军训作文英语高中作文【推荐20篇】

日记是用来叙述一天中发生的有意义事件的文体。

第一，注意日记的格式：一般是左上角写当天的日期，右上角写当天的天气情况(cloudy/clear/windy/rainy/fine/snowy…)。日期通常采用两种写法：一种是按“月、日、年”顺序；另一种是按“日、月、年”的顺序。注意要在年份之前有一个逗号，而且月份通常可用缩写词（如：Jan.,Feb.,Mar.等）。如果需要写星期，可将其写在日期的前面或后面。如：Monday,May15th,2008或May15th,2008,Monday

第二，抓准日记的时态：日记记叙的时间通常是在当天的下午或晚上，因此所用的时态多为过去时态。但应灵活掌握，如果日记叙述天气、描写景色或为了描写生动，也可用现在时。

第三，日记一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以常需借助一些表示先后顺序的词语，如atfirst,then,lateron,afterwards,finally,atlast等。一定要注意句与句、段与段之间的连接和过渡，适当使用一些过渡词语使其连接紧凑、过渡自然。

第四，确立日记的中心要点，尽量突出主题，可以通过对某个细节、某个侧面的描写来突出主题，千万不要写成一个流水帐。

In my opinion, the movie “ the pursuit of happyness “ is a meaningful film,

the hero of the movie is an active man. Though his life was very hard, his wife

left because of the situation of their family.His work was also unfortunate. He

never gave up and still work hard.Then he took care of his little son. He is

going after happiness all the time, so his life is running . Time is very

importmant to him, he must finish his task on time , or he wouldnt live a

steady life , he has to pay the rent and taxes and so on, but he insist on

taking every chance to make his life live better and he believe in himself.

Finally, he succeed , his part of life in the movie is moving and real.

I also like the song in the movie very much, it says “ the mountains have

high places and low places ……”

Everyone has a dream, if you work as hard as the hero of the movie , your

dream will come ture, so I will learn from the hero ---Chris Gardner.

And I believe my dream isn’t far away!

Mid-autumn day is a special festival in China, which is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. It falls on the 15th day of Augustlunar month every year. Our Chinese will celebrate it on that day. I think there are not too many people can reject the temptation of it. I like this festival very much. I have two reasons.

First of all, Mid-autumn has the deep meaning of reunion. In China, people regard Mid-autumn day as very important, so no matter where they are, they will come back to their family if there is a chance. They don’t like celebrate this festival outside, which will make them feel lonely. Thus, they will go home by all means. Luckily, the government also pays great attention to this traditional festival. There are laws tomake sure people have holidays on that special day. In the other word, mid-autumn festival gives a chance for family get together.

Secondly, every family will prepare a big meal on that day. All the food is delicious. It is good to have a big meal. I think nobody will not interested in delicious food. The mooncake is a necessary decoration forMid-autumn day. It tastes good, too. It is the tradition for a long time. How pleased to enjoy the glorious full moon with mooncake!

This is why I love Mid-autumn festival so much.

Notes：

Luxuriant it gives us boundless endless fun. A long summer vacation to supply the vast reveals itself for the classmates of the stage. And plans to use the summer vacation time, has become our current begin to should do.

One, scientific and reasonable to develop a plan of summer vacation work.

Amount of work in the holiday, want to do the work. To put these job screening, mediation, according to the summer fair time settling, draw up a table "" summer deeds. All the cruel deeds should be carried out in accordance with the "schedule", but still need to be careful mix.

Second, serious review, welcome to scholarship test

This test is after the summer vacation the first put a summary of the semester, summer vacation, want to put the first semester studies the entire contents of the seriously review again, and to formulate a "review schedule. For good measure.

Third, develop my funny hobbies, growth of my specialty.

According to my funny hobby, takes an active part in all kinds of funny Hong shed organized group, such as: painting, calligraphy, music, English, journalism skills, grasp the skills, as to lay a foundation for the growth of the letters patent day.

Fourth, study diligently, careful accumulation, longer than writing, used motor

Manipulation of the heat I visit a few good books as points. Such as: national classics, history allusions, good books and periodicals, fables, fairy tales, etc., progress I browse ability and writing level, edify sentiment.

Else, might as well also active in the summer sports refined, help parents do more housework, experience to meet the social actual deeds... Only seize the opportunity to reveal themselves constantly, expand the line of sight, to be healthy growth.

今天本来是写新闻一类的文章，可是我不得不临时改变主题来写军训前的感受。

离明天军训就剩一碗之差，我的内心还是藏不住我的兴奋，想想去年的军训，我们彼此都不熟悉，但在这从中又成好朋友，从不好意思变得开放，经过一段又了解了彼此。

去年军训，我听表哥说很累，我就把它想的特别可怕，可实际并不累，反而觉得很有趣，更有趣的是，在我结交朋友的生涯中，有一段很有趣的故事，在大多数人交朋友都是直接说：“你好，你叫什么名字？”可在我上了初中以后，却有一段很有趣的故事。

在军训过后，有很多人就问你和郭格是怎么认识的？我和郭格会异口同声的说：“踩手认识的。”这个怎么说呢？有一次军训的下午，我趁休息的时候去喝水，郭格也在我旁边，我站起来时不小心踩着她的手，就这我们聊着聊着就认识了！

还有一次一天的军训结束了，我的水喝完了，想再去买一瓶水就去征求谢老师的同意，没想到李佳琪也想买水，我说：“一起吧！”就这样又结识了一位朋友。

我的初一很有趣，军训也很有趣，期待明天的魔鬼训练！

时间过得真是很快，今天已经到了军训的倒数第2天了，明天我们就要离开教导大队了，在6天中，我体会到的除了爱与奉献外，就是浓厚的情感。

俗话说得好：人心齐，泰山移。无论怎样的难题，原本在我眼中很不认真的男生会紧凑在一起，讨论动作的要领。虽然最后我们班的排队列无法参加最后的会操表演，但我们无须自责，因为努力过后收获的果实无论酸甜，都是可口的。更何况我们在这个过程中也收获了甜果——班级的团结和凝聚力。我一直坚信一句话：尽力过，无论结果怎样都是有价值的有意义的。

能在这样的集体里和我亲爱的伙伴们一起体会破茧成蝶过程中的苦乐，我很骄傲。在这期间，我的伙伴们让我感动：一人有难大家帮。男女生团结友爱，勇于沟通。大家除了是同学，更是朋友。有了这么多友善向上的伙伴，我相信七班一定会飞的更高，飞得更远。我们七班的每一位成员也会想小毛虫那样努力，突破自己，早日化身成为美丽的蝴蝶，在蓝天中自由飞翔。我为自己是一名附中人而骄傲，我更为我是一名附中高一七班的学生而骄傲。

军训的最后一天了，这一天，我才真正知道，军训也挺苦挺累的。以前我总是想：其实军训也没什么大不了，军训也不就是在操场上练习嘛!不过，现在我才明白，军训是一种“药”，是一种很苦很苦的药，但是“良药苦口”，军训能治好我们的懒惰、娇气和懦弱。

军训的这六天，我们被烈日晒过，也被小雨淋着过，我们常常坐在地上大喊着累，也曾经恼火地说：“最好快点与这种日子告别!”但是，我们的教官，不也是在烈日下、在小雨中一直陪伴与教导着我们吗?

今天，我们将要脱下这饱含着我们的汗与泪的军服，站在校门口与我们的教官依依惜别了。要交军服的时候，我们都磨磨蹭蹭，一会去趟厕所、一会和张影，一会再去溜达一圈……却迟迟不肯脱下军服。放学回家的路上，一遍遍回想着军训的景象，一次次温习着齐步、正步、跑步……在同学面前总想炫耀一下前些天学过的军体拳，和朋友不厌其烦地一遍又一遍讲述着自己的教官。

军训刷洗掉了我的娇气与懒惰，在我的心里刻上了永不磨灭的记号!

Clothes are so significant in our daily life that we cant live without

them, because they are useful in many ways. For example, clothes could keep us

warm in winter and protect our skin from the heavy sunshine in summer. Whats

more, Clothes make a man just as a saddle makes a horse. Everyday we wear

different kinds of clothes to make ourselves more attractive. Suppose if we wore

the same clothes all the time, our life would be so boring.

As far as Im concerned, I know some kinds of clothes, such as formal

clothes, casual clothes, evening wears and uniforms. In different situations, we

wear different clothes. For example, we wear formal clothes to go to meetings;

we wear casual clothes at home; we wear evening wears to attend evening parties,

and we wear uniforms at school or at work.

Nevertheless, I prefer casual clothes, because they are comfortable. And

they are also very cheap. When I wear casual clothes, I can do a lot of sports.

It’s so cool. By the way, red is my favorite color, since Ive got a white skin.

If Im in red, Ill look kind and friendly. So I always buy red clothes when

shopping.

Summer can be very hot in southern taibei where the temperature usually goes up to 32"C or more. Because of the heat it is a trying experience to go to school or do anything else in a place that is not air-conditioned. Also because of this I stay at home most of the time during the summer vacation and only occasionally go to the beach to plunge myself into the cool water as a way to keep my body less sticky. Actually I like swimming and think nothing is more refreshing than a swim. In the summer vacation that has just ended I went swimming many times with my classmates and we all had a good time. This summer vacation, however, was not spent entirely in seeking fun. As a second-year senior student I had to prepare myself for the college entrance examinations that were only a year away. In other words, I must find time to study, too. So I divided my time between work and play during the summer vacation and derived much benefit from this arrangement.

I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.

Nowadays, some discussions about the childrens education and management

have raised the whole social concern. It seems not only about childrens

personal development, but also about the whole countrys future.

There are two main views in debate, which of them is that children should

obey the rules set by parents and teachers. The other is that less control will

help children to deal with their future adult life.

As for the former, the advantages of it seem to be very apparent, which of

them is that children can make a distinction between right and wrong things. And

they will have a sense of principle and responsibility. Of course, the

disadvantages are also very clear. Firstly, children will be lacking in

imagination and creation. Secondly, they cannot make up their mind on their

own.

Concerning the latter, the view seems to be reasonable because in this ways

these children are more clever and active to create something special. However,

the drawbacks couldnt be ignored as a result of a problem that children cannot

get a clear understanding of their lifetime.

Combining the both points, as far as Im concerned, parents and teachers

are supposed to instruct children to obey the primary principle when they do

some deeds. Moreover, children need more freedom to realize their dreams. Only

in this way can the problem be solved perfectly.

In conclusion, we cant only support one side simply. On the contrary, we

ought to choose different measures to educate children flexibly.

Beautiful outlook indeed attracts people’s attention, if people have the beautiful outlook, of course they will give people deep impression, just like the saying that everyone has the mind of appreciating beauty.

But we must figure out the fact that outlook can’t decide everything, only the ability can do it.

The good example is Mariah Sharapova, she is a famous tennis player. Early in her career, people noticed her beautiful outlook, but more and more beautiful female tennis players come into being, only Mariah gets famous all the time, the reason is that she is outstanding amongst these girls.

She has won so many championships, which makes her the most attractive girl.

Beautiful outlook opens a door for people, but only the ability makes them standing all the time. People will get the genius respect for their hard working instead of their attractive faces.

美丽的外貌确实吸引人们的注意，如果人们拥有好看的外表，理所当然能给人留下深刻的印象，就如有句话说爱美之心，人皆有之。但是我们必须弄清楚外表并不能决定一切，只有能力才能决定一切。

玛利亚莎拉波娃就是最好的例子，她是一位出名的网球运动员。在她早期的职业生涯中，人们注意到了她的美丽外表，但是随后越来越多美丽的女子网球选手出现，而只有玛利亚一直有名气，原因在于她是这些女孩当中最出色的。

她赢得了很多的冠军，这让她最吸引人们的注意。

美丽的外表对于人们来说只是打开了一扇门，但是只有实力才能让她们一直出众。人们会因为他们的努力而得到尊重，不是因为他们吸引人的外貌。

[高中英语作文：外貌与能力

导语：习主席的“一带一路”是实现国家富强、民族振兴、人民幸福的中国梦而提出的重大战略构想。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Watching the news today, heard the news, xi jinping, the general secretary is put forward to build the Chinese dream "" area, all the way, I dont understand, ran to ask dad, dad wanted to think, said to me:" in the tang dynasty in China, there is a road, starting from the tang dynasty, the capital chang an, through central Asia, west Asia to Europe, he is a famous "silk road", businessmen through the silk road to China along the silk, porcelain, etc) to sell to people of the country, let them put on beautiful clothes, with exquisite tableware, at the same time also brought all kinds of treasures in other countries. This way is the path of trade, and is also a cultural exchange ".

I wanted to mean to say: "that can put the neighbourhood understanding all the way into the modern silk road, our China all kinds of household appliances, articles for daily use, to other countries, even to the laying of countries along the high-speed rail, build power plants, can also go to support African development of poor countries, such as construction, and then the rest of the oil, minerals, food etc. We need supplies home", the father nodded with a smile.

President xis "One Belt And One Road" is a major strategic vision proposed by the Chinese dream of national prosperity, national rejuvenation and the peoples happiness. The promotion of One Belt And One Road will surely create new opportunities for the realization of the Chinese dream and will bring more new strength and new vitality to the world.

I am Chinese, I have the "Chinese dream"!

【参考译文】

今天看新闻，听到一条新闻，习近平总书记提出“一带一路，筑中国梦”，我不太理解，就跑去问爸爸，爸爸想了想，对我说：“在中国的唐朝，有一条道路，从唐朝首都长安城出发，经过中亚、西亚直到欧洲，他就是大名鼎鼎的‘丝绸之路’，商人们通过丝绸之路把中国的丝绸、瓷器等东西卖给沿线国家的人们，让他们穿上漂亮的衣服，用上精美的餐具，同时也带来了其他国家的各种奇珍异宝。这条路是贸易之路，也是文化交流之路”。

我想了想说：“那可以把‘一带一路’理解成现代的丝绸之路，把我们中国的各种家电、生活用品，带去其他国家，甚至给沿线国家铺设高铁，建造发电厂，还可以去支持非洲等落后国家的发展建设，然后把其他国家的石油、矿产、粮食等我们需要的物资带回家”，爸爸笑着点了点头。

习主席的“一带一路”是实现国家富强、民族振兴、人民幸福的中国梦而提出的重大战略构想。推动实施一带一路，必将为实现中国梦开拓新局面、创造新机遇，必将给全世界加入更多新力量、新活力。

我是中国人，我有“中国梦”!

进入高中，就意味着必须接受军训的考验，与不认识的同学认识，团结一致，一起参加严格训练，面对各种困难。

在训练中，炎炎烈日下虽然战军姿满头大汗，但我们纹丝不动，队列操练，又是哪怕是一个最简单的动作，我们都要无数次的重复。会操时，队伍雄壮，声震操场。 “宝剑锋从磨砺出，梅花香自苦寒来。”正如孟子说得：天将降大任于是人也，必先苦其心志，劳其筋骨，饿其体肤，空乏起身，行弗乱其所为，所以动心韧性，曾益起所不能。当我们真正用自己的心去体会的军人的英伟后，才能更加明白我们肩上的使命，才能更加明确地向目标进发，努力。

这次军训，他让我们感受到了军营的气氛和军人的风采，学习了国防知识，增强了国防意识，增加了爱国热情，磨练了我们的意志， 增 强了体质，学会了团结，形成了纪律观念，学会了约束自己，规范自己。增进了师生之间的感情，它教会我们对人的关心，加深了我们的理解保卫祖国的责任，它告诉了我面对空难的态度。

还没有惊涛骇浪就不会壮美，人生没有挫折困难就不会坚强。今天，我接受苦的洗涤，阳光的洗礼，就证明我们有勇气，也有能力里走出懒懒散散的假期，走向学校，走进知识的海洋，走向社会，走向需要我们的地方。我们的命运有我们把握。面对高山，我们会造梯前进，努力攀登;遇到山崖，我们会连接绳索，牵手前进，互相帮助，团结友爱，关心照顾。

现在，军训结束了，我们领略它不仅是一个过程，更是一个崭新的课堂，一个成长的阶梯，一个火热的熔炉，一个人与人之间的纽带。我想：如果有人问我，你最难忘的一件事是什么?我一定会不加思索地说出”军训”.因为它让我哭，让我笑，让我收获了很多。

军训对于每一个新高一的学生都是一次新的人生挑战，这次的6天军训已成为我难忘的回忆。

军训让我懂得了吃苦。心里经常叨念着：流血、流汗、不流泪的口号，这是怎样的一种人生毅志!流云飘过训练基地上空的苍穹，太阳依旧不解人情。在烈日下的我们，个个都汗流浃背，虽然时常有水补充，但豆大的汗珠依旧接二连三的从额头流过脸颊，然后轻轻地落在了每个人的上衣上，于是洁白的t-恤衫很快就被汗水浸湿了，但无论怎样受烈日的煎熬，我们每位同学都没有退怯，站军姿时，个个都纹丝不动，真的达到了站如松的最高境界。

军训又让我学会了团结。《团结就是力量》唱出了我们的心声，也唱出了彼此的友谊。在艰苦的训练过程中，每个人的一举一动不仅代表了个人，也代表了我们五班的形象。因此，这时候，学会团结是成功迈出的第一步。

军训又让我拥有了自信。之前做事犹豫不决的我，在艰苦的军训生活里重新清晰地认清了自我，原来，只要拥有自信坚持自己是最棒的，就可以完美地做好每一件事，哪怕是再艰巨的任务，也会做的出色、精彩。

虽然只是短短的6天军训，却让我懂得、学会、拥有了许多，这也许是我进三附中上得第一堂完美、充实的课吧!相信在今后的高中三年级的学习生涯，一定会发扬在军训中继承的优良品质和作风，努力提高自己，望在高中学习上给家长、老师、更给自己一份满意的答卷。

When I was very small, my grandpa liked to tell me his tough year and I liked to listen to him. At that time, wars were everywhere, people ran away for keeping alive. My grandpa was so hungry all the time because he had no food to eat. People had the very hard life before the found of new China. Today, Chinese economy develops so fast, we live the good life, we are no longer struggle for the hunger. Thanks to our great predecessors, they build the road for us. We enjoy the peaceful life and I know it is not easy to achieve. My grandpa educates me not to waste the food and I keep his words in my mind. Peace is the main theme of today’s world, we can chase our dreams and enjoy our life, but we must remember the contribution which is from our predecessors.

在我很小的时候，爷爷很喜欢给我讲他的艰难岁月，我也喜欢听他讲。那个时候，战争无处不在，人们为了活命而逃亡。爷爷总是很饿，因为他没有东西吃。人们在新中国成立前过着艰难的生活。今天，中国的经济发展快速，我们过上了好生活，不再为饥饿挣扎。多亏了我们伟大的先辈们，他们为了开拓了道路。我们享受这和平的生活，我知道这来之不易。爷爷教育我不要浪费食物，我一直记着他的话。和平是世界现在的主题，我们可以追求梦想，快乐生活，但是我们必须记得先辈们的贡献。

[《和平的生活》高中英语作文赏析

It was Mother’s Day. Sun Zheng thought he should do something for his mother.

He decided to help his mother do some housework. After school he went to a shop

to buy some food on his way home.

When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn’t

do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was

very happy.

When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes

which weren’t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His

mother said, "Thank you,my child!"

高中军训感想作文300字一：军训感想

等待已久的军训生活留给我的第一感受就是辛苦，第一情感就是失望。但是短短两天的时间内，在教官与老师的严格教育下，置身于那声声坚定的口号中，我才深深地领悟当初的感受、当时的情感多么单一、多么幼稚。

一开始，我和好多同学都认为那一个个单调、看似简单的训练动作和学习搭不上界，但发挥一下想像，这些训练和学习又有密不可分的关系。因为在我看来那一个个训练动作就如一个个字母、一个个数字，看似单调、简单，但一旦结合出来，却趣味无穷，而且发人深思。所以我们置身于这种环境中、条件下，应该珍惜，视它为高中繁忙生活前的一个热身训练，而不该以消极的态度来面对这一切。我会尽量抱着那股热情学会坚持、坚强还有忍耐……

高中军训感想作文300字二：军训感想

军训是学习的另一种方式。学习着那震天撼地的喊声，那昂然挺立的站立，那激动人心的军体拳......教官那严肃的神情，让我感到几分害怕，教官那嘹亮的声音，让我感到几分惊怕；尽管在害怕惊怕的日子，我深深地体会到一股深沉的爱意......那爱意似乎告诉我要努力努力地克服艰苦的事，好好地专致地把握时间。从一点一滴的积累中，一点一滴的改变中，我所体会到而不是刺骨般的训练，而是一个个击败困苦的念头，跨越着努力的尽头，吸取着那苦中又有甜意的训练。

其实，军训并不是我们口中的“人生地狱“，它并没有想象中可怕；而是我们失去了一颗勇敢的心。

高中军训感想作文300字三：军训感想

今天是军训的第一天,骄阳似火,暑气逼人。教官带领我们走到橡胶跑道上。烈日当空，我顶着烈日，汗如雨下，看到那旁的老师门坐在荫蔽的地方，谈笑风生。又看看我们，站在太阳底下，心里真不是个滋味呀。就在我酸醋难忍的时候，忽然教官一声“跨步”，让我措手不及，右脚不由自主向外跨——做错了。辛好我有转头看一下别的同学，要不然免不了被臭骂一顿！这样立正、跨步、踏步来来回回十几次之后，时间已差不多过了几十分钟。教官才带领我们走到草地上休息。可即使是休息，太阳在上面晒着，我那还有心情休息呀！

下午更惨，阳光炙热灼人。我被热得大汗涔涔，可还是不得不坚持下去。

晚上洗澡，我在照镜子时，发现身体被衣服遮盖和没被衣服遮盖的地方俨然成了“黑白”两种肤色。

呀，这“魔鬼”训练呀！

When we are very small, we dream to be the great person in the future, such

as the scientist, the policeman and so on. It is good for the children to own

the big dream, so that they will study hard and fight for their future. But the

fact is that not all the person can become the great person, most people are

doing the ordinary jobs. In my opinion, ordinary is beautiful, too. Though they

are not doing the fine jobs, they find their own place and make a contribution

to the world. Take the cleaner for example. They wake up early and do the

cleaning work. People dare not to do the job because it is so dirty, but the

cleaners decorate the city with their hard work. The cleaners are the ordinary

people while doing the great job.

当我们满怀期待进入学校大门时，便知这次军训是苦与乐、汗水与欢笑的结合。

步入学校的操场，这次军训便正式开始了。我们满怀期待的教官，他笑起来腼腆而可爱，他的每一个动作都显现着军人的严肃与规矩;他一遍又一遍的演示着规范的动作，一次又一次用嘶哑的喉咙喊着口令。我们的第二个教官是一个不苟言笑、雷厉风行的人。他的训练更加严格，但同时让我们劳逸结合。正是这种方式，让我们的训练有了质的飞跃。教导我们的第三个教官，很幽默，很风趣，也更加理解我们。在训练达到目标时，他会给予我们更多休息的时间，他的训练方法科学，以至我们在训练少、休息长的条件下，依旧取得优异的成绩，他是我们所有人的榜样。

军训第一天，是“腰酸背痛腿抽筋”。汗水由额头流经脸颊，最后由发梢滴落到塑胶草地上，一滴一滴，又一滴。如火的骄阳灼烧着大地，滚滚的热浪迎面扑来。干燥的嘴唇，微蹙的眉头，以及模糊的双眼，无一不显示出我们内心的烦躁。夜幕降临后，拖着沉重的步伐迈向宿舍，也算是一天军训生活的结束……随着时间的推移，疲倦在一点点减少，笑容在不断增加。每一次的风吹草动都成了我们的焦点。随意地坐在草地上，看着大朵大朵的云慢慢遮住了太阳，顺着云缝洒下几束光芒。微眯的双眼望向天空中，飞机飞过留下的白痕，感受着阵阵清风的袭来。这大概就是“宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落;去留无意，望漫随天外云卷云舒”的那种悠闲吧。

稍息，立正，齐步走，这些口令我们更是耳熟能详。我们反反复复地练习，保持高度的紧张等待教官的指令。这些努力都是磨练意志，为了集体的荣誉而奋斗。每个人都一丝不苟，严阵以待，越是接近会操，越是让所有人的精力更加集中，这就是集体荣誉感的体现，是我们每个人的责任与使命。我们用行动与汗水证明了这一切，会操的结果就是最好的证明。

结束也是一种开始。会操的结束也是一种离别，新学期的开始，我们与教官别离。教官们从我们面前跑步离开，依旧是那个整齐的方队。空气中弥漫着一种说不清的伤感。悄悄是别离的笙箫，夏虫也为我沉默。

军训给我们带来的不只是身体上的苦与累，更多是心灵的磨练与强化。我们努力了，所以我们有收获;我们奋斗了，所以我们很充实。军训带给了我们太多太多……

导语：如果说人生是一出戏，那么，军训的生活便是这出戏中最精彩的一幕。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语日记，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Its really a tiring day today!

As usual,all of us gathered at the square at 7 oclock.But as soon as I get there,I felt the air temperature is higher than yesterday.I think itll be a very tough day!

Our first task is to practice the shooting skills.First,the commander talked to us about the right gesture,then he bent down and set an example to us.After that,we began to practice the shooting gestures by ourselves.And he went about to correct us if we didint do well.After a while,all of us passed the commanders test.

At about ten,we had to pracitice walking.At that time,it was very hot,all of us were sweating greatly.However,all of us insisted to the end!

Even though Im very tired,Im very happy.Because I have strengthened my will,which will be very useful in my future life.、

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今天真的很累的一天!

像往常一样,我们所有人聚集在广场上7点钟。但是当我到达那里,我觉得比昨天气温较高。我认为这将是非常艰难的一天!

我们的第一个任务是练习射击的技能。首先,指挥官给我们谈了正确的手势,然后他弯下腰,给我们树立了榜样。在那之后,我们开始练习射击自己的姿态。和他去纠正我们如果我们没有做得很好。过了一会儿,我们都通过了指挥官的测试。

在大约十,我们不得不散步。那时,天很热,我们都出汗。然而,我们坚持到最后!

尽管我很累,我非常高兴。因为我加强了我的意志,我未来的生活中是非常有用的。

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1、审题：审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文：根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题：

1、确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。

2、要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。

3、用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。

在扩展的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考：

1、在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。

2、使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3、改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。

4、学会使用过渡词。递进furthermore，moreover，besides，in addition，then，etc ;转折however，but，nevertheless，afterwards，etc ;总结finally，at last，in brief，to conclude，etc ;强调really，indeed，certainly，surely，above a11，etc ;对比in the same way，just as，on the other hand，etc。

5、确定文章用第几人称写，基本时态是什么。使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。时态要尽量保持一致。

检查修改：要检查复核，不要写完了事。

要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。

可归纳为：中心突出，主题明确;层次清楚，条理清晰;表达