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78英语作文常见错误分析
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+ 加入清单文章摘要:他的儿子也有点奇怪:小树长高了,可是自己长得却不如小树长得高了,这是为什么呢;有红,白,绿,紫,五光十色。中考英语作文十大常见错误分析还有那爬动的八只脚和那来回摇晃的大钳子。在这场战争中,许多医务人员都不幸被感染了,叶欣、邓练贤等医务人员更是为此而付出了生命,在这场战争中体现了作为一个医务人员应有的救死扶伤的精神;
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”,偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题:
误Myfatherandmymotherisallteacher.
正Myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers.
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:I‘mtired.
误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.
正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.
误Theapplescheap.I’lltakesome.
正Theapplesarecheap.I‘lltakesome.
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。
误Becauseheavyrainwecan’tholdthesportsmeeting.
正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan‘tholdthesportsmeeting.
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篇1:高中英语作文中常见的100个错误
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+ 加入清单写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查,是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天,我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳,并举以实例,大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。
一.名词
写作中,学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。
1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.
句中的a要去掉,因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的,表示数量时在要其前加apieceof,类似的词有:news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。
2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.
可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里,或前面加冠词,或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.
3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.
一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s,如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词,改为abookshop.
4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.
一些集合名词如看成一个整体,则用单数的谓语动词,如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为,则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为,应把is改为are。类似的词有:team,class,audience等。
5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.
中学阶段,以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es,它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。
6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.(这和他们的信仰没关系。)
以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves,如knife—knives,
thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.
二.冠词
7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.
用a还是an,取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音,如为元音用an,为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的,我们说aEuropeancountry.
8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.
plane为可数名词单数,不能单独放在句中,应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数,而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a,变为Aplane。
9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.
把a改为the,因为乐器前用定冠词。
10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.
在in后加the,因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数,如在八十年代inthe80s。
11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.
去掉the,因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。
三.代词
使用代词时请注意其单、复数,主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。
12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.
定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers,为复数,因此从句中的指示代词应为复数,应把his改为their。
13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?
放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语,应把Whom改为Who。
14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.
John和I在句中都做的宾语,应把I改为me。
15.Thesebooksaremine;thoseinthebagareher.
her是形容词性物主代词,后面应该加名词books,或把her改为hers。
四.数词
16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.
hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s,前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of,表示大约几百几千的概念。如two
hundredstudents(两百个学生),hundredsofstudents(成百上千个学生)。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。
17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.
表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.
18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.
几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数,所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.
19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.
英语表达中分数的分子用基数词,分母用序数词,分子大于一时分母后要加s,所以就把third改为thirds.
五.形容词和副词
形容词和副词容易被误用,形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。
20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.
appear在此是个系动词,其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.
21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.
此句需要一个副词来修饰,hardly是副词,但意为“几乎不”,hard也可以是副词,表努力,因此把hardly改为hard.
22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.
more只构成比较级,而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。
23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.
两者相比较时,比较级前用定冠词,三者或三者以上才用most,因此把most改为more.
24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.
表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级,因此把harder改为hard.
25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.
fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级,可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有:much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等,因此把fairly改为rather.
26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.
as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as,因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.
27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.
同样的事物才能相比较,weather和不具有可比性,因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.
29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.
这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?,因此把went改为go.
30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?
修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。
31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.
像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后,实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.
32.Thebookisworthtoberead.
beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.
33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.
sure的主语只能为人,而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.
34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.
alive为表语形容词,偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living,或把alive放在writers后面。
35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.
yet用于否定和疑问句,already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.
36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.
nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中,而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。
六.介词
37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.
by加上名词表示一种交通方式,中间什么都不加,如bycar,bybus,byplane等;如果名词前有其他的词修饰,则应用除by以外的其他介词,此处把by改为in.
38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.
wait为不及物动词,需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。
39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.
marry不跟with连用,应把with改为to。
40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.
篇2:英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear Friends,
Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience that I caused you by
adding the extra visiting without your permission.
I had no intention of intruding on your personal life. In China, arranging
interesting leisure activities for visitors is a common way to show welcome.
However, as your receptionist, I should have realized that you are inclined to
regard your private time as an inviolable treasure and hate to be harassed by
unplanned matters.
Im really sorry that I didnt check with you before making such
incomsiderate arrangement .All I can say is that it wont happen again.
Sincerely,
LiLi
篇3:以我的习惯为话题的英语范文
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+ 加入清单我的生活习惯My Living Habit
Everyone has their own habit. I have some living habits. I will take off my shoes and put on the slippers when I arrive home. And I get used to drink some soup before having dinner. What’s more, I have to keep my room light on until I fall asleep. If I am forced to change anything about this, I will be very uncomfortable. For example, if I don’t wear slipper at home, I will be very uncomfortable. If I can’t drink soup before dinner, I can’t eat anything. And I can’t fall asleep if the light is off. This is my living habit. Maybe I will change it one day, but now I can’t receive any change about them.
篇4:英语素材:常见的交通英语词句
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+ 加入清单Diverted traffic
交叉路口
Entry to motorway
高速入口
Left junction
左交叉口
Approaching end of motorway
即将驶出高速
Avoid the jams
避免交通堵塞
Dangerous bend
弯道危险
Look left (right)
向左(右)看
Low bridge ahead
前方桥低
Slow, school
前方学校请慢行
Speed limit of 48km/h
限速每小时48公里
The law requires you wear a seatbelt
法规要求系安全带
This vehicle stops frequently
随时停车
New hours of parking control
停车控制新时段
No entry
禁止驶人
No stopping at any time
任何时间不准停车
No thoroughfare
禁止通行
No trade or business vehicle unless authorized
未经允许货车禁止通行
Pedestrian crossing ahead
注意前方人行横道
Pedestrian crossing
人行横道
Please drive carefully
请小心驾驶
Road closed
此路封闭
篇5:关于健康饮食习惯英语
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+ 加入清单Healthy eating habits are very important for our health. We should build
healthy eating habits. We should eat fresh vegetables and fruits everyday.They
supply rich and the necessary vitamins for us. We also should eat less meat
everday.And we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night.
Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary
nutritions. Junk food is a fatal killer for our health so that we should stay
far from them. It is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in
the morning. It is very bad for our health. Breakfast is the most important meal
for people.
篇6:关于健康饮食习惯英语
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+ 加入清单Nowadays, there is a growing focus on health care. People are pursuing a
healthy lifestyle. A healthy diet is one of the most important parts of it. As
the saying goes, bread is the staff of life, eating healthily and deliciously is
the goal we pursue. From my point of view, in order to build healthy eating
habits, we should eat more vegetables and less fat and sugar. Vegetable is the
best source of s vitamin, because vegetables are rich in vitamins. Among them,
vitamin C and vitamin A are the most important. Too much fat and sugar can lead
to obesity, which is harmful to health. Besides, eating more fruits and drinking
more water is of great help.
篇7:初中英语作文:谈谈习惯
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+ 加入清单Habits, whether good or bad, are gradually formed. When a person doesa certain thing again and again, he‘ll be obliged to do it in the same way by some unseen force. Thus habit is formed. Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it. It is.therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits. Good habits have many advantages. Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy. Diligence helps to succeed. Honesty helps:: win the respeet and trust of others.
If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing, we might be mined by them. We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good for ourselves and others.
篇8:2024年高考英语书面表达突破技巧
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+ 加入清单书面表达一直在历年高考中占有很重要的地位,而且相对于其他题型,书面表达最容易在短期内有所突破。下面小编为大家整理了英语作文的突破技巧,欢迎大家阅读。
书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级),内容第二位(要点齐全),结构第三位(文章分段)的原则,也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言,换句话说是亮点,根据语言使用情况,亮点的多少而定出档次,所以同学们在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。
亮点一共有四种:
一、高级词汇和语法;
二、修辞手法;
三、有效的连词;
四、名人名言或谚语。
首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法,以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。
肯定不如否定好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点,在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞,而且对于考生来说,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day,就不如变成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,就变成了亮点句,起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响,写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude
towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。
陈述不如倒装妙
在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式,足以应对书面表达,如何应用倒装,有很多方法和技巧。
否定词开头
如果写出的句子中有否定词, 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装,用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词,如not, seldom, hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。
地点状语开头
在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子,一个建筑位于什么位置,或什么地方有什么东西,都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中,图书馆位于学校的中央,Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头:In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子,想表达河岸上有很多花:On the bank stand some flowers. 天空中繁星点点:In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。
这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构,第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾,后面还可以继续加从句,使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies our library,which is between the garden and the teaching building.
Only+介词短语
例如在2007年全国卷中,让外教帮你找个笔友,有一句可以表达成只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语,这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.
形容词+as+主语+be动词
例如Young as I am, I can manage it; Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中:Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the
car’s number. 还有其他的倒装结构,很高兴收到的你的来信:So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。
主动不如被动巧
在近些年的阅卷中,发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态,也许是受中文思维的影响,几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中,被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言,而汉语是主观的语言,具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态,汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头,强调一件事发生在什么人身上,而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯,如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态,就会呈现句型的变化,使整个文章句型丰富。
例如在2006年的高考中,很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时,都是用:We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成:At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days,分数会更高。
分词结构不能少
在前文提到,在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中,阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构,其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构,时间状语从句,原因状语,条件状语等。例如条件状语从句:If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀,如果你的作文中有状语从句,马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。
口诀:一去,二看,三改。一去:去连词;二看:看主语;三改:改分词。
If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改,第一步,去掉连词if;第二步,看前后两句话的主语,前后主语不一致,所以要改成独立主格;第三步,改分词,is 变成分词是being,所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。
如果前后两句话主语一致,就变成分词结构,例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于,因为,如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。
以上技巧有语文迷小编整理,看过后你真的学到了吗?
篇9:有关讨论学习习惯的英语作文
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+ 加入清单导语:在现实中,不同的学生有不同的学习习惯,我认为影响他们的学习效率大大。好习惯总会带来高效率,而坏习惯却带来相反的结果。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;
2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;
3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意:
1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.
Its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.
Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, well focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.
My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt. I know that it is because I dont spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.
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讨论学习习惯是有益和必要的。
讨论学习习惯是有益和必要的。在现实中,不同的学生有不同的学习习惯,我认为影响他们的学习效率大大。好习惯总会带来高效率,而坏习惯却带来相反的结果。
有些学生很擅长课堂上老师教什么。他们认为只有这样他们才能更好地理解和记忆教材。如果我们发现这些材料很有趣,我们会把注意力集中在他们身上。然而,这些枯燥的课程要求我们的决心,自我控制能力和信心。
我的同学总是叫我“健忘先生”,因为我记不起学过的东西。我知道这是因为我不花一些时间在课后记忆。我的老师建议我把这些材料重复几遍,大声朗读,他们认为这有助于提高我的记忆力。
篇10:英语作文常见的错误有哪些
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+ 加入清单Ⅰ 词汇错误
1) 易混淆词语的误用;
例如 effect & affect, sensitive & sensible
2) 词性的误用;
例如 Concrete structures are found to be more strangely(stronger) when they subjected to 3-dimension compression.
3) 代词的误用;
例如 The myth of the city as a promised land, that(非限制性定语从句,that 应改为which) attracts immigrants from rural poverty and brings it flooding into city centers.
4) 介词的误用;
例如Chapter 1 analyses the influence of continental climate to(on) buildings in China.
5) 连词的误用;
例如 To make a living the whole family, even if(even) their 8-year old brother, had to work in a factory.
6) 冠词的误用;
例如However, the(删除,因此处的是泛指而不是特指某个讲双语的人)bilingual people rarely have equal level of competence in all aspects of the two la
7) 专业术语的误用、或是习惯用法使用错误;
① plank n. 铺板,厚木板,支架,(政党的) 政纲条款
但土木工程结构的面板一般用slab表示,而不用plank。
② Television is rapidly becoming the literature of our periods(time).
Ⅱ 语法错误
1) 主谓不一致;
例如 The whole monstrous growth rests on economic prosperity, but behind it lies(lie) two myths:………
2) 时态错误;
例如 Where tuberculosis vanished(had vanished), it came back……
3) 主/被动语态错误
4) 虚拟语气;
例如 If something have(had) been done, the accident would not have happen.
5) 非谓语动词的误用
例如 Consider(Considering) the great need for improving many aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified……
Ⅲ 逻辑关系错误
例如 Although most important factors on concrete durability have been extensively investigated, lots are still (添加not) completely understood.
Typical errors I tend to commit in my own writing:
1)介词的误用(将词组、固定搭配记错;)
2)主谓不一致(不知主语是可数名词还是不可数名词;)
3)习惯表达
篇11:英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear John,
I am eagerly looking forward to your visit to our city. After all these
years of writing to each other, I can not wait to see you. However, I regret to
inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.
The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the
earliest I can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land. Will you
please wait for me in the arrival lounge? You can have breakfast while you
wait.
By the way, as we have never met I must tell you home to identify me: I am
of 165cm tall and have a long hair. In addition, I will wear a white skirt and
carry a China Daily at hand.
Hope we can meet soon.
Sincerely yours,
Alice
篇12:考研英语作文常见错误分析
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+ 加入清单【摘要】在英文写作过程中,学生们常常误入歧途却自己不能察觉。一些常见的写作错误会出现在大部分考生的试卷上。比如审题不清,经常出现偏题或跑题;习惯汉语思维,逐字翻译;用词搭配不当,张冠李戴;词不达意,拼写错误严重;等等。具体来说,常见的错误主要有这些:
一、指代方面的错误
在使用代词it,he,this,that,which,one等时,前文中应出现明确的先行词。
如:Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.,这句话中,him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词,分别是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含义非常清楚。
可是,不少学生在使用这些代词时,虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么,但在作文中却没有交代清楚,结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁,反而造成了意思上的模糊,让阅卷老师不知所云。
误:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正:Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
【说明】句1中的they既可指教师,也可指学生,属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。
二、修饰方面的错误
修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分,并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当,就会造出模棱两可的病句。
误:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村,还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构,就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。
三、一致方面的错误
在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间,要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。
误:Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正:Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
四、平行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1、误:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
误:A great change has been taken place since then.
正:A great change has taken place since then.
误:But it may occur some new problems.
正:But some new problems may occur/arise.
误:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【说明】happen,take place,occur,arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构,也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多:Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2、误:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
误:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
误:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier,more stronger等。
五、断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束,又开始新的一句,结果造成句子结构不全,这就成为断句。
误:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.
【说明】以because,since,if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的,只能依属于主句,所以不能写成另一句。
六、连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要,不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
七、搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1、误:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【说明】speed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能与fast,quick,slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2、误:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.
【说明】price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,published,reduced,reasonable等搭配,不能与expensive,cheap搭配,但可以说In the past,milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.
由此可见,要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力,除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累,还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响,避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
八、误用方面
学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍,误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思,而且也会闹出笑话。
1、误:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
2、误:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的,工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词,其动词形式表示产生、实现,而这里的意思是影响,应换成affect。
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篇13:中考英语作文范文论习惯-OnHabits
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+ 加入清单1.习惯是养成的;
2.好习惯是福气;
3.坏习惯必须克服。
[写作导航]习惯不论好坏都是后天形成的,一旦形成,就很难改变;好习惯是祝福,许多成功人士都承认守时、早起、诚实和毅力等是早期形成的;坏习惯如粗鲁、懒惰、说谎、偷盗和诽谤等恶习是我们应努力避免的。
[范文]
Habits, whether good or bad, are generally acquired. When a person does a certain thing once and again, he is impelled by some unseen force to do the same thing repeatedly; thus a habit is formed. Once a habit is formed, it is difficult, and sometimes impossible, to shake it off. It is therefore very important that we should take great care in the formation of habits. Some bad habits formed in childhood may remain lifetime. Older persons also form bad habits, and in some cases they are ruined by these bad habits.
There are good habits which, when formed in early life, are great blessings. Many successful people declare that they owe much of their success and prosperity to the formation of such good habits as punctuality, honesty, and perseverance in early life.
Such habits as rudeness, laziness, stealing and slandering are bad habits. If we want to be useful to society, we ought to keep away from ail these vices, and strive to acquire those habits that are proven to be good for ourselves and others.
篇14:关于中国风俗习惯的英语作文
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The Chinese manners is differend from other countries .In China,people first meet to shake hands.When people eat,Besides soup,table all food use chopsticks.Certain foods can move chopsticks eyes.And sometimes the Chinese host use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate.This is a sign of politeness.The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how yummy it is.If you feel uncomfortable with this,you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there.
Dont tap on your bowl with your chopsticks.Beggars tap on their bowls,so this is not polite.Also,when the food is coming too slow in a restarant,people will tap their bowls.If you are in someones home,it is like insulting the cook.
翻译:
中国的礼仪是不同于来自其他国家。在中国,人们第一次见面握手。当人们吃,除了汤之外,表所有食品都使用筷子。某些食物可以移动筷子的眼睛。有时中国主人用筷子把食物在你的碗或盘子。这是礼貌的标志。适当的做法是吃不管它是什么,说它有多美味。如果你觉得不舒服,你可以说一个礼貌的谢谢你,离开那里的食物。
不要用筷子敲打饭碗。乞丐行乞时常敲打饭碗,所以,这也是不礼貌的。同样,当食物来了太慢,人们会利用他们的碗。如果你在某人的家里,它就像侮辱厨师。
篇二
At the end of the Zhou Dynasty,the area we now know as China had fallen into a state of fragmentation and conflict.While the Zhou dynasty had ruled for several centuries,several other states,originally feudal domains,tried to carve out their own kingdoms.The state of Qin would eventually emerge the victor and unify all of China under one rule for the first time in history.
Qu Yuan served as minister to the Zhou Emperor.A wise and articulate man,he was loved by the common people.He did much to fight against the rampant corruption that plagued the court-- thereby earning the envy and fear of other officials.Therefore,when he urged the emperor to avoid conflict with the Qin Kingdom,the officials pressured the Emperor to have him removed from service.In exile,he traveled,taught and wrote for several years.Hearing that the Zhou had been defeated by the Qin,he fell into despair and threw himself into the Milou River.His last poem reads:
Many a heavy sigh I have in my despair,Grieving that I was born in such an unlucky time.I yoked a team of jade dragons to a phoenix chariot,And waited for the wind to come,to sour up on my journey As he was so loved by the people,fishermen rushed out in long boats,beating drums to scare the fish away,and throwing zong zi into the water to feed braver fish so that they would not eat Qu Yuans body.
翻译:
周朝的末尾,我们现在知道,中国陷入了分裂和冲突的状态。而周朝统治了几个世纪,其他几个州,最初封建领域,试图开拓自己的王国。秦国最终将出现一个规则下的维克多和统一全中国的历史上第一次。
屈原担任部长周皇帝。一个明智的和表达的人,他深受百姓爱戴。他做了很多打击猖獗的腐败困扰法院——从而获得其他官员的嫉妒和恐惧。因此,当他敦促皇帝为了避免冲突与秦王国,官员们迫使皇帝让他从服务中移除。流亡,他旅行,教了好几年。听力,周秦被击败,他陷入了绝望和扑进Milou河。他最后的诗中写道:
许多沉重的叹息我绝望,悲伤,我出生在这样一个不幸的时间。我配合的一组玉龙凤凰战车,并等待着风,酸在我的旅程,他是如此深受人们的喜爱,渔民在长船冲出来,敲锣打鼓吓跑鱼,把粽子投入水喂勇敢的鱼,这样他们不会吃屈原的尸体。
篇15:“猪会飞”的6种英语表达
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+ 加入清单When pigs fly
猪可不能飞起来!这是不可能的事,因此正是成语本身想表达的意思。例如,当你听到有人说,"Do you think Mary will quit her job now that shes pregnant?"另一个人就回答,"Yeah, when pigs fly! There is no way she is giving up her career!"当他或她在使用表达方式 when pigs fly时,意思是Mary绝对不可能辞职。
Get in someones hair
如果你get in someones hair,你并没有爬到别人的头上!其实,意思是你烦扰到了他们-可能是你侵入了他们的私人空间。例如"Susan was trying to prepare dinner, but her children were getting in her hair!" 意思是Susan的孩子们在她做饭的时候烦她。如果有人烦扰到了你,你就可以说,"Get out of my hair!"
Hit the ceiling
天花板可离我们的头远着呢,那么要撞上天花板也不是件容易的事-除非你非常生气!如果有人hits the ceiling意思是他们正表现出非常生气的样子。例如,"When Carols son got an F on his report card, she hit the ceiling!"意思是Carol对她儿子考试不及格非常的愤怒。
Knock someones socks off
现在,要pull掉别人的袜子还有些可能-但是要knock掉别人的袜子要该怎么做呢?当然是通过让他们惊奇兴奋并印象深刻喽!例如,"You should see Toms new car! Itll knock your socks off, its so amazing!"意思是Tom的车令人称奇!
Bite the bullet
如果要试着咬一颗子弹味道会是怎样呢?不太好吧。那么为什么会有人bite the bullet呢?只有在勇敢的忍受或面对困难的处境时他们才会这么做。例如"She had to bite the bullet and give in to her bosss unreasonable demands."意思是她在老板提出苛刻要求时表现的勇敢坚强。
Drive someone up a wallpigs
车是不能开到墙上去的,那么谁能drive you up a wall?是惹你讨厌的人!例如,"My mom is driving me up a wall! She wont ever let me stay out late."意思是母亲不让我在外面呆得晚让我感到非常的讨厌。
篇16:中国风俗习惯英语作文
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+ 加入清单中国重大的传统节日有春节、元宵节、清明节、端午节、中秋节等,中国民间风俗习惯。以下是中国风俗习惯英语作文,欢迎阅读。
Restaurants and snack bars in Beijing started serving this seasonal dish last week, and expect a sales peak on Tuesday.
Citizens can also eat a bowl of Laba porridge for free in many Buddhist temples, since the tradition of celebrating Laba Festival originated in Buddhist culture.
In Guanghua Temple in central Beijing, more than 20 workers and volunteer citizens started cooking Laba porridge in twelve huge pots on Monday night, which they expect to hand out to several thousands of temple-goers on Tuesday.
Residents in a Hangzhou community cook and eat Laba porridge together. Laba Festival, the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, falls on January 15 this year.
Fang Hui Chun Tang, an old, well-reputed pharmacy in the eastern Chinese city of Hangzhou, also has the tradition of serving free porridge on Laba. Nutritious Chinese herbs are mixed into their dish, and a xylitol-based recipe is prepared for people with diabetes. The pharmacy expects to receive some 12,000 visitors on the special day.
Neighborhoods in Chinese cities join up to cook and eat Laba porridge. Qi Guifeng, 75, is an organizer of one such public meal in Hangzhou. She called in several senior citizens in her community to buy the materials and serve the porridge in the communitys public yard.
"We get together to do a good thing and have fun. We are glad our neighbors can have a bowl of hot porridge," Zhang Meiqin, one of Qis neighbors, said.
Dragon Boat race Traditions At the center of this festival are the dragon boat races. Competing teams drive their colorful dragon boats forward to the rhythm of beating drums. These exciting races were inspired by the villagers valiant attempts to rescue Chu Yuan from the Mi Lo river. This tradition has remained unbroken for centuries.
Tzung Tzu A very popular dish during the Dragon Boat festival is tzung tzu. This tasty dish consists of rice dumplings with meat, peanut, egg yolk, or other fillings wrapped in bamboo leaves. The tradition of tzung tzu is meant to remind us of the village fishermen scattering rice across the water of the Mi Low river in order to appease the river dragons so that they would not devour Chu Yuan.
Ay Taso The time of year of the Dragon Boat Festival, the fifth lunar moon, has more significance than just the story of Chu Yuan. Many Chinese consider this time of year an especially dangerous time when extra efforts must be made to protect their family from illness. Families will hang various herbs, called Ay Tsao, on their door for protection. The drinking of realgar wine is thought to remove poisons from the body. Hsiang Bao are also worn. These sachets contain various fragrant medicinal herbs thought to protect the wearer from illness.
[中国风俗习惯英语作文
篇17:关于健康饮食习惯英语
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+ 加入清单What is healthy diet? To the most people, healthy diet means more green
foods, no junk foods. The green food is those pollution-free, high quality and
nutrient food, including the organic vegetables and meats, fruits, eggs and so
on. The meals of healthy diet should be cooked with fewer salt and oil. And the
junk food is those low nutrition, high calorie, processed food with much salt or
oil, such as the fries, fried chickens, salted eggs and so on. These foods will
cause one get weight and increase the risk of many diseases. We should keep a
healthy diet, abandon the junk food to keep ourselves healthy.
篇18:关于健康饮食习惯英语
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+ 加入清单What is a good eating habit? In my opinion, a good eating habit is related
to eat healthily and regularly. To say it simply, Xiao Ming has breakfast about
7:30a.m. to 9:00a.m. every morning and lunch at noon. He also has dinner about
6:30p.m. to 7:30p.m in the evening. What he eats is healthy food, such as, meat,
vegetable, fruit, egg, milk and so on. He would not have some snacks for a meal.
He also would not eat and drink too much or eat nothing. Xiao Ming sets a good
example to have a good eating habit.
篇19:2024中考英语作文高分表达句型
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+ 加入清单1. A is completely/totally/entirely different from B.
2. A and B are different in some/every way/respect/aspect.
3. A and B differ in…
4. A differs from B in…
5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in…
6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B…
7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B…
8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B…
9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.
10. Both A and B…However, A…; on the other hand, B…
11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…
二、演绎法常用的句型
1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.
3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
5.The reasons are as follows.
三、因果推理法常用句型
1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.
2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.
3. We read the book; as a result/therefore/thus/hence/consequently/for this reason/because of this, we’ve learned a lot.
4. As a result of/Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.
5. The cause of/reason for overweight is eating too much.
6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.
7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.
8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.
四、举例法常用句型
1. Here is one more example.
2. Take … for example.
3. The same is true of…
4. This offers a typical instance of…
5. We may quote a common example of…
6. Just think of…