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5932024年山东高考英语作文题目:给美国朋友Tom的回信
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+ 加入清单第二节:写作(满分30分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:
1. 未及时回复的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
注意: 1. 次数:120~150;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【试题点评】
今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写。
【经典套路】
第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的
第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)
第三段:“假期安排”部分
第四段:补充说明+客套话
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)
How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)
By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)
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篇1:高考英语作文万能模板
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+ 加入清单One possible version
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I
noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a
discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his
office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon
afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to
park our bikes there.
篇2:2024高考英语作文常用素材:英语短语
全文共 1392 字
+ 加入清单1. 经济的快速发展
the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长
the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard
3.先进的科学技术
advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战
be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为
It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果
the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注
arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8.不可否认
It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…
9.热烈的讨论/争论
a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题
a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点
a totally different argument
12.一些人 …而另外一些人 …
Some people… while others…
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言
As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14.就…达到绝对的一致
reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持
be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点
argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用
play an increasingly important role in…
18.对…必不可少
be indispensable to …
19.正如谚语所说
As the proverb goes:
20.…也不例外 …
be no exception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响
exert positive/ negative effects on…
22.利远远大于弊
the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages
23.导致,引起
lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象
a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 / 成就感
sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神
sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界
widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28.学习知识和技能
acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担
financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素
take many factors into account/ consideration
篇3:高考英语写作四大流程介绍
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+ 加入清单拿到英语试题不知道从哪里下手吗?那么下面这套英语写作流程对你会有一定的帮助。
一.审题。
拿到题目后,手中拿铅笔,手脑眼嘴并用,开始审题。看题目的要求是什么,要点是什么,特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李华,还是随便一个名字? 要议论文还是记叙文?对分几段写有无要求?等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息,都最好用铅笔划下来,以免出错,也许你一开始会记得,可随着时间的流逝,你会不会因紧张而遗忘这些信息呢?还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默读,这样就不会遗漏或忽略任何一个字了。
二.草稿。
有的同学怕出错,全文都打草稿再誊写,我姑且认为不太可取,毕竟考场时间宝贵,即使我有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做,更何况考场时我们留给作文的时间往往一再被压缩。有的同学不打草稿,我认为更不太可取。一来容易出错,二来边写边想思维不连贯,即使思维连贯也无法审词酌句,展现自己最好的一面,容易后悔。
草稿怎么打?
1.结构就是你打算分几段写,每段都写什么?哪段转哪段承哪段起合?心里都要是有谱的。
2.关键词:结构拟定后,迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。
譬如一省作文题: 假设你的名字是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了,你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况:年龄性别学历,个人条件。英语好,爱好体育,擅长交际,乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。
关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺,和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词(指词的英文表达)写在纸上。有一些词的拼写,譬如学历,可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚,这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来,以免一会因干扰而遗忘。
可能看到聪明这个关键词时,你最初写下的往往是clever,再仔细想想,你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多词,挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折,你写了but,这会再想想,是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢?挑一个吧。千万别用but.
3.句式:词写下来了,其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了,下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍,然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句?能不能用上一个双重否定句?能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句?能不能用一个插入语?等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。
三.正式写。
这样的草稿打完后,就要快快写了。注意,英语作文的卷面简直太重要了,一定要把字写整齐,写大。没有把握的词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。
四.检查。
注意,最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心,可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。单词拼写的,大小写的,等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象,一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧,请务必留下1——2分钟检查作文的时间,消除隐性错误。
需要说明的是,英语的开头和结尾是最关键的,尤其是开头。基本上,不跑题,遵守题目要求,一个漂亮的开头,一个还过得去的结尾,2-3个高级词汇,1-2个漂亮的句子,加上整齐的字迹,作文的分就不会低了哦。所以,精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧。
篇4:关于高考英语满分作文范本
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+ 加入清单高考英语满分作文 Beijing Olympic Games and Me
The year of 2008 is getting closer and closer to us. We need to take actions from now on to prepare for the game. What we need to do most is to work on our disadvantages and shortcomings. As a student of Senior high, I can do my own part. Although I can’t transform our city into more a beautiful place on my own, I can help Beijing in small ways and encourage our classmates and people around me to follow my lead.
Let me take the environment for example, the atmosphere around Beijing is quite disappointing, factories and cars keep giving off exhausts into the air, we can hardly see the blue sky with our naked eyes, because the sky is covered with a thick layer of harmful substances. The sky is gray instead of blue. To our delight, the government has passed some laws of protecting the air, and we can do something useful, too. For example, whenever we go out for a long distance, ride the bike or take the buses and subways instead of taxis. You may not have a clue how it works. Of course doing that only by one person is far from enough, but we can let more people do that together. In that case the result may be more than we bargained for.
Another thing we need to work on is our English skills. Teachers and parents often put great emphasis on our English skills especially listening and speaking. I want to be a volunteer in 2008, to be an interpreter. For now, I must do something helpful to improve my spoken English. Rome isn’t build in a day, so is English. It can’t be improved in a day or two. It takes time and energy. There are no shortcuts to improve your spoken English; the most productive way is to grab all opportunities around you to open your mouth. For instance, taking part in all kinds of English contests is a good way, you can meet some excellent contestants, and you can share the experience of learning and some good method of learning. I will keep participating in all English activities to polish up my English. I’m sure by the year of 2008, I will be able to master English well just as my mother tongue.
All in all, I’m sure that Beijing Olympic Games will be one of the most successful Games in history. I believe our long-cherished dream will be fulfilled in a perfect way!
2008年离我们越来越近了,我们必须从现在开始采取行动,来为奥运会做准备。我们最需要做的,是克服缺点和改进不足之处。作为一名高中生,我们可以做我们力所能及的事情。虽然我不能光靠我自身的力量把这座城市妆点得更美丽,但我可以用自己的方式,来改变北京并且鼓励我的同学们和我周围的人和我一起做。
让我以环境为例,北京周围的大气环境比较令人失望,工厂和汽车不断地向空中排放废气,我们几乎用肉眼看不到蓝色的天空了。因为天空被一层厚厚的有害物质所覆盖, 天空成了灰色,而不是蓝色。令我们高兴的是,政府已经出台一些保护大气环境的相关法规。我们呢,也可以做一些有用的事情。比如说,每当我们要出远门的时候,骑自行车或乘坐公交车和地铁来代替出租车。你可能不知道这会有什么用。当然,只靠一个人的力量是远远不够的,但是我们可以让更多的人一起去做。 这样的话,结果才有可能收效显著。
我们需要做的另一件事,是提高我们的英语水平。老师和家长总是着重强调要提高我们的英语能力,尤其是听力和口语方面,在2008年,我想成为一名志愿者,做一名口语翻译。现在我必须做一些有助于提高我口语的事情。“罗马非一日建成”,英语也不可以在一、两天内得到提高。它需要花费很多的时间和精力,在提高口语方面,没有捷径可走,最有效的方式就是抓住身边的机会开口讲英语。比如:参加各种英语竞赛是一种很好的方式。你会遇到些非常优秀的选手,与他们交流学习体会,借鉴好的学习方法。我将继续参加各类英语活动,来提高我的口语能力。我相信在2008年,我将会像掌握母语一样熟练掌握英语。
总之,我相信,2008北京奥运会将是有史以来最出色的奥运会之一,我坚信,我们长时间以来的梦想会以完美的方式得以实现。
篇5:高考英语作文范文
全文共 861 字
+ 加入清单一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,期望在互联网上进行宣传,请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要资料应包括:
1。地点:距白山入口处500米;
2。房间及价格:单人间(共20间),100元/天;
双人间(共15间),150元/天;
热水淋浴;
3。餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);
4。游泳池:全天免费开放;
5。欢迎预订。
注意:1。词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business
参考范文:
Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business。
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain。 It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms,all with hot showers。 A single room is 100 yuan and double room 150 yuan for one night。 You are advised to book in advance。 The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from。 You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening。 We also have a swimming pool,which is open all day and free of charge。
All are wele!
篇6:高考英语满分作文:一封意见信
全文共 2862 字
+ 加入清单June 8th
Dear Haiqing,
I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.
To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?
Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?
Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.
Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?
Keep in touch.
Yours
Huangping
6月8日
亲爱的海青,
我听说你现在很不高兴因为你的父母买不起你一些名牌鞋和你非常喜欢的衣服。我给你写这封信与你分享我的想法。
首先,美丽只是表面的。你不觉得这么多关注你的外表很愚蠢吗?他一个肤浅的人通过他们的外表来判断他人;在同样的意义上,他是一个肤浅的人认为名牌衣服可以添加到他的魅力。所以,请忘记那些名牌的东西。真正重要的不在于你穿名牌鞋子或衣服但你的衣服是否适合你。作为一名学生,你必须穿校服在工作日,老实说,你看起来非常聪明。然后你为什么要费心去买昂贵的名牌的东西?
其次,我知道你的父母都是普通工人。他们努力工作,也挣不了多少钱。尽管如此,他们尽自己最大的努力给你很多东西。看看愈伤组织手上和脸上的皱纹,你怎么能忍心要求超出他们的承受能力,这肯定会打破他们的心?记住,父母不欠我们昂贵的夏令营,他们不欠我们索尼随身听;他们也不欠我们耐克的鞋子,如果你真正想要的那些花哨的东西,你应该采取兼职工作有助于他们的购买,而不是向你的父母要钱增加了沉重的负担。难道你不这样认为吗?
第三,我们有各种各样的东西可用这些天既好又便宜的。有什么意义的付出更多的那些名牌的东西不是更好吗?我的朋友,听我的劝告,你会是一个明智的消费者,以及一个更体贴的孩子你的父母。
贫困,有时候,是一件好事。它可以测试一个人的性格,速度比什么都快。继续努力,你一定会在不久的将来能够买得起这些东西。现在你可以专注于你的学习。无论如何,一个潜在成功者,整天专注于名牌的东西不是很有趣的呢
保持联系。
你的
黄平
篇7:2024年高考英语作文万能句子及模板
全文共 829 字
+ 加入清单图表作文框架
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart)
has been on rise/ decrease (increases/drops/decreases),有表格或图像可以看出。
significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______
to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes
without saying that _毫无疑问的看出_______.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for __这里至少有两个原因可以对_ X X
作出解释__. On the one hand, _一方面
_____. On the other hand, ______ is due to the fact that ________.
另一方面---的原因是。。。In addition, 而且
_______ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to
show _也许有其他原因要展示
_______. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are
commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that
_______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
篇8:2024年高考英语作文高级句型
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+ 加入清单1.首先, 第一: initially, to begin with, to start with;
2.其次, 第二, 第三, 第四……: furthermore, moreover, in addition, besides
3.最后: finally; last but not least:(提及最后的人或事物时说)最后但同样重要的
4.现在(目前), XXXX现象是不可避免且难以否认的
Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that ……
At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that …..
例句: Currently, there is an inevitable and undeniable fact that computer is playing a significant role in our daily lives
At present, it is inevitable and undeniable that advertisement has been flooding into our daily lives
5.随着社会(科技)的发展,人们开始注意到XXXX的重要性
Along with the advance of the society (science and technology), people are attaching much importance to ……
例句: Along with the advance of the society, people are attaching more and more importance to the interview in the job-hunting
6.最近, XXXXX现象引起了人们的广泛关注
Recently, the phenomenon that …… has aroused wide public concern
例句: Recently, the phenomenon that CPI keeps increasing has aroused wide public concern
7.一部分人认为……., 而另一部分人认为……
Some people argue that….., whereas others maintain that….
8. 就我个人而言(老实说), 我全力支持前者(后者
eg. As for me, I am in high favor of the former (latter).
Personally, I side with the former (latter)
Frankly speaking/ To be frank/ To be honest/ Honestly speaking, it is the former (latter) that I approve of
9.我认为(在我看来,就我看来,我的观点是, 我想….)
I am convinced that….
As far as I am concerned, …..
From my point of view, …..
From where I stand, ……
11.因此, 基于以上讨论, 我们很容易得出……的结论
Based on the discussion above, it is easy for us to draw the conclusion that…..
12.作文中一些可用来替换常用词汇的高级词汇
important—significant; good—stunning/ fabulous/ sensational ; way—approach/ method
use—adopt; understand/know—figure… out ; but—nevertheless; so—consequently/ therefore
because of—due to; like to do/want to do— be willing to do; finish—accomplish;
13.According to the statistics provided by..., it can be seen that...
14. There is good/sufficient evidence to show that...
15. No one can ignore/overlook the fact that...
二、用于文章结尾的句型:
1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on ...
3) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
4) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ..., but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.
5) There is little doubt/denying that ...
6) It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of...require immediate attention.
7) In conclusion,...
8) Personally, I prefer to...
9) In short,... should learn to...; Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.
10) As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that...
三、常用谚语 (在议论文中):
1) As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.
2) As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand, if you don?t deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the matter from two sides.
3) As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way.” (有志者事竟成)
4) As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.”(观其交友,知其为人)
5) As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”.(没有苦,就没有甜)
四、辩论中常用的句型:
1) There is no doubt that ...
2) It is obvious/clear that ...
3) As is known to all, ...
4) (It’?s) no wonder... (难怪) He didn’t work hard and no wonder he lost his job.
5) It goes without saying that ... (不用说,不成问题,很自然……)
6) What is more important, ...
7) I am convinced that ... (我深信……)
篇9:2024全国卷高考英语作文评分标准
全文共 2666 字
+ 加入清单1 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。
5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
Ⅰ. 第五档(很好);(21-25分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点
⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,
⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,
⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 , 完全达到了预期的写作目的 Ⅱ. 第四档(好):(16-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的
Ⅲ. 第三档(适当):(11-15分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解
⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差):(6-10分)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务
⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者
Ⅴ. 第一档(差):(1-5分)
未完成试题规定的任务
⑴明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。
Ⅵ. 不得分:(0分) ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要
求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀:
审题,遣词,造句,润色,谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀,我们要如何从这些方面入手呢审题的概念
拿到试卷后,首先浏览书面表达的题目,研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题:看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁:确能够定文章的文体,为你写作提供方向。审要点:如果英语作文中,有要求要点的,一般打分时是踩点给分的,准确把握住要点,是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点要做到以下两个方面:
总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲:根据题目的要点,安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识,写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳),这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上,要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用
可以适度的使用加分词句:高级词、同义词、短语等替代
造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。
多种表达方式表达相同含义
避免句式单调(简单句,并列句,复合句等适度调整)
表达意思清楚无误:具体化,细节化
可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维比如说你朗读的“很好听”,用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)
谋篇的攻略
注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯
行文时多用关联词、引导词,把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合,运用自如的目的,从而获取高分。
具体的连接关系有:并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
2015年高考英语全国I卷
写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例
——领会高考阅卷要求,有效指导学生高考写作备考
【作文题】假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1.栏目介绍;
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约 400 词;
4. 交稿日期:6 月 28 日前。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________
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2015年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准
评分总则:
1、本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分),然后确定其所属的具体档次,以该档次的要求来衡量,最后给分。其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点,分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则:
优秀(22--25):紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,行文流畅,显示出较强的语言运用能力,允许有个别语言错误,但不影响意思表达。
篇10:拯救物种高考优秀英语作文
全文共 3400 字
+ 加入清单due to darwins "evolution", man, willingly or not, has to admit that he is not descendents of adam and eve but rather a species equal to the monkeys, the cats and dogs in nature. although human beings claim to be the most sapient species, it is undeniable that they have a close kinship with the chimpanzees.in a word, we are animals, though more advantageous in mind than our wild or domesticated fellow living beings. but, is this a privilege of human beings to dominate the destinies of other spedes? sorrowfully, some people disregard the natural diversity and many species are in the danger of etinction due to human activities. no longer can the righteous people look on withouttaking an action.
human beings have always overrated themselves in that they assume they are superior creatures whose destiny is granted by god. in the early times, nature was antithetical to human activities. no longer can the righteous people look on without taking an action.
human beings have always overrated themselves in that they assume they are superior creatures whose destiny is granted by god. in the early times, nature was antithetical to human cultures. people set out to conquer nature: they plowed the soil for grains to feed themselves; they fought against storms and tornadoes to safeguard their properties; they made use of tools to eploit natural resources. this struggle against nature precludes the understanding that nature is so generous to humans and it is harmony rather than conflict that has made human lives so comfortable. if the ancestors had not found ways to cope with natural disasters and bucked up again and again in face of peril, it would have been likely that human race might have gone etinct on the way of evolution.however, as human beings get more and more used to the development in their own societies, they,on the contrary, contribute to a nature that is increasingly dissonant and hostile, where other co-eisting species are on the edge of etinction.
it is not the natural evolution, like the glaciers, that caused many species to disappear. it is human activities that is to beblamed. deforestation deprives many bird colonies of their habitat. water pollution destroys the natural environment of aquatic animals. unimaginable numbers of species have to migrate and in search of new habitat, and they die. gulls and other seabirds stranded in the crude oil from ships could not fly to collect food,they die. when furs and hides of cheetahs, rhinos, and crocodiles are sold at good prices on the international market, they die. the prosperity of human society is bloodily indebted to lives of other plants and animal species, yet human beings keep from saving the animals and plants. the money spent on protection of endangered species is money spent worthwhile. so is the effort and time. just imagine one day another intelligent species wearing the leather of human skin.
in the history of human civilization, people have always relied on nature to achieve something of value. fundamentally, we breathe the oygen released by the plants; we enjoy the ravishing beauty of nature in our arts;we even rely on animals to produce eperimental evidence in developing medicines. we owe too much to the plants and animals. it is high time that we did something to prevent the world from becoming a drab and colorless planet, with only the human species living in sheer loneliness.
篇11:关于高考填志愿方式英语作文
全文共 757 字
+ 加入清单Every student will be faced with the question when he passes the college entrance examinations: Should we choose a good major or a good university first?
Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested in. It will also make it possible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.
However, those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.
In my opinion, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.
篇12:2024高考英语作文预测哥本哈根会议
全文共 3250 字
+ 加入清单As world leaders are in Copenhagen (哥本哈根)this month,talks about climate change are gathering steam. But is climate change the most pressing threat(威胁)for mankind?
Write an essay to show your opinions on the most immediate threat for mankind.
Directions:
1. About 200 words
2. Support your position with reasoning and examples.
3. Give the essay a proper title by yourself
Love Makes Beauty
With the fantastic spur both in industry and economy,the past 100 years has seen how modernization and civilization has affected mankind. Recently,Copenhagen is being a focus for its Climate Change Conference. A majority of people hold the belief that climate change is the pressing threat for mankind.
However,acknowledging the great abundance of harms that the changing climate will bring,I‘d say the most immediate threat is just ourselves. I always imagine a view of life filled with fresh air and various flowers swung in gentle wind. But the reality shows this is a real fantasy. With the fantastically developing industry and the rising number of personal cars,not only the air but also the water is at risk universally. For example,what used to be a pride for Ruianees was Tang River,the clean and clear mother river of Ruian. But with time going by,it was seriously polluted and gradually turned into the biggest block of development. What upsets us most is that such a situation is spreading countryside. It seems that citizens on the earth care little about their land,which directly causes further consequences.
How can we deal with environmental problems?There is no doubt that this topic is complicated and unstable as well. But the irreplaceable way,in my thought,is love,love for the earth. It is love that makes beauty,and nothing else will do.
Some say love is a river that drowns the tender reed;some say love is a hunger,an endless,aching need. I say love is a flower,and you,are the only seed.
Heal the world
Nowadays,world leaders are in Copenhagen talking about climate change. Who has such a strong power to gather them from busy work?It‘s our mother——the Earth that has told her kids to start to heal the environment for the pressing threats they are facing now.
It‘s commonly thought that lots of countries are blind to the protection of environment while developing the country. And as the quality of life has developed,many families have its own car. As a result,more and more CO2 has caused the earth to be a “Green House”。If no measure is taken,a large number of kids won’t see the lovely and beautiful snow in winter before long.
To my delight,some people have been concerned about the environment. The movie >is just a good example. It took me 150 minutes to watch the movie. At the same time,I spent a long time considering the meaning which the movie wants to tell people. When the world is at an end,can anyone heal themselves?It‘s obvious that the answer is No. It’s commonly accepted that what the director wants to tell people is that we should take measures to beautify the environment at once or we‘ll die soon.
In a word,the environment pollution is a matter of life and death——a matter no country can afford to ignore. People all over the world are supposed to spare no effort to heal the world. Let‘s take action from here and now!
篇13:2024年高考英语满分作文精选
全文共 1473 字
+ 加入清单A teacher just likes a shining star to students. Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
I happened to be in Miss Fus class when I began my high school years. At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation were poor. Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to them. For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken English. When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak. First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them. In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise speaking.Little by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before others. Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English contest.
Whenever I look at the stars in the sky, I recognize the brightest one ---- the symbol of Miss Fu in my heart. Miss Fu will always be a shining star in my life!
老师对学生就像一颗闪亮的星。傅小姐,我的一位英语老师,是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星。
我碰巧在傅小姐的学生当我开始我的高中。那时,我不敢在公共场合大声说英语,因为我是害羞的,我的发音和语调很穷。害怕被嘲笑,我从未把我的手傅小姐提出了在课堂上回答问题,即使我有一些好的答案。有一段时间,我甚至失去了兴趣练习英语口语。傅小姐发现的原因时,她鼓励我说。她先给我买一些英语磁带和告诉我仔细听取他们的意见,并试着背诵他们。在课堂上,经常问的问题,我有很多机会练习说。渐渐地,我变得敢于说话,敢于在别人面前讲英语。傅小姐甜甜地笑了,当她听到这个消息,我被选为参加一个重要的英语口语大赛。
每当我看着天上的星星,我承认最亮的象征之一——傅小姐在我心中。傅小姐永远是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星!
篇14:2024年高考英语作文万能句子
全文共 775 字
+ 加入清单This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先,……;第二,,……;第三,……
Why did …? For one thing …,for another …. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会……?一个原因是……,令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是……
I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即……,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言,……
It was obvious that …很显然,….
It may be true that …, but it doesnt mean that …
可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……
It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldnt ignore that …
认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……
There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……
篇15:什么是爱高考优秀英语作文
全文共 2431 字
+ 加入清单a lot of people shared their views to what love really is, or at least what love is in their eyes. perhaps love is just an illusion. a strong illusion, especially for those who are searching for a purpose of life. is love an answer? love can be wonderful, special, complicated, a distress, a gift, a curse, a tragedy, and most of all, an eperience. love is a mysterious and a complicated force. what do a person mean when they say they love someone? love is many different things. each of us have our own understanding of love is, and most of the time we base our definitions from feelings and eperiences. the book defines love in many ways. "it is a strong affection for another arising out of kinship or personal ties." it can be an affection and tenderness felt by lovers. love is the object of attachment, devotion, or admiration.
just when we thought we finally grasp what love is, somebody asks:"does anyone really know what love mean? i believe i have a true love, but true love is always hurt, isnt it?"i scratches my head with this thought and began to wonder. what is the answer to this? "this i have to know!" i said to myself. i looked in the mirror and asked "is it a true love when you know you want to live with this special person for the rest of your life? have we reached true love when we are ready to give everything away towards our subject? or maybe when can go as far as to sacrifice ourselves for our love? what about love as an obsession? is that possible?
"but isnt love suppose to be an obsession? if it is not, then youd have to rationalize. if you rationalize then its not love, because there is always a better rationalization.""i think the "in love" phase is obsessive but according to williamson (and backed up by my paltry eperience), love does not involve the ego, is selfless and the opposite of obsession."according to marriane williamson, the author of "a return to love," there is a "holy love" and a "special love." "the latter type is the obsessiveone; finding that one special person absorbs _all_ your attention."
so who is right and who is wrong about love? there is no wrong answer. love is many wonderful things. love may not work out all the time but it leaves you a special sort of feeling, like nothing you have ever imagined. is love a purpose of life? i think are life will be dull without it. but is it necessary? important? it is a part of life, and forever it will be a part of us.
篇16:2024高考英语作文经典句型集锦
全文共 1776 字
+ 加入清单英语作文精彩句子集锦 (2011-01-13 16:55:46)转载▼
标签: 杂谈
英语作文精彩句子集锦
1. Nothing is more important than …没有什么比。。。更重要
Eg。Nothing is more important than health./ to be independent.
没有什么比健康独立更重要。
2. sb./sth. is the +最高级+(n.) that I have ever met/ seen/ known.。。。
是我所遇到、见到、知道最。。。
Eg。 Mr zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met/ seen/ known.
张老师是我所遇到/见过/知道的最好的老师。
Freindship is the most valuable thing that I have ever had.
友谊是我所拥有的最宝贵的东西。
3. We can not/ never emphasize the importance of(doing)sth … too much.
We can never attach too much importance to(doing)sth ….
我们再怎么强调。。。的重要性也不过分。
Eg。 We can not/ never emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不过分。
We can never attach too much importance to reading books widely and wisely.
广泛而聪明地看书是非常重要的。
4. Only when we。。。。。can we….只有当我们。。。时候,我们才能。。。。。
Eg。Only when we devote ourselves to study can we achieve great success.
只有当我们投身于学习,我们才能获得成功。
Only when we have a healthy body can we do what we want.
只有身体健康我们才能做想做的事。
5. As the saying goes 正如谚语所说
There is a saying that goes,
As a proverb says,
Eg。As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.
正如谚语所说,“有志者事竟成”。
There is a saying that goes, “failure is the mother of success.”
有谚语说:“失败乃成功之母。”
As a proverb says, no pains, no gains.
正如谚语所说,“不劳则无获。”
6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…
也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……
7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。
历史上,……的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。
8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…
也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。
9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。
越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。
10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…
对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论:……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……
篇17:高考英语满分
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+ 加入清单假设你是李华,你的英国网友Peter希望了解一下我国高考英语试卷(NMET)中的“短
文改错”(Error Correction)题型的情况。请你写一封回复邮件。并特别强调自己某一次因为没有严格按照要求答题被扣掉了本可得到的7分。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.内容请参照本卷该大题内容。
3.生词:(打)勾:tick 分:point 逻辑(的):logic
Hi, Peter:
Thanks for your e-mail. Here I’m going to tell you what you asked about.
Error Correction, as the 1st section of Written Part of NMET, mainly tests the mastery of the use of words and grammar of English. The understanding of the given text is course important to the performance.
There are 10 numbered lines, each of which may have one mistake. You have to decide firstly whether there is a mistake or not. If not, put a tick in the numbered blank. If there is a mistake, you may have to add a word, cross out a word, or change word. You have to find out the mistakes in the use of words and/or grammar. Sometimes there may be a logic problem, which would be the most difficult.
Last time I got 7 points less than expected. Why? I didn’t put the answers strictly following the rule, although I did know how to do it.
Anything still unclear? Just write to me.
嗨,彼得:
谢谢你的邮件。在这里我要告诉你,你问。
误差校正,作为高考英语笔试部分第一部分,主要测试词汇和语法的掌握英语的使用。对文本的理解是很重要的。
一共有10株,其中可能有一个错误。首先你要确定是否有错误。如果没有,空格的空白。如果有一个错误,你可以添加一个词,划掉一个字,或改变的话。你要找到的词语或语法错误使用。有时可能会有一个逻辑问题,这将是最困难的。
上次我得了7分,比预期的少。为什么?我没有把答案的严格规则,虽然我不知道如何去做。
还不清楚什么呢?就给我写信。
篇18:2024高考英语作文常用句型大全
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+ 加入清单导语:近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高,高分文章要有较多的词汇,较高级的词汇用法。有了固定的作文句型就再也不用发愁了。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的万能句子,希望对您有所帮助。
一.开头用语:
良好的开端等于成功的一半.在写作文时,通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求,点出文章的中心思想。
1.议论论文:
A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages.
B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.
C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,...
D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.
E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.
F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.
2. 书信:
A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.
B. I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job...
C. Thank you for your letter of May 5.D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.
E. How nice to hear from you again.
3. 口头通知或介绍情况:
A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make.
B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.
C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you.
4. 演讲稿:
A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health.
B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest.
二.并列用语:
as well as, not only…but (also), including,
A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.
B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.
C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French.
D. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.
三.对比用语:
on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ..., though, for one thing ;for another, nevertheless
A. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.
B. It is hard work; I enjoy it though.
C. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.
四. 递进用语:
even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse
A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location.
五. 例证用语:
in one’s opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely
A. As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
B. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.
六. 时序用语:
first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time
in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,
A. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, let’s have coffee.
B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.
七. 强调用语:
especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth.. , not at all ,
A. Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.
B What in the world/on earth are you doing?
八. 因果用语:
thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of..., owe ...to...
A. The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.
B. As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations.
九. 总结用语:
in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all
A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.
B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted.
篇19:高考英语作文开头技巧集锦
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+ 加入清单一篇文章通常可分为三个部分,即开头、正文和结尾。这三个部分安排是否得体,直接影响到文章的质量。
文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山,用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题,使读者了解文章要谈论什么,一下于引起读者的兴趣。
作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种:
1.开门见山,揭示主题
文章一开头,,就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如How I Spent My Vacation的开头可以写成:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
Honesty的开头可以写成:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a liar,and is looked upon by honest people.
2.交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如A Trip to Jinshan 的开头可以写成:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如A Trip to the Taishan Mountain的开头是:
篇20:2024高考英语作文结尾句型模板
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+ 加入清单导语:高考英语作文结尾总结句式有着一定的规律,可以灵活地套用一些模板。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料,希望对您有所帮助。
1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____。
2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future。
3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)……
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______。
4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______。
5. 随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better。
6. 至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能……
For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____。
7. 对我来说,我认为有必要……。原因如下:第一,……; 第二,……;最后……但同样重要的是……
In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______。
8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而,就我个人而言,我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______。
9. 综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____。
10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____。
附注:
结尾万能句
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that … 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
提出建议万能句
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视。
Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that … 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能……
It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……
预示后果万能句
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.
很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险。
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that … 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
论证万能句
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理。
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点……
Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边。
I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do …. 在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智。
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why …
给出原因万能句
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的。首先,……;第二,……;第三,……
Why did …? For one thing …,for another …. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会……?一个原因是……,令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是……
I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即……,其主要原因如下:
解决办法万能句
Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议。
The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题。
批判错误观点
As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言,……
It was obvious that …很显然,….
It may be true that …, but it doesn’t mean that … 可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……
It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn’t ignore that … 认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……
There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……
如何连接
强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.
比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
列举 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example, except (for), to illustrate.
时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.
解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.
递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
转折 however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, whereas
原因 for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as a consequence
总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
其他 mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case