英语日记写作技巧(推荐20篇)

Mingming came to my house today. We spent some time playing computer games.

We played basketball game online. I chose NBA and Mingming had to take CBA. Of

course, I won finally. We had a good time.

明明今天来我家。我们一起玩电脑游戏。我们打在线篮球游戏。我选NBA 球队，明明只能选CBA球队。当然，我赢了。我们玩的很开心。

07月07日 星期四 天气：晴

今天晚上，我去上菁华浩扬英语课时，徐老师让我们分成两组举行了一场对抗赛。首先她让我们给自己的队伍起一个好听的名字，于是在叽叽喳喳的叫嚷中我们选中了“雏鹰队”这个名字，而对手却选择了“猛虎队”来做他们的队名。

竞赛开始了，老师在我们两个队各挑了一个人，让他们到黑板前写单词，“斗”了几个回合后，我们组领先了两分，对方恼羞成怒，拼命想把比分给扳回来。可是在读单词环节中他们又输惨了，结果现在我们已经领先四分了。到最后一个抢答的环节了，老师说：“这个项目是考验你们的反应能力的，猛虎队还有扳回比分的机会，要加油呀！”猛虎队员们一个个跃跃欲试，摩拳擦掌，看起来要和我们拼一个你死我活，鱼死网破了。你看在比赛中他们都反应神速，你争我抢的回答问题，可我们的队员也不是好惹得，个个争的面红耳赤，最后徐老师统计比分，我们“雏鹰队”以26：17这样悬殊的差距赢得了比赛。徐老师说：“下次你们猛虎队要加油啊！”

下课了，我们的队员还嘲笑地说：“你们地上跑的还是不如我们天上飞的吧，哈哈哈！”

Today, my parents were not at home, they had something to deal with, so

they left me alone. I was so happy because I could be in charge in my own house,

it made me feel like I was a grow-up. I wanted to give my parents a surprise, so

I planned to clean the house. It was not easy to do the house chores, first, I

swept the floor and took notice of every corner. And then I rearranged the

messed things. I just wanted to make sure the room would be very clean at first

sign. When my parents went home, they couldnt believe what I had done, they

were so happy that I could take care of myself.

今天，我的父母不在家，他们有事情要去处理，所以他们让我一个人在家。我很开心，因为我能在自己的家里面做主，这让我觉得自己是个成年人。我想要给父母一个惊喜，所以我计划清理房子。做家务真是不容易啊，第一，我要扫地，并且注意房子的每一个角落。让后我重新安置了那些混乱的东西。我只是想要确保房子的每一个角落一眼看过去是很干净的。当父母回到家里的时候，他们无法相信我所做的，他们很开心我能照顾自己。

The lesson startedn today. After the long and becaemeour boring opening ceremony, we saw our chinese teacher. She let us each ask her a queation, but it has to be specific and not too private, during the process, she said she is 30 years old and has a 5-month old daughter. Teaching in this special period of time must be hard for her. She gave us an oral test and devided us into froups, I was chosen as the leader. That took up almost the whole lesson. We used the rest of the time doing tongue twisters. Points are given according to the perform

我的周末

201_年_月_日 星期_ 晴

I have planned a happy weekend.Saturday morning, I must go to see me

aunt.In the afternoon, I must go to the shopping center to go shopping.Evening,

I planned makes the homework.Sunday in the morning, I watch the television, the

television program is e_tremely interesting.In the afternoon, I planned listens

to music and paints pictures.I thought this weekend I can be very weary, but is

certainly very joyful.

我打算过一个愉快的周末。周六的上午，我要去看望我的阿姨。下午，我要去购物中心买东西。晚上，我打算做家庭作业。周日上午，我看电视，电视节目非常有趣。下午，我打算听音乐和画画。我想这个周末我会很疲劳，但一定很快乐。

MondaySeptember1,20__ weather：__

I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends during the summer vacation.

We went there by bus. It took us about two hours to get there. It was hot and

windy that day. There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of

foreigners,we went up and talked with them. We told them lots of history of the

Great Wall. They were very surprised when they saw that our English were

exellent and we knew a lot about the Great Walls history. They thanked us a lot

and we really had a good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese.

【论文摘要】在高考英语试题中，写作是有效提高学生整体成绩的重要手段，写作是目的也是为了测试学生直接运用英语表达的能力而设置的，因此通常都会放在试卷的最后面作为压轴题出现。在高考英语写作要求中，明确提出要让考生运用所学知识进行书写，能组词成句、组句成文，语句符合英语语法和习惯。在写出的书面材料中，要求达到：切中题意，文理通顺，语言准确，得当。那么，怎样才能在高考英语写作中出类拔萃呢？这正是本文要探讨的内容。

一、有的放矢，了解高考英语写作要点

要对高考英语写作的题型及内容有所了解，才能把握好高考英语写作的考点，在此基础上才能找到行之有效的对策及方法。纵观近几年各省高考英语试题中，写作测试的命题思路，有一种从指导性写作逐步向半开放式写作过渡的趋势。半开放式写作，具体地说，就是给考生们提供一定的材料(包括图、文或图文结合)然后要求学生根据材料来进行书面表达，这样的考题形式，既限制了考生随心所欲的思维，又给予考生适当的发挥空间。这种命题方式能较好地考查考生的语言组织能力、书面表达能力以及思维能力。而在文体方面，记叙文、议论文、应用文及书信为最常见的写作题材。因此，我们可以做一个形象的比喻，写文章就像工厂里制造一台机器那样，首先要确定机器由几部分组成，然后对这几部分分别细化，形成初步的设计图；再根据要求对初步的设计图进行完善、补充、修改，随之形成最终的设计图；然后我们再按照图纸的设计，使用我们所掌握的零件去制造出机器；同样的道理，学生写作时可参照以下模式：

1．理解话题：学生在动笔前必须对指定的话题进行反复细读，认真思考，理解其真正的含义，了解出题者的意图，这是进行写作的第一步；

2．明确文体，确定人称时态：这一阶段的判断中，主要强调近十年高考最常见的两种文体：(1)说明文：必须按照事物的原貌加以说明、介绍、解释，常采用一般现在时，被动语态也常使用；(2)记叙文：通常采用第一人称，描述本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事；或用第三人称讲述他人的事情，如果是过去的事情，要用过去时。

3．初拟提纲，再理解话题：明确文体的基础上，草拟写作提纲；提纲是文章的骨架，可以是一句活，也可以是一个词组，由于考试时间所限，提纲内容不必面面俱到，但必须体现文章的整体结构和思路；目前绝大部分高中学生在英语写作时，还习惯于使用母语进行构思，然后将构思好的中文内容翻译成英文，这种情况是正常的；关键在于翻译过程中的语言表达必须符合英语语言的表达习惯

4．开始写作：提纲完成后，应根据提纲充实内容，如果说提纲是骨架的话，那么这时你必须将骨架填充血肉；具体的说就是要扩展要点，连词成句，适当地变换句型，组句谋篇成文；注意应简明扼要，层次分明、用词准确、语法概念清楚，使文章更具说服力，然后在写作完成后，还要对文章进行快速的检查，减少单词的拼写错误和句子表达的错误。

二、高考英语写作指导的具体策略

根据以上对历年高考英语写作试题的分析，我们可以从以下三个方面去指导学生进行写作：

1．细读材料，认真审题

仔细阅读书面表达题所给材料的全部内容，准确理解题目要求。需要认真审查的内容有：(1)文章的开头和结尾是否已给出；(2)用第几人称写作，书面表达要求中会明确指出使用第一人称还是第三人称；(3)提供的情景是图画、图表，还是提纲，如果是连环画，要注意故事情节的连贯性，确定合理的情节发展；(4)是否提供参考词汇，如果提供有参考词汇，写作中最好要用到；(5)采用什么文体，如果是议论文，要有论点、论据和结论三部分。如果是应用文，要注意其格式。如果是记叙文，要抓住六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、事情起因、事情的发展与结果。

2．恰当选择词语和句式

认真审题后，就可以列提纲了，将重点单词、短语、句型写在提纲里，关于选词切忌使用生僻词语，要求做到用词准确、得体、达意。选择句式时，尽量使用多种句式，如强调句、倒装句、各种名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句和固定句型等，长句和短句视情况交错使用，这样可以提高文章的档次，使文章生辉。

选词大多是在一组同义词或近义词之间进行。例如，我们要表达“好”这个意思，一般来说，大家会马上想起“good”，因为口语中我们经常说agoodfriend、goodluck、agoodpicture等。但是，在不同的短语中，可以选择不同的英语单词使表达更加准确、生动、形象。

3．多背常识性语句，扩大知识面

语言是有规律的，不同体裁的书面表达都有其常识性语句。如果同学们平时有大量的语句积累，在写作时就能把积累的东西调动起来。这些常识性语句既可增加文章的连贯性、逻辑性和可读性，同时还能提供地道的表达方式。写人物介绍时，应着重写人物的姓名、性别、年龄、职业、身高、健康状况、业余爱好、工作态度、与人相处和社会评价等语句。例如：lipingisagoodteacher，whoisthirtyyearsold．heis175centimetrestallandheishealthy．等。

【参考文献】

[1]韩金龙，秦秀白.体裁分析与体裁教学法.[j].外语界2000(1)

[2]韩金龙.英语写作教学:过程体裁教学法.[j].外语界.2001(4)

[3]何星.“过程写作法”较之“结果写作法”在高中英语写作教学中的

有效性研究.[d]华东师大专业硕士学位论文.2007

Dear Nate,

I am so excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.

Now let me tell you something about our school. Our school is the key school of

our city with the most beautiful campus. It has many trees, flowers and a lot of

grass. We have two very nice and teaching buildings and a dormitory building. In

addition, the school is well-equipped with excellent equipment, such as a new

gym, a computer room and a large library. There are also a lot of electives to

choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking. Above all, there are many

excellent teachers in our school. Classes are interesting, the teachers are

kind, well-educated and knowledgeable and willing to help students in study as

well as in life. I like my school very much. I hope you will like it, too.

Yours sincerely

Daniel

People, on their own way of life, do not be afraid of dirty! Step on the

white bone and flesh, step by step to brilliant! People, walk on their own way

of life, do not be afraid of sadness! Step by step to the light with sweat and

tears! Man! Walk on the road of your life, dont be afraid of imitating

hesitation! Follow faith and ideal, step by step out of confusion! Man!

Walking on their own way of life, it is doomed to wander! Dont hate that

you dont have a confidant, because you still have yourself! Go, go to the top,

step on your own heaven.

Dear Friend,

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember

me?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the

days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the

world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear

brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always

thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank

you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my

life.

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because

we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we

are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is

always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright

future.

Sincerely yours,

Jason

National Day, Mom and Dad took me to Suzhou on Saturday farm, where fun.

There, I ride the horse, when the back of the brave little knight. I gave the old goat the leaves, my God! Actually attracted a group of goats to grab the leaves (strange why is the old goats love camphor leaves, and do not like grazing?). I also saw a lot of animals in the farm, there are dairy cows, sika deer, lovely little white rabbits, tall camels, beautiful peacocks, ferocious ostriches, and a picture I have never seen Chicken the same, but much larger than the chicken, the neck covered with many red spots of animals, I was afraid, took the mothers hand, fleeing quickly.

There are not only many animals in the farm, there are many orchards, there are vineyards, there are pear orchards, flowers orchards, there are many, then we went to the jujube, made a return to farmers, eating their own picking dates, Taste really sweet ah!

Come back, we are very happy, I told my mother said, next time I would like to go there to play.

Today was a fine day.My sister and I went to the park.We saw many trees and

flowers near the lake.Some were green ,Some were white ,some were yellow .We

played near the lake .We were sitting under a big tree,and we made some paper

ships.We hade a good time.

家门前有个车库，有一位看车库的老人。约摸60岁，花白的头发却有着强壮的身躯。夏天，他总是拖着一双拖鞋，用力地扇着蒲扇;冬天，他又趿着一双破破烂烂的棉鞋，看着当天的报纸。他经常孤零零地坐在那张放得乱七八糟的靠椅上，翘着“二郎腿”抽香烟，还不时地盯着一些过路的行人和停车的人，自言自语。久而久之，我们院子里的孩子都十分讨厌他，讨厌他抽烟时的“烟”雾缭绕，讨厌他总是自言自语……

早晨打开窗，哇!好美呀!窗外白茫茫的一片，成了一个银装素裹的世界。鹅毛般的雪花纷纷扬扬地飘落下来，像银色的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞，它调皮地落在了树枝上、草地上、屋顶上……这是常州入冬以来下的第一场雪。十年来最大，瑞雪兆丰年，她预示着来年风调雨顺、五谷丰登、吉祥如意、幸福安康。“啊!”一声尖叫，打破了宁静，把我从欣赏的摇篮里拉了回来。怎么回事?我讯声望去，只见一个三四岁左右的小女孩被裹得严严实实的，可能因为车库门口的地滑，不慎摔倒了。她放声大哭起来。“这讨厌的老头，怎么这么没良心，小孩摔倒了也不出来扶一把!”我为小女孩打抱不平。这时，那个看车库的老人巍巍颤颤地从房间里走出来，“哎呀，小女孩，你怎么摔了呢?”老人小心翼翼地扶起女孩，说“都怪爷爷,今天不该生病，不该头痛，没力气清扫，让你摔倒,疼不疼……”我这才知道自己错怪了老人。中午，我出去吃饭，经过车库，看见老人那双冻得通红的手拿着铲子使劲地铲着车库门口的雪，想给停车的人劈出一条道。他那头发已经和白雪融为一体，佝偻的身影显得是那么动人……

那纯洁的雪呀，洗涤了我心灵的污垢，让我对扫雪老人充满了敬意…

我们已经具体讲解了如何写好人物的动作，从现在开始，我们就开始详细讲解如何写好人物的语言。在李老师支招前，我们先看下面的例子：

1．那次我考试成绩很好，奶奶很高兴，对我说：“你一定要好好学习，成为栋梁之才，为祖国的‘四个现代化’作贡献……”

2．小明的练习本子还有几页没用完就要扔掉，他六岁的表弟看见了，说：“勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德，老一辈无产阶级革命家率先为我们做出了榜样，我们要把这种传统发扬光大，勤俭持家，节约建国。”

大家看完之后发现有什么问题吗？

第1句中，一般来说，老奶奶可能不知道“四个现代化”是什么，像奶奶这样的年龄、身份，说这段话可能不太合适。另外，这些话太书面了，在日常交际中很少会这样说。如果奶奶说：“你一定要好好学习，考上好大学……”就恰当多了。同理，第2句中，六岁的表弟是不可能说出这样的话的，太深奥了。

我们通过两个句子可以发现，什么人要说什么话，闻其言，知其人。不同的

人因为年龄、身份、知识水平、性格等原因有不同的语言。因此，同学们在写人物的语言时，一定要看清对象。

这就是李老师今天要告诉大家的妙招（一）--人物语言的描写要符合人物的年龄、经历、身份、文化教养、性格等特点。

我们来具体讲解一下：

第一、人因年龄不同语言也有别。儿童天真，成人稳重，老人慈祥而语重心长。

比方说：孩子看见葡萄，会把葡萄比喻成小鲜肉丸。

我们在写人物的语言的时候，就要注意写出人物的身份。

第二、语言要符合人物身份特点。

同学们都有这样的经历：当家长送我们进教室后，会说：“好好听课，我下

课来接你。”

老师会说：“好好听课，不明白的举手问。”

第三、语言要符合人物性格特点。

语言大师老舍说过：一个老实人，在划火柴点烟而没点燃的时候，就会说：“唉，真没用，连根烟都点不着！”相反，一个性情暴躁的人呢，就不是这样说，而是把火柴往地上猛地一摔，高叫道：“他妈的！”

这就是说，人物的性格不同，语言也不同。我们在写人物语言的时候，一定要抓住人物的性格特点。

现在，请大家小试牛刀，完成下面的练笔，李老师随时和大家交流。

练笔（一）

唐僧师徒四人到西天取经。一路走来，到了一个地方。此时他们又饿又渴。假设他们每个人在单独去寻找食物时，看见了一个红通通的大苹果。

孙悟空说：___________________________________________

猪八戒说：___________________________________________

唐僧说：_____________________________________________

练笔（二）《课堂风波》

同桌的钢笔掉到地上，把笔尖摔坏了，他说是你摔的。描述此时老师、你、同桌、同学们的对话。

[作文中人物语言的写作技巧

Today is our Spring Festival together day, our relatives and friends get together to eat meal, we have got the adult children to money, very happy. Our dinner is very delicious, very big. After dinner, we watched a Spring Festival gala, very good, let us feel very interesting. Finally, we still see firework, we ourselves also put a fireworks, very beautiful, I like Spring Festival.

今天是春节，是我们团圆的日子，我们亲戚朋友相聚在一起吃年夜饭，我们小孩都拿到了大人给的压岁钱，非常的开心。我们的晚饭非常的美味，非常的丰盛。饭后，我们一家收看了春节联欢晚会，节目非常的棒，让我们感到非常的有趣。最后，我们还看烟花表演，我们自己也放了烟花，非常的漂亮，我喜欢春节。

As Chinese traditional virtue, helping others and taking care of each other

are the basic virtue of a person. We are lucky that we are born to be a healthy

person, while some persons are not that lucky, they may be born to be a disable

man or get hurt by accidents. Out of the basic virtue, it is not right to laugh

at them, we need to help each other, showing our love to them. December 3rd,

2013 is World Disabled Day, the day reminds people of the care about disable

men. The disable often ignored by us, since they are special group, we should

take care of them, give them our hands. We can do something for them, like

helping them when cross the road. We can help them from small things, helping

each other makes the world more beautiful.

Wednesday July 20th 2005

Today is Wednesday. It’s the third day of the summer camp. The weather isn’t very good. It reined all the time, and the wind blowed strongly. So I don’t feel happy. And the umbrella is too small for two persons my sister and me water always fell down into my shoes, so my feet got wet. It’s uncomfortable. I think it was really a bad day.

Today, we saw two films, but we only saw half of them. Lion King is very interesting. Tomorrow we will finish watching that. I hope this will get a good ending. Also our Chinese teacher changed a lot. I started to listen to his lessons.

This evening, we three taught Cathy about the language in my hometown. We said a word and then she guessed. She is really very clever. She can understand most of me said, and Mr.Zhang told us something about the ways to study English. I don’t agree with him. I think everyone has his (her) own best way to study English, right?

I hope tomorrow it will be sunny and we can travel around Zhejiang University, I hope so.

That’s all.

It was sunny and hot today.I got up early at half past six.I read English

and then had breakfast.I helped my mother washed the dishes.Then I did my

homework and cleaned my room.I went shopping with my mother in the

afternoon.Then I played table tennis with my friends.In the evening I watched TV

and read a book.I really had a busy and interesting day.

今天阳光明媚，很热，六点半早起，读英文，然后吃早餐，帮妈妈洗碗，做功课，打扫房间，和妈妈一起去超市购物。下午。然后我和朋友们打乒乓球。晚上我看电视，看书。我真的度过了忙碌而有趣的一天。

June 1, 2013 Sunday

It is Childrens Day todany. My parents and I went to thenearby park for

celebrations. I was enjoying the programs when Ithought of my disabled classmate

Li Xin. It is not easy for her to come out.

After consulting with my parents, we went to Li Xins home and took her to

trhe park .We bought four colored balloons,on which we wrote:Cel-ebrating

ChildrensDay. We had lunch together. After ghat, I sent her back home .Both Li

Xin and I gad a happy time today.

I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after

school.I like basketball and volleyball very much.Sports help me to keep healthy

and study better.I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.Sometimes I

listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself.Of course, I

help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash

clothes and learn cooking.Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends.We

always have a good time!

I decide to do a good girl

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy so I decide

to do housework for her more frequently. Thus she will feel happy and become

better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have

to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a

decision to be a good girl.

参考翻译

我决定要做一个好女孩

今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好，所以我决定以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖女孩。