治理雾霾的方法英语作文(精彩20篇)
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407《远离雾霾重现蓝天》
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+ 加入清单曾经,有多少诗人赞颂过华夏的美好风光,中国的大好河山在他们的笔触下是如此优美,杜甫那“星垂平野阔,月涌大江流”的感叹,李白对“峨眉山月半轮秋,影入平羌江水流”的赞颂,还有白居易沉醉在“日出江花红胜火,春来江水绿如蓝” 的情景下无法自拔……这一切的一切都描绘出当时我们的祖国各地风景如画。
可如今,中国的大好河山已不复当时的清丽。雾霾天严重影响着人们的出行,人们甚至需要戴上口罩才能出门。
曾经的舟山,天气十分晴朗,放眼望去,满眼都是湛蓝的颜色,蓝天有着白云的陪衬,那些变幻莫测的云,或流动,或停驻,为蓝天增添了许多的装饰,这样的蓝天总是能让人心情舒畅,也因此我们这里的游人如织,来过舟山的人都会夸赞舟山的好天气。
而从去年6月份开始,浙江境内的许多城市开始出现雾霾。最近的几天,我每每抬头仰望天空,都是灰蒙蒙的如同一块脏兮兮的纱巾,白云不见了,鸟儿也是迅速划过天空,不敢停留。难道我们这儿也开始出现雾霾了?
我问妈妈:“天上为什么会产生雾霾?”妈妈说:“因为地面灰尘大,空气湿度又低,再加上汽车尾气和工厂的污染才形成了雾霾。”我早就听说大城市里有雾霾,却不了解雾霾的可怕,现在雾霾来到了舟山,我才知道它对人体原来有这么大的危害,当霾进入人的呼吸道后严重的甚至会致死。
偶然一次,妈妈问我:“你的中国梦是什么?”我抬头看了看那灰暗的天空,对妈妈说:“妈妈,我的中国梦不大,我只愿我们的家园能够不再受雾霾的影响,能够天天看见蓝天白云,所以我要从小事做起,随手捡垃圾,废旧电池不乱扔,不使用一次性消耗品。”妈妈点了点头:“你说得对,我也要绿色出行,少开车,为环保做出一份贡献。”
每个人都有自己的中国梦,有人为国家的发展贡献自己的力量,有人想挣钱过上富足的生活,而我的中国梦则是能够生活在风景如画的家园里,让中国重焕诗人笔尖下的美好。
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篇1:雾都孤儿英语读后感
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+ 加入清单Here I am sitting on a couch alone thinking about what I have just finished reading with tears of sadness filling my eyes and fire of indignation filling my heart which revived my exhausted soul that has already been covered by the cruelty and the selfishness of the secular world for a long time. It is truly what I felt after reading Oliver Twist written by the prominent British author Charles Dickens.
The resonance between me and the book makes me feel not only the kindness and the wickedness of all the characters in the novel but what this aloof society lacks and what I lack deep inside. These supreme resources I’m talking about right now are somewhat different from minerals oil that we usually mention. They’re abstract like feelings and some kinds of spiritual stimulation that all of us desire anxiously from one another —— love and care.
Those charitable figures whom Dickens created in the novel are really what we need in life. They showed love and care to others just as the gentle rain from the sky fell upon the earth which was carved into my heart deeply.
Mr. Brownlow is one such person.
The other day he had one of his elaborate watches stolen by two skilled teenage thieves Artful Dodger and Charley Bates and thought naturally it was Oliver who was an orphan and forced to live with a gang of thieves that had done it because he was the only one near by after the theft had taken place. Being wrathful he caught Oliver and sent him to the police station where the ill-tempered unfair magistrates worked. Fortunately for him Oliver was proved innocent by one onlooker afterwards. With sympathy Mr. Brownlow took the injured poor Oliver to his own home. There Oliver lived freely and gleefully for some months as if he were Mr. Brownlow’s own son. One day however Mr. Brownlow asked Oliver to return some books to the bookseller and to send some money for the new books that he had already collected. The thief Oliver once stayed with kidnapped him. After that he disappeared in Mr. Brownlow’s life. Searching for a while Mr. Brownlow had to believe the fact that he had run away with his money. But dramatically they came across each other again a few years later. Without hesitation Mr. Brownlow took Oliver home for the second time not caring if he had done something evil.
Perhaps most of us would feel confused about Mr. Brownlow’s reaction. But as a matter of fact this is just the lesson we should learn from him. Jesus said in the Bible. “Forgive not seven times but seventy-times seven.” Why is that? Because forgiveness is our ability to remove negative thoughts and neutralize them so our energy may be spent on doing what we came here for. We cannot move forward in our future if past issues cloud our thinking. Stop put Mr. Brownlow into the list of your models. Always give people a second chance no matter what they might have done. That’s also a substantial part of loving and caring others.
Then there are Mrs. Maylie and Rose Oliver’s other benefactors. Maybe the reason they loved and cared Oliver was not because of forgiveness. In my point of view it was trust. They had faith in Oliver when he was considered to be a filthy burglar who tried to break the front door of Maylie’s at midnight. But this wasn’t how these two ladies saw the whole thing. They denied Oliver’s crime immediately and listened attentively to Oliver’s own description of his miserable life. They were deeply touched by Oliver’s strong perseverance and astonishing vitality. Accordingly they remedied Oliver’s body and heart and turned him into a different boy. He began to wear appropriate and clean suits which were tailor-made for him and receive education.
As far as we can see it is trust that helps us all live together without precaution. Sometimes trust can even lead us to miracles which we often expect to come about so why not trust? Trust yourself trust others and you’ll salute miracles every single day.
In the novel though the young Oliver again and again fell for conspiracies of those hideous thieves who tried to torture Oliver’s body and poisoned Oliver’s heart intensely he always lived on and tried hard to seek for his own life. Then I realized what supported him all through were actually beliefs. In most cases what you believe is what you’ll become. Believe that you are unlimited that you can do anything you commit to doing and when you do your accomplishments will know no bounds. You control your beliefs and that is how you ultimately control your life. It’s all dictated by your attitude.
In the final analysis love and care contain numerous forms there are love of forgiveness love of trust etc. but they all come from your beliefs in life. When someone tells you he’s deceived you forgive him anyway when someone tells you what he’s done trust him anyway and when you face adversities while chasing your dreams think about your beliefs then what hinders you will become a piece of cake in no time.
So find out “Olivers” in your life and do as Mr. Brownlow and Mrs. Maylie do: love them and care them which cost nothing but save much. They enrich those who receive without impoverishing those who give. They can be certain smallest words or actions but the memory of them sometimes last forever.
Charles Dickens said:“Love makes the world go around.” These immortal words have inspired and will keep on inspiring us to chant the melody of love and to say the prayer of care forevermore. Let us therefore enjoy life and treat other people lovingly. These principles are the roots and foundations of beliefs supporting this article and our mission together.
篇2:关于治理雾霾的建议书
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+ 加入清单广大市民们:
大家都知道把,如今的中国已被雾霾伤的千疮百孔。所以我这里要说一下雾霾的害处吧。雾霾的组成成分非常复杂,包括数百种大气颗粒物。其中危害人类健康的主要是直径小于10微米的气溶胶粒子,它能直接进入并粘附在人体上下呼吸道和肺叶中,引起鼻炎、支气管炎等病症,长期处于这种环境还会诱发肺癌。
所以我们要阻止雾霾的蔓延。可是该怎么做呢?
1.减少雾霾靠市民。“责任的沉默”比雾霾更可怕,作为南京市民,我们应该行动起来,尽我所能地保护环境,阻止空气污染进一步恶化。
首先,减少化石燃料的燃烧(如家庭燃煤、焚烧垃圾等)。燃煤会产生大量的烟尘和二氧化硫;垃圾在焚烧过程中会产生致癌物质二恶英;并自觉减少燃放烟花爆竹,以更加新颖别致的方式庆祝节日,如舞龙灯,击鼓等。
其次,有偿回收秸秆,用于制造天燃气燃料,减少秸秆焚烧带来的空气污染。许多地方的农民有焚烧秸秆的习惯,大量烟尘被排放到空气中,严重污染周边城市的环境,加重污染周边城市的环境,加重雾霾天气。
第三,提倡低碳出行,健康环保由于近年来道路上的机动车越来越多,交通压力日益增长,我们要从自身做起,选择低碳环保的出行方式,乘坐公共汽车,地铁、骑自行车或步行。将低碳环保进行到底。
2.驱赶雾霾靠部门。
首先,禁止主城区摆放大面积的露天烧烤
其次,由有关部门发起植树活动,呼吁市民多植树,少砍伐,并让众人能够明白植树造林、低碳环保之益处。
第三,鼓励沼气池建设,提倡使用清洁能源,减少秸秆焚烧,化石燃料燃烧带来的空气污染,同时鼓励无污染烟花爆竹的研制开发生产。
3.清除雾霾靠政府。阻止雾霾天气继续蔓延,需要一套行之有效的法律法规、监管体系、预警机制,以及自上而下的全民环保习惯做保障。
要想阻止雾霾天,给南京市民、中外游客一个美丽的环境,此事任重而道远。但是我相信,只要有我们共同的努力,南京一定可以在青奥会时一改之前的风貌,变得更加美好。
最后提醒大家珍爱生命,远离雾霾。
篇3:关于雾霾天的作文
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+ 加入清单早晨起床,满怀希望地朝窗外看一眼。“啊!怎么又是雾霾!”我心情低落,今天又见不到太阳公公了。
背上书包,走出家门,跨进一片白茫茫的世界。我想,这是我人生中第一个伸手不见五指的早晨。
上学的途中充满了艰辛,似乎地面上一夜之间长出了许多石头。我一边抱怨,一边一脚踢开差点让我摔倒的第三块石头。就这样,不知过了多久,我一路磕磕绊绊,带着让我的呼吸越来越困难的口罩,终于来到了十字路口。马路上川流不息的车辆来来往往,可我却只看得到红黄交替的闪烁着的车灯。我犹豫了一会儿,然后一咬牙,一边默念着:“请老天爷让我多活几年,请老天爷让我多活几年吧。”一边飞快地穿过马路。尽管多加小心,却还是和一辆电动车擦身而过。
终于来到了教室,差点儿迟到。我精疲力尽地坐下,大口喘着粗气。一想到PM2.5要在中午放学时和我一起回家,我的心里就涌起一种酸酸的感觉。
我们生活的家园是什么时候变成这个样子?还记得小时候,无忧无虑地和小伙伴们一起在小区里愉快的奔跑,共同大口呼吸新鲜清爽的空气。可是现在呢?出门时必须带着口罩,所有的人都行色匆匆,不想在这样的空气里多待一秒钟。是什么让我们的家园变得这样浑浊不堪?城市里无处不在的工厂,立起数不清的大的烟囱,不停地向湛蓝的天空喷射一朵朵巨大的烟云。它不断地“繁衍”,吓跑了白云姑娘,盖住了天空。
这样的早晨一个接着一个,无奈的太阳公公被迫下台。人们什么时候才能醒悟,还自己一个纯净的家园啊!
篇4:2024热点英语作文:雾霾
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+ 加入清单导语:最近,灰霾天气已成为日常生活的一对在中国的很大一部分。人们被迫戴上口罩避免呼吸有毒空气。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust, smoke and other dry particles ,and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment.
This kind of air pollutant come from a variety of natural and manmade sources. Natural sources can include windblown dust, and soot from wildfires. Manmade sources can include motor vehicles, and industrial fuel burning, and manufacturing operations. The one of the main cause that touches off haze is manufacturing operations. Many factories were over measure produced the smog that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air pollution.
The components that make up haze may have negative effect on peoples health especially that of the children and the elderly. Also not excluded are those who have certain diseases such as asthma, allergy, and pneumonia and lung disease. Workers working in the open air have a high risk in their health.
One of effective solutions to help eliminate haze is to make some chemistry changes during the manufacturing process,so it could reduce harmful emissions which are produced by manufacturing operations
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阴霾是空气污染和灰尘,烟雾和其他干燥粒子,它掩盖了清晰的天空,与自然环境进行交互。
雾霾原因
这种空气污染物来自各种自然和人为来源。天然来源可以包括风沙、烟尘从森林大火。人为来源可以包括机动车辆、工业燃料燃烧和制造业务。触动了烟雾的主要原因之一是制造业务。许多工厂测量产生的烟雾对标准和烟雾严重影响空气成为空气污染。
雾霾危害
组件构成烟雾可能对人们的健康有负面影响特别是儿童和老人。也不排除是某些疾病如哮喘、过敏、肺炎和肺部疾病。工人工作在露天有很高的风险在他们的健康。
解决方法
一个有效的解决方案,帮助消除烟雾是让一些化学变化在制造过程中,所以它能减少有害排放产生的制造业务。
篇5:雾都孤儿英语读后感
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+ 加入清单Oliver Twist is written by Charles Dickens.
Charles Dickens is one of the greatest writers in the England. He was born in a poor family but later he became famous and rich. The famous novel --A Tale of Two Cities is written by him too.
This novel shows us the cruelty and crime of London. Oliver Twist the hero is a poor orphan. He lived in a life filled with taunts. Nobody loved him. With visions of his future he decided to go to London. He thought a new life was coming but he was wrong a group of thieves were waiting for him.
The author created a group of bad men.
Fagin an old man with a horribly ugly face and red hair was the head of those thieves. He tried to make Oliver be a criminal.
Bill Sikes was a cruel and evil man in the group. He had a bad temper.
Monks Oliver’s brother did bad things to hurt Oliver. He wanted to get the legacies left by his father alone. He paid Fagin to trap Oliver into a life of crime. In fact they were all afraid of being put into prison and being hanged. They can’t live happily.
Nancy a poor girl loved a bad man. She had to help Bill Sikes perpetrate because she loved him. She had to be loyal to the criminal group because she loved him. Actually she was kind. She helped Oliver at the risk of her life. If she hadn’t fell in love with Sikes she would have a happy ending.
The author showed these ugly things to us he described an ugly world. But there are more kind people in the novel.
Mr. Brownlow an old friend of Oliver’s father took good care of Oliver.
Mrs. Maylie Harry Maylie’s mother saved Oliver of his life.
Miss Rose is the aunt of Oliver in fact.
They all protect Oliver from hurt.
Oliver was unlucky to meet so many evil people but he was luckier to get help from so many kind people.
In the end of the novel all the evil people were punished. Oliver got what he should get. Rose married Harry Maylie and they lived happily. All the kind people have a happy ending.
Righteousness can always beat evil. I think this is what the author wants to tell. Although there are many ugly things in the world we must believe that righteousness can always beat evil.
We must store kindness even though we are in ugly situation. One is poor if he doesn’t have kindness. One is rich if he has kindness. So please store your kindness in your mind.
What’s more the novel also tells us to be brave. Oliver was brave enough to overcome all the problems he had met. No matter how difficult the problem is we can’t give up we must try our best to solve it.
From Oliver Twist I have learnt a lot .It’s really a good novel.
篇6:应对雾霾我有招
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+ 加入清单碧海蓝天是我们的梦想,在这个到处是雾霾的城市里,我们对蓝天的渴望显得更为迫切。
记得上周末妈妈带我去上兴趣班,一路上,我们的整辆汽车都沉浸在雾霾当中,双眼好似被一双轻纱掩盖着,外面的景物若隐若现。一开始,妈妈以为是车的挡风玻璃起雾了,打开暖气,想方设法让这些雾散走,可将近开了10分钟,雾仍然没散开。后来,我们才恍然大悟,挡风玻璃上已经没雾了,现在的雾是在空气里的。妈妈望着这样的天空,说:“哎,现在的雾霾严重到了这种程度,以后的人们该怎么生活?我们人类一定要想出对策来制服雾霾。”听了妈妈的这番话,我心里萌生了一个新念头,过几天不就是植树节吗?而且下午不正好有空吗?
上完课,我们直达花鸟市场花买了三株小树苗,接着就来到小区的荒地上开始植树。我们一家人开始动手了,前提是每人完成一株。我拿起铁锹使出了喝奶的劲去挖坑,可是地上的泥土很顽固,老跟我作对,怎么都不肯放手离开大地妈妈的怀抱。旁边的爸爸告诉我可以用脚来帮忙出力。于是我按照爸爸所说的,用脚去踩住铁锹,果然泥土就投降了。坑挖好了,我再看看旁边的妈妈,动作比我慢多了,我心里一阵窃喜。紧接着,我立马拿过树苗,插了进去,一放手,咚,掉了!看来一个人的力量太小了,老爸又来帮忙了,他扶着小树苗,我不停地挥动着铁锹把土埋上,此时又用上刚才老爸教的那招,让脚来帮忙,这样土会埋得更严实。手脚并用,看来成效真不错。
仔细瞧瞧自己亲手栽种的树,越看越喜欢,忍不住笑了。同时爸爸妈妈的成果也都完工了。我望着眼前的三株小树苗,表情有点变了,妈妈纳闷地问我怎么了?我不高兴地说:“这片荒地上就这三株可怜的树苗,对环境的绿化起得了作用吗?”妈妈摸着我的头,说:“傻孩子,天底下像你这样的有心人多的是,不信下次你再来看,这一片将会是一片绿海,而且你平时可以节约更多的零花钱来种树,我们并不是要在植树节才要植树。多多植树,肯定能把雾霾这大魔鬼给赶走的!”
听了妈妈的一番话,我松了一口气,立马又有一个新的想法跳出脑海。今天我不单单自己种树,还要去呼吁身边的小伙伴一起来种树,用它们的热心肠换一份新鲜的空气,让人类居住的家园不再被雾霾所困扰!
篇7:英语六级写作方法技巧
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+ 加入清单英语是一种语言,从语言学角度来看,学生在掌握一定数量的词汇与语法知识后,就要用来表达自己的思想、见解,这些落实到纸面上就是英语写作。为提高大家的英语写作能力和技巧,下面小编为大家带来英语六级写作方法技巧,欢迎大家学习!
英语六级写作方法技巧:
方法一:叙述法
叙述法发展段落主要是按照事物本身的时间或空间的排列顺序,通过对一些特有过渡连接词的使用,有层次分步骤地表达主题句的一种写作手段。用这种方法展开段落,作者能够清楚连贯地交待事物的本末,从而可以使读者可以清晰、完整地理解文章的含义,例如:,
In the flat opposite, a woman heard the noise outside. When she looked out through the window, she discovered that her neighbor was threatened by someone. She immediately called the police station. In answer to the call, a patrol police car arrived at the scene of the crime quickly. Three policemen went inside the flat at once, and others guarded outside the building to prevent anyone from escaping.,
这段是按照事物发展的先后顺序,叙述从发现案情、报警、到警察赶到、包围现场的过程。全文脉络清晰,叙述的层次感强,结构紧凑。
常用于叙述法中的过渡连接词有:first, an the beginning, to start with, after that, later, then, afterwards, in the end, finally等。
方法二:列举法
作者运用列举法,是通过列举一系列的论据对topic sentence中摆出的论点进行广泛、全面地陈述或解释,列举的顺序可以按照所列各点内容的相对重要性、时间、空间等进行。,
Yesterday was one of those awful days for me when everything I did went wrong. First, I didnt hear my alarm clock and arrived late for work. Then, I didnt read my diary properly and forgot to get to an important meeting with my boss. During the coffee break, I dropped my coffee cup and spoilt my new skirt. At lunch time, I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that was in it. After lunch, my boss was angry because I hadnt gone to the meeting. Then I didnt notice a sign on a door that said "Wet Paint" and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldnt get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in and cut my hand.
根据本段主题句中的关键词组everything I did went wrong,作者列举了8点内容,分别由first, then, during the coffee break, after lunch time等连接词语引出,使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内容连贯。
常用于列举法的过渡连接词有:for one thing , for another, finally, besides, moreover, one another , still another, first, second, also等。
方法三:重复法
句子的一部分反复出现在段落中,这就是重复法。它往往造成一种步步紧逼的气氛,使文章结构紧凑,有感染力。比如:
Since that time, which is far enough away from now, I have often thought that few people know what secrecy there is in the young, under terror. I was in mortal terror of the young man who wanted my heart and liver; I was in mortal terror of my interlocutor with the iron leg; I was in mortal terror of myself, from whom an awful promise had been extracted; --
该段中反复应用了I was in mortal terror of …我经常处于恐怖之中。
以上, 我们结合具体文章讨论了展开段落的几种方法。在实际写作中,我们往往不必拘泥于一种写作方法,而是将若干方法穿插在一起,使文章有声有色。
方法四:因果分析法
在阐述某一现象的段落中,常采用因果分析法。例如:
The role of women in todays society is changing. One reason is that women have begun to assert themselves as independent people through the womens movement. Also, women are aware of the alternatives to staying at home. Another reason is that increasing numbers of women who enter new fields and interests serve as role models for other women. Moreover, men are becoming more conscious of the abilities of women and have begun to view their independence positively.
本段中,主题句提出了一种社会现象,推展句则对产生这种现象的原因作出各种解释。 常用于因果分析法的连接词有:because, so, as a result等。
方法五:对比法
将同类的事物按照某种特定的规则进行比较分析是一种常用的思维方法。通过对比,更容易阐述所述对象之间的异同和优缺点,例如:
The heart of an electronic computer lies in its vacuum tubes, or transistors. Its electronic circuits work a thousand times faster than the nicer cells in the human brain. A problem that might take a human being a long time to solve can be solved by a computer in one minute.
在这段文字上, 作者为了突出电子计算机运行速度之快,首先将它与人脑进行了比较, "-- a thousand times faster than --" ;而后,又将这一概念具体到了 "a problem"上,通过对比使读者从 "-- a long time -- in one minute"上有更加直观的认识。
常用于对本法或比较法上的过渡连接词有:than, compared with等。
篇8:雾霾来了作文500字
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+ 加入清单有这么一句关于雾霾的“名言”。“遛狗不见狗,狗绳提在手,见绳不见手,狗叫我才走”
早晨起来,拉开窗帘,望一眼窗外,感觉就像自己眼瞎了一样。看不到湛蓝的天,看不到悠悠的白云。天地之间一片混沌,一切都是灰色的。连对面彩色的楼房,也只有朦胧的轮廓。
在我们不经意之间,雾霾已经悄悄的笼罩着整个城市。
每天上学之前,都要全副武装,生怕雾霾被自己吸进肺里。但是,这又有什么用?
路上的车还是呼呼的排着废气,远处的工厂也在不断地排着滚滚黑烟,路两边的树也看不见了,人们都带着白色口罩。
那么,这令人厌恶的雾霾又是怎样产生的呢?
我们许多家庭都有小汽车,但在我们坐在小汽车里准备去旅游的同时,我们的小汽车排出的尾气,却在悄悄的给我们身后的雾霾做着贡献。
在城市的偏远郊区,一些化工厂正在“大显身手”,那日夜排放的浓浓黑烟,正在慢慢的融入空气之中。
在元旦的烟花晚会中,那绚丽多彩的烟花,那噼里啪啦的爆竹,让空气中烟雾腾腾,变得非常混浊,空气质量急剧下降。这些就是造成雾霾的主要原因,它们在带给我们快捷方便、赏心悦目的同时,也悄悄地给我们带来了意想不到的后果。
雾霾的天气,我们呼吸的是混浊的气体。空气中的霾会引起肺炎等疾病。1952年,英国伦敦的那场雾霾似无形的杀手,在短短五天内就夺取了4000人的生命,在之后两个月内有夺去了8000人的生命。我们由此可见雾霾的威力是多么强大。
雾霾这么严重,我们该怎样防范呢?
我们要出门戴口罩,吃清淡的食品,多喝水。在雾霾天气中,我们要少开窗通风。而且还要适当的补充维生素D。当你从外边回到室内,要洗手、洗脸、漱口。而且一定要减少室外活动。如果一定要运动运动的话,可以做室内操。
我们要的是清新的空气,要的是健康的体魄。请不要以牺牲健康为代价,而换来所谓的美好生活。少开车,绿色出行,多种树,保护森林。治雾霾,从我做起。
篇9:关于治理雾霾
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+ 加入清单随着空气质量的恶化,阴霾天气现象出现增多,危害加重。近期我国不少地区把阴霾天气现象并入雾一起作为灾害性天气预警预报。统称为“雾霾天气”。 霾:也称灰霾(烟霞) 空气中的灰尘、硫酸、硝酸、有机碳氢化合物等粒子也能使大气混浊,视野模糊并导致能见度恶化,如果水平能见度小于10000米时,将这种非水成物组成的气溶胶系统造成的视程障碍称为霾 140多万平方公里雾霾笼罩,8亿以上人口受到影响,这样的天气还要“霾”多久? 江苏部分地区在20天以上。 今天严重污染的空气,我们每一个人呼吸着它,我们许多人也在制造着它。要想明天中国更好,不妨从今天自己开始。中国工程院院士钟南山表示,大气污染比非典可怕得多,谁都跑不掉。
每天从电视看到雾霾的预警,心中不免为今后的生活担忧 对机动车尾气、煤烟、扬尘等污染展开专项治理那是政府的事,作为一介平民 ,也要尽自己微薄之力:出行时多乘坐公共交通工具,坐车每公里就消耗0。12升汽油。
节约用电,每用一度电就消耗了350克煤,取暖最终也消耗大量的煤。而煤和油燃烧都会产生大量的二氧化硫、氮氧化物、粉尘、微粒、重金属等污染物。
树立了环保低碳的生活观念,我们的生活品质并不会降低,反而会减少污染排放、节省能源消耗。
春节临近,不放鞭炮,减少烟雾排放。
呼吁人们从我做起,从现在做起,如果每个人都能理智消费,抵制浪费性消费,实现绿色出行、绿色生活,就会为环境的清新宜人作出一份贡献。
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篇10:雾霾之都作文600字
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+ 加入清单2030年,中国的H市成功入选全世界最成功的工业城市之一;2036年,H市的上空从原先天蓝色变成了灰色,大气污染越来越严重了;2040年,在H市生活的人们不得已戴上了防毒面具,来抵挡大气中的有毒物质,H市从工业之冠变成雾霾之都……
他叫杨衡,刚刚15岁,2026年出生,虽然年纪不大,但也算是见证了H市的变化。他从一开始对H市入选的兴奋,到现在的怨恨,其过程中问过无数次父母,而得到的回答无一例外是:傻孩子,灰色的天空是科技的象征啊!你应该自豪!而他,也的确这样做了,直到他的父母因为肺中毒而死……从此以后,每当他凝视天空时,总会出现他父母的那张脸,那张脸还不停的说话,可杨衡要注意听时却又听不清了。这一天,杨衡在一个废弃的车库里捡到了一个草籽,本来杨衡完全可以凭借着它,赚一大笔钱(那个时候草籽已经变成了稀有物品),可他却找来了一个花盆,在里面装上泥土,把草籽种了下去,他想让久违的绿色来安慰自己。杨衡又是浇水又是施肥的,没过几天,它就发芽了。看着那充满生机的绿色,他心里的烦恼也少了一些。结果第二天,他发现草芽已经折断了,而叶片上满是黑色的灰尘,杨衡面无表情举起了花盆,然后狠狠地向地面砸去……那一刻,他听清了人脸再说什么:来吧,来吧,这里绿树成荫,这里无忧无虑!于是,他做出了一个决定。那一天,人们看见一个少年走出了门外,仿佛在思考一件很重要的事情,紧接着,他一把抓下了防毒面具,马上,有一些人跑了出去把他救回了屋里,可惜小时候那个少年还是因为肺中毒,而去世了。没错,那个少年就是杨衡,一个渴望在蓝天下奔跑的少年。
而此时的他,正在和他的父母一起在树林里跑啊,跑啊……
篇11:有关雾霾haze的高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单导语:近年来,雾霾天气已经成为日常生活的一个正确的在中国的很大一部分。人们不得不戴上口罩避免呼吸有毒空气。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Recently,Hazeweather has become a daily one right here in large part of China.People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air.So it is necessary to find out the reason why leads to that and work out the resolution.If we trace the cause for haze weather ,the main points are as follows ,first,china s air quality standards are rather lax and evaluation factors are limited,so you will see that current air appraisal system has defects.Second,some people just go for economic interests instead of turning out products according to relevant law and regulations.They tend to use obsolete equipment in which they are high likely to emit a great deal of wasted air.
Third,across our society ,relevant protection awareness has not built up so that people havent formed a habit of using green product and saving energy as much as possible.Just for the sake of convience to go out,people rely more and more on travelling and working by car while car is the main cause for the haze weather
To settle this problem,a series of meaures should be taken as follows.First ,we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate pollutants.Second,we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people s daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze.
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近年来,雾霾天气已经成为日常生活的一个正确的在中国的很大一部分。人们不得不戴上口罩避免呼吸有毒空气。因此有必要找出原因,导致和解决的决议。如果我们跟踪灰霾天气的成因,主要有以下几点,第一,中国的空气质量标准是相当宽松的评价因素是有限的,所以你会看到,目前的空气评估体系有缺陷。二,有些人只是为了经济利益而出的产品根据相关的法律法规。他们倾向于使用陈旧的设备,他们有很高的可能发出大量浪费的空气。
第三,在我们的社会中,相关的保护意识还没有建立起来,人们已经形成了习惯使用绿色产品和节能的尽可能多的。只是为了方便出门的缘故,人们越来越依赖于旅行和工作的汽车,而汽车是雾霾天气的主要原因
为了解决这个问题,应采取一系列措施如下:第一,我们应该加强空气监测的微粒污染物浓度降低。其次,我们应该制定更加严格的法律法规,不断完善我们现有的环境保护法律规范人们的日常行为和工业生产和惩罚那些工厂忽视保护和保持发射危险材料造成的阴霾。
篇12:写雾霾天气的英语作文双语
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+ 加入清单As the saying goes "qiu dong smog knife to kill". We can see and catch "smog" actually have bigger influence on the body, especially the high incidence of respiratory and cardiovascular and cerebrovascular diseases in the elderly group.
1. The effects on the respiratory system. Haze composition is very complicated, including hundreds of atmospheric chemistry particulate matter. Which is bad for your health mainly aerosol particles less than 10 microns in diameter, such as mineral particles, sea salt, sulfate, nitrate, organic aerosol particles, fuel and car exhaust, etc, it can directly enter and adhesion in the human respiratory tract and alveoli. Especially the submicron particles are deposited on upper and lower respiratory tract and alveolar, causes the disease such as the acute rhinitis and acute bronchitis. For obstructive bronchus asthma, chronic bronchitis, emphysema and chronic respiratory diseases such as chronic obstructive pulmonary disease patients, haze weather can make the illness acute or acute exacerbation. If this kind of environment will cause lung cancer for a long time.
2. The effects on the cardiovascular system. Haze weather pollutants in the air, air pressure is low, easy to induce acute cardiovascular disease. Such as heavy fog, the moisture content is very high, if people in outdoor activities and sports, the bodys sweat is not easy to discharge, cause people bosom frowsty, increased blood pressure.
3. The fog haze weather can also result in close formation ultraviolet weakened, activity of the infectious pathogen in the air, increase of infectious diseases.
4. Reduce because of the fog the sun, ultraviolet irradiation in children is insufficient, inadequate vitamin D in the body to generate, the absorption of calcium significantly reduce, serious can cause rickets in infants, childrens growth to slow down.
5. Affect mental health. Heavy fog weather depression, due to weak light and easy to let a person produce mental laziness, depression, and pessimism, encounter something goes wrong and even easier to spin out of control.
6. Affect the traffic safety. Low vision in haze weather, visibility, air quality is poor, easy to cause traffic jams, traffic accidents.
常言道“秋冬毒雾杀人刀”。我们看得见、抓不着的“雾霾”其实对身体的影响较大,尤其是对心脑血管和呼吸系统疾病高发的老年人群体。
1.对呼吸系统的影响。霾的组成成分非常复杂,包括数百种大气化学颗粒物质。其中有害健康的主要是直径小于10微米的气溶胶粒子,如矿物颗粒物、海盐、硫酸盐、硝酸盐、有机气溶胶粒子、燃料和汽车废气等,它能直接进入并粘附在人体呼吸道和肺泡中。尤其是亚微米粒子会分别沉积于上、下呼吸道和肺泡中,引起急性鼻炎和急性支气管炎等病症。对于支气管哮喘、慢性支气管炎、阻塞性肺气肿和慢性阻塞性肺疾病等慢性呼吸系统疾病患者,雾霾天气可使病情急性发作或急性加重。如果长期处于这种环境还会诱发肺癌。
2.对心血管系统的影响。雾霾天气空气中污染物多,气压低,容易诱发心血管疾病的急性发作。比如雾大的时候,水汽含量非常的高,如果人们在户外活动和运动的话,人体的汗就不容易排出,造成人们胸闷、血压升高。
3.雾霾天气还可导致近地层紫外线的减弱,使空气中的传染性病菌的活性增强,传染病增多。
4.由于雾天日照减少,儿童紫外线照射不足,体内维生素D生成不足,对钙的吸收大大减少,严重的会引起婴儿佝偻病、儿童生长减慢。
5.影响心理健康。阴沉的雾霾天气由于光线较弱及导致的低气压,容易让人产生精神懒散、情绪低落及悲观情绪,遇到不顺心的事情甚至容易失控。
6.影响交通安全。出现霾天气时,视野能见度低,空气质量差,容易引起交通阻塞,发生交通事故。
篇13:走出雾霾
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+ 加入清单灿烂的阳光终于驱散层层雾霾,照射在了我的身上,我又见到了久违的太阳,尽管太阳的笑脸还没有那么灿烂,但是我的心里已经感受到了阵阵暖意,倍感舒畅.
回想起刚刚过去的十几天雾霾天气,真可谓苦不堪言!记不清从哪天起,本该迎着灿烂的朝霞去上学的我,却是在浓浓的雾霾中摸索前进,心情很压抑,严重影响了我的学习兴趣.连续几天过去了,天空依然雾霾重重,不见消散.
我无意中翻了一下报纸,才知道现在这种天气叫雾霾天气,它不同于普通的大雾,雾霾天气对我们的身体尤其是呼吸道系统有着严重的危害.雾霾天气的形成有多种原因,其中最重要的一点就是环境的污染,各大媒体呼吁,减少私家车的运行.
对,保护环境,从我做起.心动不如行动,上周六,妈妈正准备发动汽车送我去上课外班,我在一旁大叫到:“妈妈,不许开车,减少排放.”妈妈只好把我包裹严实后,骑着电动车出发了.尽管瑟瑟的寒风伴着电动车的疾驰打在脸上很疼,但我的心里却觉得坦然而温暖,只是这雾霾中的空气吸到肚子里,让人感到憋的慌.
急切盼望着这种天气快点结束,那样我就可以再次自由自在的进行户外玩耍,那样我就可以再次享受快乐的体育课,那样我就可以再次迎着灿烂的朝霞快乐乐的上学……
篇14:雾都孤儿英语读后感带翻译
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+ 加入清单I read a book foreign classics, "oliver twist". It is the author of the famous realist writer dickens. The contents of the book is very wonderful, let me fascinated.
Her main protagonist is an orphan named oliver twist, the book tells the story of oliver when I was a child. He was born in an orphanage, there had been bullied, sold to an undertaker of the family. However, because once the undertaker misunderstood him, severely beat him, so he fled to the legend the finer London. But in London, he unfortunately fell into a thief wat.
Although he suffered so miserable, but he eventually strong to survive. With the help of the man, he was able to solve his life mystery, found his sister, and her sister. Oliver had a family of care and help, I felt glad for him, too.
London at that time there are a lot of poor people, they have been bullied, and even in the desperate situation. So, in order to survive, when the robber, do a thief... They didnt like oliver, stick to the bottom of the heart in the depth of the pure. Oliver believes that only in this way, can find a way out for himself.
"Oliver twist" let me learn to ponder, gave me great inspiration. It is the first Ive ever read foreign novels this tome, I will treasure the book well.
我读了一本外国名著——《雾都孤儿》。它的作者是英国著名的现实主义作家狄更斯。书中的内容很精彩,让我着迷。
书中的主人公是一个孤儿,名叫奥利弗·特维斯特,这本书讲述了奥利弗小时候的故事。他出生在孤儿院,在那儿受尽了欺凌后,被卖到了一个殡仪员的家庭。可是,因为有一次殡仪员误解了他,狠狠地打了他,所以他就逃到了传说中美好的伦敦。但是到了伦敦后,他又不幸陷入了贼窟。
尽管他的遭遇如此悲惨,他却最终坚强地活了下来。在好心人的帮助下,他解开了自己的身世之谜,找到了自己的姐姐,与姐姐相依为命。奥利弗终于有了亲人的关怀和帮助,我也为他感到庆幸。
那时的伦敦有很多穷人,他们都饱受过欺凌,甚至到了走投无路的境地。于是,有的为了生存,就去当强盗,做小偷……他们都没有像奥利弗一样——坚守着心底深处的纯净。奥利弗相信,只有这样,才能为自己找到出路。
《雾都孤儿》让我学会深思,给了我很大启发。它是我读过的第一本大部头外国名著,我要好好地珍藏这本书。
篇15:雾霾周记
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+ 加入清单雾霾,从13年慢慢的来到了15年新的羊年。雾霾已经导致了多人生病,现在人们嘴里常常说出的雾霾,其实就是PM2.5。雾霾是人们健康的杀手,已经影响到了我国四分之一的国土,约有六亿人遭受雾霾袭击。
雾霾的形成,已经影响到了许许多多的人。专家说‘雾霾的形成是由空气中的灰尘、硫酸、硝酸、有机碳氢化合物等大量细小的细菌等形成了霾。’因为现在到了冬天,天气比较潮湿所以霾一受到潮湿的天气就会形成雾,所以经常被人们称为“雾霾”。
雾霾里面有许许多多人们留下的痕迹,汽车尾气、化工厂排气、化工厂排污水等……
人们在这个世界上给后代留下的够多了,可是现在的大家给后代却留下了一个十分不好的一种气体那就是我们现在的雾霾。
我们大家现在要一起联合在一起抵抗病毒的新的援军——雾霾大将。我们可以多种树,少开车。我们每次出门的时候也要带上口罩哟!我们也尽量少出门。
雾霾也影响着我们的心情,开车时一定要注意前方的安全,不要疲倦驾驶因为雾霾也会让人们感到疲倦。如果遇到不好的事情,要控制好自己的心情,不要暴躁,要心平气和的去解决。
在交通方面,不要急躁,因为有霾,就会有雾,所以会容易堵车和发生交通事故。
所以请大家,一起防护雾霾吧!一起行动起来。
我们大家也要一起多运动,有雾霾的时候尽量不要出门,如果没有急事不要出门。我们也能可以在室内里面做一些小运动。
我们大家一起保护地球,保护我们的家园吧!
篇16:有关雾霾的英语作文精选
全文共 2123 字
+ 加入清单Is a gray morning, I lean on the window cant open the window, his nose on the glass outside look, hard outside all over all over the sky of dust, vaguely between several car shook the yellow headlight in crawl slowly. Everything appears lifeless. Even the sun lazy appearance, dawn, morning glory, take away the feeling, the sun this morning.
Is a fog day, dont go out, reduce the outdoor activity, the damn haze seems to want to put our imprison in limited space, a cold, cough, fever, this hateful haze as if the world wants to make human bacteria, we always put the bad weather as before, the thunder and lightning thunderstorm, lightning has its moments of shock and stimulation, however, wind and rain and give a person infinite hopes and fantasies, only the fog haze altogether. How I wish I blew a gust of wind blows away the all the fog haze, the next rain to wash away the earth clean.
Suppress the whole day, I thought of outside activities, the grandmother I wear masks, to tell the truth, I hate this mask, it hindered the exchange of people, hides the true colors of people. Like the suspect, like masked men, true sorry, plot on the lawn, the neighbor aunt dog wears it at the dog for a walk, aunt wearing thick shallow blue masks, the dog was also wearing a huge black mask, it seems that the fog haze also endanger animals, suddenly I heard a few tall camphor tree bird singing loudly in the scenery, they are so brave in the fog. All of a sudden, I understood them, they are trying to shout the slogan of environmental protection, reduce pollution, protect the environment, protect our common home - the earth.
又是一个灰蒙蒙的早晨,我倚在窗前不敢开窗,鼻子贴着玻璃使劲往外瞧,外面的一切笼罩在漫天的尘雾中,依稀间有几辆汽车晃着昏黄的大灯在慢慢爬行。一切都显得毫无生气。连太阳也懒得露脸,黎明、晨曦、朝阳都远离了这个早晨。
又是一个雾霾日,不要外出,减少室外活动,这该死的雾霾似乎想把我们禁锢在有限的空间,感冒、咳嗽、发热,这可恶的雾霾仿佛想把人间变成细菌的世界,以前我们总把恶劣的天气说成是电闪雷鸣,风雨交加,然而雷电有它瞬间的震撼和刺激,风雨又给人无限的憧憬和幻想,唯有这雾霾十恶不赦。我多么希望刮一阵大风吹散这满天的雾霾,下一场大雨把地球冲刷得干干净净。
憋了一整天,我想到外面活动一下,外婆逼着我戴上口罩,说实在的,我讨厌这口罩,它阻碍了人与人的交流,掩盖了人的本来面目。像疑犯,像蒙面人,实在不好受,小区的草坪上,邻居阿姨带着它的爱犬在遛狗,阿姨戴着厚厚的浅蓝色的口罩,那狗居然也戴着大大的黑口罩,看来这雾霾也危及到了动物,忽然我听到高大的香樟树上有几只小鸟在叽叽喳喳地高声鸣叫,雾霾里它们是那么地勇敢。突然,我听懂了它们的叫声,它们在竭力喊着环保口号:减少污染,保护环境,保护我们共同的家园——地球。
篇17:英语作文写作技巧与方法
全文共 2454 字
+ 加入清单一、明确作文要求,提高写作能力
一篇好的作文,要有一个主题思想,整篇作文应该是紧扣文章主题,遵循特定的文体格式,选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构,内容统一、连贯,语法、拼写、标点 正确,用词恰当。很多同学在准备英语写作时找不到方向,一味的想在考研英语写作上面抓分,却又不知道怎么样提高。杨老师在此特别提醒考生首先要学会抓住考研英语写作要领,尤其注意文章逻辑关系在阅读中的运用。逻辑关系散布在文章的句子内部、句句之间、以及段落之间。最基本的逻辑关系有以下几种:
1、因果关系:as a result ,therefore,hence,consequently,because,for, due to, hence, consequently等等。
2、并列、递进关系:and, or, then,in addition,besides,in other words,moreover等等
3、转折关系:however,but, yet, in fact等等。
这些其实是已经很熟悉的逻辑提示词在文章中起的效果,并非仅仅是衔接文章的句子,从阅读的角度来看,其实同时在给我们某种提示,告诉我们哪些句子是有效信息,相对重要的信息,哪些信息是相对不重要的信息,因为我们在英语写作的时候,有一条清晰的思路,你不是为了完整翻译文章而进行阅读,而是为了获取主旨来写作。
二、摆脱无话可说 练习“三段式”思维
在英语作文写作时,无话可说的确让人比较头疼,无话可说是一个极端,有的考生题目看得懂,提纲也一目了然,就是不知道该说什么,在考场上头脑一片空白,想到的也只是空泛的东西,在考试过程当中,这会在很大程度上影响大家的做题效果和做题速度。杨老师表示,当头脑出现空白时,应该从具体的、细小的、琐碎的、微不足道的事物所引发的思考变成观点,再进行论述。例如,领导讲话总是第一部分、、第二部分、第三部分…这样条理比较清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
三、用词准确保证语言连贯
考研英语写作中,同样是一篇作文,在没有语法、词汇等基础性错误的前提下,一个考生的句式平平,而另外一个考生的句式灵活多变,非常漂亮,毫无疑问,后者肯定比前者的分数高。但写英语作文时最忌讳的是用一些模棱两可的词,表达不够准确,而且考试时要特别注意语法、词语、语气、标点符号等,避免单词拼写错误、语法错误,不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词,不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。建议考生考试时,最好选择自己最有把握的词汇、短语和句式。
很多考生习惯背诵模版,在写作文是喜欢套用背诵模版,但由于仓促,紧张等原因,很容易犯一些简单的错误,如语句不通。所以提醒考生选材时切忌胡子眉毛一把抓,词语堆积,不伦不类。前后及段落之间在逻辑关系上要紧密衔接,不能把没有任何逻辑关系的词放在一起,可以用恰当的关联词把思想连贯的表达出来。总之,无论想要套用那个模版,前提都要保证语言通顺,文章思想连贯。此外,要有自己的style,一来通过背诵或研究范文,把握考研英语作文的整体结构特点,以及写作格式,二来要在研究范文的基础上寻找自己的闪光点,比如闪光词汇。如果大家仔细研究真题,就会发现,几乎所有的高分作文都有一个共同点,那就是都具有几个闪光词汇,这个词汇可能并不是什么高级词汇,但是你能把它的延伸意,或者说你能把我它的一词多义,并且应用到你的文章中。
四、长短句巧搭配 精悍短语当亮点
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。此外短小精辟的句子,也可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although oneaction is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy theintellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
杨老师强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
篇18:雾霾作文350字
全文共 342 字
+ 加入清单这一周的杭州的雾霾非常严重,我们学校已经停止了一切户外活动。老师说杭州的雾霾PM2·5数值已经突破了记录,空气已经达到了严重污染的程度。
雾霾里包含着什么呢?我跑去问爸爸,爸爸说:“雾霾里有二氧化硫、氮氧化物和可吸入颗粒物等,反正都是危害人体健康的东西吧!”
过了一会儿,雾霾向我们这儿飘来了,我急忙戴上口罩,这时爸爸说:“这世上没有不透风的墙。”我问爸爸:“这句话是什么意思呢?”爸爸回答说:“意思就是说你戴着口罩也没有用,因为雾霾无处不在的,我们人就是无处可躲的,所以你戴着口罩只不过少吸了些雾霾罢了。”“原来如此啊!”
这几天晚上,我咳嗽很厉害,爸爸忙带我去医院。谁知,医院人山人海,雾霾居然能让这么多人生病,所以我一定要保护环境,让雾霾不再出现,保护我们美丽的地球,我们共同的家园。
篇19:英语四级写作要领与方法步骤有哪些
全文共 603 字
+ 加入清单考生无论遇到哪一类试题,都要仔细审题,根据题目的要求确定文章的类型和中心内容,并对你自己熟悉的、可写的内容进行筛选、整理、规划、列出提纲,这是很重要的一步。提纲列好后,要围绕提纲内容展开说明自己的观点和结论,不要在写作时抛开提纲。一篇好的作文应该具备以下5个方面:
(1)内容切题,主题鲜明。
(2)表达清楚准确,条理清晰。
(3)结构完整,衔接流畅自然。
(4)句法正确多样。
(5)用词恰当丰富。
1.提纲
提纲是写作一篇文章的详细计划、安排。提纲准备的目的是:
(1)计划要写什么。
(2)文章的思想的表达顺序。
(3)如何安排段落。
(4)使写作从头到尾围绕主题进行。内容一般用短语和词。主题、副题表达先后顺序,要用数字标明。提纲内容的安排是写作一篇好文章的关键。
2.依据提纲写作
(1)初稿
在完成提纲安排后,动笔写作的第一步是打初稿,在写初稿时要争取做到心中有数,胸有成竹,经过反复练习后,能够按照提纲安排落笔成文,一气呵成。如果突发奇想,也可修改提纲,顺理成章,但切忌偏离正题。在初稿写作时要有意识加大行距,为文章的修改留有余地。
(2)定稿及修改方法
在完成初稿后,修改是必不可少的过程。修改文章要注意以下几点:
①内容是否切题,论点是否鲜明,论证是否合理、严密。
②段落衔接时过渡使用是否合理,语句是否通顺、有没有语法错误,用词是否恰当。
③拼写是否正确,标点符号、大小写是否有错误,有无其他笔误。
篇20:英语写作教学方法
全文共 1902 字
+ 加入清单英文写作是一种综合能力训练,临阵磨枪是不能取得好成绩的,也是不可取的,应该重视平时的英语作文训练。下面是小编帮大家整理的英语写作教学方法,希望大家喜欢。
高考英语作文占25分,有着不可忽视的比重,它足可以说明写作教学在高中英语教学中占有相当重要的位置。然而高考现状却不乐观,部分学生由于平时缺乏足够的训练,所以对英语写作要么感到无从下手,充满畏难情绪,胡乱写些英语单词或不着边际的句子充当字数,权作心理慰藉;要么用词不当,构句无章,错误频出,行文不流畅,表达不地道,无写作质量可言。如何提高学生的写作水平和促进写作教学呢?笔者认为应注意下列几个问题:
一、注重写作教学的基本训练阶段
语言教学最高层次是应用。英语属于结构语言,它有自己的基本句型、固定搭配、固定短语等,这些都是不可变的,要想在写作中用上它们,用好它们,必须加强这方面的基本训练。首先,加强五种基本句型结构教学。几乎所有的英语句型都是五种句型的扩大、延伸或变化,因此训练学生“写”就要抓住五种基本句型的训练,让他们把这五种基本句型记牢,不断运用。五种基本句型是:
(1)S+V;
(2)S+V+O;
(3)S+V+O+O;
(4)S+V+P;
(5)S+V+O+C。
五种基本句型虽然能表达一定的意思,但无法比较自由地表达思想,因此还必须对学生进一步进行扩句训练,在课堂上充分发挥学生的想像力,进行扩句练习。其次,加强句型教学,要对一些句子进行分析,增强他们利用各种句子进行一意多种表达的训练。再次,充分利用新教材中“巩固语言的练习,”对学生进行基本语感的训练。
二、注重写作训练的多样化
听、说、读、写四种技能是相互依赖的,说的能力有赖于听的能力,进而有助于写作。听是理解和吸收口头信息的手段。听和读是输入,只有达到足够的输入量,才能保证学生具有较好的说和写的输出能力。因此,在日常的教学中要注重写作训练的多样化。
首先,在Dialogue的教学中,除了听录音、对话、表演和编写相似的对话外,还要求学生把对话改写成一段短文,这样就要求学生在变成短文的过程中,注意时态、语态、人称和前后的逻辑关系,从而为写作打下基础。
其次,在Reading教学中,回答问题时要求学生必须用自己的语言,且人称、时态要做相应的变化,这样既能搞懂本意,又能用同义句表达,提高了表达能力。还要让学生用课文中的词组进行复述,学生复述课文不是件容易的事,既要把握课文中的重点,逻辑关系,又要用自己的语言把主要内容表达出来。这样既锻炼了他们组织篇章结构、句子与句子之间逻辑关系的能力,又提高了语言的精炼度,使自己的写作能力有了很快地提高。
再次,在“Listening”教学中,除了让学生听懂做完听力练习之外,还让他们把练习作为guide进行复述听力材料,有时还让他们写在作文本上。
三、注重写作训练的规范化
高中起始阶段的写作训练,培养学生的写作模式是非常重要的。我按教师用书上说明的写作步骤,即:①构思(讨论题目);②写提纲(理顺思想的逻辑关系);③起草(打草稿);④校订(检查错误,重新安排内容);⑤修改(定稿)。对学生进行写作模式的训练。这样看起来比较麻烦,但避免了反复,养成了好的写作习惯。再就是书写和文体格式要规范。严格要求学生正确、端正、熟练地书写字母、单词和句子,注意大小写和标点符号,养成良好的书写习惯。。同时对各种文体特点、格式要讲清楚,使学生熟悉规范的书面表达形式,用正确的标准评析和规范自己的书面表达。
四、注重教师的指导作用
教师批改是写作教学的有机组成部分,批改过程中,教师的指导作用就在于肯定学生的成绩,指出错误,给学生以恰当的评价。但在批改过程中,如果抓住学生的错误不放,有错必纠,改到最后,就变成了教师自己的作品;如果对错误视而不见,写得再多也收效甚微。我根据教学实践,对于新教材中的“有指导的写”的写作训练,规定学生限时写完,同桌、前后桌互相批改,重新行文,再上交。这样批改起来就非常轻松,而且典型错误,很容易找出,有利于讲评。对于新教材中的“自由写作”训练,我指导学生弄清主题,抓住要点,组词造句,安排好顺序,过渡到段落形成短文,多用熟悉的单词和句型,多用五种基本句型表达。然后让学生共同研究,互相评论写好的草稿,以便最后写出修改的稿子来,这就有助于减轻教师修改作业的负担,也有利于学生写作水平的提高。
总之,英文写作是一个学生综合能力的书面体现,是一个长期复杂的训练过程。因此,培养学生的写作能力不能一蹴而就,而要在平时从学生的实际水平出发,有目的、有计划、有要求、有检查、有反馈地进行,由易到难,循序渐进。只有这样,到高考时才能做到厚积薄发、思如泉涌、下笔如有神。