我的童年高中作文精选三篇 作文英语【实用20篇】

Time flies,but the memories of my childhood still like a sweet dream.When I remind of those funny things,I always wear a big smile on my face.Althought they are infantile,innocent and silly,I cherish them a lot.I know the fact that I can not experience them any more.

The first time I played roller-skating,I was excited.It was my classmate’s birthday,he invited many friends to the skating rink.I wasn’t good at roller-skating.He suggested me skate by the side.then he would ask his brother who was proficient to teach me.According to his brother,I could skate freely .Finally,he organized all his friends.We put our hands on others’ shoulder.We skated like a train.All the people in the skating rink stopped to watch us.I thought they might feel our passion. and be deeply affected.

示例：

Dear_______,

I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first

place,_________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition,____________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ___________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

My school is a beautiful campus, you dont believe in? I take you to visit my school.

You see, walked into the door, and two rows of stand proudly welcome our arrival, it is like a soldier standing guard, guard our campus. Back is a beautiful flower, open be riotous with colour of flowers, very good and diligent bees in the above step honey; and a beautiful butterfly there is dancing in the air, very good! Bed is behind the teaching building, see the classroom desks and chairs placed in neat, but it is our indispensable faithful partner, every classmates upright sitting concentrate ones attention on class there, fall over each other to speak, always came the sound of reading, a bent on learning. The teaching building of the right there is a basketball court, teaching to the left of the building is a large playground, where there are a lot of students are playing; every Monday, all the students went to the playground to the raising of the national flag. Playground on the left is a green lawn, where you can play, play football,,,,,, can be fun. The lawn is surrounded by a stand gracefully erect poplars, they be conscientious and do ones best to stand there, as if to defend the national dongliangzhicai. In looking at the outside is walls, walls covered with ivy, in the fall, ivy leaves slowly turned red, very good-looking, is really a beautiful scenery line.

This is my school, I love my school.

I’m very glad to tell you about my winter holiday .It will be both relaxing and meanful . Let me tell you in detail.

First, studying is the most important thing for me, so I have to finish my homework carefully and do lots of exercises everyday .I’ll probably have two or three lessons so that I can make more progress.

Then I should do sports at the same time. Not only because the PE exam in next term, but also for my own health.

Phsics interests me a lot ,and I also like to read some books about it in my free time ．At the end of the vacation,maybe I’ll go sighting with some friends and some books to another city .

I think my plan is the best possible one .I’m hopeful the winter holiday will come soon .

my  winter  holiday  pian

the winter holiday  ia  corning.  i’m  going  to  beijing  next  week.  i  will  go  there  by  piane.  my  perents  are  going  there  with  me.  we  are  going  to  take  a  trip  and  visit  my  aunt.  i  think  we  will  be  happy. 我的寒假计划

我下周要去北京。我将乘飞机去那里。我的父母和我去那里。我们打算去旅行，去看望我的姨妈。我想我们会幸福的。

Sichuan is located in the Upper Yangtze Valley in the southwestern part of the country. The second largest of the Chinese provinces, it covers an area of 220,100 square miles (570,000 square kilometres). Szechwan is bordered by the provinces of Kansu and Shensi to the north, Hupeh and Hunan to the east, and Kweichow and Yunnan to the south and by the Tibet Autonomous Region to the west and the province of Tsinghai to the northwest. It is the most populous province in China. The name Szechwan means “Four Streams” and refers to the four main tributaries of the Yangtze River, which flows through the province. The capital, Cheng-tu, is located in the centre of the province.

From economic, political, geographical, and historical points of view, the heart and nerve centre of Szechwan is in the eastern basin area, commonly known as the Sichuan, or Red, Basin. Its mild and humid climate, fertile soil, and abundant mineral and forestry resources make it one of the most prosperous and economically self-sufficient regions of China. The area has been seen by some as China in a microcosm and is often viewed as a country within a country. The Chinese call the basin Tien Fu Chih Kuo, which literally means “Heaven on Earth”.

Childhood is a picture, the picture we have colorful life; Childhood is a song, the song with our happiness and joy; Childhood is a dream, the dream is our imagination and vision. In the heart, in my memory of childhood enlightenment let me remember...

It was a scorching sun in the afternoon, my father bought a big watermelon, I saw chan mouth water, cant wait to put the big, round watermelon cut into small blobs, picked it up and went to her mouth, the finish is conveniently threw the watermelon skin downstairs to dad saw me this behavior, criticized me, can I put my dads words when fallen, in one ear and out the other.

Afterwards, once I come home from school, with the feelings of pleasure and jumping and dancing, all of a sudden "flop" a sound, I stumbled over a watermelon skin, at this time, my good mood dont know where all of a sudden, disappear without a trace. Ah! My knee is broken and bleeding, I returned home to his mother about this matter, and condemned the man throw the watermelon, luckily, this let father heard this, he laughed and said: "the last time you put the watermelon from upstairs throw down, this is retribution." Suddenly, I suddenly realize, of the last throw melon is that thing...

Through this matter, I understand the: throwing things down from upstairs is an uncivilized behavior, moreover, it would hurt others.

Childhood is a picture, the picture we have colorful life; Childhood is a song, the song with our happiness and joy; Childhood is a dream, the dream is our imagination and vision. In the heart, in my memory of childhood enlightenment let me remember...

It was a scorching sun in the afternoon, my father bought a big watermelon, I saw chan mouth water, cant wait to put the big, round watermelon cut into small blobs, picked it up and went to her mouth, the finish is conveniently threw the watermelon skin downstairs to dad saw me this behavior, criticized me, can I put my dads words when fallen, in one ear and out the other.

Afterwards, once I come home from school, with the feelings of pleasure and jumping and dancing, all of a sudden "flop" a sound, I stumbled over a watermelon skin, at this time, my good mood dont know where all of a sudden, disappear without a trace. Ah! My knee is broken and bleeding, I returned home to his mother about this matter, and condemned the man throw the watermelon, luckily, this let father heard this, he laughed and said: "the last time you put the watermelon from upstairs throw down, this is retribution." Suddenly, I suddenly realize, of the last throw melon is that thing...

Through this matter, I understand the: throwing things down from upstairs is an uncivilized behavior, moreover, it would hurt others.

Summer in the past, the past autumn, winter comes again, throw melon is the revelation of childhood in my mind again and again, but childhood have gone. Now, whenever I see a big, round watermelon, just think of my childhood when throwing the watermelon. In the childhood and heavy in my heart.

童年是一幅画，画里有我们五彩的生活;童年是一首歌，歌里有我们的幸福和欢乐;童年是一个梦，梦里有我们的想象和憧憬。在我记忆的心扉中，童年时的启示让我至今难忘……

那是一个骄阳似火的下午，爸爸买了一个大西瓜，我看见馋得直流口水，迫不及待的把那又大又圆的西瓜切成一小块一小块的，拿起来就往嘴里塞，吃完就顺手把西瓜皮扔到楼下爸爸看见了我这一行为，批评了我，可我把爸爸的话当耳旁风，左耳朵进右耳朵出。

事后，有一次我放学回家，带着愉悦的心情又蹦又跳，突然“扑通”一声，我被西瓜皮绊倒了，这时，我那愉悦的心情不知道一下子跑哪儿了，消失的无影无踪。哎!我的膝盖还磕破了，并且流了血，我回到家对妈妈说起这件事，并谴责扔瓜皮的那个人，正巧，这让爸爸听见了，他笑了起来，说：“你上次把瓜皮从楼上扔下去，这下遭到报应了吧。”顿时，我恍然大悟，想起了上次扔瓜皮的那件事……

通过这件事，我懂得了：从楼上往下扔东西是一种不文明的行为，而且，这样还会伤害到别人。

童年是一幅画，画里有我们五彩的生活;童年是一首歌，歌里有我们的幸福和欢乐;童年是一个梦，梦里有我们的想象和憧憬。在我记忆的心扉中，童年时的启示让我至今难忘……

那是一个骄阳似火的下午，爸爸买了一个大西瓜，我看见馋得直流口水，迫不及待的把那又大又圆的西瓜切成一小块一小块的，拿起来就往嘴里塞，吃完就顺手把西瓜皮扔到楼下爸爸看见了我这一行为，批评了我，可我把爸爸的话当耳旁风，左耳朵进右耳朵出。

事后，有一次我放学回家，带着愉悦的心情又蹦又跳，突然“扑通”一声，我被西瓜皮绊倒了，这时，我那愉悦的心情不知道一下子跑哪儿了，消失的无影无踪。哎!我的膝盖还磕破了，并且流了血，我回到家对妈妈说起这件事，并谴责扔瓜皮的那个人，正巧，这让爸爸听见了，他笑了起来，说：“你上次把瓜皮从楼上扔下去，这下遭到报应了吧。”顿时，我恍然大悟，想起了上次扔瓜皮的那件事……

通过这件事，我懂得了：从楼上往下扔东西是一种不文明的行为，而且，这样还会伤害到别人。

夏天过去，秋天过去，冬天又来了，童年时扔瓜皮的启示一次次的在我脑海里浮现，可童年却一去不返了。现在，每当我看到又大又圆的西瓜时，就想起了童年时扔瓜皮的事情。童年又重临于我的心头。

坐在桌前，独掌一灯，班得瑞《童年的回忆》的旋律始终萦绕在耳边，那幽深的钢琴声声悦耳，摄人心弦，将我漫漫脑海里的记忆连结成画，拼成一幅幅胶片电影。那影录一幕幕应接不暇，是那么得唯美，像海边残阳染红了波涛海面，使人迷醉于其中，久久不愿醒来……不觉间眼前朦胧雾色，回忆慢慢连结，一个小男孩正在记忆深处单纯的微笑着。

童年时的我从小生活在山村的一所小学，一直到四年级转学我才离去。

记得，我童年气息最重的地方，不是书香满室的课堂，而是毫无忧虑乐园般的操场。记忆中操场位于学校的最北边，是学校最高的地方，好似一座大大的平台。在操场的最北围墙边，有过我真挚的童年。那时，爷爷经常哄着幼时的我去那儿玩，那个贴近学校最北围墙的“小山”，其实是一座小小的土丘，可我宁愿固执地说它是小山，因为那时爷爷经常对幼稚的我说那是小山，于是乎，它就在我心里成为了小山，虽然它现在已不复存在，但它在我纯稚的心灵中是伟岸的，记忆不可磨灭的，它的模样早已彻底地、深深地，刻印在了我的心里，成为永远封存的记忆。

小时候爷爷会趁我玩的开心的时候教我一些经典，他曾经是这所学校的校长。我们就这样沐浴在温馨的时光中，坐在窄窄的小山顶上一个咿呀一个，阳光下洋溢着一对慈爱与童真的笑脸。即使到了雨天也遮不住我们欢乐的脚步，我们不怕风吹雨淋，爷爷撑着伞，我调皮地在雨中跑，雨中充斥着我单纯的笑声。记忆中，小山上不时会有泉眼冒出，它们一个个点点的非常的可爱，简直像极了童年玩耍的黑白琉璃球，还缓缓地流出泉水来，就像爷爷教过我的一句诗：清泉石上流。想那时的我见爷爷用手去触摸，幼稚的我很害怕，会怕它会像小蛇一样咬伤爷爷的手。还是在那雨天中，停止了奔跑，我稚嫩的小手打着伞，爷爷的雨衣被风吹起，在风中冉冉飘动，随风飘扬，就像个带着披风的超人，好不威风！

想着每当雨来临时，我和小伙伴们就趁着泥土的软韧，飞奔至小山头，大干一场，炽热的阳光下，尽是我们一串串银铃般的笑声。打打闹闹中，“宏伟基地”建成，一座城堡成型，但一场雨过后，于是乎，城堡荡然无存。

童年记忆中的操场上，有过一道别致的小风景，当时是大夺我心，就是西南部的小水塔，这长方体水塔在当时年时已老，墙皮层层欲剥落，斑斑青苔迹。听说现在已经拆了，但它在我的心里仍然还是那么年轻，那么别致，那么美，那么得不可替代。

那水塔真的是老啦，它老是坏了又修，修了又坏，我爷爷总会是主动地去修理，每次都要爬上那令我眩晕的梯子，真是不容易。盛夏时，我会自己那儿玩，我总是尝试着爬上梯子，一次次的刷新着自己的阶数，不断挑战自我，最终——放弃了！因为它太高了，令人望而生畏，于是我开始改为赏景。

这座老水塔，不断会有可爱的水珠滴答落下，它们在和煦温暖的阳光下显得晶莹剔透，惹人怜爱，这时我总会用稚嫩的小手去努力托住它们，享受着水滴落在手心开花的感觉。如今，童年的水塔去哪了？物非人也非，感叹着。那时，脚边总是会有一滩清澈见底的水洼，那是小水珠日积月累形成的，那是心底的水，心里的童年。每当我接水珠接累了，我就轻轻的抚摸水面，摸着水波纹，看着风吹动了树叶，温暖了湖心，也不禁，荡起了一层涟漪。而有时我也很调皮地用树枝将小湖翻个底朝天，一脸坏笑地看着脏兮兮的水，笑得坏坏的，真是那样傻、那样天真，以为它再也不会恢复到原来的样子，再也不会像以前那样清纯，渐渐地，渐渐地淡忘了它，却不知，它已慢慢沉淀。是在以后的某一天，殊不知它又恢复了原来的纯洁，原来的静谧，而且比原来还要美丽，还要动人，俨然一位水仙仙波仙女，出淤泥而不染的莲花。哦，原来这才是真正的它，我顿悟了。

每当接受了雨的洗礼的夜晚，萤火虫星星点点，如同童话般的梦幻，我踏着雨滴，追逐着萤火，孩童的纯真，透露出一股傻傻的稚气。知识渊博的老师们都不约而同地到水塔下纳凉，在那盏稍有简陋的灯下有说有笑，他们脸上洋溢着雨后爽朗的笑容。

不过现在，物非人也非，水塔已不复存在，那小山也去哪儿了？记忆下起了雨，湿润了眼眶，也浸湿了我的心。多么羡慕童年自由纯真的微笑啊，但只能是幻想吧，过去已被埋葬，那时的雨，像一场大雨淋湿我的眼迹，化作一道回忆，化不成昨天的你，那时的童心也消失了，一切都变了，什么都已不复存在，没变的，只恐是这几笔苍白无力的文字。

“云雨于风淅，腐塔滴水清。”这一切都已过去……

依旧沉浸在班得瑞旋律的余音中，眼前已一片朦胧。那幼时单纯童稚的微笑已化为虚无，飞去了它本该存在的未知天堂。渐渐的，浅浅的，已被时光，悄然淡忘了过去。

[童年的旋律高中作文

Dear Nate,

I am so excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.

Now let me tell you something about our school. Our school is the key school of

our city with the most beautiful campus. It has many trees, flowers and a lot of

grass. We have two very nice and teaching buildings and a dormitory building. In

addition, the school is well-equipped with excellent equipment, such as a new

gym, a computer room and a large library. There are also a lot of electives to

choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking. Above all, there are many

excellent teachers in our school. Classes are interesting, the teachers are

kind, well-educated and knowledgeable and willing to help students in study as

well as in life. I like my school very much. I hope you will like it, too.

Yours sincerely

Daniel

Childhood is like a colorful book, childhood is like a beautiful painting. Childhood was interesting, once those things, scenes, still deeply imprinted in my mind...

Summer comes, the weather is very hot, the sun baked the earth like a furnace. I desperately shaking with big fan, said to himself: "if there is something to eat, cold that it would be great!" At this moment, I saw my father was holding a large watermelon eating with relish. I ran over and said to him: "dad, I want to eat, I want to eat!" Dad and I cant, so we have to give me to eat. A: wow! This is delicious. Ice ice cool, cool! All of a sudden, because I eat too fast, accidentally swallowed a -. I wiped to wipe your mouth, anxiously asked my father: "after eating - what can I do for you?" Father said humorously: "thats not good, not long after, the head will grow a big watermelon." Ah? No, not that I do not want the disfigured!

Every day I fear, afraid to head up a big watermelon to one of these days. I more think more afraid of, dare not to eat too much food and water every day, as usual, a hungry have to find something to eat, just like a cat, because I am afraid that I will eat too much food is in the water the seed, fertilizer, seeds will quickly "thriving", soon will grow to a big watermelon. Sometimes, I will look in the mirror, touch the head, exactly have long out a big watermelon.

A few days later, mom and dad finally unbearable, looked at me very abnormal, curiously ask me: "yue yue, how are you these days? Only eat half bowl of rice, every time ask you why, you ask ten nine dont answer, is not comfortable?" Ill have to account. Say that finish, they burst out laughing. Smile enough is enough, I asked them: "you not only have no sympathy for me, instead of laughing at me!" So, mom and dad told me that it doesnt work that way, is make me play.

Childhood, is how good, ever do foolish thing is how funny, lots of fun is still in my heart, laughter still echoed in my ear...

童年如同一本五彩的书，童年像一幅美丽的画。童年是有趣的，曾经那些趣事，一幕幕，仍深深地印在我的脑海中……

夏天来了，天气十分炎热，太阳像火炉似的烤着大地。我拿着大扇子拼命地摇，自言自语道：“要是有冰凉的东西吃，那该有多好呀!”这时，我看见爸爸正捧着大西瓜津津有味地吃着。我跑过去，对他说：“爸爸，我要吃，我要吃!”爸爸拿我没办法，只好切给我吃。哇!真好吃!冰冰凉凉的，爽!突然，由于我吃得太快了，一不小心吞了一颗西瓜籽。我抹了抹嘴巴，担心地问爸爸：“吃了西瓜籽后会有什么事吗?”爸爸幽默地说：“那可不好了，不久后，头上会长出个大西瓜。”啊?不会吧，那我不是要毁容了!

我每天提心吊胆，生怕哪一天头上冒出个大西瓜来。我越想越害怕，每天不敢吃太多的饭和水，也不像平时一样，一饿了就像馋猫似得找东西吃，因为我怕吃了太多的食物，等于在给种子浇水、施肥，种子会很快地“茁壮成长”，不久后就会长出一个大西瓜来。有时候，我还会照照镜子，摸摸头顶，到底有没有长出个大西瓜来。

过了几天，爸爸妈妈终于忍不住了，看了我很反常，好奇地问我：“悦悦，你这几天是怎么了?每次都只吃小半碗饭，问你原因，你十问九不答的，是不是不舒服呀?”我只好一五一十地说。说完，他们就哈哈大笑起来。笑够了，我问他们：“你们不但不同情我，反而嘲笑我!”于是，爸爸妈妈告诉我，根本不是那么回事，是逗我玩的。

童年——是多么美好，曾经做的傻事是多么的好笑，一件件趣事仍在我的心中，欢声笑语仍在我耳边回荡着……

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood

is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life. Children show you their true

emotions.

They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults.

In their world, all real thoughts are presented.

They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never

understand what is animosity.

They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social

communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil

plans hidden and never intrigues against each other.

Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more

enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did

in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and

the world would be a better place to live in.

I recall my study experiences. Sometimes I studied with my classmates, but sometimes I prefer to study alone. In my opinion, learning collaboratively can help us to improve our ability of communication. At the same time, it can give us a stage where we can exchange our thoughts with each other. In addition, through learning collaboratively we can get more chance to know our classmates. But there are some disadvantages. For example, during the time of study, we may not study but talk with our classmates.

回想起我的学习经历。有时候我会和我的同学一起学习，但有时候我喜欢一个人学习。在我看来，集体学习能帮助我们提高我们的交际能力。同时，也可以给我们一个互相交流想法的舞台。此外，通过集体学习可以获得了解同学的机会。但也会有一些缺点。例如，学习的时候，我们可能会和同学聊天而不是学习。

As a matter of fact, learning individually also has some advantages. Firstly, if we study alone, we will think about something by ourselves. It can help us to improve our ability of thinking by ourselves. And learning individually is good for our creation.

事实上，一个人学习也是有好处的。首先，如果我们单独学习，有些东西我们就得自己思考。这可以帮助我们提高我们的思维能力。而且，单独学习有助于我们的创造力。

As learning individually has some advantages and learning collaboratively also has some advantages, so I think we should use a combination of both.

单独学习有一定的优势，而集体学习也有很多的优点，所以我认为我们应该利用两者的结合。

[高中英语作文：单独学习还是集体学习

Nowadays, divorce rate has been rising sharply in China, because most

people think that its better to get divorced than stick to a bad marriage. But

for those couples who have children, they had better think over before getting

divorced. Parents divorce may have some negative effects on their children.

Firstly, the love of father is different from the love of mother. Children need

both of the love. Without each of the love, they may not grow up healthily.

Secondly, in order to raise the family, the single parents have to work harder,

so that they may have less time to accompany with their children. The children

may feel neglected, which may cause mental problems. Besides, if the single

parents get married again, the children may get hurt by calling another person

father or mother. If they cant get along well with each other, the situation

will become even worse. Thus, for the sake of their children, parents are not

supposed to get divorced in a rush. They should think twice.

Last weekend, On Saturday morning I got up at 6;30. After breakfast I did my homework at home.

In the afternoon , I played football with my friends on our playgroud. In the evening I watched TV with my parents at home.

On Sunday morning I went to visit my grandparents with my mother. In the afternoon I went to go fishing with my grandpa. We had a good time . I went back home with my mother in the evening. What a wonderfu weekend !

有生命就有回忆。回忆就是人生的一个缩影。

我认为童年就是我人生中最快乐的时光。记得那时我是多么的天真。有一次。我的母亲刚做好饭。我就傻傻的`跑了过去。两只手拿着烧红的铁圈就往外跑。一开始我还特别开心。好似手里握着个包。但是越来越不对劲。呀。我的手被烧熟了。我赶紧扔掉了他。一头扎进了我母亲的怀抱。大声哭了起来。我瞪大眼睛看着手上像小山一样的水泡。我没哭，反而笑了起来。

后来我慢慢长大了。我也迎来了幼儿园的短暂美好时光。

我的幼儿园就是在哭声中度过的。我和一般的孩子不一样。我只上过一年的幼儿园。那时我总是依靠在母亲的身边。生怕离开了就再也看不见他们了。

慢慢的我长大了。迎来了小学六年的美好时光。从此我的回忆中多了一位恩师。我的语文老师。在我的印象中，他长得不高。留着一头褐色的短发。她虽然性格有些暴躁，但是教会了我许多道理。至今我还记得他的名字。

童年天真和傻的代名词，也是我人生中最有乐趣，最珍贵的回忆。它使我的人生富含诗情。使我的生命得以充实。

1、审题：审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文：根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题：

1、确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。

2、要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。

3、用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。

在扩展的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考：

1、在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。

2、使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3、改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。

4、学会使用过渡词。递进furthermore，moreover，besides，in addition，then，etc ;转折however，but，nevertheless，afterwards，etc ;总结finally，at last，in brief，to conclude，etc ;强调really，indeed，certainly，surely，above a11，etc ;对比in the same way，just as，on the other hand，etc。

5、确定文章用第几人称写，基本时态是什么。使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。时态要尽量保持一致。

检查修改：要检查复核，不要写完了事。

要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。

可归纳为：中心突出，主题明确;层次清楚，条理清晰;表达

一、优化词汇输入教学，丰富词汇知识积累

词汇是一篇文章最基本的组 成要素。头脑中如果没有一定数量的、且处于鲜活状态的词汇，就无法写出好文章。要写出好的文章，就必须善于从众多的词语中选择和运用最恰当的词语。因此， 加强词汇教学、扩大和丰富学生的词汇量是提高学生写作能力的基础工作。克拉申的“语言输入假说模式”认为：正确和恰当的语言输入将会使语言学习的效果更 佳。

最佳语言输入的两个必要条件：

1)密切相关的

2)大量的。因此，将密切相关的常用词汇、习惯搭配适当集中教学，反复归纳、不断循环和强化是较好的词 汇输入方法，同时也保证了常用词汇在头脑中的鲜活状态，为写作输出提供可靠保障。

二、加强基础写作训练，活化基础知识积累

在学生写作过程中，我们 常常会发现许多学生的词汇量与运用能力不成正比的现象，写作中经常出现词汇贫乏和用词不当等问题。这种问题的出现实际上是学生获得的知识没有有效的活化。 配合词汇和句型教学，教师可以经常以所教学词汇为关键词拟定一些与时事或生活相关的话题，让学生用词、句做翻译练习，一段时间(4-5天)之后，再让学生 用这些词、句进行写作，多写多练以达到活化知识的目的。

三、广泛阅读，拓展知识积累

“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作 诗也会吟”。在大量的阅读过程中，可使学生开拓视野，拓展知识，增加语感，为写作提供必要的语言材料。写作和阅读是互相促进、相辅相成的。有些词汇和句 型，学生只是似曾相识，通过广泛的阅读能促使学生把这些东西运用得更熟练，表达得更准确。反过来，这也会有效地提高学生的阅读理解能力。

This year is the 66th anniversary of the founding of new China! On October 1st， our whole family sit by the TV and waiting to watch early time big parade。

At ten o clock， the National Day military parade formally started， only saw many soldiers standing in front of tiananmen， navy， air force， army。。。 Stand straight， straight， like hits the forceful pine， President hus review。 The parade shows the motherland strong defense force， peaceful country and safe people， the motherland prosperity of beautiful landscape。

During the National Day， grandpa and I went to play in the humble administrators garden。 The car on the road， I saw the window renmin bridge garlands made of flowers on both sides， in the sunshine more bright beautiful， make the atmosphere of the National Day more strong! Walk in the small street to the humble administrators garden，Www. ZixueKaoShi .neT see stalls on both sides of the street with a red flag with five stars， to express the affection to the motherland。 Many foreign visitors to see the beautiful scenery heartfelt held out a thumb。 In the humble administrators garden is the chrysanthemum， chrysanthemum can be more color， yellow， red， white， colorful， beautiful!

The National Day make me deeper understanding of the motherland; A profound feelings for the motherland also; Make me more love my motherland China!

中文翻译：

今年是新中国成立66周年!十月一日这天，我们全家早早的坐在电视机旁等待观看盛世大阅兵。

十点钟，国庆阅兵式正式开始了，只看见许多军人站在天安门前，有海军、空军、陆军……都站得笔直笔直的，像一棵棵挺拔的青松，接受胡锦涛同志的检阅。整个阅兵式展示了祖国雄厚的国防力量，国泰民安，祖国繁荣昌盛的美好景象。

国庆期间，我和爷爷去了拙政园玩。汽车在路上行驶着，我看见窗外人民桥两旁用鲜花做成的花环，在阳光下更加亮丽，使国庆的气氛更加浓厚了!走在通往拙政园的那条小街上，看到街的两旁的摊位都插着五星红旗，表达对祖国的深厚感情。许多外来游客看见了这么美的景色由衷的伸出了大拇指。拙政园里有菊花，菊花的颜色可多了，有黄色的、红的、白的，五彩缤纷的，美丽极了!

国庆节使我对祖国的了解更深了，对祖国的感情也更深厚了，使我更加热爱我的祖国中国!

Since I went to college, I feel so excited about the new chapter of my

life. I have imagined the campus life for so many years. Now I finally come to

this stage. I have much time after class, so I need to learn to deal with it.

After two years’ struggling, I find the right way to spend my time.

The first thing for every college student is to learn major knowledge. In

China, so many students think college time is used to play instead of study, so

they skip class. This is a big mistake. College is the stage for students to

master practical skills, which decides what kind of job they will work on. So I

study very hard from Monday to Friday. I don’t want to miss the important

knowledge.

The second thing for college students is to join the after-class

activities. Joining the activities can not only learn more skills, such as dance

and sports, but also can make friends. Campus is like a small society. Students

need to learn to make connections with other students, so that they can win more

chances. I learn a lot from my new friends and know how to communicate.

My college life is wonderful, I learn both knowledge and social skills.

The period of high school stage is the preparation for college, all the students work hard in the purpose of the better future. In this stage, they hold the same target, fighting for the College Entrance Exam, especially in the third year, the sprint is very important. There are some suggestions for a better sprint. First, students should take a regular work schedule, it is very important to sleep in time, so that students can wake up early in the morning and then work with efficiency. Second is to keep the balanced diet. Students should pay attention to what they eat, the nutrition should be enough, so they can keep a better mind, thinking in a quick way. The last year of high school life must be hard and tedious, the one who keeps hold on will gain what they want. If they do as the mentioned suggestions, they can work better.

What is art? When people think about this question, they will naturally

think about all kinds of musical instruments or the great paintings in the art

museums. Art seems to so far away from the ordinary people, but I don’t think

so. Art is everywhere. For example, the delicious food that is made by our

parents is the great art, and the value of the food is to bring people the great

joy when they have a taste of it. The scenery around us is the visible art, when

we appreciate it, our mood become eased. Art is something that brings people the

positive value for me, so art is around everybody. If we take time to slow down

our pace, then we can enjoy art from life and feel the comfortable

lifestyle.