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孝心是稍纵即逝的眷念;孝心是无法重现的幸福;孝心是一失足便成千古恨的往事;孝心是生命与生命的交接的链条,一旦断链,永无连接。为此开学吧为大家推荐了关于孝道的英文作文优秀作文,仅供大家参考,希望对大家有用。

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居住环境英文作文

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The empty dam below my home was clean and tidy, and now the empty dam is full of rubbish, especially on rainy days, polluted water, and pedestrians passing by. The other people, because of the strength of the power, threw the garbage just hanging on the tree, ugly dead.

Im going to talk to the grown-ups. Theyre not talking to me. What are the kids doing? And drove me out. After I was driven out, I thought to myself, "this cant work. I can go to the neighborhood committee." So I went to the neighborhood committee. When I arrived at the neighborhood committee, I said to an aunt, "aunt, I want to reflect that someone in this building is littering." Aunt kind of say: "kid, the things we already know, one building will see you in a few days to clean the residents of the building to education, by the way you, you are quick to go home." I had to go home and wait for someone to clean. A few days later, we actually saw someone to clean, clean the people of the whole building up and down, left and right, fringes sweep of very clean, after finished, clean people will start all the residents of education building (including me), finished her education and clean people have left. After I passed this, I never saw him/them littering.

I suggest that we really want to protect the environment, because it is peoples responsibility to protect the environment. If people do get it right, we can have a good home.

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篇1:给感谢的人写一封信英文

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dear mr __,

尊敬的__先生:

thank you very much for the interview yesterday。 i learned a great deal

about your pany, its major projects, and its ambitious plans for future

development in shenzhen。

十分感谢您昨日的面试。我了解到许多有关贵公司的状况,它的主要产品以及未来在深圳的宏大发展计划。

i believe i am fully qualified for the work you described。 my e__perience

with __ corporation is directly related to the work you are offering。 also, my

academic background and the training i received as an administrative assistant

provide a strong base for further development。

我自完全有资格承担您所描述的工作。我在__公司的经验与贵方带给的工作直接相关。而且我的教育背景和所受的行政助理方面的培训,为我带给了进一步发展的坚实基础。

thanks again for the interview。 i look forward to hearing from you

soon。

再次感谢您的面试。期望尽早得到您的消息。

sincerely yours,

__x

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篇2:孝道感恩作文

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我国具有五千年的文明历史,拥有文明之国的美称。每个中国人都应该学会彬彬有礼,当然我们这新一代小学生更应该学传统、行孝道、知感恩

记得有一次,我走在路上,突然妈妈摔了一跤,我和弟弟连忙扶起妈妈。

此时,我想起了《弟子规》里面许多的关于孝顺的故事,于是我就想:我晚上一定要帮妈妈洗一次脚。到了晚上,妈妈刚要洗脚,我就对妈妈说:妈妈今天晚上我帮你洗次脚。不用了。妈妈说。没关系,妈妈,我就帮你洗一次脚吧。我对妈妈说。好。。。。。。吧。。。。。。妈妈一边抹着眼泪,一边感动的说。妈妈疑惑的坐了下来,我把妈妈的鞋子脱了下来。我一边看着一边摸着妈妈那十个似乎已经变形的丑陋的脚趾头,虽然我的表面上显得十分的不在乎,可是我心里却涨满了感动。

我帮着妈妈洗脚,我的心却想着这十一年来和妈妈一起度过的酸甜苦辣咸。我心想:妈妈为了我和弟弟付出了许多,虽然妈妈对我和弟弟十分严格,但还是每次都把自己辛辛苦苦赚来的钱给我和弟弟买零食、新衣服、玩具等等东西,而妈妈却没有给自己买新衣服。想到了这里,我都感动的流下了眼泪。妈妈发现了我的异样,就低下头亲切的说:你怎么了?我听到了妈妈那句话,就伸出了自己的长臂,勾住了妈妈的脖子,对妈妈激动的说:妈妈我爱您!

亲爱的同学们,赶快拿起我们手中的笔吧写出我们的学传统、行孝道、知感恩之路。我们的学传统、行孝道、知感恩之路总是阳光明媚,晴空万里,到底哪一缕阳光最耀眼?有人说是优异的学习成绩、有人说是给予别人帮助、有人说是自己的生日、有人说是付出爱心去安慰人、有人说是自己快乐的一天、有人说是我们儿童过的最快乐的儿童节有人说是最快乐的春节。。。。。。

每个人的想法都是不同的,当然我也不例外,而我却觉得是就是要懂得感恩父母和要懂得孝顺父母,那才是我们的美好的、完整的、阳光明媚的、晴空万里的学传统、行孝道、知感恩之路。

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篇3:描写冬天的作文英文

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I sat in the window, listening to the sound of knocking, destroying the branches, occasionally heard from afar the barking of the dog, how sad ah! Under the eaves of the kitten, can not resist the cold snap, and also cold “ meow … meow … ” the call of non-stop.

Walking on the road, I saw the green leaves turn yellow, and the bright flowers withered, and the beautiful scenery disappeared.

Winter is coming, and I can eat! Eat straight up, and I also eat tall and strong. Winter is coming, you can not afraid of the sun, rain, thunder and typhoon, it is really good.

Winter is coming, although its cold, but there are many advantages, so I still like winter!

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篇4:昨天我收到了我朋友的一封信的英文

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dear wang yan,

i enjoyed your hospitality during my three-day stay in tianjin.your new house is very beautiful,and your cooking is out of the world .your sister,wangdan,is very kind-hearted.not only did she help us wash clothes,but also helped make the bed.

the trip was great getting together with you two once again.dont forget the invitation to pop in on me the next time youre in beijing.

thanks again..and say hello to your sister.

all my best,

li ming

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篇5:中学生英文作文:我的快乐周末Myhappyweekend

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Last weekend ,I didn’t want to do homework all day .I wanted to go to somewhere. That was fun. I went to the zoo with my friend JingWen . I bought two tickets .One is for JingWen ,the other is for me .Then we took a bus to the zoo.

The zoo is very big .There are many kinds of animals at the zoo.What animal did we see.We saw tiger,momkey,panada,lion,elephant,and so on .I like monkey and panada best .Because momkey and panada are pretty and they can make me happy .I didn’t feed any animals .Because I don’t what kind of animals eat to make strong and I didn’t eat any snacks . I wanted to keep the zoo clean .Finally ,we feel tired and we leave the zoo. I think the zoo is good for animals ,why? Because the zoo can help people to stop animals from going extinct.and I think zoos are bad for animals.Because the zoo make animals feel lonely and animals will misses they family.

That was a ggod day!

[中学生英文作文:我的快乐周末(My happy weekend)

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篇6:致客户的一封信英文

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Dear customers

Hello!

Since its establishment, _ beauty salon has received your strong support

and help. On the occasion of the coming New Years day and new years day, _

beauty salon is grateful to you with cordial greetings and sincere thanks.

Time flies, and in a flash it is another year. Looking back on the progress

and success of _ beauty salon this year, we can not do without your attention,

trust, support and participation. Your understanding and trust is a powerful

driving force for our progress, and your care and support are the inexhaustible

source of our growth. Your every suggestion, let us excited, prompted us to

continue to work hard. With you, we will have a steady stream of confidence and

strength in our journey forward; with you, our cause can flourish and develop

endlessly.

In the new year, we hope to continue to get the trust, care and support of

you and all consumers. You and all consumers are welcome to make suggestions and

criticisms to us. We will serve every customer with sincerity, sincerity,

sincerity and enthusiasm. Customer satisfaction is our eternal pursuit! We will

continue to provide you with the most sincere service, and constantly strive to

achieve "no best, only better"! (original from blog 138)

Thank you again for your trust and support!

I wish you good health! Happy family! Everything goes well!

salute

Salute!

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篇7:经典电影英文台词语录

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Frankly,my dear, I dont give a damn.

坦白的说,亲爱的,我一点也不在乎。《乱世佳人》

Im goig to make him an offer he cant refuse.

我会给他点好处,他无法拒绝。《教父》

Heres looking at you,kid.

就看你的了,孩子。《卡撒布兰卡

Go ahead, make my day.

来吧,让我也高兴高兴。《拨云见日》

Theres no place like home.

没有一个地方可以和家相提并论。《绿野仙踪》

Im king of the world!

我是世界之王!《泰坦尼克号》

Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

世界上有那么多的城镇,城镇中有那么多酒馆,她却走进了我的酒馆。《卡撒布兰卡》

Well, nobodys perfect.

人无完人。《热情似火》

[COLOR=green]You dont understand!I coulda had class.I coulda been a contender.I couldve been somebody,instead of a bum,which is what I am.

你根本 不能明白!我本可以获得社会地位,我本可以是个竞争者,我本可以是个有头有脸的人,而不是一个毫无价值的游民!《码头风云》

Toto,Ive got a feeling were not in Kansas anymore.

托托,我想我们再也会不去堪撒斯了。《绿野仙踪》

All right,Mr.DeMille,Im ready fir my close-up.

好了,德米勒先生,我已经准备好拍摄我得特写镜头了。《日落大道》

May the Force be with you.

源原力与你同在。《星球大战》

Fasten your seatbelts.Its going to be a bumpy night.

紧紧极好你的安全带,这将是一个颠簸的夜晚。《彗星美人》

You talking to me?

你是在和我说话么?《出租车司机》

Made it,Ma!Top of the world!

好好去做吧,站在世界之巅!《歼匪喋血战》

Im mad as hell,and Im not going to take this anymore!

我疯狂的如同地狱中的恶魔,我不会在这样继续下去了!《电视台风云》

Louis,I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship。

路易斯,我认为这是一段美好友谊的开始。《卡撒布兰卡》

I am big!Its the picture that got small.

我是巨大的!是那些照片让我变得渺小了。《日落大道》

Show me the money

让我看到钱!《甜心先生》

we stand alone,together

我们孤胆,我们并肩.《兄弟连》

Love means never having to say youre sorrry.

爱就是永远不必说对不起。《爱情故事》

Mama always said life was like a box of chocolates.You never know what youre gonna get.

妈妈说生活就像一盒巧克力,你永远都不知道你会得到什么。《阿甘正传》

There is no crying in baseball.

在棒球运动中没有哭泣!《红粉联盟》

A boys best friend is his mother.

一个男孩最好的朋友是他的母亲。《惊魂记》

Keep your friends close,but your enemies closer.

亲近你的朋友,但更要亲近你的敌人。《教父》

Listen to them.Children of the night.What music they make.

快点来听!黑夜中孩子的声音是他们缔造的美妙音乐。《吸血鬼》

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篇8:写圣诞节的英文

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Christmas Day is the most important festival of west. Be in that day at Christmas,people don’t work.Children don’t go to school. The whole people has all had a holiday. People indulges in a holiday together laughing and chatting.

On that day at Christmas, we need to have the Christmas tree , illumination , the star adorns our family. We invite our family and friend to our house. They are able to give me a gift, I also need to give gift for them.

We sing special songs at Christmas.Christmas songs are carols.

Christmas are fun!I love Christmas.

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篇9:英文成语故事三:守株待兔

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In the Spring and Autumn Period, a farmer in the State of Song was one day working in the fields when he saw a rabbit bump into a tree stump(树桩) accidentally and break its neck.

The farmer took the rabbit home, and cooked himself a delicious meal.

That night he thought, I neednt work so hard. All I have to do is wait for a rabbit each day by the stump.

So from then on he gave up farming, and simply sat by the stump waiting for rabbits to come and run into it.

This idiom satirizes(讽刺,挖苦) those who just wait for a stroke of luck, rather than making efforts to obtain what they need.

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篇10:传承孝道学会感恩

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孝顺是中华民族的传统美德,孝的事迹令人震撼。

我的姥姥得了肺癌,也晚期了,吃药也不管用,做导管做介入手术不做,重担落在了妈妈身上。妈妈每阁两天妈妈就会回中兴看看我的姥姥,顺便买些吃的,无微不至的照顾姥姥,为姥姥把屎把尿,洗衣服。姥姥不吃饭,还得妈妈哄着姥姥吃,鸡蛋羹,奶粉,桃,梨,甲鱼等等姥姥也喜欢吃,但必须哄着。对我妈妈很好,我妈妈也经常逗姥姥乐。

后来姥姥病情加重,妈妈不得不一天去一回,姥姥连话也不会说了,别人扶姥姥一把,姥姥可以坐起来,姥姥只能吃鸡蛋羹,奶粉了,另我妈妈很不开心,求尽了名医,可是没有一个法子管用,哎!没办法只好输蛋白,一瓶蛋白好多钱,每天一瓶,最后姥姥的病情还没好转。急的我妈妈是25只老鼠——百爪挠心。

有时姥姥生气,饭不吃,但妈妈却仍保持良好的态度对待我姥姥,这时生气的姥姥也会把气消去一大半。

现在姥姥的病情正在恶化,肌肉松弛了,躺在炕上起不来在,6月26日晚上整12:00时,一位伟大的母亲的生命被死神夺走了。姥姥就这样离开了我们,放弃了这个家,那时家里的任何都准备好了,姥姥也带着眼泪离开的世界,离开了这个家,家里少了个顶梁柱,变的零散了,妈妈哭着叫:“妈——!”,在姥姥的棺材前,妈妈哭着,喊着!渴望姥姥起死回生,可人死不能复生。

孝顺是中华民族的传统美德,孝的事迹另人震撼,孝可以让家庭美满,我们努力起来,让孝在人们心田中回荡,让孝永不失传.

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篇11:愚人节英文优秀作文

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However, communications being what they were in the days when news traveled by foot, many people did not receive the news for several years. Others, the more obstinate crowd, refused to accept the new calendar and continued to celebrate the new year on April 1. These backward folk were labeled as "fools" by the general populace. They were subject to some ridicule, and were often sent on "fools errands" or were made the butt of other practical jokes.

This harassment evolved, over time, into a tradition of prank-playing on the first day of April. The tradition eventually spread to England and Scotland in the eighteenth century. It was later introduced to the American colonies of both the English and French. April Fools Day thus developed into an international fun fest, so to speak, with different nationalities specializing in their own brand of humor at the expense of their friends and families.

In Scotland, for example, April Fools Day is actually celebrated for two days. The second day is devoted to pranks involving the posterior region of the body. It is called Taily Day. The origin of the "kick me" sign can be traced to this observance.

Mexicos counterpart of April Fools Day is actually observed on December 28. Originally, the day was a sad remembrance of the slaughter of the innocent children by King Herod. It eventually evolved into a lighter commemoration involving pranks and trickery.

Pranks performed on April Fools Day range from the simple, (such as saying, "Your shoes untied, or I accidentally stepped on your glasses!), to the elaborate. Setting a roommates alarm clock back an hour is a common gag. Whatever the prank, the trickster usually ends it by yelling to his victim, "April Fool!"

Practical jokes are a common practice on April Fools Day. Sometimes, elaborate practical jokes are played on friends or relatives that last the entire day. The news media even gets involved. For instance, a British short film once shown on April Fools Day was a fairly detailed documentary about "spaghetti farmers" and how they harvest their crop from the spaghetti trees.

April Fools Day is a "for-fun-only" observance. Nobody is expected to buy gifts or to take their "significant other" out to eat in a fancy restaurant. Nobody gets off work or school. Its simply a fun little holiday, but a holiday on which one must remain forever vigilant, for he may be the next April Fool!

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篇12:介绍寒假的一封信英文

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Dear Tony

I am very glad to hear from you.How is eveything with you?You ask me about my plan of the winter vocation.I am going to finish my homework as soon as possible so that I can have lots of free time to read more books and help my parents do some housework.I am going to learn how to cook some delicious dishes so that my parents will be happy to enjoy them.I am going to go skating and skiing with my parents because skating and skiing are my favourite winter sports.My parent will take me to visit some interesting places,such as the Summer Palace and the Forbitten City.It will be a lot of fun.I am looking forward to my winter vocation.

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篇13:公司春节英文贺词

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On this special day I send you New Years greetings and hope that some day soon we shall be together.

在这特殊的日子,向你致以xinchun的祝福,希望不久我们能相聚在一起,

I would like to wish you a joyous new year and express my hope for your happiness and good future.

祝xinchun快乐,并愿你幸福吉祥,前程似锦。

May the New Year bring many good things and rich blessings to you and all those you love!

愿xinchun带给你和你所爱的人许多美好的事物和无尽的祝福!

Rich blessings for health and longevity is my special wish for you in the coming year.

祝你在新的一年里身体健康,多福多寿。

Good luck, good health, hood cheer. I wish you a happy New Year.

祝好运、健康、佳肴伴你度过一个快乐xinchun。

With best wishes for a happy New Year!

祝xinchun快乐,并致以良好的祝福。

I hope you have a most happy and prosperous New Year.

谨祝xinchun快乐幸福,大吉大利。

With the compliments of the season.

祝贺佳节。

May the seasons joy fill you all the year round.

愿节日的愉快伴你一生。

Seasons greetings and best wishes for the New Year.

祝福您,xinchun快乐。

Please accept my seasons greetings.

请接受我节日的祝贺。

To wish you joy at this holy season. Wishing every happiness will always be with you.

恭祝xinchun吉祥,幸福和欢乐与你同在。

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篇14:初中英文

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Saving Water

As we know, water is so important to man. Theamount of water which is

suitable to drink is less and less. But somepeople don’t care about it. They

waste a lot of water in their dailylife. Even worse, they pour dirty water and

throw rubbish into rivers.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

Something must be doneto stop the pollution(to deal with the problem). And

I think it’s agreat shame to waste while millions are in great need of

water.Wehave to save every drop of water. For example, turn off the tap

afterusing it and use a basin to wash as well. It’s also a good idea to

encouragemy friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we

livehappily. If not, the last drop of water will be the tear.

I believe if everyone dose like this, we can make agreat difference.

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篇15:滑雪的英文作文

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My Virgin Skiing Experience !I went skiing with my friends on Sunday.It was my very first time to try this super interesting sport.I really enjoyed skiing A LOT,and I think that I have potential!For the entire afternoon,I only fell down twice before our coach actually came and taught us the correct postures.After some basic and advanced practices,I did try to ski down the hill,and it was AWESOME !I think Ill try to go skiing as often as possible.P.S.However,wearing all the equipment to walk with is GOD DAMN exhausted!

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篇16:初中英文

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I think smiling is as important as sunshine. Smiling is like sunshine

because it can make people happy and have a good day. If you aren’t happy, you

can smile, and then you will feel happy. Someone may say, “But I don’t feel

happy.” Then I would say, “Please smile as you do when you are happy or play

with your friends happily. You will really be happy again.”

You don’t like crying, right? So you must prefer smiling, because you know

smiling will let people forget everything unhappy. Every day, we see teachers or

students and say, “Hi/Hello! How are you?” At the same time, you are smiling,

right?

Smiling can let you have more friends. With a smile, people will know

you’re a kind person. They will talk with you, so you will have more and more

friends.

So I say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth. It will give you

happiness.

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篇17:家的味道英文作文

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What is the taste of home? Before I lodge in school dormitory, I never think of this question. But, now I know what the taste of home is as I have lived in school for a month. I miss the delicious food cooked by my mother and her endless chatter. My father sits in the middle of the hall watching TV. The fight between my two younger brothers and the ice cream in the refrigerator make me feel warm. All these make a house a family. And it is the taste of home in my mind.

什么是家的味道?在我住校前,我从来没有想过这个问题。但是,如今在我已经住校一个月后我知道什么是家的味道了。我想念我妈妈做的美味食物了,还有她喋喋不休的唠叨声。爸爸坐在客厅中间看电视。两个弟弟的打闹声还有冰箱里的冰淇淋都让我觉得很温暖。所有这些都使得一个房子成为一个家。这些就是我心目中家的味道。

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篇18:圣诞节的一封信英文

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Dear Santa Claus,

Christmas is around the corner,and iam so excited to welcome you to the

arrival.For last several years,i required so many toys from you,and you gave me

all that i want.I am so grateful for you about this.I dont want toys any

more.Sincerely i want you to bring my families good health for the new year.As

you know,the world they are going back is the world of a "flu"; and my parents

are mostly work outside,so give me a magic present to protect my families.Can

you promise me?eager to get it on Christmas Eve!

Best wishes to you as well!

Truly yours,

Sara

亲爱的圣诞老人克劳斯:

圣诞节即将来临,和我很高兴欢迎您的到来.在过去的几年里,我需要你这么多玩具,你给我所有我想要的.我很感激你对这.我不希望任何更多的玩具.我真诚地希望你在新的一年带给我的家人身体健康.你知道,他们回去的世界是一个“流感”的世界;我的父母都在外工作,所以我需要你给我一个神奇的礼物来保护我的家庭.你能答应我吗?渴望得到它平安夜!

最好的祝福给你!

你真正的,

Sara

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篇19:交通安全英文小学生

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Nowaday, The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. In 2004, up to 570,000 road accidents occurred in China, which claimed a total of 109,000 lives. The situation got worse in 2008. Statistics show that merely from January to October saw 566,000 tragedies happen with a higher death rate.

The above aching fact reminds us that it s high time we faced and solves this problem! Though our country owns only 2% of the world cars, it contributes amazingly 22% to the total accidents! Doubtlessly, our country ranks first as the most serious traffic accident rate.

China cannot afford millions of life losses, and we can not let the sorrow slow down our development speed. The government must play the most important role in solve the problem. Strict traffic rules should be made, and more importantly, practiced and followed. According to some other countries experience, high fine may also help. Slow down the speed of cars, as well as our country, there are always something worth your attention.

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篇20:怎样写出正确的英文好句

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每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一:整体性

句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二:连贯性

句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三:准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四:重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五:语法正确,句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。

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