year. We have more than fifty days to rest. Though it is very hot, we can either go to swim or stay in the air-conditioned room . In the evening,

I like to go shopping with my friends. We can eat many things in summer, such as ice creams, watermelons, grapes,so on.In summer, I always go on a trip with my parents. Its a good chance for us to visit some nice interesting places.

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篇19:初一英语作文Mydreamhome

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My dream home

My dream home is not very large.Its a wooden house. it is near the sea.Id like to have 5 rooms in my home.I have a kitchen ,a bathroom, a sitting room,a studyand my own bedroom. I like living near the sea because it is very quiet there. I can watch the sea and can always play on the beach.

The furniture in my house is all made of wooden.

It is good for our health. I like having a rest in my bedroom.I like listening to music of JJ while Im reading books in my room.I always ask my friends to come here.

[初一英语作文 My dream home

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篇20:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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