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78高中英语作文中常见的100个错误
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+ 加入清单写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。
一.名词
写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。
1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.
句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。
2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.
可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.
3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.
一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.
4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.
一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。
5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.
中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。
6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）
以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,
thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.
二.冠词
7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.
用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.
8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.
plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。
9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.
把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。
10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.
在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。
11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.
去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。
三.代词
使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。
12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.
定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。
13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?
放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。
14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.
John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。
15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.
her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。
四.数词
16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.
hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two
hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。
17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.
表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.
18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.
几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.
19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.
英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.
五.形容词和副词
形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。
20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.
appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.
21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.
此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.
22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.
more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。
23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.
两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.
24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.
表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.
25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.
fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.
26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.
as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.
27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.
同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.
29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.
这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.
30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?
修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。
31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.
像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.
32.Thebookisworthtoberead.
beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.
33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.
sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.
34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.
alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。
35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.
yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.
36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.
nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。
六.介词
37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.
by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.
38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.
wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。
39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.
marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。
40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.
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四、平行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
误：A great change has been taken place since then.
正：A great change has taken place since then.
误：But it may occur some new problems.
正：But some new problems may occur/arise.
误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。
五、断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。
误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.
【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。
六、连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
七、搭配方面的错误
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1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.
【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.
由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
八、误用方面
学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。
1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。
另外为了方便大家学习，提高复习的效率。小编为广大学子整理了考研技巧和考试大纲，更有历年真题提供测试等等。针对每一个科目进行深度的探讨和技巧挖掘。欢迎各位考研的同学进行了解和资讯。考研的痛苦是难免的,不要丧失信心,坚信苦尽甘来。预祝各位学子取得成功！
篇9：英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear David:
I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having
answered your letter dated 7, December sooner, but when I have told you the
reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable. When your
letter arrived, I was just in Hong Kong. As my family could not forward it to me
during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment
when I took it up. Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you
these few lines to express my deep regret.
I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip. I shall be pleased to give
you an account to of them when I see you next.
Sincerely yours,
篇10：英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear Friends,
Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience that I caused you by
adding the extra visiting without your permission.
I had no intention of intruding on your personal life. In China, arranging
interesting leisure activities for visitors is a common way to show welcome.
However, as your receptionist, I should have realized that you are inclined to
regard your private time as an inviolable treasure and hate to be harassed by
unplanned matters.
Im really sorry that I didnt check with you before making such
incomsiderate arrangement .All I can say is that it wont happen again.
Sincerely,
LiLi
篇11：英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear John,
I am eagerly looking forward to your visit to our city. After all these
years of writing to each other, I can not wait to see you. However, I regret to
inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.
The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the
earliest I can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land. Will you
please wait for me in the arrival lounge? You can have breakfast while you
wait.
By the way, as we have never met I must tell you home to identify me: I am
of 165cm tall and have a long hair. In addition, I will wear a white skirt and
carry a China Daily at hand.
Hope we can meet soon.
Sincerely yours,
Alice
篇12：英语写一封信表达道歉
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+ 加入清单Dear Ms. Reinhart,
I am terribly sorry that I failed to arrive at BLCU last Friday. I hope
that this did not mess you up completely, although I know that you had already
made some special arrangements for my visit with you parents and friends. I am
very sorry about all that. I am sure you will be sympathetic, however, when I
tell you that my father is dangerously ill in hospital, and that I found it
impossible to leave for the visit when he is in this state.
My father was working very hard on his project on protecting the
environment. I know the project has come to a very important stage. He and his
assistants did not take regular rest for three weeks. Last night, my father had
a heart attack and was soon sent to the hospital. The doctor said my father was
in a very serious situation, and, he might need an operation.
24 hours have passed. Nothing has changed. I have to stay at the hospital.
I will let you know if there is any good news.
I am sorry again and look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Tom Williams
篇13：小学五年级英语作文我的饮食习惯
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+ 加入清单Hello. Im Timmy. I like to eat eggs ang milk for breakfast. I often eat my breakfast at home. It starts the day .
I often have lunch at school. For lunch, I often eat rice and meat. It can give me energy.
For supper. I often have vegetables and apples. They are good for health.I after supper within grandparents at home.
你好。我是蒂米。我早餐喜欢吃鸡蛋和牛奶。我经常在家吃早饭。开始这一天。
我经常在学校吃午餐。吃午饭,我通常吃米饭和肉。它能给我能量。我的饮食习惯
吃晚饭。我经常有蔬菜和苹果。它们对健康有益。我在爷爷奶奶家里吃晚饭。
篇14：以我的习惯为话题的英语范文
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+ 加入清单我的习惯(My Habbits)
I have some habbits, some are good, but some are bad.
I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put todays work till tomorrow. They are all my good habbits. They help me a lot in my daily life.
However, I also have some bad habbits. For example, sometimes I do my homework slowly, and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a reat. They are all harmful to my health.
From now on Ill try to keep my good habbits, and give up the bad ones. Then Ill live better.
篇15：中考英语书面表达专项练习10中考英语作文
全文共 1016 字
+ 加入清单提示：
1 教会如何生活 过分溺爱
2 指出缺点，指明方向 强加兴趣、价值观
3 教会富有爱心 希望值过高
要求：
1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯;
2、词数110左右;
3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students……
参考范文：
Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.
However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.
In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.
篇16：英语作文：我的习惯
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+ 加入清单My Habbits
I have some habbits, some are good, but some are bad.
I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put todays work till tomorrow. They are all my good habbits. They help me a lot in my daily life.
However, I also have some bad habbits. For example, sometimes I do my homework slowly, and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a reat. They are all harmful to my health.
From now on Ill try to keep my good habbits, and give up the bad ones. Then Ill live better.
篇17：以我的习惯为话题的英语范文
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+ 加入清单我的习惯(My Habbits)
I have many bad habits, but there is one always makes me upset. I like nodding off in class. Nearly everyone will have this bad habit in summer. But I will nod off in every class and every season. Usually, I will nod off when the class begins about ten minutes. I hate this. I have tried my best to correct it. But I failed in the end. This habit troubles me lot.
篇18：2024年高考英语书面表达突破技巧
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+ 加入清单书面表达一直在历年高考中占有很重要的地位，而且相对于其他题型，书面表达最容易在短期内有所突破。下面小编为大家整理了英语作文的突破技巧，欢迎大家阅读。
书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级)，内容第二位(要点齐全)，结构第三位(文章分段)的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以同学们在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。
亮点一共有四种：
一、高级词汇和语法;
二、修辞手法;
三、有效的连词;
四、名人名言或谚语。
首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。
肯定不如否定好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude
towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。
陈述不如倒装妙
在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。
否定词开头
如果写出的句子中有否定词， 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词，如not, seldom, hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。
地点状语开头
在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子，一个建筑位于什么位置，或什么地方有什么东西，都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中，图书馆位于学校的中央，Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头：In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子，想表达河岸上有很多花:On the bank stand some flowers. 天空中繁星点点：In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。
这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies our library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.
Only+介词短语
例如在2007年全国卷中，让外教帮你找个笔友，有一句可以表达成只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语，这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.
形容词+as+主语+be动词
例如Young as I am, I can manage it; Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中：Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the
car’s number. 还有其他的倒装结构，很高兴收到的你的来信：So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。
主动不如被动巧
在近些年的阅卷中，发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态，也许是受中文思维的影响，几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中，被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整个文章句型丰富。
例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时，都是用：We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，分数会更高。
分词结构不能少
在前文提到，在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。
口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词;二看：看主语;三改：改分词。
If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if;第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格;第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。
如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于，因为，如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。
以上技巧有语文迷小编整理，看过后你真的学到了吗?
篇19：中考英语作文写作常见的三个错误
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+ 加入清单俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
[中考英语作文写作常见的三个错误