优秀中考英语作文范文30篇带翻译（20篇）

As everyone knows,English is very important today.It has been used

everywhere in the world.It has become the most common language on Internet and

for international trade. If we can speak English well,we will have more chance

to succeed.Because more and more people have taken notice of it,the number of

the people who go to learn English has increased at a high speed.

But for myself,I learn English not only because of its importance and its

usefulness,but also because of my love for it.When I learn English, I can feel a

different way of thinking which gives me more room to touch the world.When I

read English novels,I can feel the pleasure from the book which is different

from reading the translation.When I speak English, I can feel the confident from

my words.When I write English,I can see the beauty which is not the same as our

Chinese…

I love English,it gives me a colorful dream.I hope I can travel around the

world one day. With my good English, I can make friends with many people from

different contries.I can see many places of great intrests.I dream that I can go

to London,because it is the birth place of English.

I also want to use my good English to introduce our great places to the

English spoken people,I hope that they can love our country like us.

I know, Rome was not built in a day. I believe that after continuous hard

study, one day I can speak English very well.

If you want to be loved, you should learn to love and be lovable. So I

believe as I love English everyday , it will love me too.

I am sure that I will realize my dream one day!

Thank you!

亲爱的老师，同学们：

我很高兴可以在这个课堂上做一次演讲。这一次，我想谈谈英语。我的话题是我爱英语。

正如每个人所知，英语在今天十分重要。它已经被应用到世界的各个角落。它已经成为商业上最为通用的一门语言并广泛的用于国际贸易。如果我们能说好英语，我们就有更多的机会成功。因为越来越多的人注意到这一点，学英语的人数正在已很高的速度增长。

但是对我而言，我学英语不仅仅因为它的重要性以及它的实用性，更是因为我喜爱英语。当我学英语时，我可以体会到一种不同的思维方式，它可以给我更多接触世界的空间。当我读英语小说时，我能感受到不同于阅读翻译文的快乐。当我说英语时，我可以感到自信。当我写英语时，我能够感到不同于汉语的那种美……

我爱英语，它给了我一个色彩斑斓的梦。我希望有朝一日我可以畅游世界，用我流利的英语，我可以和世界各地的人交友。我能看到许多的名胜。我希望我能够到伦敦去，因为那里是英语的故乡。

我也希望用我流利的英语来将我们的名胜介绍给说英语的朋友，我希望他们可以像我们一样的爱我们的国家。

我知道，罗马不是一天筑成的。(成功需要日积月累。)我相信在持续不断的努力学习下，总有一天我可以拥有一口流利的英语。

如果你想被爱，你就应该学着去爱他人。所以我相信我对英语的爱定将换来它对我的爱。

我相信总有一天我会实现我的梦!

谢谢!

我的生日

My Birthday

My birthday is on##.My parents and friends celebrate it to me every year.On that day,we usually hold a small birthday party at home and invite my friends to come for a dinner.We chat,watch TV or play games together that we really enjoy ourselves.When we are playing,my parents prepare a delicious dinner.My friends and I like the dishes very much.Of course,I can get some gifts from parents and friends.I am very happy because they always know what I want and need.But,on the other hand,when the birthday comes, I am a year older,so that I must be more sensible and independent.Last but not the least, it’s also a time to show my appreciation to my parents.They work hard and do their best to bring me up.

我的生日是#月#号.我的父母和朋友每年都为我庆祝.那天,我们通常在家举行小聚会,邀请朋友到家里吃晚饭.我们聊天,看电视或者一起玩游戏,大家玩得很开心.当我们玩的时候,我父母给我们准备了可口的晚餐.我和朋友都很喜欢那些菜.

当然,我也从父母和朋友那里得到了礼物.我很高兴,因为他们总是知道我想要和需要什么.但是,另一方面,每当生日到来的时候,我又长了一岁,因此我必须更敏感,更独立.最后但也同样重要的一点是,这也是我向父母表达感激的时候.他们努力工作,尽他们最大的努力抚养我.

How to keep healthy What is the most important thing in the worldI think it is health. You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly. In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins. Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy. What ＇ s more, I think friends are an important part of one ＇ s health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don ＇ t. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends. By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy. 如何保持健康 什么是世界上最重要的事情吗我认为这是健康的。 你可以拿走我们的钱、房子、汽车,甚至我们的衣服,我们可以生存。但是如果我们 的健康被带走了,我们肯定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尽量吃以健康的方式和定期锻 炼。 为了能吃得健康,我通常避免吃高脂肪的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点。我也很少吃肉。 我会吃很多的蔬菜和新鲜水果充足的维生素。 每天做运动有助于我们建立一个强壮的身体。规律的运动的一个重要组成部分,我 们保持身体健康。 更重要的是,我认为朋友是一个重要的部分人的健康。许多研究表明,人们用广泛的 社会交往更少生病比那些没有。我总是感觉更好,当我和朋友在一起比当我独自一人。 当我与朋友一起时,我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和朋友一起大笑。 正确的饮食和有规律的锻炼,我就能让我的身体在一个适当的体重和保持健康。花 时间和我的朋友,我可以让我的大脑以及我的身体快乐。这些事情听起来容易做,但没有 多少人可以管理它们。我认为一个坚强的意志是非常必要的,如果我们想要保持健康。 Sunset In order to see the sunset ， I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill . At that time ， the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldnt even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill ， the light became a bit yellow . After a short while ， it was completely golden ， then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big

red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud coveredmore and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back . 日落 为了看日落,我把一切都准备好了在下午 5 点前。然后我去了东山。 那时,太阳已经在西方了但是它仍然在照耀着。它的光是如此强烈,以至于我甚至无 法睁开眼睛。当我来到东山的时候,阳光已经变得有点黄。一会儿以后,它完全变成了金 黄,然后变成红色。太阳近设置。这就像一个大大的红色的火球。它周围的云也被涂成 了红色。渐渐地,云彩遮盖越来越多的太阳。最后它消失在云。这是黑了,我快步跑回了 家 A trip to the zoo Today is Sunday. Its sunny today . I go to the zoo with my mother. I can see many animals . There are tigers ,lions ,pandas ,snakes and many more. Look ! The pandas are over there . Theyre from China . Look at the baby panda ! Its climbing trees. How cute it is ! I love pandas. Next, we go to see the lions .The lions are so strong . Their mouths are too big. The tigers ae next to them. They are from Asia. They are yellow. At last,we go to see the monkeys . Some are climbing moutains , some are eating bananas . THey re so much fun ! I see many animals at the zoo and I m so happy today! 去动物园 今天是星期天。今天天气晴朗。我去和我妈妈去了动物园。我可以看到很多动物。 有老虎、狮子、熊猫、蛇和许多更多。看!大熊猫们在那里。他们来自中国。看那个婴 儿熊猫!这是爬树。多可爱啊!我喜欢熊猫。 接下来,我们去看狮子。狮子是如此强大。他们的嘴太大。老虎 ae 旁边。他们都 来自亚洲。他们是黄色的。最后,我们去看猴子。有些是攀登山峰,一些人吃香蕉。他们 都太好玩了! 我看到很多动物在动物园里,我太高兴了! love my family love my family,because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What’s my mother jopIs she a teacherYes,you’re right!My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents! On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano,My father go to play basketball.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home. I love my family.Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together! 我的家庭 我爱我的家庭,因为我有一个快乐的家庭.我的爸爸是一名英语教师,他的名字叫 Jacky.他今年 38 岁.他非常喜欢打篮球.我的 妈妈是赶什么呢她是一名教师吗是的.你说对了!我的妈妈是一个很亲切、友善的人, 她今年 37 岁.我妈妈总是勤劳的干活.我爱我的父母. 在星期六和星期天里,我经常去图书馆和弹钢琴.我爸爸去打篮球.有时侯,我们都在 家看电视和听音乐. 我爱我家.因为我

和爸爸妈妈一起生活得很开心! Computre games Computer games is a hot topic nowadays. Some people hold that it is bad. And others hold that it is good. In my view, whether good or bad is determined by the players. If one plays computer game properly in his spare time, computer games can be an excellent source of joy. For example, something impossible in your real life can be realized in the computer games. You can pilot a space craft and travel in the universe. Every coin has two sides. If one plays computer game excessivly, it may affects his eyesight and study. the computer games itself is only a tool like knife. If we use it properly, it can pare apples. But if we use it to attack others. It immediatly becomes an lethal weapon. 电脑游戏是一个热门话题如今。一些人认为它是坏的。其他人则认为这是好的。 在我看来,无论好坏是由球员。 如果一个人玩电脑游戏正确地在业余时间,电脑游戏可以快乐的一个很好来源。例 如,不太可能在生活中你可以意识到计算机中 游戏。你可以驾驶宇宙飞船和宇宙中旅行。每个硬币都有两面。如果一个人玩电 脑游戏,那可能会影响他的视力和学习。 电脑游戏本身只是一种工具像刀一样。如果我们正确的使用它,它可以削去苹果皮。 但是如果我们用它攻击别人。它马上就会成为致命的武器。 My friend I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made GREat proGREss. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future. 我有很多朋友。其中一个是我的同班同学马华。他是一个共青团员和最好的一个 学生在我的类。他很喜欢英语,并且擅长它。他经常练习大声朗读英语。所以他的发音 很好。他总是乐于帮助别人。在他的帮助下,我取得了很大的进步。我已下定决心要赶 上他,加入联盟在不久的将来。 My holiday-我的假期 Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus. Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious. My mouth is now watering again. I will never forget such interesting expirence. 暑假已经到来。我是多么幸福! 我想做的最喜欢的事情是

旅游。我加入了一个户外俱乐部和去海边在浙江和其他 的成员。7 月 20 日,我们开始了我们的旅程在晚上 21:00。我太瞌睡了,我在公共汽车上 睡着了。 突然有人推我。我打开我的眼睛和一个美丽的海洋就在身旁。多么美丽的地方 !我 们在海里游泳和打沙滩排球。风、阳光、蓝天和快乐的男孩和女孩形成一幅精美的图 片!中午,我们煮熟的海鲜像螃蟹、虾、贝壳等等。它们都是那么美味。 我的嘴是现在又流泪了。我 永远不会忘记这有趣的经验。 How did you spend your summer vacation I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there. 我有一个忙碌而有趣的暑假。每天我做作业的时候,所以我做完我的作业前十天,新 学期。我也打打网球和篮球每天和我的朋友们。有时我去看电影,去了公园与我的朋友。 我上网,读书和看电视,每天晚上。我访问祖父母和帮助他们做家务 ,太。我帮助我的父 母打扫房间和做饭。最重要的是,我的父母和我去 Hannan 岛,在那里度过了一个星期。 Hello, everyone. My name is Kelly. I am friendly and honest.I am good at English and maths. I like surfing the internet,playing computer games, watching TV and traveling. I also like playing table tennis and I am good at it ,too. I often play table tennis with my friends on weekends. And I want to be a famous table tennis player when I grow up. What I like most is to see the seagulls flying freely in the sky so I often go to the sea in summer. My favourite colour is white because I think white is symbolize purity. 大家好 我的名字叫 KELLY .我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。 我爱上网、 玩电脑网络游戏、看电视 和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓 球，长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔，因此 在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。 My mother is a good mother.She is 158 cm tall.

She help me on life .I very grateful to her.Last weekend,she had stomachache. After take some medcizine,she feel better.I very happy.The day is first holiday.Our mothers sad,we dont happy.They happy,we happy too.We must grateful to them.They are very hard. Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention

to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I don＇t think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives 我的妈妈是一位好母亲。 她是 158 厘米高。她帮助我的生活。我非常感谢她。上个周末 ,她胃疼。花一些 medcizine 后,她感觉更好。我非常高兴。这一天是第一个假期。我们的母亲难过,我们 不开心。他们很幸福,我们很高兴。我们必须感谢他们。他们是非常困难的。 金钱的确很重要,但钱不能买到一切。一个吝啬鬼可能认为“金钱万能”,但如果你 只给你注意到赚钱时,你可能会失去很多东西,比如健康、友谊和爱。我认为我们不应该 认为金钱是一切。钱只是一个工具,可以帮助我们解决问题或使我们过上舒适的生活。 我们应该做的是合理使用它,而不是变成了守财奴。这种方式,我们都能领导一个快乐的 生活

A new year,a new start,when i stand on the edge of a new year,i cant help thinking about my plan of next year.

just as the old saying:"well began is the half of the success.”so i decide that i should be at work while the others are still relaxing,and then,at the beginning,im quicker than the others and of course i will get better result than the others.

But,what i really decide to do is that i must make good of anytime i can spare though it seems impossible. while,i will do my best to live up with what i have planned,and the result will prove it.

新的一年，新的开始，当我在新的一年的边缘立场，我不禁在想我明年的计划。

正如古人云：“好开始是成功的一半”，所以我决定，我应该是在工作，而另一些性传播疾病就会放松，然后，在开始时，我比其他人更快，我当然会得到比别人更好的结果。

但是，我真正决定做的是，我必须利用好，我可以随时备用，虽然它似乎是不可能的。虽然，我会尽我所能，用我生活已计划了，结果将证明这一点。

The weather is become hotter and hotter.Today afternoon,my brother came my

home and asked me to swim with him. Got the permission of mother,my brother and

I went to the river which lies in the south of our viliage happily.When we

reached the river, we couldnt wait to jump into the water.The water is clear

and cold,which made us feel relax and cool. The river is not deep not shallow,is

suitable for swimming.We keeped swimming and playing in the water until we got

tired.Thought the weather of today is hot,our heart is very cool!

天气变得越来越热。今天下午，我表哥来到我家要我和他一起去游泳。得到妈妈的允许，我和我表哥兴高采烈的跑到了河边，那条河位于我们村庄的南边。当我们到达河边时，我们迫不及待的跑进河里。河水清澈且冰冷，这让我们感觉到很凉爽、放松。河水不深不浅，正适宜于游泳。我们一直在河里游泳嬉戏，直到我们都累了。尽管今天的天气很炎热，但我们的内心都感到很凉爽!

Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents。 Kaifeng has many great

snacks， such as steamed buns， sesame seed Gaul。 Kaifeng also on the famous

Qingming River Park， I think it has to be very beautiful。 My parents will be

opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night。

翻译：下周我要和我的父母去开封。开封有许多十分棒的小吃，比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园，我想那必须十分的漂亮。我和我的父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔，并住在他家一晚。

January 14 20xx

20xx年1月14日

It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt Im free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live alone but I dont feel lonely. But I didnt do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们的冬季假期的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间,我喜欢做的事情。我的父母都是在北京举行。因此,我独自生活,但我不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了一份英文报章组成。这是我的功课。今天,我睡了14个小时。我想我是太累了。这是吃晚饭的时间。我必须去!我很饥饿。

August 7,20__Friday

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not

very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will

feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to

grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions.

Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

译文：今天，我帮助了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不小心就会惹得大家讨厌。我又做了一个决定，以后一定要做个乖孩子。

导语：你觉得创建文明城市的首要条件是什么?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以How to Behave Well?为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右参赛短文。

提示：1.衣着整洁;2.保持环境卫生;

3.待人有礼，乐于助人; 4.遵守交通规则; 5…….

要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示中1～4项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等。

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say “Thank you” and “Please”, and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well , our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【参考译文】

为了建设文明城市，我们学生应该尽力在活动中表现良好。

保持衣服干净整齐是一个好习惯。我们的城市应该每天保持清洁。不要乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰。说“谢谢”和“请”是礼貌的，等等。我们不应该说脏话。对别人友好，随时准备帮助需要帮助的人。例如，当我们在公共汽车上时，我们应该给老人和有婴儿的妇女让座。我们也应该遵守交通规则。当交通灯是红色的时候，我们应该停下来。我们最好不要在公共场合大声说话或大笑。

如果每个人都表现良好，我们的城市将会更美丽更迷人。

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone. Im Li Hua. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.

In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

Thank you for your listening!

我们能为环境做些什么

你好，每个人都。我是李华。很高兴谈论我们能为环境做些什么，我想我们每个人都可以做一点点来帮助解决这个问题。

我们能做的第一件事就是在用布袋代替塑料袋，当我们去购物。它有助于保护环境。我们能做的第二件事是尽可能重复使用旧课本可以。我们也应该永远不会忘记关灯，当我们离开教室时，为了节省能源。更重要的是，它会更好，如果我们步行或骑自行车上学。我们应该尽最大努力减少污染和浪费。

事实上，即使是最简单的日常活动也能对环境产生很大的差异。我相信我们可以让世界变得更美好的生活。

谢谢你的倾听!

In fifteen-day Chinese,we have the biggest festival yue - the Spring Festival,allison hang red lantern,beaming,affix red couplets,busy...

The first day of the first month,is a happy yue son.

The street not the kui is a street,play of eat everything taste.See the most is that some children,I looked,count spicy noodles in business is the best.

Today is really play too happy!Be seen two full the luck to eat STH delicious three full hand blessed.Most luckily those vendor,today but business is thriving?

Sincerely hope today the children in the New Year,happy,no annoyance.

翻译：

在爆竹声中,我们迎来了中国人最盛大的节曰——春节,家家喜气洋洋,挂上红红的灯笼,贴上红红的春联,忙忙碌碌……

正月初一,又是一个快乐的曰子.

街上不愧是街上,玩的吃的样样俱全.看到的大多数是一些小孩,我瞧了瞧,就数麻辣摊的生意最好.

今天真是玩得太痛快了!算是一饱眼福二饱口福三饱手福了.最为幸运的是那些卖主了,今天可是生意兴隆?

真心希望今天全国的小朋友在新的一年里快乐乐,没有烦恼.

[春节英语作文及翻译

Dear Tony ，

Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly,即将来临

is coming around.

We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day,

我们想邀请来自你们学校的同学们加入我们。

and we wound like to invite students from your school to join us.

我们计划数个活动We have planned several activities . When we get there , we will

visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, 向他们送花和自制的卡片，为了表达我们的尊敬和热爱。presenting

them with flowers and self--?made cards to show our respect and love. Then we

will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.

As some old people feel lonely .We may chat with them about their old days,

changes of our city, or anything they are interested in

.我们会给他们一些表演，例如：唱歌，舞蹈等等。

We may also give them some performances, such as singing, dancing and so

on.

我确定我们都会都中国的老人拥有更好的理解。I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of

the elderly inChina. If you have any suggestions, please let us know.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

拯救地球

地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。

1。重要性：只有一个地球

2。主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难

3。措施：停止污染、保护大自然

参考词汇：disaster n。灾难 protect V。 保护

注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;

(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;

(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

★ 范文

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China。 A lot of fishes died。 The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land。 The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather。

So everyone should do something to save our environment。 First， we should save every drop of water， such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water。 For example， we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water。 Second， we should save energy， such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking， more bicycling and less driving and so on。 Third， we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories。

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment。 Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

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中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如：

2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)

2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)

2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)

2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)

2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)

2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

1.整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

2.内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

3.不满60个词，少15个词扣0.5分，610个词扣1分。

4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

5.每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

6.语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：词固定搭配、高频重点词汇；句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子！

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰；内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握；亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

Our school is in the countryside. There are not many buildings and wide streets .But my school is very beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in my school. There are many good teachers in my school . They are good to us .They teach us much knowledge .We learn many things in my school. I love my school. My school is the most beautiful.I love my school very much.

我们学校在乡下。没有很多的建筑和宽阔的街道，但是我的学校很漂亮。我学校有许多树和花。我学校有许多好老师。他们教给我们很多知识，我们在学校里学到很多东西。我爱我的学校。我的学校是最漂亮的，我非常喜欢我的学校。

[我的漂亮学校英语作文及翻译

I am a lovely girl, I like to make friends, but I am more introverted, so there are only two good friends in my class. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

My courage is relatively small. In the first grade, almost no one came to play with me. My two good friends, we were in a kindergarten. From grade one to grade six, I had few friends.

Im going to go to junior high school. I hope I can have more good friends. Would you like to be a good friend of mine?

1. 不用说……

It goes without saying that …

= (It is) needless to say (that) ….

= It is obvious that ….

例：It goes without saying that it pays off to keep early hours.

不用说早睡早起是值得的。

2. 在各种……之中，……

Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …

例︰Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.

在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。

3. 就我的看法……;我认为……

In my opinion, …

= To my mind, ….

= As far as I am concerned, …

= I am of the opinion that ….

例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.

在我看来，玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …

随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …

例：With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.

随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

5. ……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do/that …

…… 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that …

…… 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …

……是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

=It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

6. 花费 spend … on sth. / doing sth. …

例：We shouldn’t spend too much time on something we aren’t interested in.

我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。

7. how 引导的感叹句

例：At least it will prove how honest you are.

那至少可以证明你很诚实。

8. 状语从句

⑴ 如果你不…，你就会… If you don’t ..., you’ll ...

例︰If you don’t keep working hard, you’ll lose the chance.

如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。

⑵ 如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.

当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。

⑶ 每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.

每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.

每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.

每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.

每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.

例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.

= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.

每当我想到我家附近那一.��清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。

9. 宾语从句

我认为，…… / 我认为……不...... I think / I don’t think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

例：He doesn’t think I should stop him joining the club.

他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + S + 过去式, S + 现在完成式.

例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。

英语是世界上最流行的语言，也是所有语言中使用最广泛的语言，学好英语有利于我们对外交流。下面是小编带来的是关于期中考试的英语作文，希望对您有帮助。

Today, I feel very unnatural when I go to bed together. No wonder! Mom and dad kept telling them that the air around them seemed to be frozen together.

After breakfast, our classmates went upstairs to do the preparatory work. The first two classes to test Chinese, I excitedly took out the pencil box, take out the Chinese book, began the last review. I havent had such a big exam for a long time, and Im nervous! I have learned Chinese books do not have to worry about basic questions, can recite fluently from memory, the key lies in reading, my level is not very good. Writing is OK, maybe get a full score.

Suddenly, the bell rang, and the faces of the students were so ugly that I got serious. My father always told me, "dont giggle in exams, it will distract your attention."." This is a very common examination, parents are stirred in disorderly fashion not tense, and are not calm down! The teacher rolled it, I got the first volume and looked back, huh?! Thats easy! I was secretly happy. But I still clear my throat, ready to jump into the "sea" to travel, explore. I also believe that peace is an important point, so that it can be static thought; seriously is also very important, the so-called "nothing is unachievable, as long as seriously, what things can be solved; also must be careful, careful person, who will love you!

I finally wrote my name, class, and started thinking about every question! The first question seems like I started doing it from grade one. Its a piece of cake! After second volumes, I suddenly realized that it was so hard and difficult to read. I read three times and didnt come up with the answer! Oh!

Finally, its time to roll in, and Ill have to take a good look at the next door! I think.

"Ding ding." The bell rings again, and I have to start doing some boring questions again.

After several I have done very well, that is, to the last one - English, and I am stumped.

Was that right? Whats this again?! Listening to a very vague English word, I really dont know what to choose is the correct answer, ah! Another door is doomed! What a bad luck!

Then I want to treat bad places I have seriously, for the future to test out koko!

今天，我一起床，就感觉十分不自然。怪不得呢！爸爸妈妈不停地叮嘱，周围的空气好像都凝固在一起——要期中考试了。

吃完早饭，我们班同学陆续上楼做准备工作。前两节课要考语文，我激动地拿出铅笔盒，取出语文书开始最后的复习。很久没有举行这样大型考试了，我不免有些紧张！语文书我已背得滚瓜烂熟，不用操心基础题，关键就在于阅读题，我的水平不是很好。作文倒是还可以，说不定能得个满分。

突然，上课铃响了，同学们的表情十分难看，我也严肃了起来。爸爸总是告诉我：“考试不要嘻嘻哈哈，这样会分散注意力。”这本是很普通的一个考试，都被家长们搅得糊里糊涂，不紧张的人，都冷静不下来！老师发卷了，我拿到第一卷后一看，咦！好简单呀！我心中暗暗高兴。可我还是清了清嗓子，准备跳入“题海”中去遨游、探索。我还认为平静是重要点，这样才可以静心想；认真也很重要，所谓“天下无难事，只怕有心人”，只要认真，什么事都可解决；还必须具备细心，细心的人，谁都会喜欢呀！

我终于写好姓名、班级，开始思考每一题啦！第一题好像是我从一年级就开始做的啦，简直是小菜一碟！一直做到第二卷，我突然发现，阅读题好难好难，我读了近三遍都没想出答案，算了，凑合凑合编一个吧！唉！

终于到收卷的时候了，下一门我一定得好好考！我想。

“叮叮叮。”铃声又响了，我只得又开始做那一些无聊的题目。

之后几门我都考得挺好，就是到了最后一门——英语，又把我难住了。

刚才是不是啊？这个又是什么呀！听着一个个极其模糊的英语单词，我真不知道选什么才是正确答案，啊！又一门要完蛋了！真倒霉！

以后我要认真对待我掌握的不好的地方，争取以后科科考满分！

Winter holiday will soon be over, really is coming. See, it is such a rich and colorful holiday ah, what to compare it to, it is like seven rainbow of colors, like a changeable clouds, like colorful shells... Always beautiful, brilliant. How could such a good winter vacation life, I was the only one person alone, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!

One of my winter holiday life: study. Holiday life, learning is indispensable, consolidate the previous knowledge that can let you can also preview in advance once you are going to learn after the part. Learn to learn well, dont half-hearted by playing. I have more than 4 hours of study time every day. Of course, I also have a few hours of exercise time, go out for a walk, many activities, some exercises. Sometimes I read some books, the expanded aspect of knowledge, of course, is the computer class, because I like computer, dont make the vision loss.

My holiday life # 2: sports. To do more sports is the guarantee of a healthy body. Everyone should have a favorite sports, I like most is skating and playing badminton. The skating sport is very simple, but you really come to ice are different! This is not your imagination of so simple and easy. Stand up, it is very simple, of course, but you slip a lap down is very difficult. Because I spent a long time, technology also can also wrestling this word is very strange to me now. Badminton everyone who will, learning to learn tired want to relax, you can play a minute ball, it can be you tired when I let you relax.

My winter holiday life # 3: the computer.

Computer is wonderful its hard to express in words. Do you know? The size of a small mouse mouse, can bring you into a magical world of computers. You can use it to play computer games interesting, to carry out the exploration of one adventure; You can use it to mail hair net friend, share strangers friend sent joy; You can also use it on the Internet, enjoy the fun of surfing the Internet. In this high-tech virtual world, how can you know the progress of modern science and technology rapidly, the pace of the modern human is powerful.

This is my winter holiday life, my life colourful winter holiday. It has trained me a loving heart, I love all beautiful things in the world. All, how can I was the only one, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!

寒假马上就要过去了，真令人依依不舍。看，它是一个多么丰富多彩的假期啊，把它比喻成什么呢，它像七色的彩虹，像多变的云朵，像缤纷的贝壳……永远美好，灿烂。这么好的寒假生活，怎能只有我一人独享呢，把它写出来，让大家一块享受吧!

我的寒假生活之一：学习。假期生活中，学习是必不可少的，这样可以让你巩固以前的知识还可以提前预习一下以后将要学的部分。学就要学得好，不要三心二意边玩边学。我每天都有大于4小时的学习时间。当然我也会有几小时的运动时间，出去走走多多活动一下，锻炼一下身体。有时我看一些课外书，扩大知识面，当然是电脑类的，因为我很喜欢电脑，千万不要使视力下降。

我的假期生活之二：体育运动。多做些体育运动是有个健康身体的保障。每个人都应该有个自己最喜欢的体育项目，我最喜欢的就是滑冰和打羽毛球。滑冰这项体育运动说起来很简单，可是你真正地来到冰场上可就不一样了!这可不是你想象中的那么简单那么容易。当然站起来是很简单的，但你滑一圈下来就是很难的。因为我花了很长一段时间了，技术也还可以现在摔跤这词对我是很陌生了。羽毛球大家是谁都会，学习学累了想放松一下你就可以打会儿球，它可以在你疲劳之际让你轻松一下。

我的寒假生活之三：电脑。

电脑的奇妙真是很难用语言表达出来。你知道吗?一个小老鼠般大的鼠标，就能带你进入一个神奇的电脑世界。你可以用它玩有趣的电脑游戏，进行一个个惊险刺激的探险;你可以用它接发网友的邮件，分享素不相识的朋友寄来的欢乐;你还可以用它上网，享受网上冲浪的乐趣。在这高科技的虚拟世界中，你能知道现代科技的进步是多么迅速，现代人类的步伐是多么有力。

这就是我的寒假生活，我多姿多彩的寒假生活。它培养了我一颗充满爱的心灵，使我爱世界上一切美好的事物。，怎能只有我一人独享呢，把它写出来，让大家一块享受吧!

Last night, I watched a movie, it is about two teenagers, they have cancer,

but the boy is positive about life while the girl is negative about life. They

meet each other, then the girl is affected by the boy, she starts to see the

beautiful things in her life. I am so moved by the movie, though the ending of

the movie is not so perfect, we see the change of the girls life. The topic of

the movie is to tell people to be positive about life, no matter what happens,

even the bad fortune they get, they still need to smile every day. People need

to find the beauty of life, so they wont life live without meaning.

昨晚，我看了一部电影，那是关于两个青少年，他们身患癌症，但是男孩对生活很乐观，然而女孩子却对生活很悲观。他们遇见了彼此，然后女孩受到了男孩子的影响，她开始看到了生活的美好食物。我被这部电影深深地感动，虽然电影的结局不是那么的完美，但是我们看到了女孩生活的改变。电影的主题是告诉人们要对生活乐观，无论发生什么事情，即使他们遇到不幸，仍然需要每天乐观面对生活。人们需要发现生活的美，这样他们就不会活得没有意义。

如果外国的朋友向你请教如何学中文，你会怎么样跟他说呢?下面是语文迷整理的教外国朋友学中文的英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

英语作文一：

how to learn chinese for foreigners There are more people to learn chinese at present . but they always think it is difficult to learn it . Especially they dislike to remember characters by heart . I always think about this questions to learning chinese . I would like to state a simple way to learn it .I will be happy if these methods are useful for you .

first , you should grasp the difference between languages .

the chinese pronaunciation has four tone . it sounds the music 1234 . I found it by myself , everyone like music , if you like music , then you can grasp the pronaunciation easily .

the second , you should only grasp a word in chinese instead of a single character . it looks like friends , if you see them everyday ,then you will know them . only watch them every day , and you will remember them soon

the third , you can find where to stop when you can read a long chinese sentence . and it is more improtant in learning languages ,because it can express the whole meaning in your voice .

in the end , read some texts in chinese every day . you should read chinese articles every day , then you can speak chinese quickly .

you can speak a little chinese in three months , believe youself , you can succeed soon .

有很多的人学习中文,目前.但他们始终认为这是很难学习.特别是他们不喜欢记住心脏字符.我经常思考这个问题,中文的学习.我想说明一个简单的方法来学习它,如果这些方法对您有用,我会很乐意.首先,你应该掌握的语言之间的差异.中国pronaunciation有四个音.这听起来音乐1234.我发现自己,每个人都喜欢音乐,如果你喜欢音乐,那么你可以把握pronaunciation容易.第二,你应该只掌握在中国,而不是一个单一的字符的字.它看起来像朋友,如果你看到他们的日常生活,那么你就会知道他们.只能眼睁睁地看着他们每一天,你会记住他们的到来第三,你可以找到在哪里停止时,你可以阅读长的汉语句子.它是在学习语言的improtant的,因为它可以在你的声音表达的全部意义.在年底,在中国,每天读一些文本.你应该每天阅读英文文章,那么你可以说中国很快.你可以说一点的中国人在三个月内,相信自己,你可以成功很快,

英语作文二：

Dear Tim

I am very glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well. Learning Chinese just like learning any other foreign language, is hard work. Learning Chines takes time so you should spend as much time as you can. Use Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. So why not take every oppotunity to practise using Chinese for communication. And youd better listen to the tape and repeat after it, watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on. "No pains, no gains". If we work hard, I am sure we will learn Chinese well. Thats all. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Jack

英语作文三：

Dear Lucy,

I’m very happy to hear from you. Don’t worry too much. Many students have the same problem like you. I think it’s very common for students to dislike memorizing. Here’s my advice. But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think. If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.

First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons. It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class. Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers’ questions. It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly. What’s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class. If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help. I really hope my advice can help you out and get ‘A’ in English and history exams. Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.

Yours,

Zhang Fang