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描写动物的英语作文10句(经典20篇)

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描写风景的初中英语

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It was early in the morning. The sun was just creeping(爬) out of the eastern horizon(地平线)and golden red was penetrating (穿透) through the white clouds and across the sky. The lakes,the trees and the bamboos looked as if they were all gilded. The ground was covered withtender grass, on whose blades some dew drops were glistening(晶莹剔透) under the sunshine.

Birds flew around the woods singing cheerfully and restlessly. Some boys were quietly joggingalong the path, while a couple of girls were reading aloud under the trees lining the bank of thelake.

A gentle breeze came up, wrinkling(使…起皱) the surface of the lake. It was really a beautiful andlively morning.

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篇1:保护动物英语词二:AnimalsNeedProtecting

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Animals are our friends. Although some of them are very dangerous. But I think we should help them. Animals are important for every people. No one can live without animals. So, we should do someting for them. We cant kill them too many, we should keep the balanced nature. Dont damage any animals. And if you have a pet, than, please feed it well. Animals are friendly to us, if we are friendly to them. Animals will be our friends forever.

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篇2:描写春天的英语

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Hello, my dear friends! What’s my favourite season? Let me tell you.My favouriteseason is spring. Spring is a lovely season, I think. There is a garden behind my house.

In spring, the trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance(芳香). There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers.

The butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. Sometimes it rains. It usually rains quietly. The rain moistens(滋润) the trees and the flowers.

I think they may say, “We’re very thirsty. The rain is very good.

It can help us.” What a beautiful scene! Don’t you think so? And what about your favourite season,could you tell me?

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篇3:描写秋景的英语

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Autumn, unlike the spring as colorful, not as full of vitality as the summer, but not like the winter as the powder makeup jade puzzle, but also has her unique beauty.

Autumn is a mature season, orchards, apple trees, orange trees, vines, have for the people to give fruitful fruit. Some of the peasants in the picking apples, some in the pick grapes, one by one red apple, a string of purple Yingying grapes are bending the branches. The peasant uncle laughed at his mouth.

Flowers, trees also lost the original vitality are yellow, and fall leaves like a beautiful butterfly in the dancing. Suddenly a butterfly rotating butterfly fly up, I gently walked over to intend to catch it, a look, turned out to be a leaf.

Looked up, the blue sky is not a trace of clouds, a line of geese arranged "people" word, "a" word to the south fly. In the fields, the pristine autumn leaves the millet blowing Huang Chengcheng, a piece of yellow cans full of corn to show people the autumn of the unique beauty. The peasants are busy with corn and corn! The sweat flows along the cheek of the peasants uncle, but the joyful smile hangs on their faces.

I came to the park, the chrysanthemum in the park that mix and match, colorful colors, red like fire, pink as the sun, white like snow, yellow gold. Slightly autumn wind blowing, bursts of sweet-scented osmanthus fragrant heartbroken. Osmanthus color is also varied, silver Gui, white, so that you feel it is pure, Jin Gui, golden, like the sunny day.

I love the scenery of autumn, because it symbolizes maturity, it brings the joy of harvest to the world.

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篇4:描写父亲的英语作文

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Sarah Liang Liang1 Mrs Fu

College Writing 123

November 5, 2014

My family portrait

Are you seeing that picture of my familyThe sun was shining brightly! My parents sat together in sofa. My mother hugged my brother, and I stood beside on my father. We were smile sweetly to the camera. All we us look like very happy although we were a poor family at that time.

My mother is not tall, not short but slim. She has a round face, two big eyes, a small nose and small mouth. She’s beautiful. She is forty-three years old, but she looks so young! She is my dear friends .

You must feel very strange to my father because he having full-white hairs, just look like a old man. My parent’s relationship is old husband and young wife. He is older than my mother 20 years. He can as my grandfather at his age.

You can see that my father wear a long sleeve shirt and look like a gracious man to camera. In my daily life, he is a bad-tempered man. He looks up to boy and down on girl. So he is very strict to me because I am a girl. He takes particular care for my brother. Well , his finger is long and thin. He often uses finger to tooth my ears as I was a child , wow!

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My father has a bad habit that he likes smoking very much. I hate it. See, the house is full of smoke. I know it bad for his health as well as my mother, brother and mine. We advise him to give up smoking. I’m sure he will follow my advice some day.

My father like to reading newspapers after meals. He also likes reading in his spare time. He told me reading little by little. I like books, because they help me in many ways.

I ever upset that my father having white hairs before I enter to college as I would always compared him to my friend’s young father. You know, I rebelled when I was in high school. Well, I am very respecting him now. I am having the feelings of important to my family. I love my parents and brother. They are plays an important roles in my whole life.

Such is my family, I am proud of having such a good family!

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篇5:保护野生动物高一英语

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Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is shown in the chart, we can

see the number of animal species decreases faster and faster and this trend will

continue. From 1980 to 2010, at least 1 million animal species have disappeared.

Worse still, more and more wild animals are in great danger. It is not a piece

of sensational news; it is a fact, a harsh reality. Unfortunately, we may not

see these animals in the near future.

From the second picture, we can find some reasons. Why is the number of

animal species declining year by year? Apparently animals have become victims of

fashion industry. Animal skin has been used to make fashionable clothes and

these clothes sell at a high price. So some greedy people begin to kill animals

in a large quantity. This irresponsible behavior not only breaks the balance of

nature but also endangers the living environment of human beings.

As far as I am concerned, something must be done to stop this illegal

action. We believe "no buying, no killing". First, we must make concerning laws

to protect these animals in danger. Second, we must take some measures to

protect animals effectively. Animals are our friends and part of our

environment. Third, we should raise peoples awareness to protect animals and

our environment. In this way, we can build a harmonious society and ensure a

sustainable development.

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篇6:动物英语作文带翻译

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Dolphin

In the vast ocean live many creatures with great intellectual and physical capacities.Dolphin is one of those great creatures,whose capacities to think and move at an astounding rate puzzle those who study their behaviors,Dolphins possess something that makes them different from all the other sea creatures.It is not strength or speed but the size of their brains.Dolphin s brain is almost the same size as that found in the human head.They live for a ling time.

Dolphins babies are born in the water.They can grow up to three and a half meters long.

Dolopins use sound to help them find their way,look for their food and talk with each other.Sound is just like their eyes and mouths.

海豚

大海里住着许多智力发达、身体强健的动物,海豚就是其中之一.它反应灵敏、动作迅速,让那些研究它们行为的人们深感震惊.海豚拥有一些与其它海洋生物不同的地方,它的优势不在于它的力量和速度,而在于它的大脑.海豚的大脑与人脑大小一样大.它们的寿命很长.海豚在水里生育,它们能长到三点五米长.

海豚利用声音帮助自己认路、觅食与彼此之间交谈.声音就像它们的眼睛和嘴一样.

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篇7:描写动物外貌的作文

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我家养着一只活泼可爱而又淘气顽皮的小狗,它的名字叫做欢欢,我非常非常的喜欢它。

欢欢长着一身雪白雪白的毛,有着一双好似小扇子一样的耳朵,他有一对明亮、水汪汪的眼睛。

欢欢特别淘气顽皮。记得有一次,我和弟弟堆沙子,它故意把我们刚刚堆好的城堡弄坏,还赖在那里,使劲地扒沙子,搞的弟弟嚎啕大哭,不过,我却并没有责打它,只是安慰安慰弟弟,让他不再哭,然后再重新做了一个。还有一次,我铺好白纸准备画画,它趁我去找笔的时候,跳上桌来,用它那出去玩时沾满泥巴的脚在纸上印了几朵“小梅花”。我回来一看,看到画纸上的“杰作”,猜想这一定是淘淘干的“好事”,不过我并没有重新画,而是在画上加一些树杈,再加上几片叶子,一副《梅花图》就完成了,这也有淘淘的功劳呢!

它特别贪玩,一玩就是几个钟头,让人家特别担心。任凭我怎么呼唤,它也不肯回来。后来我费了九牛二虎之力才终于把它给找着了。它开心的时候,就会向你撒娇,还会表演双脚站立,逗得弟弟哈哈大笑。别人扔食物给它的时候,它都能接住。它若是不开心呀,无论你说多少好话,它也一声不出。有时它又特别大胆,连别人家的公牛都敢去惹,惹了公牛还不够,还要去惹母牛,真是胆大包天!

你瞧,这就是我外婆家那只顽皮淘气、胆大包天、天真可爱、生气勃勃的淘淘。它是那么惹人喜爱。你见了,一定会立刻喜欢上这只可爱的小狗淘淘的!

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篇8:描写我家的小狗英语

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My family has a lively and lovely puppy, his name is little bit.

It round the head with a pair of ears like apricot, feels furry, a pair of bright and flexible big eyes, to the evening, but turned into two small bulbs, round shiny, a gold Yellow hair shiny, smooth like oiled like oil, very beautiful, golden claws like four plum blossom, he ran up a little voice did not, that is how the matter, I ran to ask my mother, My mother told me that it had a soft mat under the soles of the feet, so he did not have a little sound, the most interesting is that it is a small tail, always leisurely to shake, it cried like a mighty The fighter, it naughty up very cute.

I remember one time I was writing homework, the dog ran to me, put my blue ink to the spilled. I am very angry, I just want to pick up the broom to beat him, it wang called up, it seems to me: "Im sorry, you do not hit me, I am not intentional, please forgive me." Look at this scene , I put the broom down, it seems to know that I do not hit it in my legs and walked around, as if to thank me.

Look, this is my dog - little bit. It is very cute, I love it very much.

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篇9:描写台风来了的英语作文

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​导语:记得每年的夏天都有台风,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Typhoons and Pacific Ocean storms that come to Taiwan in summertime or fall season. They Are great wind storms; when they strike land they may do great damage. However, the weatherman always knows when one is on the way. He will send out warnings about. People can board up their windows and do many other such things to protect themselves if they know about a Typhoon in time. In my house we check our supply of candles and dry-cell batteries in case of a power failure. Also, we save some water in pails because the pump will not work without electricity. Then we like to sit by the door watching the rain and wind blow loudly.

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夏季或秋季来到台湾的台风和太半洋风暴。它们是巨大的风暴;当它们登陆时,它们可能造成巨大的破坏。然而,天气预报总是知道什么时候会来。他将发出警告。如果人们及时了解台风,他们可以在窗户上做很多其他的事情来保护自己。在我家里,我们检查我们的蜡烛和干电池的供应,以防停电。另外,我们节省一些桶装水,因为没有电泵不工作。然后我们喜欢坐在门口看着雨和风大声地吹。

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篇10:我喜欢的动物的英语

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Animals are friends of human beings. Most of them are lovely. I like giraffe the most.

They are very tall and have many brown spots. They have very long necks, so that they can eat the leaves in high trees. Giraffes are gentle and lovely.

They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them. They move slowly.

I can’t keep it as a pet, because it’s so huge. It’s a big pity.

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篇11:英语我最喜欢的动物

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As we all know,animals are our friends.I like every animal.But I like dogs best.Dogs are not only very lovely,but also very helpful.Thats why we all feed dogs at home.I often share happiness and shorrow with it, which belongs to me three years ago,called"Betty".In other words,we should treat them as our real friends.Do you agree with me?

我们都知道,动物是我们的朋友。我喜欢所有的动物。但我最喜欢狗。狗不仅是很可爱,但也很有帮助。这就是为什么我们都喂狗在家里。我经常和它分享快乐,我三年前称它为“贝蒂”。换句话说,我们应该善待我们的真正的朋友。你同意我吗?

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篇12:描写动物园动物的优美段落

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动物园动物是极容易相处的,它们从不提问,也从不会批评。下面是小编精心收集描写动物园动物的优美段落,欢迎阅读。

1、小白兔很可爱,胖乎乎的小白脸上镶嵌着一双红宝石似的眼睛,三瓣嘴上还长着小猫一样的胡子,特别是它总把那两只长长的大耳朵竖得直直的,显得十分神气。

2、这小松鼠的滑翔本领更是绝活,甩开大尾巴,一纵身就能腾空跃过好几米远,在树冠上飘来飘去,特别逗人喜欢。

3、刺猬身体胖胖的,四脚短小,长着锐利的爪,适合于掘土,尖红的长嘴很便于捕捉小虫。

4、狐狸的尾巴像深红的火焰的舌头一样,松弛、柔软地拖在雪地上。

5、羊群聚集在一起,像一片白云;羊儿散开去,又像只只白蝴蝶。

6、鹿是腿长尾短、性情温顺、惹人喜爱的动物,毛色黄褐,杂有白斑,有的头上还有树枝一样的角。

7、金丝猴全身金黄色,背毛很长,宛如肩披一件金黄色的蓑衣,鼻子向前翘着;它的爪子很尖,有一根长长的尾巴。

8、在观众的笑声中,铁链上站着的这只黄毛小猴,“腾!”来了个大倒立;“唰!”又一个倒挂金钟;“呼!”又来了个大回转;“嗖”蹿到猴山上去了。

9、黑猩猩浑身长着又长又黑的毛,红屁股,红脸,脸上有很多皱纹,像个七八十岁的老太婆一样,嘴巴张大,还向前凸出。

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篇13:描写秋天的花园英语

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In the courtyard of the grandmothers house, there is a garden. I like it the way it falls!

Autumn garden and usually different, very cute! Every seam to the fall, the garden is full of people like the grass. Spring, small grass just germination, the number of small, the color is not too green Summer, although the grass more, but it is too green! Winter, the temperature is low, all the grass and all withered. And only to the late autumn, the grass from the spring has long been to the autumn, it is the largest number! And the color of the grass becomes golden, played the golden wheat waves. Grass a cluster next to a cluster, a cluster of crowded a cluster, like a golden carpet, very nice.

The garden of autumn is surrounded by chrysanthemums. This is usually not see the scene. The chrysanthemum of the autumn garden is multipolar. As long as you walk into the garden, it will be surrounded by many chrysanthemums. The door of the rockery is chrysanthemum, trails on both sides of the chrysanthemum, small stone bench next to the chrysanthemum, rockery under the feet, or chrysanthemum! Chrysanthemum color colorful. There are white, yellow, purple, red, pink, especially people feel beautiful, is the flower of chrysanthemum, there are green! Chrysanthemum than other flowers are strong, weak flowers to the fall Long withered, but not only did not fade chrysanthemum, but also head over his head, Tingzhuo, open very good!

There are a few maple trees in the garden. Usually you can not see what they are special, but one late into the autumn, their leaves will become as red as fire, who read will be amazed. Maple leaf coloring process is very interesting. Maple leaves were originally green, to the fall, it first slowly into yellow, waiting for a few days after it turned red. And wait until late autumn, Maple Leaf this becomes dark red, like blood red!

There are ten trees next to the maple trees. In peacetime, the yellow cedar tree is not as characteristic as the maple, and in the late autumn it is the same as the maple, and the leaves are turned from green to crimson. But the leaves of yellow cedar trees than maple leaves, and there is no five horns, is round. This yellow cedar also let me make a joke it. One day fall, my father and I read in the garden, I saw the yellow cedar leaves red, pointing to their father said: "Dad, this a few maple leaves are red!" Dad a laugh Rhettled and told me: "This is not a maple, is a yellow cedar tree! You see its leaves, is round, maple leaves but the pentagonal!" I look carefully, this found himself wrong.

I love the garden of autumn. Every late autumn, I often stay in the garden, the game. I am afraid of the winter, the beauty of the front will disappear, back to the garden to take pictures, can take pictures, I always feel that the photo is not as ideal as I imagined, so I often give the garden to draw, after each painting , I always feel that some in the ointment, so I also love in the painting to draw some of the garden is not the fruit, because I love the garden too far!

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篇14:描写元宵的英语

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Great China, blooming flower of carved 56 nationalities. Different regions, different customs are memorable, whether the Tibetan sholton, or yi peoples torch festival.

The han nationality of the Lantern Festival is the most let I addicted.

It has more than two thousand years of history, in todays China popular is of no doubt.

The Lantern Festival of its name, because its festival and customs activities in the first month in a year (yuan) on the fifteenth day of night (night) to hold.

The Lantern Festival, the first great achievement of the nature is yuanxiao. No matter the south north, to the fifteenth day this day, men, women and children around the table and to Www.ZixueKaoShI.neT. end on a few bowl of steaming glutinous balls, the steam in a small house and now and then the clouded spread a few happy laughter sound.

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篇15:描写男生外貌的英语作文

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Most people believe that perfect outlook will bring good luck, those people who have good looking will get succeed easier than those who don’t. The fact is that not all the good looking people share good chances to become succeed. It is reported that the women who have perfect outlook are hard to get people’s acceptance, because people will treat the pretty women’s success as the lure of their bosses. This is most people’s impression about pretty women, they think the pretty girls don’t have special talent, people own their success to the pleasure of boss. While on the other hand, handsome men are easier to get people’s acceptance, the good looking will make men impress others, people admit the hand guys, for they think they are not only talented, but also attractive. Pretty women and handsome men get different treatment when they succeed, we should not judge people from their outlook.

大部分人相信完美的外貌会带来好运,长得好看的人比那些长得不好看的人容易成功。实际上,并不是所有长得好看的人都有好机会获得成功。据报道,长得好看的女人很难得到人们的认同,因为人们会把漂亮女人的成功当做是对老板的勾引。这是大部分人对漂亮女人的印象,他们觉得美丽的女孩没有特殊才能,人们把她们成功归功于老板的喜悦。然而另一方面,长得英俊的男人很容易的到人们的认同,好看的外貌能给人留下很深的印象,人们佩服英俊的小伙子,因为他们觉得小伙子不仅有天赋,而且也好看。漂亮女人和英俊男人成功的时候人们会对他们有不同的态度,我们不应该根据人们的外貌来判断人。

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篇16:关于描写动物的片段

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猫在强烈的阳光下,瞳孔可以缩得很小,像一根线那么细;在夜色昏暗之中,瞳孔可以开放得像满月那么圆;在白天一般强度的光线下,瞳孔会形成枣核般的样子。

我的爱犬鲍尔可神气了。背上赤黑,光滑得像一匹缎子,腹部的毛白白的、毛茸茸的,看上去就像位外穿黑礼服,内穿白衬衣的绅士。

小白兔很可爱,胖乎乎的小白脸上镶嵌着一双红宝石似的眼睛,三瓣嘴上还长着小猫一样的胡子,特别是它总把那两只长长的大耳朵竖得直直的,显得十分神气。

这小松鼠的滑翔本领更是绝活,甩开大尾巴,一纵身就能腾空跃过好几米远,在树冠上飘来飘去,特别逗人喜欢。

刺猬身体胖胖的,四脚短小,长着锐利的爪,适合于掘土,尖红的长嘴很便于捕捉小虫。

狐狸的尾巴像深红的火焰的舌头一样,松弛、柔软地拖 在雪地上。

羊群聚集在一起,像一片白云;羊儿散开去,又像只只白蝴蝶。

鹿是腿长尾短、性情温顺、惹人喜爱的动物,毛色黄褐,杂有白斑,有的头上还有树枝一样的角。

金丝猴全身金黄色,背毛很长,宛如肩披一件金黄色的蓑衣,鼻子向前翘着;它的爪子很尖,有一根长长的尾巴。

在观众的笑声中,铁链上站着的这只黄毛小猴,“腾!”来了个大倒立;“唰!”又一个倒挂金钟;“呼!”又来了个大回转;“嗖”蹿到猴山上去了。

黑猩猩浑身长着又长又黑的毛,红屁股,红脸,脸上有很多皱纹,像个七八十岁的老太婆一样,嘴巴张大,还向前凸出。

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篇17:关心动物英语作文

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animals are natural resources that people have wasted all through our history. animals have been killed for their fur and feathers, for food, for sport, and simply because they were in the way. thousands of kinds of animals have disappeared from the earth forever. hundreds more are on the danger list today. about 170 kinds in the united states alone are considered in danger.

why should people care? because we need animals, and because once they are gone, there will never be any more.animals are more than just beautiful or interesting. they are more than just a source of food. every animal has its place in the balance of nature. destroying one kind of animal can create many problems. for example, when farmers killed large numbers of hawks, the farmers` stores of corn and grain were destroyed by rats and mice. why? because hawks eat rats and mice, with no hawks to keep down their numbers, the rats and mice multiplied quickly.

luckily, some people are working to help save the animals. some groups raise money to let people know about the problem. and they try to get the governments to pass laws protecting animals in danger. quite a few countries have passed laws. these laws forbid the killing of any animal or planton the danger list. slowly, the number of some animals in danger is growing.

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篇18:描写秋天的英语作文

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Autumn is the most beautiful and fascinating season.Its not hotter than summer and colder than winter.Its most comfortable.

We can do many good deeds in autumn such as travelling、driving etc.Its the tenderness after summer and the warm before winter.

Many people say that autumn is depressed and old.

But I think its the best and liveliest/I hope that your autumen is same as me.It is full of good!

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篇19:描写冬天的英语冬天

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Winter is a beautiful season. It’s often snow in many countrys. And the outside is white. We often play with the snow, and make the snowman.

In the winter, the days are shorter. And the nights are longer. It’s often dark very earl.

I like white, so I like winter. What a lovely winter!

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篇20:描写外形样子和活动情况描写一种小动物

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首先要描写它的外形样子,要仔细看它的头部、尾部、毛色、四肢 是什么样的,形状、特点、颜色是什么样的。

如下面写小狗一段的话:

1“星期天,我从姥姥家回来,在客车上,看到一个大姐姐用紫色的包拎着一只可爱的小黑狗。小黑狗头上长着一对像毛片片一样的三角形耳朵,软软的向下耷拉着,有趣极了。两只圆圆的黑眼睛不停地望着四周。圆圆的黑鼻头像个茸嘟嘟的小茸球。嘴巴紧紧地闭着,一声也不吭,多像一个不吵不闹的乖孩子啊!我真喜欢这只趴在包里的小黑狗。”这篇习作是一位仅上一年级的小学生写出的。文章虽短,却描述得很全面:时间、地点、所描写动物的样子及自己的喜爱之情。所有的比喻及修饰词都很形象、贴切。

2 然后再看它的生活习性又是什么样的,小动物怎样吃食啦,怎样游戏啦,怎样睡觉啦,把这些都要细致观察,具体地描写出来。例如:小鹅儿“哦哦,小鹅儿出壳了!小鹅儿出壳了!”我拍手高兴地喊,我最爱小鹅了。这些刚出壳的小鹅儿一身水淋淋的,毛色不算好看,但是红红的小脚激起了我的兴趣。第二天,我把这些小家伙放出来喂食。它们的毛已经干了,金黄柔美,尽管它们脚还软,站不起来,但是一个个都很活泼,放下地就一扑一扑地,像在摔跤,真逗!小鹅儿睡觉的时候,小颈缩短了,那脑袋就像用绒沾在上面的。它们很容易醒,轻轻地脚步声,它们都会睁开眼睛看看,没有声响了,再睡。十多天以后,我刚揭开遮鹅笼的罩子,它们就要争先恐后的出来,一个小鹅站在另一个小鹅身上一跳,居然跳出来了!它们的毛开始变白了,脚也不软了。一下子就跑到我脚前要吃的,我先放些饭在碟子里,手里拿着两大片菜叶,它们嘴在呷饭,眼睛却盯着我的菜叶。菜叶似乎比饭更好吃,一只小鹅索性蹦起来呷着,摔了一跤!引得我大笑起来。这些小家伙很通人性,我一到家它们就跑到我的脚下转悠,亲热的很呐。我常常跟它们说话,有时它们还回答呢!所以,我把小鹅看成我的朋友。文章活脱脱地展现出小鹅出壳、吃食,睡觉和性情,语言活泼,条理清晰,形容逼真,童趣盎然,字里行间包含着小作者与小鹅之间的情感。

3 描写小动物的样子侧重于静态描写,描写小动物活动情况,侧重于动态描写。按照从静态到动态有条理,有层次地观察和描写,可以把小动物写得清楚、细致、感人。请你阅读下面的作文:猴子我最喜欢猴子,它在动物中恐怕是最聪明的。当我们来到它们跟前时,一只猴子用明亮的眼睛盯着我们。它的长相很奇特:一个很小的鼻子向里凹着,一张凸起的小嘴发出‘吱吱’的叫声,浑身的毛不但亮而且黑里透黄。小耳朵竖着,两只小爪子不时挠着头皮,做出怪模样,使人发笑。我掏出一块面包丢给它,不料,它没有接,只是先用爪子试探了一下,又缩了回去,还用眼晴看看我。过了一会儿,它抓起面包,狼吞虎咽地吃起来,吃完后又用央求的目光看着我,伸出爪子向我要吃的,于是我又扔一块糖给它。它迅速地剥开糖纸,放入口中大嚼起来。读了这篇片段作文,小猴子的可爱的形象会栩栩如生地展示在我们面前。所以产生这样感人的效果,是由于小作者从静态——外形样子,动态——生活习性两方面仔细观察,认真描写的结果。

在描写外形样子的时候,作文先用“长相很奇特”一句,概括了总印象,然后依照次序描写了它的凹着的鼻子,凸着的小嘴,黑里透黄的毛色和不断挠着的小爪。读到这里,我们一定会对小猴子产生喜爱之情。然后笔锋一转,写了小猴子吃面包的情景。作者扔给它一块面包,小猴子先是“没接”,只是用“爪子试探”,还用眼睛看着我,最后才是“狼吞虎咽地吃起来。”这样一步步地描写,写得细致,写得具体,产生了感人的效果,也把小猴子可爱之处,真实地展现在人们面了。我们用提纲表示出这篇作文的思路:猴子:一、外形的样子:1、概括——长相奇特;2、具体——鼻子、小嘴、贸色、耳朵;二、生活习性:抢吃面包。读原文,看提纲,可以更好理解这篇文章的思路和写作顺序。从中我们可以学到观察和布局谋篇的方法。

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