初中英语我的家乡作文通用20篇
在端午节里,大家都有哪些美好的记忆呢?知道怎么样书写端午节的英语作文吗?以下是小编为大家整理好的初中英语我的家乡作文,欢迎大家阅读参考!
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+ 加入清单Since the National Day is coming, I will have a long vacation. I decided to take 5 days from 1st to 5th visiting Beijing. I would like to make a plan first. I will go to Beijing by train because it is safer and cheaper. On the first day, I am going to visit the Summer Palace. On the second day, I will visit the Great Wall. On the third day, I will get up early and go to Tian ‘an Men Square to see the flag rising. Then, I will visit the Peking University and Qinghua University. I am dreaming for entering one of these two universities. On the fourth day, I am going to visit the National Stadium. The last day, I will visit the National Aquatics Center, which also called “Water Cube”. A wonderful trip, do you agree?
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篇1:写景作文300字初中家乡的山
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+ 加入清单我的老家在富阳,开门见山,我老家的房子就是这样,一开门,门前就是一座山。
春天,万物复苏,火红火红的杜鹃花开得漫山遍野,那座山似乎已经被红色的颜料染过似的。
夏天,太阳火辣辣的,你会想:这么热,不去爬山吧。放心,山上的树木郁郁葱葱,叶子也非常密实,可以挡住炎热的阳光,如果你还热的话,可以去摘一片芭蕉叶当扇子用。
秋天,可是我最喜欢去爬山的时候了!因为这个时候,地不滑,而且山上的果子都熟了,山上的野栗子掉得满地都是,如果你投篮很准的话,你可以用小石头砸苹果呦!
冬天的时候,可以捉刺猬。记得以前有个退役的扫雷兵,去山上抓刺猬,下山的时候,我看见他捉了好几只刺猬,真让人羡慕!
我老家的山一年四季景色诱人,有空来玩吧。
篇2:我的家乡话题初中
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+ 加入清单我们每个人肯定都有自己的家乡吧,有的人就一直会待在自己的家乡里,甚至是一辈子都在自己的家乡里;有些人可能背井离乡,去别的大城市去打拼,一年半载的时候才回家看看爸妈什么的;有的人可能一直和自己的父母都离开了家乡,一起在大城市生活下来了,很久没有去看过那里已经没有别人的了家乡了吧……
是啊,不管我们回没回我们的家乡,那都是我们的家乡啊。我和父母是一直居住在上海的,逢年过节的时候才有可能会和父母去老家看看奶奶什么的,看着奶奶慈祥的笑容挥着手让我们走,叫我不要回来的样子,我就有点心疼。老人家也是有点口是心非的,她希望我们不要回来,其实心底也到底是很渴望的吧。我现在知道为什么要有乡愁这个词了,明明很舍不得在家乡那头的那个人,可是有时候为了更好的生活必须要有一次分离,才能有下一次的团聚。
看着奶奶的笑脸,我声音突然有点哽咽,对我爸爸说,爸爸以后回去多看看奶奶吧。我的家乡是一个不知名的小乡村是个鱼米之乡,小村子不大,总共就一百多户人家,每天打渔晒网,经过麦田总能看到有人在地里面勤勤恳恳的工作着,是啊,这个乡村的人都是那么朴实快乐的,看着这里的美丽的自然的风景,我想着以后自己回来也要在这里生活,多美啊,空气也没有大城市那样的污浊,这里的人们过着平凡但快乐的日子。
他们每个人都淳朴的可爱,隔壁张大婶还经常让我去她家吃饭嘞,说要给我做玉米面吃,她做玉米面那可是一把好手,我偏爱吃这些粗谷杂粮,为了这个事常常去张大婶家麻烦她哩,她的笑容真诚不掺杂一丝的杂质,欢快地招呼我,快来快来,热乎着的呢!我不好意思的笑笑,坐在小板凳上,等着对于我来说是“美食佳肴”的美味。
我的家乡有着一条望不到头的河流,里面是有一些小鱼儿养着的,每天都有着拨鱼苗下去,然后等鱼慢慢长大了再拿渔网捞,小河很清澈,很多孩子在旁边玩耍,甚至有人用手捧起一捧水就喝嘞可见这条小河有多么干净呢,在这里生活得越久,我真的就越喜欢这里,最淳朴的老百姓,最干净的河流,最肥沃的土壤,最好吃的水果,最热情的商家……这里的一切都让我那么喜欢。
我现在知道为什么人人都说我的家乡最美咧,真的好美啊,对于我们每一个在那里生活过的人来说,我们自己的家乡永远都是最美的,我想就算我以后去了大城市,不留在我的家乡生活,我也永远都不会忘记了我的家乡的……
篇3:我的家乡英语
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+ 加入清单welcome to my hometown! shanghai is my hometown. it is a modern and busy town. it has a long history. there are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. it is very easy to go shopping. you can see big trees and nice flowers. there are many restaurants in shanghai. the food tastes very delicious.you can enjoy eyery minutes of it. many visitors come here to enjoy it.
篇4:关于太阳的初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The sun shines on us. It gives us light and heat. It makes everything grow. It gives the earth life.
The earth turns round itself. As it turns, we have day and night. It’s bright by day and dark by night.(英语作文)
The earth also travels round the sun in an orbit. As it travels, we have four seasons. It is hot in summer and cold in winter. the days are long in summer and short in winter. In spring it is warm and the days are getting longer. In autumn it is cool and the days are getting shorter.(中国)
篇5:初中英语说明文写作要点
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+ 加入清单说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的,如:自然环境,仪表设备等;也可以是抽象的,如概念定律等。以下是小编整理的初中英语说明文写作要点,欢迎阅读!
说明文的写作相对于论说文来说,有一定的套路可循,因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等;说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然,随着对象的不同,具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。
说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点:
1.语言简明扼要,通俗易懂,避免夸张华丽的辞藻,要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。
2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多,但不能喧宾夺主。
3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚,脉络明晰。因此,练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作,找出最合理的一种。
4.由于说明文写实性较强,有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此,可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段,来增加文章的色彩。
下面是一篇说明一所医院布局的文章。文章虽短,但需要说明的内容却达11处之多。平均一句话就要描写一处,如果组织得不好,便会给人凌乱的感觉。
为了避免这一点,文章把整个布局图分三部分来写:
贯彻医院的是main road,第一部分以大门为参照物,介绍了靠大门且通过main road东西相对的急诊楼和门诊楼。
第二部分以湖为参照物,中心线还是main road,介绍其他分诊楼、实验室、放射室等。
第三部分写main road尽头的建筑物。
这样,繁多的细节显得井井有条。因此,选择好主线及参照物是决定文章成功的关键。
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about“THE LAYOUT OF A HOSPITAL”. Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the information given below.Your composition should be no less than 120 words.
(1)the Emergency Department
(2)the Out-patient Department
(3)the Surgery Department
(4)the Dispensary
(5)the Physician Department
(6)the Eye,Ear,and Throat Department
(7)the Dental Department
(8)the Laboratory
(9)the X-ray Department
(10)the Administrative Building
(11)the Ward
例文:
The Layout of a Hospital Near the gate,on the westside of the road is the Emergency Department. Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department. The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary,which face the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road.Along the west wall,from south to north,stand three buildings:the Physician Department,the Eye,Ear,and Throat Department,and the Dental Department.
The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about,and beside the Laboratory,the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road. A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward.
Near the end of the Main Road,the Administrative Building is situated on the east side.The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.
篇6:初中英语作文题目
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+ 加入清单In order to let me have a full and happy summer vacation,I made a plan for
the summer vacation.
Every day,I will go to exercise for an hour,it can let me have a strong
healthy body.I will arrange two hours to do the teacher the assignment.Reading
for an hour,reading can let me know a lot of extra-curricular knowledge,to the
all-round development.We will accumulate some good word,when reading a book to
improve my writing.
Except,I will also let the parents give me quote some interest groups,let
me batteries.Floods and other disasters in learning to swim,to save his life.To
learn the piano,can develop around the brain,flexible with your fingers.Learn
how to dance,to be able to make the body soft and build the temperament of your
high school.Pen calligraphy,three grade for me to use a ball-point pen to write
a good foundation.
Read thousands of books,not equal to view.This summer,mom and dad will take
me to different places let me open mind.We are going to go to
England,Beijing,Inner Mongolia,xinjiang,Taiwan,sichuan,hubei,hunan.Because to
place a lot,so I want to strive,to finish the homework earlier.
篇7:厦门初中英语
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+ 加入清单Last summer holiday, I visited to Xiamen with my parentsby plane. My
English teacher once told us that Xiamen is a beautiful city that worth of
visiting. We stayed there for four days. We lived in a small fishing village. On
the first day, we visited to Xiamen University and Nanputuo Temple. Xiamen
University is consideredas the most beautiful and romantic campus in China.
Indeed, its fantastic and its buildings are distinctive. On the second days, we
enjoyed the scenery of Jimei District. On the third day, We visited to Gulangyu.
Its amazing and I like it very much. There are many small specific stores.
However, the huge tourist visitors make the small island crowed. Anyway, it was
a pleasant trip.
篇8:初中英语日记
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+ 加入清单January 21
It was cooler than yesterday. One of my father’s friends invited me to eat red bayberries. You must know it is unusual. Because we will climb the hill to eat red bayberries. There is no chance to eat red bayberries in the hill for the people who don’t live in Beijing. On the hill, you can breathe the fresh air, you can listen birds singing and you can eat red bayberries. It was enjoyable. It is said there are wild pigs in the hill. What a beautiful natural.
January 22
Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.
January 23
I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me. Finally, I was ill.
篇9:初中英语作文写作方法技巧
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+ 加入清单英语作文怎么写?写不好作文是很多初中生存在的问题。而作文是初中英语考试的重要内容,怎么才能写一篇高分英语作文呢?下面是星火小编给大家总结的一些英语写作经验,大家可以看看。
要写好作文,首先要写好开头,怎么写开头呢?下面是一些不同的开头表达方式,大家可以参考看看。
“开门见山”式开头
即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
①.对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头就可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
②.对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。
如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back,but?
这样就将自己想要谈到的话题表达清楚了,接下来再继续论述就可以了。
回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记), remember (记得),unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人激动的),surprising(令人惊讶的), sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还可以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.
倒叙式的写法有一些难写,并且在写作过程中很有可能出现时态混淆的问题,在此建议大家在写作过程中尽量不要倒叙式的方式,避免犯错。
开了一个好头之后,当然要开始写文章的主体部分了,那就是文章的正文。
文章的正文应以文章的开头为线索,具体地叙述、说明或论证文章的主题。文章不论长短,每个段落都必须为主题服务。像说明文和议论文这一类的文章,一个主题还常分成几个小主题,每个小主题要用一个段落处理,另起一段时,应是一层新的意思。每一段的开头,要放一个表示段落小主题的主题句,这样可使文章条理化,易于阅读,便于读者抓住主题。段内的所有句子应围绕主题句的意义加以阐述或论证,为中心思想服务。句子之间应衔结自然,有条不紊,而且还要合乎逻辑,段落中不能出现任何与主题无关的句子;英语写作比较重视主题句的作用,缺少它段落意义就会含糊不清。主题句也可放在段落的中间和末尾等部位,但对初学者来说,以放在段首为好。
在记叙文中,段的结构有时可以很简单,不需要有主题句,叙事一气呵成,中途没有停顿。段与段之所以分开,只是为了起修辞作用,以便把某一细节置于显著的地位。
分段是文章组织上重要的一步,在写一篇文章的时候,一般都会将文章分为3段,第一段也就是文章的开头,第二段是主体部分,第三段自然就是结尾了。当然也可以分成4段等,不管怎么分段,都请大家要记住,在写一篇作文的时候,一定不可以不分段。
接下来就是文章的结尾了,以下是一些写好结尾的方法
1.自然结尾,点明主题。随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。
如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)”的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2.首尾呼应,升华主题。在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3.反问结尾,引起深思。这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。
如 “Learning English can Give us a Lot of Pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?
4.表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farmers’life will be better and better. 另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
第四种方法在中考作文中并不会太常用到,中考作文一般都不会要求写关于书信方面的文章,大家可以只是稍加了解。
[初中英语作文写作方法技巧
篇10:初中英语感恩母亲
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+ 加入清单My Mother is a kind of gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takes
good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have one brother and
two sistets. So she gets four children in all. She gives us every comfort. We
all love her and she loves us also.
My mother has too much to do in bringing us up. As our family is too poor
to keep a servant, my mother has always to do very much work. She gets up very
early and sleeps very late every day. She works hard, yet without
complaining.
She is also a thrifty, and industrious woman. She saves every cent that she
can and keeps everything in order. As she has been busy eversince she was young,
she looks older than she really is. Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes
silver white, but she works as hard as ever.
Often she says to us, "work while you work, play while you play. If you do
not work, you will become lazy and of no use to society." What piece of good
advice this is! We must worth it well and always keep it in our mind.
篇11:我喜欢篮球初中英语优秀作文
全文共 1369 字
+ 加入清单I Like Basketball
My favorite Sports is basketball. It looks so cool in TV that I was crazy about those basketball stars ever since I was little.
Basketball requires speed, height and skills. I run, jump, switch, and try to hit! All parts of my body are exercised in this sport. I feel that I’m like wind flying in the playground for my goal, which makes me feel so GREat!
Basketball needs quick reaction and decision. When chance comes, it may disappear in the next second. I should keep an eye watching as an eagle, decide and judge quickly as a leopard, and run for it as a wolf.
Further more, basketball is a sports more than just exercising, It needs team work. No one can play himself. A team should work together. So I learn to cooperate with others in this game. I should understand what my teammate doing and what he needs me to do for him. On the other side, I should learn to show my teammate what I need. At the same time, I need to keep an eye on the whole game, knowing how is the situation of our team and how is the other team. It involved more cooperation and strategy.
I played basketball more for about 5 years now. I make many good friends throught this sports. It is proud to win honor for my team and my school. Also I enjoy all games with my friends. Basketball will be my best friends in the future and my best memory about school life.
篇12:我的家乡英语
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+ 加入清单i am from shenzhen. in spring ,the weather is warm and wet. i can play kite. in summer, the weather is hot and wet. i can swim in the swimming pool. in the autumn, the weather is cool and dry. i can play kite, too. in the winter, the weather is cold and dry. it never snow.
篇13:家乡的变化的英语
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+ 加入清单My hometown is in Tianjin, which is a very beautifull city. There are more than 10 millions people living in this city in 18 districts including 6 districts in the city of Tianjin. The city is famous for its biggest port in the north part of China, and it is also famous for many delious food.
That is my hometown Tianjin, and I love it so much.
篇14:歌手初中英语MyFavoriteSinger
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+ 加入清单I know many singers, such as Wang li-hong, Zhou jie-lun and Michael Jackson and so on.
But I like Michael Jackson best.
I recognized Michael Jackson on occassion. There was a poem recitation competition in my class. I had to look for a song about peace. Finally I found "Heal the World". I liked it at once when I first heard this song. I thought it was the best song that I had ever heard. Then I found the words of this song. "Heal the world, make it a better place, for you and for me, and the entire human race." This song was Michael Jacksons famous work.
Since then I began to know more about Michael Jackson. I began to love him. He was named "King of Pop". He hold a Children Foundationg and wanted to make the world peace through the music.Although he was dead, he was still one of the most famous singers in the world. I love him, because he was not only a singer but also a loving person.
篇15:初中英语满分
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has a very long and brilliant history, whose people are so friendly and
hospitable. But I am wondering why some people pay such little attention to the
environment and nature. In many places of the countryside, rivers have become
stinking sewers and brooks have disappeared. Heaps of garbage obstructs the
scarce flow of dirty water. The grounds are littered with plastic bottles and
bags. People are cutting down trees even though it is illegal. In some towns,
rubbish is hidden behind walls. Garbage cans are often of little use, making
cleaners must rush all day long and also by night to clean the rubbish.
篇16:初中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Chinese is the necessary subject for students to learn. Even though some
students learn Chinese all the time, they know little about Chinese culture.
Today, the world is crazy about learning mandarin. A lot of foreigners are
interested in Chinese culture, and they learn the traditional thoughts from
Chinese great minds, such as Confucious. They also learn Tai Chi and they love
it. On the contrary, many Chinese students are not interested in our culture,
and they feel bored to learn. We should learn and get to know our culture well.
It is our duty, or someday we will be kicked out and lag behind others. In the
future, China will take the lead on economy.
篇17:家乡的变化英语
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+ 加入清单In the past,my hometown was not very big, people lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.Pollution was serious,and there was rubbish everywhere.the traffic was not very convenient that so few people came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.The environment has become more beautiful.The mountains are all green,the river clearer and the sky bluer.Many people all have thier own cars and have a happy life everyday.And now, every year,thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our hometown.My hometown becomes more and more famous.
Im sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
篇18:初中英语作文:难忘的一件事
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How time flies!Im fifteen years now.During the long time,there was one thing that I will never forget.
The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival,people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old,my family took the bus to my grandparents to say Happy New Year to them.
In the bus,I had a good seat.At 7:30,the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time,there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down,but I was afraid of hearing the other people sayThat girl want to be praised.I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly,a little boy behind me,stood up and made room for the woman.She said Thank you very much with a big smile.The boy smiled,too.When I told my cousin about it after that,he said The child is the father of a man. Im very ashamed.Why couldt I do the same thing as the little boy did?
From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others,the world will become much more beautiful!
篇19:初中英语作文我的卧室
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My Bedroom
I have a beautiful and sweet bedroom. My mother decorates it for me. She always says that a girl deserves a bedroom like a princess. The main colors of my room are pink and white. The wall, the bed and the chest are pink. And the desk is white. The curtains are beautiful with lovely followers on them. Every day when I open my eyes, I feel happy and beloved. I clean my room often and tidy my things up. I don’t want it become dirty or in a mess. I am thankful to my parents.
通过上面对我的卧室的介绍,相信大家已经对我的卧室都有个了解了吧,希望上面的知识给同学们的写作很好的帮助。
篇20:我的家乡作文初中作文我的家乡作文
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+ 加入清单我的家乡作文江西省铅山县永铜小学四年级罗百川我的家乡在江西省铅山县永平镇,这里山清水秀,物产丰富。在我家的西边有一座山,因为它的主峰像一头勤劳的骆驼,所以人们叫它骆驼山。骆驼山是树的海洋,毛竹、松树、杉树都长得苍翠挺拔。清晨,骆驼山笼罩在一层淡淡的晨雾中,就像披上了一层轻纱。过了一会,这里热闹起来了,附近的村民出来种菜、养鱼、耕地。傍晚,许多人来到依山而建的森林公园散步,他们踩着石子铺成的小路,边走边聊天。如果走累了。就在石凳上休息一会儿。晚上,小路边的一盏盏路灯亮了,远远望去,就像一颗颗闪烁的星星。家乡有一条江叫桐木江。桐木江的水很清澈,可以看见水里的鱼。夏天,常常有人在这儿游泳、钓鱼。江两岸种有一棵棵垂柳,风一吹,柳树姑娘就甩着长长的辫子,跳起欢快的舞蹈。江上有座桥,叫大义桥。大义桥历史悠久,据说是宋朝的时候,鹅湖山峰顶寺的高僧大义禅师主持修建的。桥长150米,宽4.8米。
大义桥十分坚固,全部用麻石修建。为了保护古迹,车不能开上桥,只能走人。桥下是几个大大的桥洞,站在桥上可以看到家乡的美丽风光。我的家乡有许多美味小吃,像“灯盏粿”、“千层糕”、“南瓜粿”、“烫粉”等,其中我最爱吃的是烫粉。粉是米做成的,烫粉时,先把粉用开水烫熟,再浇上事先熬好的排骨汤,然后放上肉丝,撒上葱花,一碗香喷喷的烫粉就做好了。夹起一根放在嘴边,轻轻一吸,“哧溜”,那根粉一下就滑进了我的喉咙。再喝一口汤,哇,真鲜!这就是我可爱的家乡,你们想不想来参观呀?指导老师杨清[简评]习作条理清晰,按照总一分一总的结构,先总写家乡的位置和特点,再具体地描述了家乡的山、家乡的水、家乡的小吃,最后总括全文。习作语句流畅,情感真挚。小作者还善于运用比喻、拟人等修辞手法,使得文章的表达更加生动,更具可读性。