大学英语人物描写【合集20篇】

这个世界上每一个人的外貌都是不一样的，尽管有很相似的人但总是有不同的地方。下面是小编整理收集的人物的外貌描写词语，欢迎阅读参考！

一、描写人物外貌的成语

浓眉大眼 慈眉善目 气宇轩昂 高大魁梧 英姿飒爽

衣着得体 一表人才 风度翩翩 衣冠楚楚 青面獠牙

貌比潘安 秀色可餐 膀大腰园 披头散发 相貌堂堂

闭月羞花 沉鱼落雁 大腹便便 虎背熊腰 尖嘴猴腮

贼眉鼠眼 眉清目秀 容光焕发 美如冠玉 出水芙蓉

冰肌玉骨 冰清玉洁 明眸皓齿 道貌岸然 国色天香

粉白黛黑 靡颜腻理 傅粉施朱 婀娜多姿 亭亭玉立

雾鬓风鬟 鹤发童颜 鹤发鸡皮 短小精悍 面黄肌瘦

面如土色 面红耳赤 面有菜色 蓬头垢面 囚首垢面

蓬头历齿 鸠形鹄面 铜筋铁骨 肠肥脑满 骨瘦如柴

药店飞龙 披头散发

二、分类描写人类外貌的词语

头发

披肩长发 柔软的头发 齐眉的刘海 秃头（没有头发）

白发苍苍 头发乌润 头发稀疏

眼睛

大眼睛忽闪忽闪 乌溜溜的眼珠 眼睛布满血丝 会说话的眼睛 慈祥的目光 明亮的眼睛 凶狠的目光 眼睛眯成一条缝

眉青目秀 炯炯有神   华语网（原大汉民族）

鼻子

高鼻梁 鹰钩鼻 酒糟鼻 蒜头鼻 朝天鼻 塌鼻梁

又遍又平的鼻子  又高又直的鼻子 尖尖的鼻子

宽鼻阔嘴

嘴

樱桃小嘴 抿着小嘴 血盆大口 尖嘴猴腮 厚嘴唇 薄嘴唇

嘴唇苍白  唇如胭脂 唇无血色 齿白唇红

牙

参差不齐的牙齿 白而发亮的牙齿

咬紧牙关 满口银牙 青面獠牙

苹果脸 瓜子脸 鹅蛋脸 长方脸 四方脸

俊美的脸 丑陋的脸 清瘦的脸 满脸憔悴 一脸稚气 古铜色的脸 黑里透红的脸 红扑扑的脸 布满皱纹的脸

脸色苍白 愁眉苦脸 嬉皮笑脸 面黄肌瘦 满脸雀斑  面如桃花 面如土色 天庭饱满 脸颊绯红 面目可憎 油头粉面 面不改色心不跳

脸刷地一下白了 脸腾地一下红了

手

十指尖尖 纤纤素手 粗壮的大手

身材

身材矮小 身材苗条 身材丰腴 体态轻盈 身材臃肿 身强力壮 膀阔腰圆

肌腱发达 腰板挺直 彪形大汉 大腹便便 脑满肠肥 短小精悍 虎背熊腰

身材高挑 亭亭玉立 袅袅婷婷 弱不禁风 瘦骨嶙峋 瘦骨如柴

［衣着］

朴素 大方 整洁 时髦 摩登 讲究 笔挺 邋遢 俗气

穿戴整齐  衣冠楚楚 穿红戴绿 衣着入时 珠光宝气 花枝招展 衣衫不整

不修边幅  破破烂烂 袒臂露肩 衣不蔽体 赤身裸体 一丝不挂

妈妈变了 今天下午，考完试，我背着书包垂头丧气往妈妈办公室走去。心里真希望去办公室的路长一些、再长一些。这次考试的分数不是很理想，数学出错的原因都是粗心，而粗心是妈妈最不能容忍的!记得她曾经说过，不会，别人可以帮你，粗心就只有自己救自己。不知道妈妈看到我的试卷会有什么反应，是痛骂?是责怪?是批评?还是冷漠?我忐忑不安，心里好像揣了一只兔子，“怦怦”地乱跳。不知不觉，

我走到了妈妈的办公室。 “妈妈。”我小心翼翼地叫了一声。“来了，怎么，考试没 星期五晴 有考好?”妈妈平静地望着我。“嗯。”我屏住呼吸，等待暴风雨的来临。过了好一会儿，妈妈没有说什么。我几乎不相信自己的耳朵。我决定主动坦白“犯罪事实”。“妈妈，我数学没有考好，扣掉的全是粗心分，题目我都会。”

我哆哆嗦嗦地拿出试卷。妈妈接过试卷，仔细地看了看，说：“是有点粗心。你看，这些有难度的题目，你都做对了，真是不容易呢!”妈妈边说边指给我看，“下次，可得仔细一些，不要犯这些粗心的错误了。这些题目你真的是不会做吗?做给我看看吧。”妈妈把这些题目抄在纸上，说：“试试看!”我立刻拿起笔刷刷地写了起来。“看，不是都会做吗，下次要注意了。”这些都是真的吗?我在心里一遍一遍地问自己。 记得以前，也是一次月考，我因为粗心被扣掉了两分。回家后，被妈妈狠狠地“修理”了一顿。妈妈一遍一遍地追问我：“这是为什么错?这些你都不会吗?粗心，是你最大的敌人!”妈妈的眼睛使劲地瞪着我，我感觉自己仿佛是暴露在烈日下的雪糕一样，快被融化了。其实，我也不知道自己为什么会错。妈妈越来越激动，用手狠狠地拍着我的屁股。疼倒不是很疼，可那严厉的话语和动作，对我来说，真是双重考验啊!

可是今天，妈妈的态度怎么会是一个180度的大转变呢?我仔细看着妈妈的眼睛，里面没有一点怒气，这是真的!我忍不住问妈妈：“妈妈，你怎么变了?粗心，不是你最不能容忍的事情吗?”妈妈笑了：“变了不好啊?以前妈妈老是批评你，很不好。最近妈妈在看一本《赏识教育》，很受启发，我应该给你m错的权利，在你犯错误的时候，我要看到你的长处，这样，对你我就有个正确、客观的评价，就不会乱说一气了!” 我明白了，原来是新的观点让妈妈发生了改变。我也一定好好努力，不让妈妈再变回去。

Nowadays ,more and more people prefer to work abroad rather than work at home According to statistics.since 1980， nearly two-thirds of the 1 million people who study overseas did not return home..Because they hold that there may have more possibilities to find a better job and earn more money overseas .

But others still believed that at home is better than overseas ,because there have many relationships for you ,which may make it easier for you to find a cozy job .

However ,I have another reason for working at home ,I think that it is also convenient for us to look after our family numbers ,because the reason why we want to find a better job is not only making a great living condition for our own but also bring comfort to our family numbers ,and with the rapid development of international trade ,more and more ideal jobs are waiting for us ,so I prefer to work at home.

Autumn really beautiful autumn girl wearing a golden dress, sitting uncle breeze of the car came to the Xia Gonggong side, it said: "Xia Gonggong you tired, Ill take your class!"

At this time, there is a row of geese in the sky is about to fly to the south of the winter! Dayan leader led his team members for a while arranged in a "person" word, while arranged in a "one" word, while lined up a "big". They fly and say, "Dear Southern friends, we come back to see you!"

In the field, the red sorghum is like a burning torch. A piece of field covered with mature rice, a tree of rice together to become a golden "ocean". The wind blowing, as if in front of rolling the golden waves.

Orchard, Apple smiled red face; Huang Chengcheng pear, like a yellow bells; ripe persimmon in the tree you squeeze me touch, scrambling to let people pick it!

Maple forest, maple leaves are more beautiful than those who dance, the wind blowing them began to dancing, jump out of the joy of autumn!

Autumn is really beautiful, I like this golden, lovely season!

I had a great Chinese New Year.On the first day of the Chinese New Year,my parents and I visited my grandparents.They own a large ranch in the countryside,surrounded by corn fields and green pastry.It’s a very beautiful ranch and the air is very clean.I helped my grandparents feed the chicken and groom the horses.I really like horses and I spent quite some time riding them along the river for several miles.I enjoyed a lot at my grandparents’home.

一条可爱的狗。它的名字是"点点" 。因为有很多黑的圆圈在它的皮肤上。"点点" 是非常友好的。许多孩子喜欢和它玩。他的喜爱食物是肉骨头。 他的喜爱玩具是玩偶。" 点点" 喜欢非常跑。它跑得非常快速并且它有一个女朋友。它的名字"娜娜" 。它的皮肤也有很多黑圈子。我非常喜欢我的宠物。这是一只好宠物!!

My pet is a lovely dog.Its name is "dian dian".because there are a lot of black circle on its skin.the "dian dian" is very friendly.Many childen like play with him.His favourite food is meat bones. His favourite toy is a doll. dian dian likes to run very much.It can run very fast and it has a girl friend.its name "na na".there are a lot of black circle on its skin,too.I like my pet very much.It is a good pet!

导语：你有偶像吗?ta给你带来了什么影响呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I was in middle school, I heard the English song Baby One More Time. Then I saw the music record, the girl was so sweet and pretty. She danced so well in the record, she was full of energy. Since then, I fell in love with Britney Spears, every girl wanted to be her. She was not only beautiful, but also could sing and dance so well. Britney Spears was my early idol, her energetic image attracted me so much. I was so crazy about her at that time. I believe that in every teenager’s dream, they will have an idol.

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当我上初中的时候，我听到了一首英文歌曲叫《宝贝再爱我一次》。然后我去看了音乐录影带，里面的女孩是那么的甜美和漂亮。在录像中，她舞跳得很好，充满了活力。打从那时候起，我就爱上了布兰妮斯皮尔斯，每一个女孩子都想要成为她。 布兰妮不仅长得好看，而且她能歌善舞。她是我早期的偶像，她充满活力的形象让我留下了很深的印象。那时候我是那么的为她痴迷。我相信在每个青少年的梦里，都会有一个偶像。

After school, I can not wait and Chen Xiaobin go to his house to see the dog, a see the dog, my heart was thinking: this little dog really cute, really want to touch it. Its body is about 20 cm long, the head and tail color is black and dark, the body is milky white. Round head, chubby body, round and big eyes sparkling, really like two glass balls. The ears of the triangle are sometimes bowed and sometimes raised.

Xiaobins mother put the index finger into his mouth, the puppy thought it had milk to drink, and relish the "milk" with relish, and in a moment it spit it out because it feels strange. It saw outsiders, like a shy little girl, at the door to play around. Aunt picked up the puppy, I could not help but touched it, feeling it like a cotton quilt as soft, but also like my home that most lovely plush dog.

It is really a loving puppy it!

关于人物描写的英语作文素材——1.描述人物心情的常用词语;2.表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语;3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语;4.介绍人物的姓名、出身...

1.描述人物心情的常用词语：

sad 难过的 happy 高兴的

excited 兴奋的 pleased 高兴的

satisfied 满意的 angry 生气的

worried 担心的 disappointed 失望的

terrified 恐惧的 friendly 友好的

anxious 焦虑的 curious 好奇的

eager 急切的

2.表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语：

like ------very much 非常喜欢------ love 喜爱

be interested in 对------感性趣 be fond of 喜欢

hate 憎恨 be tired of 对------厌倦

be crazy about 对------极度喜欢 enjoy 喜欢

lose interest in 对------失去兴趣

3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语：

good-looking 长得好看的 ugly-looking 长得难看的

funny-looking 长相滑稽的 ordinary-looking 长相一般的

white-haired 白头发的 warm-hearted 热心肠的

kind-hearted 好心的 absent-minded 心不在焉的

bad-tempered 脾气不好的 near-sighted 近视眼的

far-sighted 远视眼的 tall 个高的

short 个矮的 pretty 漂亮的

naughty 淘气的 lovely 可爱的

easy-going 温和宽容的 smart 精明的

wise 明智的 bright 聪明的

diligent 勤奋的 lazy 懒惰的

clever 聪明的 healthy 健康的

humorous 幽默的 funny 滑稽的

silent 沉默的 attractive 有吸引力的

talkative 多话的

杏眼：almond-shaped 小而亮的眼睛：beadlike 美丽的: beautiful 大的: big/large 明亮的: bright 眼珠突出的: bulging 离的很近的: close-set 深陷的: deep-socketed/deep-sunken 水灵灵的: dewy 梦幻般的: dreamy 呆滞的: glazed 柔和的: gentle 呆板的: fishlike 凹陷的: hollow/sunken 远视的: longsighted/farsighted 近视的：myopic/shortsighted 眼梢上斜的: oblique 老花眼的: presbyopic 圆的: round 性感的: sexy 锐利的: sharp 斜的: slanting 细长的: slitty 小的: small/tiny 斜视眼的: squint 明亮的: starry 水汪汪的: watery 分的很开的: wide-spaced 肿胀的：swollen

4.介绍人物的姓名、出身

She was born in Beijing on Oct. 12, 1986.

She was a great woman with the name ---.

Born of a poor clerk’s family, she had little schooling.

春姑娘穿着翠绿色的衣裳悄悄的来到了。她给柳树穿上了新衣裳;小草也悄悄的伸出土地，冒出头来;大地也随着自然变化而变绿了。

Spring girl, dressed in green clothes, quietly came. She wore new clothes for the willow; the grass crept out of the ground, and her head rose; the earth changed green as the natural changes.

当我走进花园里，花园里的景色一下把我吸引住了。花园里的花有牡丹、百合等各种漂亮美丽的花。这些鲜艳的花朵也把一个个漂亮的蝴蝶姐姐引来了。蝴蝶在花丛中飞来飞去，为大自然增添了与多生机。

When I walked into the garden, I was fascinated by the scenery in the garden. The flowers in the garden are full of beautiful flowers, such as peonies and lilies. These bright flowers also attracted a beautiful butterfly sister. Butterflies fly in the flowers, adding more and more vitality to the nature.

当我走进田野，农民伯伯正忙得耕地哩。瞧，那地里的小麦，被风阿姨吹得四处摇荡。从远处看，油菜花就像一片金色的世界，金灿灿的。

As I walked into the fields, the farmers uncle was busy with arable land. Look, that in wheat, the wind was blowing about swaying aunt. From afar, rape flowers like a golden world, golden.

当我走进校园里，校园里的树木都发芽了，草滩里长满了嫩绿的小草和鲜艳的小花，引来了许多小蜜蜂。春风好像搅醒了小鸟，鸟儿们都在春风中自由自在地飞翔。

When I walked into the campus, the campus of the trees sprouted, marsh is overgrown with green grass and colorful flowers, attracted a lot of bees. The spring breeze seemed to stir up the birds, and the birds were flying freely in the spring breeze.

俗话说的好，一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨，说明一年中春天是非常美好的。

As the saying goes, "a years plan lies in the spring," a day in the morning, indicating that the year is very beautiful spring.

春，你使花园更加美丽;你使学校更加有了读书的气氛。

Spring, you make the garden more beautiful; you make the school more reading.

春天，我爱你。

I love you in the spring.

[描写春天的英语作文及翻译

我是家里的宝贝，爸爸妈妈都十分爱我。妈妈悉心的照顾，使我健康快乐地成长。妈妈说，自从生了我，生活就变得忙忙碌碌的，把所有的心血都注入到我身上。

自从我记事起，还坐在学步车上的时候，妈妈就整天为家务活忙来忙去。我依稀记得，小时候喜欢坐在学步车上满屋子跑，妈妈到厨房做饭，我就会在厨房门口看着妈妈；妈妈在阳台晾衣服，我就会到妈妈跟前，全神贯注的看着妈妈劳累的背影，在背影中，小小的我感受到了妈妈无微不至的爱。

我慢慢长大了，到了上学的年纪。妈妈担心我上学路上不会照顾自己，着凉了，或是饿了，就趁着下课时间给我送衣服，妈妈帮我穿上外套，用温暖的手抚摸着我的脸，说：“天气转冷了，不要着凉了。”妈妈便转身走了。看着妈妈在大风中，头发被吹得凌乱的背影，再看看身上的外套，我感受到了妈妈温暖的爱。妈妈的背影，让我想到，无论我在哪里，家里总有一个人在等我，给我一个温暖的家。

妈妈是那么地爱我，我也想说：“妈妈，我爱你！”

我们在语文作文中的描写人物特征时，相对于在英语作文中要得心应手得多了。以下是小编给大家带来描述人物的英语作文范文，以供参阅。

A man of small stature, he was only five feet, six inches at the most, and he was somewhat overweight even in his prime. His Italian heritage was evidenced by his dark hair, olive complexion, and strong nose. A neatly trimmed moustache adorned his upper lip. In young years, a cigar frequently protruded from under the dark moustache. Clear blue eyes contrasted nicely with his olive tone.

There was a kindnein those eyes, and they always showed his every emotion.

Making him so easy to read.An easygoing manner acted like a magnet for him, attracting the love and respect of everyone he cameJn contact with, During World War II, his compassionate nature was utilized as a nurse in the Navy and in the Marines. Scars on his back were proof of his heroism. He never really spoke much about the war, but he only would tell his favorite story of how he delivered a baby in all that turmoil He married during his stint in the service, and soon a son and a daughter would also share his love. Both of them having dark hair, olive skin, and blue eyes. everyone said how they were "the spitting image" of him, Oh, how he beamed at that statement. He worked very hard at being a good husband and father. Years passed, and he became a grandfather who was affectionately called "papa." His grandchildren adored him and were his constant companions.

Going to McDonalds became a weekly outing for them. Bout, alas, the heart that had always given too much Jove grew weaker and weaker. After two heart attacks and a triple by-pass, his loving heart stopped, and he breathed forth his soul into the arms of God. At his funeral mass, the priest spoke of how his succewas not stored in banks but in that hearts of those who loved him. From this perspective, he was a most-successfu man and truly died a millionaire. This profile of Bob La Coy is very accurate. I know because he was my Joying father.

My name is liu * *, for the sake of the name, I used to call themselves the Internet the queen of the "star". Do not think I am too mad, because the stars themselves both ordinary and flash, so I like them. One of the numerous stars, of course, also want to be. If one day, you met online a girl named "star dance", it must be me - 11 years old, monkey, virgo to choose a suitable text book

Of course, I have like stars very ordinary appearance: small eyes - but very bright. Neither tall nor short nose; Not big not too small mouth. Fair skin, a long or a short horsetail plait, stuck high in my brain, flash flash, very naughty to choose a suitable text book, but I have my hair cut short now, mother to)

My hobby is widespread, such as: music, microcomputer, aoshu, choose a suitable text book of English ha ha, there is a you sure cant think of! To tell you the truth, that is, space exploration, such as: Stonehenge, crop circles, alien to choose a suitable text book in a word, I like all of the unknown things. I like music, especially since 6 years old I began to play the piano, less than nine years old, I was out of the piano level 6. Whenever I bounce

Mendelssohns "boat song of Venice, I as if place oneself in a ripple on the boat on the water, the surrounding silence, moonlight, like mercury, scattered on the surface of the flash, good beautiful, choose a suitable text book

I also love the guitar, just learned two lessons, I began to play the chords. Now I have learned many years ago, "walk" "red river valley" "childhood", etc.

A lot of beautiful sounds of music to choose a suitable text book

You have to ask why I love this music, in fact, I dont know. But, when I am in the rhythm of the music, I felt a great deal of enjoyment.

I also like the Olympic math, because it can develop my intelligence, makes me on the head turn, turn. Difficult as past castle, although it is difficult to overcome, but as long as I use your head, you can feel the joy of success. Of course, there must be less than America and China, my shortcomings is very sloppy, every day to find things at home, watch on today, tomorrow to find, everything all over the place. Alas! The family and I cant, dont look at me in the life is very careless, but I dont careless, to solve the problem. I can check each question carefully. , however, and the occasional careless like that I do, because not serious topic, papers clearly demand reduction ratio, I have made for ratio! Worse, dizzy, abbreviation! Just because of this, the teacher gave me a buckle 4 points. After this lesson several times, I must be in the future to correct this bad habit, sloppy bull is not blown oh! Believe me!

Paint bottom like me? In the future there will be three years of time to test and verify. I really really want to do the north star - the brightest the star sky, of course, this need me to pay a huge effort.

The above is my personal introduction, hope in the next three years, the teacher and the students get along well, and the teacher the students were rushed through the difficulties!

[大学新生入学英语自我介绍

Today, my mother took me to a friend to see him keep a puppy. Its a small face on a long pair of slippery black eyes, wearing a black and bright black "sweater", the body is only a small rabbit-like size, jumping, very cute!

After dinner, I am happy to play with the puppy. We have to play awkward, it suddenly after the legs stumbled up, scared me a big jump. Thought: "Even I will not stand upright, it is easy to upside down, really not simple!" Just when I was surprised, just listen to "brush" to it a bit of joy. "Wow thiophene it will be inverted pee, or the first time I see it!" I exclaimed! Suddenly feel the body is not right, touched his pants, how is the wet? It is the urine it is scattered in my pants On the. I can be angry, and shouted: "This time you see you small, do not understand the matter on the spare you, if the next time, do not blame me regardless of polite!" I saw the dog put his legs, Gone, really arrogant!

For a while to go, I really could not bear it!

When we are in our classroom after 8：30 in the morning，we should not keep the lights on to avoid wasting electricity since there is enough light in the classroom.And if it is cloudy and rainy and lights are on，we should turn off the lights after school.Another thing we can do is to protect the forest which is reducing.We should use both sides of paper and we should not use paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of trees.

All these are the things we can do every day to make our environment better. As long as we insist on doing so，our environment will become better and better.

I have a few small goldfish, they are lively and lovely, I like them very much. Small goldfish small and exquisite, there is a pair of grapes like big eyes, maple-shaped tail, the back of the fin fins to it that gold body fitted with a beautiful big fan.

Little goldfish eat very special. Once, I put a few fish food thrown into the water, a few fish met, quickly swim up to compete for fish food. I thought they would swallow up immediately, but their actions surprised me: grab the food of the fish first in the food in his mouth, and then spit out the food, and then swim up to catch it with the mouth, and finally The food completely swallowed it in the stomach. Where is the food, it is clear in the game it!

Little goldfish sleep more interesting! One night on the night I secretly got out of bed, by the outside of the faint light to see the small goldfish, found that small goldfish motionless, eyes also greatly open. I thought: they will not die! So knocked on the fish tank, a few small goldfish but quickly wandered. I suddenly realized, remembered the previous mother told me: "fish is no eyelids."

One morning, when I had breakfast, I went to see them. There are many small goldfish feces floating in the fish tank, the water has been turbid, and that they change the water. I carefully put the fish tank to the pool side, want to catch the fish ready to clean the basin. I was about to reach into the fish tank, my mother immediately stopped me: "Go and wash your hands, your hands have the taste of hand cream, will kill the fish!" I quickly wash your hands, and then stroked the sleeves, Began to catch fish. Hey! Fish really flexible, while fled to the east, while the channeling west, but how can not escape my palm. I was proud of it, "rip" it slipped away, I spent a lot of effort, and finally all the fish into the basin of water. And then the fish tank in the dirty water drained, and rinse, and finally the pot of fish and water poured into the fish tank.

Small goldfish really interesting! I think, as long as careful observation, after their own will find the little goldfish more special.

Where possible, reduce the use of "which," "who" "that" "whom" "whether... or not" etc.

少用关系代词

学会运用关系代词是你学习英文过程中的一个重要的阶段。学会少用它们则表明你取得了更大的进步。在校对你的作品时，仔细检查一下所有的which’s, who’s that’s和whom’s是否必要。删除不必要的关系代词会使你的文章更精彩。

Example:

Unnecessary: It is a truth that is universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

(用两个 that’s，读起来很别扭)

Better: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

-- Jane Austin

注：被动语态修饰的名词通常不须用关系代词。

Unnecessary: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, which was built with American assistance.

Improved: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, built with American assistance.

Unnecessary: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation which was undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Improved: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Unnecessary: Justice theories have a long tradition, which goes back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.

Improved: Justice theories have a long tradition, going back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.

Unnecessary: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million that she made by tap dancing which made her famous in the movies.

Improved: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million she made tap dancing her way to fame in the movies.

Unnecessary: We told them they were the victims who deserved sympathy the most.

Improved: We told them they were the victims, most deserving of sympathy.

Unnecessary: Only a person who is oblivious* to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.

Better: Only a person oblivious to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.

Unnecessary: Not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea, whether it contains caffeine or not.

Better: With or without caffeine, not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea.

Unnecessary: Usually the Washington family married people who were socially better off than themselves, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.

Better: Usually the Washingtons married their social betters, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.

Unnecessary: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach the person to whom the letter is addressed.

Better: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach its intended receiver.

侃侃而谈kǎnkǎnértán

【解释】：侃侃：理直气壮，从容不迫。理直气壮、从容不迫地说话。

【出自】：《论语·乡党》：“朝，与下大夫言，侃侃如也。”

【示例】：却从来不曾见过象这位蛮子般的那末～，旁若无人的气概。◎郑振铎《桂公塘·三》

振振有辞zhènzhènyǒucí

【解释】：振振：理直气壮的样子。形容自以为理由充分，说个没完。

【出自】：清·梁启超《关税权问题》：“今者外人之以排外相诬者，既振振有词，其乌可更为无谋之举，以授之口实也。”

【示例】：小顺儿的妈的北平话，遇到理直气壮～的时候，是词汇丰富，而语调清脆，象清夜的小梆子似的。◎老舍《四世同堂》八

炯炯有神jiǒngjiǒngyǒushén

【解释】：炯炯：明亮的样子。形容人的眼睛发亮，很有精神。

【出自】：明·李开先《闲居集·九·泾野吕亚卿传》：“先生头颅圆阔，体貌丰隆，海口童颜，轮耳方面，两目炯炯有神，须虽整秀，异不多耳。”

【示例】：～的眼光，足够表现出他是一个有志的少年。◎郑振铎《黄公俊之最后》

威风凛凛wēifēnglǐnlǐn

【解释】：威风：威严的气概；凛凛：严肃，可敬畏的样子。形容声势或气派使人敬畏。

【出自】：明·罗贯中《三国演义》第七回：“看那少年，生得身长八尺，浓眉大眼，阔面重颐，威风凛凛。”

Hi, My name is Jay, Im from the beautiful ancient city of Kaifeng. As you  can see, I am a very casual girl, and a lot of people here, like 18-year-old, I  love a lot, I love guitar, love to sing love dancing, very fond of English, I am  very love to watch "Prison Break", like the actor micheal clever wit.

I like making friends, and hope you will be able to and I have become good  friends, I think I will, and you get along with.

Miss Hou is my university English teacher. Her English name is Jenny. She looks so weak that a strong wind may blow her away. She is not too tall, about 150cm. She is experiened of English teaching. She teaches me for three years.In the other word, she is the only English teacher during my high school study. She is special. She will show an English song to us before her class. A few days later, she will ask us to follow the singing on the tape. I can still remember some songs she taught us. It is strang that she looks so weak, but no one in my class will against her word. I think maybe is because her own personality.Everyone respects her. She is serious in work, so that our whole class’s English is good. Happily, she is our friend after class. She always palys badminton  with us. She is also ready to help us if we have any difficultiy. In my mind, a good teacher is more than a million books. And she will be my mentor forever. Jenny, my teacher, I love you.

这个周六，我和爷爷上街买东西，街上的人熙熙攘攘，真是巨多！

手舞足蹈的我指着那个卖甜点的小铺说：“哇！人好多呀！快看爷爷，那里有个卖甜点的！”

我和爷爷穿过熙熙攘攘的人群小学生作文 网 ，来到卖甜点的小铺，那个卖东西的人摆着手，一会走到右边跟小朋友们聊聊天，给他们一点甜点吃；一会又到左边，跟那些年轻人介绍他们产品的好。嘴里还一直嘟囔着：“走过路过不要错过！“

左顾右盼的他终于看到了站在他的摊前的我和爷爷，对我们说：“嘿！想买什么？告诉你们，我们的产品都是上等的！看看这个，很甜的。如果不想吃太甜的，也可以试一试这个蝴蝶酥，香又脆，要不要尝尝呀？”说着把蝴蝶酥拿了起来。

“爷爷，我们还是到别处看看吧！不是要给爸爸妈妈买礼物吗，我们还是买一些他们需要的吧！”我对爷爷说。

爷爷说：“好吧，就按你说的做。”

我们觉得那个买甜点的人肯定很沮丧，不过不要管他了！继续往前走吧！

我们来到了一个卖帽子的地方，我想给妈妈买一顶帽子，于是就到摊前看了一下，我看到了一个紫色的带有花边的帽子，很漂亮！我就对爷爷说：“爷爷，我们买一顶帽子送给妈妈吧！”

“可以呀！”爷爷脸上露出了笑容。

我们交了钱，拿到了帽子，我非常开心，心想：妈妈肯定会喜欢的！

然后，我们又走到了一个卖洗漱用品的地方，给爸爸买了一支牙膏。回家后，爸爸妈妈开心的合不拢嘴！

下一次，我还要给爸爸妈妈买东西，好好孝顺他们。