大学英语人物描写（热门20篇）

When China was hungry for their first world title to celebrate the 10th anniversary of the founding of the Peoples Republic of China table tennis player Rong Guotuan made their dream come true.

Rong became New Chinas first world champion after he won the mens singles title at the 25th World Table Tennis Championships, in former West Germany on April 5, 1959.

Before the championships, the team had pinned their gold hopes on the mens team. But their dream of a world team title was destroyed by the Hungarian team in the semifinal match, losing three games to five.

After a chain of (一系列) unexpected defeats to Chinese favoured for the title, Rong carried the heavy hopes to make a breakthrough.

Rongs rival in the final was top Hungarian paddler Ferenc Sido.

Rong was seen as an underdog for the title as he had just lost to Sido in the team contest. Even the victory flowers were being prepared for Sido.

But much to the surprise of the 8000-member audience, Rong won three straight sets with a big margin 21-12, 21-15, and 21-14 after losing the first set 19-21. Until that very moment, Rong realized the promise he made one year ago, that was to win a world championship for his motherland.

Two years later at the 26th championship for his motherland.

Two years later at the 26th championships in Beijing,  Rong led the Chinese men to win the team title.

After becoming the coach(教练) of the Chinese womens team,  Rong led the team to the winners podium at the 28th championships(锦标赛)in 1965.

我们的陈老师，不高的个头，微胖的身体，一张严肃的面孔上有一双不大，但却十分明亮的眼睛。一头乌黑发亮的短发利落地扎在脑后。

陈老师有一项让那些调皮蛋“闻风丧胆”的绝招，那就是—罚试卷，可千万别小看了这试卷的威力，瞧！这不，陈老师又抱着一叠试卷走进教室。()刚才还无精打采的同学立马像充了电似的，挺直了腰板，睁大了眼睛。生怕那惹人厌的试卷会从天而降。不过，陈老师还是十分体谅学生的，只有万不得已时，陈老师才会使用这一“必杀技”。

不但如此，陈老师敬业，爱学生的精神也令我敬佩。为了给成绩不好的学生讲题目，改作业，每天，陈老师总是最晚离开学校。第二天，却又顶着黑眼圈来学校，我猜：陈老师一定又背课背到深夜了。为了让同学们的成绩提高更快，陈老师往往连早餐都来不及吃。当我们不争气时，陈老师又会大发雷霆。

陈老师是让淘气包“闻风丧胆”的严老师，陈老师是让我们尊敬爱戴的好老师，陈老师真是让我们又爱又恨呀！

I did a great thing in the winter holiday.One day,I was going to the book store and suddenly I found a paper money which worth 100 RMB.I looked around and picked it up.At first,I wanted to use it and I can save my own money.However,I thought a lot and I decided to wait for the person who lost the money at last.10 mintues later,a little boy who was anxious came towards me and asked me if I had picked up 100 yuan.I handed the money to him and he was surprised to get the money back.I was very happy when he said "thank you" to me.then I went back home with a big smile.

In everyone’s life, most people have some experience and career which are affected by someone. It is difficult for you to forget them and what they affected you because they have taught you something of importance in your life, also it changed your life. It is difficult for me to forget that my older sister who is 4-year older than me has taught me something which were important in my life.

It is fortunate thing for me that I have two sisters, and they are all my loved ones. When I was child, I was jealous of another children who have older brother. When they got some trouble with other another children who has no older brother, they let their older brother to help them and they always got win even though they were wrong. This thought was ridiculous when I recognized that having an older sister is wonderful thing for me especially when I was youth.

In my memory, my older sister was a pretty and not tall girl when she was in high school, and she had two long braids. She got a job when she just graduated for senior high school because my mother’s health was not in good situation and she though that she should earn some money to reduce my parents afford. I was in junior high school when she got her job. I was clever and excellent student when I was in elementary school. But when I was in junior high school, everything was totally changed, I was also clever but I could not get good grade, I was confused and disappointment. My sister advised me to change my study method. She told me that you should not think that finishing your homework is only one thing you need to do after school. You are in high school now, you need to study your textbook more and think about some question more. In order to help me to do it effectively, she studied with me and explained some question for me after her work.

[描写姐姐的英语作文

我的同桌不胖不瘦，一年前，老师将她分到了我的旁边。经过一年多的观察，我总结出了她的两大特点“画痴以及不鸣则已一鸣惊人”等特点。

咱先来说说她的第一个特点“画痴”。注意她可不是不会画画，它是对画画喜爱到了痴迷的程度。有一次考试，她做完卷子后，在她的草稿纸上进行了天马行空的想象力，可惜画到一半便被老师发现了。可过了一会，她仍贼心不死，开始在橡皮上继续创作，直到被我呵斥才开始检查卷子。她有一项功能：不用参照物，便可以凭想象作画，她的绘画本上满是她的绘画作品，我还细细翻越过，确实不错。但我也与她约法三章，认为画画这个爱好不错，但要有“重轻”观念，以学习为重，花画画不可以影响到学习，不准在作业未完成前画画。 再说她的第二个特点：“不鸣则已一鸣惊人”。她常常会爆出大冷门，有时成绩甚至会超过我。有次语文测验，我只考了89分，她居然考了92分，超过我三分。老师讲卷子时，我才发现全班只有她一人分段正确，我暗地问她：“你是蒙的吗？”“不是，因为……”她说的头头是道，连我都对她刮目相看了。

对了，我都忘了告诉你们她的名字了，她就是我的同桌——朱蕊菁。

The pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe. In the first cartoon， a man is scorching the earth on a chimney. In the second one， a famous ancient Chinese poet， Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory. We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”。

The drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution. There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization， proGREss and development. Unfortunately， as industry develops， so will the number of factories， and the amount of industry pollutants. We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.

As a consequence， it is imperative for us to take drastic actions. On the one hand， the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet. On the other hand， there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.

True friends always come to you when their help is in need.They try their best to help you without thinking what they can get from it. This invariably wins them love and respect from otbers, for they devote themselves to the happiness of others.

Up to the time of my writing this article, Aero has been helping me with my selecting the courses with great effort. He is a friendly and zealous guy. I think he has been liked by others since long ago because of his characteristics. He is always brisk,enthusiastic, energetic and he is smiling no matter when or where you see him. However, I like him for some other reason.It seems that between us there is a special way to communicate and its not the usual way through which we communicate such as words and gestures. He has always been a friend of mine be cause I like the way he acts and lives and the way we communicate.

One morning a week ago, he came to me and asked if he could be of help. Actually I had been worrying about my course of this semester for days since I hadnt got any English courses yet! Still I was totally caught off guard by Aeros offer though he had always been kind. I thought it was my own business and it had never occurred to me that some other individual would offer to help with my selecting the courses. So I declined his kindness.  The very next day, I got a cough and it later turned out to be a four-day high fever. In those days, I was extremely weak and lay in bed all day long and hardly had any strength even to eat. I lost the power to keep an eye on the possible vacancies of the English courses ever since I got a high fever. I began to regret declining Aeros offer. Just at that moment, Aero called,asking about my health and told me to have a good rest, saying that he would shoulder the responsibility of selecting my English courses for me. Now I am writing this article as the homework of this writing course and Id like to re emphasize that it is all due to my friends effort that I have finally made it.

I was really grateful to him when he called and offered to help and it is hard to express my gratitude with words.  All I want to say about it is that at that moment, I realized that he had offered to help not because it made him feel he was important but because he meant business. Hes a man of integrity. I am proud of having such a friend.

乌黑的头发中掺杂着几根白发，脸色稍有点黑，一双眼睛却炯炯有神，那就是我的老爸。

老爸已经四十岁了，可还是童心未泯。

我上四年级时，在一个偶然的机会里我学会了玩溜溜球，便买了一个，回家写完作业后便玩了起来。

这时，老爸看见我玩得那么开心，居然也想试一试，便对我说：“儿子，借你老爹玩一玩。”于是，我把溜溜球递给了老爸。老爸开始不会玩，球总是不听使唤，甩了半天也没学会。老爸显得很着急，我便对他说：“等溜溜球滑到底下，你再往上拉。”老爸试了几下就会了，还学会了“睡眠”、“溜狗”等好几个花样呢！

老爸越玩越上瘾，越玩越有兴趣，一会儿都不想放下。妈妈看着老爸的贪玩样说：“都40岁了，儿子都快12岁了，却还像个‘老顽童’！

”“哈哈……”家里传出一阵欢乐的笑声。

老爸不光有一颗童心，他对工作也十分认真。

前几天，老爸办公室里安了一台电脑，里面还装了好多游戏呢！

我真想去玩个痛快。正好，今天老爸要到办公室去，我赶忙央求老爸答应。没想到他严厉地对我说：“你怎么小小年纪就学会了占公家的便宜，长大了还了得吗？”我生气地跑进自己的屋子里，“嘭”地一声把门用力关上，冲着老爸的背影骂了声：“老顽固！

”没想到老爸这一走就一直没回来，我只好睡觉了。

半夜里，我醒来上厕所，看见书房的灯亮着，原来老爸在写材料，书桌旁的纸篓里已经被塞得满满的了，头上汗津津的，他发现了我，用布满血丝的眼睛看着我，说：“快去睡吧，明天还要上课呢。”我知道老爸的倔脾气，只好说了句：“老爸，你也赶快睡吧。”我便去睡了。

可是，我却久久不能入睡。月亮，在天空中散着步，星星，在调皮地眨着眼睛，而老爸却还在写着那份材料。

我为我有一个“老玩童”，办事认真、公私分明的老爸感到骄傲，感到自豪。

The rabbits family

hello, my friends! my name’s sandy. today, i will tell you an interesting story about rabbits. look at me , now , i’m not sandy but a mother rabbit. i have a happy family because of my three daughters. they are very clever and lovely. in the morning , they have good habits . after they get up , they have good habits. after they get up in the morning, they wash the face , brush the hair , clean the ears and blow the noses. they like singing and dancing , too . now , let’s have a share , children , are you ready ? (yes, let’s go.) action , please! ( sing and dance)

兔子的家

你好,我的朋友!我的名字叫桑迪。今天,我将告诉你一个有趣的故事关于兔子。看着我,现在,我不是沙,但母亲的兔子。我有一个幸福的家庭,因为我的三个女儿。他们非常聪明和可爱。早上,他们有良好的习惯。起床之后,他们有良好的习惯。早上起床之后,他们洗的脸,刷头发,清洁耳朵吹鼻子。他们喜欢唱歌和跳舞。现在,让我们来分享,孩子们,你准备好了吗?(是的,我们走吧。)行动,谢谢!(唱歌跳舞)

The university is full of talent, learning, and a small stage and small society full of competition and challenge. Every one of us plays a different role on this stage, so why dont we try to play the best part of our role! As a college student, we are eager to positive rather than blind impulse, bold and not wantonly recklessly, dare to think and not utopian, but not like you think of?? let us grasp the youth, to exercise their own here! Leave your hard figure in the activities of the organization, show your most beautiful style in the community activities, and dedicate one of your strengths to volunteering. Here you get not only a kind of knowledge, but also the most valuable wealth of life. When we were young, in their prime, pointing Jiangshan jiyangwenzi. Let the flower of life give birth to the color of youth, and let the youth glow because of vitality. The university campus, not do not, only unexpected, let us give full play to our talents! There are few human beings, and the university is the most treasured. Lets not let the youth idle away, and load a little gain in every days life, so that a confident smile will float on your face, and I believe firmly that there will be rewards for giving and passionate excitement.

The university is the halls of every one of us. In order to come to this hall, we have experienced the wind and rain. Now that we have stepped into this threshold, let us sprinkle our personality in the hall of this dream.

The university is not a fantasy, not a dream, not a delusion, but a great ideal. As long as we fight for it, fight for it. One day we will return! You will hear the maple leaf flow boat at that time, you will see the Chrysopsis laughing, you can smell the fruit fragrance, for you to the harvest season!

When I wrote this article, I was a student of * * * University. When I was about to enter school, I stood at the beginning of the University, and looked forward to the four years study and life of University. I hope my university can be full and meaningful as expected. Freshman: lay down the foundation. The idea of "want me to learn" is "I want to learn" to learn basic courses well on the ground, especially English and computer. In the big plan, we should make a small plan, keep in mind the English words and practice the spoken English every day, and learn it unswervingly from the beginning of the year. According to the actual situation, consider whether to take a double degree or minor major in second major, and prepare for the information as soon as possible. Freshmens learning tasks are relatively relaxed. They can participate in community activities appropriately, take certain positions, improve their organizational skills and communication skills, and train soldiers for graduation job interviews.

小学是学生学写作文的基础阶段，小学生以学习写记叙文为主，而写好记叙文的关键之一就是要写好人物。因此，小学作文教学应从写好人物抓起。本文浅谈作文教学中的人物描写方法，欢迎阅读了解。

在教学实践中，根据学生的实际情况，采取多种形式，加强人物描写的训练，收到了较好的效果。

《小学语文教学大纲》指出：小学作文教学应该从说到写，由易到难，由简到繁，循序渐进。在一、二年级说通顺话，写通顺句子的基础上为重点教学。中年级着重进行人物描写，片段训练。高年级重在写个人的成篇作文。这就为指导了学生描写人物指导了方向。如何指导小学生写人，现将自己在作文教学中的点滴体会浅谈如下。

一、以读促写，学会观察，描写人物

在阅读教学中，根据儿童模仿力强的特点，引导学生学习课文中作者观察人物。分析人物的方法。指导学生把阅读教学中的基本功运用到自己的作文中去，做到以读促写。

如《我的弟弟》一文中写到：“弟弟长得脑袋大，身子小，面黄肌瘦，难友们都疼爱地叫他小萝卜头。”寥寥几笔刻画出弟弟的长相特点。借此教学生学习作者观察方法和描写方法。即描写人物外貌时，一定要注意发现他们细微之处，抓住人物最突出，最特别的外貌特征。切忌眉毛胡子一把抓。其次是按一定顺序去观察，去描写。请看：

小外甥可淘气了，每次从外面回来，蓬乱的头发上总沾着些沙粒，汗顺着脸颊流下来，脸蛋上东一道，西一道的泥水印儿，小嘴四周黑乎乎的像长了胡子，衣服的领子总是向上翘着，第三个扣子系到第二个扣眼上，这模样让人看了既好笑又好气。这段人物描写作者先写了小外甥的头、面部特点。再写了他的衣着特点。最后写出了作者的感受。在教学中，小学生对人物的外貌描写产生了浓厚的兴趣。积极举手，要求尝试。我趁机设计了人物外貌描写的片段作文教学目标。以《我的***》为题，就写本班自己最熟悉的人，要求按顺序去观察，抓住他与别人不同的外貌特点去写。比比看谁速度快，特点抓得准，老师看了你的作文，只要能猜出他是谁？准给你得“优”。这下可热闹了，大家互相观察着，议论着。努力寻找对方突出的特征，结果令人满意，每个同学都能抓住对方的突出特征，避免了千人一面，千篇一律的写法。

要写一个人，只要描写人物的外貌是远远不够的。这要求我们从各方面刻画人物，才能反映人物的精神品质，如神态描写，语言描写，动作描写，但对小学生来说可是件难事。为此，我采用分析法指导学生分别写人物的动作神态语言。心理活动等片段作文训练，在教学语言描写时，我以《院子里的悄悄话》，《陶罐和铁罐》等典型课文为范文，学生分角色朗读铁罐的傲满，陶罐的谦虚，扣人心弦的对话，幽默风趣的提示语，极大地调动了小学生学习语言的兴趣，需掌握提示语在前，在中间，在后，省略提示语等，我又以语言描写为训练为目标，让学生走向社会，走进家庭，细心观察，选择最佳对话，小记茶余饭后，家庭谈天等。随后又教学生分别掌握了动作神态，心理活动等片段描写。

二、从典型事例中集中表现人物的品质

举例仿佛一面镜子，可以映照出人物的性格特点，精神面貌等。写好事例。就可以使人物形象更丰满。充满活力，这就要求小学生深入生活，留心观察，认真思考，根据表达的需要。捕捉生活中表现力最强的典型事例来展示人物形象。可以写出自己“最熟悉的人”和“最真实的事”。怎样在事中表现人，在人物语言，动作等片段训练的基础上，我又以《罗盛教》《少年闰土》等为范文，教会学生抓住特点观察。《罗盛教》一文使学生明白，只有按事情发展的顺序写，才能把事情写完整，但必须仔细观察和描写出在事情发展中人物的语言，动作神态特点。合理推测人物的心理。如《罗盛教》一文中，作者紧紧抓住罗盛教救崔莹时“站，甩，冲，钻”等一连串的动作特点，生动形象地刻画罗盛教舍己救人的高大形象。学生逐渐掌握了事情发展中性不同方面综合描写人物的写作方法。我又设计了《记一个人》的成篇作文教学目标。指导学生以《我的爸爸》《我的妈妈》《我的老师》等为题。仔细观察人物的外貌，性格，语言动作，神态描写等特点，列举具体事例，进行描写，起初教会学生通过一件事情表现人物，慢慢地学会通过两件事情或三件事情再现人物的形象，这样，学生就笔下有物，言之有序，很快一个活生生的人物形象展现在读者面前。

三、沟通情感、有情感可发、有话可写

“感人心者莫过于情”。我在指导学生写作文时，要求他们写出真情实感，只有真实，才能使作文描写人物显得有生命力，适时与老师，家长，学生等互相沟通心灵。心理学家认为，赞扬、勉励可鼓舞学生士气，提高描写人物的信心，融洽和谐的师生关系，父（母）子、（女）关系，同学关系，可使学生无忧无虑的学习和生活，这其中，教师是“爱”的集大成者，师生之间没有血缘关系，然而人类主要靠师生相承，才创作出人物美好的品行世界。前苏联著名教育家苏霍姆林斯基说：“教师不仅要成为一个教导者，而且要成为学生的朋友。和他们一起克服困难，一起享受欢乐和忧愁。”这不正说明了教师是爱的化身，爱的使者吗？只要对学生倾注一份爱心，学生就能敞开心扉，说出，写出自己心中的偶像人物特征，写出了自己对教师的敬爱，如有这样一篇作文，文章写到：“又是一个教师节了，我留恋在琳琅满目的贺年卡长摊前，寻找着，寻找着……”蓦的，一张素雅的贺年卡映入我的眼帘，淡蓝的夜空笼罩着一望无际的沙滩，一轮圆月将慈祥的目光洒在波涛起伏的海上。下面有一行小字，我想作一次飞行，去寻找老师描绘的那片神奇的土地。刹那间，我仿佛站在蓝天下的沙滩中，看到我永远忘不了的我的班主任叶老师……。”还写到：“那天，残阳如雪，叶老师带领我们全体同学在教学楼后栽了一株小杏树，这棵小树的成长，象征着集体的力量，凝聚着师生间深深的爱”。在她的内心深处，她真心祝愿她的老师能过一个快乐的教师节，她用一篇作文表达了师生之间浓浓的情意。

四、强化写作训练，反馈作文信息

实践证明，只有加强作文小练笔，才能提高小学生的作文水平，在教学中，我鼓励学生面向社会，仔细观察，发现积累素材，多看、多写、多练。写日记、写周记、写小作文、一周写一次大作文。以命题作文如《我的自画像》或半命题作文《记一个……的老师》等为题。开展多种形式的作文兴趣，同时，严把作文质量关，认真批改好每一篇作文，及时发现作文中存在的问题，表扬并张贴优秀作文，重视面向全体进行作文讲评，力求做到“精”和“广”。“精”就是对共性问题提出来大家分析，评论，让学生评定，“广”就是扩大讲评篇数，举一反三，将自己作文与优秀作文比较，看看自己的习作是否达到训练目标，大大地提高了学生的作文水平。

万丈高楼平地起，作文教学必须从小抓起，循序渐进，人物描写即从学会人物的外貌，语言，动作，心理等片断训练到完整地写一个人的成篇作文训练，随着年级的升高逐渐提出新的作文教学目标，功夫不负有心人，只要平时加强阅读，强化作文训练，那么一篇篇如见其人，如闻其声的优秀作文就会展现在读者面前，使人耳目一新。

Wilber Pan is a young star comes from China. He was born in 1980.8.6. He is a lovely boy who has 174cm tall and 69kg weight .

As you can see ,he has short balck hair,erogenous mouth ,handsome face and small eyes.

Alough his eyes arent bigly ,he also has many fans because of his sunshine smell.He is a boy just like a neighborly to you.

He is more a mastermind than a singer.He has a height degree that graduated from California Polytechnic State University ,he is good at singing ,dancing ,presiding and so on.

In private ,Willber is friendly to everyone who aroungs him.

Now more and more people from everywhere develop theirs love for him.

In front of my house there is a Gulf stream, a very normal stream, the highest level four meters to the surface will be wide, the water hours a strong, all of a sudden will be able to jump past,溪岸see the long lines of willows and a whirling small peach trees, the other side of the production team of Daejeon. All this is as usual.

However, I like it very much.

Spring, like a luminous stream of white belt. Daliushu light to float a leisurely shoot fine. Xiaocaohu 3322 of unknown mixed with wildflowers, yellow, light blue, pink, micro-purple, like a flash flash stars. the other side of a large reflection of the cauliflower in water, just as the golden horizon of the carpet. that a group of cute little fish, now floating in the water, dive into the water a moment, a moment that a piece of polyethylene, while their spread . These tiny fish, most of them only half as big match stick, his eyes are large and black, together with the body is transparent, well look, like a piece of flashing colon

The heat of summer, here is my most comfortable place to rest, the two sides have already grown willow un only fishes continuously through the sun , leakage to the surface, the needles seem to support teams. Noon When the cicada一个劲and shouting "hot - hot -" I will be holding a book, sit under relying on the trunk, and let the water cool touch my leg, suddenly, the cool comfortable feeling from all over the body at the foot of Bay. Hey, how should the United States and the United States. look at the stream, the that the water, like soft, thin belt, while in the water floating light and curly, while Shu has started to gesticulate even the United States. In some cases, neighbors came to the small boy in the stream, while at the pier or in the bushes in touch will touch a number of small shrimp crab, so they will have to give the spoils of war high, the merry laughter of the stream shaman.

Ah, home of the stream, a very unusual and very beautiful stream.

We have a good English teacher。His name is Bruce。 He comes from Britain， about forty years old。 He is tall and thin。 Wearing a pair of glasses makes him more gentlemen。He is strict with us。 He often makes full preparations for his class and corrects our homework carefully。 His teaching style is very unique， because he is used to encouraging all of us to think by ourselves and study on our own。 The relationship between Bruce and us is harmonious。 He is so kind and friendly that every student likes him and respects him deeply。 Our teacher is so excellent that we all love him very much。

我们有一个很好的英语老师，他的名字叫Bmce。他来自英国，大约40岁。他是一个又高又瘦的人，戴着一副眼镜，这使他显得更有绅士风度。 他总是严格要求我们。他经常认真备课，认真为我们批改作业。他的教学风格很是与众不同，这是由于他总是习惯鼓励学生努力思考，并且培养我们的自学能力。我们之间的关系很融洽。他对人和蔼可亲，所以深受我们的爱戴和尊敬。 我们的老师很出色，我们都很喜欢他。

Last year，my friend gave me a little dog. I was fond of him very much. I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went. I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me. It seemed that he was calling me.

My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home. When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them. What a lovely dog he is!

去年我朋友送我一只狗，我非常喜欢它。我很喜欢和他一起玩，放学后他喜欢跟着我，无论我走到哪里。我很高兴我有一个“保镖”。

去年冬天我功课很忙，每天回家都很晚。但是，不管我到家多晚，我的狗狗经常站在一个角落里在我的学校等着我。当我经过那里，他厉声叫两到三次，然后跑向我。似乎它是在呼唤我。

我的狗，不仅把我照顾得很好，但在家也很负责任。当有陌生人来到我家，他对着他们叫但不会伤害他们。他是一个多么可爱的狗!

When September comes, it means the new semester begins. Many freshmen come to the campus and the first thing they do is to get the military training. Some people question about the military, they think it is unnecessary because students don’t have to be the soldiers. While in my opinion, military training is in need.

当九月到来的时候，意味着新学期的开始。很多新生来到校园，他们要做的第一件事就是军训。一些人对军训感到疑惑，他们认为军训是不必要的，因为学生不是要成为军人。然而在我看来，军训是需要的。

Military training can cultivate students with strong will. Most students live with their parents before they come to school and with the parents’ protection, they don’t have much life experience. Military training is hard and during the training, students can stand the hard time, so they can get used to the life coming to them.

军训能够培养学生们坚强的意志。大部分学生在来到学校前都是和父母住在一起，受到父母的保护，他们没有太多的生活经验。军训是苦的，在这期间，学生能够忍受艰难的时光，因此他们能适应即将到来的校园生活。

The military training can teach the students to obey the rules. It is known to all that soldiers’ duty is to obey the order, so students will have the sense of obeying the rules. When they come to study, they know what they should do and what they should refuse.

军训能教会学生遵守规则。众所周知，军人的任务就是服从命令，因此学生就会有服从规则的意识。当他们在学习的时候，就会知道什么该做，什么该拒绝。

There is no doubt that military training is very important, though it is hard, it will do good to students.

毫无疑问，军训是很重要的，虽然苦，但是有利于学生。

知识回顾：人物描写方法

一、外貌描写

也称肖像描写,即是对人物的外貌特征(包括人物的容貌、衣着、神情、体 型、姿态等等)进行描写，以揭示人物的思想性格，表达作者的情感。

外貌描写的方法：1、肖像突出人物性格2、眼睛显示人物内心3、神态表现人物情绪

4、服饰体现人物身份

方法指导：

（一）外貌描写第一招：抓住人物典型的外在特征，突显出人物的个性。

请你诊断：我身材不高也不矮，满头的黑发梳得整整齐齐，脸上弯弯的眉毛下面嵌着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，嘴巴上面有一个高高的鼻子，身上穿着一套漂亮的运动服，手上戴一块手表，脚穿一双旅游鞋。   毛病在哪里？

诊断：外貌描写模式化，没有突出特征。

建议：抓住人物的特点进行外貌描写

修改后：我呀，短头发圆脸像妈妈，浓眉大眼像爸爸。不够白净的脸上有许多褐色的雀斑。由于读书写字的姿势不正确，我成了近视眼，这不，最近我的鼻梁上又多了一副眼镜。别看我不漂亮，我可从来没为我的容貌烦恼过。

点评：抓住相貌特征，较具体形象。

（二）外貌描写第二招：要有一定的顺序。

描写人物外貌时还要合理安排好描写顺序，一般先写整体再写局部，局部描写时按照从上到下的顺序。

小姑娘浑身上下可用一个“圆”字来概括，胳膊和腿圆滚滚的。圆嘟嘟的脸上有一双又大又黑的眼睛，圆溜溜的，闪动着调皮、无邪的光；小嘴还张得圆圆的。扎着两个麻花儿辫儿，白色的蝴蝶结像两只暂停在她头上的白蝴蝶。

典型特征：胖乎乎 个性特点：调皮、活泼、可爱

经典片段赏析：

我吃了一吓，赶忙抬起头，却见一个凸颧骨，薄嘴唇，五十岁上下的女人站在我面前，两手搭在髀间，没有系裙，张着两脚，正像一个画图仪器里细脚伶仃的圆规。

——鲁讯《故乡》  那个寡妇生得像是一所房子，她的胸脯鼓出来，好比一个门廊。她的红彤彤的脸用一块绿色的头巾包严，方方整整，类似一扇天窗，而窗玻璃正好映着阳光。

——高尔基《人间》

（三）外貌描写第三招：善用修辞。

1、那富婆一身珠光宝气，五根手指像五根胖墩墩的香肠。

2、妹妹七岁，是一年级学生，穿着白衬衫和蓝色的学生裤，胖墩墩的像个小东瓜，又

像是个胖鼓鼓的花生米。她的名字就叫小胖。她跑起来很吃力，脸蛋累得通红，微微凸出的前额渗出细小的汗珠。

才艺展示：

请描写一个同学或者一位老师的外貌，要求抓住典型特征，突显人物个性。写出后让大家来猜猜你写的是谁，大家猜得出你就顺利过关了哦??

二、动作描写

动作描写是刻划人物的重要方法之一，就是通过描写人物富有特征性的动作行为，以表现人物的性格、品质、身份、地位、处境、状态。

例文赏析，明确动作描写要点：动作描写要求生动、具体、细致。

片断1、可是他穿过铁道，要爬上那边月台，就不容易了。他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩；他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努力的样子。  ----朱自清《背影》

怎样“爬上月台”的？“爬”这个动作分解成了几个动作？父亲爬月台容易吗？能不能看出父亲对儿子的爱？

片断2、原文： 晚上，父亲亲自帮我铺好了床。

修改后：父亲坚持要亲自帮我铺床，他慢慢地从楼下抱上来三床被，将两床铺在床板上当垫被，又摸索着将被子沿床边折叠好，再铺上床单，然后将盖被放在上面。做完这一切，他又下楼去找来一个枕头，放在我的床头，把手伸进被窝里捂一会，说道：“这下应该不冷了”，看着父亲忙碌的样子，我想伸手帮忙，他却让我先歇着。 （刘雪丰《父亲老了》）  作者将“铺床”这个动作分解成哪几个动作？表现了人物的什么性格特点？ 明确动作描写要点：

动作描写要细致分解：即：将要描写的动作分解为几个阶段，然后对每个阶段进行描写（注意动词的选用)，写出人物动作的生动性，重视细节描写，并反映出人物的性格特点。  牛刀小试：

将下列动作细致分解（1）起跑(2）跳远（3）洗衣服（4）炒菜

从上面的四题中任选一题（或者自己定题）写作，要求将动作描写具体生动，表现出人物的性格特点。

三、语言描写

语言描写:个性化生活化的语言，要符合人物身份，职业等。

例一：《唐僧之现代版》

他有着唐僧一样清秀的面孔，有着唐僧一样憨厚的性格，有着唐僧一样唠叨的

习惯??当你上课时正与“周公”相会时，耳边总会响起这样的“问候” ： “你困了？ 你真的困了？你真真真的困了？你要是真困了，我就不打扰你了，作个好梦。你睡着了？你能睡着吗？”不把你“烦”醒，“唐僧”是绝不会停下来的，朦胧中看着他那上下蠕动的嘴唇，似乎在念着紧箍咒。

通过人物的语言把一个唠叨的同桌的形象展现给了读者，语言生动形象，幽默诙谐。  例二：《妈妈，对不起》

回家后，我给妈妈看考卷。妈妈看了很开心，笑得见牙不见眼。

她还称赞了我几句。这时，我忍不住了，喊道：“妈，您?您别说了！”妈妈担心地问：“乖女儿，怎么啦？”“其实我??我在这次的考试中作弊！”

这时，妈妈什么话也没说，眼角流下了泪水。“妈，您骂我、打我呀！”我禁不住也哭了起来。妈妈见了立刻把我的眼泪擦干，说：“来，你一定饿了，去吃饭吧！”妈妈并没有骂我，还原谅我、安慰我。“妈！对不起！”

通过人物对话充分表现妈妈对女儿的爱，女儿对妈妈的愧疚。

课堂小结：我们可以综合运用多种人物描写的方法来表现人物的个性，但并不是每种方法都得用，你可以选最能表现个性的一两种人物描写的方法。

写作训练：

以《××最××》为题，写一篇记叙文。如：父亲最严厉 妈妈最唠叨 她最美  要求：1仔细观察你的父母或同学，抓住人物特征，表现人物个性。2字数不少于600字。3用黑色碳素笔，书写工整，卷面整洁。4不得套写抄袭。

n my understanding, if we refer to an ideal college life as a formal western dinner, then a high GPA, that is, Grade Point Average, should be the main course, while an active part in activities, together with associations, means the appetizer. Some romances, of course, play the role as desserts. They are the 3 key elements for an ideal college life.

Those, however, are not what college life is all about. As we all know, college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood, but also the ivory tower to the real society. Therefore, the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally, and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.

Under this circumstance, I never expect my college life to be too ideal, or you can call it too perfect. It is not realistic to make all things on my own way, with everyone liking me, winning the first prize all the time, and so on. Of course, I’d like to lead a carefree life. However, this does little good to my future. What really helps is hardships like failure, betrayal, and unjust treatment. Only after experiencing those can I know what society is like, and what life is like.

To conclude my speech, I wanna say, some positive experiences are surely part of the ideal college life. But, I should not forget about the negative sides. They are not less necessary.

Wearing winter clothes, bathing winter rain, with a strange feeling can not tell. Although the falling rain bead mixed with the cold wind gives a feeling of cold, but it rushed to the earth a happy new year bath, to meet the New Years coming. But also reflects the atmosphere of the winter.

Walking on the road, and the raindrops hit the crack on the crack, so I remembered the summer wearing a raincoat umbrella scene. Suddenly look back, everything as old The swaying of the wind swiftly reminds me that it is winter! All the creatures of the earth are beginning to hibernate. The rain in the winter is like a pearl sprinkled on the earth, and the careful observation of the dense raindrops will make you dazzled and dizzying.

Look up and wait and see you will find the rain racing scrambling to fall from the top down, and some quietly lying in the grass, like a crystal clear and shiny shining light; some directly falling on the tree, like a Precious stones to help it dressed beautifully to meet the coming of the New Year; some fall into the thirsty river and lake, for their quench their thirst, like a mother to feed their own son, so timely. Suddenly, blowing waves of wind, feeling waves of cold but the heart is so sweet, because we immediately have to New Year friends.

The rain has been under, it seems to let people review the winter atmosphere. After the rain the earth is more like bathing New Years weather, the air is more clean fresh, clean up the dust, but also sober people impetuous heart.

一头乌黑的长发，淡淡的眉毛，水灵灵的大眼睛，人见人爱，她就是我们班的班长周筠晔，关于人物描写的作文。

可就是这位漂亮的女生成了我们的里大多数男生的眼中钉，肉中刺。

你不知道是怎么回事?那好吧，我现在就告诉你。

一个星期三的中午，我早早的来到了学校，倒在桌子上呼呼大睡起来，不知什么时候我被一阵敲桌子的响声惊醒，原来是班长拿着教棒站在我面前，我吓得大气不敢出一下。

她假笑着对我说：“呵呵，睡得好香嘛!跟周公有什么好聊的啊?”“有啊，周公让我跟你说，漂亮的女孩太凶了会变的不好看的。”我不服气地说。

周围的男生听了我的话都邪气的大笑起来。

“不好好看书还贫嘴，小心我把你的舌头剪下来让你不能跟周公聊天。”班长举起了教棒杏眼圆瞪，吓得我不敢再说。

教室里马上安静了下来。

你看你看，我们的班长真辣呀!非一般人可比。

就这样，我们男生一直在她的管治下过着痛苦的生活，私底下我们男生都说“命苦啊!这样的日子何时才是尽头啊!”为了不使我的寿命缩短，在她面前我就变的乖乖的，平时尽量不与其碰面。

老师说，在班长的管治下，班风日渐良好。

我们班的班长辣不辣?虽然，她很令人害怕，但她也有温和的一面，有一次同学的椅子坏了，上课的时候只能站着，她便拿来钉子替他修好。

要是遇到哪个同学向，身体不好，缺课了，她还会主动帮助辅导。

我渐渐觉的其实我们的班长是她辣的可爱的好班长!

Rabbit mammals Lagomorpha, herbivorous invertebrates, mammals. Head a little like a rat ear according to different varieties, large and small, upper lip middle division, is a typical three petal mouths, adorable. The rabbit who is gentle, lovable, is a popular animal. The tail is short and upturned, forelimb is shorter than the hind legs, be good at jumping, running very fast. Pet rabbits like sticky, hare afraid. Color is generally white, grey, withered grass, brown red, black and color.

兔兔类哺乳动物,无脊椎动物,食草哺乳动物。头有点像一只老鼠的耳朵根据不同的品种,或大或小,上唇中间分裂,是典型的三瓣嘴,可爱。兔子是谁温柔,可爱,是一个很受欢迎的动物。尾巴是短的,前肢比后腿短,善于跳跃,跑得很快。宠物兔子像粘稠的,兔子害怕。颜色通常是白色,灰色,枯萎的草,棕色红色,黑色和颜色。