令人难忘的事情英语作文初二【实用20篇】

今天，我们年级去了美丽而难忘的缙云山，一路上，小草和花儿向我们轻轻摇头，大树向我们招手，似乎在欢迎我们的到来。

导游带我们去了鲜花盛开的地方，她向我们介绍了一种可以吃的美丽植物，由于“她”像一位花仙子，十分美丽。“她”的名字叫映山红，吃起来酸酸甜甜，而且还五彩缤纷，有天蓝、香蕉黄、苹果红、茄子紫等，颜色变化无穷，让人应接不暇。“她”骄傲地站着，挺直了腰，摇头晃脑地说：“有谁可以和我比美，我可是全世界最美最美的花仙子！”这就是美丽而骄傲的映山红。

紧接着，我们来到了一个绿树成荫的大森林，在这里，我认识了四季常青的罗汉松，罗汉松就像一位哨兵，站在森林的“边防线”上，为整个森林放哨。他结出的果子是嫩红的，像小女孩的脸蛋一样红，红得那么迷人，那么耀眼，这些威武的哨兵又名金钱树，一颗这种树价值昂贵，能值好几十、几百万呢！听了这些话，我再也不敢摘它的叶子了！

还有一种最奇怪的树，它叫无皮树，也叫痒痒树。它为什么叫无皮树呢？最开始它有皮，可过几天，皮就会掉光，剩下光秃秃的树干，由于有皮时间短，所以它便叫无皮树。它还十分神奇呢？只要轻轻碰碰它的枝，他就像一个怕痒的小孩，左右摇摆，那样子，似乎在说：别挠了，别挠了，我怕痒呀！哈哈哈……怎么样？这种树是不是超级奇怪呀！当然，我还认识了水杉，银杏等活化石和其他植物。

在缙云山，我不仅学到了很多植物知识，还放松了心情，这真是一件难忘的事。

In xiamen there is a park. it’s a big and beautiful park. it has two gates. they are the north gate and the west gate. many people park their bikes in front of the gates.

There is a shop at the north gate. when you go into the park through the north gate, you will find a large square on your right and you will see lots of trees and flowers around you. in the west of the park, there is a playground.

Sometimes some children fly kites on it and some people sit on the grass and chat. in the middle of the park, there is a lake. there are many boats on it. there is a hill in the east of the park.

The park is very beautiful. i love it very much. will you come to visit it some day?

An unforgettable experience

My mom used to say that I was born to swim. But the truth is that I didn t know how to swim until the last year of my primary school!

Mom always said that I could swim in the basin when I was only two months old. I was surprised at the amazing fact. If this was true, then why was I afraid of water? I went to swim every summer, but I didn t make a little progress. I was worried and blamed myself several times. When I watched people swimming freely, how I wished I had learnt to swim!

The story of how I learnt to swim is dramatic. One hot summer afternoon, my father and I went to the swimming pool to swim. While my father was changing his clothes, I was roaming along the bank of the pool. Suddenly I heard a voice, Look out! and then came a big noise and beautiful splashes. Just when I was admiring the swimmer s skills, I slipped into the pool! I was so afraid that I shouted at once! But the water kept coming towards me and I drank a lot of it. I was moving upside down and trying to reach the bank. I was struggling very hard to keep my head above the water.

A minute was like a hundred years to me. To my surprise, I was able to keep the style! Just then, my father, saw me and he seemed to be shocked. He then said, Calm down, just wave your arms and legs like this. Right! And I got it! I finally learnt to swim! You can t imagine how happy I was and I wanted to jump for joy!

[一次难忘的经历高中英语作文

My New Year‘s plan

New Year‘s Day is comeing.My favourite day of a year is New Year‘s Day,becuse I can eat lots of nice hot

food and have a holiday.

This year,I want to go to Beijing,because, there are a lot of lates,I can fish,that is very warmth,I

cannot feel cold ,and this are many street,I can shopping,so I think it is very comeliness,it is my

wish.Now,I am really very excited.

It is my holiday‘ plan,I think it is really very

great,And you?

No more champagne

And the fireworks are through

Here we are, me and you

Feeling lost and feeling blue

It“‘s the end of the party

And the morning seems so grey

So unlike yesterday

Now“‘s the time for us to say

Happy new year

Happy new year

In the path of growth, regardless of who also must have met many obstacles! I am no exception, though, things have been for a long time, but it still makes me memory like new. When I think about this time, but I think of many things.

This matter, may be in many peoples eyes is just a small, insignificant things. But at the time of I, is a matter than ascend day also difficult. It has been my experience learning to ride a bicycle.

That day, the weather is sunny, cloudless. Mother help me to hold the bridle, I step on the pedal, flash flash to ride up. Mother gradually, loosen the hand, just as I proudly said to mother: I will ride on, unfortunately happens, and I have the car as "touch" a cry and fell heavily to the ground, I like to play how the eggplant, lowered his head. At this time, there were pain, knee is originally was wrestling, also scraped knee. It was more than I could bear, tears like a broken line of beads, constantly poured out. Mother pulled me aside, to longly say to me: "children, in the later on the road, you will encounter more, experience more, you cant because these little things, and stop you move forward." Listen to mothers words, I thought: yeah, mom said right, not because these little things, to give up. I dry the tears, again on the bike. Everything comes to him who waits, along with the unceasing efforts, although will fall, but did not give up, but even more strengthened my target. Finally, I learned to ride a bike. When mom puts his thumb up and says "good", my heart began to like to eat honey, my sweetie.

From this is, I also deeply understand a truth: as long as insist, insist, insist on, success will belong to you.

在成长的道路中，无论是谁也都一定遇到过许多坎坷吧!我也不例外，虽然，事情已过了很久，但却还是令我记忆如新。每当想起这件是时，便会然我想起许多道理。

这件事，可能在许多人眼里只不过是一件微不足道、不值一提的小事。但在那时候的我，却是一件比登天还难的事。这件事便是我学骑自行车的经历。

那天，天气很晴朗，万里无云。妈妈帮我扶着笼头，我踩着踏板，一晃一晃地骑了起来。渐渐的，妈妈松开了手，正当我得意洋洋的对妈妈说：我会骑了的时候，不幸发生了，我和车子随着“碰”的一声，重重地摔倒在地上，我像打焉了的茄子一般，耷拉着脑袋。这时，膝盖传来阵阵疼痛，原来是在摔跤的时候，膝盖也擦破了。我再也忍不住了，眼泪像一颗颗断了线的珠子，不停地涌了出来。妈妈把我拉到一边，语重心长地对我说：“孩子，在以后的道路上，你还会遇到更多的坎坷，经历更多的事，你不能因为这些小事，而阻挡了你前进的脚步。”听了妈妈的话，我心想：是啊，妈妈说的对，不能因为这些小事，便去放弃。我擦干眼泪，又一次的坐上了自行车。功夫不负有心人，随着不断的努力，虽然还是会摔倒，但是不但没有放弃，而是更加坚定了我的目标。终于，我学会了骑自行车。当妈妈竖起大拇指称“棒”的时候，我的心便像吃了蜜糖一般，甜丝丝的。

从这件是中，我也深刻地明白了一个道理：只要坚持、坚持、在坚持，成功一定会属于你。

Today is my shopping day.I wanted to buy some delicious food.there were many kinds of food.I wanted to eat more vegetables and more fruits.I wanted to eat apples in order to lose weight.I liked eating bananas,straw berries,pears and watermelons,I wanted to buy some books,I thought they can help me study not long after my holidays,I wanted to buy a pair of golves for myself because my golves were lost.And I bought some CDs.

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People usually

decorate the doors and windows with red papercuts. becouse red means good luck.

People usually clean house too. becouse they want to sweep away bad luck.

Children can get some new clothes or presents from their parents and

grandparents. On New Years Eve,family always have a big dinner. Everybody are

watch TV and talk. In the midnight,there usually fairworks. On New Years

Day,people usually put on their new clothes and visit their femily and friends.

They usually say:"Happy New Years Day. " The Spring Festival finishes at the

Lantern Festival after two weeks. People usually eat a kind of rice dumpling

called yuanxiao. It can take people good luck all the year round.

Heard that microblogging is a fresh thing, I have to get one. Registration, the system let me lost the user name, I thought it was your sina email lost in.

One day afternoon, the classmate called me, ask, what is my weibo name. I paused, do not know he ask which name is. I have to say: "Ill check it and tell you later on."

Came to the computer desk, quickly open the computer, microblogging, I was shocked. My name as email. I decided to change! He picked up the mouse to click the button. Suddenly jump out a white box, ask what I want the name, the following and fill out a bunch of. I think the most, still didnt come up with a preferred name. But on second thought, interesting and have what use? Once couldnt remember not spoiled.

"Well," forgotten "is a good choice." I said to himself. However, all these need not the name of the memory has been trademarked, how to do? I have to add characters to the name, keyword. I tried a dozen minutes, finally make a name, called "I really, really forgot. Hey hey, this is not to forget. I call my classmate is busy, tell him the new weibo name.

To give a little easy to remember and cool name - difficult!

听说微博是个新鲜玩意儿，我也去弄一个来。注册时，系统让我输用户名，我以为是自己新浪的邮箱就输了进去。

某日下午，同学打电话给我，问我的微博名是什么。我愣了一下，不知他问的是哪个名。我只好说：“我先查一下，等一会儿告诉你。”

来到电脑桌前，迅速打开电脑，上微博一看，我惊呆了。我的名字竟成了邮箱名。我当机立断，改!便拿起鼠标点击那按钮。一下子跳出一个大白框，问我想要什么名字，下面还有填一大堆。我想了大半天，还是没想出中意的名字。但转念一想，有趣又有什么用呢?一旦想不起来不就泡汤了。

“嗯，‘忘记了’是个不错的选择。”我自言自语着。但是，这些不用记忆的名字都已经被人抢注了，怎么办呢?我只好在名字里加字，减字。我试了十几分钟，终于弄出一个名字，叫“我真的真的忘记了”。嘿嘿，这下不会忘了。我忙打给我的同学，告诉他这个新微博名。

给微薄起个好记又酷的名——难!

Making a trip to Beidaihe on May 18 was an experience which I will never forget.

A arrived in Beidaihe at about 2 oclock,and immediately took a No.5 bus to the sea area.The beautiful blue sea was so large that I couldnt see the other side of it.After getting off the bus,I went straight to the shore.Taking off my shoes,I put my feet into the water.The water was cool,and walking in the water was such a great joy that I didnt want to stop.Then I collected shells.When it got dark,I sat on the shore,watching the sea.The night scene was simply marvelous!

Finally I had to go back.It was an unforgettable day in my life.

The winter vacation is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do.

First, I’m going to have a good rest and relax. I will read some good books. Reading books is useful because it can help me get more knowledge. It can open up my eyes to the world. Next, I’m going to spend more time talking with my parents. I will also try my best to help them do some housework. Then, I’m going to take part in social activities (社会活动)so that I can know more people.

What do you think of my vacation? I hope you will have a happy winter vacation.

Miss you so much, the spring is in my heart! I call you in the winter, the flowers and plants of the earth know... my heart...   How could the end of the cold shut my love for you, eager to spring scenery covered my heart. Your smile is like a song, moistens my love for you! Your figure is like a river, moistens my love. Sunset star out, year after year, usher in the dawn each were shining brilliantly, and off the innumerable cloud all the evening, but remained motionless, I wait for you a winter love is!   You are like a ray of sunshine in the winter, stroking my face and heart; You wake up the sleeping already a long time of the earth, and makes the whole world is full of angry; You blow quietly, heart is blended in among them...   The rain silently, mingled with underground, dripping on the land, to give the earth a little moist, make the earth vitality; You let leaves fully absorb the nature to give him the rain, the lake was filar silk itch means...   he birds are singing in the branches back, as if to pour out your arrival; Grass in the wind dancing to music performed by you, as if in a welcome meeting for you. Through the window, I saw the wonderful world of rain, see you in the rain. Proverb says: "the spring rain your such as oil", it is no wonder that after the trees and flowers in the spring rain is issued with a yellow leaves sprout!   Let us with a touching embrace spring, put the dreams of the spring into their full of lofty sentiments, sprinkle with sweat infiltration in the spring of faith, to the autumn harvest fruitful hope!

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Miss you so much, the spring is in my heart! I call you inwinter, the flowers and plants of the earth know my heart.

How could the end of the cold shut my love for you, eager to spring scenery covered my heart. Your smile is like asong, moistens my love for you! Your figure is like a river,moistens my love. Sun sets, stars out, year after year, usherin the dawn each were shining brilliantly, and off theinnumerable cloud all the evening, but remained motionless, I wait for you a winter love is!

You are like a ray of sunshine in winter, stroking my face and heart. You wake up the sleeping earth, and make thewhole world full of energy.

The rain silently, mingled with underground, dripping on the land, to give the earth a little moist, make the earth vitality.You let leaves fully absorb the rain which nature gives.

The birds are singing in the branches back, as if to pour out your arrival. Grass in the wind dancing to music performed by you, as if in a welcome meeting for you. Through the windblow, I saw the wonderful rain, see you in the rain. Proverb says: "Rain in spring is as precious as oil". It is no wonderthat the flowers begin to bloom after the spring rain.

Let us embrace the touching spring, put the dreams of the spring into their full lofty sentiments, and sprinkle with sweatinfiltration in the spring of faith, to the autumn harvest fruitful hope!

我叫左漪璐，今年九岁了，在我的身上发生过很多值得回忆的故事。但是，最令我难以忘怀的还是三年级上半学期期末选“三好学生”的那件事。

那天，我们尊敬的班主 任梅老师满脸笑容的来到了教室里，大声的说“同学们，我们今天要选‘三好学生’！大家来投票选举吧！”听了梅老师这句话，大伙的心情立刻忐忑不安起来，同学们都想争当“三好学生”，又害怕选不上自己。

这时候，只见教室里乱成一团，同学们七嘴八舌的喊了起来，有的人喊刘杨嘉星，有的人喊赵悦雯，还有的人喊何新钰。当然，也有人喊了我的名字。

看到同学们乱糟糟的样子，老师急忙喊道“不要乱，大家举手投票！一个一个说！”老师话音刚落，教室里立刻安静了下来，同学们举手发言，一个一个推荐自己心目中的“三好学生”，梅老师认真的将每个同学推荐的“三好学生”记录下来。

这时，我的心非常的紧张，碰碰直跳。听到同学们纷纷喊着刘杨嘉星、赵悦雯、我的名字，紧张的我都不敢说话了。我真的是太想当“三好学生”了。自从上小学一年级至今，我还没有一次当过“三好学生”呢。每次看到别的同学站在讲台上领奖，那份自豪和神气，让我非常的羡慕。

爸爸、妈妈总是教育我要好好学习、天天向上，这样才能拿到光荣的“三好学生”。可是，我一直没有拿到过“三好学生”，心里总是觉得空荡荡的。这学期，我一直认真学习，上课积极发言，改掉了自己粗心的坏毛病，不断争取进步，就是希望能当上“三好学生”，让爸爸、妈妈也为我自豪一次。

最后，同学们渐渐的安静了下来，只见梅老师经过认真核对和统计，宣布“刘杨嘉星、董硕硕、赵悦雯、何新钰、余思成被评为校级三好学生！”听到这个消息，我非常的难过，眼泪马上就掉了下来，一滴又一滴止不住的往下流。我又没有当上“三好学生”，真的是太失望了，太伤心了。

“同学们，我们下面选举班级三好学生！”梅老师的话音刚落，同学们又开始举手发言和选举了。这一次，我终于被选上班级“三好学生”了，真的是太开心了。但是，我自己觉得还不够好，因为班级“三好学生”只能让全班人知道，算是安慰奖了。校级“三好学生”可就不一样了，全校人都知道，可光荣了。

我知道，自己离校级“三好学生”还有距离，我下定决心，要在下学期继续努力，改掉各种坏毛病，争取用最好的学习成绩回报梅老师、孙老师等各位老师，向校级“三好学生”冲刺。有志者事竟成，我一定会成功的。

[初二作文我最难忘的一件事

作者：李恒恒

今天有我难忘的事情，而且那一件事情让我很高兴和开心。

我的最难忘的事情就是和我的爸爸一起吃饭，因为我的爸爸都必须的去工作。有时候我的爸爸还有时候我的爸爸还会忘了吃饭就去工作，这一次，我和我的爸爸在我的家里面里吃饭我记得那是一个晚上，我的爸爸回了家我看见了我的爸爸里还拿着肉回来了，我想：“我的爸爸肯定是饿了吧”我的爸爸开始说话了：“你吃不吃饭”我说：“吃啊”我一说完就开始做饭了，我们吃完了饭就开始睡觉哪一个晚上我觉得很好，因为这就是我和爸爸就我们一起吃饭的第一次。

这就是我难忘的事！

哲学家周国平说：“真正打动人的感情总是朴实无华的，他不出声，不张扬，埋得很深。”论大方朴实还要数山里人，他们身上朴实无华的品质让我久久难以忘怀。

今年暑假，我们一家来到了凉爽的神农架避暑。

奔赴景区的途中，有卧龙一样蜿蜒曲折的山路；有美丽的山雀唱着不知名的小调；有飞流而下的瀑布和树木成荫的高山。经过一段漫长的时间旅行，终于我们来到了美丽的神农架。

到了宾馆，迎接我们的是一位面带微笑的中年妇女，她穿着绿色的绒毛大衣，一头干净利落的齐耳短发，她就是这家店的女店主。女店主看到我们的到来，关切地问这问那“你们从哪来？”“路挺远的吧？”“冷不冷呀？”随后，她带领我们去预定好的房间。房间干净整洁，东西是新的，服务很是周到。

到了该吃晚饭的时间了，我们一家就在楼下吃饭。我拿起菜单发现这个女店主很幽默，她把不同品种的菜用成语命名，例如蒸菜叫做“蒸蒸日上”面点叫做“面面俱到”。我们点了两菜一汤，本以为会和城里的饭店一样，盘子里的菜会很少，少放肉片都是菜，可等到菜上来时，我发现我真的是大错特错了，盘子里的菜像小山一样堆积在盘子里，肉很多，米饭更实在，两元一位一下子上了一大盆，汤也不像城里的稀汤寡水，内容很丰富。

到爬神农顶的那一天，天气像掉到冰窖里似的，冻得让人发抖，可偏偏我没有带厚衣服，女店主看见我在发抖，问我：“你穿这么少会被冻感冒的，要不你穿我的衣服吧。山上冷，冻坏了可怎么办。”听完这句话，我感觉到像喝了一碗热气腾腾的姜汤，浑身暖暖的。

那一天，山上云雾缭绕，鸟儿唱着动人的歌谣，长满青苔的长石阶上有零零散散的被树叶切碎的片片阳光。

如果神农架是万物复苏的春季，那女店主就是为春天增彩的花朵；如果神农架是炎热的夏天，那女店主就是一碗消暑的绿豆汤；如果神农架是丰收的秋季，那女店主就是辛勤耕作的农民；如果神农架是寒冷的冬季，那女店主就是温暖的火把。

朴实的山里人是神农架最亮丽的一道风景线。

The Memory About College Entrance Exam

The college entrance exam is a big exam for students, they have learned so many years for the purpose of entering the college. For most person, they have the very deep impression about the big exam, it has changes so many people’s destinies. I had taken part in the exam, I remember it clearly, the situation just like happened yesterday. I studied so hard, in those days that were nearing the exam, all the students focus their attention on the study, we fought together. The paper and the books were piled up our desks, when I entered the classroom, I hardly could see my classmates’ heads. Though it was the tough days for us, we felt happy, because we fought for our future, we believe what we do will bring us a promising future. These memories will linger on my mind forever.

高考对于学生来说是一个大的考试，他们已经学了那么多年，目的是考上大学。对于大部分人来说，他们对于这个重大的考试有很深的印象，它改变了很多人的命运。我已经参加了高考，我能清楚地记得它，那情形就像发生在昨天。我很努力学习，在那些接近考试的日子，所有的学生都集中他们的精力来学习，我们一起奋斗。那些书本和试卷堆满了我们的桌子，当我今日教室时，我几乎看不到同学的头。虽然那些日子很艰苦，但是我们觉得很开心，因为我们为未来奋斗，我们相信所做的会让我们的将来更加的明朗。这些记忆将永存在我的脑海里

[难忘的高考记忆英语作文

今天，我和亭亭花店买几朵康乃馨给妈妈。

到了店里，没看见人。我们朝里面放声大喊：“有人么？”忽然，一个娇小的女孩走出来：“请问，你们要买什么？是不是康乃馨？我也希望……”于是捂住嘴，“希望什么？”亭亭问，“我爸妈离婚了，妈妈已经去了我不知道的地方。今天是母亲节，我好想投进母亲的怀抱，给她一朵红艳艳的康乃馨，好好地亲亲她，像小时候一样……哎！一切都是梦不可能成真。”我们决定帮助小女孩，“你妈妈什么样？”“我会画画，我画给你看。”于是，小女孩拿出画纸，用笔画了起来。画好了，啊！是多么好看呀！我和亭亭赞叹不已。“快帮我把！”

我和亭亭把画贴在一张纸上，并写上：这位女士，您的女儿很想您！想送你康乃馨，想抱你亲你，想……你快回来吧！你的女儿在等你，你快回来见见你的可爱的、娇小的女儿吧！于是贴了张女孩的照片，放心地走了。

不久，我看见：女孩投进一个妇女怀里，哭着喊：“妈妈！妈妈！这是给你的康乃馨！”女孩从兜里掏出一朵红彤彤的康乃馨，妇女亲了亲女孩说：“孩子，我不该丢下你，我不会离开你了！”忽然一个男人跑来：“女儿呀！看到了这张寻人启事，爸爸心痛极了！我也不该放弃你们，对不起！我爱你们！我疼你啊！”说着一家人热泪盈眶。

我忽然想起了母亲，他是多么辛苦！是多么劳累！我跑回去，写了一封信：妈妈，我爱你！我不该调皮，惹你生气。妈妈，我爱你！我不会再调皮捣蛋，会成为你的骄傲的。再将康乃馨放在信上，回到房间去了。

“明天，你不用去上学了，跟我去见你爷爷。”一句话，丝毫不留余地……

“爷爷”，我仔细的思索着这个词语，猛地我打了一个寒颤，是爷爷！那个离开了我三年的爷爷！

我与爷爷的交集很少，他总是爱一个人看着老掉牙了的京剧，反复的擦着那几十年的三轮车，我的生活丝毫没有为爷爷有什么变化。有一天爷爷进了医院，全家人都很着急，奶奶哭得很伤心，很伤心，眼泪浸湿了爷爷的枕头，那一片好冰，好冰，我依旧很懵懂，为什么要伤心？直到那天傍晚，一个电话，吵醒了熟睡的我，吵醒了妈妈，妈妈迅速穿好衣服，匆匆出了门，“咚”的一声，只剩我一个蜷缩在床上，我似乎感到有一个魔鬼，它要吞噬一切。它在怒吼！第二天，妈妈带我去了奶奶家，那有一个从前没有的桌子，上面是白布，再上面是爷爷的相片。妈妈用力把我按下，好痛，好痛。“磕头！”一个，两个，三个……那个魔鬼真的吞噬了一切。我看见了静躺的爷爷，好安宁，看见了近似发疯的奶奶，好伤心，那是最后一次背影，好模糊！

我穿上了白色的衣服，妈妈笨拙的为我绑上丑恶的白条，舅舅捧着照片……

今时，我再次穿上了白衣，乘着汽车，去那爷爷的“家”，好美，好美的“家”，那有一棵小树，有美丽的花朵，有慈祥的爷爷。

烧纸钱的烟雾在飞舞，追着我，好难闻，我不停的躲开它，妈妈踢了我一脚“跪下！”我跪在了爷爷墓前，看见了爷爷的照片，爷爷在笑，好开心，好开心……

万缕思绪在浓烟青树中飞舞，那熟悉的背影又在眼前，好清晰，好清晰……

“吃饱了吗？马上就到家了啊！”爷爷在笑，笑出了声。“饱了！”我也在笑，笑出了声。妈妈，爸爸很忙，没有时间接我，只有爷爷，只有爷爷，他会从解放路骑着红色的三轮车接我，那是一辆很红，很红的车子，很大！我会在上面写着作业，看着风景，爷爷会骑着车子，卖力的骑着车子，样子有点笨拙，有点失美。爷爷每每都会送我到门口，却不进门，留给我的只是那一副背影，熟悉又陌生的背影，再长大些我喜欢看爷爷的背影，那很有趣，那很躬，很瘦，似乎只剩下了皮包骨，但又很有精神。那时的爷爷爱打拳，爱听戏。

再大些，学习忙了，我便很少见爷爷，他也不如前强壮，只是守着戏剧，把着脉搏，我与妹妹对爷爷只剩下了敬畏，于是，沙发上总有爷爷那孤寞的背影。

现今，只留有那平静的背影，好美，好美。

我们祭拜完毕，奶奶猛然扑在爷爷墓前大哭，好渗，好渗，舅舅扶起奶奶，催促快走，快走，并安慰着奶奶：“爸过得挺好的，挺好的。”

真的，挺好……

一头白发，一身素衣，大步远走，那墓前的青树在长大，那个背影永世难忘！

点评：从文章的立意来看，是写对爷爷的怀念之情，题目是“难忘的背影”，应紧紧围绕爷爷的背影来写，写爷爷的背影中渗透着怎样的祖孙情深，但文章用过多的笔墨写了参加爷爷葬礼时的情景，而非详细地刻画背影。文中多次出现“好开心，好开心”、“好美，好美”、“挺好的，挺好的”，语言略显平乏，不太具体和生动。另外，一个小建议，“舅舅扶起奶奶，催促快走，快走，并安慰着奶奶：‘爸过得挺好的，挺好的’”，应该是“叔叔”，不是“舅舅”。

[关于难忘的背影的初二作文

Few years ago, an unforgettable thing was happened in my life. It is a terrifying experience.

The weather was very hot in summer. So my friends and I am together to catch craft. I felt much feared and excited. I was frightened for I was first catch craft. If I fall into river how can I do and I isnt good at swimming. I was excited that I have a chance to catch craft.

Then I was very careful to stand on the craft with scared. But the craft always ups and downs in the river and beyond my control. I was fallen into river after a second I stood on it .I felt very afraid and was difficulty asking for help that I would catch water as soon as I open mouth. At the moment, I thought I would die and say goodbye to all people who I know. I was wet all my clothing and always shivering after my friends help me escaping from river. My heart beat faster than usual as well breath. I absolutely dare not believe that I can see the sun.

When I remind of this matter, I feel I was very lucky. And I think I was a lucky dog.

This morning, I take my first taste on seeking family education with a high heart-lever. In latest, I have summonned up my encourage to carry out this travel, and regulate myself that I will not do work at a payment lowing 20RMB per hour at least for self-thought that I am hold an impressive proficiency of English and an outstanding condition.

After a string of waiting time, I welcame the first customer, a couple. Leading a mutual chinchin, our talking seemed going smoothly before refering to the wages. The man said:" How much you want get per hour." I though deeply and gave a reply:" OK, 20 is moderate." The women interfered:" But I have noticed that other tutors just require for a specific pay under 15!" I promptly conscioused that all my particularly excellent conditions descend to an ignorable position when refering to wealth. Merely I can leave an so-called engagement for excluding unexpective circumstances...

Yes, I am on the way of reaching adultness, the bricks-and-mortar world is not as absolute as I believe. Not a popular character I can be only in own mind. Yes, I should on days ahead conduct every step on the sea-lever. Illusion is virtual, my agenda is need to be foot by foot. I am sure that one day current days are abount to become to what I fantasize now!

With the passage of time, many things have disappeared from my mind, but there is one thing that makes me unforgettable.

It was a mid-term examination, the teacher took the test papers into the classroom, made the papers, I turned over, turned over, no one question can be a rare one, I do not care thirty-seven, the title of a fill, with almost four Ten minutes to finish the test questions, and I look at the surrounding students, they are in the head down the words of writing. I did not check, but in the side to play, after a while, the teacher rolled up, I proudly pay up, because I do fast

The next day, the teacher made the test paper down, I look at the score, I was shocked - only test 77 points, I regret not listen to the teachers words, regret their carelessness, looking at the bright red 77 points my heart really Too sad, if I carefully check again, there will not be so many mistakes, there is no red 77 points.

Although this thing has been over the past year, but I will never forget this matter. Because this thing let me know a reason: everything must be careful!

I have a happy family.My family have five poeple:grandpa,grandma,father,mother,and me.

My grandparents live in countryside.They have six rooms.The room is big.There are two apple in the ground.They have sixteen goats and three cows.The goat is white.The cow is yellow.They are healthy.

My parents and me live in city.My father is a worker.His work is hard.My mother is a high schools Chinese teacher,She take bicycle go to work at sevenclock.In the afternoon,she doesnt go home.In the evening,she make supper.The food is delicious.I am a student.I have Chinese,math and English everyday.That is boring.I have many friends.After class,I play with my friends.

We are tried,but we are very happy.I love my family

我有一个幸福的家庭。我的家庭有五人:爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,和我。

我的祖父母住在乡下。他们有六个房间。房间是大的。有两个苹果在地上。他们有十六个山羊和三头牛。山羊是白色的。牛是黄色的。他们是健康的。

我的父母和我住在城市。我的父亲是一个工人。他的工作是很难的。我妈妈是一个中学的语文老师,她在7点带自行车去上班。下午,她不回家。在晚上,她做晚饭。食物是美味的。我是一个学生。每天我有语文、数学和英语。这是无聊的。我有很多朋友。下课后,我和我的朋友玩。

我们试过了,但是我们很开心。我爱我的家庭