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782024年高考英语书面表达突破技巧
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+ 加入清单书面表达一直在历年高考中占有很重要的地位,而且相对于其他题型,书面表达最容易在短期内有所突破。下面小编为大家整理了英语作文的突破技巧,欢迎大家阅读。
书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级),内容第二位(要点齐全),结构第三位(文章分段)的原则,也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言,换句话说是亮点,根据语言使用情况,亮点的多少而定出档次,所以同学们在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。
亮点一共有四种:
一、高级词汇和语法;
二、修辞手法;
三、有效的连词;
四、名人名言或谚语。
首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法,以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。
肯定不如否定好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点,在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞,而且对于考生来说,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day,就不如变成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,就变成了亮点句,起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响,写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude
towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。
陈述不如倒装妙
在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式,足以应对书面表达,如何应用倒装,有很多方法和技巧。
否定词开头
如果写出的句子中有否定词, 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装,用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词,如not, seldom, hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。
地点状语开头
在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子,一个建筑位于什么位置,或什么地方有什么东西,都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中,图书馆位于学校的中央,Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头:In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子,想表达河岸上有很多花:On the bank stand some flowers. 天空中繁星点点:In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。
这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构,第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾,后面还可以继续加从句,使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies our library,which is between the garden and the teaching building.
Only+介词短语
例如在2007年全国卷中,让外教帮你找个笔友,有一句可以表达成只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语,这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.
形容词+as+主语+be动词
例如Young as I am, I can manage it; Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中:Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the
car’s number. 还有其他的倒装结构,很高兴收到的你的来信:So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。
主动不如被动巧
在近些年的阅卷中,发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态,也许是受中文思维的影响,几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中,被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言,而汉语是主观的语言,具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态,汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头,强调一件事发生在什么人身上,而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯,如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态,就会呈现句型的变化,使整个文章句型丰富。
例如在2006年的高考中,很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时,都是用:We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成:At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days,分数会更高。
分词结构不能少
在前文提到,在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中,阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构,其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构,时间状语从句,原因状语,条件状语等。例如条件状语从句:If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀,如果你的作文中有状语从句,马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。
口诀:一去,二看,三改。一去:去连词;二看:看主语;三改:改分词。
If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改,第一步,去掉连词if;第二步,看前后两句话的主语,前后主语不一致,所以要改成独立主格;第三步,改分词,is 变成分词是being,所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。
如果前后两句话主语一致,就变成分词结构,例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于,因为,如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。
以上技巧有语文迷小编整理,看过后你真的学到了吗?
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篇1:考研英语作文常见的四个写作格式错误
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+ 加入清单【摘要】考研英语作文的评分,首先关注的就是单词、句子、格式的正确性。因此,在作文的复习中,不能只关注高端句型,正确的格式也是不容忽视的。
写作格式错误主要包括题目的写法、文章的格式、大小写以及标点符号等四个方面。
题目的写法
题目是首先映入读者眼帘的,所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离,即比正文行距稍宽一些。
其次,要注意题目的大小写,实词的首字母一定要大写。其它虚词如冠词、连词(但如连词的字母多于5个时则大写)和介词首字母不需要大写。比如:
跳动的心(例子)
误:Attitudes Toward Money
正:Attitudes toward Money
文章的格式
1、四边留空:卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。这样的文章才能整齐、美观,给人以清晰、明快的感觉。
2、空格:文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格(一般缩进4-6个字节)。
大小写方面的错误
在考研文章的评改过程中,有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷,这是考生的一个弱点。一般来说,大写规则有以下几条:
1、大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母
如:He said,He is going to Shanghai next week.
2、大写专有名词,或用作专有名词的部分普通名词,通常是缩略形式
如:DrG .G . East
3、大写缩写字母
如:MPA ,MBA ,BBC
4、文章标题要大写
5、头衔在专有名词前要大写,在专有名词后就小写
例如:Captain SmithSmith, the captain;Uncle GeorgeGeorge ,my uncle
标点符号
考生在写文章时,一定要注意正确使用标点符号,切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法,尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。
三段式作文注意事项
1、作文卷面要保持整洁,不要连笔,不要涂改,这是获取印象分的重点。很多考生由于在考场过于紧张导致作文的单词老是写错,这是致命伤啊,会直接让你越写越没感觉就越没信心了,所以平常要加强练笔!
2、全文的第一句和各段的第一句必须是文章的中心句,最好能用复杂句表达。这是因为阅卷老师一般没有那么多的时间去看作文,所以只能大概浏览下各段的首句,这是获得高分的关键。
3、全文结构布局:全文分为三段,第一段3句,第二段5句,第三段4句,可根据具体情况调整。段落中,第一句是topic ,第二三句是detail ,第三句是conclusion 。
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篇2:以我的习惯为话题的英语范文
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+ 加入清单我的生活习惯My Living Habit
Everyone has their own habit. I have some living habits. I will take off my shoes and put on the slippers when I arrive home. And I get used to drink some soup before having dinner. What’s more, I have to keep my room light on until I fall asleep. If I am forced to change anything about this, I will be very uncomfortable. For example, if I don’t wear slipper at home, I will be very uncomfortable. If I can’t drink soup before dinner, I can’t eat anything. And I can’t fall asleep if the light is off. This is my living habit. Maybe I will change it one day, but now I can’t receive any change about them.
篇3:小学五年级英语作文我的饮食习惯
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+ 加入清单Hello. Im Timmy. I like to eat eggs ang milk for breakfast. I often eat my breakfast at home. It starts the day .
I often have lunch at school. For lunch, I often eat rice and meat. It can give me energy.
For supper. I often have vegetables and apples. They are good for health.I after supper within grandparents at home.
你好。我是蒂米。我早餐喜欢吃鸡蛋和牛奶。我经常在家吃早饭。开始这一天。
我经常在学校吃午餐。吃午饭,我通常吃米饭和肉。它能给我能量。我的饮食习惯
吃晚饭。我经常有蔬菜和苹果。它们对健康有益。我在爷爷奶奶家里吃晚饭。
篇4:常见修辞手法的表达作用
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+ 加入清单修辞手法,就是通过修饰、调整语句,运用特定的表达形式以提高语言表达作用的方式或方法。以下是小编给大家整理的常见的几种修辞手法的表达作用的内容,欢迎大家阅读。
常见的几种修辞手法的表达作用:
(1)比喻:形象生动、简洁凝练地描写事物、讲解道理,增强语言的生动性、形象性、化抽象为具体,使人易于理解。
(2)拟人:赋予事物以人的性格、思想、感情和动作,使物人格化,使之更形象,从而达到形象生动的效果。
(3)夸张:突出特征,揭示本质,给读者以鲜明而强烈的印象。
(4)排比:条理清晰,节奏鲜明,增强语势,长于抒情,使语言更有表现力,更有气魄。
(5)对偶:使句式整齐,结构一致,形式优美,音韵和谐,互相映衬,互为补充。
(6)反复:强调某种意思,更能突出文章主题,观点鲜明。抒情强烈,富有感染力。
(7)设问:自问自答,引人注意,启发思考。
(8)反问:态度鲜明,加强语气,强烈抒情。
(9)引用:使内容更真实、准确、深刻、精密。
(10)反语:增加讽刺意味,使表达更深刻,更有力度。
(11)对比:形成强烈反差,加强读者的印象,突出文章的中心。
篇5:英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear Ms. Reinhart,
I am terribly sorry that I failed to arrive at BLCU last Friday. I hope
that this did not mess you up completely, although I know that you had already
made some special arrangements for my visit with you parents and friends. I am
very sorry about all that. I am sure you will be sympathetic, however, when I
tell you that my father is dangerously ill in hospital, and that I found it
impossible to leave for the visit when he is in this state.
My father was working very hard on his project on protecting the
environment. I know the project has come to a very important stage. He and his
assistants did not take regular rest for three weeks. Last night, my father had
a heart attack and was soon sent to the hospital. The doctor said my father was
in a very serious situation, and, he might need an operation.
24 hours have passed. Nothing has changed. I have to stay at the hospital.
I will let you know if there is any good news.
I am sorry again and look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Tom Williams
篇6:“年”的英语表达作文素材
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1. all year round 一年到头、终年
例句: We’ve made certain arrangements so that there can be flowers of different colors all year round.
我们已做了精心的安排,以使一年四季都有不同颜色的花朵开放。
2. the seven year itch 七年之痒
例句:Is there so-called the seven year itch between two friends?
朋友之间有没有所谓的“七年之痒”呢?
3. put years on 使某人觉得(显得)老些
例句:Being tired and unhappy put years on him.
由于劳累和心情不好,他苍老了很多。
4. be light years away from something 遥不可及,或指两个事物截然不同、差别很大
例句:Righteous punishment is a thousand light years away from revenge.
公正的惩罚跟报复可差得十万八千里。
5. getting on in years 上了年纪
例句:He is a person who is getting on in years.
他是个上了年岁的人。
6. ring in the new year 新年前夕喜迎新年
例句:We ring in the New Year with the church bells.
随着教堂的钟声,我们迎来了新年。
篇7:英语作文中常见的典型语法错误分析
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+ 加入清单语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程当中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程当中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。
1。句子成分残缺不全
we always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)
we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
we should read books may be useful to us。 (误)
we should read books which may be useful to us。 (正)
2。句子成分多余
this test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you。 (误)
one test ends, but another is waiting for you。 (正)
the driver of the red car was died on the spot。 (误)
the driver of the red car died on the spot。 (正)
3。主谓不一致
someone/somebody think that reading should be selective。 (误)
some think that reading should be selective。 (正)
my sister go to the cinema at least once a week。 (误)
my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week。 (正)
4。动词时态、语态的误用
i was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street。 (误)
i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street。 (正)
we have little time to read some books which we interest。 (误)
we have little time to read some books in which we are interested。 (正)
i am a student who has studying in the college for two years。 (误)
i have been studying in the college for two years(正)
5。词类混淆
it is my point that reading must be selectively。 (误)
in my opinion, reading must be selective。 (正)
honest is so important for everyperson。 (误)
honesty is so important for everyone。 (正)
the old man was hit by a car when he across the street。 (误)
the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street。 (正)
篇8:如何改掉坏习惯英语作文
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+ 加入清单1.陋习应该克服;
2.克服陋习的方法。
[写作导航]坏习惯不知不觉就会养成,一旦意识到了,就应克服,但这并不像想象中那样容易;要想克服,首先要意识到它的危害,例如吸烟可致癌、引起心脏病,还浪费钱财;其次,坚定的决心至关重要,许多戒烟者始终戒不掉就是不坚定所致;最后结尾,指出虽然改掉坏习惯不那么简单,但许多人已为我们树立了榜样,号召大家学习他们,改掉坏习惯。
[范文]
Bad habits start growing on almost every one of us without being noticed. Once we realize the bad habits or once they are pointed out to us, it is a wise decision that we get rid of them immediately. But to get rid of a bad habit is not as easy a thing as we sometimes think. Here is how:
To get rid of a bad habit,it is important that we first get to know how harmful the habit really is. Take the habit of smoking as an example. Obviously, smoking is harmful to one's health. It can result in lung cancer and heart attack. Besides, smoking is awasteof money. A heavy smoker spends almost as much money a day as he pays for his own meals. So if he can realize the danger and waste, it is likely that he may stop smoking at once.
To get rid of a bad habit, it is essential that we also have a strong will. Let's again take the habit of smoking for example. Many smokers pick up the habit again soon after they give it up.A lot of them cannot tell how many times they have attempted to give up smoking and how many times they have failed to do so. Therefore, it is impossible to get rid of any bad habit if we change our minds constantly.
Although it is not so easy to get rid of a bad habit, many people have succeeded in doing so, setting us good models. We should learn from these models and go out of our way to do away with our bad habits, whatever it takes.
[如何改掉坏习惯英语作文
篇9:如何用英语表达天气
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+ 加入清单导语:我们写作文的时候也会对天气进行描写,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
1. The warm sunny weather always give me a sense of well-being.
温暖阳光的天气一直都给我幸福安宁的感觉。
2. We didnt have the picnic because the weather was unsettled.
我们没有出去野餐,因为天气变幻莫测。
3. The spell of rainy weather has broken.
持续的雨天突然放晴了。
4. The weather was lazy.
这天气使人无精打采。
5. Severe weather immobilized the rescue team.
恶劣的天气给救援队的工作增加了难度。
6. As often as not the buses are late on foggy day.
每逢多雾天气,公车往往误点。
7. We had glorious weather for our cruise, sunshine all day and every day.
我们这次巡航天气实在太好了,一连几天阳光普照。
8. The cold weather froze the lake .
寒冷的天气使湖水结冰了。
9. The air was frosty.
空气凛冽。
10. You need cool, moist weather for these plants to germinate.
这些植物在清凉潮湿的天气中才能发芽。
11. Rainy weather always depresses me.
雨天总会使我心情抑郁。
12. The wet weather extended into September.
潮湿阴雨的天气一直延续到了九月份
篇10:我的习惯英语作文带翻译
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+ 加入清单Everyone has their own habit. I have some living habits. I will take off my shoes and put on the slippers when I arrive home. And I get used to drink some soup before having dinner. What’s more, I have to keep my room light on until I fall asleep. If I am forced to change anything about this, I will be very uncomfortable. For example, if I don’t wear slipper at home, I will be very uncomfortable. If I can’t drink soup before dinner, I can’t eat anything. And I can’t fall asleep if the light is off. This is my living habit. Maybe I will change it one day, but now I can’t receive any change about them.
每个人都有自己的习惯。我有一些生活习惯。到家后我要换拖鞋。我习惯在吃饭之前喝点汤。还有就是睡着前我都要开着房间灯。如果我被强迫改变,我会很不舒服。例如,如果我在家不换拖鞋,我会很不舒服。如果我不在饭前喝点汤,我会吃不下任何东西。如果熄了灯我会睡不着。这就是我的生活习惯。也许有一天我会改变,但现在的我是无法接受。
篇11:英语作文最为常见的习惯表达
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+ 加入清单使大家能在短期内提升分数,建议大家着重复习写作这个模块,而写作要想取得理想成绩,则需要地道的语言表达,因此,新东方在线英语六级频道特别为大家精选整理作文中最为常见的习惯表达,望助大家一臂之力。
一、指出现象或争议话题
Ever since…, there have been ongoing disputes over…
自从……起,就有对于……的持续争论。
With the increasing concerns about…, people are calling for…
随着对……的日益关注,人们呼吁……
… draws the public’s attention once again to…, a repeatedly discussed yet constantly unsolved social issue.
……再一次吸引公众的注意力至……,这是一个经常讨论但一直未得到解决的社会问题。
二、引出各方观点
There exists a philosophy that…
有一种观点认为……
While many advocate…, I believe it’s a better idea to…
尽管很多人支持……,我认为……更好。
Quite many are disgusted by this kind of…, because it goes against the traditional Chinese virtue of…
很多人都反感……,因为它有悖于中国的传统美德。
三、表示赞同
It is apparent that it is a more sensible choice to…
很明显,……是更为明智的选择。
…should be encouraged, because it is a rewarding journey, promised with
…应鼓励……,因为它所带来的回报奇迹丰厚,并且允许……
It is fair to say that … is a plausible and advisable option for…
客观来讲,……对于……是合理且明智的选择。
四、提出建议
In my opinion, there are three aspects to be improved so that…
我认为,要改进的方面有三点,以便……
It would be better if…
如果……会更好。
五、引用名人名言
As … rightly/ aptly put it, “…”
正如……恰如其分地提出……
As is maintained by …,“…”
正如……提出,……
… is the golden rule to stick.
……是一条金科玉律。
六、举例说明
A case in point is…
一个恰当的例子是……
The recent incident happened in … proves …
最近发生在……身上的一件事情证明了……
A simple example can be drawn from…
一个简单的例子就是……
According to figures/statistics /the findings/data released by an institute, …
根据某机构发布的数据/研究结果,……
七、阐述原因
The epidemic of … is brought / caused both by … and by…
……的出现是由于……和……造成的。
One of the chief causes of… is the fact that …
……的主要原因之一是……
The upsurge of … is resulted from two-fold factors ——…
……的出现源于双重因素——……
八、做出总结
In conclusion, it takes the endeavor of both … and … to …
总之,……需要……与……的努力。
It is hence not difficult to see that …/It therefore can be said that …
因此,不难看出……/ 因此,可以说……
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that …
从以上讨论内容可归纳,……
九、发出号召或警示
The situation, if unchecked, will lead to …
如果不加以制止,情况将走向……
If not dealt with properly, …
如果处理不当,……
What may be a point of concern is …
可能需要关注的是……
十、表示过渡(承上启下,使新观点不至于显得突兀、武断)
There are no less than three advantages in… as rendered below.
在……方面,至少有三项优点如下显示。
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of…is that…
我支持这种观点的另一个原因是……
What’s more, 而且
Last but not least, …
最后但同样重要的是……
篇12:英语书信常见写作模板
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+ 加入清单1、开头部分
How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
2、结尾部分
With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
篇13:英语作文中常见的典型语法错误
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+ 加入清单语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。
篇14:关于生活习惯英语作文
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+ 加入清单Bill is my good friend. He has a healthy lifestyle. He always drinks a glass of milk and eats an egg for breakfast. He has rice and different kinds of vegetables for lunch. For dinner, he usually eats some fish and vegetables. He never eats junk food.
Bill exercises every day. And he goes to bed early and gets up early, too. He sleeps nine hours every night.
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篇15:以我的习惯为话题的英语范文
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+ 加入清单我的习惯(My Habbits)
I have some habbits, some are good, but some are bad.
I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put todays work till tomorrow. They are all my good habbits. They help me a lot in my daily life.
However, I also have some bad habbits. For example, sometimes I do my homework slowly, and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a reat. They are all harmful to my health.
From now on Ill try to keep my good habbits, and give up the bad ones. Then Ill live better.
篇16:中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析
全文共 1998 字
+ 加入清单俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功,必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动,偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher.
正 my father and my mother are both teachers.
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:im tired.
误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.
误 the apples cheap. ill take some.
正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.
正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊,所以出现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致,包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.
例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
(人一旦有了知识,他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要。例:
误 when i get to the station the train leave.
正 when i got to the station the train had left.
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累,所以考生应该从平时练习出发,每天坚持写英语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养。
[中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析
篇17:英语书信的常见写作模板
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+ 加入清单开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
篇18:英语作文:克服坏习惯
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+ 加入清单Bad habits start growing on almost every one of us without being noticed. Once we realize the bad habits or once they are pointed out to us, it is a wise decision that we get rid of them immediately. But to get rid of a bad habit is not as easy a thing as we sometimes think. Here is how:
To get rid of a bad habit, it is important that we first get to know how harmful the habit really is. Take the habit of smoking as an example. Obviously, smoking is harmful to one‘s health. It can result in lung cancer and heart attack. Besides, smoking is awasteof money. A heavy smoker spends almost as much money a day as he pays for his own meals. So if he can realize the danger and waste, it is likely that he may stop smoking at once.
To get rid of a bad habit, it is essential that we also have a strong will. Let‘s again take the habit of smoking for example. Many smokers pick up the habit again soon after they give it up. A lot of them cannot tell how many times they have attempted to give up smoking and how many times they have failed to do so. Therefore, it is impossible to get rid of any bad habit if we change our minds constantly.
Although it is not so easy to get rid of a bad habit, many people have succeeded in doing so, setting us good models. We should learn from these models and go out of our way to do away with our bad habits, whatever it takes.
篇19:关于习惯的英语谚语
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+ 加入清单谚语是广泛流传于民间的言简意赅的短语,多数反映了劳动人民的生活实践经验,而且一般都是经过口头传下来的。接下来是小编为你带来的关于习惯的英语谚语。
Custom is a second nature.
习惯是第二天性。
Habit is second nature.
习惯成自然。
A bad custom is like a good cake, better broken than kept.
坏习惯像鲜馅饼,分食要比保存好。
Custom makes all things easy.
若照习惯办,万事皆不难。
Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。
Dont leave todays work for tomorrow.
当日事,当日毕。