高一英语教学反思10篇（汇集20篇）

导语：我们都想快乐健康地长大成人，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. Lastly, in order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a days study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

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我们都想快乐健康地成长，为了这个目标我们必须做几件事。

首先，我们应该培养良好的生活态度。生活不仅有阳光，也有艰难时期。我们应该勇敢面对困难。其次，我们必须努力学习，因为知识就是力量。如果我们有力量，我们就能帮助建设我们的国家，更好地享受生活。最后，为了好好学习，我们需要做运动，以便我们能够保持健康。一天的学习后，我们可以去跑步，玩球类运动或只是散步。如果我们把这些事情做好，我们就能幸福健康地成长。

对相当一部分的学生来说，写作文是件苦差事，学生面对老师出的作文题目搜肠刮肚也写不出一个字来，教师批改那些千人一面、文不对题、乱七八糟的文章，真有点恨铁不成钢的感觉。对此，老师学生都是苦不堪言，该如何提高学生的写作水平，我通过教学反思和经验总结，认为可以从以下三个方面逐渐提高学生的写作能力。

首先，积累。课外多积累词语、句子和文段，以此打下写作的基础。学生进入初中后，随着课程的增多，各科老师都感到课时紧、任务重，而学生大部分的课外时间都忙于完成书面作业，不知不觉就忽略了课外阅读，更谈不上读一些课外书籍来充实自己，学习始终处于被动状态。

所以我在每节课前要求学生给大家介绍自己所积累的名言警句或成语故事及优秀文章等，并且要求其他同学在本子上作好记录，这样不仅能督促学生了解更多课外知识，积累更多名言名句，同时也能培养写生的学习兴趣，吸引学生的课堂注意力，达到很好的教学效果。

其次，观察。法国著名雕塑家罗丹有一句名言：“自然是美的。”何不让学生有意观察大自然、练就一双敏锐的发现美的眼睛，激发观察兴趣呢？气象万千、美不胜收的大自然，旭日东升，霞光万道的清晨，皓月当空、星光灿烂的夜幕，桃红柳绿、鸟语花香的春色……这一切都对学生有着巨大的魅力。送给学生一把兴趣的金钥匙，让他们打开心扉去看、去说、去发现、去体会。

再次，鼓励。美国教育学家巴士卡里雅博士宣称:“把最差的学生给我,只要不是白痴,我都能把他们培养成优等生。”他的妙方就是赞扬和鼓励。中学生有强烈的自尊心和好胜心,有渴望得到肯定和赞扬的心理需求。教师要善于抓住这一点,在作文教学中鼓励学生,挖掘出他们不竭的创作动力。因此,教师都要用赏识的眼光发现学生的优点和特长并给以及时的肯定和鼓励，这样学生期待肯定和赞誉的心理得到满足,就会有了写好作文的自信,就会有希望。

学生的每一篇作文,不管成功与否,都是他们苦心经营的结果,他们劳动的付出都渴望得到承认,因此要善待学生的劳动成果。作文讲评中巧妙的运用评语激励学生或在课堂上有针对性的赞扬,会极大的点燃学生的写作愿望,他们就会投入更大的写作热情,尽量去写好每一篇作文。这样,赞许和鼓励,会更大地开发学生的写作潜能,给他们创设轻松愉悦的写作环境,消除了作文难的心理障碍,学生就乐写、善写,逐步写出较为成功的作品。。

总之，语文是一门综合性很强的学科，而作文教学在语文教学中又起着举足轻重的作用。在实际教学中，需要我们每一位语文教师在教学实践中不断地总结，不断地探索，去找到一条能真正体现本人教学风格，而又卓有成效的方法，实践教书育人的总体目标，使语文的工具性和人文性得到充分的体现。

[初中作文课教学反思

Dear Wang Lin,

It’s really my pleasure to make friends with you. I’m Zhao Gang and I’m 17

years old. I like playing football and reading. I’m good at writing and playing

the piano. But I really want to be a journalist after graduating from

university. To get good marks, firstly, think listening carefully in class is

most important. Then we should ask the teacher questions we have in time.

Finally, getting rich knowledge out of class is also necessary. I hope the

advice can help you in your studies. Welcome to our school if you have the

chance. And I’ll show you our school and my favorite books. Also I can play a

piece of piano music for you.

Looking forward to your letter.

Best wishes.

There are many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examinations. Some people think that examinations can help them review the lessons regularly, while others maintain that too many examinations have frustrated them.

To me, I think an examination is a good thing for both teachers and students. Teachers can find out how much the students have grasped and then improve their teaching; students, on the other hand, will learn what their weak points are and then study even harder.

All in all, we should not waste time arguing whether examinations are good or not. What we should do is to try to improve the exam system and try to adjust it to our different requirements.

在理解的基础上尊重、融合到孩子当中，我认为那是最好的教育。只有尊重才可能保证对学生的赞扬和鼓励；只有融合才能得到孩子更多的信任和赞许。在小学学习环境中成长的孩子，他们的思维非常的开阔，对课堂中老师的提问，他们有着许多不同的回答，有的答案非常符合我们的问题；有的答案对不上号；有的答案甚至是个笑话，面对这些我总是采用不同的方式来赞扬和鼓励他们，我相信所有的答案都是孩子们经过思考的，他们的回答希望得到老师的表扬和肯定，这要我们采取不同的教育艺术，多加鼓励和肯定，相信不久的将来，你的问题一定会有更多精彩的答案。

游戏是体育教学中运用的比较多的教学方法之一，尤其在低年级的课堂教学中采用的更加突出，为了更好的调动每个孩子的学习热情，我每次都融合到游戏中，比如：人、虎、枪的游戏，开始我很喜欢把孩子们定为一队，我是另一队来集体参与游戏；在大渔网游戏中，我有时当渔网，有时当小鱼来组织游戏；在各类比赛的游戏中，总帮助孩子们想一些方法来激发小组的积极性，不管孩子取得怎样的成绩，我都和他们一一击掌祝贺，让孩子们从成功的瞬间起就感受乐趣。

我的理解、尊重、融合得到了回报，记忆最深的事是最后的一节体育课上，当下课的铃声响后，我宣布下课的同时，告诉孩子们这是本学期的最后一课，孩子们都不让我走，二十多个孩子一一和我拥抱后，我才离开，那一刻我很快乐！

苏霍姆林斯基说过：成功的欢乐是一种巨大的情绪力量，它可以促进学生好好学习的愿望，无论如何不要把这种内在的力量消失。缺少这种力量，教育的任何巧妙措施都是无济于事的。理解、尊重、融合从成功的瞬间起就留给孩子，相信我的坚持，孩子们在体育课堂教学中会获取更多方面的成功和快乐.

[体育课堂教学反思作文

My new years resolution is very easy, only three piece of advice. At first, I want to get good grade. Next,I have studied hard as my math is not good,so I have practiced everyday. Further, I want to take my dance lesson .Because I really love dance. I have already studied five dances since 2011. I just have been a bus spotter. I have not yet ever liked bus like now. I will spend some money for bus model. These are my new year’s resolution, I hope it,really need to work hard,I think I can be successful. I will never give up.

我的新年愿望很简单，只有三个建议。首先，我想获得好成绩。接下来，我努力学习因为我的数学不好，所以我每天都做练习。此外，我希望参加舞蹈课。因为我真的很喜欢跳舞。从2011年起我已经学了5年舞蹈了。我刚刚成为了一个公共汽车检举员。我还从来没有像现在一样喜欢公交车。我会花一些钱买一些公交车模型。这些都是我新的一年的新年愿望，我希望，我可以真正去努力，我想我能成功。我永远不会放弃。

Since I go to high school, I feel the great pressure. High school is the very important period of my life, because if I study well, I can enter into my the ideal college and have the bight future. So I want to do my best, I don’t want to lag behind. The problem is that I can’t always be the top student, sometimes I will fail the exam. At that time, I need to adjust myself and take easy. The way for me to relax is various. First, I will listen to the music. Hearing the music can smooth my heart, it helps calm down, so I will get out of the annoyance. Second, I like to do some sports, such as jogging, basketball and tennis. Doing these sports also helps me let out my bad emotion and I become energetic again.

自从我上高中，我就感受到了很大的压力。高中是我生命中很重要的阶段，因为如果我学得好，就能进入到理想的大学，有一个光明的前途。因此我想要做到最好，我不想要落后。问题就是我不可能一直都是尖子生，有时候我考试也会失败。在那个时候，我需要调整自己，并且放松。我放松的方法是多样的。第一，我会听音乐。听音乐能让我的心顺畅，也帮助我冷静下来，这样我就能把烦恼抛去。第二，我喜欢做一些运动，比如慢跑，篮球和网球。做这些运动能帮助我释放不好的情绪，再次变得活力四射。

For thousands of years, physical activity has been associated with health. Today, science has confirmed the link, with overwhelming evidence that people who lead active lifestyles are less likely to die early, or to experience major illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes and colon cancer.

Exercise benefits every part of the body, including the mind. Exercising causes the body to produce endorphins, chemicals that lead a person to feel peaceful and happy. Exercise can help some people sleep better. It can also help with mental health issues such as mild depression and self-esteem. Plus, exercise can give people a real sense of accomplishment and pride at having achieved a certain goal - like beating an old time in the 100-meter dash. ﹒

Exercising can help you look better, too. People who exercise burn calories and look more toned than those who dont. In fact, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body at a healthy weight. When you exercise, you burn food calories as fuel. If a person eats more calories than he or she burns, the body stores them away as fat. Exercise can help burn these stored calories.

Finally, exercising to maintain a healthy weight also decreases a persons risk of developing certain diseases, including type 2 diabetes and high blood pressure.

几千年来,体力活动与健康有关。今天,科学已经证实了链接,压倒性的证据表明,引导积极的生活方式的人不太可能早死,或经历重大疾病如心脏病、糖尿病、结肠癌。

锻炼的好处身体的每一部分,包括思想。锻炼使身体产生内啡肽,化学物质使人感到平静和快乐。锻炼可以帮助一些人睡得更好。它还可以帮助轻度抑郁和自尊等心理健康问题。另外,运动可以给人们一个真实的成就感和自豪感,在实现某个目标——比如击败老在100米短跑。摘要

锻炼可以帮助你更好看。人运动燃烧卡路里,看起来更健美的比那些不。事实上,锻炼是最重要的部分之一,将你的身体保持在一个健康的体重。当你运动时,你消耗的食物卡路里作为燃料。如果一个人吃的比他或她燃烧更多的卡路里,身体将它们存储脂肪。锻炼可以帮助消耗这些存储的热量。

最后,锻炼保持健康的体重也能减少一个人的患某种疾病的风险,包括2型糖尿病和高血压。

本次活动是利用我们平时普通的实木梯子平放在两条长凳子上，孩子们非常喜欢，尤其孩子们一个个的从上面成功的通过，这不仅发展了幼儿的平衡能力，也锻炼了孩子们的胆量，培养了他们不怕困难，勇敢向前的品质，还给孩子们带来了快乐的体验。《3-6岁儿童学习与发展指南》中提出4-5岁的幼儿能在较窄的低矮物体上平稳地走一段距离。老师在设计本次活动中是从简单到难的过程循序渐进，老师先做好示范，讲清楚游戏规则，再让孩子们一个一个地从上面走过去。针对个别胆小的孩子，何老师会在一旁鼓励并手牵着孩子走过去，第二次在玩时就能自己独立的走过去了。再后面增加难度环节中老师还鼓励孩子们自己想办法通过，有些孩子看着梯子已经调整了高度，怕在上面走会摔下来，就双手双脚并用的过去。有一个小男孩刚走了两步不小心掉下去了，在老师的鼓励下他自己勇敢的爬起来重新来一次。游戏是对幼儿进行全面发展教育的重要形式，幼儿喜欢游戏，在游戏中身心愉悦，更容易积极参与到活动中。在此次游戏中孩子们自己尝试了平时不敢做的事，通过游戏孩子们知道了遇到困难也要努力克服，勇往直前。小朋友之间要相互合作，相互鼓励，体验了体育游戏带来的乐趣。

我觉得还这样的活动中还应该加强老师和孩子们的互动，时刻关注孩子的动态，根据孩子们的表现情况及时调整活动目标。

Three attributes can help people in their studies. First, a sense of responsibility is important for building a sound character. If you arent responsible, youll postpone your assignments or devote too little time to your schoolwork.

Second, in school life, relationships between people are valuable. Friends can bring you happiness and laughter. In addition, you can discuss problems and pursue knowledge with them.

Last, it is important to have a constructive philosophy of life. If you are defeated, dont be disappointed. Try to face your life and your studies with courage and determination.

If you can work toward these goals, youll become a well-rounded and versatile student instead of being a bookworm.

时间如流水般淌过，转眼间期中考试也已经结束了，成绩也已经公布了。望着试卷上的分数，我惊讶了。因为这并不是我真正想要的分数。六年级下册的第一次英语期中考试开始了这次考试已成为我学习生涯中最低分的一次考试。在这次英语考试，我竟然考了73分，从三年级开始，到六年级，我从未考过如此低的分数，于是，我开始自我检查。

我次，一到考试的时候总因紧张而很着急，为此，我总结了我没考好的原因：

1.平时没有养成细致认真的习惯，总是不把题目读完就答题，考试的时候答题粗心大意、马马虎虎，导致很多题目会做却被扣分甚至没有做对。

2.在做阅读理解的时候，我根本看都看不懂，这个脑袋都是晕乎乎的，就随便乱蒙了一下，这都是因为单词没有记熟，看到认识的单词，更本想不出意思来，所以，我的阅读理解扣了8分。

3.在考试的前一个晚上没有复习，以前每次英语考试我都会在前天晚上复习好，而在这次考试，我因放了两天假就忘得一干二净了，到了学校才想起来要考试，但我以为这次考试也会像以前考试一样很容易，在考试前10多分钟也不复习，从而导致了考得很不理想。

4.平时回到家的时候，不复习一下英语，但到了星期六、星期天也不把英语书拿出来复习一下，只顾看电视、玩电脑。

5.在平时听单词的时候，总是死记硬背，就在听的时候默得出来，蒙混过关，到了第二天，就全不记得了，导致了在做选出不同类的单词这一题的时候，扣了6分。

自己有很多兴趣，作为一个人，一个完整的人，一个明白的人，当然不应该同机器一样，让自己的兴趣被平白无故抹煞，那样不仅悲惨而且无知，但是，如果因为自己的兴趣严重耽搁了学习就不好了，不仅不好，有时候真的是得不偿失。第一，这次失败的原因是什么?要认真思考，挖掘根本的原因;第二，你接下来要干什么?确定自己的目标，不要因为失败不甘心接着走，而是要正确地衡量自己。看看想要什么，自己的优势在什么地方，弱势是什么;第三，确定目标。明确自己想要的，制定计划，按部就班的走。

时间仿佛过的很快，一眨眼的功夫，却已学期过半。我仔细的倾听钟表的声音，仿佛感到了时光的流淌，生命的流逝。时间仿佛是一片大海，我仿佛是在大海中行舟的那个人。我在着大海中慢慢的成长，进步。刚上海时，由于不适应海上的生活，很长时间里，没有找到行舟的诀窍，因此，并没有比别人划得更好。等到花了六分之一时，才发觉原来划船在海中遨游是如此愉快，虽然需要费力，虽然需要慢慢的学习划船的技巧和精确度。但，我却依然感到快乐无比。因为在这个探究的过程中，我发现了一种超越自我的快乐。

Tennis is the world’s third sport, it ranks after football and basketball.

Every year, a lot of audience keeps their eyes on the four grand slam

championships. It is known to all that Wimbledon has the oldest history and the

tennis players treat it as the greatest honor to win it. This year, the local

player Murray won it again.

The famous male tennis players are Big 4. They almost won all the important

championships during the last ten years. But Murray was in the awkward situation

though he was one of the Big 4, he never won the grand slam, what’s more, people

in England put so much hope on him to win Wimbledon Championship. When Murray

made it he cried out and felt relieved.

When the second time he won, he cried out again though he did not have so

much pressure as before. The fans knew that he had a hard time after his first

great honor, people started to qustioned about his ability. But he proved

himself again.

Every player has his honor hour and the bad time, the more important is to

never give up, then honor will come again.

With the development of our society， energy in the world bees more and more

limited， so it is quite important for us to save energy and to protect our

environment。 As a student， there are a lot of methods we can do to save energy

at home。 For example， first， we can turn off the light as well as other

appliances when we are not using them。 Second， recycle the waste water， paper

and other waste so that we can reuse them。 Whats more， it is suggested to use

public transportation more instead of private cars.

Above all， everyone can make a great contribution to our environment。 I

hope I can learn more to develop new and clear energy， like energy from the wind

and solar.

There is a story that an old woman always feels unhappy, because when the sun comes out, she worries about her daughters business, because the girl sells umbrella. But when it rains, she stills feels unhappy for she worries about her another daugthers business. People tell her to change his point of view, when the it is fine, she can feel happy about her second daughters business and when it rains, she can be happy about her first daughters business. In that way, she will be a positive woman every day. We cant change the fact, but we can treat things in another way, so that we can be positive all the time.

执教一个半学期以来，最让我头疼的问题就是学生的写作水平没有多大的提高。经过多次与老教师交流，以及自己工作之余的学习钻研，我对作文教学有了进一步的认识，现反思如下：

一、 认清学情，夯实基础，不盲目追求作文形式。

从我所任教的两个班的学生作文水平来看，大部分学生基础不扎实，存在着句子表达不通顺、用词不恰当、词汇积累太少、选材较狭隘、立意不高等情况。因此，作文练习不应该追求字数和技巧，而要立足于强化用词造句的训练、拓展阅读面。

写文章最基本的就是做到“文从字顺”，为此，在每天的作业中加上“造句”这一项，由科代表选择难度适中的1～2个词语造句。把句子写通顺了，表达的基础才能提高。

更重要的工作是增加学生的阅读量。在两个班中，我组织学生创建班级图书库，鼓励学生多读好书，读文学作品，并给他们介绍《读书笔记8种方法》和《读书三种方法》等。多读还要多写，鼓励学生勤写读书笔记，准备定期举行班级优秀读书笔记展览和名著电影欣赏。另外，组办班级文学兴趣小组，定期交流，推选出优秀作品向学校《绿洲》文学社投稿。试图通过一系列活动把阅读引向深处。

二、 解放教学思想，还学生更广阔的写作空间。

新课程呼唤作文教学的开放，指出“要求学生说真话、实话、心

里话、不说假话、空话、套话”。为学生的自主写评提供有利条件和广阔空间，减少对学生写作的束缚、鼓励自由表达和有创意的表达，提倡学生自主拟题、少写命题作文。然而，繁杂的作文教学程序、陈旧的作文教学内容、单一的作文教学方法、一成不变的作文评改方式——这些是不可忽视的传统的束缚力量。如何突破传统，取其精华、取其糟粕？这是我反复思考的问题。

1、 解放老师的教学思想。

想给学生一碗水，自己必须储备一桶水。客观条件对学生

创造力的束缚是显而易见的，但这是教育普遍存在的现象。假如老师的教学方式也是单一陈旧的，那么我们就等于在制造教育成品，而不是在创造人！工作虽繁忙，但还要以学习为主。多借鉴名师的经验，多与老教师交流，多读书。

在借鉴余映潮老师的方法后，我尝试了这样的作文批改方

式：小组合作。

第一步：交换找优点，评价闪光点，写出主要内容，概括大意。 第二步：再交换挑毛病，指不足（比如错别字，病句等）。 第三步：本人小声读文，动情优美处，大声的读，后品味反思别人的评价，结合自己的感受，对自己提出中肯的建议。 最后，交流心得。每组推一篇美文大家共赏，由作文负责人（苗甜甜）根据各小组记分，上交。由老师根据各小组的情况，找出优缺点，并概括不足（共性的东西），思考下一次作文要求及目标。

经过这样一改动，学生的作文课上，以小组为单位，全部动起来，全身心积极投入，每位同学至少读了三篇同类的作文，又听读了6篇美文，不论从听觉、视觉上都获得很大的收获，相对以往单一，枯燥的形式，学生的积极性，大大提高小组之间的凝聚力。

2、 还学生更广阔的写作空间。

（1）、让他们亲近大自然，走进社会，丰富他们生活和精神世界，在生活实践中获得更多的人生感悟。

抓住每一次人性教育的机会，让学生关注时事，写相关的周记。比如学期初，跟学生讲今年春节的雪灾，让他们周末回去利用电视、网络、报纸等形式关注灾区的情况，体会人间冷暖。

（2）、让他们勤于思索，乐于想象。

抓住每一篇课文的闪光点，让学生写读后感。比如学习《从百草园到三味书屋》一课，让学生写《从小学到初中》等类似的短文，让他们抒发自己的成长体会。

（3）、让他们学会用自己的眼睛和心灵去感受、体验，“我手写我心、我笔抒我情”。

培养学生的观察能力，引导他们从三点一线的单调生活中，体会成长的快乐。布置《成长的烦恼》、《成长的快乐》等作文题，引导学生关注自己的心灵成长。

（4）、提供优秀的视听材料，给予学生足够的视觉刺激和听觉刺激，还要引导他们“于无影处见有影、于无声处闻有声”。

给学生观看一些人性教育的电影，让他们写观后感。比如看了《跑吧，孩子》这部电影以后，他们很多在观后感中都感叹自己的幸福生活，增加了幸福感，学习就更加有动力了。

3、 开放写作内容。

《语文课程标准》指出“语文课程应该是开放而有创新活力的，应尽可能满足不同地区、不同学校的需求，并能够根据社会的需要不断自我调节、更新发展。”作文教学更是如此。

为此，在阅读教学中充分挖掘习作资源，实现阅读文本的超越，是开放写作内容一个较可行的途径。如补写（补写背景、补写结尾、补写文中的空白点等）、改写（改变体裁写，改变人称写，改变时空写等）、仿写、扩写、缩写等等。在阅读教学中开发学生感兴趣的习作资源，创出习作教学的新洞天。

如学生续写《皇帝的新装》，展现了他们无穷的想象力和天真的思想；改写《丑小鸭》，体现了他们唯美的童话情结。

通过这些写作活动，我发现其实学生的创造能力不是我想象的那么差，关键是如何去激发学生的写作热情，让他们在写作中表现自己，

获得成就感。只有有所获，有所得，学生才会有兴趣，进而才有动力。当学生的写作有了源源不断的动力时，我的教学也就成功了。

这些尝试只是初步的，也需要时间不断的关注教学成果，不断的反思，才能进一步完善。

[初一作文教学反思参考

Because mother said that the day can go to sleep in the morning, because

even fell asleep will also be new firecrackers wake.

On New Years eve, in addition to being able to eat a lot of delicious

things, can also receive a lot of red envelopes, you can also watch TV for a

long long time, really is so happy.

A red envelope is New Years money, since ancient times, elders will send

children lucky money on New Years eve, seems to be a meaning of exorcism

disaster, mother said to put "lucky money" in under the pillow, pillow to sleep

on it. I really do as this way, because it is very new.

I also looked at the Spring Festival gala, the deepest memory is the

"hello, I am leave." "Why? Why is this?" Whenever I say this, mom and dad

laughed, because I copy too like said.

In 2011, the greatest CEO of Apple company, Steve Jobs passed away. People

from all around the world felt pity for the loss of this great talent. They laid

down notes and wrote some comments on the blog to show their respect. Looked at

Steves lifetime, he did not finished college and started his career in the age.

Though he quit school, he would listen to another lesson that caught his

interest. He overcame the difficulty of being poor by earning money through

collecting bottles. His insistence and creativity brought him great success in

career, but later he got fired. He felt frustrated then he realized he could

start his another career. He bought an animation studio and now it is very

successful. The Pixar movie studio is popular around the world. Steves story

inspires the young people to fight for their dreams.

今天我批了作文《我的第一次……》，批了不到一半的时候就批不下去了，写的不够理想，因为上周五一部分孩子回家写的，可能是没有人指导，出现的问题太多。

一、内容不完整、具体。这跟平时课外读物的积累还有平时的语言积累也有很大的关系。几句话就结束了。我事先还让孩子先列出提纲，然后按提纲写，可很多孩子不会按要求去做。练的还是有点少了。

二、对于做什么，并没有弄清楚，没有生活经验也拿过来就写。比如：第一篇作文《我的课余生活》，其中有一个孩子写怎么养报春花，我当时一看内容非常好，也挺详细的，可仔细一看，问题就来了，报春花从种下种子到开花仅仅用了一个月的时间，并且每天都浇水，这是什么花也够呛啊。于是，回家我上网查了一下，根本不是那么回事，所以，我觉得孩子在没有生活经验的情况下，凭空捏造的东西太多。还有写“我的第一次”，写怎样在家做饭，也是这样，也没做过，也没问过家长，写饭用电饭锅做糊了，我怎么也没想明白，于是问了几个老师，都说既然放了米和水，怎么也做不糊呀，可爱的孩子们却犯了这样的错误，不能不说没有经验，并且连讨教都不讨教，就来一通胡编乱造。

三、明天上一节作文讲评课，把出现的问题都一一罗列

出来，再读一读优秀的作文，对于一下吧。要让他们知道：好的作文不是想出来的，是源自生活而写出来的。

My mother high stature, not fat or thin, a few silk shallow wrinkles on the forehead, often hang a smile on his face.

Mother is kind, she taught me at an early age to be honest, treat people to be generous, since the childhood to cultivate my good character.

Remember there is one thing I always forget. It was a hot afternoon, the sun like a ball of fire to bake the earth. I do in the room, fan fan, but sweat kept rolling down. I said to mother: "mom! The weather was too hot, hot as hell! I want to eat Popsicle." Mother said: "go, Ill take you to buy some ice stick." Then picked up a wallet.

Where to buy, I chose a Popsicle, mother from the purse and took out a piece of 50 yuan to buy the ticket of uncle, uncle to find the money, my mother and I went hurried home.

At home, mother put back counted, soliloquize ground to say: "yi? Well, there are 7 yuan, how do I find 45 yuan?" Once I listen to and happily say: "good! People buy really confused, looking for more 3 yuan. Mom, the 2 yuan to me?" Mother stared my one eye, said angrily: "find the 2 yuan more, we should give the money back, do not want the covet petty gain! Besides, somebody else sell Popsicle more not easy!" Say that finish, mother take fire up the sun, give somebody else sent 3 yuan.

When you go to sleep at night, I lay in bed cant sleep, thinking of things during the day, suddenly understood, to start from little things, not because of a little advantage, make some excuse me one thing. Its great education to me, I love my mother, I admire her in heart.

我的妈妈高高身材，不胖不瘦，额头上有几丝浅浅的皱纹，脸上常常挂着微笑。

妈妈为人善良，她从小就教导我做人要诚实，待人要宽厚，从小就来培养我好的品德。

记得有件事我总是忘不了。那是一个炎热的下午，太阳像个大火球烤着大地。我做在房间里，不停地扇着扇子，但汗珠还是不停地滚落下来。我对妈妈说：“妈!天气太热了，热得要命!我想吃冰棍。”妈妈说：“走，我带你去买些冰棍。”说着便拿起钱包。

到了买冰棍的地方，我挑选了冰棍，妈妈从钱包里拿出了一张50元的整票递给买冰棍的叔叔，叔叔找完钱，我和妈妈便匆匆回家去了。

回到家，妈妈把找回来数了数，自言自语地说：“咦?不对呀，一共是7元钱，怎么找回45元?”我一听，高兴地说：“太好了!买冰棍的人真糊涂了，找多了3元。妈妈，那2元给我行吗?”妈妈瞪了我一眼，生气地说：“多找了2元，我们应该送回去，不能贪图那些小便宜!再说，人家卖冰棍多不容易呀!”说完，妈妈冒着火辣辣的太阳，把3元钱给人家送去了。

晚上睡觉的时候，我躺在床上睡不着，想起白天的事情，忽然明白了，做人要从一点一滴的事情做起，不能因为眼前的一点小便宜，做出一些对不起人的事。这件事对我有了很大的教育，我爱我的妈妈，我打心里佩她。

Last week, I saw a very impressive documentary about panda. A professor

studied panda in the early 1980s went to the wild life and kept trace of wild

giant panda for many years. As a result, he found that it was human being that

made these lovely animals die out. At that time, many people believed that giant

panda became less because of the low rate of newborn babies. But it was not

true. People cut trees for making profit at that time. Panda lose homeland and

they lacked of food. Thanks to these valuable data, the government took the

policy to protect the animals. So today, the number of giant panda is

increasing. People realize the importance of protecting the environment and it

is the best way to protect wild animals, they are the indispensable part of the

nature.

The Great Wall of China, also known in China as the Great Wall of 10,000, is an ancient Chinese fortification built from the end of the 14th century until the beginning of the 17th century, during the Ming Dynasty, in order to protect China from raids by the Mongols and Turkic tribes. It was preceded by several walls built since the 3rd century BC against the raids of nomadic tribes coming from areas now in modern day Mongolia and Manchuria.The Wall stretches over a formidable 6,350 km (3,946 miles), from Shanhai Pass on the Bohai Gulf in the east, at the limit between China proper and Manchuria, to Lop Nur in the southeastern portion of Xinjiang Uygur Autonomous Region.

中国的长城，在中国也被称为长城的10000，是中国古代的一个设防建造的第十四世纪末直到第十七世纪初，在明代，为了由蒙古人和突厥部落保护中国免受袭击。这是之前几个墙自公元前第三世纪的游牧部落来自地区现在的蒙古和满洲里的突袭建。壁延伸超过一个艰巨的6350公里(3946英里)，从东部渤海湾关山海，在中国和满洲里之间的界限，以罗布泊在新疆维吾尔族自治区东南部的部分。

The first major wall was built during the reign of the First Emperor, the main emperor of the short-lived Qin dynasty. This wall was not constructed as a single endeavor, but rather was created by the joining of several regional walls built by the Warring States. It was located much further north than the current Great Wall, and very little remains of it. A defensive wall on the northern border was built and maintained by several dynasties at different times in Chinese history. The Great Wall that can still be seen today was built during the Ming Dynasty, on a much larger scale and with longer lasting materials (solid stone used for the sides and the top of the Wall) than any wall that had been built before. The primary purpose of the wall was not to keep out people, who could scale the wall, but to insure that semi-nomadic people on the outside of the wall could not cross with their horses or return easily with stolen property.

第一主壁的第一个皇帝统治时期建造的，短命的秦朝的主要皇帝。这堵墙没有建造作为一个单一的努力，而是由几个区域的墙而建的战国加入了。这是位于更远的北部比目前的长城，很少遗骸它。在北部边境修建了防御城墙，在中国历史上不同时期几代保持。长城，今天依然可以看到建于明朝，一个更大的规模和较长的持久材料(固体石用于两侧和顶部的墙)比任何墙壁已建成之前。墙的主要目的是不让出来的人，谁能翻墙，但要保证在墙体的外侧半游牧民族，不能交叉的马匹或返回轻松赃物。