英语日记写作技巧（汇总20篇）

班级姓名

Rewritethesentences.（注意大小写和标点）

e.g.Thisismydesk.→Isthisyourdesk?Yes,itis./No,itisn’t.

Thesearemypens.→Aretheseyourpens?Yes,theyare./No,theyaren’t.

1.Thisismyschoolbag.（肯定回答）

2.Thesearemybooks.（肯定回答）

3.Thisismypencil.（肯定回答）

4.Thesearemyrulers.（肯定回答）

5.Thisismychair.（肯定回答）

6.Thesearemyrubbers.（否定回答）

7.Thisismybanana.（否定回答）

8.Thesearemypears.（否定回答）

9.Thisismydog.（否定回答）

10.Thesearemyeggs.（否定回答）

一、句式多变，词汇丰富。

鉴于这部分的写作要求和难度，不论是写书信还是编故事，由于100词的字数要求，考生必须要学会用具体的，多样化的语句来描写某样东西或某件事情。有的学生从头至尾都用"Thereis"的句式，而且重复多遍，看来单调乏味，很难得高分。我们不妨用主动和被动句式、各种不同的从句、动词不定式、强调句、虚拟语气等等，当然我们要写的句式必须是自己熟悉的，有把握的。

词汇量的大小影响写作成绩。试想你形容餐馆good，食品good，氛围good，那也太无聊了，我们平时就积累一些词汇，比如餐馆cleanandtidy，食品niceandtasty，氛围friendlyandpleasant等等，而不至于到考试时言之无物。

二、问题都答，加上连词。

如果第二单元你要给笔友写一份回信，信中有这么一个问题Haveyougotafavoriterestaurant?Tellmeaboutthefoodandwhatyoulikeabouttherestaurant。这个问题看似非常简单，但如果你就回答一句Ihavegotmyfavoriterestaurant.可以，但如果你不学会怎么扩展这个话题，那一封信中根本就写不了上百个单词。因此，学会拓展话题这一点在这部分中尤为重要，如你可以写餐馆的名字、位置、特色等等。

如果你选择编故事也很好。我们PET考生大多是青少年，正是想象力非常丰富的时候，很适合去编故事。但在书写的过程中，一定要注意尽量用自己有把握的语言来表达和描述。此外，既然是故事，就应该把事情发生的时间、地点、人物、过程以及结果都完整地表述出来。因此，我们在平时就把日常生活中所发生的有意义的小事儿用英文记录下来，日积月累你会发现，你的书写素材会越来越多，这种考试对你来说，将会是"apieceofcake"。

另外注意适当使用一些关联词，如and,but,so,if，使行文更加流畅。

三、平时勤练，克服畏惧。

因为该部分要求比较高，建议考生平时可以多做这样的书写练习。在学而思PET，我们会练习四五篇大作文，希望同学们平时就认真对待，描写到位，在老师的指导下，逐步明白自己的弱项在哪里，进而逐渐消除无话可写的心理恐惧，并提高写作水平。

The conception of money is different for the old and the young. The old

generation believes that money should be saved in case of the urgent situation,

while most young people think that money should be spent to realize its value.

When I was struggled about the different opinions, I saw the news report about a

man got back his money that he saved in the early 1990s, which was about 1000

RMB. People made their comment that this amount of money meant so much at that

time, which could buy a nice big house, while today it was just a big meal in

the restaurant. This news inspired me to make reasonable plan of money. The old

way to treat money is not suitable, because money will lose its value as time

goes by. I choose to spend part of money while saving another part of it.

老人和年轻人对于钱的概念是不一样的。老一代认为钱应该存起来，以防紧急需要，然而大多数年轻人认为，钱花出去才能实现它的价值。在我纠结这两个不同观点时，我看见了一则新闻报道，是关于一个人拿出了他在19世纪20年代存的钱，大约1000元人民币。有人说这钱在当时就是一大笔钱，可以买一栋漂亮的大房子了，但是现在只能在餐馆大吃一顿。这个消息激发了我要合理规划金钱的想法。老一辈对待金钱的方式是不对的，因为钱随着时间的流逝价值也会贬值。我会选择花一部分、存一部分。

My winter vacation

I had a great time on my vacation .

To begin with,i finished my homework .it was took me ten days.then,i came back my old home with my family.we visted my grandparents 、my uncle and my aunt.they were friendly and kind.luckyly,they gave me some money,i was very happy.

On small year day,my dad took me to skate.that was very fanny.i fell all the time.it was a little ache,but i still skated.

On new year`s day,we ate at my uncle`s home.my aunt cooked a lot of meels.they were deliious,too,so i ate very fell.

The New Years Eve, the year of the old and the New Year, is filled with a lively atmosphere.

In the evening, I hurried to eat dumplings, and my mother came to outside, I saw the sky colorful, colorful spark scattered sky, sometimes like a split of, such as signal flies, flickering, night embroidered into the world of fresh flowers.

After that, my mother and I watched a lot of fireworks, the peacock opened the screen, there were the corals... All are gorgeous, dazzling, dazzling.

It was nearly eight o clock, and I reluctantly went back to my home, turned on the TV, and watched the "Spring Festival gala" on the other side. The show is wonderful, such as the sketch: telling the story, the plumber... Pleasing to the eye.

Its two seconds away! Tick and clack -- pitter-pattering. The electric light went off, and the deafening sound of guns ushered in a New Year! Thousands of families of fireworks, like the pearl of the night, like the sky as the day. The whole city is boiling, and it is a sign of prosperity and happiness for the coming year.

我又迟到了 I Am Late Again

I opened my eyes in the morning and looked at the clock. "Oh, dear! Its

half past seven already. Ill be late again," I thought. Without breakfast, I

hurried to school. But it began to rain hard.

早晨我睁开眼睛，看看钟表，“天啊!已经七点半了。我又要迟到了，”我想。没有吃早饭，我就匆匆朝学校赶去，可是天又下起雨来。

When I got to the classroom, the maths teacher had already begun his

lesson. It was Mr wang. All of us were afraid of him. I didnt like him, or his

lessons. I opened the door. " Im late again, Mr Wang."

当我到教室时，数学老师已经开始讲课了。是王老师，所有的学生都怕他。我不喜欢他，也不喜欢他的课。我打开门，“王老师，我又迟到了。”

"Ive told you not to be late, but you ..." he said angrily. But suddenly

he stopped, and looked at my clothes. He quickly took off his own jacket and

handed it to me. "Now take off your wet coat and put wet one on." he said

kindly.

“我早就告诉你不要迟到，可是你……”他生气地说。可是他突然停下来，看了看我的湿衣服。他很快脱下自己的上衣递给我。“把你的湿衣服脱下来，套上这件。”他和蔼地说。

It was a bit large for me, but I felt warm in it.

衣服套我身上有点大，可是穿上感觉很温暖。

在小学实习的每一天都是充满意义与欢乐的，每一天每一名学生都能给我带来新的体验与感悟，我看到他们在成长，在变成一个越来越懂事的大孩子。放学后的路上，甚至不知不觉走过了头儿，又折了回去。回到寝室，我激动的心情溢于言表!但总感觉无论我用多么感人肺腑的话语，都无法比拟这一天在学校度过的令我感动的、难忘的点点滴滴!

充实的一天

今天是忙碌的，整整一个上午，都是在不断的听写英语、督促同学们学习中度过的，下课了，我就立刻找那些英语单词背不好的孩子听写，课上，便马不停蹄的批作业，并且时刻盯着宇，让她学习。我是喜欢和她一起学习的，感觉她是有那种学习的热情的，可以给我以感染力，又让我充满动力与激情。她也是听话的，只是稍微不仔细了一些，慢慢改正，应该是可以的。

让优秀坚持下去

中午批数学卷时，我分配给了几名学生，他们都欣然接受了，只有艾不想批，我对她说：你不是答应老师可以做值日班长吗?为什么又不要做了?优秀是需要坚持的，今天优秀，明天就不了那算不上优秀。艾似乎觉得有道理，便争着要批卷了。在我看来，艾是个心灵手巧、善于观察的小姑娘，只是有时候不太注意自己是在一个集体中，总做一些特立独行的事情，但这些并不影响她成为一个优秀的人，如果她能把这份优秀一直坚持下去，那真的是不可估量啊!

肩负一份责任

今天，我考了很多同学英语单词，并且让她们的同桌考他们第二轮、第三轮，直到全对为止，其中就有一直很愿意帮助同学的卓，她真是个温文尔雅的好姑娘。还有一个就是让我刮目相看的达，我一直认为学习好的同学只会学习，不会帮助别人，但这一观点，将从今天起转变。我让达督促他的同桌然背单词，达尽职尽责，不仅监督然学习，还一字一句的教他。中午，我见然回到教室开始学习，虽说是在补之前欠的债，但我还是很欣喜的，不多久，达也回来了，是回来帮助然的，着实让我很受感动。在达身上，我看到了一份对同学无私奉献的爱和他那弱小的肩上支起的坚定的责任!相比之下，辛，你要加油了!今天就你没有考呀，至少该对自己负责吧，期待可以看到你主动来找我听写哦!

把机会让给他

下午上了一节令人震撼的语文公开课，不仅因为老师和同学们精彩的配合，更是因为那个多次发言的禹(同学们说他外刚内萌，感觉很有趣)。在这节课快要下课时，老师再次点到了他，但他并没有急于回答，而是说：老师，我把这个机会让给我的同桌，因为他也总举手，可是一次机会也没有得到。顿时，听课的老师们被禹的回答说笑了，包括安老师也包括我，这个笑绝对不是嘲笑，也不是搞笑，而是一种欣慰的笑，一种赞赏的笑。在大家都急于表现自己的时候，禹的这种友情、这种谦让，让所有人为他竖起大拇指，又怎能不令我感动呢?

Last Saturday--April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my

school. Can you guess what we did there?Not for amusement but to take part in a

volunteer labour.

上周六,4月28日,我和我的同学去了学校附近的公园里。你能猜猜我们去做什么了吗?不是去玩而是去参加公益劳动。

We reached the park at nine oclock. The whole class was divided into three

groups. I was in Group Three.

我们九点钟到达公园。全班被分为三组。我在笫三组。公益活动

Each group had different tasks. Group One planted trees and watered

flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter left by the tourists and cleaned

all the benches. The group that I was in wiped all the equipment in the

Childrens Playground. All of us worked hard.

每组有不同的任务。第一组种树和浇花。第二组被告知去接游客留下的垃圾,清理所有的长椅。的我在擦儿童游乐场的所有设备。我们都努力工作。

Before noon we finished working. Each of us felt a little bit tired, but we

were happy because we had done a good deed.

中午之前我们结束了劳动。我们每个人都感觉有点累,但我们很快乐,因为我们做了一件好事。

An artist went to a beautiful part of the country and stayedwith a famer. Every day he went out drawing from morning to evening when the sun went down, he returned and a good dinner before he went to bed. When it was time for him to leave, he wanted to becaemeour pay the famer. But the famer said, no, I don’t want any money, but give me one of your pictures, what is money. In a week the money will all be spent, but the picture will still be here. The artist was very pleased and thanked the famer for saying such kind things about his pictures.

This is our school. There are many classrooms in it. There are eight

hundred students and sixty-nine teachers in our school. There are many trees and

flowers in it. All the teachers and students like our school very much.

We come to school at seven. We have four classes in the morning and two in

the afternoon.

Our classroom is big and clean. We have lessons here, We do our homework at

home.

All the students study hard.

“叮咛”、“叮咛”上课铃声响了，今天第一节课就是我喜欢的英语课，我们的英语老师，束老师满脸笑容的走进了教室。

老师像往常一样首先带我们复习了前一个单元的内容，紧接着老师让我们一个一个打背书，老师抽查到我背书的时候，我不慌不忙的背起了课文，背完之后，老师还夸我：“不错，不过还要再熟练一点。”

抽查完背诵之后，英语老师就让我们代开书第42页上新的一颗，今天的内容是教我们认识水果，比如苹果用英语说：“apple”、香蕉用英语说：“banana”等！原来这些水果用英语说出来是这么多好听！

今天课堂上老师还让我们同桌之间相互表演课文内容的小对话，我扮演的角色是妈妈，张永祥扮演的是Sarah，我们都很用心地在表演着这段对话，老师站在一旁默默看着我们的表演，对我们做出一副夸赞我们的表情，我当时看着老师心里非常的开心。

其实每一节英语课我都觉得很有趣，也很认真的听老师讲课，我喜欢英语我要好好的学习英语，要像我们束老师一样说一口流利的英语，长大以后能到国外去看看。

如何写通顺的英语

英语写作是语言应用的一个重要方面，也是语言能力测定的重要手段，衡量写作水平的标准便是看其是否能用学过的语言材料，语法知识等用文字的形式来表达描述。

书面语言表达一般分为三个过程：思维、组织、表达。先是思维，把要写的东西在脑中思考，这往往是个别的，孤立的一些素材，很凌乱琐碎；因此要对此进行组织，把这些思维作出整理，使其条理、系统化，但这还是较粗糙的，可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误；最后才是表达，把组织过的材料仔细推敲，确无问题了再落笔成文。

在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等，这就是写作。上述的三个过程，最难的就是第三个过程，这需要我们有较好的语法知识，掌握一定数量的句型，习惯用语，熟练的写作技巧，这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来。

总之，要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。

那么，究竟怎样才能写好作文呢？

阅读优秀范文

首先要搞好阅读。阅读是写作的基础，在阅读方面下的功夫越深，驾驭语言的能力也就越强。所以要写好英语先要读好英语，在语言学习方面狠下苦功，教科书要读透，因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文笔流畅，语言规范，精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。再就是要进行大量课外阅读，并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。

加强练词造句训练

其次，要加强练词造句的训练。词句对作文相当于造房的材料，无好材料就造不出好房子。平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累，把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录，再对照正确句子，使地道的英语句子如同条件反射，落笔就对。

了解英语写作格式

还有，要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式。可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书，对英语写作有一个初步的概念，如怎么写议论文，如何提出论据，如何展开，如何确定中心句；又如，英语信的格式，如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等，然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习。

用英语写日记

要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯。经常用英语记日记，等于天天在练笔，这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法。在记日记时，不要总是用简单句，要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等，使文句更优美生动。还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔。写好后对照范文，找出差距，然后再练习，这对提高英语作文也很有帮助，在游泳中学会游泳，只有多练习才能练好。

总之，平时学习语言素材积累多了，体裁格式记住了又经常练习不断提高，到作文下笔时就会得心应手，水到渠成。

It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why?

Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we

have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we

can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In

winter holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to

replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

Dear Friend,

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember

me?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the

days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the

world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear

brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always

thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank

you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my

life.

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because

we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we

are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is

always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright

future.

Sincerely yours,

Jason

do you mind being called a bad student? of course not. so far as i know,everybody intends to be (become) a model student.

however,to be a model student is by no means an easy thing. first,he must do his best to obtain knowledge. a man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed. secondly,he must remember to improve his health. only a strong man can do great tasks. thirdly,he should receive moral education. if his conduct is not good,no one will consider making friends with him.

你价意被称为坏学生吗?当然不。就我所知，每个人都打算做模范学生。

然而，做模范学生却不容易。第一，他必须尽力获得知识(求知)。一个没有足够知识的人是不会成功的。第二，他必须记住促进健康。只有强壮的人才能做大事。第三，他应该接受道德教育。如果他品行不好，没有人会考虑和他交朋友的。

1、拟人法

【特点】

把动物比拟成人要注意找出动物的特征与人相似之处，并进行细致的描绘。把动物比拟成人，首先要从整体上把它比拟成人，然后找出局部相似之处。这样，我们读了以后才能有整体感。如果只抓住局部进行比拟，容易显得不伦不类，不易读者想象。把动物比拟成人，也用于动物动作的描写。这主要是按照人物的心理活动想象动物动作的目的。

2、动物自述法

【特点】

动物自述法是采用第一人称来描写动物，因此文章中要把“我”当作动物来写。这里要注意在写作时把“我”和动物融为一体，不能露出痕迹用拟人的方法来描写动物，因此在描写时，既要反映动物外形、动作、习性的特点，又要体现人的一些特点。这样才能使文章既具有科学性，又显得生动活泼。

3、议论抒情法

【特点】

采用议论抒情法记叙动物，要对能给予启示的动物特点进行仔细观察，然后进行详细的描述，这样议论或抒情时就会更具说服力和感染力。议论抒情法要把动物的某些特点与人们在日常生活、工作中所要具有的精神、品质、思想紧密地联系起来。描写动物特点时，要为议论抒情作好准备；议论、抒情时，要围绕所描写的特点进行。采用议论抒情法描写动物，要注意围绕一个中心进行描写、抒情、议论。

4、景物衬托法

【特点】

景物衬托法就是描写动物，首先要集中笔墨描写好动物，写出动物的特点。动物的描写要成为文章的中心。其次描写动物周围的景物时，要为描写动物服务。景物的描写在全文中只是起衬托的作用，不能喧宾夺主。

5、季节特征法

【特点】

采用季节特征法描写自然景物，一定要对景物四季不同的特征进行仔细观察。描写时，既要逼真地再现具体的时令特征，又要表现景物本身的特征，使时令特征和景物特征融为一体。在描写景物的四季特征时，不能面面俱到，要做到各有侧重。此外，运用季节特征法描写景物时，不能变换景物的地点，要对同一地点的不同季节景色描写。

Monday, August 2nd, Sunny

It was sunny and hot today. I got up early at half past six. I read English and then had breakfast. I helped my mother washed the dishes. Then I did my homework and cleaned my room. I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon. Then I played table tennis with my friends. In the evening I watched TV and read a book. I really had a busy and interesting day.

January 16 20xx

20xx年1月16号

Today, I still went to my mothers office. My mother was very busy, so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I cant do something useful, but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future, I will take a job and work. It time for me to begin to learn how to work.

今天,我还是去了我母亲的办公室。我母亲很忙碌,所以是我父亲。他们一直生活在北京。他们必须早起。因为他们将管理工厂。所以我知道他们很辛苦。因此,我要节省我的钱。此外,我应该帮助他们。虽然我不能做一些有用的,但我认为我应该与他们共同工作。我对我的家庭成员之一。今后,我将工作和工作。它的时候我开始学习如何工作。

My school life is very funny . In the morning , I usually go to school at 7：30 . So , I always ran to school or by bike . Then

I see my friends , because I want to play with them . At afternoon . I often do my homework in my classroom , because I want to play the piano in the evening .

译文：

我的学校生活很丰富。在早晨，我通常在七点半到校。所以，我经常跑着去学校或者是骑自行车。然后我会去找我的小伙伴，因为我想和他们玩。在下午，我经常在教室里写我的作业，因为我晚上要去弹钢琴。

脑海中的每一件事，都如一朵朵飘落的小雪花，数量如此之多，而且每一朵都令人深思。

——题记

那是去年冬天了，由于冬天来的比较早，所以大家都穿上了厚厚的棉衣，但还是感觉到了冷。走在去姥姥家的路上，寒风刺骨，把我冻得瑟瑟发抖，嘴里的上牙和下牙冻得打颤。风刮在脸上火辣辣的疼，像有一千只猫在挠我的脸一样。我几乎是寸步难行，就在这艰难的挪动中，我遇见了她们，一个小女孩正搀扶着一位老人在雪中困难的行走，那位老人大概六十来岁，衣着朴素，历尽沧桑的脸上刻满了岁月的痕迹，如树皮一样的手紧紧地抓着小女孩，生怕她跑丢了似的。小女孩那幼稚的小脸蛋上挂着一个迷人的微笑，在雪地里蹦着跳着，但丝毫没有挣脱老人的意思。

忽然，小女孩一个趔趄，摔倒在地，老人急忙弯下腰来扶起小女孩，她轻轻的拍了拍小女孩身上的雪，雪儿听话的落了下来。多好的老人呀!我心想。我目光顺着他们的脚步，她们走着走着，停了下来，老人挥了挥手，跟小女孩说再见，天哪!难道小女孩的父母就让他们的爹妈住这样的房子吗?这座房子外表简陋，地上还零散着堆着几块掉下来的石头，老屋四周杂草丛生，凌乱不堪，我百思不得其解，没办法，问一下那个小女孩吧!，我快步追上小女孩，问道:“小朋友，刚才那个老奶奶是你的什么呀，她为什么对你那么好呀?”她仰起头，扑闪扑闪她那双大眼睛对我说:“其实刚才那位老奶奶我并不认识，可能因为她摔倒了，我扶她起来，她才对我那么好的吧!哦，对了，你愿不愿意和我一起去帮老奶奶捡碎石头呢?”我迷迷糊糊的点了点头，她高兴的拉着我飞奔起来......终于捡完了，她蹦跳着离开了我的视线。

虽然看不到她了，但她那身影却在我的脑海中挥之不去，并不断清晰起来，高大起来，美丽起来......

只要人人都献出一点爱，生活就会更加精彩..

The winter vacation is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do.

First, I’m going to have a good rest and relax. I will read some good books. Reading books is useful because it can help me get more knowledge. It can open up my eyes to the world. Next, I’m going to spend more time talking with my parents. I will also try my best to help them do some housework. Then, I’m going to take part in social activities (社会活动)so that I can know more people.

What do you think of my vacation? I hope you will have a happy winter vacation.