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写作的“七项基本原则”:

一、 长 短 句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:

Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、 主 题 句原则

国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!

特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

三、 一 二 三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)

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3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

关于学习英语的好处英语作文 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、 短语优先原则

写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.

这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。

五、 多实少虚原则

原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart,

gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:

走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room

所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!

六、 多变句式原则

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短语可以用:

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短语:

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短语:

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。

举例:This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:

When to go, Why he goes away

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行

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6)排比(排山倒海句)

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、 挑战极限原则

既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!

原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

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Dear Friend,

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when you are in the countryside, you can see green mountains, vast fields, clean

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参考翻译

春天是我最喜欢的季节。春天一切都发芽了。在外面散步,眼睛里看到的都是满满的绿色。

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春天,阳光灿烂,还有一些令人愉快的微风。所以感觉到春风吹过我们的时候该是是多么的令人陶醉。也是享受美丽的阳光时候。你也会觉得恢复精力当你到外面走一走时。

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It was sunny and hot today.I got up early at half past six.I read English

and then had breakfast.I helped my mother washed the dishes.Then I did my

homework and cleaned my room.I went shopping with my mother in the

afternoon.Then I played table tennis with my friends.In the evening I watched TV

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Yesterday, I decided to go outside for picnic, but unfortunately, it

suddenly rained.I felt very disappointed, but I knew one thing: next time, when

I decide to do something, I should pay attention to the weather

forecast.Finally, I had to change my mind, and I had to stay at home all day

watching TV and reading books.I like sunny days very much, and I dont like

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of water, and I know it is very terrible if there is not enough water.But I

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快乐的寒假到了,为了能过一个既快乐又有意义的寒假。这次,我计划先把作业搞定。每天完成10页的《寒假乐园》,还要安排一篇日记,练一小时的钢琴。

Happy winter vacation arrived, in order to be able to live a happy and meaningful winter vacation. This time, I plan to do my homework first. Finish 10 pages of "winter vacation" every day, and also arrange a diary to practice the piano for an hour.

作业做完了,我这个“书虫”终于能狂啃书了!我最喜欢啃柔萱写的《好玩数学博客》,在这本书中学到了让人意想不到的数学小知识,享受玩中学的快乐。我认识《今年你七岁》中调皮可爱的刘一波,从辫子姐姐写的《当时年纪实在小》我感受到她童年时代的快乐与悲伤,知道了《皮皮鲁遥控老师》的奇妙故事……狂啃书的滋味真好啊!

I have finished my homework, I was finally able to this "bookworm" mad kenshu! I love eating soft Xuan wrote "fun math blog", in this book to the mathematical knowledge of the unexpected, enjoy playing happy middle school. I know Liu Yibo, seven years old, who is very naughty and cute. From the braid elder sister wrote "at that age is very small", I feel the joy and sorrow of her childhood. I know the wonderful story of Pipiru remote control teacher. Its good to be crazy about books!

大年28,我回到了老家——马山。现在我可以狂吃狂喝狂玩狂乐了。我吃奶奶给我准备的香喷喷、黄澄澄的鸡腿,绿油油、白嫩嫩的蔬菜……喝的是甜滋滋,爽歪歪的橙汁。各种色香味俱全的美味佳肴。看着这些好吃的,我真想一口吃成个大胖子,吃完以后,我就挺着“将军肚”找小朋友玩。我们在沙堆上放火箭炮,只听“吱”的一声,火箭炮如离弦之箭一般直冲天空,“砰”的一声爆炸了!只见几张纸片缓缓地从空中漂落下来。后来我们放了威力最强的彩雷王,我把它点燃,放进纸管里,纸管被炸得面目全非。你看,我多开心呀!

In the year 28, I returned to my hometown, Mashan. Now I can be crazy, crazy, crazy, and crazy. My grandma gave me to eat delicious chicken, yellow, green, tender vegetables...... The drink is sweet, Shuangwai Orange Juice. All kinds of delicacies that are full of color and fragrance. Look at these delicious, I really want to eat into a big fat, eating, Im a "General belly" looking for friends to play. We put the Rockets in the sand, just listen to "squeak" sound, rocket like an arrow into the sky, a "bang" explosion! I saw a few pieces slowly from the sky fall down. Then we put the most powerful color of this, I lit it into the paper tube, paper tube was bombed out. You see, how happy I am!

嘿嘿,这样的寒假真是快乐啊!

Hey hey, such a winter vacation is really happy ah!

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篇16:英语教育个人实习日记

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今天,是我实习这么多天来性质最不一样、意义最为重要的一天。因为今天我完成了人生职业生涯里第一堂课的教学,心中感慨颇多。

为了今天的这一堂课,虽说只是一个小学、一位老师,一堂简简单单的随堂课。但对我来说,却是最初的尝试,意义非同小可。所以我还是花费了很多的心血和精力,精心地准备了一番。

在准备的过程中,我体会到了教案设计的艰辛,课件制作的不易。但更重要的环节还在后面,那便是真正的课堂教学过程的组织。

对于今天的课堂,我进行了一定的自我反思。首先是课堂有时显得过于拘谨,以致于我出现了频繁的小动作。

其次,板书设计不够科学合理,重难点体现得不够分明、有层次。

再者,课堂用语不够简洁明了。没能针对四年级小学生们现有的英语水平进行相应的交流。

最后,就是发音问题,由于紧张出现了一定的发音问题,这也是基本功不够扎实的体现。

这些问题,只是一些小细节的问题。至于更为深刻一点的问题,比如:课堂设计、师生沟通等等这些理论化的问题,我也没能思考出什么学术性结果,便不想赘述了。这些问题的解决,还需要我更多实践性的结果。

总之,先由浅入深,今后要先对这些细节性小问题多加注意并改善才是。

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篇17:英语日记

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This semester, my class has a new English teacher. She is a young and

beautifullady. We have a great impression on her. However, after several classes

later, things have changed. Firstly, she always talks in English. We dont

understandher words. We tell her that, but nothing changes. Besides, she always

asks usin English. The result is that we cant answer her question, because we

cant understand her. In addition, she is serious and never smiles to us. We

feel so depressiveto have her lesson. Therefore, all students are afraid of

having Englishlesson.

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篇18:英语日记

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Some people say, “Money is more important than time。” Some say, “We can buy

everything with money。” For some people, money is everything。 They think they

can buy everything they want, including time。 Do you think so? No。 I don’t think

so。 Because when money is spent, we can get it back。 However, when time has

gone, it will never return。 Nevertheless many of us always waste time and put

off today’s work till tomorrow。

In fact, time is more important than money and time never stops for anyone

or anything。 For everyone, time is so limited that if we waste our precious

time, we won’t get it back。 Therefore, we should save every second we own and

make full use of our time to study hard。 The harder we work now, the more we

will get in future!

Let’s save time together!

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篇19:英语旅游日记

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I think most people like traveling because they can feel the beauty of the nature and breathe the fresh air at the same time.Whats more they can make friends.But there are some disadvantages of travelling,such as,the weather may change quickly and you may be wet in the rain.So my suggestion is that before you travel,you should listen to the weather report and get to know about the weather and youd better travel with others so that you are not into trouble.

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篇20:最新暑假日记学生写作格式

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今年暑假,妈妈、阿姨、哥哥、妹妹和我一起去了美丽而又神奇的张家界旅游!

张家界是我国的风景区,那里风景迷人,比如:金鞭溪、天门山、黄龙洞······那里的高山有的连绵起伏,有的直入云霄······山多水美,物产丰富,是个可爱的地方。

我们来到天子山。在山下,周围群上环绕,往上一看,一座座高山,有的像锋利的宝剑,有的像巨大的竹笋,还有的像一座座宝塔。我们坐公共汽车来到半山腰,下车后,我一眼就看见了天下第一梯

——白龙观光电梯。这座电梯高达三百多米,可以直接到达山顶,我们排了一会儿队,终于上了白龙电梯。电梯开始上升了,越来越高,下面的人们、大树、车辆渐渐地越变越小快变成一只只小蚂蚁了。不到两分钟,我们来到天子山的山顶,山顶上风景很美,绿树成荫,刚才的“宝剑”和“巨笋”都被我踩在脚下,我得意极了,仿佛把所有的困难都踩在了脚下。我们大伙边走边看,突然,《阿凡达》电影里的悬浮山——哈利路亚山出现在我的眼前,原来根本没有悬浮山,只是利用电脑做出了奇妙的图像,我不禁感叹:“多神奇啊!”

时间不早了,我们要坐缆车下山了,一开始我很紧张,不敢睁开眼睛向下看,生怕掉下去。妈妈对我说:“别害怕,很安全,不会掉下去的。”我慢慢地睁开眼睛,过来一会儿,发现果然没事,我便一点儿也不紧张了。窗外云雾迷茫,一座座高山就在眼前,仿佛触手可及,这就是让人害怕又兴奋的张家界,我爱你张家界!

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