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初二新年英语作文

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The Lunar New Year is a great occasion to the Chinese people。 It lasts about  the first four days of the year, during which people do not work except for the  workers on duty。 Students do not go to school, and shops are dosed。

Several days before the new year, people begin to prepare。 Farmers kitt pigs,  sheep, cocks and hens。 City dwellers buy meat fish and vegetables。 Houses are  cleaned couplets are posted on the doors。 Colourful lanterns are hung at the  gate。

On the eve of the new year, each family has its members gatherd together and  eats a family reunion dinner。 After the meal they watch TV until the clock  strickes twelve。 Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers  and other fire works to welcome the new year。 On the first day of the new year,  almost everyone is dressed in his or her best。 When people meet on the way, they  say to each other "Happy New Year"。 Friends and relatives pay new year calls and  gives presents to each other。 Children indulge themselves in games。

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篇1:一件难忘的事情作文600字

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一天上午,我一觉睡醒后感到肚子饿了,就要外婆给我做碗馄饨吃,可是家里没有馄饨,我就想让外婆给我下楼买馄饨做给我吃,我就对外婆说:“阿婆,我饿了,想吃点馄饨你下楼帮我买点给我吃呗!”

外婆回答说:“我累了,不想出去买,你可以吃别的呀,干嘛一定要吃馄饨呢?”

我还是缠着外婆不放:“我就想吃馄饨,不想吃别的。”

“我有点累了,下次吧!”外婆对我说。

我对外婆说:“可我就想吃馄饨,你就帮我买呗!”

“那这样吧,我给你钱,你自己下去买,怎么样?”外婆回答。

我也比较懒,不想出门,就对阿婆说;“我不愿意下楼。”

“你不想出去,就让我出去啊?”外婆有点生气地问我。

我对外婆说:“呵呵,你就帮我买点呗!就这一次,好不好?”

……

最后外婆敌不过我的死缠烂打,就只好下楼去给我买了。

我在家里等啊等,等了好长时间,外婆还没回来,我就开始担心起来了,心想,阿婆年龄大了,身体又不太好,这么长时间都还没回来,会不会出什么事啊?而且,天气这么热,外婆会不会中暑呢?我越想越着急,外婆出去时还没有带手机,没法联系。我想出去找,可又怕找不到。我急得在家里团团转,像热锅上的蚂蚁,后悔极了。

终于,我听到了敲门声,我忙走过去,从猫眼中看了看,是外婆回来了!赶紧给外婆开了门,心里的一块石头也终于落下了。

我不应该耍小性子,让身体不好的外婆在这样热的天气出去买东西的。

晚上,妈妈回来后,我怀着忐忑的心情将这件事告诉了妈妈,向妈妈承认了错,没想到妈妈帮我分析了事情的对错之后,竟然还表扬了我是个知错就改的孝顺的孩子,我的心情好了许多。

我真不应该这样,以后我一定会照顾长辈,再也不会犯这样的错误了。

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篇2:难忘的经历英语作文

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One day, when I was a kid, I saw the AD for the lost dog. As my next-door neighbor had a German shepherd in the AD, I called the missing dog owner to tell him. I also gave him my neighbors phone number.

I almost forgot the whole thing, when I heard my neighbor talking loudly about the night. I rushed to the window and saw what was happening. "Im sorry, but this dog belongs to us. Weve been holding it for nearly eight years now, "said my neighbor, a tall stranger.

All of a sudden, I felt quite guilty, for my childish neighbour suspected that there was no truth in it. But I didnt have enough courage to tell him that it was me who caused him all the trouble. I have been silent on this matter until now.

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篇3:暑假英语作文初二80词

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One day during the summer vacation, my father and I agreed to play

badminton, so we went to guolin park with badminton and racket.

The scenery of the park is picturesque, there are colorful flowers, and

some flowers are fragrant and beautiful. We came to a clearing and put the bag

on the lawn. Starting to play, the father said, "take the ball in your left

hand, take the beat in your right hand, and throw the ball gently at the beat of

the ball and hit the ball towards the other." I cant serve at the beginning,

also wont catch, serve as dad said practice is much more skilled practice, but

the other ball back, I was a little bad. I was a little frustrated by this, but

I thought: once you do something, you must do it well! So I trained again. I was

able to catch my dads ball very well, and my father praised me for saying that

the more I played the better, I was so happy.

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篇4:一件难忘的事情作文500字

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在四小学习的日子里,发生了很多事情,有高兴的事,伤心的事,快乐的事,悲伤的事,其中,最让我难忘的是一次激烈的古诗词大赛。

那是2017年6月,我们三(1)班和三(2)班共同举行了第二届古诗词大赛。在主持人刘宣延同学精彩的开场白中,古诗词大赛正式开始了!主持人首先介绍了比赛规则:我们两个班的同学共分为12个小组,每个小组答5道题,答题时小组内限时讨论,然后选出一名同学回答问题。这次比赛我不参加答题,我是评委,我将在每组答完题后宣布是否正确和加几分。

激动人心的时刻到来了,首先是第一小组回答问题。他们紧张地盯着大屏幕,主持人出了第一道题:墙角数枝梅的下半句是什么?他们不假思索地说出了答案。大家都向他们投来了敬佩的目光。比赛激烈地进行着,一直到第十一题,同学们都答出了正确答案,看来同学们准备地真是充分啊!接下来第十二小组开始答题了,这道题有点难,考的是唐代诗人韦应物的《滁州西涧》这首诗,他们绞尽脑汁地想着,我也为他们捏了一把汗,时间一分一秒地过去了,这时,主持人说:“时间到!”很遗憾,他们没有答上来。

比赛结束了,同学们都取得了好成绩。通过这场古诗词大赛,同学们对古诗掌握得更深刻了,还通过小组同学合作,体会到了团结的力量。虽然我是作为评委参加了这次古诗词大赛,可我的收获却一点也不少,今后我一定要去学习更多的古诗词,并学会在生活中运用它。

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篇5:一个难忘的人英语

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When I was in high school, one of my classmates sit right beside me. His name is ChenLiang. He is my unforgettable person in my life.

I remembered my mathematics was just mediocre at that time, but he was extraordinary and excellent in calculating and solving mathematic questions. He often received perfect scores. Of course, I wished I could reach at his level. Since we talked all day long, I asked how he could solve those difficult questions. He was so patient and polite to answer my sometimes ridiculous thinking. Gradually, I built my confidence at mathematics and finally passed the college entrance exam.

Now, we are apart, but I still remember his great attitude and willing in study. I am so obliged to my classmate, who is my friend always and forever.

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篇6:难忘的第一次英语

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The sea is sometimes beautiful and gentle; sometimes fierce and violent. But, the sea, do you know how much I yearn for you? Yearn for your white and snowy waves, yearn for your refreshing sea breeze, yearn for your sapphire water, yearn for you...... Finally, in Lianyungang, I saw you......

Remember, when you go to LianYunGang Railway Station, I constantly think, want to continue to think that, the warmth of the sea, the sea clear thinking that microwave...... Finally, Lianyungang arrived in my expectation

When I got off the train, it was still early. I made a noise and asked my mother to take me to the beach to see the sunrise, to see the seagulls and to watch the waves. My mother could not persuade me, so she took me to the beach.

I came to the seaside, cheers, get rid of the shoes, gallop on the beach, greedily breathe the fresh smell of the sea. Mother saw that I liked the sea so much that I joked about moving my house here. I said in a loud voice, "yes."! Later, this is my home! Im so happy!" I said as I ran. Went to the coast, when the sun had risen, shine at the moment, in the sea, on the ocean surface of the microwave is plated with a layer of gold, very beautiful. The sun rose higher and higher, through a wisp of smoke like mist. The sun came up! Look at the distance, only the sea gulls hovering over, frolic with; look at the nearby, flocks of white waves in the sea breeze comes down quietly on the coast, and quietly returned to...... A good, good.

In this dreamy scene, I seem to see the daughter of the sea he jumped into the sea, become foam like; and see Aphrodite (also known as Venus) was born from the sea, the sea to pray for her appearance; and heard Cao Cao "view of the sea" in the poem "Cang the sun and moon, if one. If a bright, if its in." The sea of expression......

At this time, I suddenly thought of the sea of mind, the seas breadth of mind, all over the water gathered here. I think, the sea is not only beautiful, it also teaches me a most important quality, the most precious wealth, that is: with a broad heart to treat others, so that they will reap much better......

[难忘第一次英语作文

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篇7:初二英语日记:ThevisittotheGreatWall

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My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much. Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.

It was fine that day. We went there by bus early in the morning. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. When my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景). We all were amazed(惊讶的) by how beautiful it was. We took quite a few photos there.

We had a good time there. The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!

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篇8:难忘的元宵节英语

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It was the Lantern Festival, and my parents took me to the Confucius temple to see the Lantern Festival. Along the way, it was drizzling. One to the Confucius temple, the eyes are all lights, as if into the light of the sea. The lotus lantern on the left, the advertising lamp on the right, looks like two soaring dragons.

After that, my parents took me to the lantern market to buy lanterns. What a lot of lanterns! There are rabbit lights, pigeon lights, and dog lights... I looked back and forth several times. It was dazzling. I was dazzled, didnt know which to buy? Finally, I bought an antique candle lamp.

Then mom and dad took me to the pedal boat. Because of the festival, so many people, lined up a long team. We chose a goose boat, my father and mother pedaled, and I held the rudder. We had a happy Lantern Festival.

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篇9:一件难忘的事英语作文

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One of my roommate often talk when he sleeps. He talked about allkinds of things.For example ,last night, I had a hard jod to fall asleep.I read a novel to make my eyes feel sleepy.When I was concentrated to thestory ,I heard he said:"how much do you want?" It sounds like he wasarguing a price with somebody , I was very strange ,so I asked:" Are youawake?what are you talking about?" there was not reply . At that time , hebegain to talk agin:"OK, OK."It was the first time I heart him talk,so I did afraid of that and unforgettable.

我有一个室友经常在睡觉的时候说梦话。各种各样的事他都说。例如,昨晚,我睡不着。我阅读小说来让我的眼睛感到困倦。当我集中精神在故事上时,我听到他说:“你要多少钱?”听起来像是与人争论价格,我很奇怪,所以我问:“你醒了吗?你在说什么,没有回答。在那个时候,他又开始说了:“好吧,好吧。”这是我第一次听他说梦话,所以我很害怕也很难忘

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篇10:以难忘的五一劳动节为题英语作文

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My classmates threw a celebration party at our middle school principle‘s flat.Our parents were invited to the party.Everybody was excited about the holiday.I ate a lot of delicious food at that time.I also went visiting my relatives with my parents.We went to celebrate our good time at a fancy restaurant in Shanghai.Later that day,we sang karaoke in my uncle‘s house.We stayed for the night.

The next day,I went shopping with my cousins.We bought some brand name T-shirts and pants.In the afternoon,my cousins gave me a fun ride on the city highway.They also taught me hou to drive their fancy car,so I tried to do some turning and parking.It was not easy first.But I learnt quick.We returned home with many gifts from our trip.I tried to get some rest.At night,I chatted with my classmates on the phone,and I watched CCTV before going to bed.Since last Friday,I started to finish up my homework assignments on my personal laptop. Some of my assignments were quite boring.After I finished the homework,I emailed them to my teachers.

[以难忘五一劳动节为题英语作文

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篇11:有关难忘秋游的初二作文

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“下个星期三,学校将组织小学高年部的同学们去秋游。”一听到这个好消息,我立刻兴奋起来了!这可是全班同学期待已久的一天,这一天终于要到来了!到 了第二天全班同学都纷纷报名参加秋游,才一天我们班就有三分之一的同学报名了,可见大家是多么期待这次秋游啊!

直到秋游那天,同学们都早早的来到校园,在教室里面讨论秋游计划。“请参加秋游的班级到停车场排队上车。”广播通知响了,同学们在停车场排好了队准备上车了。

一路上大家都在欣赏车窗外的风景,美极了!到了这次秋游的地点也就是番禺区的梦幻D世界。

踏进游乐场大门,我恨不得立马向我想玩的游乐设施飞奔过去,可是老师还在领票,别的班都已经开始玩啦!心急如焚的我拿到票之后,都不知道要玩哪一个了?那些游乐设施的队和排长龙差不多,我只好向人最少的华夏飞碟走去。系好安全带之后机器发动了,飞碟的高度从低到高,最后慢慢降下来,这整个过程里我动都不敢动,非常害怕。

玩完飞碟,我本想向最喜欢的激流勇进走去。可是,一看到那条长龙般的队伍,我就绕过了激流勇进,向后面走去,看到了“森林野战"这四个字,我小小的心突然变得激动起来。虽说我是个女孩子,但是我就喜欢玩男生喜欢的游戏,尤其是枪战!我立马带着我的组员飞奔过去。换上装备,上好子弹,“将士们,出发吧!”“举起手来,别动!”突然有个枪口对着大家,是张晨曦。看来她今天终于明白先下手为强这句话的意思了。就这样我们大家都死在她的抢下了。

之后我们还看了6D电影,玩了旋转木马……愉快的一天就这样结束了。

[有关难忘秋游的初二作文

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篇12:难忘的一次经历英语作文

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I like traveling very much. My trip to XiAn is really unforgettable. Before I went there, I always wanted to see Bin Ma Yong, so I chose to go there. I went to there by train with my parents and I had breakfast in the hotel. Then we went there by bus. When I got off the bus, I was very excited. I saw a lot of false man whose hand with all kinds of things. I took many pictures. Finally we went back the hotel in the afternoon. Though I was very tired, I felt very happy. I dwill never forget it for ever. An Unforgettable Travel My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghaineses lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so its very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city. This is the trip l never forget.

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篇13:初二英语日记60字附翻译

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With the help of the Internet,shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like,and the shopping is finished. You neednt step out of the room。

It seems easy and quick. But theres always a trap(陷阱)online. If you are careless,it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want,or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different,youd better not buy clothes online. Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out,you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street。

So you must be careful,because everything has two sides。

在互联网的帮助下,购物不是一个困难的工作。点击你的鼠标选择你喜欢的文章,并完成购物。你不必走出了房间。

看起来简单和快速。但总是有一个陷阱(陷阱)在线。如果你粗心,它会给你带来一些麻烦。你可能会发现这篇文章的颜色不同于你想要的东西,或大小是太小或太大了。如果你想要不同,你最好不要网上买衣服。一旦你穿上你网上购买的衣服,出去,你会发现很多人穿同样的衣服在街上。

所以你一定要小心,因为任何事情都有两面性。

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篇14:我的梦想初二英语作文_初二年级英语作文800字

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I have a dream. It is a dream that is deeply rooted in human nature. I dream that one day people of all origins can live in harmony and peace without being discriminated against or persecuted. The bounty of the earth can be shared by every single human being. Mutual respect will guarantee the existence and continuation of the diversity of customs and cultures. Love, sympathy, and cooperation will alleviate the sufferings and disasters inflicted upon our fellow men. Respect for basic human rights will put an end to social injustices and evils. When my dream comes true, all men will be truly equal, happy, and free.

我有一个梦想。它是一个梦想,深深扎根于人类的本性。我梦想有一天各种出身的人都能和谐和平地生活,而不受歧视和迫害。地球的资源可以共享的每一个人。互相尊重将保证习俗和文化的多样性的存在和延续。爱、同情和合作,将减轻施加于我们的同胞的痛苦和灾难。对基本人权的尊重将终结社会不义和弊端。当我的梦想成真,所有的人将会真正的平等,快乐,自由。

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篇15:英语作文难忘假期AnUnforgettableHoliday

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Luckily, last summer my family went to my uncle's farm.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday. During the holiday, I didn't have to get up early, nor did I need to finish many exercises. I rode the horse in the fields. I milked the cows on the farm. To my GREat joy, my uncle invited me to go fishing. Life on the farm is quite different from that at school. I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.

[英语作文难忘假期An Unforgettable Holiday

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篇16:动物初二水平英语Myfavourateanimal

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My favourate animal is tiger,because tiger is very strong and powerful,it is the king of the forest.Tiger looks handsome as well, the skin has two corlors:yellow and black,and they are both my favourate colors.

I like tiger,and the year 201X is just the Chinese tiger year.I hope all the people will keep healthy,just like tiger.

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篇17:最难忘的一件事初二600字

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今天,我和亭亭花店买几朵康乃馨给妈妈。

到了店里,没看见人。我们朝里面放声大喊:“有人么?”忽然,一个娇小的女孩走出来:“请问,你们要买什么?是不是康乃馨?我也希望……”于是捂住嘴,“希望什么?”亭亭问,“我爸妈离婚了,妈妈已经去了我不知道的地方。今天是母亲节,我好想投进母亲的怀抱,给她一朵红艳艳的康乃馨,好好地亲亲她,像小时候一样……哎!一切都是梦不可能成真。”我们决定帮助小女孩,“你妈妈什么样?”“我会画画,我画给你看。”于是,小女孩拿出画纸,用笔画了起来。画好了,啊!是多么好看呀!我和亭亭赞叹不已。“快帮我把!”

我和亭亭把画贴在一张纸上,并写上:这位女士,您的女儿很想您!想送你康乃馨,想抱你亲你,想……你快回来吧!你的女儿在等你,你快回来见见你的可爱的、娇小的女儿吧!于是贴了张女孩的照片,放心地走了。

不久,我看见:女孩投进一个妇女怀里,哭着喊:“妈妈!妈妈!这是给你的康乃馨!”女孩从兜里掏出一朵红彤彤的康乃馨,妇女亲了亲女孩说:“孩子,我不该丢下你,我不会离开你了!”忽然一个男人跑来:“女儿呀!看到了这张寻人启事,爸爸心痛极了!我也不该放弃你们,对不起!我爱你们!我疼你啊!”说着一家人热泪盈眶。

我忽然想起了母亲,他是多么辛苦!是多么劳累!我跑回去,写了一封信:妈妈,我爱你!我不该调皮,惹你生气。妈妈,我爱你!我不会再调皮捣蛋,会成为你的骄傲的。再将康乃馨放在信上,回到房间去了。

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篇18:六年级难忘的事情满分作文500字

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在人的一生中,有许许多多的事情像沙滩上美丽的贝壳一样令我难忘,现在我从这些贝壳中拣出最亮的一颗说给你听听吧!

那一次,我和哥哥准备去火焰山攀山。一路上我兴奋得走路都改”跳路“了,我对哥哥说:“我保证,待会儿我一定比你快!”哥哥没说话,只是笑着看了我一下。

经过一个多小时后,我们来到了火焰山下。看到高达30米的火焰山攀山区,我不禁想打退堂鼓了。哥哥仿佛看出了我的心思,对我说:“别怕,有安全带和气垫呢!”在哥哥的鼓励下,我半信半疑地戴上头盔,系上安全带,铺好气垫。我和哥哥比赛,看谁先登顶。三,二,一,GO!我一下子抓住第二个铁环,我毫不松懈,继续抓住铁环爬,哥哥被我远远地落在了后面,我回过头去,笑嘻嘻地说:”来呀!来追我呀!“我听到的却是蚊子般的声音——专心爬!果然我三心二意导致我被滚石砸了下来,落下来的时候我无意中抓到了第8个铁环,我说:”唉,好险,吓死我了,总算踏实了!“我抬头一看,哥哥却灵活地躲过了滚石,看了一会儿,我领悟到了技巧,于是我开足”马力“冲了,没想到我却抓到了一根草,摔在了气垫上,我有些想放弃了,哥哥回过头来说:“来呀!你不是很厉害吗?”哥哥这句话激怒了我于是我又重新追了上去,一路上我越过重重障碍,最后终于超过了哥哥,抢先来到了终点。在那开心地玩了一个下午,我们又高高兴兴的回家了。

通过这件事我明白了一个道理:努力不一定成功,放弃却一定失败。当然,这也是我无法忘记这件事的原因。

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篇19:初二英语作文写作技巧

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一、充分准备,打好基础。

为了提高初一英语作文写作水平,平时应加强阅读,多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说:读书破万卷,下笔如有神,只有多读,多记,多背诵,才能出口成章,下笔成文。此外,写好初一英语作文还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法,如书信、日记、通知等,它们大多有固定的格式。

二、认真审题,明确要求

在写初一英语作文的时候仔细看清写作要求和提示,分清材料的主次,接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素;最后确定时态,同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。 三、遣词造句、表达规范

初一英语作文用词要恰当,不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时,应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些,有些句型不会表达,可以设法绕开,用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词,如and, or, but, so,because, since等,以使初一英语作文行文逻辑紧密,自然流畅。 四、认真撰写,卷面整洁

初一英语考试中也会有初一英语作文题,如果时间允许,书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前,要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题;之后检查主题是否明确,表达方式是否恰当;最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求,前后是否一致。 中考复习研讨会指导课件,极具价值。 关联词

1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both&and, not only&but also, neither&nor;2.表示选择: or, either∨3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, not&but, on the one hand&on the other hand;7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,

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篇20:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧

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下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧,欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

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