大学英语人物描写推荐20篇

Green grass I do not know when to quietly yellow, snuggle in the arms of the earths mother, so next year regeneration. The cicadas were gone, and the geese were walking into the south, and they all told people: "Autumn is coming!"

Autumn sky is exceptionally clear, blossoming white clouds leisurely floating. Poplar willow leaves yellow, and only the pine trees are not willing to take off their green clothes. Maple thought the most thoughtful, took off the summer clothes, put on a red sweater prepared for the fall.

Autumn is the harvest season. In the field, the gold-like valley spatula bent over the waist, a gust of wind blowing, the ground filled with waves, a layer of rushing a layer, also issued rustling laughter; sorghum wore red fire like a burning torch ... ... all this, as if to the people to report the harvest of good news. The peasants were harvesting the crops of the fields, and their faces were sweat with their work and filled with a happy smile.

Orchard, the apple cooked, like a shy little girl, head down. Grapes, full of strings of grapes, purple, green, dark red, one by one in the sun shining, crystal clear, emitting a seductive fragrance. I was so drunk in this charming autumn color!

Full of vitality and vitality of the summer is beautiful, but full of harvest harvest joy more charming!

[描写秋天美景的英语作文

“朋友一生一起走，那些日子不再走，一句话，一辈子，一生情，一杯酒……”每当听到这首周华健的《朋友》我就想起了我的伙伴——黄怡。

黄怡既是我的伙伴又是我的朋友。她爱说爱唱，长得很可爱，圆圆的脸上总是挂着灿烂的笑容。粗粗的眉毛下有一双宝石般的大眼睛，她的鼻子又扁又平，小小的嘴巴能说会道，简直可以用伶牙俐齿来形容。一头乌黑浓密的长发总是随意的扎成一个马尾辫。

我和黄怡很要好，一下课就聚在一块儿，这不光是她长得可爱，更重要的是他帮助同学精神深深地打动了我。

有一天放学，我们手拉手回家。在路上，我看中了学校路旁小店中的小零食，很想买，可是没带钱。此时我想起了一句话形容我很好：“钱，不是万能的。但没有钱，是万万不能的。”于是，我拉了拉黄怡，问她：“黄怡，你有钱吗？借我一点吧！”“我有啊，怎么了，你要钱干什么？”黄怡疑惑地问我。“啊哈！我就知道你最好了！借我1元吧！我知道那家店里有卖南京板鸭和拖肥，可好吃了！放心，我明天就还你！”我有点儿巴结的对黄怡说：“求求你了，你借我1元，大不了我明天还你2元不就行了！”

“不行，我才不借呢！”黄怡坚决的说。“嘿！你真小气！”我甩开了她的手，生气的抛下她往家里跑去。“徐易如——”黄怡还想说点什么，可我已经头也不回的跑远了。

我边跑边想：“哼，这个黄怡，可真小气！亏我们做了这么多年的好朋友，连1元钱都不借我，干脆绝交算了！”

晚上，黄怡打来了电话我也不接，她从QQ上发来的信息我也不看，我还赌气的把她从我的好友名单中删除了。

第二天，黄怡和我说话，我也不理睬她，只当她是个隐身人。

就这样过了好几天，有一天上学，第一节课下后，因为第二节课要考试，我便检查了一下我又没有带齐文具，结果我发现了一个严重的问题———忘带修正带了！我向周露丹借，可是她不借，几乎所有的同学我都问遍了，可他们不是不借就是只带了一个修正带。正当我急得团团转时，耳边响起了黄怡的声音：“徐易如，你怎么了？”“我，我忘带修正带了。”我支支吾吾的回答。“哦，原来是这样啊，反正我有两个，就借你一个吧！”我惊异地看着她，映入眼帘的是她友善的微笑。

“那上次……”

“上次我不借你钱是因为路边的小店里的零食既不健康又不卫生，吃了对身体不好。”

“那这次……”

“这次是因为朋友有难，即使是刀山火海也要帮助朋友啊！”

听了她的话，我恍然大悟，“哦，原来是这样的啊！对不起啊，我错怪你了。”我有点儿不好意思的说。“哦，没关系，我们是朋友啊！”我和她都笑了。

黄怡就是这样一个团结互助的伙伴，我和她是永远的朋友！

In the autumn garden, all kinds of flowers are hoping to smile in their most beautiful season of the year, leaving the best impression.

Autumn garden is very lively. White pear flowers exudes a touch of fragrance, as if really let people feel the sweet autumn, taste the fruit of autumn; dandelion in the autumn when the wind is the most lovable. Sometimes, it will catch you "hide", will take advantage of you do not pay attention, floating on your head, face, and sometimes accompany you to "walk" it! Dandelion also has a feature is: it in the morning and The evening is green, noon is golden, why is this?

Later, I learned a text, the title is "golden grass", read, I know, the original, dandelion petals open, is golden, when closed, is green. When the first chrysanthemum was just open in the autumn, we told us: "Autumn is about to leave, the winter is coming soon," but the colorful chrysanthemums are not afraid of the cold winter, they seem to stand on the grass in the garden to protect Garden "patron saint", so that the garden has become another fascinating world.

Autumn trees and grass is also very compelling, and some books are full of fruit, and some grass is still like spring they just germination so beautiful, so green, how beautiful ah!

I like the fall, like the garden of autumn, autumn garden like the pictures of the four seasons!

Perhaps the most vital person I have ever met is an Italian professor of philosophy who teaches at the University of Pisa.Although I last met this man eight years ago， I have not forgotten his special qualities.

First of all，I was impressed by his devotion to teaching. Because his lectures were always well-prepared and clearly delivered， students swarmed into his classroom. His followers appreciated the fact that he believed in what he taught and that he was intellectually stimulating.Furthermore， he could be counted on to explain his ideas in an imaginative way，introducing such aids to understanding as paintings， recordings，pieces of sculpture， and guest lecturers.

Once he even sang a song in class to illustrate a point. Second， I admired the fact that he would confer with students outside of the classroom or talk with them on the telephone. Drinking coffee in the snack bar， he would easily make friends with students. Sometimes he would challenge a student to a game of chess. At other times， he would join groups to discuss subjects ranging from astronomy to scuba diving. Many young people visited him in his office for academic advice； others came to his home for social evenings.

Finally，I was attracted by his lively wit. He believed that no class hour is a success unless the students and the professor share several chuckles and at least one loud laugh.Through his sense of humor， he made learning more enjoyable and more lasting.If it is true that life makes a wise man smile and a foolish man cry，then my friend is truly a wise man. Probably the best example of his wit is this bit of wisdom with which he once ended a lecture：“It is as dangerous for man to model himself upon his invention， the machine，as it would be for God to model Himself upon His invention.”

[大学英语作文人物

1、他失望极了，泪脸比挨霜打的芭蕉叶还要蔫黄。

2、他的表情和声音，好像在阅兵典礼时发出立正口令那样严肃。

3、一般绝望的情绪像狂潮一般涌上我的心头，使我感到浑身冰凉。

4、他的脸一下子拉了下来，像刷了层浆糊般地紧绷着。

5、我突然感到一股失望的苦水，淹没了全部期待。

6、一个接一个的失败，像灭火剂一样把我心头的希望之火浇灭了。

7、她脸儿红得像熟透了的山柿子，忙低下头去，不敢再看我一眼。

8、他走起路来，总是背着手、低着头，那神情，好像在思索全人类的前途和命运。

9、这意外的失败，使同学们一个个像霜打的树叶子，霎时无精打采地蔫了下来。

10、爸爸两眼盯着我的“三好奖状”，站立在那里出神，好像在看着一件价值连城的宝物。

1、她的话儿不多，分量却很重，话语里的每个字，都拨响了同学们的心弦。

2、她就像一部永不生锈的播种机，不断地在孩子们的心田里播下理想和知识的种子。

3、老师的谆谆教诲，像一股暖流，流进她那早已枯竭的心田。

4、老师的一席话，在我的心窝里添了一把火，浑身都烧得热乎乎的。

5、老师的这些话，句句打在他的心坎上，仿佛是一场春雨，洒落在一块久旱的田地里，很快渗透了下去。

6、他讲起话来多有劲呀，每一句都像小锤一样敲在我的心上。

7、老师的亲切话语像那清澈的泉水，滋润着我的心田。

8、老师的告诫是让我不断进步，像芝麻开花一样一节更比一节高。

9、她大发脾气道：“你一个女孩子，不是我看轻你，用秤称一称能有几两重！”

10、老校长的每一句话都打动着在场人的心弦，它像惊雷，把人震醒；它像强心剂，使人振奋；它像补药，壮人气力；它像火光，暖人心窝！

透过我家的一扇窗户向外看，一排排像军人的树已经叶苦苦傲过严冬，再次就长出树叶，就像一件完美的军服，给这些熬过慢长严冬的军人们送上温暖。

My house through a window, a row of trees have leaf like soldiers struggling proud of the past winter, again on the leaves, like a perfect uniform, to survive these long winter soldiers send warmth.

小鸟们被鸟巢里的闷气受够了，它们新鲜的空气，一丝丝春风带给它们无比凉爽，小鸟唱起动听的歌，歌唱它们的无比自豪。每一个角落都在变，变成比严冬，比秋天，比仲夏不一样的花园。

The birds nest is close enough, the fresh air, the slightest breeze brings them very cool, birds sing beautiful songs, songs of their proud. Every corner is changing, becoming a garden that is more different than the winter, than the autumn.

在这百花齐放的春天里，家园里有两棵梨树，人见人爱。一棵花儿怒放，高高低低缀满洁白无暇的犁树花，就像一座连绵起伏的雪山，漂亮极了。

In the spring of two All flowers bloom together., pear tree homes, cute. A flower in full bloom, and decorated with white plow tree flowers, like a rolling of the white snow capped mountains, very beautiful.

另一棵梨树截燃不同，虽然没有它旁边的“高大的雪山”那样迷人，但是它树叶茂密，向四面舒展，越长越高，最后形成一把覆盖着大地的阳伞，而且结出里许多梨，

A pear tree cut fuel, although there is no next to it "tall mountain" as charming, but it leaves thick, four to stretch longer high, finally formed a parasol and covered with earth, produce many pears,

家园的春景多么可爱啊!它绚丽多姿，生气脖勃。时光在流逝，家园一地定会变成耳目一新的家园。

How lovely the spring scenery of our home is! It was gorgeous and angry. Time is passing, home will become a refreshing home.

[描写春天的英语作文（含翻译）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about an opening speech. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 表明你的身份和事件

2. 对到场领导老师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处

3. 宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会取得成功.

An Opening Speech

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Good morning! I am Oscar, the spokesman of the Students Union. On behalf of the Students Union, the main organizer of todays sports meeting, I welcome you all to the beautiful stadium. After two months preparation, our annual sports meeting is held on schedule.

Thanks to the support and help from our school leaders and teachers. Though they have many school responsibilities, they have taken time off to take part in our sports activities. Lets give them a big hand. Through sports, we can not only develop our physical prowess, but also promote social and emotional skills, and even intellectual skills, which will matter in our future lives substantially. So hope everybody here cherish this opportunity and enjoy it.

At last, best wishes for the success of the sports meeting and best wishes for the good results of our athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of the sports meeting. Thank you and good luck!

[运动会开幕词大学英语四级作文练习

New Years Day is one of important days for many people in the word during the year。Most people spend the New YearsDay in hotels。January 1st is considered as the New Years Day。most companies，shops，school，and government offices are closed during that time。People prepare for New Years Dayfrom late December。

Firt，people spend a few days to clean their houses completely。Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January。The New Years meal is also prepcnared from the end of December。During the New Years Day，people usually do not cook and relax at home。 On New Years Eve，it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year。

On New Years Day，people fiest greet each other。 Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health theoughout the New Year。Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives。

After school, I can not wait and Chen Xiaobin go to his house to see the dog, a see the dog, my heart was thinking: this little dog really cute, really want to touch it. Its body is about 20 cm long, the head and tail color is black and dark, the body is milky white. Round head, chubby body, round and big eyes sparkling, really like two glass balls. The ears of the triangle are sometimes bowed and sometimes raised.

Xiaobins mother put the index finger into his mouth, the puppy thought it had milk to drink, and relish the "milk" with relish, and in a moment it spit it out because it feels strange. It saw outsiders, like a shy little girl, at the door to play around. Aunt picked up the puppy, I could not help but touched it, feeling it like a cotton quilt as soft, but also like my home that most lovely plush dog.

It is really a loving puppy it!

我的表弟长着一张典型的“苹果脸”，一双水汪汪的眼睛，小小的嘴巴能说会道。他全身下体现出来的只有可爱了！

记得有一次，我和小伙伴一起在田里捡田螺，正捡得高兴，表弟跑了过来。我仔细一看：表弟额头上点着一颗美人痣，脸上有红、蓝两种颜色画的条纹，身上被银色颜料涂得一点黄色都看不到了，胸前还贴着一张纸，上面写着几个大字：迪加奥特曼。“哟，原来是迪加奥特曼大架光临啊！有失远迎，对不住喽！”我和小伙伴异口同声冲着表弟大喊。表弟知道我们是在嘲笑他，看都不看我们。用他那娇嫩的嗓门冲着田里大喊：“谁需要帮助，只要不涉于金钱，我——迪加奥特曼一律答应。”听到这句话后，我和小伙伴相对的一阵邪笑后，我对着表弟大喊：“亲爱的迪加奥特曼，你可以过来一下吗？”表弟听到有人邀请，乐得连自己姓什么都不知道了，一蹦一跳的向我们走来，不，应该是向我们蹦来。表弟走到我的面前，对我打着官腔说：“你找我有什么事啊？”“这，你恐怕做不到！”我装做为难的说。“说什么！迪加奥特曼可是无所不能的！”表弟严肃的对我说。我暗暗一笑，因为我正等着这句话呢！我高兴的对表弟说：“那么，你可以从田边跳到田埂吗？”说完我还做了一遍示范动作。表弟的脸刹那间变得苍白。要知道，表弟连我的胸都不到，我觉得易如反掌的动作对于表弟来说却比登天还难。过了好久，表弟才挤出了一丝笑容，可我却觉得这笑容比哭还难看。表弟勉为其难地答应我的要求。接着，表弟照我的动作，把双手放在田埂上，双手一用力，双腿腾空，可能表弟时间把握不准突然放了双手。只听“扑通”一声，表弟的头插进秧地里，形成了一个“倒插葱”的景象。我和小伙伴费了九牛二虎之力将表弟拉了上来。把表弟拉上来之后，表弟就一个劲的哭，然而我们却哈哈大笑，不是我们幸灾乐祸，而是表弟的样子太搞笑了。一脸的泥，把颜色弄化了，红、蓝、银、黄四种颜色混在一起，把表弟画成了一个“大花猫”。表弟看到我们笑得那么欢，也不哭了，和我们一起大笑。

这就是我的表弟，可爱的表弟！

尊敬的各位评委，老师们：

大家好！我是来自河北省保定市高阳县龙化中学的吴永会老师。今天我说课的内容九年级下学期人物描写的作文复习。九年级学生对于写人、记事的文章已有了一定的功底。但是，在批改作文的过程中，我发现不少学生人物描写的能力并没有提高，刻画的人物形象干瘪僵硬，文章主题空洞，缺乏生活气息。

《基础教育课程改革纲要》指出“大力推进信息技术在教学过程中的普遍应用，促进信息技术与学科课程的整合，逐步实现教学内容的呈现方式，学生的学习方式，教师的教学方式和师生互动方式的变革”，这预示着我国包括语文在内的课程与教学将越来越多的渗透和发展信息技术。因此，我尝试在网络环境中进行一次人物描写作文复习的教学，有效地整合网络资源，利用主题网页，让学生在网页上浏览、学习，在网络中阅读一些相关例文，尝试写作，提高写作水平。

下面我从（出示幻灯片）教学目标、教学过程、教学反思三个方面进行说课。

一、教学目标：（出示幻灯片）

知识与技能：巩固掌握人物描写的方法。

过程与方法：通过群论坛交流、评改描写片段。

情感、态度与价值观：引导学生用心观察生活、思考生活。

教学重点：通过作文评改，引导学生掌握人物描写的方法。

教学难点：运用人物描写方法，描写生活中的人物。

二、教学过程

教学过程分为六个环节，分别是：

(一) 单刀直入，引出描写

（二） 链接百度，复习描写

（三） 进入论坛，点评描写

(四) 网上交流，评改描写

（五） 大显身手，刻画人物

（六） 合作互动，评选佳作

这几个环节，依据学生对人物描写知识的理解、巩固、掌握、运用、提高的认知规律，逐层深入，高效达成教学目标。

（一）单刀直入，引出描写

导入：在日常生活中，我们随时随地都接触着形形色色的人——无私奉献，努力工作的老师，活泼开朗、天真纯洁的邻家小妹，任劳任怨、不求回报的父母，尖酸刻薄、得理不饶人的小商小贩……人们在不同场景中的表现和举动形成了不同的性格，无论我们是主角还是旁观者，只要用心观察，细心体会，就能够用文字描写出这些生动的人物。今天，让我们再一次走进人物描写的学习中。

设计意图：简单明了的导入，吸引学生的注意力，使他们全神贯注、精神振奋。明确学习任务后，学生有的放矢，积极主动地去完成任务。这样，会取得更理想的学习效果。

（二）链接百度，复习描写

链接百度，自主学习“百度”中有关人物描写的相关知识，对“百度”中的描写片段进行赏析。

设计意图：学生通过自主学习，加深了对人物描写的理解，独立赏析，引导学生去探究新知，主动获得方法，为下一环节点评作文打下基础。

（三）进入论坛，点评描写

打开qq群论坛，阅读三篇同题同材料作文《开学第一天》，阅读完毕，以回帖的方式自由点评。

设计意图：这种自由回帖的学习方式，充分体现了学生的主体地位，充分发挥了学生的主动性、积极性、创造性，使传统的课堂教学结构发生根本性的改变。真正把作文点评的主动权还给学生，使每个学生都积极参与、相互评议、自主修改，提高了学生的语文素养和信息加工、处理能力，可以说新型的网络教学环境，把学生的创造精神与实践能力的培养落到实处。（点击回帖，学生的回帖印证了我的设计意图。）这个环节让学生进一步巩固了人物描写的方法，为评改描写做好准备。

(四) 网上交流，评改描写

阅读作文《偷梁换叉》，通过小组合作学习，进行作文评改，并回复其他小组的评改意见和建议。

设计意图：通过小组合作学习，师生互动交流，可以淡化教师“领导者”的“主导”地位，使学生的主体性和创造性在小组内得以最大程度地发挥，为实现真正意义上的交流互动奠定基础。学生提出问题的机会增加了，有利于全体学生问题意识的增强。网上交流合作，促进了“自主、合作、探究”学习方式的形成。根据同学们的评改，习作者对原文进行了修改，得到老师、同学的好评。此环节让学生进一步掌握了人物描写的方法。基于以上四个环节的铺垫，学生写作水到渠成。

（五）大显身手，刻画人物

教师布置任务：

根据自己的生活经验，写一篇叙事作文，在叙述事件的过程中完成人物描写，将习作上传至群论坛。

设计意图：在学生写作之前,运用多媒体再现情境，播放精彩的生活瞬间，激发学生的创作灵感，让学生多角度、多层次地体会和品味人物，拓宽思维的广度、增强思维的深度，再引导学生由学校生活、家庭生活联想到社会生活中的人物，通过细心观察，用心体会，学生的写作热情随之点燃。这些作文，为评选优秀作品提供了素材。

（六）合作互动，评选佳作

小组合作选出优秀作品。

三、设计意图

师生对作文进行网上评选，通过交流、探讨达成共识，创立民主、平等、和谐的课堂氛围，让学生真正成为课堂的主人，积极参与到作文评选的过程中来。

通过讨论，全班评选出了5篇优秀作文，并把这5篇作文收录到班级的《悦写越快乐》作文小册中。这是我班的作文小册子，每次作文活动我们都把评选的优秀作文收录进来，有些文章发表到博客中。

通过学习，学生巩固了人物描写的方法，并且学会了描写人物。上课时间有限，网上的交流是无限的，课后学生可以继续到网上交流，把自己对人物描写的收获、困惑和感想发表在论坛上。老师也会在网上与大家进一步交流人物描写的方法技巧。

四、教学反思

信息技术以其图像清晰、动态感强、信息量大的优势，激发了学生写作的积极性、主动性。运用信息技术突破时空的限制，把现实生活中的某些情、景、事、物搬进课堂，为学生提供了宽松、愉悦的无纸化作文环境，使学生自主修改作文，方便、快捷。群论坛扩展了学生作文交流的空间，教师既能与学生共同对习作进行评改，又能把作文评改的主动权还给学生，使每个学生都参与评议修改。学生在网络交流中互相欣赏、互相批改，提高了评改水平，写作水平也随之提高。

由于网络信息资源与生俱来的不规则性和复杂性，第二个自主学习的环节有个别学生被动地在泛滥无效的信息海洋中消磨时光，导致他们参与课堂不积极。今后，我会在激发学生的学习兴趣，改变学生漫无目的的学习习惯。同时，网络的负面影响，我们也不能忽视，教师要引导学生网络文明上网，组织好学生的网络活动。

[在网络环境中的人物描写作文教学

我的外公64岁了，他是一位简朴、慈祥、善良而又勤劳的老人，外公爱生活中非常关心我，我也很喜欢外公。

一次，放学后我刚要回家，讨厌的天，突然下起了倾盆大雨，我没带任何雨具心想这下完了，如果冒雨跑回家的话肯定会发烧，唉!只能等雨停了在回家了。正当我垂头丧气的准备在楼梯道里写作业的时候，忽然听见有人在喊我“程程!程程!”我很惊讶，谁会来接我呀?一扭头，原来是外公，他见雨下了这么大不放心，冒雨来接我，我的眼睛湿润了……

外公很小气。8月上旬，天气很热，我和外公说我去买雪糕，前脚刚迈出家门，就被外公叫住了，他语重心长的对我说“钱是用汗水换来的，想用就得付出。”我小声嘀咕着“我去做事还不行吗。”

外公很大方。周六，外公带我去才子书店看书，我看上了一本装订非常精致的作文书，一看价钱挺贵的，心想：外公他肯定不会给我买的，连一根雪糕都舍不得买。正当我犹豫着要不要和外公说时，外公走了过来，他好像看透了我的心思，说“只要对学习有帮助，不管多贵，我都给你买。”

外公平时很爱帮助人，他不知得过多少次“优秀共产党员”的称号，只要邻居有困难，他都会去帮忙。

我为自己有一位这样的外公感到自豪!

我的爸爸，他长着一头乌黑的头发，高鼻梁，嘴里有两排洁白的牙齿，浓密的眉毛下有一对大眼睛。

我的爸爸是个爱岗敬业的人。

有一天的凌晨，爸爸被手机铃声吵醒，接过电话后，爸爸再也没时间睡觉。急急忙忙就去上班了，回来的时候已经疲惫不堪。

这就是我的爸爸，一个爱岗敬业，不辞辛苦的爸爸。

【评语】这是一篇描写人物的文章，一年级的孩子能把人物的外貌描写清楚，特别是最后一段能把爸爸是一个什么样的人表达清楚，实属不易。对于一年级的孩子来说这是一篇不错的文章。

[有关于人物描写作文

My father is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform. He works in the police station and he is very busy every day. He likes helping people. So he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. When he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much, too. They often say: Mr Li, you are a good policeman. We like you very much. But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty.

My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day. Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy. I like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.

This is my father. He is a good father. I like my father very much! My dear friends, do you have a good father, too?

My neighbour

I have lots of neighbours but I like Aunt Huang best. She is in her forties. She is slim and pretty with a round face. She is a medium heght with a pair of glasses on her small nose. She is friendly and helpful. When we have troubles, she always helps us. She likes traveling and reading books. She often tells us the places she has been and the stories. She also likes animals and she has a dog named Diandian and she often walks her dog. She sometimes play badminton with her husband. She is so kind that we all love her very much.

外貌基本释义为外表，容貌；外部形象。下面是小编为你带来的六年级人物外貌描写作文教学教案，欢迎阅读。

教学内容：学习抓住人物外貌特点进行人物描写。

教学重点：抓住人物特点也就是抓住与别人不同的地方，特殊的地方。学会仔细观察、认真思考、流畅表达。

教学难点：通过自己的笔端，表达自己对人物性格特点的理解，达到以“形”传“神”。

时间安排：两课时。

教学过程：

一、 聊一聊

趣味谈话：今天，我们开始了暑假期间作文阅读的学习，大家都是爱学习的孩子，来到新学校，见到新老师，我从大家的眼睛里看到了新奇、迷惑、怀疑和信任。很多同学不认识我，我想呢，我也不介绍自己，我就想让大家通过看我的外貌猜猜，猜猜我是一个怎样的人？

二、 议一议

如果让你来说的话，猜什么？你会怎么猜？你是根据什么猜的？（学生发言，老师指导，注意语言的流畅和准确）

主要依据人物的外貌，包括：容貌、体态、衣着、表情。

仔细观察，抓住人物的特点，说出自己最真实的猜想。

发挥想象，例如老师的年龄、老师的眼睛、老师的肤色、老师的大肚子、老师说话的声音和腔调……

三、 说一说

按照你观察到的和想象到的，你来表述，要流畅、形象、具体，想象要丰富。

四、 写一写

注意格式、注意标点、注意语意连贯，不写错别字。恰当运用修辞手法（比喻、拟人、夸张、引用），真实表达自己想法。

范文举例。(略)

五、        评一评（略）

作文小贴士

一、描写人的品质：         平易近人 宽宏大度 冰清玉洁 锲而不舍 鞠躬尽瘁 持之以恒

二、描写人的智慧：         料事如神  足智多谋 博古通今 才华横溢 出类拔萃 博大精深

三、描写人物仪态、风貌：   文质彬彬  风度翩翩 相貌堂堂 斗志昂扬 意气风发 威风凛凛

四、描写人物神情、情绪：   悠然自得 眉飞色舞 喜笑颜开 神采奕奕 欣喜若狂 呆若木鸡

范文：

1、站在讲台上的是一位四十来岁的汉子，据说是我们的新老师。他中等身材，稍微有点胖，显得很结实，皮肤黑黑的， T恤配短裤，留着一头乌黑的短发，一眼看上去有点像武术学校的教练。仔细一看，新老师似乎显得更黑了，那栗色的皮肤就像刚从烤箱里拿出的面包，光亮紧致。我猜老师肯定是刚从非洲回家的吧，要不怎么那么黑呀。好在他的鼻梁上架了一副黑框眼镜，这才让他显得有点学问，透过眼镜，我发现原来老师的眼睛很大、很有神，眼睛里似乎藏着许多故事。不知不觉，我有点喜欢这位老师了，我很想从老师那里学到写作文的诀窍，听老师讲那些有趣的故事。

2、在我们面前正眉飞色舞和大家聊天的就是我们的新老师，他一身黑衣黑裤，显得酷酷的，那黑黑的皮肤配上他结实的身体，现出一番威风凛凛的架势。老师“圆圆”的，圆身材、圆肚子、圆脑袋、圆脸庞、圆鼻子、圆眼睛，就连戴着的眼镜也是圆圆的，真有趣。他神采奕奕、风度翩翩，似乎很有学问。我猜，老师一定平易近人，因为他的眼睛里满是慈祥和蔼的光彩；老师一定才华横溢，因为他说起话来滔滔不绝、口若悬河。我想，我会喜欢这位老师的！

我用粉笔把不太清晰的“坏”字重描了一下，并添上了“老师吗”三个字，后面还加了一个大大的问号。

许多同学发出了善意的笑声，课堂气氛已转入正常。

我继续说道：“我，就是你们的季老师，是个坏老师吗？今天，我愿意把一个真实的我向同学们介绍一下。”

接着，我详细的介绍了我的生活和工作情况，也坦诚地承认了自身的一些弱点和缺点。

我说完了，教室里一片沉静。我感到，同学们都被我的真诚感动了。果然，一阵热烈的掌声响了起来，李晓眼中甚至噙着泪水，拍手拍得非常起劲。

上课是从来不兴鼓掌的，这在我的教学生涯中是第一次。

我为自己即兴设计的教学方案陶醉了。

我潇洒地在“季老师”三个字底下画上了一道横线，擦掉了“季老师”三个字，将题目改成“——是个——吗”，要求道：“请各位同学考虑一下，将题目填写完整，并以此为题说一段话。”

李晓第一个发言，他说：“我的题目是‘李晓是那个写“季老师是个坏”这几个字的学生吗？’”。

我心中一惊，学生的眼光是多么犀利啊！李晓讲的非常流畅，否定了黑板上的字是他写的。尽管我还不相信他的话，但对于他的说话艺术还是赞许的。学生们又鼓起掌来，这掌声似乎比给我的更热烈。

掌声一落，王娜举起了手，她说：“我要说的题目是‘王娜是个坏学生吗？’。”王娜承认，那行字是她写的，主要是想看一下老师是否有雅量。她说她不是个坏学生，季老师也不是一个坏老师。今天，她感到老师的形象更加高大了。

我非常惊喜，为她的大胆活泼而高兴。全班学生的掌声又一次热烈的响了起来。

此事过去快十年了。如今，李晓已成为一位工程师；王娜在法国留学，已获得博士学位。这个班的学生见到我或者来信时，说最佩服我的是处理“季老师是个……”这几个字的方式，那节课是给他们印象最深的一堂语文课。

其实，近十年来，这三次掌声时时回响在我的耳边。

Birds dont fly high up in the sky. The air is too thin.

It is hard for birds to breathe in thin air. Thin air doesnt hold them up.

Birds fly near the ground so that they can see where they are. The birds look for places they know. Then they do not get lost. Some birds fly so low over the ocean that the waves often hide them. Many birds fly a long distance in the spring and autumn.

鸟不在天空的高处飞。因为空气太薄。

鸟很难呼吸稀薄的空气。稀薄的空气让它们飞的并不持久。

鸟飞在地面附近,这样它们可以看到它们在哪里。鸟儿知道它们要寻找的地方，所以它们不会迷路。有些鸟飞得很低以致于海洋波浪经常淹没了他们。许多鸟类在春天和秋天可以飞行很长的距离。

Since I was small, I have heard about the Great Wall, it is very long, a lot of people come to Beijingto watch it. In China, there is an old saying“One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero”. As it is so famous, I want to the site when I have a chance. I see many pictures about the Great Wall on the books, I also watch it through TV.

Every time I see it, I feel so eager to reach there. My father traveled there once, he took many pictures, this is the first time I feel so close to the site. I must work hard, so I can have money to go to there.

Thanksgiving began with the first European settlers in America. They

gathered their crops, celebrated and gave thanks for the food.

Tradition says Pilgrim settlers from England celebrated the first

thanksgiving in sixteen twenty-one. There is evidence that settlers in other

parts of America held earlier thanksgiving celebrations. But the Pilgrims

thanksgiving story is the most popular.

The Pilgrims were religious dissidents who fled oppression in England. They

went first to the Netherlands. Then they left that country to establish a colony

in North America. The Pilgrims landed in sixteen twenty in what later became

known as Plymouth, Massachusetts.

Their voyage across the Atlantic Ocean was difficult. Their first months in

America were difficult, too. About one hundred Pilgrims landed just as autumn

was turning to winter. During the cold months that followed, about half of them

died.