军训作文英语高中作文【推荐20篇】

导语：《简·爱》是十九世纪英国著名的女作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，人们普遍认为《简·爱》是夏洛蒂·勃朗特“诗意的生平写照”，是一部具有自传色彩的作品。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

This is a story about a special and unreserved woman who has been exposed to a hostile environment but continuously and fearlessly struggling for her ideal life. The story can be interpreted as a symbol of the independent spirit.

It seems to me that many readers’ English reading experience starts with Jane Eyer. I am of no exception. As we refer to the movie “Jane Eyer”, it is not surprising to find some differences because of its being filmized and retold in a new way, but the spirit of the novel remains----to be an independent person, both physically and mentally.

Jane Eyer was a born resister, whose parents went off when she was very young, and her aunt，the only relative she had，treated her as badly as a ragtag. Since Jane’s education in Lowwood Orphanage began, she didn’t get what she had been expecting——simply being regarded as a common person, just the same as any other girl around. The suffers from being humiliated and devastated teach Jane to be persevering and prize dignity over anything else.As a reward of revolting the ruthless oppression, Jane got a chance to be a tutor in Thornfield Garden. There she made the acquaintance of lovely Adele and that garden’s owner, Rochester, a man with warm heart despite a cold face outside. Jane expected to change the life from then on, but fate had decided otherwise: After Jane and Rochester fell in love with each other and got down to get marry, she unfortunately came to know in fact Rochester had got a legal wife, who seemed to be the shadow following Rochester and led to his moodiness all the time ----Rochester was also a despairing person in need of salvation. Jane did want to give him a hand, however, she made up her mind to leave, because she didn’t want to betray her own principles, because she was Jane Eyer. The film has finally got a symbolist end: Jane inherited a large number of legacies and finally returned. After finding Rochester’s misfortune brought by his original mad wife, Jane chose to stay with him forever.

I don’t know what others feel, but frankly speaking, I would rather regard the section that Jane began her teaching job in Thornfield as the film’s end----especially when I heard Jane’s words “Never in my life have I been awaken so happily.” For one thing, this ideal and brand-new beginning of life was what Jane had been imagining for long as a suffering person; for another, this should be what the audiences with my views hoped her to get. But the professional judgment of producing films reminded me to wait for a totally different result: There must be something wrong coming with the excellence----perhaps not only should another section be added to enrich the story, but also we may see from the next transition of Jane’s life that “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you would get.” (By Forrest Gump’s mother, in the film “Forrest Gump”)

What’s more, this film didn’t end when Jane left Thornfield. For Jane Eyer herself, there should always be somewhere to realize her great ideal of being independent considering her fortitude, but for Rochester, how he can get salvation? The film gives the answer tentatively: Jane eventually got back to Rochester. In fact, when Jane met Rochester for the first time, she scared his horse and made his heel strained, to a certain extent, which meant Rochester would get retrieval because of Jane. We can consider Rochester’s experiences as that of religion meaning. The fire by his frantic wife was the punishment for the cynicism early in his life. After it, Rochester got the mercy of the God and the love of the woman whom he loved. Here we can say: human nature and divinity get united perfectly in order to let such a story accord with the requirements of both two sides. The value of this film may be due to its efforts to explore a new way for the development of humanism under the faith of religion.

Life is ceaselessly changing, but our living principles remain. Firmly persisting for the rights of being independent gives us enough confidence and courage, which is like the beacon over the capriccioso sea of life. In the world of the film, we have found the stories of ourselves, which makes us so concerned about the fate of the dramatis personae.

In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, both physical and mental effects on us call for a balance. We are likely to find ourselves bogged down in the Sargasso Sea of information overload and living unconsciousness. It’s our spirit that makes the life meaningful.

Heart is the engine of body, brain is the resource of thought, and great films are the mirrors of life. Indubitably, “Jane Eyer” is one of them.

2015年7月31日 星期五 天气 晴

军训内容：齐步走、正步分解姿势、唱军歌、拉歌、整理内务

国防教育内容：“魅力东方、精彩绿舟”京剧演出

早上5：40起床，整理被单、洗漱;6：00打铃，打扫卫生。6：30集合，统一练习前一天的训练内容，然后去食堂。相比学校的早餐，东方绿舟早餐略显逊色，每天必有榨菜或是萝卜干。

上午8：00再次集合，在未来广场上练习齐步走。每教一个动作，教官都会说明动作要领，与我以往印象不同的是，齐步走和正步走都不是握拳，而是四指轻轻握拢、与地面平行，大拇指贴于食指第二关节处。齐步走和正步走最大的问题在于排面的整齐程度和人与人之间的距离的控制，这是训练的重点所在。

下午14：00左右，前往绿舟剧场观看“魅力东方、精彩绿舟”京剧演出。说是演出，其实是讲座加演出，上海京剧院的老师向我们介绍生、旦、净、丑等京剧的基本常识，还通过许多演员的生动演绎来展示京剧的基本表现形式;最后还请部分同学上台体验京剧的表演艺术。

15：30左右开始训练。由于中午吃饭时，连长同学急于冲进食堂没有听从教官指挥(可能是没听到)，集体被罚蹲五分钟，别看只有五分钟，其实很累的，况且还要挺直腰板。由于我姿势比较标准，教官第一个让我站起来休息。随后，以排为单位练习齐步走，要求动作和排面的整齐;最后，开始练习正步走的手部姿势，动作要领为：手指轻轻握拢，拇指伸直贴于食指第二节;向前摆臂时，肘部弯曲，小臂略成水平，手心向内稍向下。我们每学一个动作，教官都会一一纠正。我也佩服教官一直不停地大声喊口令，很少喝水且声音不嘶哑。

18：00晚间集合时，教官规定了连长或指挥员向营长报告的流程：先敬礼，后说：“报告营长，十七连参加此次集合，应到四十二人，实到四十二人，(…人……，)列队完毕，请指示!”随后营长回答：“稍息。”我回答“是!”，最后敬礼。教官要求我声音洪亮，站姿标准。在以后的几天里，我尽量地模仿着教官的声音语调站姿，过了一把军训指挥员的瘾。

今晚是练习正步走的腿部姿势：腿要绷直，脚尖下压，脚掌与地面平行，离地面约25厘米，上体正直，微向前倾。这是我们整个军训当中最难的一个姿势，刚开始我们都东倒西歪，坚持不了多久，但经过几次的练习后，我感觉其实这并不是非常难，只要依靠站立那只脚的大腿肌肉，以此为支撑点，找到合适的重心，虽然身体难以保持挺拔，但也能够坚持比较长的时间。

练了一会儿教官说：“如果有谁能和我一起坚持这个姿势1分钟，全班就可以休息，而且在以后的练习中这几个同学可以多休息一会儿。”我没有多想立刻举手，和其他两名同学一起接受挑战。记时开始：大约十几秒后大腿肌肉酸、然后疼，再过十几秒大腿肌肉酸疼加剧，再过十几秒觉得腿麻木了，整个人像是僵住了，任由那汗水“大珠小珠落玉盘”般地垂直落下，再环顾四周，一双双充满信任、期待的眼睛，我告诉自己一定要坚持。倒计时结束，掌声响起，我们赢了。

教官随即兑现诺言让我们围坐在一起，开始教我们拉歌。以19连为假想敌，主要有以下几种“格式”：“19连，来一个;来一个，19连;19连来了没有?没有!要不要来一个?要!”“唱得好不好?好!要不要再来一个?要!”下两种是对对面领头的：“…长得帅不帅?帅!来一个要不要?要!”“…!嘿咻嘿咻!来一个呀!嘿咻嘿咻!”最后一种是最经典的：“要唱!干脆!不唱!撤退!时间!宝贵!”拉歌可以说是我们七天军训中最愉快、最难忘的回忆。

最后，教官教我们唱一首军歌，名为《当那一天来临》：“这是一个晴朗的早晨，鸽哨声伴着起床号音，但是这世界并不安宁，和平年代也有激荡的风云……”教官告诉我们，唱军歌不需要什么技巧，只要扯着嗓子喊就可以了。借着未来广场主席台上微弱的灯光，全班同学围坐在一起，在丝丝凉风的吹拂下，扯着嗓子集体拉歌、学歌、唱歌，有一种令人心旷神怡的感觉。

晚上的训练结束后，教官组织寝室长开会，我莫名其妙地成为了寝室长。教官宣布了寝室注意事项：人离开时，床上、衣钩上不能有东西，床边的桌子上和地面上不能有水杯，行李箱不能露在走廊上等等，一连串的“不能”让我实实在在的体会到军人严格的组织纪律，不仅仅是体现在战场，生活上也同样如此，难怪中国军队有战无不胜的美誉。

洗完澡后，主教官在女生寝室乔治亚公寓门口向寝室长们演示内务整理。主要是教我们怎样将被子叠成豆腐块状，教官全然不顾满脸汗水，耐心细致地一步步演示军人叠被子的过程(在叠棱角的时候还用卡来刮)。我们都全神贯注地看着教官的每一个手势，完毕后，所有人不约而同地报以最热烈的掌声。我知道，这掌声不仅仅是因为惊叹教官叠出了如此整齐美观的被子，更是对军人们吃苦耐劳敬业精神的赞赏!

回到寝室已近21：30，还有半个小时就要熄灯了，急急忙忙打开军训日记本，教官叠被子的身影一直在我脑中徘徊……

短暂而又紧张的军训生活已经结束了，回顾其中的点点滴滴，我感到精彩而充实。当我执笔写下这五天的感触时，深知自己不仅仅健壮了体魄，增强了国防意识，提高了集体荣誉感，更加是受到了一次心灵上的洗礼。

在五天的军训中，我学会了团结。团结就是力量，他不仅仅是一句话，更是人生中的一个哲理，告诫我们为人的理念。它在军训中也发挥了极大的作用。如果不是，那我们不可能在操场上步调一致，不可能在口令下达的那一瞬间就做出动作，不可能在蹲下时做到腰不动，更不可能在比赛中有那么强烈的集体荣誉感。因为团结，我们在十个班里脱颖而出，因为团结我的人生理念有了极大的改观：你若只顾你自己的得失那极有可能会毁了整个团队，到最后‘‘竹篮打水一场空’’，什么都得不到。

五天的军训，还让我拥有了坚强的意志。操场上，那笔直的身影，那挺立的脊梁告诉了我们：这就是军人。经过五天的磨练，我们磨练去了军人的意志，也就是钢铁般的意志，每一滴汗水是那意志的象征，阳光下伫立的身影也是那意志的象征。

五天的军训，我们尝遍酸甜苦辣。当我双腿发颤时，我感觉是酸的;当完成得好提前休息或放学时，我感觉是甜的;当因不断重复跨立、蹲下、齐步走这些动作而口干舌燥时，我感觉是苦的;而没做好被拉出去站着时，我感觉是辣的。正因有了这些酸甜苦辣军训才变多姿多彩而军训演展会上我们也因为这些酸甜苦辣，自信十足，最后得了三等奖。

幼苗不经历风吹雨打，怎能长成参天大树?麦子不经历风吹日晒，怎能结出麦穗?雏鹰不经历挫折，又怎能翱翔于天际?身为21世纪的青少年，我们不经历磨练又怎能撑起国家的大梁呢?

经历军训后，我还懂得了，人要有集体荣誉感、团结感与上进心，不然你就不是一个能轻易融于社会的人。

军训虽苦，但锻炼了我们的身体，磨练了我们的意志，所以这一切都是值得的。不要在以后的生活里对军训耿耿于怀。

为丰富中学生的环保知识，培养防护意识，学校英语社针对我国雾霾天气频现，危害严重的现状，决定在学生中举行英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。

1．雾霾天气的危害：

2．雾霾产生的原因；

3．自我防护的方法。

参考词汇：尾气排放：exhaust emission

雾霾天气：hazy weather

注意：1．词数：120_-150；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Nowadays, the hazy weather frequently appears in our country. It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation. Terrible accidents happen every now and then, some highways have to be shut down because of the low visibility.

Obviously, air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather. At the same time, smoke from burning coal and all kinds of dust are also important factors. Besides, exhaust emission from cars and buses has made the situation even worse.

So proper measures should be adopted to deal with the serious problem. To students, opportunities for outdoor sports activities should be decreased, washing faces and hands with running water after each outing is also important, and do not forget to wear a good-quality mask to protect yourself while going out.

I hope we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon.

[高中英语作文：雾霾

October 1st is the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节,这对于整个国家是一个公共假日。这是一个重要的日子,标志着中华人民共和国开始。在那一天,有很多庆祝控股全国,从中央政府到一般人。和公共场所,包括大广场,公园在节日的装饰主题。近年来,国家节日意味着黄金周,这是一个短暂的假期,所有的人都期待。随着生活水平的提高,人们有更多的钱和渴望旅游黄金周是一个很好的机会。除此之外,对于那些人不出去,这是一个很好的时间来好好休息一下。因此,中国的国庆节意味着很多。

温室里的花朵永远都是最脆弱的，学会独立是很重要的。下面是小编为你整理的关于独立的高中英语作文，希望你喜欢! 关于独立的高中英语作文篇1

Today in China,many families have only one child.So the children usually doted upon by all family members.Gradually some of them get used to depending on their parents and lack the ability to solve problems independently.

There are some ways to help children to be independent.Firstly,the child should have a chance to see the world around him.He must understand that there are various competitions in this world,and everyone can find his right position in the society only by individual efforts.Secondly,the parents should give the child enough help to make him feel comfortable.Its impossible to ask a child not to depend on parents at once.A child needs help from the beginning.Without any help,the child may lose his faith.At last,parents should let his child make decisions,which can temper his ability to deal with problems.

No parents can accompany the children for the whole life.It is the child himself who is responsible for her own fate.Only an independent person can live and succeed in this world.

今日的中国,很多家庭都只有一个孩子.所以孩子往往成为全家人生活的焦点.有些孩子逐渐养成了依赖家长的习惯,从而导致他们缺乏自己解决问题的能力.

这里有几点可以帮助孩子变得独立.首先,孩子应当正式他周围的世界,每个人只有通过自己的努力才能在社会中找到他自己的位置.其次,家长应给予孩子足够的温暖让他感到舒适.不能要求每个孩子从不依赖父母.孩子需要一个起跑的平台.没有任何帮助,孩子或许会失去信念.最后,家长应让孩子做决定,如何依靠自己的能力解决问题.

没有父母可以陪伴孩子一辈子.决定自己的命运是孩子肩负的责任.只有独立的人才能在这个世界生活并取得成功. 关于独立的高中英语作文篇2

When I was very small, I was so envious about the adults, because they could do whatever they wanted and did not have to depend on their parents. For me, I did not have money and my parents limited my pocket money, so I couldn’t spend the money to buy whatever I wanted. It seems to me that being an adult is my only wish. Some day, I learned from the movie that being an adult was not that as perfect as I thought. In the movie, the man struggled to earn money to pay his bills, what’s more, he had to stay away from his family. Loneliness was always around him. To be independent means we can live our own way and make our own decision. We have more freedom. But at the same time, it also means more annoyance. So why just we enjoy this moment.

在我很小的时候,我很羡慕成年人,因为他们可以做任何他们想做的,不必依赖他们的父母。对我来说,我没有钱,我的父母限制我的零花钱,所以我无法花钱去买所有我想要的。似乎成为一个成年人是我唯一的愿望。有一天,我从这部电影中了解到，作为一个成年人也没有我想象中的那么完美。在电影中,那个人努力挣钱来支付他的账单,更重要的是,他不得不远离他的家人。寂寞总是是围绕着他。独立意味着我们可以有自己的方式生活,做自己的决定。我们有的自由。但与此同时,这也意味着的烦恼。所以为什么不享受这一刻呢。 关于独立的高中英语作文篇3

When we talk about being independent, we often think about leaving our parents and living alone. The mental independence is always ignored by people, mental independence means the person can measure the things and make the right decision. As for the children, even they move out and stay far away from their parents, but sometimes they just can’t control themselves, they will get the bad behavior, like smoking and drinking, their life is losing control. The young people need to cultivate their independent spirit, they should think by themselves, learn to take care of the other people, thus they can be the real independent. When a person grows up, they can be strong enough to support their lives and at the same time, they can be mature enough to make their own decision. They can tell what is wrong and what is right.

当我们谈到成为独立，总是想要离开父母，独自居住。精神上的独立总是被人们忽略，精神上的独立意味着一个人能衡量事情，做出正确的决定。对于孩子来说，虽然他们搬出去，远离父母，但是有时候他们无法自控，养成不好的习惯。比如抽烟和喝酒，他们的生活会失控。年轻人需要养成独立精神，他们应该自己思考，学着去照顾别人，这样才能真正的独立。当一个人成长了，他们才能够足够的强大去养活自己，同时，也能够足够成熟去做决定。他们能区分什么是好，什么是坏。

[有关独立的高中英语作文

Today, when I awaked up, I found the air-conditioner didn’t work. I used the control, but it still didn’t work. I knew the air-conditioner was in trouble. I went downstairs. My father told me two air-conditioner and two netputer had been broken. Because my father used electric making machine to make electric, so the voltage was not stable. It led to the trouble. Oh! Whenever the government will let the factory use electric? If it lasts longer, I will be crazy!!

今天已是军训的第四天,也是最后一天.前三天发生的一切事情还记忆忧新,就好象是刚才发生的事情.现在我已习惯了军训的生活,也习惯了苦和累,记得刚开始军训的时候感觉很辛苦,还有几次晕倒了.可现在我不怕苦不怕累,只有个心愿,就是希望我们班在今天的军训比赛中获得第一.

上午的训练严格来说是比平常更辛苦一些,因为下午就要比赛了,教官只好严格执行了.好在上午是阴天,老天爷给我们创造了一个很好的训练环境,就这样,一大早就是复习前几天训练的内容,中午也就是吃饭睡觉,转眼间就到了下午,就要开始比赛了,我十分紧张,生怕自己在比赛中一不小心做错动作而连累我们班的荣誉,更担心我们班得不到奖.这种忐忑不安的情绪一直延续到比赛开始.

前面几个班的同学表现都很好,可是世上毕竟没有完善美,每个半豆油一些差错.终于轮到我们班表演了,教官的口令,同学们的精神面貌,评委门和其他班的同学门都看得很清楚,依据移动都将会被口风.同学们容光焕发,配合社教官的口令,做出一系列标准的动作,照相机的镜头也对着我们闪光,那时侯真有一种自豪感.不知过了多长时间,终于表演完了,我们昂首挺胸,踏着整齐的步伐回到草地.

这次的军训表演使我了解到,有志者，事竟成!

丽开学了，妈妈也回家了，丽明天就开始军训了，学姐带着丽和同学来到领取军训服的地方，丽仔细的看着前面的同学如何领取，丽想要一套大一点的衣服，军训结束后可以拿回家给爸爸干活穿。

回寝室后，丽迫不及待的试穿衣服，裤子很肥很大，即使裤腰带系紧了还是感觉会掉。裤子腿都肥的可以两腿同时穿一进一个裤腿，室友也差不多和丽一样，不过丽要的是比自己的尺寸还大一号，所以比室友的还肥一些。室友急忙拿着裤子去学校改衣服的地方把裤子改瘦，丽也想穿瘦的裤子，但是改一条裤子就要二十元呢，军训结束就不用穿了，如果坚持半个月就不用花那二十元了，也可以买点自己想吃的，丽想来想去，还是决定就这么穿着了。

军训的第一天，丽很不喜欢穿军训鞋，不跟脚还很难看，穿时间久了也不舒服。最重要的是，一点底也没有，丽觉得自己很矮，如果穿上这种鞋，自己就是最矮的了。丽认真的抹着和妈妈一起买的防晒霜，丽第一次用这么贵的护肤品，有些不舍又有些温暖。室友都穿好了鞋，丽也不得不穿好鞋，穿好了之后，丽和大家一起来到体育场。

丽觉得这种军训还挺正式的，初中高中军训的时候从来没有统一服装。丽站在了第二排边上，看着慢慢走来的教官，丽心生厌烦，丽觉得教官最好早点走，走了军训就会结束。中午的天气很热，有一种被晒化的感觉，晚上的天气又很冷，已经穿长衣长裤了，身体却还是不停的哆嗦，即使自己又多穿了一层也无济于事。丽讨厌军训，也厌极了教官，丽总觉得教官不是什么好人，和女同学关系有的影响很不好，也不明白为什么会有人和教官谈恋爱，即使明令禁止教官不许留联系方式，与学生谈恋爱也是要受处罚的，还是会存在这种现象。丽只希望军训早日结束。

[高中军训的作文三篇

I was born on March 18。 My family is neither very rich nor very poor。 My parents are peasants。 They work hard to support the family。 They encourage me to study well。 My childhood was happy。

I like learning。 I like music and sports， too。 I can run very fast and am the fastest runner in my class。 I am good at English， Physics and Math。

I want to be a scientist。 Scientists have made recorders， TV sets， and so on。 They have also invented the computer。 All these make our life rich， interesting and easy。

转眼间，七天的军训结束了，留给我们的是刺鼻、酸、苦、辣，还有我们永恒的记忆。结束并不意味着句号，而是漫长的高中生活中的一个逗号。我们要努力还有很长的路要走，路很长，修远很忙，所以我会上下搜索。

灼热的大地，炙热的阳光，汗流浃背的学生，构成了一幅特殊的“苦难景观”。如果大球场在阳光下一点一点融化收缩，会把我们吞没。我们不在乎我们学到了什么，我们在乎的是我们学到了什么。苦难不是一种时尚，需要用汗水和毅力来换。苦难留给我们无尽的财富，强健的体魄，刚毅的作风，战胜困难的勇气！

感觉军训把我们这群十六七岁的孩子培养成了真正的高中生，让我们懂得了什么是汗水，什么是幸福，让我们学会了如何独立，如何面对生活，如何面对困难，如何承担光荣而艰巨的责任。

我记得只训练了三天，就已经精疲力尽了。当我第一次学会立正时，我想知道为什么教练要如此仔细地解释体育课上经常做的动作，这些动作已经知道了，为什么左转和右转需要教练煞费苦心地让我们练习和实践以获得真正的知识。军训五天，能理解一点立正就是有钱，转几圈就能容纳。站在军姿上给你黄帝子孙不屈的脊梁，龙子孙无限的毅力。转身的做法体现了人类思维的活跃敏捷和集体主义的伟大。没有滴水，就不能形成江河大海。

对手是最大的朋友，我们是比赛中的对手，我们是比赛后的朋友，互相鼓励前进，让军训更加精彩，更加充实，更加有意义。

其实军训不是魔鬼训练，也不是普通人眼中的灰色咏叹调。除了繁忙的军训，我们一起感受到军歌的洪亮，尤其是他们雄壮的气势，大家围坐在一起的亲切感，互相争论的不屈精神。而这些都是我们在日常生活中从未感受过的。每个人都异口同声地喊出了士兵的声音，不可避免地引起了他们的强烈共鸣。这些都是我们生命中不可多得的奇遇，会铭刻在我们心中。

一眨眼，时间就像一条汩汩的河流。仿佛一眨眼，军训生活的句号就来到了眼前。回顾丰富多彩的军训生活，我还是更觉得——“追忆往事，数风流人物，犹在当下。”

Smoking and Health-吸烟与健康

About Internet-关于因特网

The Problem of Food-食品问题

Add Feet-添足

Accompany Us Studying-陪读

Early Rising-早起

My Dream-我的梦想

Going Abroad-出国

Correct Directions-辨明方向

真正的美-True Beauty

读书的价值-The Value of Reading Books

空余时间的利用-Use of Free Time

环境与发展-Development and the Environment

过度词

1)递进：furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition

2)转折：however,but,nevertheless,after all

3)总结：finally,at last,in brief,to conclude

4)强调：really,indeed,certainly,surely,above all

5)对比：in the same way, just as, on the other hand

中间段落句

1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.

2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First，______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______

5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，

Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.

8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.

9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.

10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：

I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.

(三)结尾句

1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.

2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……

But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.

4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

6. 至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.

7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……; 第二，……;最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.

8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______.

9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it.In the morning I put a

note on the table for my mum and it said,"Today is my birthday,dont forget

it!"At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of

fun.But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home.When I open the

door,there wasnt anybody in the house.There was only a note that said,"Coming

home late tonight,mum and dad."I try to call them but there was no answer.I was

so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I

couldnt eat anything.I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely.It was about time for dinner,my mother

called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house.When I got there I

couldnt believed my eyes.Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends

and even my classmates.There was so many gifts and a big cake.What a surprising

birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.

一、形成性评价的概念

形成性评价(Formative Assessment)是美国评价学专家斯克里芬在1967年在其所著的《评论方法论》里提出来的。所谓的形成性评价是相对于传统的终结性评价(Summative Assessment)而言的，指的是对学生日常学习过程中的表现、所取得的成绩及所反映出来的情感、态度和策略方面的发展做出的评价，这种评价是通过对学生学习的整个过程持续观察、记录和反思之后得出来的。

形成性评价的目的是为了激励学生学习，帮助学生调控自己的学习过程。让学生获得成就感，增强其自信心和团结合作精神，让学生从被动接受评价变成一个评价的主体和积极参与者。形成性评价能够帮助教师了解学生的学习情况，从而制定下一步的教学计划。与终结性评价相比，形成性评价不只以考试成绩来衡量学生的学习情况，它更加灵活方便，也更加科学有效。形成性评价注重对学生学习行为和表现的评估，能够有效发挥学生的主动性和创造性，有利于培养学生的学习兴趣，也能够有效提高学生的自信心。

在英语口语教学中运用形成性评价，能够让学生在课堂中互相评价，增强学生参与课堂教学的积极性，在提高英语口语能力的同时体会到成功的快乐，形成一个教师与学生、学生与学生之间良好互动的课堂。形成性评价注重开发学生的创新能力和思考能力，而要培养这些能力就必须依靠坚持不懈的学习和运用来完成。

二、形成性评价的方法与工具

首先，一般而言，形成性评价的方法大致分为：自我评价、同伴互评和教师评价。

自我评价是指学生在学习的过程中就自己学习进程中的某个阶段性成果的总结和评价。自我评价是形成性评价中尤为重要的评价方法，只有通过自我评价才能尽力发挥其的主观能动性，积极主动地参与课堂教学活动。只有主观积极地参与课堂，就自己不同阶段的水平，才能更好地定位自己进一步的目标，并在课程初期、中期及末期分别给予自己相对客观中肯的评价，以促进下一阶段的学习。

同伴互评是指在课堂活动中，就某一活动进行同学之间的评价，评价包括学习态度、学习能力及学习方法的评价。在同伴互评的过程中，学生们可以相互探讨学习方法、交流学习心得、提出改进的建议和意见。同伴之间相互比较、竞争，相互取长补短，既增强了合作精神又促进了学习能力和学习效率的提升。同伴互评作为形成性评价重要的方法之一，其评价形式既增强了课堂的趣味性又增强了学生的学习自信心和学习热情。

课堂学习的主体是学生，但是学习评价的主体却是教师。形成性评价侧重过程教育，在教学过程中，根据需要调整教学计划和内容，该评价尤其重视学生与教师在课堂的共同参与度，而非教师“一言堂”。首先，教师在教学过程中设定好学生自我评价与同伴评价的量化标准，列好学生自我评价和同伴评价的核查表；其次，学生根据核查表才可有的放矢，对照核查表所列的内容一一检查，每节课后，客观公正地给予自己和他人中肯的评价；最后，结合学生自我评价和同伴评价的反馈结果，教师针对学生课堂上的表现，纵向对比某一特定学生评价前后的差异，或者横向比较某一特定组别在同一活动中每位学生各项指标的完成情况，同时，以多种形式反馈给学生并提出整改意见。因而，在教学的不同阶段，根据学生的能力发展状况，教师可适时调整评价方式，不断改进教学方法和教学手段。

只有将自我评价、同伴评价与教师评价结合在一起评价方式才能保证较好的教学效果，才能促进教育改革的进一步深化，真正达到以素质教育培养复合型人才的终极目标。

其次，形成性评价的行为评估工具有课堂观察、学生档案、座谈、问卷调查、访谈和对话周记等。如何运用以及怎样运用这些评价工具要根据所授课程、课程目标和授课对象等诸多因素做适当调整。

课堂观察是教学行为和技巧的基本方式。根据Genesee and Upshur(2001:79)的观点，教师在观察的基础上，可以评估学生已掌握和未掌握的内容。换言之，教师应该评估促进或阻碍学生学习的策略。与此同时，教师还可评估一些特定的教学策略的有效性，确定学生们欣赏哪些课堂活动和形式。课堂观察有助于教师更好地了解课程设计和学生需求的契合度。通过正式或非正式的观察，教师可掌握大多数学生对于教学安排的可接受程度，根据学生的需求改进或调整教学安排等，以提升教学效果。

“questionnaires and interviews can all be thought of as conversations between students and teachers”（Genesee and Upshur，2001:136）。如上所述，问卷调查和访谈都可被看作教师和学生间的对话，访谈和问卷调查是相似的，但决定使用访谈或者问卷调查可依据不同的教学目的。无论是哪种方式，都是老师和学生之间相对正式的会谈，这非常有利于老师对他的教学效果进行评估,诊断学生在英语学习遇到的困难，为学生寻找合适的解决问题,获得良好的学习策略和学习得到更多的进步。访谈和问卷调查设计应该根据学生的个人需求并符合教学目标。

对话周记作为教师和学生沟通的另一种方式，深受学生的喜爱。因课程设置和班级规模的不同，课堂观察、问卷调查及访谈都相对比较片面，而对话周记则可以关注到每个学生的不同需求。师生间定期通信，既增加了教师和学生之间的相互了解，增强彼此的信任，又能解决学生的个案问题，做到因材施教；同时，为了促进“教学相长”，学生可及时反馈教师的课堂教学，对于教师的教学提出较好的建议和意见。

学生档案是一个综合各项评估功能于一体的评估工具。它可以记录学生的成长、课堂变化且兼顾多种需要。如今，众多评价工具只把学生作为评价的对象，而评估的责任和任务的则落到了教师身上。但事实上，几乎没有一种评价工具能很好地管理学生活动并对其课堂行为负责。相比之下, 建立学生档案，需要学生亲力亲为；本着自我负责的原则，他们要更好地自我监督和控制，同时，在建档案的过程中，学生可以见证自己的进步与成长，增强学习的自信，提高学习的效果。

三、形成性评价对于英语口语教学的重要性与紧迫性

众所周知,教育评估在大学英语课程改革中扮演着相当重要的角色。英语教学的重点已从传播知识转移到培养能力。多年来，在中国，人们只注重英语写作和阅读的能力的提升，而一直忽视英语口语交际能力。多年来，教学评价已经被狭义理解为量化教学，而后进一步局限于教学测试。考试作为教学的终极目的，期末考试的成绩也就成为教师评价学生的最重要的依据。而对于口语课堂，单一的这种评估方式和依据增加了大多数学生的心理压力和少部分学生侥幸心理。考试成绩给学生很大压力，危害学生的发展，评估过程中，学生一直被动地参与，无法调动其积极性。当课程结束时，教师将得不到及时准确的学生反馈，无法改善评估方法以助于提高学生的英语口语能力。

“形成性评价源于诊断性测试。与终结性评价相比，形成性评价通过教学过程中多方面的评价发现问题，解决问题，强调过程性、目标性和学生学习的主动性。” (魏薇，2005) 鉴于终结性评价在口语测试评分中的片面性和主观性，大学英语口语表达能力的培养还是受到了这种终结性评价的制约。在大学英语口语教学中，形成性评价最重要的任务的是帮助教师监控学生英语口语的学习过程，提高学生的英语口语学习。如能将形成性评价的理论引入大学英语口语课堂教学与测试中，建立大学英语口语课程与形成性评价相结合的评估模式，则会推动大学英语口语教学和测试的改革进程。

鉴于口语课堂的特点，为了克服传统终结性评价对于口语课堂的制约性，形成性评价与大学英语口语教学相结合有其不可忽视的重要性和紧迫性。

首先，由于口语表达能力除了包含最基本的发音、词汇、语法能力还有语用能力、文化知识储备力等多项复杂的技能，而所有的这些技能无法在某一次测试中完全体现出来。因口语学习的最终目的是运用到相关学科、为了更好地促进国际交流。

而形成性评价尤其注重过程教学，这种评价将教学过程分成了诸多阶段，学生可在每个不同的阶段就自己的学习态度、发音、语言运用的准确性、流利程度以及课堂活动参与的积极性进行横向的同学互评和纵向的自我比较。一方面，横向比较可以找到彼此间的差距，互相帮助已达到各方面的提升；另一方面，学生可在整理学习档案的过程中，纵向比较自己前后阶段的学习情况，时刻了解自己在每个阶段的学习状况，在教师和同学的辅助下，运用不同的学习方法和策略，逐项提高自己的口语能力。 另外，教师在学生进行评价的过程中，可真实地参与并记录学生在各方面的真实水平。

其次，口语课堂实际上是教师与学生、学生与学生之间的互动交际。教师需要花费大量的时间设计口语活动、鼓励学生参与活动、监控课堂活动、诊断学生的需求和问题、记录学生的表现等。学生则在各种学习任务和活动中不断地练习、发现问题、纠正偏差。

与传统的终结性评价不同，形成性评价的最显著特征是评价的主体是学生，学生和教师共同参与课堂，缺一不可。根据多数学生的关注点，学生参与确定研究目标、评分标准和英语口语的性能评估。因而，他们了解每一项活动的任务和目标，他们可合理运用各种评价方式和工具，课前认真准备，课堂上积极参与，能与教师积极互动，课堂上客观地评价自己、同伴和教师。这不仅是一种评价过程，更是学生回归自我认同感的方式。学生增加了学习自信，在评价过程中不断积累经验，逐步获得学习成就感。教师亦可在与学生互动的过程中，更好地了解学生的知识掌握和课堂反馈情况，根据反馈适时调整教学方法。如此良性循环，既增强了课堂的趣味性又提高了学生的学习效率。

四、结语

形成性评价，作为正常教学和学习过程的有机部分，可以全面、客观、科学、准确地提供与其学习目标相关的重要信息，它有助于促进学生的个性化发展和外语教学质量的根本性提高。形成性评价其中的一个重要作用是培养学生良好的英语学习习惯。将英语形成性评价与口语教学紧密地结合在一起，能提高学生学习的兴趣并及时、准确、客观地反映学生的真实水平，使学生的英语口语能力稳步提高。通过采用具体的形成性评价方式，发展学生的自我评价与学生间相互评价的能力，以促进学生的自我反思与自我管理能力。从而提高学生自主学习意识与自主学习能力，并为他们养成终身学习的意识与习惯打下基础。

导语：作为一名高三的老前辈，你对你的高中生活有什么看法及介绍的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

As a Senior Grade Three students, I am very busy in preparing for the college entrance examination. I have seven classes a day, and two self-study classes at night. And only a day left for the weekend. So, most of the time I have to spend on the study, after all the college entrance examination is very important for almost all of us. Aside of study, I would play football with my friends after school and the weekend. I like playing football very much. When I run on the football field, I can put the examination thing off my mind for a while, only sweat and laugh left. It is a good exercise for health and a good way to relax from the busy study too. This is my high school life, busy and fulfilling.

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作为一个高三的学生，我忙于为高考做准备。我一天有7节课，还有两节晚自习。周末只剩下一天。所以，我把大部分时间都花在学习上，毕竟高考对我们大多数人来说都十分重要。除了学习，我会在放学后以及周末跟我的朋友一起踢足球。我非常喜欢踢足球。当我在足球场上奔跑的时候，我可以暂时将考试的事情抛之脑后，只剩下汗水和欢笑。这对健康是个很好的锻炼，也是一个学习之余很好的放松方式。这就是我的高中生活，忙碌而充实。

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When the young people start their career, they will do everything to get

the chance to help their career to make breakthrough, such as follow the

business rules. They choose to drink as much as possible, which is over the

limitation of their bodies. The coming wealth is based on the loss of health.

The media reported the news about how the young people died of drinking a lot of

alcohol. Their ambition made them to undertake the limitation. As a result, they

died at the young age. There is no doubt that health overweighs wealth. If a

rich people didnt have a sound body, how he can enjoy life. A man who has been

badly ill will take special attention to the health. No matter how much money he

is paid, he will turn down the invitation that hurts his body.

This weekend, there was an art festival in our school, it had been hold for

five years and the school insisted to make it become the feature. I was so

excited, this was the first time for me to join. Early in the morning, I saw

there were so many people coming to the campus, making the campus so lively. The

students dressed so well and gave the warm welcome to the guests. I walked

around and appreciated the painting, every work was drawn by the students, I was

so impressed by these works. There were also some handworks, which were so

creative, it reflected the students’ wisdom. Though we were busy with our

subjects most of the time, some students still kept on their hobbies and made it

their talent. I should learn from them and develop some interest.

Since I went to college, I feel so excited about the new chapter of my

life. I have imagined the campus life for so many years. Now I finally come to

this stage. I have much time after class, so I need to learn to deal with it.

After two years’ struggling, I find the right way to spend my time.

The first thing for every college student is to learn major knowledge. In

China, so many students think college time is used to play instead of study, so

they skip class. This is a big mistake. College is the stage for students to

master practical skills, which decides what kind of job they will work on. So I

study very hard from Monday to Friday. I don’t want to miss the important

knowledge.

The second thing for college students is to join the after-class

activities. Joining the activities can not only learn more skills, such as dance

and sports, but also can make friends. Campus is like a small society. Students

need to learn to make connections with other students, so that they can win more

chances. I learn a lot from my new friends and know how to communicate.

My college life is wonderful, I learn both knowledge and social skills.

There are many festivals in China，During these holidays, my favorite holiday is Chinese New Year.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to have some fun.

On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.

在中国，一年有很多节日，在这些节日中，我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日，更因为它是新一年的开始，给人们带来新的希望，也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方，人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。

通常，我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，之后家人团座一起，分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一，人们通常会早起，会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里，人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之，春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。

Military Training

In our country, when we go to middle school, we must attend to the military training. Most students are afraid of it, because the training often happens in hot summer. In summer days, the weather is too hot to stand. But students have to stay outside all the day. In addition, the training is very hard. Students have to learn to be a solder. They have to obey many rules that they don’t have to in daily life. And the trainer is very strict to students. They do like our teachers who care us patiently. However, military training is a good way to train students’ strong will power. It’s useful to the life of students. Therefore, it’s necessary to student.

作文翻译：

军训

在我国，当我们去上初中的时候，我们必须参加军训。到部分的学生都害怕军训，因为训练通常是在炎热的夏天进行。夏天，天气炎热难熬。但是，学生必须一整天都呆在外面。另外，训练还很辛苦。学生们必须像士兵一样。他们必须遵守很多在日常生活中无需遵守的规则。而且，教官对学生很严厉。他们像老师一样耐心照顾我们。但是，军训也是一种锻炼学生意志的好方法。它对学生的生活很有帮助。因此，军训对学生是很必要的。

One day, Doras mother gave her a coin, It was a bit dirty, so Dora washed it. Then it started talking to Dora.

Today I talked to a coin, When it was made, it was nice and clean. People took the coin to a bank. It stayed there for a few days. A person at the bank gave the bank gave the coin to a man. My mother went to buy some cake from the mans shop. The man gave the coin to her as part of her change. She dropped the coin. A street cleaner saw it and picked it up. He returned it to my mother. She gave it to me as pocket money. I washed the coin to make it clean again.

一天，多拉的母亲给了她一枚硬币。它有点儿脏，所以多拉把它洗了洗。听听这个硬币的英语故事。

今天我和一枚硬币谈话了，当它被铸造的时候，它很好看而且干净.人们把钱存到银行。它在那儿待几天.银行的人把这枚硬币给了一名男子。我的母亲从这名男子的商店里买一些蛋糕。这名男子将这枚硬币作为零钱的一部分找给她。她掉了这枚硬币。一位街道清洁工看到了并把它捡起来。他把她还给了我母亲。母亲把它当零花钱给我了，我洗了这枚硬币，让它再次变干净。