高一英语教学反思10篇【汇总20篇】

A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior middle school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

When I began my senior middle school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation.I could not get high marks and grammar was not right at all.Afraid of being lanughed at,I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class.When Miss Li found out my situation,she encouraged me and lent me a hand,which rapidly improved my English.With her help,I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.

p>Miss Li,like a shining star,shines in my path of success.

[高一学生英语作文：A Shining Star

There is a story that an old woman always feels unhappy, because when the sun comes out, she worries about her daughters business, because the girl sells umbrella. But when it rains, she stills feels unhappy for she worries about her another daugthers business. People tell her to change his point of view, when the it is fine, she can feel happy about her second daughters business and when it rains, she can be happy about her first daughters business. In that way, she will be a positive woman every day. We cant change the fact, but we can treat things in another way, so that we can be positive all the time.

究其原因，我结合自己的写作体会总结了三点。其一，对英语作文不熟悉，虽然篇幅要求不大，字数在150字左右，可还是难倒一大片。其二，对某一问题平时缺乏思考和总结，不能提出明确的看法和见解，缺乏层次感。其三，不熟悉英语语法和一些常见的单词，即使知道意思也无法清晰表达出真实意思。

为此，我结合本学期的第一篇作文，给学生做了详细讲解。写一篇作文需要四大步：First, consider it carefully. (第一，认真构思。)Next, draw up an outline.(第二，写出文章结构。)Then, write the composition.(第三，写出作文。)Finally, Check over the composition.(最后，检查文章。)四步骤中，难的是第二，第三步。现结合文章，具体谈一下怎么做。

题目是 Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown (李明家乡的变化)。文章Outline可以从一下几个方面来写：

A. Changes in living conditions.(生活条件的变化)

B. Changes in working tools. (劳动工具的变化)

C. Changes in education. (教育的变化)

Conclusion: Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming more and more better. (结论：多亏政府的努力，李明的家乡变得越来越好了。)

下面我把参考译文写出来，供大家参考。

Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown

Great changes have taken place in Li Ming’s Hometown in the past few years. In the past, people’s living conditions were poor. A big family was crowded in a low house. People usually planted crops with the help of farm animals. And the children studied in old schools. Since the reform and opening-up , his hometown has developed rapidly and people’s living

Conditions have improved a lot. Now, people live in tall bright buildings. They plant crops with the help of farm machines and the work in the fields has become much easier. What’s more, children now study in modern schools. Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.

郭智勇

This morning, I learn calligraphy. A go out find a grey outside a, like entering a without the four seasons, no color, only the yellow fog with the country. Walk on the road, I feel three meters outside cant see a person, like a blind. Choking air indistinctly has a foul smell, I think such a world, everything all have no vitality.

Remember the book about the fog is very beautiful, people compare it to a white gauze, illusory. People walk in the clouds like walked into the wonderland. But now, we call it the fog haze, whats happening to our environment? Who destroyed it?

This all of all, are we cause ourselves. Because of increasing car emissions a large amount of exhaust gas, the factory of drainage, casually forest are constantly, green space constantly decreases, and so on, make the environment has been destroyed, so just can have the haze weather it is today.

Haze weather this year has seen many times, long duration, wide range, damage degree, has greatly influenced peoples health and induce many diseases, such as heart disease, lung disease, bronchitis and so on. This kind of weather to us again and again the alarm strikes, environmental governance is urgently needed!

So we should advocate, take good care of the trees, planting trees, dont burning garbage, the discharge of pollutants. We have to scientific development, respect the nature, in harmony with nature. This is to protect the environment, and protect our living environment. Blue sky, green water, green space, fresh air, you can always around us!

今天早上，我学书法。一出门发现外面灰蒙蒙的一片，就像走进了一个没有四季，没有颜色，只有黄色的大雾陪伴的国度一样。走在马路上，我感觉三米之外都看不见人，就像双目失明一样。呛人的空气隐隐约约的有股臭味，我觉得这样的世界，万物都没有了生机。

记得书里描写的雾非常的美，人们把它比作白纱，虚无缥缈。人们走在云雾里如同走进了人间仙境。可是现在，我们却称之为雾霾，我们的环境到底怎么了?是谁破坏了它?

这一切的一切，都是我们人类自己造成的。因为汽车的增多排放大量的尾气，工厂随便的排污，森林不断地被采伐，绿地不断的减少，等等，使环境被破坏了，所以才会有了今天这样的雾霾天气。

今年的雾霾天气已经出现了多次，持续时间长，涉及范围广，危害程度重，极大地影响了人的健康，诱发了很多疾病，比如心脏病，肺病，气管炎等等。这种天气给我们一次次敲起了警钟，环境治理刻不容缓!

所以我们要提倡，爱护树木，种植树木，不要焚烧垃圾，随便排放污染物。我们必须要科学发展，尊重大自然，与大自然和谐相处。这样既保护了环境，又保护了我们的生存环境。蓝天、碧水、绿地、新鲜的空气，就能时时在我们身边!

this morning i got up early and went to the market to buy some vegetables instead my mother for the first time.

the market was very crowded and busy with nearly all kinds of goods on display. some sellers were shouting at the top of their voice to attract the attention of the people. housewives were picking out vegetables and bargaining with the sellers. a man was selling fresh fish, which were swimming in a big basin, and a lot of buyers crowded around it and chose what they wanted. one fruit seller, standing behind piles of fresh fruit, greeted me warmly, trying to persuade me to buy some. he felt a little disappointed when i shook my head.

It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother’s netpany. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother’s netpany. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the telephone.

While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.

Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and

checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as

worried.

Entering new school, I was curious about everything, new classrooms, new

teachers, new classmates etc. It would be a new start for each student. And what

I was worried about is that I had no friends here. I wondered if no liked to

play with me. Were the teachers strict with students?

I fell relaxed when the teacher asked me, What else could I help you,

freshman?". I found that the teachers were kind and polite, and the classmates

around me were friendly. While I was thinking about how to get on well with my

classmates, my desk mate showed me his favorite Ipad4s. He wanted to play with

me, but I didnt know how to play, so he taught me patiently, and we played

happily.

Worries have gone, and happiness is coming.

It is obvious to everybody that the only way to achieve ones goal is to work hard. Just as the old saying goes no mill, no meal. Have you ever seen a man who succeeds just by idling about? Of course, the answer is No. So we know if you want to gain something, you will have pains.

The farmers harvest by a year of arduous work; the scientists gain achievements by years of devoted researches; students get good marks by working hard; even the little ants have their food by working hard day and night. 1 know there are always some people who wait for the opportunities falling on them. They may attribute their failures to lack of good chances. Therefore, there are so many people gaining nothing at last. Clever men know that the more effort they make, the bigger chance they will have to be successful.

So, when others achieve their aspirations and you still gain nothing, dont complain about the unfair fate and dont give up, either. Remember: no pains, no gains.

The Great Wall of China is called the "Ten thousand Ii Great Wall" in Chinese. In fact, it s more than 6 000 kilometres long. It winds its way from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last it reaches the sea. It is one of the wonders of the world.

中国的长城被称为“一万号长城”在中国。事实上，这是超过6的000公里长的。它自西向东蜿蜒，穿过沙漠，越过高山，穿过峡谷，最后到达海洋。它是世界上的奇迹之一。

The Great Wall has a history of over twenty centuries. The first part of it was built during the Spring and Autumn Period. During the Warring States Period, more walls were put up to defend the borders of the different kingdoms. It was during the Qin Dynasty that the kingdom of Qin united the dif ferent parts into one empire. To keep the enemy out of his empire, Emperor Qin Shi Huang had all the walls joined up. Thus, the Great Wall came into being.

长城已有二十多年的历史。它的第一部分是建立在春秋时期。战国时期，提出保卫不同王国的边界被更多的墙。这是秦王朝的秦统一为一个帝国的不同部分中的王国。为了不让敌人进入自己的帝国，秦始皇把所有的城墙连接起来。因此，长城就形成了。

The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. Along the wall are watchtowers, where soldiers used to keep watch. Fires were lit on the the towers as a warning when the enemy came.

长城是足够宽，顶部五匹马或十个人并排而行。沿城墙有了望塔，过去常有士兵驻守。大火照亮在塔上作为一个警告当敌人来了。

It was very difficult to build such a wall in the ancient days without any modern machines. All the work was done by hand. Thousands of men died and were buried under the wall they built. The Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth, but of the flesh and blood of millions of men.

它是建立在这样一个壁无任何现代机器很难。所有工作都是用手完成。成千上万的人死了，被埋在自己修建的城墙下面。长城不仅是用石头和土，但对几百万人的血和肉。

Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese but to people from all over the world. Many of them have come to know the famous Chinese saying: "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."

今天，长城已成为地方利益不仅对中国而且对来自全世界各地的人。许多人都已知道这句中国名言：“不到长城非好汉。”

Oct,1 of every year is our National Day.Today is Oct 1st,2012 and is also our National Day.It is a important festival in china.The Fve-- Star Flag is flying high in the sky of the Tiananmen Square. And we can have a eight-- days holiday.During the holiday,people can go to some places for visiting.We get together with our familes ,and we can relax at home .We are vey happy! I hope everyone will spend a happy holiday.

第一次七年级英语月考试卷充分体现了新课改的精神，切实有效地考察了所学知识内容。下面对试卷试题进行具体分析：

一、试卷题型情况

1、注重对基础知识、基本技能的考察，题型新颖、覆盖面大，涉及到了所学的全部内容，促进学生有效学习。

2、注重从实际中选取素材，考察了学生的分析和处理问题能力。

3、试卷对学生探究能力是一个重点考察，增强了学生的探究分析能力。

二、试卷结构分析

试卷充分体现了新课标课改精神，注重了对学生基础知识和综合能力的考察，因此对学生的细心程度要求很高。

1、听力部分：试题难度不大，因此学生在该部分的得分率较高，但是学生的两极分化严重，高分很高，甚至满分，而低分则太低。

2、完形填空和阅读理解：难度适中，但是得分率一般，主要原因是学生理解文章不透彻，阅读能力差造成的。

3、词语运用：此题是各大题中得分最低的一个题，主要原因是学生对词的用法掌握不好，一些固定词组记不清。

4、书面表达：该题对于学生来说是比较容易的一题，它是对学生整体知识的一个考察，但两极分化最为严重。

三、学生分析

存在问题：

1、优等生对基础知识掌握较好，但是还有一部分学生对语言的运用能力较差，对比较碎的知识点没有能够很好地掌握。

2、中等生的基础知识掌握不够牢固，并且做题比较粗心。

四、具体改进措施

1、钻研新教材，夯实英语基础。练习中很多学生“一看就会，一做就错”，这种现象比较普遍，失误原因是对于常见用语掌握的熟练程度还不够。其根本原因就在于基础不牢，只有扎扎实实从基础做起，才能最终达到“一看就会，一做就对”。

2、加强英语课外阅读。英语知识的获得与能力的提高是在不断的听、说、读、写的训练过程中逐步形成的，而教材和课堂所能提供的训练还是比较有限的，因此，要加强理解语篇的能力训练，增强英语语感。

3、规范训练，改进学习方法。要善于分析学生，找出学生的薄弱环节，合理安排好教材知识梳理、专项训练和应试技巧指导。

在今后的教学中应注意开阔学生视野，多渠道、大容量地给学生提供具有时代感的英语信息，加强语言运用能力的培养，少讲解，多给学生实际运用语言的机会，在用中学英语。

Spring Festival is coming,I am very happy.On this winter holiday,I went to

visit my grandparents with my parents. My grandmother is very zeal.Our dinner is

very delicious.After the dinner,the people gave me money in red envelopes.I am

very happy in this family with my grandparents.

Sometimes,we go to climb the mountains.The mountain is very high.Look!There

is a clean river near the mountain.And there are some beautiful flowers,grass

and big trees.Some trees are orange trees,the others are banana trees.Oh,I am

very tired but interesting.

I am very happy on this holiday because I like Spring Festival very

much.What about you?

People always attach great importance on the soul, as the saying that beautiful soul overweighs everything, so in the movie, the everlasting theme is that an ugly girl wins the true love at last. Recently, a hot topic of discussing whether the girls’ outlook is important, the fact is that people reach their agreement that outlook really matters, if a person looks terrible, no one will like to make friends with him, let alone to know about him. In my opinion, beautiful soul is of great importance, but if people don’t make themselves look comfortable outside, no one wants to know his inside. We need to clear ourselves, it doesn’t mean we must make up, we should make ourselves look comfortable and confident, we should dress the tidy clothes and make our hair in order. People say outlook is not important, but it doesn’t mean we give up our outlook and let it look terrible.

人们总是赋予心灵很大的重要性，正如有句话说美丽的心灵胜过一切，因此在电影里，永恒的主题是一位长相难看的女孩最终赢得真爱。最近，关于讨论女孩的外表是否重要成为了热门话题，事实上，人们一致认为外表很重要，如果一个人看起来很糟糕，没有人会喜欢和他交朋友，更不用说去了解他。在我看来，美丽的心灵很重要，但是如果人们没有让自己的外表看起来舒服，没有人会想要了解他的内心。我们需要让自己看起来干净，这不意味着我们必须要化妆，我们应该让自己看起来舒服和自信，应该穿着整齐，发型不乱。人们说外表不重要，但是不意味着我们放弃外表，让自己看起来糟糕。

Dear Sarah,

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday

part next Thursday evening. That is owing to the fact that my younger brother

suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there

immediately and take care of him. As told by the doctor in charge, it will take

around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.

I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and

would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends. I

have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my

best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them

at the party.

Cordially,

Li Ming

One sunny afternoon, when I was merrily riding home, I heard "Help! Help!".

一个晴朗的午后，当我开心地骑车回家时，我听到（有人喊）“救命！救命！”。

I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. The boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home.

我（赶紧）骑到河边，发现一个大约5岁的男孩在河里挣扎。我（马上）跳进水里，游向男孩，并把他拖到岸边。男孩说他（刚刚）是在河边试着抓鱼，（后来），一不小心就掉进水里了。我要到了他家地址，并送他回家。

"Thank you very much!" The boys parents said, when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.

一当我要离开他们家的时候，那个男孩的父母说：“非常谢谢你！”尽管在那个下午，我回家晚了，但我还是很开心的。

It is known to all that Guangxi province is famous for its various culture,

because there are many minorities. Recent years, the local government carry out

a policy of taking a break on March 3rd, which makes it the special day for

Guangxi Province. People can enjoy some shows which are full of local features,

such as singing local songs, having dragon-lion dance and so on. This policy not

only lets people take relax from routine work, but also makes people remember

their culture. I am part of the local people and I am so proud of the variety.

The different culture makes our country full of charm.

Topic one：Environment Protection(环境保护)

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, a great number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

Forest Pretention保护森林

Our country has a large area of forest. However, not until recently did the government begin to realize the importance of protecting the forest. As we may know from various sources, the government recently adopted a policy called "restore the farmland to the forest"(退耕还林).This has brought much hope to the forest of our country as well as the sustainable development of our country.

Pollution: a Social Problem

When we read newspapers, we often come across the word pollution. This word was not familiar to the people some decades ago. But now, it is a serious threat to usbecause. it means the poisoning of the air, seas, rivers and lands, which would do harm to our health.

There are many factories that bring pollution to us. We can not have fresh air in the morning. This is mainly because of the poisonous smoke coming from factories, especially chemical ones. In rivers, seas and oceans, there are industrial wastes. Some factories just throw their wastes into seas or let them flow into rivers. When people drink the water from such rivers, they get poisoned. Besides, there is rubbish from ships and when sometimes an accident occurs in an ocean, oil flows out from tankers.

On land, the accumulation of rubbish in the streets may dirty the city and ruin our health. This is mainly due to the improper disposal of rubbish by people.

If we do mot fight against pollution, surely one day all of us will be killed. Some people like to put the blame on the industrial revolutions. On the contrary, the pollution problem will be solved only with the help of modem science and technology.

历经“千辛万苦”，终于批阅完了读后感，有点吐血的感觉。 写作前几周就布置学生要多读几本好书，作文写了，我伤心了。全班的作文放到一起，能称得上是“读后感”的，不足10篇，10篇里头也就5篇上下，还算有质量。剩下的，都算不得读后感。归纳一下问题有这几种：第一种，是无感而做。这是主要问题。很多学生的读后感，其实没有感想，只是因为老师布置了作文，不得不写上一篇。至于感想，这个真没有!也就是把书里头的内容概括一下，然后无病呻吟，空谈感受，喊几句口号。第二种，没有感想。第一情况下，学生还知道要加点“感想”。这种的，就是重复书本内容，甚至于把《序》里的话摘录编纂一番，字数勉强够了，就成了。第三种情况，就是莫名其妙了，书本的内容和自己的议论互不相关，也不知道放在一起做什么。好像也是为了填我给的作文框架而硬凑到一起的。

不得不说，这是一次失败的习作。相比较而言，学生写的一篇电影观后感就相当成功了。那是学生利用周末的时间，看了一部关于候鸟迁徙的纪录片。我没去看，但猜得出来并不是故事性很强的。可是不少学生的习作充满了感情，他们同情鸟儿的悲惨遭遇，为鸟儿的小小胜利欢呼，大家不约而同地呼吁：要保护鸟类，爱护地球。

这样的习作是令我震惊的。它说明，学生并不是写不了读后感，而是我的引导出问题了。带着学生去看电影的班主任老师跟我说，电影过老师跟学生进行了互动，帮助学生深入地理解了影片的意义。这样看来，学生的读后感写不好，主要责任在我。

反思一下，原因可能就是：缺乏对书本的阅读引导。到目前为止，我并没有以任何一本书为例，带领学生有目的的阅读。我只是“散养式”让学生自己随意看，看完了就写“感想”。因为思想方面、情感方面都没有给予适当的提点。学生是真的没有感受。作文时，硬要学生写“感想”，他们只能干巴巴凑些句子给我。所以，我想，我应该重新尝试一下让学生再写一篇读后感。

《学会生存》是六年级的一次口语交际课，教材安排这次话题的目的是引导学生学会生存，学会自我保护的本领，培养学生用列举实例表达自己的观点。

上完后，第一感觉就是没能更好地调动起孩子们情感，积极发言的孩子不多，并且重点没有突出。尽管我多次用鼓励性的话激励学生参与到其中去，但是学生对这种口语交际课的应对还是不能轻松的应对。我就仔细分析了学生现存的原因有三：

1、对学生已有的知识水平和情感估计不足，在布置前置性作业的时候，教师忽略了学生现有的知识水平，以至于孩子们在谈论后交流时涉及的面就太窄，思路不够广。设计如下：a、你遇到、听到、或从电视、报纸等媒体上了解到的有关自我保护的事情。b、读综合学习中《智慧之花》想到的。c、从电视上看到或者听到的别人是如何进行自我保护的。d、我们可能遇到哪些危险或灾难？应该如何应对？学生课下都做好了充足的准备，查阅了大量的资料。我要求学生分成小组的形式来讨论，结果有些学生不喜欢参与到其中去，或许是孩子们过于紧张，导致个别的学生不敢发言了。学会生存，是一个内容很广的话题，包括的范围很大，学生可以从生活方面入手，可是孩子却仅仅限于走丢，迷路，溺水，地震、火灾、遇见歹徒等等，学生的思路没有更深层次的。

2、教师的语言过于单一，没有什么特色，鼓励和评价的时候忽略了学生的想法。其中有个学那个在讲述自己在迷路的时候，如何解决问题的，教师没有及时评价，而是一句话带过。

3、对教材的把握还不够深入，过于注重教材，而忽略了教材的工具性，忽视了语文学科的工具性和人文性。

4、总结时，设计了一个环节：通过今天这节课的学习，你懂得了什么？自我感觉跟前面的有点重复。

5、前面布置的作业改为：对于“学会生存”这个话题，你想说什么？相信孩子们会给我更多意想不到的精彩？

对于这节课我也有满意的地方可以从以下三个方面来说：

1、积极的参与到学生中，对学生的发言及时作出评价。

2、落实了本堂课的教学目标，让学生知道一人在家遇到事情，运用自己所学的知识去应对，不如说煤气泄漏，骗子等等。

3、把课堂还给了学生，让学生能够大胆质疑，对学生的某个话题全班进行讨论，让学生爱上口语交际，努力培养学生的应变能力。

一、教学环节的设置

我把整个教学过程分为几个部分：1、谈话导入。通过和学生的谈话，让学生找出自己与别人不同的地方，从而告诉学生这些不同的地方都是每个人的特点。抓住特点就能介绍清楚自己，从而引出课题。2、仔细观察，说不同。为了引起学生兴趣，我们有意选择对比较大的两名学生，让学生通过观察来找出他们的不同。3、小组交流，向别人介绍自己。通过这一环节，让学生做到有目的的说，能说会说，为下一步写作垫底。4、完成习作，同桌交流互查。在有了前几个环节的基础上，让学生动笔写作，并相互检查交流。

二、教学中反映出的问题

虽然自己经过准备，并且做了大量的铺垫，但是在实际教学中学生掌握的情况却并不理想。主要存在以下问题：

1、学生的概念模糊不清。在教学中涉及到“个性”、“性格”、“外貌”等抽象的词语。由于我们并没有做详细的讲解和比较，许多学生理解模糊。没有弄清楚含义，从而导致了学生到后来不知道该怎么写。

2、教学设计环节混乱。在教学一开始，我们就将“特点”这个抽象化的概念抛给学生，学生在没有深入理解的基础上，一知半解，使得后来我在后期虽然做了大量的讲解，但学生还是没有明白。

3、沒有考虑到学生的需要。本来对学生来说，介绍自己是一件十分容易的事情，但是我们在教学中给学生设置了较高难度的要求，使学生产生畏难情绪。部分学生无法理解就无法专心倾听，这也是导致课堂中学生注意力分散的重要原因。

4、习作的发散点过多。在教学中，我们给学生归纳出人的特点后，让学生选择，但是因为发散点太多，加上学生对一些概念并不理解，所以写出来的作文不尽人意。

三、对解决措施的思考

三年级学生虽然经历了低年级写话阶段的训练，但作为作文教学的整体思路来看，它则是刚刚起步。因此，教者必须站在整个语文教学的高底，根据小学三年级学生的认知能力，加强作文教学的研究，做到精心设计，有针对性的指导。结合自己这节课和长期的习作教学，我对自己习作教学中要采用的一些措施进行了一定的反思。

1、创设良好的习作氛围，激发学生的写作兴趣。

（1）丰富写作素材，克服学生的畏惧心理，让学生“有东西可写”是克服畏惧的关键。

学生不愿意写作的主要原因就是自己没有东西可写。要丰富学生的写作素材，教师要当好“生活导师”把学生引入丰富多彩的社会生活中，并且指导学生以自己的眼光去观察社会，以自己的情趣去理解分析社会，发展认识和思维能力。平时让学生写观察、记录、小日记、小报告，社会调查等都是较有效的方法。

（2）了解学生的需要，变“苦”为“乐”，克服学生的厌倦心理。

需要是一种内在的动机，学生的需要得到满足，才能够积极参与到习作练习中来。同时，作文教学要想取得高成效，就要努力激发学生的写作动力，提高写作的兴趣。教师建立和谐的师生关系，热爱每一个学生，特别是要关爱学生，教师要把差生当“朋友”，了解他们在写作中的困难，并给以具体指导，热情鼓励，学生有所进步，教师就要给予表扬肯定，帮助学生总结成绩，克服失望心理，树立写作信心。这样，学生的写作兴趣，就会逐渐培养起来。

2、教学过程中突出重点，不能面面俱到。

学生开始作文时，往往觉得不知从哪里写好，写些什么好。首行，我们应该根据教材的安排，认真分析每次习作的要求和要达到的主要目标。自己心里首先要做到心里有数，明确自己本次习作的目的，然后根据目的设置教学重难点，一定要突出每次习作的重点，和学生应该明确的重点。如果在本次习作课上，我只抓住外貌和爱好，这两个特点让学生来写，学生肯定会觉得简单而且和自己生活贴近，写起来也会更容易些。

3、注重二次备课意识的培养

二次备课时教师针对课堂中临时出现的一些问题，结合学生的实际情况，对教学设计的临时修改和调整。这就要求教师在教学过程中随时要关注学生的掌握情况和学习效果，能对学生的需要志上做出反应。在本次习作教学中，如果我们能及时调整教学设计，对学生掌握不清的几个抽象的概念及时让学生进行理解，那么就不会出现学生不知该怎么下笔的情况了。

4、平时要注重对学生习意识的培养。

我们教学生写作的目的就是要让他们把所见所闻，以及自己的丰富感情表达出来，展示给读者。也就是说，凡是能用语言表述的地方，都可以成为学生写作的内容。我们在指导学生写美学事的同时，还应该有的放矢的帮助他们抓住发生在身边的新鲜的事、奇怪的事、有趣的事。

July 6 20**

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

这是第一天，我们的暑假。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么?因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事。我们很空闲.虽然我们有一些功课。但是，我们可以完成他们的若干天。其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们已经很疲惫后很难学习。在冬季假期，我希望能有充分的很好吃的食物，以补充自己。最后但并非最不重要，我会好好休息。

July 9 20**

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常渴望。

July 10 20**

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

我计划花费我暑假体育今年。打篮球是我最喜欢的，所以我的一些同学和我将组建一个小团队，一起打篮球。有时，我们可能有一些其他的比赛队伍和我喜欢的感觉，当我们赢了这场比赛。

July 14 20**

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enoughh time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.

今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的事情。无论男人，总是对的时间。它不会留下来等待某人。您不能使用任何交流时间。时间也是一个公平的事情。虽然你有很多钱，或者您享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我已经超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我必须完成的功课只要我有时间。

July 16 20**

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我生病是因为炎热的天气。我累了，困，也没有力量。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在房间空调打开了它在低温。因此，当我走了出去，高温不给我.在最后，我被虐待。

July 16 20**

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我的任命，以满足九点钟。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开，我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接，我们去打球荔湾体育馆。这场比赛最后的拖车小时.Oh ，我非常高兴今天填补!

July 19 20**

Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare the new term’s new subject.I know, it is the most important for us now.

昨天，我们高兴地发挥，但只有10人。我记得去年有22人在所有。我听到一些我的朋友已经出国。他们去国外学习。也许我没有看到他们的未来。我想明年我们将不作党。明年是一个非常重要的一年。我们都将编制新的任期的新课程.我知道，这是最重要的是，我们现在。

July 18 20**

It is very hot and wet today and is called sauna weather.

During my mom did the cooking in the kitchen, I saw her head was sweaty.I told her I could help her and she accepted.

After cooking,we were all sweaty .However, mum and I all felt happy. She said I was growing up and became her good assistant.

这是非常炎热和潮湿的今天，被称为桑拿天气。

在我妈妈没有做饭的厨房，我看到她的头部很漂亮.我告诉她，我可以帮助她，她接受。

经过烹饪，我们都汗流浃背。然而，妈妈和我都感到高兴。她说，我的成长过程，并成为她的好助手。

July 19 20**

I think my teacher got out of bedon the wtong side this afternoon as she hasn’t cries.i went to office saw the boys unhappy.Because the students got their teacher’s goat became they didn’t do their homework..I think this is my teacher unhappy’s cause. Today, I saw a boy ,he played the handset.But didn’t saw the walls so he Rnocked we laugh up our sleeve at he knocked ,but he hurt his norse in the accident, and he was laying it on thick about how painful it was .

It’s also a happy day, isn’t it ?

我想我的老师走出bedon的错误方向今天下午，她就一直没有哭.我到办公室看到男孩不高兴.因为学生得到老师的山羊成为他们没有做功课..我认为这是我的老师不愉快的事业。今天，我看到了一个男孩，他发挥了handset.但是没有看到这样的墙壁，他使我们笑了我们套在他撞倒，但他伤了挪威在这起事故，他就铺设厚如何痛苦这是。

这也是一个快乐的日子，是不是?

20**, July 20

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave(离开) the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们有很大的乐趣。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个伟大的党。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开(离开)的朋友和老师。我希望我可以去夏令营明年再次。

20**,July 21

I had a good time last weekend. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. The homework wasn’t difficult. After that, I played volleyball with my friends. It was tired, but very exciting. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner for my parents. It was a little difficult, I think. After dinner, I went to swim in the river. I can swim very well. I had a relaxing weekend.

我有一个很好的时间上周末。星期天早上，我留在家里和我的家庭作业。作业并不困难。在此之后，我打排球我的朋友。这是很累，但非常兴奋。下午，我煮晚餐我的父母。这是一个什么困难，我想。晚餐后，我去游泳，在河里。我可以游得很好。我有一个轻松的周末。