英语日记写作技巧【汇编20篇】

Now,I study in the No. I middle school, where there are three grades and thirty-two classes. It is not big but very beautiful.

In the center of the school there is a new teaching building, which is very clean and beautiful. The lab building and the library are to the east of the new building. There all kinds of book in the library. You can enioy them as many as you like.

South of the new building lies a playground and its very big. On the playground, you can have sports such as foo tball. basketball. Youd better play basketball as there are four basketball grounds in our school, You can enjoy yourself very much.

There are many trees in our school.Grass is everywhere. In front of the new building there are two gardens in which, there are flowers of all colours.

We are studying hard in our school, Our life is happy and intcrcsting. I love our school very much.

Dear Bob，

How is it going these days?

I make some new plans for myself. My first resolution has to do with selfimprovement. I want to join an English club to improve my English. I want to get good grades next time. The second is about personal health. I am going to eat less junk food and do more exercise. Finally，I want to learn to take photos in my free time. I will tell my family about my plans so that they can help me.

My Weekend

I have happy weekend.

On Saturday morning，I always have English classes at school. I study hard

in the classroom. In the afternoon，I often play computer games. On Sunday

morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather.

Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go

shopping.

So I love weekends.

我的周末

我有一个快乐的周末。

星期六的早上，我总是在学校上英语课。我努力学习。下午，我经常玩电脑。星期天早上我经常画画。有时候我去看望我的外婆和外公。有时候我听音乐。星期天下午我经常做家务或者购物。

所以我喜欢周末。

Today, I want to go for an autumn outing, Dad give me prepare many

delicious. 8 points the mother sent me to school, the teacher with when we got

to the car. The embroidered Hill Park, everyone happy on the ground floor of the

car, we enter the gate see beautiful flowers. The teacher took us to a small

river, we see many beautiful fish, I would buy the a bag of fish food for the

fish to eat, suddenly a big fish swim over the fish away, I dont want to feed

the fish food to the students, I bought three fish.

今天我要去秋游，爸爸给我准备了许多好吃的.8点了妈妈送我去学校，老师就带着我们上了车.到了绣山公园，大家高兴地下了车，我们一进大门就看见美丽的花草.老师带我们来到小河边，我们看到许多美丽的小鱼，我就买了一包鱼食给小鱼吃，突然一条大鱼游了过来把小鱼都赶走了，我也不想喂了就把鱼食给了同学，走时我买了三条鱼.

It was the eighth day of our summer holiday.I felt good.I felt I am free.My

parents went to camping.So I live alone but I dont feel lonely.I stayed at home

and watched TV.I wrote an English daily composition.It was my homework.Today, I

have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired.It was time for dinner.I must

go!I am very hungry.

一、 教学目标：通过片段训练，使学生能进行细致的描写。

二、 教学重点：片段练习

三、 教学难点：通过片段练习，掌握进行细致描写的技巧。

四、 教学设想：演示实验——练习——分析——片段练习——方法

五、 教学过程：

(一) 组织教学、课堂导入： 同学们在学习语文的过程中，感到最可怕的是写作文，往往胶尽 脑汁而无处下笔， 搜肠刮肚找不到一个词语。 其实，

你们都是幸运的， 因为前人留给我们太多的宝藏，

“孔子的‘三人行，必有我师’，李太白的杯中酒，曹雪芹笔下的十二金钗，只要我们能多读好书，再掌握一定的作文技巧，又何愁写不好作文呢?这节课，就让我们一起解决作文中的一个难题：

“怎么进行细致的描写”?

(二) 讲授新课

1、 教师演示：教师手拿一个纸飞机，用力射出去，然后飞机掉 教师演示到了地上。 要求： (1)同学们要仔细观察，然后用一段话进行描写。

(2)同学们之间交流、分享。

2、摘录例句： 、摘录例句： a、老师把纸飞机用力的射了出去，飞机在空中飞了一圈，掉到 了地上。

b、老师右手拿一个纸飞机，高高向斜后方举起，身体向右倾斜 45 度角，右脚后退一小步，头微微抬起，向斜上方看，用力的将

飞机射了出去。飞机在空中像一个翩翩起舞的女子，画了一道优 美的弧线，轻轻地站在了地上。

3、分析：这两段话，你认为哪段写的好?为什么?

4、教师引导分析：得出“描写三原则” 。师总结：描写是什么呢?我认为描写就是把你看到的东西，可能是一 个人、一件物品、一个场景，告诉没有看到的人。

如果你要告诉别人什么，

首先一定要告诉别人。师总结：描写时，除了告诉别人“有什么”“怎么样”外，还要告诉别人“像什么”(板书：像什么)运用一定的修辞，这样才能使你的作文生动形象。“有什么”使我们明白了描写的对象，“怎么样”使描写具体起来，而“像什么”使描写变得更形象、生动，这三点就是描写三原则。

5、下面，同学们按照描写的三原则，检验一下自己刚刚的描写，进行修改。

6、教师让同学们将自己修改后的片段读出来，然后同学之间进行互评，教师让同学们将自己修改后的片段读出来。

7、美文共赏： 朱自清的《春》 分析：春天里“有什么”? 春天里“怎么样”? 春天的事物“像什么”? 8、作业：每人发一张图片——小鸭游水图，

让同学们课后按图片所画进行 描写练习。 要示：用词准确，100 字左右。

9、板书设计：三式妙法巧绘大千世界

1、有什么(对象) 描写三原则： 2、怎么样(细致) 3、像什么(修辞)

10、教学反思：通过本节课对描写的练习，同学们都有一个感觉：原来作文很简单。这也是这节课，我要告诉同学们的一个道理——作文 并不难。

但也有一部分同学词句匮乏，以后教学中，一定要加强词句的积累。

It was sunny and warm day. I got up early. After breakfast I went to ..Mountain with my friend Li Lei. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. There were thousands of people. We joined them to climb the mountain as soon as we got there. We felt tired but we kept climbing. It took us about an hour to get to the top of the mountain. The wind was so cool and the scenry was very beautiful. We had a picnic and then we walked down from the mountain. We were very happy that day. In the evening, I surfed the internet and then read an interesting book. I really had a meaningful and happy day.

Beijing has a long history . There are lots of places of interest .

Every year lots of travellers go sightseeing . Last summer holiday , I went on a trip to Beijing with my parents .

It took us two hours to go there by plane .As soon as we arrived there ,we went to visit the Palace Museum and Tian’an men Square . The next day we went to the Summer Palace . The view there was very beautiful . We tasted many famous delicious Beijing foods . such as Beijing Duck .I also bought some souvenirs for my friends .Although we felt very tired ,we enjoyed ourselves very much .

I hope to visit Beijing again very soon.

No sooner had the summer vacation begun than I returned to my native town. Of course I must make good use of it;.In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. At night I watched television with my family. hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to bed.

To tell you the truth, I dont like the Spring Festival at all. When I was

young I liked it very much,because I could had something tasty to eat during the

Spring Festival,and I could enjoy very wonderful TV programmes,too. I also could

had much free time during which I could did something I liked to do. I dont

like it now, there are many reasons.

Firstly, I cant have a good time during the Festival. Every New Years Eve

something unpleasant often happens. Once I quarreled with my second brother.

Secondly, I cant relax myself during the Festival. I have to do many

things, watch so many TV programmes, meet so many people,all these things make

me very tired.

Thirdly, spending one Spring Festival means that I become one year older. I

dont like to be old. I want to live longer and be young all the time.

Readers, what is your opinions about the Spring Festival? Please tell us,

we can share our opinions. Thanks for reading! Goodbye.

参考译文

说实话，我一点都不喜欢春节。不过我年轻的时候，我非常喜欢，因为我可以在春节吃到美味佳肴，我可以享受到非常精彩的电视节目。我还可以有很多自由时间来做我喜欢做的事情。现在我不喜欢了，有许多理由。

首先，在节日期间我玩得不开心。每年除夕夜总有不愉快的事发生。有一次我跟我的二弟吵架。

其次，在节日期间我自己无法得到放松。我要做很多事情，看很多的电视节目，见很多的人，所有这些都让我感到很累。

第三，度过一个春节意味着我又老一岁了，我不喜欢老。我想活得更久，并且永远年轻。

读者们，你有什么关于春节的想法吗?请告诉我们，我们可以分享我们的想法。感谢您的阅读!再见。

Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents.

Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part

in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and

refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men

in the world.Time passed quickly. In a twinkling, the clock on the wall struck

nine. We could not but say “Good-bye” to one another

不管做什么是，找对技巧很重要。下面语文迷网整理了英语六级的写作技巧，供大家阅读参考。

一、 长短句原则。

工作还得一张一弛呢，老让读者读长句，累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、 主题句原则。

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事!

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

三、 一 二 三原则。

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐，原因：俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐，原因：俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐，原因：俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐，原因：俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、短语优先原则。

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。

其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如：I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则

原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。

比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable 之类的形象词。

再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room 所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩!

六、 多变句式原则。

1)加法(串联)都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用：besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：When to go, Why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一举)如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、挑战极限原则。

既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀!原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果你可以写出这样的句子，不得高分才怪!

tknown before. I gain some knowledge about animal life, such as, different

lives of various kinds of animals, the relationship between people and nature,

people and animal, and the importance of animal protection. I want to say that

animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans.

We must keep nature in balance. Please give your love to animals. Stop killing

them.

scourage and stamina. He lost his gold medal because of his illness. As

soon as he regretfully put down his gun, he fell unconscious and was earried

away on a stretcher. Mo Huilen also lost her gold medal painfully. The young

girl was not satisfied with a silver and braved for the gold at the risk of

losing it. She showed the true spirit of sportsmanship. I sing in praise of them

even if they lose. In my opinion we should praetice what we preach and stick to

the Olympic creed that the most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to

win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the

triumph but the struggle. The essential thing is not to have conquered but to

have fought wen.

slove animals. Never do any harm to them.

以前就知道了。我对动物生活有了一些了解，比如，各种动物的不同生活方式，人与自然的关系，人与动物的关系，以及保护动物的重要性。我想说的是，动物和我们一样都是自然的一部分。它们离不开人类。我们必须保持自然的平衡。请把你的爱献给动物。别杀了他们。

勇气和毅力。他因病失去了金牌。他一遗憾地放下枪，就不省人事，被担架抬走了。莫慧琳也痛失金牌。这个年轻的女孩对一枚银币不满意，冒着丢失的危险去抢金子。她表现出真正的体育精神。即使他们输了，我也要赞美他们。在我看来，我们应该践行我们所宣扬的，并坚持奥林匹克信条：奥林匹克运动会最重要的不是胜利而是参与，正如生命中最重要的不是胜利而是斗争。最重要的不是征服了，而是战胜了_。

爱动物。不要伤害他们。

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日记一般分成生活日记、观察日记和随感日记三种。

1、生活日记。

生活日记，就是把自己每天的生活、学习、工作情况有选择地记录下来。要写好生活日记必须注意以下几个问题：

（1）内容要真实。生活日记是自己经历的实在记录，而且要给自己看的，内容真实才有查考的价值。

生活是七彩的，它多姿多采地呈现在我们每个人的面前。学校、家庭、社会，都会有时代的浪花飞溅，只要我们能自觉地去观察生活，观察周围的人和事，你就会发现一个“宝藏”，就会有源源而来、取之不尽的真实材料。

（2）事情要有意义。有的同学说，日记就是把自己一天中亲身经历的，或所见所闻所感的东西记下来，记得越多越详越好。如有个同学写 正月初一的日记，把这一天当中所有的事都记下来：早晨起床吃饺子，而后给陈老师拜年，到学校游园活动，中午到外婆家吃饭，下午和表弟一起上街，晚上回家看电视，临睡前写日记……简直是眉毛胡子一把抓，成了典型的流水帐。日记的篇幅毕竟是有限的，同学们不可能把一天中的大事小事芝麻事件件都写进去。一般要选择印象深刻的，有意义的一两件事记下来，其他的不写或略写。

（3）语言要简明、通顺。写生活日记，内容可长可短，但语言必须通顺明白。

2、观察日记，即观察记录。就是把日常生活中的某一侧面，通过有目的的，细致的观察，把它记下来。可以写零碎的片断，不必讲究文章结构；也可以写得比较完整，类似一篇记叙文。经常写观察日记，可以提高观察能力，养成观察习惯，还可以积累写作素材，提高语言表达能力，这种日记最适宜我们小学生记。

要写好观察日记，必须注意以下几点：

（1）观察目的要明确。观察，有多种多样的目的，或为了积累写作素材；或为了进行科学实验；或为了弄清楚某种“奥秘”……只有目的明确，观察才有方向，才有重点。就是观察同一对象，由于目的的不同，方法和角度就不同，结果也就不一样。

（2）观察要全面细致。全面，就是要对事情发展的全过程，事物构成的各部分，以及事物之间的相互联系，观察清楚；细致，就是要求观察深入、彻底，抓俗语事物的特点，规律和本质。

（3）观察要持之以恒。观察事物难于一次完成，需要反复进行。这就要同学们有恒心。

（4）观察日记的语言要准确。观察日记有很强的科学性。因此要求使用语言要准确，不能用“大概、差不多”这类似是而非的词语。

3、随感日记。

这种日记主要是就一篇文章、一本书、一部电影或生活中的某一件事情，抒发自己的感想。日记中以议论为主，叙述是为了议论，有时整篇日记都是写自己的感受。

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I

decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and

become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase

you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I

make a decision to be a good girl.

今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

My aunt went to Nanning to see me yesterday. I was very happy. She arrived

on friday niht. On Saturday, we went to the zoo, which has many interesting

things. There are lovely delphis, sealions, special birds, acrobatic show, and

so on. However, the most excited thing is the Roller Coaster, which is the thing

that I dream to play but dont dear. Having hesitated for a long time, I decided

to play once. In fact,I wasnt too afraid to play it. When we went out the zoo,

it was already six oclock. It was our dinner time. After dinner,I had to go

back to school. Its a wonderful day!

你于“五一”前夕 ––––4 月 28 日上午九点钟，与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加一次公益劳动（ voluntary labour ），全班分成了三组，关于在五一的日记。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。

劳动任务安排

参考词汇： litter 果皮纸屑等废弃物

注意：

1. 短文必须写出提示及表格所列出的全部内容。

2. 词数 100 左右。

3. 日记的格式已为你写好，中考英语作文《关于在五一的日记》。

April 28th Saturday Fine

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精品习作

April 28th Saturday Fine

It was Saturday， just before May Day. My classmates and I went to the park nearby， we didnt go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.

We got there at 9：00. We were divided into three groups and then began working. The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches. The group I was in got to the Childrens Playground and wiped all the equipment clean. We worked very hard. At 11：00， when all the work was finished up， all my classmates met again. Although everyone was in a sweat， yet we felt happy because we had done good job.

My Family

My name is Li Hua. I am from a workers family. There are six people in my

family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my sister

and I.

Every member in my family works for his or her own trade①. My grandfather

and grandmother are peasants. They do farm work every day in my hometown. My

father is a senior engineer. He is now working in Africa, helping to build a

power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a middle school.

My sister, five years older than I, is a doctor in the Peoples Hospital of our

county. She loves her work and does it well. I am a middle school student. And I

am going to take this years college entrance examination. I wish that I could

be enrolled② by a famous university.

That is my family. All the members in my family live in harmony③. We love

each other devotedly.

I went to visit one of our teachers with some of my classmates this

morning. Miss Jones is our English teacher and she likes all the classmates. She

tried so hard to help us to improve our English. We went to her flat and had

lunch there with her. We had a good time.

今天早上我跟同学去看了我们老师。Jones小姐是我们的英语来时。她对每个学生都很好。他花了很大力来帮我们供给我们的英语。我们去了她的公寓，一起吃了午餐。我们过的很开心

Today I had nothing to do again, so I started to write about my boring

summer days again. I dont have much interest in English since Im Chinese, but

I still have to write these boring summer journals because they are my

assignments from school. Im only doing this assignment because I respect my

English teacher.

参考译文

今天我又无事可干了，所以我又开始写我无聊的夏日了。我不太喜欢英语，因为我是中国人，但我仍然要写这些无聊的暑期刊物，因为它们是我学校的作业。我只是做这个作业，因为我尊敬我的英语老师。

Today,my parents take me to Qingdao.I see the beautiful blue sea.Some

people are playing games near the seaside,and also many people are swimming in

the water.We stay in the water for about one hour and then come back to the

beach for lunch.I eat many many sea food.What a nice day!

带翻译：

今天爸爸妈妈带我去青岛.我见到了美丽的蓝色的大海.有的人在海边玩耍,还有很多人在水里游泳.我们先在水里待了一个小时左右,然后回到海滩上吃午饭.我吃了很多海鲜.多么美好的一天啊!