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390初一英语月考反思
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+ 加入清单本次月考试卷只有笔试部分共十个题型包括单项选择,补全单词连词成句,阅读理解,口语运用,句型转换,书面表达等。既考查了学生的基础知识和基本技能,又考查了学生的交际运用能力,但从学生成绩来看并不能达到大部分学生成绩优秀,结合学生的实际情况,反思自己的教学行为,我想应该从以下几个方面努力:
1.针对单选题及句型转换题中出现的错误,我感觉自己对学生的英语基础知识把关不够严。在以后教学中要狠抓基础知识,多提问多听写,充分利用早读让学生在有限的早读时间内掌握所学知识。
2.阅读理解是学生英语综合能力的一种体现,是学生的弱项。加强英语阅读方法的指导以及阅读训练尤其提倡学生进行课外阅读让英语阅读成为一种习惯对学生的英语阅读能力的提高将会有很大的帮助。
3.英语是一门语言,语言是用来交流的工具,因此英语的交际性显得很重要,在以后的教学中可以进行课前五分钟自由对话,在运用任务型教学法,游戏教学法等多提供给学生一些交际英语的机会。
4.这次英语考试成绩基本可以,但有两极分化的趋向,在英语教学中面对全体学生关注每一个学生的成长尤其是后进生是预防两极分化的重要途径,还可以成立“一帮一”小组帮助后进生在尽可能短的时间内提高英语成绩。
总之,每次考试都是对自己教学工作阶段性的“评价”。要及时通过考试反思自己的教学中存在的问题,在总结与反思中不断进步,不断成长这样才能在三尺讲台上表现的更精彩些!
反思二:初一英语月考反思
第一次七年级英语月考试卷充分体现了新课改的精神,切实有效地考察了所学知识内容。下面对试卷试题进行具体分析:
一、试卷题型情况
1、注重对基础知识、基本技能的考察,题型新颖、覆盖面大,涉及到了所学的全部内容,促进学生有效学习。
2、注重从实际中选取素材,考察了学生的分析和处理问题能力。
3、试卷对学生探究能力是一个重点考察,增强了学生的探究分析能力。
二、试卷结构分析
试卷充分体现了新课标课改精神,注重了对学生基础知识和综合能力的考察,因此对学生的细心程度要求很高。
1、听力部分:试题难度不大,因此学生在该部分的得分率较高,但是学生的两极分化严重,高分很高,甚至满分,而低分则太低。
2、完形填空和阅读理解:难度适中,但是得分率一般,主要原因是学生理解文章不透彻,阅读能力差造成的。
3、词语运用:此题是各大题中得分最低的一个题,主要原因是学生对词的用法掌握不好,一些固定词组记不清。
4、书面表达:该题对于学生来说是比较容易的一题,它是对学生整体知识的一个考察,但两极分化最为严重。
三、学生分析
存在问题:
1、优等生对基础知识掌握较好,但是还有一部分学生对语言的运用能力较差,对比较碎的知识点没有能够很好地掌握。
2、中等生的基础知识掌握不够牢固,并且做题比较粗心。
四、具体改进措施
1、钻研新教材,夯实英语基础。练习中很多学生“一看就会,一做就错”,这种现象比较普遍,失误原因是对于常见用语掌握的熟练程度还不够。其根本原因就在于基础不牢,只有扎扎实实从基础做起,才能最终达到“一看就会,一做就对”。
2、加强英语课外阅读。英语知识的获得与能力的提高是在不断的听、说、读、写的训练过程中逐步形成的,而教材和课堂所能提供的训练还是比较有限的,因此,要加强理解语篇的能力训练,增强英语语感。
3、规范训练,改进学习方法。要善于分析学生,找出学生的薄弱环节,合理安排好教材知识梳理、专项训练和应试技巧指导。
在今后的教学中应注意开阔学生视野,多渠道、大容量地给学生提供具有时代感的英语信息,加强语言运用能力的培养,少讲解,多给学生实际运用语言的机会,在用中学英语。
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篇5:初一关于诚信的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Teachers Day
September 10 is our Teachers’ Day. In the afternoon, Zhonghua school held a celebration meeting, at which more than twenty old teachers each were praised with a medal for their over thirty years of teaching. Our principal made an enthusiastic speech at the meeting, and then the representative of the teachers and students gave a talk to us. After the meeting, we started performances played by some teachers and students, which were very interesting and instructive. We all had a wonderful time. I think we all should respect the teachers, engineers of human soul.
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Of course they are very friendly to everyone. They always get on very well with their students. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. They love us very much and we love them,too.
译文:每年的9月10日是教师的节日。在这一天,我们通常会给老师卡片以示感谢。我感谢他们在我遇到困难的时候帮助我,感谢他们教会我如何成为一个真正的人。
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【翻译】昨晚,我吃了很多事物,比如肯德基和冰淇淋,在睡觉前,我吃了一些在冰箱里面的冷食物。半夜里,我觉得胃疼得厉害,我的家人被吵醒了,他们把我送到了医院。看过了医生以后,医生告诉我吃了太多的东西,而且,吃的都是不健康的食物,因此我的胃才会那么疼。打从那时起,我意识到自己不能经常吃垃圾食品,我应该保持健康的饮食。现在我的饮食很健康,我不会在睡觉前吃很多东西,我的身体变得健康。早上,我吃了一个鸡蛋,确保我吸收足够的营养。即使当我看到很诱惑的垃圾食品时,我也毫不犹豫地说不。我为自己感到自豪。
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Hi! I am a girl. I’m fourteen years old. I come from a small village of Guangxi. I am a student of Class 1, Grade 2. My School life is very interesting. Class begins at 7:45a.m. I have five classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I often have two or three classes. We learn Chinese, English, math, history, biology, geography, politics, physics and so on. I learn them with great interest. I like P.E. best. Because having sports is good for us and build us up. And we’ll have a sport meet this term, I want to take part in the long jump.
I have lunch at school at about a quarter to twelve, because my home is a little far from the school. After school, I often play basketball with my classmates on the playground. Sometimes, I go to the school library. In my spare time, I often practice speaking English with my good friends on the lawn. Because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic, English is very important. Speaking English will help me to make more foreign friends.
My teachers and classmates are very friendly to me. I like my school life very much. What about your school life? Can you tell me?
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嗨!我是姑娘我十四岁。我来自广西的一个小村庄。我是一名1年级2班的学生。我的学校生活很有趣。在7:45a开始上课。我上午有五节课。在下午,我经常有2个或三个班。我们学语文、英语、数学、历史、生物学、地理、政治、物理等。我很感兴趣。我最喜欢体育运动。因为有运动对我们有好处,把我们建立起来。这学期我们将有一个运动会,我想参加跳远比赛。
我在学校吃午饭大约四分之一到十二,因为我的家离学校有一点远。放学后,我经常和我的同学们在操场上打篮球。有时,我去学校图书馆。在我的业余时间,我经常练习说英语和我的好朋友在草坪上。因为北京将举办2008届奥运会,英语是非常重要的。说英语将帮助我结交更多的外国朋友。
我的老师和同学对我很友好。我非常喜欢我的学校生活。你的学校生活怎么样?你能告诉我吗?
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明天是春节,我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除.然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里,妈妈则在烧好吃的东西.晚饭以后,我们一起看电视节目,我们多高兴呀!
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写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:
(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。
(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。
(4)书写规范、准确。
(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:
(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;
(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。
(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;
(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;
(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:
1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。
篇13:有关坚持英语初一
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+ 加入清单Last night, I watched a tennis game, it was the US open, because there was
a Chinese female player came to the semi-final, so I stayed up to watched the
game. Unluckily, she was injured twice, though she still wanted to finish the
game, her body situation did not allow her to do so. Her insistence moved so
many audience, they gave her the biggest applause.
The power of insistence is great, it will help you set free your potential
and keep move on. Just for the players, they will face all kinds of incidences
now and then, but the will to insist will make them finish the game. Sometimes,
people win the game not because of their excellent skills, but their strong
will. Those who can stick on to the final line will win people’s applause.
What’s more, when people insist to finish the game, it is the respect that
they show to their opponents. Their spirit deserves people’s applause.
Insistence is a merit, we should keep it, no matter what we do, we must remember
to insist.
篇14:初一寒假英语周记
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+ 加入清单Mostly, I went to school to have lessons this week. It was hard but we must experience, wasn’t it? But on Saturday I finished my first learning. And the second learning will begin on Aug 1st. I can have a break and do what I want to do. On Saturday I went shopping. Indeed I didn’t buy many things. I just wanted to relax. And then I played on the computer, sang , watched TV, etc. I just wanted to amuse myself. I went to swim on Sunday, although I didn’t swim very well. I felt cool during this hot time. I also played with my mother. She couldn’t swim so I taught her. I sometimes played a trick on her. I had a good time there.
篇15:如何用英语表达天气
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+ 加入清单导语:我们写作文的时候也会对天气进行描写,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
1. The warm sunny weather always give me a sense of well-being.
温暖阳光的天气一直都给我幸福安宁的感觉。
2. We didnt have the picnic because the weather was unsettled.
我们没有出去野餐,因为天气变幻莫测。
3. The spell of rainy weather has broken.
持续的雨天突然放晴了。
4. The weather was lazy.
这天气使人无精打采。
5. Severe weather immobilized the rescue team.
恶劣的天气给救援队的工作增加了难度。
6. As often as not the buses are late on foggy day.
每逢多雾天气,公车往往误点。
7. We had glorious weather for our cruise, sunshine all day and every day.
我们这次巡航天气实在太好了,一连几天阳光普照。
8. The cold weather froze the lake .
寒冷的天气使湖水结冰了。
9. The air was frosty.
空气凛冽。
10. You need cool, moist weather for these plants to germinate.
这些植物在清凉潮湿的天气中才能发芽。
11. Rainy weather always depresses me.
雨天总会使我心情抑郁。
12. The wet weather extended into September.
潮湿阴雨的天气一直延续到了九月份
篇16:初一英语作文带翻译myhobby
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+ 加入清单My hobby is very broad. What to read, listen to music, I like it. But my favorite, favorite, that is - look at a map.
I love to see the map, it seems to have become a part of my life. Hanging on the wall of my house, and a map of China and a map of the world. Every day I looking at that is made up of dots, lines, symbols of the world, drunk I do not know return often, it is ecstasy than reading a book. Because I love to see the map, so I know many geographical knowledge, such as what is the biggest desert in the world, where is the capital city of Canada...... Even read the cousin of sun yat-sen university also kua I understand more!
I love the map simply love to mad. At ordinary times, I always keen to find a map to see. Some is a pile of waste paper to others, I always go up and see if it is a map. Even I also regularly to see when cleaning, result the classmates all day with strange eyes looked at me, I very bitter. But because of my efforts, my home there are now several zhang from real estate newspaper clippings on the map. On one occasion, I saw a piece of paper in the class, there is a map on it. A map! I was excited and cried. The students looked at me with strange eyes again: in order to map, even the life all dont you? Perhaps really well. I want to.
Map has brought us benefits, also brought me trouble. But anyway, maps, I love you graffiti.
我的爱好很广泛。什么看书啦,听音乐啦,我都喜欢。可是我最喜欢的,也就是最喜欢的,那就是-看地图。
我爱看地图,它似乎已成了我生命的一部分。在我家的墙上,挂着一幅中国地图和一幅世界地图。每天我都看着那由点、线、符号组成的世界,经常‘‘沉醉不知归路’’,简直比看书还入迷。正因为我爱看地图,所以我懂得许多地理知识,比如世界上最大的沙漠是什么啦,加拿大的首都在哪里啦……连读中山大学的表哥也夸我懂的多呢!
我爱地图简直爱到了发狂的程度。平时,我总是乐此不疲地寻找地图来看。一些在别人看来是一堆垃圾的废纸,我总是凑上去看看是不是地图。就连打扫卫生时我也习惯性地去看,结果同学们一整天都用怪怪的目光看着我,害得我好苦。不过正因为我的努力,我家现在已经有好几张从《房地产报》上剪下来的地图了。有一次,我在班里看到了一张报纸,上面有一幅地图。地图!当时我就激动得大叫起来。同学们又用怪怪的目光看着我:为了地图,你连命都不要了?或许真的这样吧。我想。
地图给我带来了好处,也给我带来了麻烦。但不管怎样说,地图,我爱你没商量。
篇17:2024关于天气的英语谚语
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+ 加入清单"草上露珠闪,告别下雨天when dew is on the grass,rain will never come to pass.
大鱼吃小鱼,天空要下鱼fish bite best before a rain.
蚂蚁搬家,天将雨——when ladybugs swarm,expect a day that’s warm.
蜜蜂迟归,雨来风吹——if bees stay at home,rain will soon come.if they fiy away ,fine will be the day
飘飘然如上九重天on cloud nine
日晕三更雨,月晕午时风——halo around the sun or moon ,rain or snowsoon. "
太阳月亮镶银边,老天马上要下雨when a halo rings around the moon or sun, rain is approaching on the run.
"晚上天色红,水手乐呵呵;早晨天色红,水手急煞煞。red sky at night, sailor’s delight.red sky in the morning, sailor’s warning.
未雨绸缪save for a rainy day
月明星稀——when the stars begin to huddle ,the earth will soon become a puddle.
"早晨天上积雨云, 晚上地下降暴雨mountains in the morning. fountains in the evening.
早霞不出门,晚霞行千里——red sky at night,sailor’sdelight.red sky in the morning,sailor take waring.
不要因为早晨下了一场雨就不去旅行。 for a morning rain leave not your trip.
篇18:我喜欢狗初一英语作文
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+ 加入清单狗是人类的好朋友,你喜欢狗吗?下面小编为你整理的我喜欢狗初一英语作文,希望对你有帮助! 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇1
I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.
我喜欢狗,因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情,如,保护房子,问候客人,帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇2
Dog is my favorite animal. The reason why I like it most is because it’s very competent. Dog is the best friend for mankind. It is also the best companion for the old people. The dog can feel the human nature. So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them. The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warmly. I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous. They are special dogs. Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way. See, I say dogs are very competent.
我最喜欢的动物是狗。我最喜欢它的原因是因为它很能干。狗是人类最好的朋友。它也是老人们最好的伴侣。狗是通人性的。如果他们的孩子不在他们身边,很多老年人会养狗。老年人可以把对他们孩子的爱放到狗狗的身上,这也能温暖他们的心。导盲犬是非常有名的。他们是特殊的狗。这些狗会引导眼睛看不见的主人找到正确的路。看,我就说狗狗是非常能干的。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇3
I like dog.
Dogs are friends of human beings.And it is known to us that dogs are very honest.They can help people do many things when people are out of home .For example ,dogs can take a good care of babies when people go to work.They also can watch the house to make sure that it is safe for his master.Dogs are friendly to people.
In a word, i love dogs better than cats.I prefer dogs because they are loyal to human,besides they are the best friend of humanity.these days ,dogs have become pets of us. they are not in the wild any more.they get put clothes on and wear bowknot.they have fogotten how to prey.as a human, I love dog as a pet but I feel much pity that dogs have lost so much of their instinct.
I like dogs,because they are so clever、beautiful and cute.I can play with them,they are our good friends, and that is why I like him a lot.i regard dogs as better pets .first ,they are faithful to hosts.we have heard lots of stories about dogs faithfulness.second,they are lovely . there are many cute pictures of dogs on internet.besides,they are brave . when hosts are in danger , dogs often try to rescue their hosts.
篇19:初一英语作文
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+ 加入清单Inow living in a small house with my parents. Life for us is hard but
happy. I must study hard so that I can buy a big new house some day. I call it a
dream house.
It has three floors with five bedrooms, three bathrooms, two big dining
rooms and two living rooms. When my friends come to visit me, I will have enough
bedrooms for them. Well have a good time. Besides that, we will have a swimming
pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house. In the morning, my
parents can do some exercise in the garden. The air must be very fresh. When we
feel tired, we can have a swim in the swimming pool. Life will be easy for
us.
Ill study harder than before so that the dream can come true.
篇20:初一作文:我和外公学英语
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+ 加入清单在我们班,同学们都叫我“小翻译”。其实,我以前的英语成绩是一塌糊涂。
记得那一次,我的英语测试只考了58分。卷子发下来后,老师要求拿回家让父母签阅。不用说,父母看了少不了一顿打哭。没办法,我只好去求外公了。
“外公,我知道您最疼薇薇了,求您帮我签个字,好吗?”
外公接过卷子一看,眉头皱了起来。“薇薇,外公可以帮你签这个字,不过外公有一个要求。”
“没问题,只要您能签字,十个要求我也答应您。”
“从今天开始,外公和你一起学英语,谁要是没学好,就由对方处罚。”
“好呀,一言为定。” 我满口答应了外公的要求。心想:一个老头子了,我就不信你还能记得住ABC!?
然而,我错了,真的错了。
那是一个夏天,正值高温季节。白天,火辣辣的太阳把大地烤得像个火炉。直到晚上,也没有一丝儿风,我们坐在阳台上边摇着蒲扇边谈话。唯独外公一个人聚精会神地坐在书桌前学习英语。豆大的汗珠从他的额头上滚落下来,但他顾不得这些,仍然埋头奋笔疾书。
突然,外公的眉毛紧锁起来,啊,原来他有一个单词背不出,急得汗一个劲地流下来。我走上前去用关切的口吻说:“外公,先歇歇吧!”“不,”外公说,“你先去吧,我写完再来!”就这样,外公翻呀查呀,渐渐地夜深了,我们都入睡了。
半夜里,我醒了,蒙胧中看见灯还亮着,书桌前有个背影,不停地写着什么,汗水已经湿透了背心。我定睛一看,啊,是外公,他怎么还没唾?我看了一眼挂钟,已经深夜12点多了。外公的旁边还放着只脸盆,里面盛着冷水,一条毛巾,啊,这是外公用冷毛巾来降温呢!
外公的学习精神深深感染了我。我暗自下决心,一定要发奋学好英语,绝不辜负外公对我的一片苦心。从这以后,我的课余时间就和ABC交上了“朋友”。在往返学校的路上,在课间休息的时间里,在完成家庭作业之后……我把所学的英语单词,一个又一个背记在心里。这一招,还是外公教我的,他说,学好英语的基础,首先就是熟记单词。一天又一天过去了,我对英语越来越感兴趣了,还时常用英语和外公进行简单的对话,英语成绩自然上了一个新台阶。
现在我不在害怕英语考试了,每次考试之后,老师都会在班上点名表扬我。看着同学们那羡慕的眼神,其实我心里比谁都清楚,我今天的成绩,全都是因为我有一个好外公!
[初一作文:我和外公学英语