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10002024中考英语写作指导:写作技巧
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+ 加入清单导语:英语作文在英语试卷中还是相当重要的一部分,你知道写作有哪些技巧吗?下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:
中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。2014年中考英语写作技巧
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:
这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:
其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:
当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和平时的积累,但是在面临中考的紧要关头,要想在短时间内提高英语写作水平不是一件容易的事情,这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。
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篇1:喜爱冬季英语作文带翻译
全文共 2344 字
+ 加入清单Winter is like your room, if you can clean it very well, you will like it, but if you throw things in a mess, you dont want to know, you must hate it. "Winter" is the same, you use a good attitude to look at it, you will definitely like me, step by step slowly falling in love with the "different winter".
I like winter, because only winter can make trees appear different styles. From spring and summer to autumn, leaves are always changing and changing. But winter can make trees become bare. I like to accompany my brother to practice football with my family in winter, not only to make my body warm, but also to give my brother an opportunity to practice more. There are also, in winter, I dont know if you have noticed that mosquitoes are missing a lot. At last, they can make me calm down and do well in homework. This is also a great benefit of winter. The last reason is my favorite, the family out to buy Hot pot material, in supermarkets to all of a sudden to the streams of people busily coming and going, in winter, many fewer people, do not have to queue for a check out, is really good, in the winter, the whole family sitting around the round table, each other help each other to resist the cold wind up, this feeling is only a winter feel, together with my family, so hot fireplace, warm atmosphere, in addition to "winter", any season cant taste good.
Anyway, there are also its shortcomings in winter. Of course, there are cold and cold currents that make the nose and water direct. They will make us want to hide in the quilt, but occasionally, this is not a bad thing. In a word, I like it in spring, summer, autumn and winter, and each season has its own characteristics, of which, winter is a very special one. But every trip to winter makes me feel different.
“冬季”就像你的房间,如果能整理的很干净,自己就会喜欢它;但如果你把东西丢的乱七八糟,那不用想也知道,你一定很讨厌它。“冬季”也是一样,你用好的心态去看待它,你绝对会如同我,一步一步的慢慢爱上那“不一样的冬季”。
我喜欢冬季,因为只有冬季,能使树木出现不一样的风格,从春天、夏天在到秋天,叶子都一直变多、变色,但“冬季”却能让树木成为光秃秃的一片。我喜欢在冬季与家人一同去陪弟弟练足球,不仅让我的身体变暖和,也给弟弟多一次练习的机会呢!还有还有,在冬季时,不知道你有没有发现,蚊子顿时少了很多,总算能让我静下心来好好写功课了,这也是冬季的一大好处唷!最后一个理由也是我最喜爱的原因了,全家一起出动去买火锅料,在员来熙熙攘攘的大卖场,一下子到了冬季,人少了许多,结帐都不必排队排个大老远,真是不错,在冬季,全家人一起围着圆桌,互相帮对方把冷飕飕的风给抵挡起来了,这种感觉也只有冬季感受的到 了,和家人一起围炉,如此这般热融融的气氛,是除了“冬季”之外,任何一季都品尝不到的好滋味。
反正不管怎么说,当然冬季也有它的缺点,像是有冷到令人鼻水直流的寒流等,都会使我们想躲在被窝里不要出来,但偶尔这样,也不是件坏事吧!总而言之,春夏秋冬我都喜欢,每一季都有它的特色,其中,冬季是很特别的一个喔!但是每经过一趟“冬之旅”,都让我有不同的感受。
篇2:初二英语日记带翻译好天气
全文共 758 字
+ 加入清单July 16 2009
It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine oclock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didnt arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFCs door. I havent seen them for a year. And in a year, we didnt come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!
这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我的任命,以满足九点钟。之后,我有我的早餐,我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达,我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内,我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开,我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接,我们去打球荔湾体育馆。这场比赛最后的拖车小时.Oh ,我非常高兴今天填补!
篇3:短篇英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy.
As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some. Early in the
morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at
noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more comfortable.
译文:终于放暑假了,应该好好歇歇了!可是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了,帮妈妈洗碗,扫地,做饭等等,到了中午,我快累死了,往床上一躺,扇扇电风扇,舒服多了。
篇4:寒假即将来临英语作文带翻译
全文共 1970 字
+ 加入清单Have finished the test yesterday, although did not take notice of, actually also is equal to the winter vacation, so I would have had a plan for winter vacation.
Morning, Ill sleep to nature to wake, after mom and dad go to work, I quickly get up, under their bags of instant noodles to eat. While mom and dad be not at home, but I am not lazy, after dinner, write a few pages of my winter vacation paradise, then look at the books, and then you can go to play computer games, good just cant be too long, then see fellow bloggers write blog, or animation.
At noon, I will write a few lines of copybook half a page or a page, and then take the English textbook, on a point reading machine to read, or at least a dozen minutes, after finished, you can watch TV or play computer, it is best to go downstairs to the fitness equipment for children playing over there.
Because I cant stay at home, in the afternoon must go to her office, with my mother plan to write a few pages of homework in the office, reading, and then in the college, ballroom and on the basketball court to play with children, after the play can play computer games for a while.
And this period of time has been too little blog, had a holiday, now I have to write more, plan two days.
These, of course, when no holiday refers to the mothers unit, wait until New Years day that a few days what also not stem, light to play.
Put the winter vacation, thats what I think, since it is the holiday, I will be happy to play, but also have to learn, I will be strict with myself!
昨天已经考完试了,虽然没有拿通知书,其实也相当于放寒假了,所以我要自己对寒假有个计划。
上午,我就睡到自然醒,等爸爸妈妈上班走后,我迅速起床,自己下袋方便面吃。虽然爸爸妈妈不在家,但我也不能偷懒,吃完饭后,写几页我的《寒假乐园》,再看看课外书,然后就可以痛快地玩电脑游戏了,只不过时间不能太长了,接着再看看博友们写的博客或是看看动画片。
中午,我就写几行字帖或是一页半页都可以,然后再拿着英语课本,在点读机上读读,至少也要个十来分钟,干完后可以看电视或玩电脑,最好是下楼到健身器材那边找小朋友玩儿。
由于下午我不能呆在家里,必须跟妈妈一块儿去她办公室,计划先在办公室写几页作业,看看书,然后在院里的跳舞场和篮球场上和小朋友玩,玩玩后就可以玩一会电脑游戏了。
还有这段时间博客写得太少了,现在放假了,我得多写,计划两天一篇。
这些当然指妈妈单位没放假的时候,等到过年那几天就什么也不干,光玩了。
放寒假了,我就是这么想的,既然是放假吗,我就要痛快地玩好,但也不能不学习,我会严格要求自己的!
篇5:英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him.
While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful)。
When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.
有一个星期日,我母亲叫我带小弟弟去乡村游历。她吩咐我要好好照料他(www.kuaidu.com.cn)。
当我们沿着道路行走的时候,太阳灿烂地照耀着,微风轻轻地吹着。我们看见美丽的花儿对我们微笑着,并听见鸟儿在树上唱着悦耳的歌曲,风景实十分美丽。
当我们感觉到疲倦的时候,我们就回家了。我们看见母样正在门口等候我们。
篇6:环境污染英语作文附翻译
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+ 加入清单Environmental Pollution
Write a passage with the words and phrases given:
the problem of pollution, cause, artificial substances, release, waste products, industrial production, consumption of goods, bring it under control, agriculture, chemical substancea.
Environmental Pollution
I read a piece of news recently. It says that in Japan marly businessmen ave selling fresh air to customers.and now it is becoming more and more popular. Why? --Fresh air is getting less and less in Japan, and so is it in the U. S. A.
In fact, environmental pollution is a very serious problem the whole world is facing.
it is mainly caused by the waste products released from artificial substances, industrial
production and increased consumption of goods. Bedsides, the use of chemical substances
in agriculture also causes environmental pollution. Look at the sky, you can see that dense smoke is being released from the high and big chimneys; those dirty and poisonous substances are flowing into the rivers that we use for drinking water and millions of tons of waste products are heaping around us.
How to change this condition? More and more countries are trying to work out some effective means to bring it under control, but no great success has been made.
最近我读了一则消息说在日本,许多商人向顾客出售新鲜空气,现在这种情况越演越烈,Environmental Pollution-环境污染,四六级写作《Environmental Pollution-环境污染》。为什么呢? 因为在日本新鲜空气越来越少,在美国也是如此。
事实上,环境污染是整个世界正在面临的一个严重问题。这主要是由于人造物质,工业生产过程中所产生的废料以及消费商品的增长造成的。另外,在农业中使用化学物品也造成了环境污染。看看天空,你可以看到浓烟从高大的烟囱中释放出来,这些脏而有毒的物质流入我们赖以饮水的河流,数百万吨废物正堆积在我们周围。
怎样改变这种状况呢?越来越多的国家正在试图拟定出一些有效措施控制环境污染,但至今成效不大。
篇7:与父母相处中考英语作文
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+ 加入清单【预测题目】
假如你是Han Mei,下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语:listen to,mother’s love,care about,communicate with,get along with,smile
写作要求:
语句通顺,书写工整;
可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥;
词数在60-80左右。
Dear Han Mei,
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me," Be careful while crossing the street.”“Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?” And so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do?
Alice
【参考范文】
Dear Alice,
As a teenager,I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s,you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Yours
Han Mei
【参考译文】
亲爱的爱丽丝,
作为一个少年,我遇到了和你一样的问题。但现在我可以更好地与我的母亲。这里有一些想法给你。
你妈妈说话多,因为她在乎你。也许这不是一个好方法,但它显示了你母亲的爱。所以我认为你应该听她的。如果你的意见和你母亲的不同,你可以和她交流,告诉她你在想什么。如果你的妈妈不接受你的建议,保持沉默,给她一个微笑。
我希望我在这里说的能帮到你很多。
你的好朋友,
韩梅
篇8:最新英语谚语带翻译
全文共 323 字
+ 加入清单A little labour, much health.
常常走动,无病无痛。
They that do nothing learn to do ill.
游手好闲,容易学坏。
A little leak will sink a great ship.
千丈之堤溃于蚁穴。
Pride goes before a fall.
骄兵必败。
A journey of a thousand miles begains with a single step.
千里之行,始于足下
East or west,home is best .
在家千日好,出门时时难
A Jack of all trades and master of none.
无所不能便一无所精. 三脚猫无所长
篇9:英语日记带翻译
全文共 533 字
+ 加入清单A busy day
Today is saturday,and it is also a busy day.In the morning,I got up at
eight oclock,then I ate breakfast.After breakfast,I cleaned my room,it was
dirty but it is clean now.In the afternoon,I played badminton with my
neighbours.In the evening,I helped my mother cooked dinner.After I ate dinner,I
washed dishes.After finishing my homework,I watched TV.
Today is a busy day,but Im very happy.
参考翻译
忙碌的一天
今天是星期六,也是忙碌的一天。今天早上,我8点钟起床,然后吃了早餐。早餐之后,我打扫了我的房间,我的房间非常脏,但是现在已经干净了。下午,我和邻居打羽毛球。晚上,我帮我妈妈做晚餐,晚餐之后我洗了碗。完成家庭作业后,我又看了电视。
今天是忙碌的一天,但是我很开心
篇10:理想中的学校英语作文翻译
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+ 加入清单理想的学校,即一所好学校,总的评判标准是其在育人方面的贡献程度.而要有高质量的教育教学水平,我认为有以下方面.
首先,在器物层面上,我认为一所好学校不一定要有现代的高楼大厦,简朴、富有文化底蕴的建筑物或许更有利于教育教学.但是,良好的绿化环境和干净整洁的面貌必不可少.
其次,在制度层面,学校要有高效率的管理制度、教学制度.这些制度好比人体的骨架,起着贯穿和支撑全局的作用.
再次,在精神层面,学校要有先进的、明确的办学理念,这是学校一切教育教学活动的指导思想.
最后,教育是培养人的活动,由教师具体完成.一所学校必须有高水平的教师,所谓高水平包括:扎实的专业知识、过硬的教学能力、良好的道德素养等等.
拥有以上几点,即是我梦想的学校.
篇11:中考英语作文话题:网购
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+ 加入清单导语:相信大家都有在网上购物过,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.
However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.
【参考译文】
网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了,等待你的选择。方便是最重要的优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时,它通常每天开放24小时。
然而,网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时,许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会,分享购物的乐趣。
总之,我们应该好好利用网络购物。
篇12:圣诞节送给老师的一封信英语翻译
全文共 2405 字
+ 加入清单Dear Mr. X,
Hello!
You are the most respected teacher in my mind, although you are very
strict, but you put your heart on us. You work from dawn to dusk, thinking about
better teaching methods. You are like a candle, let me feel the infinite future
of the bright, but burned themselves.
Trees cant grow without sunshine, rain and dew, only their selfless
charity, will have a vibrant. The life of a flower is inseparable from the
earth. With the nutrition provided by the earth, there will be a beautiful and
moving flower. And our life, inseparable from the teacher, with your enthusiasm
to help, with your inculcate, will have our healthy growth... Thank you so much,
teacher! Shi-en is like a fish in water. In the past three years, you have
taught us with great care. Every one of your epigrams is still vividly in my
mind, which reminds me of a lot of things.
It is because of your education, we can have todays knowledge, will have
todays such a talent to learn, it is because of your care, we these "flowers of
the motherland" to healthy growth, it is because of your little teachings, we
understand the truth of life. You are like a tree, we thrive under your shade.
You give us care like a mother, let me feel very happy, let me have the interest
of learning, let me feel that you give endless strength, let me feel that you
are my rely on, let me feel inseparable from you. Teacher, our good grades
cannot do without your hard education, our good grades cannot do without your
careful cultivation. Every step forward is inseparable from your hard sweat.
Teacher, thank you for our serious and responsible education, thank you for
your concern about us, thank you for teaching us a lot of knowledge, thank you
for your selfless dedication to us, one thousand ten thousand "thank you" can
not return your teaching to us.
merry
A healthy body
Your students
敬爱的x老师:
您好!
您是我心目中最敬重的好老师,您虽然十分严厉,但是您把一颗心扑在我们身上。您起早贪黑,琢磨着更好的教学方法。您就像蜡烛一样,让我感到前途无限的光明,却燃烧了自己。
树木的成长,离不开阳光雨露,只有他们无私的施舍,才会有生机勃勃。花朵的生活,离不开大地,有了大地提供的营养,才会有花儿的艳丽动人。而我们的生活,离不开老师,有了您的热情帮助,有了您的谆谆教诲,才会有我们的健康成长……老师,太谢谢您了!师恩如鱼得水,这三年来,您苦口婆心的教育我们,您的每一句金石良言,我一直还历历在目,由此让我想起了很多很多。
正因为有您的教育,我们才能有今天的见识,才会有今天这样的才学,正因为您的呵护,我们这些“祖国的花朵”才能健康的成长,正因为您的点滴教诲,才使我们明白做人的道理。您好比大树,我们在您的树荫下茁壮成长。您给了我们像妈妈一样的关怀,让我觉得无比幸福,让我有了学习的兴趣,让我觉得您给了无穷无尽的力量,让我觉得您是我的依靠,让我觉得离不开您了。老师,我们的好成绩离不开您的辛苦教育,我们的好成绩更少不了您的细心培养。我们每前进一步,都离不开您洒下的辛勤汗水。
老师,谢谢您对我们认真负责的教育,谢谢您对我们的关心,谢谢您教给了我们许多知识,谢谢您对我们无私的奉献,一千声一万声“谢谢”都无法回报您对我们的教导。
敬祝
身体健康
您的学生
篇13:母亲节英语作文带中文翻译
全文共 778 字
+ 加入清单Today is Mothers Day. I know some of my classmates are going to help their mothers with the housework, others .are going to buy some flowers for their mothers. I want to say to her that I love her very much. But as a boy, it is a bit difficult for me to show my heart. I think only girls can do that.
My mother is very kind. She takes care of me day and night. She spends little money, but buys anything for me that I need.
This time I must show my love. I am going to give her a card and write like this, "I love you, mother!" I am going to put it under her pillow. 参考翻译:
母亲节
今天是母亲节。我知道一些同学打算帮妈妈做些家务,还有一些同学打算给妈妈买些花。我只是想对妈妈说一声,我非常爱她。但是对我来说这样表达我的情感有点儿难,因为我是个男孩。我觉得只有女生才这样做。
我妈妈是个非常善良的人。她对我照顾得无微不至。她自己很少花钱,但能给我买我需要的任何东西。
这次我一定要表示我对她的爱。我打算送她一张写有“我爱你,妈妈”的卡片,我还打算把它放在她的枕头下面。
篇14:高一英语日记附加翻译
全文共 689 字
+ 加入清单One sunny afternoon, when I was merrily riding home, I heard "Help! Help!".
一个晴朗的午后,当我开心地骑车回家时,我听到(有人喊)“救命!救命!”。
I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. The boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home.
我(赶紧)骑到河边,发现一个大约5岁的男孩在河里挣扎。我(马上)跳进水里,游向男孩,并把他拖到岸边。男孩说他(刚刚)是在河边试着抓鱼,(后来),一不小心就掉进水里了。我要到了他家地址,并送他回家。
"Thank you very much!" The boys parents said, when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.
一当我要离开他们家的时候,那个男孩的父母说:“非常谢谢你!”尽管在那个下午,我回家晚了,但我还是很开心的。
篇15:中考英语作文高分秘诀介绍
全文共 2143 字
+ 加入清单想要获得更加高分的英语写作,在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导,大家一起来阅读吧。
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。
表达年龄的方式有:She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
拓展阅读:写好作文"加分点"
合理使用动词使表达更生动
(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。
In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性
(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。
I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。
改变动词增强文章的感染色彩
(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。
At the news of his death, she felt very sad。
篇16:英语简单自我介绍带翻译
全文共 414 字
+ 加入清单how are you, i call xx.this year is 22 years old.graduate from xxxx college.the profession is a calculator multimedia.i am one is bright, optimism, there is the person of responsibility.a fondness for plays basketball, computer, listen to music, etc..thankful your company gives me this the opportunity of the personal interview!
中文版:你好,我叫xx。今年22岁。毕业于xxxx学院。专业是计算机多媒体。我是一个开朗,乐观,有责任心的人。爱好打篮球,电脑,听音乐,等。感谢贵公司给我这次面试的机会!
篇17:2024年寒假英语日记带翻译
全文共 2223 字
+ 加入清单Today is December 24, is a traditional day to sweep the dust. Home for cleaning, of course, for me, I will act with my father and mother, and do a lot of work.
Most of the work is done before, today the most main is to rub the lamp. I help my father moved to the ladder, the ladder is quite heavy, still stand in the corner, I had a lot of strength to move it out, this want to stand up to wipe, tried out of reach, is still a little afraid. The results or father above dusted off, pick the chimney, I then below. By cleaning cloth, then pass them to my father.
Chimney is so dirty! I take a dishcloth scraping on the lamp shade, the original one in the chimney of mud, a new shine bright again. I think the restaurant is the lamp of cleaned the best. Originally, the lamp that Turkish above all sludge, every time I turn on the light, feel very dark. But, I use the brush after Mr Wham, immediately changed the same original dirty chimney, open lamp immediately feel light for a few minutes.
In the process of rub the lamp, I sail conveniently clean the sink, white, can cleanly reflected my smiling face.
Finally, I also help my mother wiped the line that play a base, because mom backache these days, cant bend over. Mother told me to wear kick the facade and the stare blankly. When wiping the balcony the line that play a base, I wipe down a heap of broken, plaster, stone grain, and dust maomao, earning little place at ordinary times, think that would be so dirty. Its not easy work.
Although today is very tired, but in front of the home bright light shines bright, clean the sink and clean the line that play a base, I am very happy, feel a sense of accomplishment! Mom and dad also kua Im very capable!
今天是腊月二十四,是传统的扫尘的日子。这天,自然,家里要进行大扫除了,我呢,也就和爸爸妈妈一起行动,干了不少的活儿。
大部分活儿之前都干完了,今天最主要的就是擦灯。我帮爸爸搬来梯子,梯子挺沉,还立在角落里,我费了好多劲儿才把它挪出来,本想自己站上去擦,试了试够不着,还有点害怕。结果就还是爸爸在上面掸尘,摘灯罩,我在下面接着。顺便再清洗抹布,再把它们传给爸爸。
灯罩可真脏啊!我拿着抹布对着灯罩刮来刮去,将原来一摸一手泥的灯罩,擦得崭新透亮。我自认餐厅的灯擦得最好了。原来,这盏土耳其语上面全是污泥,每次开灯,都觉得很暗。但是,在我用了‘威猛先生’擦过之后,原来脏兮兮的灯罩立马变了一个样,开开灯马上就觉得亮了几分。
在擦灯的过程中,我还见缝插针地顺便清洁了一下洗手池,白白的,干净地能映出我的笑脸了。
最后我还帮妈妈擦了踢脚线,因为妈妈这几天腰疼,不能弯腰了。妈妈告诉我擦踢脚的立面和上面的楞儿。在擦阳台踢脚线时,我擦下来一堆渣子,有墙皮,有石粒,还有灰尘毛毛,平时不起眼儿的小地方,想不到会这么的脏。干活儿也不容易。
虽然今天很累,但是面对亮亮的灯照得明亮的家,洁净的洗手池和干净的踢脚线,我很高兴,很有成就感!爸爸妈妈也夸我真是很能干!
篇18:英语作文题目专项训练题中考备考
全文共 728 字
+ 加入清单根据下面的汉语提示写一个60字左右的口头通知:
假如你是班长,你们要举办英语讲座(lecture)。
1 时间:3 月1日星期五下午3 点至五点
2 地点:阶梯教室(lecture theatre)
3 讲座人:北京大学李平教授
4 报告的内容:怎样学英语
5 要求大家准时出席 (attend),并且可以向他咨询有关的问题
例文:
Announcement
Girls and boys / Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attention,please ? / Attention,please.
I ve got announcement to make./ I m very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be held in the lecture hall / theater from 3 p.m .to 5 p.m. on Friday,March 1st.It will be given by Professor Li Ping from Beijing University. The topic is How to learn English well .You may take notes if you like. And you may ask any question on English learning / study after the lecture. Please attend the lecture on time / don t be late.
That s all,thank you.
篇19:有关朋友英语作文带翻译
全文共 1330 字
+ 加入清单We each have a best friend. My best friend, she will not speak. In school, of course, is my friend and I were like peas and carrots. But, in my opinion, good friends, some secret worries or to tell him/her, maybe he/she will feel very vexed, and it can reveal your secrets to others.
My for friends, she never like this. No matter whether anything unusual happened every day, I will tell her all my day of harvest. Talk with her, is my most happy thing. She makes my body and mind cheerful. Can I take a day of harvest, discontent, excited feeling to her. I am convinced that she is the best in the world of the audience.
In this week, Ill be out of many copies out the newspaper, there is only one time in the evening. And it came to pass, because I afraid too late, and told it to her.
She, make me understand myself. Her heart, is created by my joys and sorrows. Every little by little I grew up, she will keep in mind.
Who is she? Is not my classmate, not my mother. A friend of the silent -- diary.
我们每个人都有一个最好的朋友。我最好的朋友,她不会说话。当然,在学校里,我的朋友是和我形影不离的。可是,在我看来,再好不过的朋友,有些心事或秘密要告诉他/她,也许他/她会感到很烦,并且还会把你的秘密泄露给别人。
我的那为朋友,她从来不会这样。无论每天是否发生了什么不寻常的事,我都会向她倾诉我一天的收获。和她谈心,是我最快乐的事。她使我身心开朗。我可以把一天的收获、不满、兴奋等感受向她倾诉。我深信,她是这世上最好的听众。
在这周里,我要出许多张手抄报,只有一个晚上的时间。我因为害怕来不及出,便把这事告诉了她。
她,使我读懂自己。她的内心,就是由我的喜怒哀乐创造的。我成长的每一点一滴,她都会铭记在心。
她是谁呢?不是我的同学,不是我的母亲。一位无声的朋友——日记本。
篇20:准备期中考试英语作文
全文共 1009 字
+ 加入清单If you start preparing for the exams ahead, you’ll feel a lot better about getting everything accomplished.
Here are some ways to help you prepare your mind and body for a successful final exam season:
First,you should focus your time on difficult classes.
If you always do well in a course,then you obviously don’t need to spend as much time studying for that course.You should spend most of your study time on the difficult courses where your grade is borderline.
Second,spending time reviewing notes is also necessary.
By simply going over all your class notes, you’ll get a good overview of the specific areas you should start studying. This will also provide your mind with a good summary of everything you’ve been learning
Besides,you can design a study schedule and stick to It.
By setting aside time now to focus on the final exam, you’re preparing your mind for what’s ahead. And you’ll also find areas that you have questions about. This will provide you plenty of time to get answers from your professors.