英语日记写作技巧(20篇)

从总体来看，命题作文有以下规律：

第一，绝大多数文题涉及的内容充分贴近学生生活；

第二，大题、宽题大大多于小题、窄题，便于考生自由选材；

第三，记叙文题大大多于说明文、议论文题；

那么，我们都应该注意一些什么呢？

1.要审题上，要做到“瞻前顾后、一字不漏”

对于题目应从头至尾反复领会、研读，不得忽略一处。

要审读的内容包括：

①文题的大、小、宽、窄、虚、实、显、隐。

②文题中有没有点示主题的字词。

③文题中有没有点示重点的语言标志。

④文题中的的标点或其它符号及其含义。

⑤有没有副标题，其作用是什么？

⑥各种写作要求、限制。

⑦能否从题目以外的语言材料中品味出一点隐含信息。

在写作中，要紧紧抓住审题得到的“信息”，步步都要紧扣文题，紧扣要求。

另外，在具体的审题过程中，对这样几种内容的题目不可掉以轻心：

第一种，看似很浅显的题目

如“我长大了”这个文题，是一个宽泛的中考作文题，谁也不会在取材上发生困难，看样子真是浅得不能再浅了，但实际上，这个题的关键在于对“长大”的理解。如果在审题之中认为“长大”的含义只是生理、身体的变化或是学会了某种生活技能、能够料理自己、胆子变大了，或者能对付别人的欺负等，这种理解就很肤浅，写出来的文章在选材立意上也就上不了档次。如果说能寓理于事，从不同的角度写出正处于花季年龄的初中生成长中的追求、向往、烦恼和困惑，以及对人生的初步认识，写出人生中的各种各样的责任感已经在心中出现，那么，这样的思考就是准确地把握了文题的含义。

第二种，看似很熟悉的题目

如“美在课余”这个文题，是一个宽题。可供取材的内容也是不少的。其实这个题目有一个“迷惑点”，这个“迷惑点”在“美”字上。稍不注意就会由于觉得这个文题似曾相识而忽视对“美”字的品读。没有抓住这个“美”字，就会写出“丰富多彩的课余”、““有趣的课余”、“热闹的课余”等内容。

第三种，看似很形象的题目

如“风景这边独好”这个文题，也是一个宽题，题目似乎很“形象”，但远不是从字面上理解的那么简单。它既可以写实，如写一个地方的风景，写一个地方的景物特点，写一个地方的景物的变化，但更重要的是应该写这个地方的发展，写这个地方的特色，写这个地方表现出的时代的进步。再换一个角度思考，它不仅可以写“地方”，还可以写人，还可以写事，等等。

第四种，看似很直观的题目

如“礼物”这个题目，好像一看就知道是什么。但在具体的写作中，它可能是实指——某种物，更多的也许是喻指——像“礼物”一样的美好事物。用“喻指”来写文章，其思路更广，其情感更丰富。不管命题作文的形式多复杂，你要永远盯着它的题目。

就让学霸来告诉你，命题作文到底该怎么写

2.在取材立意上，要做到“大中取小，以小见大”

题目要求只是划出了一个取材立意的框框，需要我们选用自己最熟悉的内容将其具体化。对这样一些文题，要做到“大中取小”，将其“具体化”：

第一，将宽题变“窄”

所谓宽题，就是从内容上看，可以包含许多题材、许多素材的题目。由于它的“宽”，似乎许多材料都可以用来写作文，我们就必须选准材料，把作文的内容“浓缩”到一个点之上，使之变“窄”，以便顺利成文。

如“火柴的联想”是一个宽题，它可以让你联想到非常多的事，非常多的人，非常多的现象。但这种丰富的联想只能是在构思过程中，必须从这丰富的联想中决定一个供展开的“联想点”，才能开始考场作文的写作。

第二，将大题变“小”

所谓大题，其实也是一种宽题。从“意义”上看，有些题目的主题比较直露，

比较追求一定的“意义”。如文题“变了”，从这个“变”字上看就是要求你在文中一定要点示出某种“意义”。

对于这样的题，我们可以用加“限制”的方法将其变“小”。

如“变了”这个题，我们可以在题目前加上限制性的语言，如“我们家变了”，也可以在题目后面加上副标题，如“变了——从一件小事看我们的班风”。

3.在构思上，要做到“或一点式伸展，或多点式铺陈”

“或一点式伸展，或多点式铺陈”，是中考作文构思的总策略。

“一点式伸展”就是一篇文章内只将一个内容写好、写细、写完整，“多点式铺陈”就是在文章中多写几个内容，将它们有机地组合。

4.在表达上，要做到：注重文体特征，表现个性特点

注重文体特征，就是要充分准确地表现文体特点，而不要出现将“读后感”写成“读后叙”、在“家乡变了”中穿插一半篇幅的议论、将“自强的我”写成自我介绍等模糊文体色彩的错误。

表现个性特点，要表现出运用语言文字的技能技巧，认真遣词造句，稳妥布局谋篇，从语气、结构、主题等方面磨练文章。

July 18 2015

I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my

friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to

someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were

having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends.

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。

表达年龄的方式有：Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

Mother told me that we will go to Guilin for a trip today. I am very excited because the views there are beautiful. But there is still one day to go and I feel impatient. I think people there must be polite and so should I. Otherwise, we couldnt get well along with each other.

【参考翻译】

妈妈今天告诉我马上我们就要去桂林玩了。我很高兴也很期待。因为那里的景色很美。但是还要等一天，我有点迫不及待了。我想，那里的人一定很有礼貌。我也要学着礼貌一点。只有这样，我们才能和睦相处。

Yesterday was my birthday， so some of my classmates sent me presents。 Mother prepared a tea party for me。 I invited all of them to e and take part in it。The tea party began at half past six。 There were cold drinks and refreshments。 We ate， talked and laughed。 We felt that we were the happest men in the world。翻译：昨日是我生日，所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。

英语经常需要写作文，你知道怎么写吗？和小编一起来看看下文关于英语写日记格式 ，欢迎借鉴！

星期， January 18，cloudy（阴天的）等，表示天气情况的词一般是形容词。

常用一般过去时；但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时。

2011 Friday Sunny I am free now as I am spending my winter holiday. Although we have some homework， we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and got new life. We havent enough time to play，。

则是对某人物事物的特征做细致的描述，

１．格式：一般是在左上角记上当天日期，也可省略不写，如：fine （晴朗的）， to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go， I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least。

因此， 描写型或抒情型，注意内容表达要清楚连贯、准确，都是在正文之前有日期、星期几及当天的天气情况，rainy（下雨的），日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去，有时也可以在第二天补写。

发表议论， 议论型是对生活中的某一事情或情况现象谈自己的看法， we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays，写法大致和写汉语日记相同，是用来记叙一天中所发生的有意义的事情或对将来的打算等， we will get the real life which belongs to us. ，日记的小标题写在下一行， 记事型是用英语记述当天自己生活学习中发生的事情，日记可分为记事、议论、描写及抒情等，snowy（下雪）， 英文日记和汉语日记一样， I will have a good rest. I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didnt go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch， we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later，星期写在日期之后；右上角写上当天的天气情况， 下面是一篇关于英语日记范文，

２．时态：写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上，时间的排列法与书信一致，sunny（阳光充足的），或针对某事物抒发自己的感情，cold （寒冷的），可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。

篇一英语写日记格式怎么写

In my home town, many students learned English in high school. In hing school of grade 1. we learned A. B. C. So we are studying more than other students. But our English is not very good. So my mother let me come here and she tole me that you must learn to look after yourself. And now I miss my mother very much. My father’s birthday is coming. But I can’t be with him. So I am very sad.

I hope my father can be happy on his birthday. And I will make a phone to my father.

My father is very kind. So I love him very much.

班主任评语: Be confident with yourself. Practising a lot will improve your English. And send my best wishes to your father.

篇二英语写日记格式怎么写

Today is the second day of my summer camp. Now it’s moon. I just can write something my forenoon.

I got up earlier than yeaterday, so now I’m very tired. I really wanted to sleep. Why don’t I have more breaktime?

In the class, Mr. Brodie taught us two passages. It’s unit 1 and unit 2. their names are “the Man in the Blue Car”and “There’s something in the Mattress”. They’re interesting. In passage one, Mrs. Thompson make a mistake. Her cat is on top of her car. In passage two, there is a snakein the matress! It’s so horrorible.

I don’t like Bible, but I must learn it in the afternoon. I’m very sad. But at night, we can see a movie. I don’t know which it is . I think it’s interesting, because of it’s English, and we can learn from it.

篇三英语写日记格式怎么写

The Cafeteria of Zhejiang University

As I live in Zhejiang University, I eat every meal in the cafeteria of Zhejiang University. Since the first time I went there, I like it very much. Firstly, it is very big and it allows about all the students to have the meal at the same time. Second, zhe equipments are very advanced and modern. And it looks very beautiful and it makes a good eating atmosphere. There are many workers in it and do the different jobs to give the best help to the students and teachers. I find that the food in it are not only delicious but also nutritious. I’m glad that I can enjou meals in the cafeteria of the Zhejiang University.

篇四英语写日记格式怎么写

Things become better and better. The food is more delicious than before and the bed is more comfortable. Maybe I conform to them.

I have known more and more classmates’ names, such as soul, Huang Wu, Lin Beiyu and so on. I’m very happy that I can remember many students’ names, though I can’t remember all . because in the past I couldn’t remember new students’ names clearly, just like ”Huang Yucheng”, I ofen remember her name as “Huang Chengyu”. I don’t know why I make mistakes, but now, I remember .

In the class, we become more and more audacious. Some people can put up their hands and speak loudly. I think it’s very good. In my junior middle school. English classes are very terrible. There is neither speaking nor games. We just write down what the teacher says. It’s very boring. I dont like English classes like this. In Zhejiang University our English classes are very colorful.

篇五英语写日记格式怎么写

This morning we discussed friendship in class. It reminded me of a friend of mine.

He is my classmate. He has learnt physics here for 10 days. I met him in the dining room a few day s ago. I was so excited because I had just come here and didn’t know what would happen. To many chinese people, meeting an old friend out of their homerown is one of the happiest things in life. I agree.

Druing those days, he was always encouraging me when I feel sad and helping me to get out of trouble. In my mind, he’s just like my borther. He will leave here tomorrow, maybe he will say goodbye to me in French to make a joke, I think I won’t laugh. I will not cry for his leave either. I just want to see him leaving with my eyes.

I am a girl who has lost a friend carelessly, so I can imagine how important a friend and friendship are . a friend is a peoson who care about you except your parents. I will leave a room for my friend with the messages he went to me. Maybe the friendship between us will last long.

篇八英语写日记格式怎么写

It is good to keep a diary in English.

Keeping a diary in English does a great deal of good to my English study. Keeping a diary can help you review all the English knowledge you have learned. For example， you must know the correct spelling of each word needed in the diary; you must use the phrases correctly and choose the suitable sentence patterns， meanwhile， it is also necessary to use you knowledge of grammar in a correct way.

Keeping a diary can help you not only to console your knowledge of English， but to form the habit of thinking in English. Practice makes perfect. By and by， your English writing will be greatly improved.

篇七英语写日记格式怎么写

August 5,2000 Saturday Fine

Early in the morning,we all set off for the beach.We took a lot of pictures on the way.By noon we arrived at the hotel.After having lunch there we went to the beach.We were so tired that we spent the whole afternoon lying on the beach and swimming a lot.On the way back to the hotel,we went shopping for presents.In the evening it rained.We all stayed in the hotel and played table tennis.We had a good time today.

Do you know what a snowman is? Let us a make!

First, we make a big ball of snow. Then we make another is smaller than the first snowball.

Now we make another very small snowball. We put it on top. Let us make a face on the snowman. Carrot is his nose. Some little

rockets for his mouth and eyes. Two sticks for his arms.This hat are on the top for his hat.

Ok!The snowman is wonderful.

你知道雪人是什么吗？我们来做一个吧！

首先，我们做一个大雪球。然后我们做一个比第一个小点的雪球。

现在我们做另一个小点的雪球。我们把它放在上边。让我们来制作雪人的脸吧。胡萝卜是他的鼻子。一些小的身故体验深谷他的嘴巴和眼睛。两个树枝是他的胳膊。这个帽子放在上边作为他的帽子。

今天，我们全家去广东省的博物参观。下面，我和大家说说博物馆的见闻。

首先我们参观了潮州木雕。潮州木雕起源于唐代，经过明代，再到清代，最后到民国初期。

潮州人木雕采用的木料是樟木、梨花木、杉木…… ……潮州木雕的制作有沉雕、明雕、暗雕、浮雕…… ……

我们看了个作品。有一个老鼠和一串葡萄。讲解员说：“老鼠的繁殖能力很强，葡萄也很多籽。这就意味着多子多孙。”

我们还参观了潮州人的卧室。讲解员说：“潮州人是很爱干净的。连内、外衣都要分开来洗。”从这句话中，我感觉到了，潮州人是很爱干净的。我们要向他学习。 讲解员：“让我们猜那 张床和现在的床有什么不同？”顾客七嘴八舌的说（很混乱）“讲解员说了答案…… ……

我们还参观了另一个展览馆，了解到了广东智人的进化。广东早期智人的代表是马坝人。早期智人的体质特征跟现代人很相似。但仍然保持着一些远古特征。晚期智人的体质特征跟现代人基本 相同。我们还了解了他们的生活用品和习性。

最后我们还参观了古钱币和战国时期的兵器介绍和稀少动物的三个展览馆。在一楼大厅买了个纪念品就回家了。

今天，我了解到了一些知识。知道了潮州人是怎么雕刻图案的、早期智人是怎么生活的、古人的钱是怎么样的…… ……今天，我了解到了这么多的知识，好开心呀！

经过这一次的参观，我感受到了以前的人生活很艰苦。但是，他们的创造能力是很高的。他们用自己的聪明才智，创造了许多东西。对比之下，我们的生活是多么的美好。我们要好好珍惜眼前 的这些美好生活，创造出更好的生活用品！

Today is lantern Festival. I am very happy. Lantern Festival is Chinese

festival. Every year once.

In this day, people are very happy . In the steet, people is a lot

of.people see a lantern. In the evening,I eat yuanxiao together with my family.

It’s very delicious.

I like Lantern Festival very much.

参考译文

今天是元宵节。我非常快乐，元宵节是中国节日，每年一次。

在这一天，人们都快快乐乐的。在街上，有许多的人，人们看到一个灯笼。在晚上，我和家人一起吃元宵，很美味的元宵。

我非常喜欢元宵节。

Monday, August 2nd, Sunny

It was sunny and hot today. I got up early at half past six. I read English and then had breakfast. I helped my mother washed the dishes. Then I did my homework and cleaned my room. I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon. Then I played table tennis with my friends. In the evening I watched TV and read a book. I really had a busy and interesting day.

Today we saw a movie at noon and in the afternoon. It’s name suggested that it was a horrific one, but it wasn’t horrific at all. We finished watching at 5:30pm, and walked to our dormitories when we got there, it was 6:00. we had our dinner as quickly as we could and then rushed to the classroom. I’ve never been in such a hurry! In the afternoon we acted. We watched to a short play for three times and the teacher asked us to act. It was a little difficult, because we couldn’t remember all the sentences by watching the play for three times. We tried to remember something. Though the play had been changed a little, it was still very good we all acted very well. The teacher also gave some group prizes. Though my group hadn’t hot once, I didn’t mind.

There is one thing that made me very happy. One of my classmates said “happy birthday ” to me by sending a message. Though it was late, I still felt happy.

It’s the New Years Day today.I got up very early!I heard the bird singing in the trees.After breakfast,my mum,my father and I went to the local park.Everything was beautiful there,We saw many boats in the lake.Later on,we went to my grandfather’s home.

There are many trees and some flowers in the park.

At seven o’clock,we went home.It is a very happy day .

Today and friends of foreign travel, outside air is very good, people feel

very netfortable. We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles. We enjoyed the

beautiful nature brought. We happily spent a happy day.

今天妈妈送我去上英语课，才送到一半，妈妈就说：“走吧！”然后我就跑步、跑步，哼哧哼哧跑上了喽。

凯文第一，我第二，朱丽第三，正好我还折了纸飞机，这个样子蛮像普通飞机的。我对他们说：“我们一起玩飞机吧！”凯文就和我玩了起来，不过，我注意到凯文好像不大有力气，所以我就又放了起来。

我和他们吭哧吭哧又玩了起来，凯文和我玩‘斗鸡’我们打、打、打，我输了一次，然后后面都是赢，然后又输了一次，还有沙城堡，我到了一次，又输了一次，然后又到了一次，然后又输了一次……。好好玩，我们玩得吭哧吭哧，好累呀。

看来玩这种东西也是很累的，但是我是不会放弃滴，我可是练过跆拳道的哦，所以，我又玩，吭哧吭哧……我撞、我撞、我撞、撞、撞，他们两个输了，他们还假哭了一场。我又说要玩，他们两个吭哧吭哧的说：“我——吭哧吭哧——不——吭哧吭哧——来——吭哧吭哧——了——吭哧吭哧……”正好我也热得不行，我让老师把空调开大一点，老师就开得大了一点。

今天的英语课上来Tt这个T呢，是最、最、最简单的，好简单好简单，实在难不倒我，你知道有多简单吗？实在是太简单了，因为我已经都会了，我熟得都变成烤鸡了。

下课的时候，我本以为外面是很热很热，结果没想到比教室里还要冷。

August 12，20__ Friday

Today， I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and bee better. Suddenly， an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow

old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once

again， I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文：这天，我帮忙了奶奶做家务.奶奶的身体不好.我以后要常帮她做事.这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些.突然觉得，人老了真不好.不但身体不会好，而且一不留意就会惹得大家厌恶.我又做了一个决定，以后必须要做个乖孩子.

说起写作技巧，作者倒是有一些可以分享给大家，希望可以对大家有帮助，也希望写作不好的同学们不要放弃，再接再厉。

其实写作并没有什么方法可以去探讨，所谓多读，多写，多想。多读，这就是今天我要告诉大家的一个方法。

所谓多读，无非是读一些书籍，可选书无疑变成了难题，很多人可能会认为读书就要读名著，否则不如不读，这其实一个错误的观点，首先众多的名著在在乎事物的本质，一般的学生会对其提不起太大的兴趣。第二想提高写作说平读名著是万万行不通的。女孩子的话应多读一些有艺术性气息的文学作品，无论是小说还是其他也好对写作水平都会有极大的帮助。因为每一本书都有着我们应学的一些优点，而并非只有名著才是我们该读的。男孩子则喜欢看一些武侠等一些热血小说，那这种书籍对写作水平是有益还是有害呢？答案也是有益的，书中自有黄金屋，既然是书籍就有其独特之处，否则又怎样才能吸引住读者的目光呢？而我们所缺少的，要学习的也是这些。

总之，读呢，要选择自己愿意看的一些书籍，将其精华吸取，成为自己的东西，才能真正的将写作说平提高。

In the east of China,there is a small city---Haimen.I was born

there.Today,I am telling you about my hometown.

Haimen is not far from Shanghai.Its at the mouth of the Changjiang

River.Haimen is a modern city.There are lots of high buildings in it.Most of us

live in flats.We like to live in flats because we can be close to our friends.In

the center of Haimen,there are many shops.You can buy some nice things

here.Things in most shops arent expensive.You can pay a little money and they

are yours.

My hometown is a beautiful city.On each of the roads,there are some big

trees and nice flowers.The roads are also very clean.They make people happy and

comfortable.The seasons here are very nice.I like autumn best.Its neither hot

nor cold.A poem says “Flyer of summer come to my window to sing,then fly

away.And yellow leaves of autumn,which have no songs,just fall there with a

sign.” Its very cool.

I love Haimen.Its a nice place to live.Welcome to my hometown.

文章摘要：经过我的一个个发明人类的社会将会更加美好?要是煮熟了放在碗里，像泄了气的皮球一样软软的。中考作文写作技巧及方法天兵天将不是很威风吗。谁叫他敬酒不吃吃罚酒呀；By——熙瑞。”“大姨允许你玩一会儿。月眼睁睁的看着雨倒下了，就倒在自己身前；你不会让老师失望的，对吧。

1.严谨的布局：

正所谓万事开头难，不过只要开了个好头，这篇作文就会很好写了。

凤头：是文章的首段，是阅卷老师首先入眼的地方，一定要做好整篇文章的中心把握，要做到下文与首段上下连贯，紧密结合，要通过开头使下文有可写之处，开头要达到让阅卷老师耳目一新的效果。例如，巧用排比，比喻，拟人等修辞手法，并且通过这些修辞手法，而统领全文主旨。

猪肚：在一篇上好的文章中，分段都会恰到好处，而当文章中只有一大段或两三段时，这篇文章即使文采再出众，也不会有太高的分数，因为阅卷老师在中考判卷时，每三分钟就要判出一份作文，工作量相当大，如果不善于分段，阅卷老师可能失去耐心，从而看不完，就会草草的给出分数。所以，在我看来，一篇文章至少要分6-8个段，但不是一行或几行一段，而是要看起来像豆腐块，一块块整齐的排列在一起，使文章紧中有松，松弛有度。要看上去整篇文章是一个整体，而不是零散的。

豹尾：在文章的最后处，应当让主题更突出鲜明，升华主题思想，使豹尾抽起来!或让人感到峰回路转，柳暗花明或更进一步的特殊效果。在文章末尾，应当再次点题，紧扣中心思想，让贯穿始终的中心思想继续延伸，引人深思。特别是要在结尾处，与开头形成呼应，对比，递进等等，来引发阅读老师的共鸣!

2.细腻的文笔：不管是记叙，议论还是散文;不管是写人写事还是写景。都要用细腻的文笔呈现出来，使文章中点更突出，让阅卷老师在看试卷的过程中，有深思，放慢阅读速度和重复阅读的情况出现，让阅卷老师身临其境，从而使文章更具灵性。

3.贯穿始终的思想感情：在一篇布局格式上很得当，错落有致的文章上，还必须要有一条贯穿始终的思想路线，这条线就像鱼的脊椎一样重要，这条线一定要清晰，明确，千万不可含混不清。

把握好这几点，一篇好的中考作文已经大致成型，不过要想在中考中脱颖而出，这仅仅是开始。

I have nine little goldfish. Eight goldfish are all orange and one is

black. I like the black one best. We call it Xiao Hei. Its body is black. It has

two big and round eyes, a small mouth, and a big tail. Though its very small,

it swims fast.

I often feed them and change water for them. We are good friends.

I watched television late last night so I woke up late。 My mother asked me

to go to the market to buy some eggs for her。 When I played with a little dog on

the street， I dropped the eggs on the ground。 They were all broken。 My mother

was very angry with me when I went home。 I am very unhappy today。

MondaySeptember1,20__weather：__

It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free.

I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live

alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at

home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my

homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was

time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.