如何写好小学英语作文【20篇】

I have a gentle and kind mother, I love my mother.

Once, my mother brought me to the big supermarket to buy things, where I want a lot of things, have to wear, play, etc., my mother every kind of buy me more, when I walk in front of a lot of small food pointed to To buy, the mother was one by one refused, my mother patiently told me about the harm of eating small food, then I understand that my mother is so much care for me.

And once again, I was sick, in the hospital, my mother asked the doctor anxiously my condition, carrying my upstairs downstairs ran to do a variety of tests, looking at her mothers full of sweating look, I Very distressed her, I secretly determined, must take good care of the body, no longer let my mother worry about me.

This is my mother, my mother is my care is endless, my mother love for me can not use words to express, my mothers greatest wish is to let me learn, grow up, I want to tell my mother, I Will not live up to your expectations of me, I love my mom!

Here is a difference between science and technology.Science is a method of

answering theoretical questions; technology is a method of solving practical

problems. Science has to do with discovering the facts and relationships between

observable phenomena in nature and with establishing theories that serve to

organize these facts and relationships; technology has to do with

tools,techniques, and procedures for implementing the findings of science.

Another distinction between science and technology has to do with the

progress in each. Progress in science excludes the human factor. Scientists, who

seek to comprehend the universe and know the truth with the highest degree of

accuracy and certainty, cannot pay heed to their own or other peoples likes or

dislikes, or to popular ideas about the fitness of things. What scientists

discover may shock or anger people--as did Darwins theory of evolution. But

even an unpleasant truth is more than likely to be useful; besides, we have the

option of refusing to believe it! But hardly so with technology;we do not have

the option of refusing to hear the sonic boom produced by a supersonic

aircraft-flying overhead; we do not have the option of refusing to breathe

polluted air. Unlike science, progress in technology must be our slave and not

the reverse. The legitimate purpose of technology is to serve peopie--people in

general, not merely some people; and future generations, not merely those who

presently wish to gain advantage for themselves.

We are all familiar with the abuses of technology. Many people blame

technology itself for widespread pollution, resource depletion and even social

decay in general--so much so that the promise of technology is obscured. That

promise is a cleaner and healthier world. If wise applications of science and

technology do not lead to a better world, what else will?

thanksgiving day in the united states, the fourth thursday in november is called thanksgiving day. on that day, americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the year.thanksgiving day is usually a family day.

people always celebrate with big dinners and happy reunions. pumpkin pie and indian pudding are traditional thanksgiving desserts. relatives from other cities, students who have been away at school, and many other americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home.

在美国,感恩节在11月的第四个星期四是感恩节。在那一天,美国人感谢的祝福。感恩节通常是一个家庭日。

人们总是与大型晚宴庆祝快乐的团聚。南瓜饼和印度甜点布丁都是传统的感恩节。亲戚从其他城市,学生已经在学校,和其他许多美国人长途旅行假期呆在家里。

Last  Sunday，I was very busy。I got up at six o’clock。I had breakfast at seven o’clock。then I cleaned my room。I praceticed playing the guitar at eight o‘clock。After I played soccer。 I cook dinner  at eleven o’clock。Then I watched TV and did my homework。 At ninteen o’clock I ate dinner。Then I took a shower。It was cold。Then I go to bed at nine o‘colck .

[忙碌的一天小学英语作文

National Day, Mom and Dad took me to Suzhou on Saturday farm, where fun.

There, I ride the horse, when the back of the brave little knight. I gave the old goat the leaves, my God! Actually attracted a group of goats to grab the leaves (strange why is the old goats love camphor leaves, and do not like grazing?). I also saw a lot of animals in the farm, there are dairy cows, sika deer, lovely little white rabbits, tall camels, beautiful peacocks, ferocious ostriches, and a picture I have never seen Chicken the same, but much larger than the chicken, the neck covered with many red spots of animals, I was afraid, took the mothers hand, fleeing quickly.

There are not only many animals in the farm, there are many orchards, there are vineyards, there are pear orchards, flowers orchards, there are many, then we went to the jujube, made a return to farmers, eating their own picking dates, Taste really sweet ah!

Come back, we are very happy, I told my mother said, next time I would like to go there to play.

Today is the New Year’s Day. I have a three-day holiday, so I can go out have fun or stay at home to have a good rest. Today, my parents take me out. We go to the mall. Many things are cheap so my mother buys many. I have a new cloth and a pair of shoes. I am so happy. They are the gifts for the New Year. At night, we have a big dinner outside. The foods are so delicious. Today is a happy day.

Im a happy girl.My english name is kitty.are you happy? Im very happy.I have a good friend.Her name is cheng xin ting.She has a pair of big eyes. I like her.

I like english.My birthday is in november. Im a good girl.Im ten years old.Im in class seven grade four. My teachers name is yao hui feng. She is a good teacher!i like her.

What color do you like? I like pink and perple. I want a rabbit for my birthday. I like to eat hambuger. I like to go to shool.

I have a good mother. I have a good father.

Oh, no! Im hugry! "mumy! Im hugry!"

good bye!

我是一个快乐的女孩。我的英文名字是kitty。你快乐吗?我很高兴。我有一个好朋友。她的名字叫成新亭。她有一双大眼睛。我喜欢她。

我喜欢英语。我的生日在十一月。我是一个很好的女孩。我十岁。我在四年级七班。我的老师的名字是姚惠丰。她是个好老师!我喜欢她。

你喜欢什么颜色?我喜欢粉红色和紫色。我生日的时候想要一只兔子。我喜欢吃汉堡。我喜欢去上学。

我有一个好妈妈。我有一个好爸爸。

哦，不!我饿了!”妈妈!我饿了!”

再见!

教师节-Teacher‘Day

It is Teachers＇ Day on September 10th every year. Teachers are the greatest people in the world, I think, because they teach us how to write and read. The most important is that they teach us how to be a real man. They are also kind to everybody and they don＇t want anyone to fall behind others. They always get on very well with their students, and they are our best friends. When students are in trouble, they can help them in time.＇ I will be a teacher when I grow up.

九月十日是教师节。我认为教师是世界上最伟大的人，因为他们教会我们读书写字，更重要的是他们教会我们如何做人。他们对每个学生都很好，不想让任何一个人掉队。他们和学生们关系融洽。他们是我们的好朋友。当学生有困难时，他们会及时帮助学生。等我长大了，我也要当一名教师。

[小学生英语作文教师节-Teacher‘Day

In our common home - the earth, life with a lot of animal, which animal do

you like? Anyway, my favorite animal is our most loyal friend - a dog.My

favorite is my neighbors dog that Beijing BaGou yuan yuan and collie handsome.

They play together every day, it is a good friend of a stick dozen not

scattered, I also like them, they saw I was shaking his tail towards

me.Handsome shape tiger is big, the body is about more than 60 centimeters

long. Two leg, capable to my shoulders, his eyes, nose, mouth, ears are much

older than yuan yuan, I most like to see him running figure - curly float in the

sky, like a nice horse. I often and yuan yuan, running with the handsome, every

time is handsome first, second, I am the third round. Can literally, handsome

running faster than thoroughbred horse. Average dog ran up, send out "clicking"

sound, but handsome rans voice is very small, not carefully is inaudible. The

appearance of the handsome run is also very handsome, curly, bow shaped body. If

you want to use a word to describe talent, that is: handsome. If you use a word

that was impeccable.Compared with the handsome, round shape is much smaller,

only 30 centimeters in length and a half smaller than talent. The meaning of his

name from his eyes, it is too round. Like a shiny black stones. And his legs are

very round and round this is name. And his legs are very short, so even if he

runs, casting its foot also run fast, but I still like him very much the kind of

simple and lovely.This is what I like animals, do you like?

The classmates, teacher wang, hello!

My name is ungho, 9 years old this year, height 1.36 meters, weight 30 kg and in grade three.

I am a lively and cheerful boy, I like sports, running, high jump, long jump, play a ball game are my strengths, and I also took part in the taekwondo training, is now red stripe, coach often praised me very well, Im very proud.

I also like to learn, not only book knowledge to master the good, and often read some books, fairy tales, classic, social science, celebrity stories, historical stories. I especially like weapon books, aircraft, tanks, guns I like it very much. Im going to good good study, invented a super plane in the future, to defend the motherland.

I also like painting, music, sachs is well.

I was industrious child, at home to help my mother do housework, I also recently learned Fried eggs.

I also love to play with classmates, all together, I am very happy, who have difficulty I are willing to help. Everybody praised me is a sensible boy.

同学们、王老师，你们好!

我的名字是成浩，今年9岁，身高1.36米，体重30公斤，上三年级了。

我是一个活泼开朗的男孩，我喜欢运动，跑步，跳高，跳远，打球都是我的长项，而且我还参加了跆拳道培训，现在已经红带了，教练经常夸我打的好，我自己也很骄傲。

我也喜欢学习，不仅书本知识掌握的好，而且经常看一些课外书，童话故事，古典名著，社会科学，名人故事，历史故事。我特别喜欢兵器方面的书，飞机，坦克，冲锋枪我都非常喜欢。我准备好好学习，将来发明一架超级飞机，来保卫祖国。

我还喜欢画画，音乐，萨克斯也吹得不错。

我还是勤劳的孩子，在家里帮妈妈做家务，我最近还学会了煎鸡蛋。

我还特别喜欢和同学们一起玩，大家在一起，我特别开心，谁有困难我都愿意帮助。大家都夸我是一个懂事的好孩子。

Graduated from middle school in 1917, zhou enlai, with the help of the classmates and teachers, to raise the cost of study abroad in Japan a. Performance of zhou enlai is a love reading, love of learning! Because of zhou enlai aspire to read at an early age, the first generation of prime minister!

The text about zhou enlai boyhood in foreign concessions witnessed the Chinese people by foreigner bullying in the concession, the Chinese onlookers dare to anger cant speak. Immediately, zhou enlai, comprehend the meaning of the weak, and determined to study for the revitalization of the Chinese.

A 12 years old children should have such ambition and mind! Won the plaudits of wei principal: "hurrah! Is the rise of the Chinese! Aspirants when effect Zhou Sheng!" His patriotism, how strong!

"Young strong a country is strong, young rich national wealth." Let us set big dreams since childhood, study hard, do a useful pillars just for the motherland!

1917年，周恩来中学毕业，在同学和老师的帮助下，筹到一笔日本留学的经费。表现了周恩来是一个爱读书，爱学习的人!因为周恩来从小就立志读书，现任第一代总理!

本篇课文讲的就是周恩来少年时代在外国租界里目睹了中国人在租界里受洋人欺负，围观的中国人都敢怒不敢言。顿时，周恩来感悟到中华不振的含义，从而立志要为振兴中华而读书。

一个十二岁的孩子竟然有如此抱负和胸怀!博得了魏校长的喝彩：“好哇!为中华之崛起!有志者当效周生啊!”他的爱国心，多么强烈啊!

“少年强则国强，少年富则国富。”让我们从小立下远大的理想，刻苦学习，做一名对祖国有用的栋梁之才!

Here is a small zoo. I like the tiger，although they are very ugly，but very imposing. Also has the national treasure panda，they are a little shy，does not dare to look at us. Who are those? they are elephants，you look at they to be huge，also has a point to be interesting. I do not like the lion，they compare the tiger clown，is also unimposing.

This is the small zoo.

3.Recently, three owls appeared suddenly on our campus. They made me think of my pet from childhood. When I was little, we had an owl at home. It was small, gray, and had two big eyes. We liked it very much. Every time I went home, it greeted me by making “goo-goo” sounds. We always played with it and talked to it. It would blink its eyes just like it understood what we were saying. It was like my best friend. But when the weather became colder, we forgot to keep it warm, and it died. It made us sad for a long time, and it also taught me how important it is to take care of animals.

I often go to see my grandma grandpa during my summer vacation.They are both seventy years old live in the country happily. Summer view of the countryside is very beautiful. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning, breathing the fresh air,listening to the birds singing, enjoying the green trees, red flowers the river. I like fishing with my friends. When night comes, I sit under the tree with my grandma, listening to her telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back,I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.

我经常去看望我的爷爷奶奶在我的暑假。他们都是七十岁住在乡下。夏天的乡下非常漂亮。我可以在那里做很多有趣的事情。我习惯早上早起,呼吸新鲜空气,聆听鸟儿歌唱,享受绿色的树,红色的花。我和我的朋友喜欢钓鱼。夜幕降临时,我和我奶奶坐在树下,听她讲动听的故事。我告诉她一些新的事情发生。当我不得不回去时,我总是不愿意去。我真的感到快乐生活在这个国家。

I love my campus, the beautiful campus.

In school, teaching building eight golden characters on the wall are greeted, "harmonious, bold and unrestrained, exploration, innovation", this is the school motto of our school.

Right, foot on the way with the stones of cobblestone, unknowingly came to the gallery. Corridors, greeted the vine climb to the top of gallery to for students to keep out the sun. The class was over, the students all like to play here. The park has a small bamboo forest, spring, small bamboo forests of bamboo shoots crowds of his head.

Go further to the right, it is the playground of school. Have children in the rope skipping, running on the playground... there are a large camphor tree, spring, pulled out big camphor tree buds, summer big camphor tree is like a big green umbrella, to shade the students. In winter, at school, large camphor tree was covered with snow, like a big white hat. Big camphor tree is very charming all the year round, the classmates all like to go there to play, after gym class. Big camphor tree is like a kindly grandfather, to meet us to school every day, has watched the us to leave.

Campus, in the most distinctive is the teaching building of the hall, walked into the hall, the most noteworthy is that hung on the hall on top of the "west", "west" with photo is miyoshi students, the teacher I hope we can spread your wings and fly like a bird.

A circle around the school, you should be familiar with my campus is a bit, then please come to my school to watch!

我爱我的校园，这个美丽的校园。

走进校门，教学楼墙上的八个金光闪闪的大字映入眼帘，“和谐、奔放、探究、创新”，这是我们学校的校训。

向右走，脚踩在用一颗颗鹅卵石铺成的石子路上，不知不觉来到了长廊。长廊里，密密麻麻的藤攀上了廊顶，为同学们遮挡太阳。下课了，同学们都喜欢到这里玩。公园里有一片小竹林，春天到了，小竹林里的笋成群的探出头来。

再往右走，便是学校的操场。有小朋友在跳绳、跑步······操场上还有一棵大樟树，春天，大樟树抽出来新芽，夏天大樟树像一把绿色的大伞，为同学们遮阳。冬天，下学了，大樟树上盖满了雪，就像一顶巨大的白帽子。大樟树一年四季都非常迷人，同学们上完体育课时都喜欢去那儿玩耍、嬉戏。大樟树就像一位慈祥的老爷爷，每天迎接我们上学，有目送着我们离开。

校园里，最有特色的要数教学楼里的大厅了，走进大厅，最引人注意的是那挂在厅顶上的“西子鸟”，“西子鸟”上贴的都是三好学生的照片，老师希望我们能像小鸟一样展翅飞翔。

绕了学校一圈，你应该对我的校园有点熟悉了吧，那么就请来我的学校细细观赏吧!

我又迟到了 I Am Late Again

I opened my eyes in the morning and looked at the clock. "Oh, dear! Its

half past seven already. Ill be late again," I thought. Without breakfast, I

hurried to school. But it began to rain hard.

早晨我睁开眼睛，看看钟表，“天啊!已经七点半了。我又要迟到了，”我想。没有吃早饭，我就匆匆朝学校赶去，可是天又下起雨来。

When I got to the classroom, the maths teacher had already begun his

lesson. It was Mr wang. All of us were afraid of him. I didnt like him, or his

lessons. I opened the door. " Im late again, Mr Wang."

当我到教室时，数学老师已经开始讲课了。是王老师，所有的学生都怕他。我不喜欢他，也不喜欢他的课。我打开门，“王老师，我又迟到了。”

"Ive told you not to be late, but you ..." he said angrily. But suddenly

he stopped, and looked at my clothes. He quickly took off his own jacket and

handed it to me. "Now take off your wet coat and put wet one on." he said

kindly.

“我早就告诉你不要迟到，可是你……”他生气地说。可是他突然停下来，看了看我的湿衣服。他很快脱下自己的上衣递给我。“把你的湿衣服脱下来，套上这件。”他和蔼地说。

It was a bit large for me, but I felt warm in it.

衣服套我身上有点大，可是穿上感觉很温暖。

导语：一年有四个季节，春夏秋冬，各有特色，你最喜欢的季节是什么呢?为什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It was snow just now, there are lots of snow in the sky. The rivers are stopping flowing. The ground is covered with a layer of snow.

The snow looks like smoke, its white. It likes a piece of paper. The snow fall from the sky. It kisses the ground. How white the snow is! How beautiful the snow is!

I like snow! I like winter!

【参考翻译】

刚才下雪了，天上有很多雪。河流停止流动。地上覆盖着一层雪。

雪看起来像烟，它是白色的。它喜欢一张纸。雪从天空坠落。它亲吻大地。雪是多么白!多么美丽的雪!

我喜欢雪!我喜欢冬天!

There are quite a lot since I was young, I like sports, they like the sparkling stars sky, how the number is countless. However, my favorite sport is climbing pole.

I like to climb the pole of the campaign, because when I was in kindergarten, I was one of the most naughty girl in our class, everybody calls me "drum". And I climb pole of the sport is also a lot of girls do not dare, dare only two girls and boys of the class, I am one of them, it makes me very proud.

I remember it was a sunny morning, I climb the pole and two boys game. Although I was a lot of trouble with boys than anything, but since I was young, I have a little afraid of heights, so the crawling crawling feeling more and more afraid of, have to despondently slipped. I low head say: "I... I... I lost!" In fact, my heart has one hundred defy spirit.

After school, I got home, he rushed to the front of the my backyard that rail, slowly began to practice. Unconsciously, I have already climbed to the top, I looked down, "ah... frighten to death me!" I never climb such a high place, the sweat from my face like soybean straight flowing downwards.

How can I get rid of my fear of heights problem? I sat on a swing hard thinking. At this time, the father asked me what was wrong, I put the incident tell dad, dad said: "as long as the body balance, dont look down, you will not be afraid." I according to dads words again and again to try, but I cant help sliding down every time, and I remember my father told me, his eyes closed, the body balance, I tried several times, oh... I succeeded, I from the rail down, very happy. I get this good news for the first time dad.

The next day, I and the two boys in the kindergarten again launched a fierce climb bar game, after the match began, my good friends encouraged me to below, and my heart is like fifteen buckets to draw water so anxious. Monkeys like to climb two boys, but they havent been able to climb to the highest point. I also not to be outdone, finally I didnt live up to the expectations of good friends to me, I win, my good friends around me to applaud for me. The two boys have to throw in the towel.

Since then and I climbed to the bar. Climbing pole brings me health and brings joy, it is one of my favorite sports.

我从小就有许许多多喜欢的运动，它们像天上那闪闪发光的小星星，怎么数也数不清。但是，我最喜欢的一项运动就是爬杆。

我之所以喜欢爬杆这项运动，是因为我在上幼儿园的时候，我是我们班女生里最淘气的一个，大家都叫我“淘汽包”。而我爬杆这项运动也是很多女生不敢做的，全班只有两个女生敢和男生比，我就是其中一个，这让我很自豪。

我记得那是一个阳光明媚的早上，我和两个男生比赛爬杆。虽然我是个淘气包什么都敢跟男生比，但是我从小就有点恐高，所以爬着爬着感觉越来越怕，只好灰溜溜地滑了下来。我低着头说：“我……我……我输了!”其实我的心里有一百个的不服气。

放学后，我一回到家，就冲到我家后院那根栏杆前，开始慢慢地练习。不知不觉地，我已经爬到了最高处，我一往下看，“啊……吓死我啦!”我从没有爬过这么高的地方，大豆般的汗珠从我的脸颊直往下流。

怎么才能去掉我恐高的毛病呢?我坐在秋千上闷头苦想着。这时，爸爸过来问我怎么了，我把事情的经过讲给爸爸听，爸爸告诉说：“只要身体保持平衡，不要向下看，你就不会害怕了。”我按爸爸的话一次又地尝试着，可是我每次都会情不自禁地滑下来，我回想爸爸跟我讲的话，把眼睛闭着，身体保持平衡，我又试了几次，哦……我成功了，我从栏杆下来后，好开心!我第一时间把这个好消息告诉爸爸。

第二天，我和那两个男生又在幼儿园展开了一场激烈的爬杆比赛，比赛开始后，我的好朋友都在下面鼓励我，而我的心里却像十五个吊桶打水七上八下。两个男生猴子似的往上爬，可他们都没能爬到最高点。我也不甘示弱，终于我没有辜负好朋友们对我的期望，我赢了，我的好朋友都围着我为我喝彩。两个男生也只好认输。

从那以后我和爬杆结下了不解之缘。爬杆给我带来了健康，带来了快乐，它是我最喜欢的一种运动。

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

Today is December 25, 2015. I am going to give the Christmas CARDS to my classmates in my schoolbag.

I dont know which classmate went to search my bag, the classmate of my schoolbag cried out: "wow. What a beautiful Christmas card." This voice has attracted many students. At the time, I was angry, but I felt that it was the happiest time to share Christmas with my classmates.

In the end, I distributed the Christmas CARDS to my classmates, and some also gave them to me.

Ah. Today is my happiest day.

今天是2015年12月25日，我准备送给同学们的圣诞卡还藏在书包里。

不知道哪位同学去搜我的书包的时候，搜我的书包的那个同学大叫一声：“哇。好漂亮的圣诞卡。”这一声，招引来了很多同学。当时，我很生气，但是我又觉得，和同学们一起分享圣诞节这个时候，是最快乐的时刻。

最后，我还是把圣诞卡分给了同学们，还有一些也送了给我。

啊。今天是我最快乐的一天。

Your enthusiasm, your both hands, can help others ; Your sincerity, your smile, can move others ; Your compliment, your blessing, can reciprocate others ……This, are all what you should do . Because you are accepting others help all the time , you should reciprocate them. No matter the friend or enemy, no matter the one that is familiar w-ith or strange one, whether he is a rich man or beggar. Help to be not to choose the target , choose time , choose the place. Go , make others warm with heart of you , g-o , help others with hand of you , go , persuade someone else with your action. This is what you should do . You should learn to pay , learns help, learn to present . So long as everybody can do so both, this world will be a cradle that is full of loving , the earth is that one is full of warm collectives!

One Day of Mine

On May Day, my mother, father, my sister and me went to park to have a picnic, and then visited my grandma and grandpa.

At nine o’clock in the morning, we went to park for picnic. We took juice, cornflakes, apples, oranges, lollipops, bananas, ice creams, mangoes, and so on. I also took toys, such as doll, ball, balloon, skateboard and a kite.

At two o’clock in the afternoon, we went to visit my grandma and grandpa. I helped grandpa do some house work. My sister and me played skateboard and doll.

At eight o’clock in the evening, we went home, and played computer games for two hours and then went to bed.

I was very happy on May Day!

“五一”劳动节那天，我妈妈、爸爸、姐姐和我去公园野餐，然后去看望了爷爷和奶奶。

早上九点钟，我们去公园野餐。我们带了果汁、玉米片、苹果、桔子、棒棒糖、香蕉、冰激凌、芒果等吃的。我还带了玩具，像娃娃、球、气球、滑板和风筝。

下午两点，我们去看望爷爷和奶奶。我帮爷爷做了一些家务活。我姐姐和我玩了滑板和洋娃娃。

晚上八点我们回家了。回家后又玩了两个小时的电脑游戏，然后就去睡觉了。

“五一”这一天我很开心！

[五一假期的小学英语作文（含翻译）