英语日记写作技巧（20篇）

Last night, my friends and I went back to the primary school. We walked around the school and talked about the funny things that happened at that time. We were going to college soon, so we would be apart soon, but we were happy about our future school life. Suddenly, an idea came across my mind, I said to my friends that we could make a deal about four years later, we would graduate at that time. My friends were so excited about it, they agreed with me. So we made the deal that four years later, we got together here.

I started to think about what I would become four years later, maybe a teacher, or a businessman. The deal helps us to have a chance to keep in touch with each other. I am so looking forward to carrying out it.

One sunny afternoon, when I was merrily riding home, I heard "Help! Help!".

一个晴朗的午后，当我开心地骑车回家时，我听到（有人喊）“救命！救命！”。

I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. The boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home.

我（赶紧）骑到河边，发现一个大约5岁的男孩在河里挣扎。我（马上）跳进水里，游向男孩，并把他拖到岸边。男孩说他（刚刚）是在河边试着抓鱼，（后来），一不小心就掉进水里了。我要到了他家地址，并送他回家。

"Thank you very much!" The boys parents said, when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.

一当我要离开他们家的时候，那个男孩的父母说：“非常谢谢你！”尽管在那个下午，我回家晚了，但我还是很开心的。

一到冬天，我最盼望的就是下雪了。下雪，就可以和小朋友们一起玩雪仗、堆雪人……会给我们带来许许多多的乐趣。“瑞雪兆丰年”，老师这样告诉我们，说雪会给庄稼加上一条厚厚的“棉被”，会冻死许多的害虫病菌。雪，在我的印象中，一直是一个美丽的精灵。

天遂人愿，今年春节前夕，纷纷扬扬的大雪飘了起来。我们好高兴啊!但是，雪没有止的迹象，一连下了好几天，到处都是白色，人们都出不了门，只能呆在家中看看电视。电视中每个电台的报道中都出现了各地遭受雪灾的叫人担心的消息。快过年了，成千上万的旅客困在路上，不能回家和亲人团圆;有的地方雪压坏了房子，压坏了电线等通讯设备，严重影响了人们的生活，破坏了过年的好心情。不过，大雪无情人有情，在电视中，我看见国家--伯伯到了重灾区，无数的军人、干部、普通百姓走上街头，慰问受灾群众，在路上扫雪。我还看见许多司机在车上系上“绿丝带”无偿帮助路上行人回家……

我看得非常投入，“嘭……”一声清脆的鞭炮声吸引了我的注意力。原来室外的雪小了，很多人正在街上扫雪。一个调皮的小朋友迫不及待地跑到雪地中放起了烟火，被炸得七零八落的雪片夹杂在五彩缤纷的烟花中特别地美丽!雪还在下着，打雪仗的人在笑着，我想起了--伯伯的话，只要我们万众一心，众志成城，我们的爱心会融化雪灾。

逆向思维法是指为实现某一创新或解决某一因常规思路难以解决的问题，而采取反向思维寻求解决问题的方法。在做英语书面表达题时，我们亦可借鉴这种方法，从研究高考对书面表达的要求入手，以及阅卷者的感受，去迎合他们的要求，从而做到有的许矢，以求短时期内取得对书面表达的突破。

我们可以从高考作文的评分标准及阅卷的角度来审视一下对写作的要求，看看在他们的眼中优秀作文的共同点有哪些，哪些又是主要的失分点。通过研究高考书面表达卷评分标准，我们可清楚地发现，一篇高分书面表达必须具有以下特点：

内容要点齐全，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证;

准确性高，描述恰当，时态、人称符合文章要求，语法、句法准确无误，结构严谨，标点、格式、大小写亦能正确应用;

连贯性好，衔接语使用恰当，全文结构紧凑;

使用了一些较为复杂的词汇，句式，能体现出较强的语言运用能力;

开头、结尾富有特色不落俗套，给人耳目一新的感觉。

通过对高考评分标准的研究，我们可能发现高分作文有着共同的优点。我们在平时就要严格遵循书面表达的要求，认真训练，积极发现自己的问题并做出有针对性地改进。

Home to the floor dirty， my mother did not e home， I decided to sweep the

floor。 Say to work， I took a broom to clean， a dustbin full and take out the

garbage。 Although the waist is sour， people also tired， sweating sweat dripping，

can see the clean floor， my heart is sweet

译文：家里的`地板脏了，妈妈又没回家，我决定开始扫地。说干就干，我拿起扫把开始打扫，一看垃圾箱满了又去倒垃圾。虽说腰也酸了，人也累了，满头的汗水直往下淌，可看见干净的地板时，我的心里却是甜甜的。

Now, the new term begins. I live the life normal as before. Every morning,

I get up at 6:30. After washing, I eat breakfast at home. My mother always cooks

delicious and nutritious breakfast for me. I usually go to school at 7:20 by

bike. It only takes me ten minutes to get to the school. We have the morning

reading at 7:40 and the classes begin from 8:00. I usually have Chinese, math,

English and other subjects. I go home at noon and have a short rest at home.

Classes are over at 5:30. I usually play at school for a while and then go home.

At night, I usually finish my homework and then watch TV. About 10:00, I go to

bed. This is my all day.

Winter holiday is comming .In this holiday ,I want to finish my English

,math ,Chinese homework before Spring Festival .Because I have lots of things to

deal with after Spring Festival .For example I need to visit my aunt ,uncle

,grandpa and grandma at February 4th. Finally ,my homework and clothes should be

concentrated because after a few days I will go to school .I think a good

beginning is a half ending .So ,I will treasure every minute to spend my winter

holiday .

I think I will be an interpreter, because I like all kinds of the languaes.

Of course, I may be a businessman . Because I like biz,too. I will have a villa

and a robot. In ten years, My parents will have hoary hair and rimple. And I

will be more mature than now. I will be more disengaged than now, too. My family

will be richer and richer.

我认为我将会作为一名翻译,因为我喜欢各种各样的语言.当然,我可能是一个商人.因为我喜欢,真是太好了.我将会有一幢别墅和一个机器人.在十年内,我的父母会有花白的头发和rimple.主耶和华如此说、我将比现在更加成熟.我将会有更多的空闲比现在也是.我的家人会越来越丰富.

Grandma’s hand in hand to work every day， the heart rough coarse hair。 Every time I go to touch her hand， as in touch a old bark。 I thought: today I’m going to help grandma do some housework， take this as a holiday gift to send grandma。

译文：奶奶的手每一天都在干活，手掌心长出了毛毛糙糙的东西。每次我去摸她的手，就像是在摸一张老树皮。我想：这天我要帮奶奶做做家务，把这个当做送奶奶的节日礼物。

he Lantern Festival is a very busy day. On the Lantern Festival this year, I went to the small square with my mom and dad to watch the Lantern Festival. When we walk on the road, I see the small square is a sea of people, very lively. I cant wait to get a small square, where the lights are all kinds of pagoda shaped, with lights, big fish shaped lamps, saw a whoosh, a fireworks into the sky, in the sky from colorful light.

One of the lanterns slowly rising into the sky and gradually drifted toward the east.

After watching the lights and returning home, I decided that next years Lantern Festival would also go to the small square to see the lights. I believe that the Lantern Festival next year will be more lively than this year.

【技巧一】：作文成绩看字迹，得分要素是第一

任何形式的作文考试，阅卷老师打分时，第一眼，看的是字迹。因此，写作文必须要把字写好。记住，考作文考的是内容，而不是书法，切忌字迹潦草。

【技巧二】：考试作文五六段，干净整洁看卷面

考试作文中，要注意及时分段，三四个段落显得少了，八九个段落，显得琐碎了些。除非有特殊情况，段落以五六个段落为好。此外，卷面一定要整洁，不要涂改得乱七八糟。我的看法是，考试作文每段最好别超过5行，顶多是5行半。切忌一段都八九行，写成“大肚子作文”。一旦给阅卷老师视觉上的疲劳，影响他的心理，分数就受影响。如果有必要，死拉硬拽也要注意分段。

【技巧三】：色彩对比也关键，建议用笔选择蓝

考试作文的卷子上，都是用黑颜色印刷的方格。如果你用非常粗而且黑的钢笔答题，墨水容易“泄一滩”，影响卷面的干净。建议学生用不浅不深、笔画不粗不细的蓝色中性笔写作文。这样的作文写出来，与黑色的方格形成一定的视觉对比，阅卷老师在视觉上有眼前一亮的感觉，分数上可能就会占便宜。在用蓝色中性笔写作文的时候，注意不要用字把方格填满，建议占字格下面或者左下面的四分之三，这样，显得作文每行的层次感比较强。卷面显得也相对美观。

【技巧四】：开头结尾要简练，最好首尾两行半

除了切忌大肚子作文外，“大头作文”也要不得。建议考生在写作文的时候，开头结尾占两行半的卷面。顶多也不能超过三行半。想想看，一个开头就占太多的空间，阅卷老师的视觉又会有瞬间的疲劳，也会影响阅卷老师的情绪。

【技巧五】：动笔之前要拟题，漂亮标题如美女

考试作文中，一般都是由考生自己来拟定题目，题目不宜太长和太短。怎么拟题呢?对于成绩一般的考生，应该采取特别措施了。拟题的办法有2个：

一是你去搜索一下作文拟题目，可以找到作文老师讲述的类似技巧。

二是考生家长或考生，赶紧去翻阅最近一年的读者和青年文摘的合订本，根据题材，选择几十个比较精彩的标题，背下来，考试的时候可能比葫芦画瓢地就能采用到。

这是以前看完《考拉小巫的英语学习日记》的一篇读后感，真心觉得书中的每一句话都是那么平实而有感染力，她为了实现自己的梦想，大学和研究生都是翻越了一座一座的高山，而我的学生年代已经一去不复返，但是这本书给我的执行力加分，让我越来越能明白未来的路是要靠规划，并一步步的走出来的。

现在想想，我已经工作了将近十年，而这十年中，因为专业不精，所以我进步不大，但是我似乎总想呈现给别人“我在努力”的样子，但是最后没有一件事情坚持下来，因为我总喜欢找别人给我指导，可是不同的人有不同的想法。

我是笨鸟型，喜欢从最简单的事情由浅入深，比如我的专业，师傅说“每个人心里都应该有一台发动机”，这样，以后再碰到任何别的型号，都可以用对比的方法做到了然于胸，我就想着从画发动机模型开始，这时候有人又说了，不用这么麻烦，多去工厂看拆装就可以了，所以我放弃了当初的想法，去工厂看了一次次的拆装，可是看的过程用虽然很认真，并且有记录、有拍照、有注解，但是回来以后没有总结和复习，照片也丢了，这件事就这么搁浅了，我还会暗示自己，“瞧，我努力了，只是老天爷都不帮我”，然后，就木有然后了…

在接触时间管理理论后，我就觉得应该把每件事都尽力做到最好，虽然我几乎没有做到过，比如，每次出差回来的工作报告，最终都流于表面;比如每次开完会的会议记录，一共也没写几篇;比如每年要写一篇论文都没有实现…其实说白了，还是我的态度不够坚决，执行力不够，就像笑来老师说的：如果你在原则上不够执拗，不够决绝，你的大脑就会走捷径，因为走捷径是大脑会的、擅长的唯一的东西，你争不过它。这么多年你就是因为不够执拗、不够决绝而被它一路牵着走到这里的。是啊如果当初我坚持了自己的想法，我的模型应该都画好几个型号了，每个之间的差异肯定也了解的很清楚了，可惜，我啥也没做。

看完这本书，我就在想，别人为了梦想，可以付出到这种地步，为什么我不行呢?说一千道一万，我是因为不喜欢现在从事的这个专业，可是又有几个人是真心喜欢自己的工作呢?我又知道自己的梦想是什么吗?难道真的只是吃喝玩乐?说出来连自己都没底气吧!再过去的几年，我也出去玩了好多次，我总是享受旅行前的乐趣，享受一切尽在掌握的踏实，可在玩的过程用，我似乎也没有真正的放松，就像放假了还带一堆书回来想读，不能浪费时间云云，可到假期结束还是一本都没有看…

所以我想，在我心里，也许早就把这份工作当成了我的梦想，我梦想着有一天像师傅那样运筹帷幄，梦想着像大师兄一样有自己的见解，梦想着像二师兄一样进步成长的那么快…虽然我现在没有喜欢上我的工作，但我可以把她变成我的爱好，至于吃喝玩乐，这并不妨碍我把工作做好啊!我可以在向师傅学习的路上，将旅行当奖励，可以在每一次有进步时，奖励自己一顿大餐，我要充分享受以后的工作和生活!

看到这篇文章一堆的感叹号，说名当时鸡血被打的挺足的，还好现在走的方向与当初依然一致，只是“吃喝玩乐”已经不是我的追求了，我现在只盼着能多些时间、快些成长。

Environment protection

Today,I went to the park with my mother,when we walking along the lake,I

saw a couple was siting on the bench at the edge of lake, eating snacks and

casting the packaging into the lake.I was so anger to see that!I think their

behavir is very shameful.The park is a place for all citicens to enjoy beautiful

scenery ，not a place for them to cast rubbish casually.All of us should take

actions to protect our environment,only in this way can we have a clean and

beautiful world.

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保护环境

今天，我和我妈妈逛公园，当我们沿湖边散步的时候，我看到一对夫妻正坐在湖边的长椅上，一边吃零食，一边把零食包装往湖里扔。看到这种情况我非常生气。我认为他们的行为非常可耻。公园是一个提供公民欣赏美丽风景的地方，而不是一个他们可以随意扔垃圾的地方。我们每个人都应该采取行动去保护我们共同的环境，只有这样我们才能拥有一个干净美丽的世界。

Hello,everyone,Myname is Tom.I have a new english teacher.his name is Miss

LI . She comes from BeiJing,She is thin and tall.She has long black hair and she

is young and beautiful looks strict but kind.She often goes to work by bike. And

sometimes she likes piaying Table tennis,listening to music,diving and

dancing.Usualli she likes reading book.I like my English teacher very much.What

about you?

On Sunday morning, my parents took me to the zoo. We dint go there for a

long time. Last week, my classmates told me that the zoo added some funny

entertainment facilities. I was very curious. So, I asked my parents to took me

there and they promised to. We got there at 9 oclock. There were many people.

Most of them were parents and children. We first went to see the animal. I like

parrots most. And then we saw the animal shows. Elephants, tigers, lions and

monkeys did wonderful shows for us. People were happy, especially the children.

After that, we went to experienced the entertainment facilities. My mum was too

scared to be with us. So, only my dad and I played. It was so exciting, but I

was a little dizzy. However, I was very happy. It was a great day.

Last night, I had a wonderful dream. In the dream, I rode my bike in a

country road. On the both sides of the road, there are many trees. And these

trees all have different fruits, apples, pears, oranges, bananas and many other

fruits. The fruits are ripe. I can get them on the bike. They are delicious. I

eat many fruits and I am full. And then, I go back home. I tell the story to my

mother, but she doesn’t believe me. Then, I woke up.

读后感写的是自己读了一篇文章或一部著作后的感想。观后感写的是看了一部电影或一出戏剧一部电视剧一场演出一幅书画后的感想。二者的写作要求是一样的：既要写看到的作品的内容，又要写由此产生的感想;作品内容要写得简略，感想要写得具体;要有叙述有议论。怎样写出符合要求的习作呢?我们可以这样做：

一、理解作品，选定感发点。

理解作品是写读后感、观后感的前提。我们要认真研读观看作品,理解作品的写的或表现的内容是什么，要说明什么道理赞扬人物的什么精神。在此基础上思考：这篇(部)作品的哪些情节精彩，为什么说它精彩?哪个地方使自己深受启发，受到了怎样的启发?哪个地方引起自己的联想，引起了怎样的联想?自己喜欢哪个人物，为什么喜欢?自己不喜欢那个人物，为什么不喜欢?这样以来，我们就会产生好多的感想,把所有的感想排排队，比较一番，看看其中哪一个(最多两个)感想最深刻、最有话可说、最有现实意义，就把这个(最多两个)感想作为这篇读后感、观后感的感发点。

二、起个凝练醒目的题目

读后感、观后感的题目要凝炼醒目。题目可以提示出习作的内容，如《〈周恩来〉观后感》、《读〈邱少云〉有感》;也可以提示出感发点，如读了《小马过河》写读后感，用“要亲身尝试”做题目。

三、开头要简洁，为下文做铺垫

读后感、观后感的开头要简洁明快，为下文做好铺垫。如“《灯光》读后感”这样开头：“读了《灯光》，我被郝副营长的英雄事迹感动得流下眼泪。”紧扣题目只用一句话就交待明白了读的文章是什么，总的感受是怎样的，为下文介绍郝副营长的事迹和具体写自己的感受做好了铺垫。

四、引述作品有关内容再分析议论亮出感发点

为了增强习作的说服力，接下来要把作品里引发自己感发点的内容简明扼要地引述出来，再对这些内容进行分析概括和议论，然后亮出感发点。如写“《周恩来》观后感”，用几十字引述周总理到农村去访贫问苦、到工厂去视察生产、到地震灾区指挥抗震救灾、在病重住院期间还坚持批阅文件的感人事迹后，再经过一番分析议论，然后亮出感发点：“周总理为了祖国和人民真是鞠躬尽瘁死而后已呀!”别人读了会觉得习作的感发点有理有据，入情入理，值得信服。

五、立足感发点引申联想

亮出感发点后，还需要联系社会生活中类似的或相反的事例、现象，展开分析议论，以增强文章的现实意义和感染力。如看华君武的漫画《假文盲》写观后感，在亮出感发点“假文盲的行为危害了正常的社会生活秩序”后，联想到社会上一些人随地吐痰践踏草地不走斑马线等不文明不道德的行为，并分析议论他们给社会带来的危害，又联想到小同学在乘车时主动为老年人、孕妇让座的事例，与前者进行对比，然后褒扬小同学的高尚品质。这样以来，不仅文章的内容丰富了，而且有了针对性，有了现实意义，感染力就增强了。

六、结尾注意强调、升华感发点

读后感观后感结尾时要注意强调和升华感发点：如“《小兵张嘎》观后感”这样结尾：“张嘎凭着机智勇敢战胜了敌人，他是一个小英雄。我要学习张嘎，机智勇敢地应对学习和生活中的种种挑战和考验。”既强调了感发点——嘎子机智勇敢，又说了自己要机智勇敢地应对学习和生活的挑战和考验，从而升华了文章的中心。

文无定则。初写读后感观后感，同学们可以按这个步骤写，在基本掌握了写作方法后就要追求创新。相信你们一定能写出优秀的读后感、观后感。

[写好观后感作文的写作技巧

February 21st Sunday fine.

This Saturday, I learned to ride a bike, and I thought to myself, "will I fall down?" Thinking, thinking, feeling anxious.

I started learning to ride, and I rode carefully, and in less than 10 minutes I was going to ride, and I said to myself, "Im great!" Now my heart is more solid.

My good friend came, and I said, "can I ride with you?" My good friend agreed, I will ride slowly, or so carefully, afraid to fall, I held on the car, I can finally take my friends, my heart was very happy! We had a great time!

Thats how I fell in love with cycling!

Dont you see the heavy smokes from the big chimneys? Dont you smell the gas from the motors all around the streets? Weve got much dirtier air! The iceburgs are melting from the warmer winter because of the air pollution!

难道你没有看到浓重的烟雾从烟囱里冒出来吗？难道你没有在街上闻到从机动车上排出来的气体吗？我们得到太多肮脏的空气了！因为气体污染，冰山在暖冬的时候融化了不少。

Dont you see there are less lives in the water? Dont you see that we must pay higher cost in water processing? Weve got much darker water running around! The oceans are in danger.

难道你没有看到水中的生物越来越少了吗？难道你没有看到我们必须花更多的成本加工水源吗？我们到处开采深水。海洋正处于危险之中。

Dont you see the mountains getting bald ? Dont you see our ground becoming hollow ? Weve been exhausting the resources beneath the earth. Our grandchildren will live on nothing.

难道你没有看到山峰正变得光秃秃吗？难道你没有看到土地正变得空空的吗？我们正耗尽地下的资源。我们的孙儿将无法依靠任何事情生活下去。

We have only one globe. Treasure the mother nature!

我们只有一个地球。珍爱（孕育万物的）大自然吧！

It was sunny and very hot today.I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast.Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room.After a short rest I did my homework in the morning.In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends.It was really cool to swim in such a hot day.I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening.I really had a busy and interesting day.

译文：今天天气晴朗比较热。我起得很早，帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很有趣。

Cheer Up!

Life is full of ups and downs. Success always comes along with failure.

Suffering from the boring cold, my brain remains empty. I even don’t know

how to start of a simple diary, though it’s a piece of cake for me long long

ago. I have never lose faith in my ability of studying English even though I

fails now and them. But now I do because my diaries hold no promise. I don’t

know what I keep diaries for. I can’t come with any conclusions.

Maybe success prows out of struggle to overcome difficulties. Cheer up, may

giving up will get a rest.

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