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2024年初二年级学生期末评语汇总

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你是个活泼开朗的女生,有一定的进取精神。通过你的努力,本学期成绩有所提升,但还有很大的潜力有待挖掘。希望能够给自己树立更高的目标,严格要求自己,力求完美。学习如逆水行舟,不进则退,相信你能成为一个更加优秀的学生

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你是一个活泼开朗、落落大方的女生,能利用自己的绘画特长,为班级服务,班级每期的黑板报都离不开你辛勤的付出。本学期学习上的进步还是有的,希望能够继续努力,提高学习的效率,各科均衡发展。坚信,即使是蜗牛,只要坚持不懈地向上爬,也能和雄鹰一样看到山顶无限绮丽的风光!加油!

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你是一个活泼开朗、性格外向的女生,能遵守学校的规章制度,与同学相处融洽。你做事积极主动,能认真完 成老师交给的各项任务。本学期学习上有较大的进步,老师深感欣慰,但还有很大的上升空间,学习上再勤快一点,自觉一点,调整好心态,将会更进一步。请相信:有志者事竟成!

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你是一个很努力、很上进的女生,能尊敬师长,团结同学,是老师的得力助手。本学期你的学习成绩有较大的进步,但还不是很稳定,要加强综合解题能力的提高,拓宽解题的思路,勤于反思和总结。人生就像一场赛跑,最先跑到终点的,往往不是一开始跑得最快的,学会坚持,鲜花就在不远的前方!加油吧!

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你是个文静、少言,有上进心的女生。能遵守校规校纪,认真对待学习。学习上还要进一步开动脑筋,善于总结,这样才能提高解题的速度。希望能活跃一点,多和同学交流,多参与班级的各项活动,在学习的同时,提高自己各方面的能力,争取全面发展。

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Then, the representative of the bedroom Zhu Guozhang asked us to guess a

line of a poem related to the above situation. He added that Li Xinmin alone was

born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the

chicken. They left us all in confusion. And it was our monitor who was

quickwitted. He shouted our, "The day breaks as the cock crows three times at

dawn." The hall After that, they had another item. This time Li Xinmin was

placed in the middle of the circle. While he was standing there, the other three

stood around him, each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. It was an

idiom. This time I got it right:"The dog stands out among a group of

chickens."

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篇2:三年级期末我的家乡英语作文

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I was born in a small village with a hill behind it and many big areas of feilds in front. Most of the villagers live in tall buildings like the people in cities.In their home, they have telephones,TV sets,washing machines and so on.They can also use drinking water supplied by the water company in the village,but it costs them a little money every year.If they plant crops, the goverment will give them some money as encouragement.The more land they farm, the more money they will get.All around the year, they work on their farm land for only four or five months.In the rest time,they often work in the cities nearby for money.They needn’t worry about anything for living, such as food or clothes.

There is a tall teaching building with a computer room, a reading room, a meeting room,a lab and sixteen class-rooms in our school.Around it are big trees and behind the building is a wide playground for us to do sports on.All the teachers work carefully and teach us very well.

What is more,when we are ill or want to do some shopping and so on, everything is OK without leaving the village.

But in the past, it is said there were few people living in two houses made of wood,grass and mud.That is why it is still called Two Houses today.It is not hard to imagine what their life was like.

Now I feel that I am proud of my hometown.As a student,I must study hard to get more knowledge so that I can build my village better when I grow up.

我出生在一个小村庄有它背后的山和许多大的行业领域。大多数村民住在高楼大厦像在城市里的人。在家里,他们有电话、电视机、洗衣机等等。他们还可以使用饮用水由自来水公司提供在村里,但每年花费他们一点钱。如果他们种庄稼,政府会给他们一些钱作为鼓励。他们农场的土地越多,他们将会得到更多的钱。周围,他们工作在他们的农场土地上只有四、五个月。在休息时间,他们经常在附近的城市工作。他们不必担心任何生活,如食物或衣服。

有高大的教学楼计算机室、阅览室、会议室、实验室、十六个我们学校的教室。周围建筑背后的大树,对我们是一个宽阔的操场上做运动。所有的老师工作认真,教我们很好。

更重要的是,当我们生病或想要做一些购物等等,一切正常,没有离开村庄。

但在过去,据说有几个人住在两座房子由木头、草和泥。这就是为什么今天仍然被称为两座房子。不难想象他们的生活是什么样子。

现在我觉得我为我的家乡感到骄傲。作为一名学生,我必须努力学习获得更多的知识,这样我能更好地建立我的村庄,当我长大。

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篇3:精选高一上学期英语期末考试话题作文

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Topic one:Environment Protection(环境保护)

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, a great number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

Forest Pretention保护森林

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篇4:初二英语作文:ABeautifulCity

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Do you know Nanjing? I went to Nanjing on the holidays. If you dont know it, Ill tell you something about the beautiful city.

Nanjing is very large. There are many tall buildings, and lots of flowers and trees. It takes 30 minutes to get to the center by car. When you go there, you must be very excited.

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I had a great time in Nanjing. If you can go to Nanjing, you must feel happy.

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篇5:初二关于低碳的英语词

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With the development of science and technology, the term "low carbon" is often appear in our life. But, we really do low carbon? On the road, the car is everywhere, exhaust air pollution. Life, watching TV dont turn it off, dont turn off the light when you go out, is a waste of energy. In the campus, after class, students litter, eat the food bag is full. You know, it is full of pollution?

Speaking of which, I thought of his hometown river. Past, shadow of the trees such as on the green grass like the sea. But now, people in order to build a house, cut away the trees on the Banks of the river, pull out of the bank of the soil, hollow out the Cumberland river. So, one to the rainy season, flood river flooded river on both sides of the green crops, the stream sobbing, green in the sigh. People, this is not in oneself life?

Now that you know the importance of environmental protection, low carbon, so, we all will move together! Such as: less car more cycling, the door in the toilet cistern put two bottles, saving a drop of water every day. You dont see these are trivial, but we do it together, that is not trivial! Heard my introduction, do you want to save, low carbon life? The environmental protection together!!!!

随着科技的发展,“低碳”这个名词就在我们生活中常常出现。可是,我们真得做到低碳了吗?在马路上,车子到处都是,排放的尾气污染空气。生活中,看完电视不关机,出去时不关灯,正在浪费能源。在校园里,下课后,同学们乱扔垃圾,吃完的食品袋到处都是。你知道,这全是污染吗?

说到这,我想到了家乡的小河。昔日,河岸边绿树如荫,绿禾如海。可是现在,人们为了盖房子,砍走了河岸上的树木,拉光了河岸的泥土,挖空了河坎。于是,雨季一到,泛滥的河水淹没了小河两岸翠绿的庄稼,小河在呜咽,绿色在叹息。人们,这不是在自戕生命吗?

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篇6:2024年初二下学期期末考试作文

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晨风习习,琼枝带露,啊,又是一个大雾天。家乡的雾没有峨眉山的雾那样厚、那样秀,也没有黄山的雾那般奇丽渺远、变幻莫测,但我最欣赏的还是家乡的雾。

我的家乡位于崇山峻岭之中的会稽山麓,这里层峦叠嶂,千岩竞秀,万壑争流,这里的雾有它独特的魅力。

家乡的雾白得美,白得朴素。像瑞雪一样的白吗?它没有。它白中略灰,白里泛青,比白雪美多了。可不是,浓雾沉睡在青山秀水之间,汲取了山间草木的灵气,不要打扮得更秀美了吗?这样的白雾只配乡村才拥有,任何丹青高手,也很难调得出来吧?家乡的雾白得自然,白得真诚,我真想抓一把在手中,甚至拥它入怀,把它点染在画纸上,不时地欣赏它。

家乡的雾浓得深,浓得纯,丝毫没有城市中的雾那般含有油烟味。它很可爱,尽管行人相隔几步时,只能闻声,而不能见人,吸入一丝雾气,清凉清凉的。我们背着书包上学堂,浓雾飘上了我的前额,和我亲吻,我没法回避,这个多情的女子啊,你是在渲染你的热情和好客吗?望望四周,雾茫茫的一片。或许有人会感到憋闷,看不到连绵逶迤的群峰,看不到苍翠茂盛的竹木,可我不在乎。

浓雾变幻着,一会儿化做了凉风,一会儿变成了小露珠,沾在我的发梢上,沾到我的睫毛上。我轻轻合上眼,清凉的感觉使人心旷神怡,经雾水的洗礼,我似乎明眸含“泪”了。

家乡的雾柔得真美。它韧如白云,剪不断扯不断。它轻轻敷在小草上,草也真爱雾姐姐,尽情地吮吸着甘汁。

太阳渐渐升起,雾渐渐地变淡了。一轮红红的圆日高悬在半空中,高山、峰峦、树木渐渐露出了轮廓,经雾水洗涤的山川大地,充满着勃勃的生机。那奄奄一息的枯木似乎也滋润了,有了洒脱的生命。

家乡的雾亲切、热情,我爱家乡的雾,它真让人思念。

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篇7:奋斗英语作文初二80词

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People will be the envy of the sky eagle, but never thought it a thousand

times to practice hard; people were envious of butterfly flowers, but do not

have to pay attention to it once as a caterpillar suffering; people are jealous

of those celebrities, those scientists, those successful people, but never

thought they have too much to pay behind the hardships and sweat, experienced

many setbacks.

So, in the face of the unexpected blow, who seem insurmountable

difficulties, the vast expanse of the thorns, I will not retreat. Because I

know, success is built on the basis of failure and sharpening.

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篇8:初二英语作文示例之AnInvitation

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Dear Zhang Ming,

As my birthday will take place on next Saturday, my parents have insisted on having a birthday party for me. They are very anxious to meet all my young friends, and they want me to have a good time on this occasion.

The party will begin at 7 oclock this Saturday evening.Please come early. You can take a No. 15 bus and get off at Xinjiang Road. Go straight ahead and walk across Wulian Street. The restaurant is on the corner of the street. Its name is Da Fang Restaurant. We are looking forward to seeing you then.

With best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

XXX

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篇9:初二年级英语作文:I like the elephant

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Elephant is the largest animal on land today. It weights some ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born. When it is 12 years old, it studs over three meters and does not grow any more. Elephant is usually grey in color, having a long trunk with large ivory tusks protruding from each side of its mouth. Usually moving in groups and caring for each other, Elephant is know to be a very and gentle creamre. For many years people have used the strength of these poweful animals to move trees and heavy logs. Elephant has been and is a vital tool for people to do many things that would normally be imposs-ible. Elephant is and will continue to be one of the greatest creatures man has ever come into contact with. Its size. beauty, and power willforever be useful to man.

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篇10:高二期末英语

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There is a saying that every family has its trouble. Indeed, no one can go

on well all the time. My parents have found the good way to educate us. Thus,

when there is conflict happening between the relatives, we obey the rules and

know what to do. My parents have set up many rules for me and my sister, which

works to solve problems. The first rule is to say thank you when we get help.

Such as when someone open the door for us, we also need to show gratitude. I

find people feel happy when I say thank you to them. The second rule is to never

get angry for more than two days. So when I have disputes with my sister, we

wont be mad at each other for long time. The family rules make me a better

person.

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篇11:初二年级英语作文:我看到的彩虹

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Before I was 10, I lived in my hometown, it was a small and beautiful village, I love my hometown so much.

I remembered when it rained with the sunshine, there would be the rainbow in the sky. As the sky was so blue, the rainbow was very big, just like I was in front of the rainbow, it was so amazing. After I moved to the city, I never see the rainbow as beautiful as what I saw in my hometown. In the city, there are so many building that they cover people’s eyesight, what’s more, the environment is polluted so heavy that the sky is grey. I wish to see the beautiful rainbow again.

在我十岁以前,我住在我的家乡,那是一个小和美丽的村庄,我很爱我的家乡。

我记得当天上下了雨,并且伴随着太阳的时候,天空中会出现彩虹。由于天空是如此的蔚蓝,彩虹很大,就好像我站在彩虹的前面,那是如此的神奇。在我搬到城市了以后,我从来都没有看到过和我在家乡看到的那样美的彩虹。在城市里,到处都是高楼大厦,挡住了人们的视线,而且,环境被严重污染以至于天空都是灰色的。我希望能够再看到美丽的彩虹。

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My Chinese New Year for this year was fantastic!

I went to Hai Nan with my parents during the Chinese New Year and visited my relatives over there. The weather over there was beautiful. It was so much warmer than my city. We stayed in a hotel and we spent a lot of time on the beaches. My parents also took me for a ride round the island. It was so much fun and I wish it was longer.

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Today ,my mother and I cleaned the house.I cleaned the windows hard because it is so dirty.Then I cleaned it again.After that,I cleaned the floor and swept it.I thought it is dirtier than windows.Then I cleaned the tables and lots of chairs.We washed all of the clothes and quilts.Until four o`clock,we tidied all of the rooms up.My room was the cleanest and brightest.I was so happy and satisfied.Then my mother said:"You`re successful."

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篇14:2024初二下期末考试作文

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打开窗户,阳光透过云层钻进了我新的一天,凝望那依稀可见的赤红,我精神抖擞,对着蓝天白云,我充满希望,因为,生活是属于我的,考试是我的挑战,那张作息时间表是我的充气筒,考试亦精彩! 面向远方的一眸绿,我深吸了一口气。

“作为一个有责任心的孩子,一定要把成绩,这样才不会愧对自己!”我想,这是每个人都所希望的。自强不息,努力进取就是每个孩子不变的本色,只要努力 了,就是最棒的。坐在写字台前面,进行一次完整全面的复习,动起来吧。。不要你在夜深人静的时候,彻夜不眠,捧着书本,你的身影在月光下显得疲惫,你只要 把握属于你的每一分钟,利用起来,向着期末考试做最后的冲刺吧!如同在长跑比赛,几圈了你都可以坚持,在这最后的煎熬中,在这黑色的跑道上,秉着一种信 念,打起精神,冲向胜利的前方,一切都会过去,而在此之后的是一道旖旎的彩虹,它划过无边的天际,出现在你面前,那是属于你的彩虹。请踏上这座桥,与天同 高吧。。。没有可能,坚持就是胜利!

考试时,做到心会神凝,仔细审题,保持良好的心态没什么都不要想,用出你最大的智慧,发掘你最大的潜力去攀登这又一座的高山吧。

胜利的时候,回想起以前,你会感慨万千。是啊,真的没有什么不可能。所以,珍惜时间,一寸光阴一寸金,投入到这快乐且丰富的题海中去探索去寻求去掌握。实力是支撑考试的信心,趁着这光明天地,向太阳许愿,祝愿成功!

坦然走向这挑战,超越了自己,你就胜利了。

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篇15:初二英语作文大全

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Before I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about

the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I

feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams,

sometimes I can’t do well. Every time when I get the low mark, I will be afraid

of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here.

We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me.

This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky

to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.

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篇16:初二年级英语作文:A happy holiday

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I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship。

then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. the sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. they are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

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篇17:初二保护熊猫英语

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The giant panda is known as the national treasure of China。 The panda was a kind of ordinary animal in China long ago。 However, for some reasons, too many of them have been killed。 So the number of them is falling quickly。

At present people are taking an important measure to save pandas。 People want to find a home for them, and recently, they have set up a nature park for them in Sichuan Province,which is called "Pandas Home。 "There pandas can enjoy their life happily。 There is a bamboo forest near the Pandas Home。 So the pandas can find bamboos easily which they like to eat very much。

Because pandas are well protected now, the number of them is increasing every year。 We hope that one day we will have enough pandas to set them free and let them live in the wild again。

Pandas are good friends of man。 Man should try to protect them and ]et them live in the way they like!

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篇18:TheBeautifulSky初二英语作文

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During the summer holidays, I went to my grandmother’s home. One evening after supper, I stood on the balcony to look at the sky.

The stars in the sky were twinkling. Some were crowded, and others were separate. Then I found that the stars were not the same colour. They were white, grey, light blue and orange. It was really beautiful. At that time, the sky was like blue damask decorated by millions of bright dimonds.

Looking up at the sky, I saw the moon. It was like a naughty child, sometimes it hid in the clouds and sometimes it got out of the clouds. It seemed to play “hide and seek” with us. The stars around the moon, however, were as shy as girls, and hid themselves in the clouds.

Oh, what a beautiful sky!

[The Beautifu lSky初二英语作文

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篇19:初二寒假英语日记

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Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

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篇20:2024期末考试英语记叙文写作指导

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记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H ",但动笔之前,围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"

3. 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

"Dont worry, well send you home."

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.

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