this is me小学英语作文(实用20篇)

秋天来了，天气凉了，树叶慢慢的落了下来，就像一只只蝴蝶在空中飞舞;枫叶变红了，小草变黄了，就像铺上了一层橙黄|色的地毯;果园里的果子熟了，苹果红彤彤的，挂满了枝头，就像一个个红灯笼。

Autumn comes, the weather is cool, the leaves slowly falling down, like a butterfly fluttering in the air; the maple leaves turn red, yellow grass, is covered with a layer of orange | colored carpet; orchard fruit ripe, red apples, covered with branches, like a all the red lanterns.

梨渐渐成熟了，风一吹，梨摇摇晃晃的，好像一个个小娃娃在荡秋千;桔子也渐渐成熟了，有的三四个挤在一起，好像在窃窃私语，有的五六个一堆，好像在开会，有的独自站在枝头好像在寻找伙伴。

Pear gradually mature, the wind blows, pear rickety, like a small doll in the swing; orange also gradually mature, some three or four huddled together, seemed to whisper, some five or six pile, as if in a meeting, standing in the branches seemed to find partners alone.

小动物们也去找自己喜欢的食物，这样它们就可以安心的冬眠了;我们的朋友大雁和小燕子也准备飞向南方过冬了;小朋友们也可以放风筝了;农民伯伯站在山岗上看着一望无际的庄稼自言自语地说：“今年又是个丰收年呀!”眼睛情不自禁地眯成了一条缝。

Small animal are also looking for her love of food, so that they can feel at ease to hibernate; our friends geese and swallow also ready to fly south for the winter; the children can fly kites; farmers stand on the hill watching endless crops automatic speaking said: "this year is a harvest year!" The eyes narrowed uncontrollably.

看，多么美丽的秋天呀!秋天不仅给我们带来喜悦，还是一个丰收的季节。

Look, what a beautiful fall! Autumn brings us not only joy, but also a harvest season.

[小学生关于秋天的英语作文

My good friend is Mei. She’s a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be good friends forever.

我的好朋友是美。她是一个女孩。她是我的同学。

梅又高又瘦。她有两个大眼睛和长头发。她喜欢听音乐和读书。有时我们一起听音乐。她喜欢夏天。因为她会游泳在夏天的假期。她喜欢粉红色和白色的。她是在四班,和我六年级。她通常由摩托车上学。她有时步行上学。我们经常在周末一起去购物。

我们会永远是好朋友。

We have a lot of happy and sad things every day, I am no exception, especially worthy of happy things - I help my mother to wash clothes.

I remember one time I helped my mother to wash clothes, before I started to know how to wash clothes clean, my mother carefully taught me how to put my clothes good

Her mother while washing clothes, while I show me, she first put the clothes into the water, put a little wash liquid hand rub, and soon followed the first time the mother clothes, and then wash the clothes again, my mother put a no Clean clothes washed very clean, my mother said: "Then let you wash it!" "This is not easy!" I said proudly up. I put my own clothes in the water.

First of all, I took the laundry to the side, pour a little wash liquid, hand rubbing hard I turned over the clothes to see if there is no clean, my mother looked at the instructions I have not washed clean, I said: "I wash very clean. I want to play." Mom angry, "play what play, things "I know wrong, the clothes and wash it again, my mother happy, I am also very happy."

As the saying goes: "look easy, difficult to do things." We do things must be patient.

This thing though I got the criticism of my mother, but I am very happy. Because I know how to do things beginning and end, to be patient and meticulous ... ...

Hi， everybody！My name is …. I study in  changan  central  primary  school  大家好，我叫… 我在长安中心小学学习

I  am in Class 4 Grade 1  I like English very much. 我在一年级4班，我很喜欢英语

I study English everyday ,  I read books ,I listen to the tapes and watch videos我每天都学习英语。我读英语书, 听英语磁带，看英语光碟

Hello, everyone, its my honor to stand here introducing myself.

大家好， 很高兴有机会在这里介绍我自己。

My name is xxx, from Class 2, Grade six,xxxx Primary School.

我是xxx，xx小学六年级2班的学生。

Im doing well in my study, besides Im the monitor of my class and I get on well with my classmates.

我学习成绩优秀，是班上的班长并且我和同学们相处很融洽。

Im a happy and talented girl. Im good at drawing and many of my drawings have won prizes. At the same time, I like telling stories.

我是一个开朗又多才多艺的女孩，画画是我最擅长的，曾多次或奖。同时我还很会讲故事。

Im interested in learning English very much, and I believe that I will do well in future. I wont let you down!

我很喜欢学习英语，我相信我会表现的出色，我不会让大家失望的。

Thanks for your listening.

谢谢你们的聆听。

Through the ages, the earth mother with sweet milk feeding countless generations. The original she was decorated lovely young players. But, now human to its own interests, tortured her. Humans have only one earth; And the earth is facing serious environmental crisis. "Save the earth" has become the strongest voice people all over the world.

I feel heartache for the deterioration of the environment, I think: as the future successors of teenagers, if dont understand the gravity of the composition of the human environment and environmental problems, ignoring the laws and regulations on environmental protection, not to strengthen environmental protection consciousness, consciously fulfill their obligation to protect the environment, our life will be destroyed in his hands, god will make a severe punishment for us. Therefore I was determined to start from me good care environment, protect our survival home, be a guard to protect the environment.

古往今来，地球妈妈用甘甜的乳汁哺育了无数代子孙。原来的她被小辈们装饰得楚楚动人。可是，现在人类为了自身的利益，将她折磨得天昏地暗。人类只有一个地球;而地球正面临着严峻的环境危机。“救救地球”已成为世界各国人民最强烈的呼声。

我为周围环境的恶化而感到心痛，我想：作为未来接班人的青少年，如果不了解人类环境的构成和环境问题的严重性，无视有关环境保护的法律法规，不去增强环境保护意识，自觉履行保护环境的义务的话，我们的生命将毁在自己的手中，老天将对我们作出严厉的惩罚。为此我下定决心要从我做起爱护环境，保护我们这个赖以生存的家园，做一个保护环境的卫士。

There are four seasons in a year.My favorite season is summer .Because when the summer is coming .I can change the beautiful skirt and I can go swimming .I like the swimming pool very much.In summer ,all things are bright.I can go to a lot of places that I like.In summer holiday,I also can spend my holiday with my parents and we can go to the Forbidden City.How interesting !

The four seasons accompany us and make our lives interesting.Summer is when everyone has fun under the warm sun,autumn is the time of harvesting,and winter’s white snowflakes decorate the bare earth and trees.But it is spring’s vitality that fascinates me the most.

I remember when I was a small child,my favorite season was winter.But one thing made me change my mind.

I loved playing in the garden and climbing trees when I was small.But I realized one autumn day that golden leaves had started to fall from my favorite tree,and by winter its branches were already bare.I thought that it had died,and would never turn green again.

When my father knew why I was crying,he told me:“The tree hasn’t left you.It’s just resting.I promise in three months,that tree will be prettier than ever.” I believed what my father said and waited for three months.

Sure enough,when the time came,the tree was greener and taller than ever.Sprouts started to stretch their heads out of the melting snow,and creeks and streams started to run again freely.

From then on,spring has become my favorite time of the year because its vitality brings me happiness.

一年有四个季节。我最喜欢的季节是夏天。因为夏季即将来临。我可以改变这个漂亮的裙子,我可以去游泳。我非常喜欢游泳池。在夏天,一切都是光明的。我可以去很多地方,我喜欢。在暑假,我还可以花我的假期和我的父母和我们可以去故宫。多么有趣!

四季陪我们,使我们的生活有趣。夏天是当每个人都有有趣的温暖的阳光下,秋天是收获的时候,冬天的白色雪花装饰裸土和树木。但这是春天的活力,最让我着迷。

我记得当我还是个小孩,我最喜欢的季节是冬天。但有一件事使我改变了主意。

我喜欢在花园里玩,爬树的时候小。但我意识到秋天的一天,金色的树叶已经开始从我最喜欢的树,和冬天的树枝已经光秃秃的。我以为它已经死了,不会再变绿了。

当我父亲知道我为什么哭,他告诉我:“这棵树就没离开过你。只是休息。我保证在三个月内,那棵树将会比以前更漂亮了。“我相信我的父亲说,等待三个月。

果然,的时候,这棵树是绿色的,比以往任何时候都高。豆芽开始伸展头上的雪融化,自由和小溪,小溪又开始运行。

从那以后,每年的春天已经成为我最喜欢的时候,因为它的生命力给我带来了快乐。

in this winter break，i have a plan to travel to reason i planned to travel to japan is because i saw many interesting facts about japan in the internet; like there are a lot of new technology there，the fuji mountain there，or japan disney land ， i really like there i were to go there，i would make my agenda like this：first，go to tokyo to shop in malls，and go to disney land; then，go to osaka to go to spa，and shop in anime stores; finally，i would like to go to hokkaido to go skiing，and enjoy the i could have a good trip!

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1。 allow sb to do sth 允许某人去做某事(后接动词不定式)

My father allowed me to go out for a walk after finishing my homework。

2。 asked sb (not) to do sth 叫某人做事某事(叫某人不要去做某事)

My father asked me to study hard。

He asked me not to swim alone。

be asked to do sth 被叫去做某事/被邀请去做某事

I was asked to have a dinner with them yesterday。

3。 be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事

She is afraid to ask me questions。

4。 be afaid of doing sth 害怕做某事

I am afraid of going out at night。

5。 be afaid of sth 害怕某物

He is afraid of snakes。

6。 be amazed to do sth 对做某事感到惊讶

He was amazed to meet the girl there。

be amazed at sth 对某事感到惊讶

they were amazed at the news。

7。 be busy doing/with sth 忙于做某事(常考)

I was busy washing my car at that time。 那时候我正忙于清洗我的车子。

I am busy with my work。

8。 becoming/going/leaving/fiying/moving/dying(某些位移动词用进行时态时表将来)

the bus is coming/the dog is dying。

9。 be excited to do sth 对做……感到兴奋

Jacky was excited to travel there by plane。

be excited at sth

Lily was excited at his words。

be excited about doing sth

he was excited about passing the exam without going overing books。

10。 be frightened to do sth 害怕去做某事

Sam is frightened to ride a horse。

11。 be glad/happy to do sth 高兴去做某事

She is happy to clean theblackboard with me。

be pleased to do sth高兴做某事

She was pleased to helpthe old man yesterday。

be pleased with sth 对某事感到高兴/满意

The teacher was pleasedwith my answer。

12.be interested in sth/doing sth 对某事感兴趣/对做某事感兴趣

She is interested inswimming in the river。

My btother is interestedin Chinese。

13。 be/get ready for/to do sth

be ready for 为某事做好了准备

We are ready for the exam。

Be ready to do sth 为做某事做好了准备

We are ready to have a birthday party for her。

get ready for sth为某事在做准备

We are getting ready for the exam。

14。 be surprised to do sth 对做某事感到惊奇

be surprised at sth 对某事感到惊奇

This is nothing to be surprised at。

I‘d be surprised to see him on such an occasion。

15。 be worth doing sth 值得做某事(worth 后接动词-ing形式，常考)

It was too remote to be worth thinking about。

16。 开始去做某事begin to do sth begin/start to do/doing sth

When do children begin to go to school?

17。 can/be able to afford (to buy) sth 有能力负担(购买)……

At this rate we won‘t be able to afford a holiday。

18。 can/may/must do sth could/would/should/might do sth

We may come at another time。

19。 can‘t wait todo sth 迫不急待地去做某事

I can’t wait to hear the news。

20。 decide to do sth 决定去做某事

make up one‘s mind to do sth 下决心去做某事(常考)

make a decision to do sth 对做某事作出决定

What do they decide to do?

I have made up my mind to go with him

21。 deserve to do sth 值得/应该做……

We must admit that she did deserve to win。

22。 encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人去做某事

Encourage them to do some other helpful recreations。

23。 enjoy doing sth 喜欢去做某事

I enjoy reading the story book

24。 expect (sb) to do sth 期望去做某事

Don‘t expect him to help you。

25。 fail to do sth 做某事失败

succeed doing sth 成功做了某事

If you don‘ t work， you willfail to pass the exam。

26。 finish doing sth 做完某事(后接动词-ing形式)(常考)

After finish doing your homework， you can have a rest。

27。 follow sb to do sth 跟随某人去做某事

Follow me to read the new words。

28。 get sb to do sth / make sb do sth/ let sb do st 让某人做某事(后接动词原形)

Her jokes made us laugh。

29。 get/have a chance to do sth 得到一个做某事的机会

I‘m very happy to have a chance to visit your school。

30。 give/pass/show/lend/sell sb sth/sth to sb

buy/get/bring sb sth/sth for sb

Please give me a piece of paper。

I bought him a drink in return for his help。

31。 go on to do sth /go on doing sth 继续做事(常考)

Go on doing the exercise after a short rest。

32。 hate to do/doing sth 讨厌/不喜欢做某事

Ihate to tell the news to you。

33。 have fun doing sth 做某事很有趣

Have fun getting to know each other。

34。 have problems doing sth 做某事遇到困难

Many people have problems getting to sleep at night。

35。 have sb do sth/have sth done 让某人做某事

This is the best work you have ever done。

36。 hear sb do sth 听到某人做某事(后接动词原形，常考)

hear sb doing sth 听到某人正在做某事(常见)

I heard someone laughing。

37。 help to do sth 帮忙做某事

help sb (to) do sth 帮助某人做某事

I‘ll help you clean the room。

38。 hope/wish to do sth 希望做某事

wish sb to do sth 希望某人做某事

I wish to take this opportunity to thank you all。

39。 It seems that 这像是……(后接从句)

seem to do sth

seem +adj

It‘seems that you are lying。

Does that seem to make sense?

40。 It‘s + adj+(for sb) to do sth。

It‘s+adj +(of sb) to do sth

It‘s glad for him to hear the news。

41。 It takes sb sometime/money to do sth 。 花费某人多长时间做某事(常考)

It takes me an hour to walk there and back。

42。 pay …for… cost spend…on…。。 it take …to do sth 花费

He paid for it out of his own pocket。

43。 It‘s best for sb to do sth。 对某人来说做某事是最好的

It‘s best for you to do more exercise。

had better do sth 最好做某事(注意had没有时态和人称的变化，better后接动词原形)

You had better go to the school。

44.It‘s time for sb to do sth 是某人做某事的时候了

It‘s time for us to have dinner。

45.keep (on)doing sth 坚持做某事(常考)

John always kept (on) asking questions。

keep sb doing sth 让某人做某事(常考)

Don‘t keep me waiting。

keep sbfrom doing sth 阻止某人做某事(常考)

He keeps her from cutting the tree。

keep sb/sth +adj 使某人保持……的状态

Washingyour hands keeps you healthy。

46.learn to do sth 学做某事Ilearn to play football。

learn sth from sb 向某人学习

I learn the spirit from him

47.like to do/doing sth 喜欢做某事like sb to do sth 喜欢某人做某事

She likes swimming。/She likes to swim this afternoon。

48.need to do sth/ need doing sth/need to be done 需要做某事

The garden needs to be watered。 / The garden needs watering。

49。 prefer to do sth rather than do sth 宁愿……而不愿……(常考)

I would prefer to spend the weekend at home rather than drive out。

prefer doing sth to doing sth 喜欢做……胜过做……

I prefer reading books to going shopping。 比起购物来，我更爱读书。

preferto do sth 喜欢(爱)做某事

50。 refuse to do sth 拒绝做……

I refuse to answer that question。

51。 remember/forget to do sth 记得/忘记做某事(没有发生)

Please do remember to post a letter forme。务必记得帮我寄信。

remember/forget doing sth 记得/忘记做过某事

I remember telling you the news before。我记得曾经告诉过你这个消息。

52。 see sb do sth 看见某人做某事(结果)

see sb doing sth 看见某人正在做某事(正在进行中)

be seen to do sth 做某事被看见

I saw them play football last weekend。

I saw her cleaning the classroom。

I saw him get on the bus。= He was seen to get on the bus。

53。 something to eat/drink 一些吃/喝的东西(词不定式放在something等后修饰这些词)

I need something to eat。 我要一些吃的东西。

54。 spend some time (in)doing sth /on sth 花费时间做某事(注意动词要用ing形式)(常考)

I spent 2 hours on homework。= I spent 2 hours in doing homework。

spend some money on sth/doing sth 买……花了多少钱

I ofen spend some money on the book。 I ofen spend some money buying the book。

55。 Sth is hard/difficult/easy to do 。 做好某事很难/容易

The question is easy to answer。

56。 stop to do sth停下来去某事(两件事)(常考)

stop doing sth 停止做某事(一件事)(常考)

stop sb (from) doing sth 阻止某人做某事(常考)

The two girls stopped to talk to me when they saw me。

The two girls stopped talking when they saw me。

I tried to stop my father from smoking，but failed。

57。 take turns to do sth 轮流做……

They take turns to do the cleaning。

58。 tell sb (not)to do sth 叫某人去(不要)做某事

He tell me not to swim in that lake。

59。 There is no need (for sb) to do sth 对某人来说没必要做某事

There is no need for you to worry。

60。 There is notime (for sb ) to do sth

have no time to do sth 没时间做某事

There is no time to think 。I have no time to do morning exercises。

61。 too…(for sb) to …… so… that… not… enough to do …太……以致不能

The boy is too young to go to school。

62。 try/do one‘s best to do sth 尽力去做某事

try to do sth 试着(图)做某事

We must try our best to do the job。

63。 used to do sth 过去常做某事

I used to live in the country。

used to be + adj/a +n 曾经是。。。

Mr wang used to be a teacher worker。

64。 would like to do sth=want to do sth= feel like doing sth 想要做……

want/would like sb to do sth 想某人做……

I don‘t feel like walking very much today。

I would like you to go away。

65。 warn sb (not) to do sth 警告某人做某事(或不要做某事)

His mother warned him not to go out in the evening。

66。 Why don‘t you do sth ?= Why not do sth ? 为什么不……(表建议的句型，注意用动词原形)

Why not have a rest?

表示建议的句型还有：

Shall we……?

What /How about……?(如果是动词，要用ing形式)

How about going fishing?

67。 Would you like (sb) to do sth ?Yes， I‘d love to 。

Would you like to join us?

Would you like me to buy you some food?

68。 Would you mind doing sth ? 你介意做某事吗?

回答：不介意(No+……)

Never mind/Not at all/Of course not/Certainly not 。 (从不介意/一点也不介意/当然不会了)

回答：介意(Yes+……)

I‘m sorry but I do。/Sorry， you’d better not。/ I‘m afraid you can’t。

-Would you mind my opening the door?

- No，of course not。

69。 Would you please (not) do sth 你可不可以做(不做)……?

Would you please open the door? / Would you please not close the windows?

70。常用固定短语

finish doing sth 完成某事

She finished cleaning the room。

practise doing sth 练习做某事

You‘d better practising reading and speaking English every day。

be good at doing sth 擅长做某事

I am good at playing basketball。

go on doing sth 继续做某事，指前后做的是同一件事。

The students went on talking and laughing all the way。

Go on doing the other exercise after you have finished this one。

be busy doing sth 忙于做某事

I am busy in cleaning my room。

see/hear/watch sb doing sth 听/看/观察到某人正在做某事

I hear him singing。

be afraid of doing sth 担心(害怕)会发生某事

My little sister is afraid of staying at home alone。

be interested in doing sth 对做某事的兴趣。

I‘m interested in playing games。

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

写作教学对于帮助学生了解英语思维方式，形成用英语进行思维的习惯，提高学生综合运用语言知识的能力大有益处。下面是小编为你带来的小学英语写作技巧指导，欢迎阅读。

对于小学3年级的学生，在他们已经掌握好了如颜色(colour)、衣服(clothes)、数字(number)、星期(day of the week)、月份(month)、宠物(pet)、情感(feeling)、身体部位(body)、文具(school things)的基础上进行文章的填空，如果学生能够按照文章的要求写进相关的信息，那就已经很不错了。下面是一个自我介绍的简单例子：

Myself

Hello，my name is_____. I am_____years old.My favourite colour is_____，_____， and_____.My favourite pet is______，_____ and______. My favourite food is_____，______and______.My favourite day is______. My favourite school thing is______and______.My favourite number is and______.I am______today.

上面的这个例子，如果学生能够依次能吧自己的姓名、年龄、喜欢的颜色、喜欢的宠物、喜欢的食物、喜欢的日子、喜欢的文具、喜欢的数字和今天的心情准确无误地写出来，那么就已经能够完成了3年级阶段的作文要求。

对于4年级的学生，可以写一篇介绍自己课室或者自己卧室的文章。下面是一篇4年级学生的介绍课室范文。

My classroom

I am studying at Tongji primary school.I am in Class Two, Grade Four. (介绍自己所在的学校和所在的年级) There is a blackboard in front of the classroom. There are twenty-five desks in our classroom, they are brown. There are many books on the desk. There are fifty students, thirty boys and twenty girls. There is a picture on the wall. There are two fans on the wall. (用there+be句型把班里和摆设和班上的人数都表达出来了) It is tidy and clean.I like my classroom very much.(最后是作者的总结)

对于5年级的学生，作文的要求也提高了很多，很多学生在介绍别人或者是写自己喜欢的小动物的时候很容易忘了第三人称单数动词要加ses，如：He get up at 7 o’clock(get忘了加s)，在用到现在进行的时候动词很容易忘了加ing(如I am play the piano，play就忘记了加ing)，介词和介词短语也占了很重要的位置如介词in，on，at，of。介词短语如dream of(区分dream that)和be afraid of都是很重要的介词短语，很多学生忘记了介词后面要加动词。

对于6年级的学生，作文考查的是英语的综合应用能力，而且出的题目大部分都是看图作文，这就在一定程度上增加了写作的难度，它也是综合了3年级的分类词汇，4年级的句型，方位介词，5年级的重点介词短语和时态，不过我相信只要平时多点积累单词和句型、多点动笔、多注意语法上的问题、多看作文书，那么就能写出流畅、有深度的文章。

导语：你的假期是怎么度过的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival . I went to the park with my friends . We met at eight o‘clock at the school gate . We went to the park by bike .It was a beautiful day . We sat under a big tree and chated with each other . We took about some movies and some fun things . We had lunch there . We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us . Then we played some games .

We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy ! It was great fun !

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在春节我度过了一个美妙的假期。我和我的朋友去公园。我们八点在学校门口见面。我们骑自行车去公园，那是一个美丽的日子。我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们拍了一些电影和一些有趣的事情。我们在那里吃午饭。我们吃汉堡包和一些饮料，但我知道他们不健康，对我们不好。然后我们玩了一些游戏。

我们都累了，但我们很高兴!这很有趣!

I have a good friend, he is my neighbor, name is * *.

His strong he has dark skin and long, shorter than me, but looks very strong, very healthy appearance, his appearance and his name is also really pretty.

He in qingyuan primary school grade three, and Im the same age, even birthday only then a few days, he is very love learning, always take an examination of the top three of the class, that I how also can not compare with him. He is very clever, remember once young aunt give me with my English, I cant keep up with the problem, but he did answer up, young aunt straight quart he, make me embarrassed.

He is a rope skipping, have a jump rope game with my mother, he also narrowly won my mother a happy day. He is running very severe, I lost to him every time!

His self-esteem is particularly strong, the final exam, his exam results is less than his elder brother and younger sister, he is not happy, also sad cry, his mother told him to eat, he refused to eat, just to please me to comfort him. I comforted him a while, but also lend it to him for his favorite book, he didnt smile through tears, to have a meal.

This is my friend ZhangJian, a healthy, active, love of learning, aggressive boy.

我有一个好朋友，他是我的邻居，名字叫**。

他有着黑黑的皮肤，长的壮壮的，个子比我矮一大截，但看起来很结实，很健康的样子，他的外表和他的名字还真的是挺吻合的。

他在清远小学上三年级，和我同岁，就连生日也只差了那么几天，他很爱学习，总是考全班的前三名，这一点我怎么也比不上他。他很聪明，记得有一次小姨给我补习英语，我老跟不上问题，可他却对答如流，小姨直夸他，弄的我好难为情。

他是一个跳绳高手，有一次和我的妈妈跳绳比赛，他还侥幸赢了我的妈妈一次，开心的不得了。他跑步也很厉害，我每次都输给他!

他的自尊心特别的强，这次期末考试，他的考试成绩比他的哥哥和妹妹都要差一些，他就很不开心，还伤心的哭了，他的妈妈叫他吃饭他都不肯吃，只好来请我去安慰他。我安慰了他好一会，还借给他好几本他喜欢的书，他才破涕为笑，去吃饭了。

这就是我的朋友章健，一个健康、好动、爱学习、好胜的男孩。

My father is a tall, who was the father of eyelash is very heavy.

When I was ill, is he with me; Whenever I exam is bad, is he comfort me; When I was sick, he gave me medicine; When I make him angry, but he and I talk, dont say me, but and I discuss who is wrong; Whenever I am naughty, dont want to come back, but he dont say me, but call me patiently, waiting for me, when I was sad, but he told me: "your character like boys, so the boy tears dont flick"; When I quarrel with my classmates, but he patiently taught me: "children should not quarrel with my classmates at school, no matter who is wrong, we should think about yourself, whether he is wrong, if not wrong, we should also do some magnanimous, as the saying goes," prime minister belly punting, we should not and students care ", when I was wrong to say, he always say its his fault, never say its my fault. Whenever I get mom beat, he always treats me hug, let face fell upon him. He is my father.

I think he is the best father in the world, daddy, I love you!

我的父亲是一位个子很高、睫毛很重的父亲 。

每当我生病时，是他守着我;每当我考试考得不好时，是他安慰我;每当我难受时，是他给我拿药;每当我惹他生气时，他却和我谈心，并不说我，而是和我讨论到底是谁的错;每当我贪玩，并不愿意回来时，他却不说我，而是耐心的叫我、等我，每当我伤心时，他却告诉我：“你的性格像男孩子，所以男孩有泪不轻弹”;每当我和同学吵架时，他却耐心的教导我说：“孩子在学校不应该和同学吵架，不管是谁错，我们都应该想想自己，是不是自己错了，如果不是自己错了，我们也应该做的大度些，俗话说‘宰相肚里能撑船’，我们不应该和同学计较”，每当我犯错挨说时，他总是说是他的过错，从来不说是我的过错;每当我挨妈妈揍时，他总把我搂过来，让巴掌落在他身上。他就是我的父亲。

我觉得他就是世界上最好的父亲，爸爸，我爱你!

星期五放学后，我和妈妈去公园散步。

After school on Friday, my mother and I went for a walk in the park.

公园里的花散发着淡淡的清香，小草从地下钻出来了，柳树摇着绿色的长辫子。但是我发现有人带着小狗在草地上跑着，有的小狗在草地上随地大小便，草地就搞得很脏，小狗的粪便污染了公园的环境。

The flowers in the park exudes a touch of fragrance, the grass from the underground drilling, willow shook his green long braids. But I found someone with a dog run on the grass, some of the dog in the grass on the grassland is defecate, get dirty, dog feces pollution of the environment of the park.

我想我们每一个去公园的人都应该管号小动物，不要随意污染环境，这样我们的地球才会更加美丽。

I think every one of us went to the park to the people should be small animal, do not pollute the environment freely, so that our earth will be more beautiful.

Hello, everyone.My name is Kevin.I am 12 years old.I have a good friend.He is also 12 years old.He is thin and short.He is 34 kilograms.I am heavier than him.I am 40 kilograms.He is 1.48 metres.I am taller than him.I am 1.55 metres.He likes playing basketball and playing computer games.I like reading books and watching movie.He likes sweet food.I like hot food.He wants to be a PE teacher.I want to be an English teacher.We are good friends forever.

A happy Day

It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends. It was really cool to swim in such a hot day. I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening. I really had a busy and happy day.

今天天气晴朗比较热。 我起得很早，帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。 下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。 在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。 晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很快乐。

[小学生英语日记-快乐的一天

Dear Liu Qi,

I, the undersigned, am a senior in Peking University. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in four years. After watching the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.

First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract. In Athens, the swimming stadium was not accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the performance of athletes. In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we must finish our preparation work well and in time.

Last but not least important, I want to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the duty of every Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games. In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages. I can speak English, Russian, and Japanese. Therefore I can be a qualified volunteer.

I am looking forward to your reply

Sincerely Yours

Lei feng, is a helpful good fighters. Lei fengs life, at the age of 3, my father died, soon, the mother also committed suicide, lei feng has been living a miserable childhood. Lei feng grew up later, a heart for their country, though his body is very weak, but no bitter living lei feng is capable.

Lei feng in spite of himself, a heart for others, sacrifice, is only 20 years old, because he was helped many people, so many people are sad for him. Think of this, my eyes flashing with tears, but cant flow down. I was deeply moved by the the lei feng spirit, although on the surface, nothing much, but my heart has been secretly determined: I want to learn from lei fengs uncle, learning that he, for the country to the spirit of the people.

A mans life is the most precious, a person only once. Lei feng is willing to give his life for the interests of the people, this is the ordinary people cant do.

Learn from lei fengs uncles belief, has taken root in my heart: I want to learn from lei fengs uncle, learning that he, for the country to the spirit of the people.

雷锋，是一个乐于助人的好战士。雷锋一生下来，3岁时，父亲就去世了，不久，母亲也自杀了，雷锋一直过着苦难的童年。雷锋长大了以后，一心为国，虽然他的身体很弱，但再苦的活雷锋都能干。

雷锋不顾自己，一心为着他人，牺牲时，才二十几岁，正因为他生前帮助过许多人，所以，许多人都为他伤心。想到这，我的眼睛里闪烁着泪花，但怎么也流不下来。我被雷锋这种精神深深地打动了，虽然表面上没什么，但我心中已经在暗暗下决心：我要向雷锋叔叔学习，学习他那种为国、为人民的精神。

人的生命是最宝贵的，一个人只有一次。雷锋愿意把他的生命来换人们的利益，这是常人做不到的。

向雷锋叔叔学习的信念，已经在我心中生了根：我要向雷锋叔叔学习，学习他那种为国、为人民的精神。

Autumn came, cool breeze. The teacher went to the orchard with the students.

Orchard, the fruit is covered with branches. Autumn leaves blowing, branches of the leaves have been on the wind down the wind, like butterflies dancing.

The teacher led the students happily to the orchard. Some in the pick fruit, and some in the picking up the leaves on the ground. Xiaodong side of the fruit side of the side said: "This years apple can be really much!" Xiaowan see the ground there is a beautiful leaves, picked up and said, "What a beautiful leaves!" Xiaoxin also picked up a Leaves, and ginkgo leaves Oh, these leaves can be used to make bookmarks oh. You see, how happy the students play!

Autumn came, while you do not care, the autumn wind gently, gently ran up. She came to the orchard, came to the field, came to the park ... ... how beautiful autumn! Beauty in the orchard, the United States in the fields, the United States in the park, the United States in the joy of harvest! Autumn, you really like a great Painter, to the earth put on colorful clothes.

Jack is a good boy but he doesnt like to use his head. He often says something withou thinking.It makes others unhappy.

Mr. Black teaches math in a school. Hes old now and he likes children.On the Friday Mr. Black doesnt go to work, because hes ill in a hospital. And Jacks mother will see him after dinner. "I want to be there with you." says Jack. "Youre a rude boy. I cant take you there. says his mother. "Dont worry, mum. I wont do that again. Please believe me. " says Jack. In the hospital, Jack says nothing at first. When theyre leaving , he says to Mr. Black, "You look fine. The doctor says youre going to die, but I dont think so. "