关于游泳安全的作文英语作文(汇总19篇)

After morning’s class,we couldn’t help rushing to the cafeteria.It always brought us coolness.The food was so-so,but the home-cooking is much delicious.When we almost finished eating,I suddenly saw a familiar face——our foreign teacher Nick.A girl was sitting beside him.They were talking over lunch.I at once told my friends Sandy and Jenny about it.We were so excited.I slowed my speed of eating to wait for that girl.At the moment,they finished their lunch and walked by us with the smile on their faces.Nick seemed so different from how he looked in the class.I guess that is the power of love.Hope they will enjoy everyday when they get together.So romantic!

I expect that Nick will tell his love story to us.

Recently we did a survey on the diets of middle school students. We were

surprised to find thatmany students dont seem to be at all concemed about the

effect that unhealthy food can have on theirhealth. They like snacks and street

food has become the favorite snack of many students. Also, they eatfood simply

because it tastes good and dont pay any attention to its storage life. Whats

more, somestudents go to school without having breakfast, and lack even basic

knowledge about food safety.

Middle school is an important time of growth for students. They should form

the habit of eating ahealthy diet and should have three well-balanced meals a

day. In addition, a basic knowledge of foodsafety is essential, which means that

students should be aware of the date of production and thenutritional value of

snack food before they eat it.

In conclusion, the survey indicates that students should improve their

awareness of nutrition andfood safety.

1, to be a beauty, and the angel of love.

2, obey the traffic rules and regulations, and love the journey of life.

3, obey the traffic rules, deposit safety.

4, one of the car the whole family, one family safe and sound.

5, a second car accident, and pain in his life.

6, the heart is no shame, a bumpy road.

7, normally on heart lights, safe driving with life.

In 8, civilized traffic safety, keep life keep love.

Solid dotted line 9, zebra crossing, all is the life line.

10, life only have once, and peace accompany you a lifetime.

11, taking the first step in first step.

12, ning hundred paces around, dont rob step risks.

13, jaywalking, lost and helpless.

14, road for the pulse, the legal system of Chinese.

Three to 15, comity, chang an road.

1、做一名美和爱的使者。

2、遵守交通法规，关爱生命旅程。

3、遵守交规，储蓄安全。

4、一人出车全家念，一人平安全家福。

5、一秒钟车祸，一辈子痛苦。

6、心无交规，路有坎坷。

7、心头常亮红绿灯，安全行驶伴人生。

8、文明交通安全在，留住生命留住爱。

9、实线虚线斑马线，都是生命安全线。

10、生命只有一次，平安伴君一生。

11、千里之行，慎于足下。

12、宁绕百步远，不抢一步险。

13、乱穿马路，失道无助。

14、路为国脉，法系民魂。

15、礼让三先，路畅民安。

These are our common life should be in compliance with the rules of the road, we would also like to promote in the class column on the column or exhibition, multi-paste a number of compliance with the rules of the road, not red light running and other words like a warning so that students better understand the traffic safety importance. School can also be invited to the police his uncle, the door to the students on the traffic class, so students know better to help the traffic of human beings ... ...

Security related to our life, we hope parents, the flower is the future of the motherland, the motherlands future, we need to, and so we must make to comply with traffic regulations, protect our lives, but also to the safety of others. Let us follow traffic safety, to minimize traffic accidents, so traffic will never disappear. This is the call of the times!

From this incident，we can see that there are still more things to be done。

Firstly，the government needs everything possible to ensure the quality of

products，particularly the safety of food as this concerns everyones

life.Secondly，as for the producers，it is very important for them to be morally

honest. They should never try to pursue profit or economic growth at the expense

of health and life of people. Thirdly，we consumers must attach importance to the

things we eat and develop an awareness of how to protect our legal rights if

cheated。 Only in this way will we be able to build a more secure and harmonious

society.

8月18日，我看了这天的《广州日报》，当我看到A3版的时候，有一篇报道，是关于游泳方面的问题，这篇报道叫做《两男孩溺亡小区泳池》。当我看到了这篇报道之后，就产生了疑问：为什么两个男孩会在泳池溺亡呢？我带着这个疑问，继续把这篇报道看下去。

原来这篇报道是这样说的：在7月26日18时58分，何志勇的生命永远定格在了这一刻。年仅9岁的他，在嘉和苑游泳池游泳时不幸溺水死亡。救生员以为他“在潜水”，所以救生员过了5分钟之后，何志勇在水下不动弹，才把他给救了上来，可是救上来之后，心跳呼吸停止。他之后被送进医院，可是抢救不了他的生命，所以何志勇的生命就这样结束了。

昨天，下午3时30分左右，在天河区中海康城游泳池内，一名16岁的高中生在游泳时溺毙，他原本并不住在中海康城，只是放暑假来爷爷家玩。事故发生后，救生员将男生捞起，平放在池边进行按压急救，随后120救护车和警车赶到现场，可是还是抢救不了这位高中生的生命，这位高中生也匆匆画上了自己的人生句号。

我看完这篇报道之后，我觉得要告诉喜欢游泳的朋友，出去游泳要注意几点：不要在深水池里去潜水和嬉戏；要去有专业的救生员那里游泳；如果是小朋友，还要带着家长才能去游泳。安全游泳，才能游的开心，游的舒服!

Food, is a indispensable thing in our lives, is also what we most closely contact, so food safety becomes our life can not be ignored in safety. A lot of people die each year from food poisoning, so we have to learn a lot of food safety knowledge. The ancients cloud: "your day for the people, food is." The former can be understood as: cathay Pacific by cas; The latter can be understood as: people, rely on food. Thus, food hygiene safety is very important for us human beings.

Our school gate, there are a number of vendors. Business is booming every day. Vendors some ice cream, and some also sell some pigment water... The delicious food in broad daylight, there seems to be a hand is extended in those little available to the school, but who knows whether the food is unqualified, is it safe?

In fact, a large number of outside food health situation is not ideal, there are many widespread substandard health food. Experts pointed out that these problems and no relevant guarantee food, great effects on the health of primary and middle school students. Although school everyday in said food safety problems, the students are still not care.

Ive heard of one thing: one day, a classmate after school, feel very hungry, although the teacher talked about or buy junk food today. But he is not on the heart, with fifty cents to buy ice cream. When buy, he was a good ideological struggle, finally, stomach protested in "cuckoo" sound, he bought ice cream. His side to the gourmet taste with relish, and marched to the home. Unfortunately things finally happened. The very next day, he have loose bowels, not only themselves, parents also worry! This is not obedient disorderly buy snacks.

And in front of our school, there are some only sell 1 dollar soda, are popular among pupils. Body feels very soft, very thin. Soda is divided into coke, orange and lemon flavors. But these cheap soda, is actually some small workshops with essence, pigment and water filling. Impossible to have quality assurance. In addition, soda bottles generally is recycling, their health status is self-evident.

Unsafe food events caused great influence to peoples life, food regulators also always attaches great importance to this problem. Believe that relevant departments can seriously, strict management, give you a rest assured food environment. We, as a primary school student, as a member of a society, we should also be constantly improve the self-protection ability and the ego to protect consciousness, render and do our work with regulators.

Although these "3 without" food together, have very big allure, for our self-control is not strong, very easy to be tempted. Hope everybody can enhance safety consciousness, safety wake-up call, responsible for ones own body.

食物，是我们生活中不可缺少的东西，也是我们接触最密切的东西，所以食品安全就成了我们生活中不可忽视的安全问题。每年有很多人都死于食品中毒，所以我们要多多学习食品安全的知识。古人云：“君以民为天，民以食为天。”前者可理解为：国泰靠民安;后者可理解为：民康靠食全。由此可见，食品的卫生安全对我们人类非常重要。

我们学校门外，有不少的小摊小贩。每天生意总是兴隆。小贩们有的冰激凌，有的还卖有色素的水……那些光天化日下香喷喷的食物，似乎有一只手在向学校里那些小馋嘴伸去，可谁又知道这些食物是否合格，是否安全呢?

其实，大量校外食品都是卫生状况不理想，还有许多食物普遍存在卫生不达标的问题。有专家指出，这些存在问题且无相关保障食品，势必对中小学生身体健康造成很大影响。虽然学校天天都在说食品安全问题，可同学们仍毫不在乎。

我听说过一件事：有一天，一位同学放学后，感到很饿，虽老师今天讲过要不买垃圾食品。可他不放在心上，用五角钱买了冰激凌。在买时，他做了很大的思想斗争，最后，肚子在“咕咕”地叫声中提出了抗议，他买了冰激凌。他边津津有味地品尝着手中的美食，边大步流星地向家走去。可不幸的事最终还是发生了。就在第二天，他就拉肚子，不光自己难受，家长也担忧啊!这就是不听话乱买零食的下场。

还有在我们学校门前，有一些只卖1元钱的汽水，深受小学生喜爱。瓶身摸起来很软、很薄。汽水分为可乐、橙味、柠檬等口味。但是这些便宜的汽水，其实是一些小作坊用香精、色素和自来水灌装的。根本不可能有质量保障。另外，装汽水的瓶一般是重新回收的，其卫生状况不言而喻。

食品不安全的事件给人们的生活造成了很大的影响，食品监管部门也一直很重视这个问题。相信有关部门能够严肃处理，严格管理，给大家一个放心的食品食用环境。而我们作为一名小学生，作为社会的一份子，我们也应该要不断提高自我保护能力和自我保护意识，以及尽自己的绵薄之力配合监管部门工作。

虽然这些“三无”食品如影随形，具有非常大的诱惑力，对自制能力不强的我们而言，非常容易被诱惑。希望大家能增强安全意识，安全警钟长鸣，为自己的身体负责。

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

Im writing to tell you something about the problem of food safety.

“The food is what matters to the people， the food by An Weixian”， the humanity grows， the economy soars， the social progress， the time cannot leave food， cannot leave the security， hygienic， nutrition food.“How can like this? How should we manage?”The general populations were asking unceasingly “we must eat safe food” the general populations to request unceasingly， populaces call， stimulates to movement us to ponder， moves.

"Food enterprise， the conscience enterprise”， food production management enterprise is qualified， the high quality food producer， is the person who has rendered meritorious service， also is the inferior harmful food manufacturer， and possibly bees the criminal， therefore said， food produces the operator is the food security first owner， decides food quality the key aspect both is the technology， also is not the management and the equipment， the key lies in food production in the human key to manage the owner and jobholders professional personal integrity and the moral standard.

The dead pork production meat product， the use industry paraffin wax manufacture hot pot bed charge， the use sodium hydroxide soaks floods sends the product， dont they know these things harmfully? Also non-， how lets us listen to the production protein content only is 2% powdered milk production busineowner when hears the long-term oral administration powdered milk causes the big end of baby death is says， “， this kind of powdered milk cannot eat continuously， we always do not eat in any case， we all arrive the supermarket to buy several dozens Yuan tin of import powdered milk to eat”.

This accident made me realize the seriousneof the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the whole society pay much more attention to food safety.

Food

safety has been closely watched, because our everyday life simply can not do

without food. Everyone knows this, but always some people again, lets worry

about it, whether our food safety and health.

Recently

of malachite green, Sudan red, and so on have been "destroyed" and are these

hearts duck eggs, and havent been solved completely. But even if they now have

to solve, but we also have to worry about "they" will not back not just in the

future? Thought of here, I cant help but think constantly behind the scenes

"make" the food of a few to endanger the safety of life. So I just sent a such

doubts are these people for the sake of what? I want to or for a word - money,

money is the devils bait. Because of the money, how many times this happened in

the world of murder, robbery and theft? Who would have thought such a sum of

money, is want to jail and the court criminal "supplier"?

Is

because the money has arisen: artificial sweetener, saccharin sodium, cyclamate

and preservatives (sodium benzoate and potassium sorbate), etc. The use of food

additives. Therefore, I very want to some people dont understand, how many

people did their "product" harm? There are a lot of people after eating these

so-called "health and safe food" and diarrhea and vomiting, and even lost his

life!

However,

I think, in addition to criticise those who only know to make money and people

who do not care about their health and safety, we also need to improve their

awareness.

Such

as: apple too shiny instructions may be played in a wax. White spot on the

grapes too much may be excessive pesticide use.

These

instructions, defense artificially added chemicals in food, some harmful

substance is but with the naked eye or simple method of inspection.

We

should pay attention to food safety, want to for the sake of our health and make

great efforts, to strive for the sake of our civilization.

食品安全一直倍受关注，因为我们的日常生活根本离不开食品。所有人都知道这一点，但又总一些人，让我们担心，我们的食品是否安全，是否卫生。

最近的孔雀石绿、苏丹红等这些是已经被“消灭”了还有红心鸭蛋等还没完全被解决的。不过就算它们现在已经给解决了，可是我们还要担心“它们”还会不会在不就的将来卷土重来呢?想到这里，我就不禁想到了在幕后不断“制造”这一些危害人生安全的食品的人。于是我就发出了这样的疑惑这些人是为了什么?我想还是为了一个字——钱，钱是魔鬼得意的诱饵。因为钱，这世界上发生过多少次的谋杀、抢劫和盗窃?谁能想到这么一张张的钱币，竟是想监狱和法庭输送罪犯的“供应商”?

也就是因为了钱产生了：人工合成甜味剂(糖精钠、甜蜜素)和防腐剂(苯甲酸钠、山梨酸钾)等食品添加剂的使用情况。因此，我十分的想些人明不明白，他们的“产品”危害了多少人?有许多的人因为吃了这些所谓的“卫生、安全食品”而上吐下泻乃至丢了性命的!

不过，我想，除了批评那些只知道赚钱而不顾及他们身体健康、安全的人以外，我们还要提高自己的防范意识!

如：苹果过于的`发亮说明苹果可能打过蜡。葡萄上的白斑过多可能就是农药使用过量。

这些说明，防御食品中人为的添加化学物质、有害物质有些是可是用肉眼或简单的方法检验出来的。

我们要关注食品安全，要为了我们的健康而努力，要为了我们的文明而努力。

As summer vacation is coming, my parents have made some plans for me,

because they want me to learn something useful. This first thing they want me to

do is to learn swimming. This is an important skill. It can save my life if I

fall into the water. I also want to learn swimming, so that I can do many cool

sports. I am so excited about the lesson.

According to report, in China, there are about 70 thousand people killed in traffic accident, accounting for more than 50% of the total number of accidental deaths. Both the traffic accident rate and mortality rank first in the world whose victims are mainly children, adolescents and the elderly. This a a cruel fact. How can we make the roads safer? Remember the following rules.

据报道，中国大约有7万人死于交通事故，死亡人数超过事故死亡人数的50%。交通事故发生率和死亡率位居世界之首，受害者主要是孩子，青少年和老年人。这是一个残酷的事实。我们怎样才能使道路更安全呢?请牢记以下规则。

When you ride a bike or walk in the street, keep yourself in the right side of the road. Don’t cross the road or turn left at a red traffic light. Give a sinal when you want to cross the road or stop. Before corssing the road, stop and look at your right and left sides, making sure that there is no car passing by. Additionally, our government should make more severe traffic rules and punitive measures. Some drivers always violate the traffic rules, which is the main cause to traffic accidents. Therefore, our governmet should play a more important role in preventing traffic accidents.

当你骑自行车或者走在街上的时候，确保自己走在道路正确的一边。在红灯的时候不要穿越马路或者左转。当你想过马路或者停下来的时候要发出信号。在穿过马路之前，停下来看看左右，确保没有车经过。另外，政府应该制定更加严厉的交通规则及惩罚措施。一些司机经常违反交通规则，这是导致交通事故的主要原因。因此，我们的政府应该在防止交通事故中起到更重要的作用。

今天，邵老师在午间谈话时讲了关于预防溺水的知识，我听了后有了深深的感受。

现在我们是四年级，已经是比较懂事的时候了，家长已经能放心我们了，所以许多同学都自己去玩、游泳……正因为这样，杭州最近有不少中小学生在河、湖、江、水库等地方游泳，导致溺水……

我们在游泳前应先把水往身上泼，等适应水温后再去游泳，而且要先活动一下身体的各个部位，以免游泳时抽筋导致溺水。在游泳时如果觉得身体不适，则告诉伙伴们并上岸休息，看伙伴们游泳。如果在浅水区抽筋了，叫伙伴们过来，并且按一下抽筋的地方，去岸上休息。特别注意：吃1、吃饱时不宜游泳，因为游泳时可能会肚子疼;2、饥饿时也不宜游泳，因为如果游到一半时没力气了怎么办?3、在刚做过剧烈运动流汗的时候别游泳，因为在流汗的时候，人的毛孔会扩大，如果一下子跳下水，毛孔就会紧闭，到那时候，我们会抽筋，最后导致溺水。

听了以后，我又懂得了一些知识。大家要记住随时随刻防止溺水事故的发生哦!

Teachers and parents are working together to ensure the health and well-being of all children. Schools are really safe places for children to be, and they are the heart of the community. Lets make sure they stay that way.Fortunately, schools, parents, and communities are finding practical ways to provide children the safe and disciplined conditions they need and should expect to find in school, such as by promoting smaller schools, respectful communities, fair and rigorously enforced discipline codes, teacher training to deal with violence, school uniforms, and after-school programs that keep kids productive and off the streets.We must get violence out of our schools, and we must put discipline and learning back in them

导语：正如我们所知道的，安全是我们生活中最重要的东西。所以，我们应该尽力确保我们的安全。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。

内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。

参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;紧急情况：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。

写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。

★ 范文

Dear students,

As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.

We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.

In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.

Yours,

Li Hua

【汉语翻译】

亲爱的同学们，

正如我们所知道的，安全是我们生活中最重要的东西。所以，我们应该尽力确保我们的安全。

我们不能带限制的刀子或东西到我们的学校，因为这些东西可能会导致严重的问题。未经父母允许，不得在江河或池塘内洗澡。我们应该友好地对待别人，所以强烈禁止打架。在上学或回家的路上，一定要注意交通。此外，如果我们遇到紧急情况，我们必须向警察或我们的老师求助。

总之，这些安全规则可以使我们生活在和平。

你的好朋友，

李华

Nowdays, with the rapid development of the road, cars have been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. Traffic safety as the most importent one, is closely related to everybodys business.

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons . Some of the accidents are due to mechanical problems. As the vehicles in the road become common, the function of vehicles has improved and the speed is getting faster. However, most of them are the results of careless and reckless driving, which could not be avoided. A lot of people disregard traffic signals and rules. They drive regardless of speed limits, run through red lights, drive in the wrong direction, talk and laugh while driving, and turn at will without giving signals. They even dont slow down while approaching crossroads. So many people violate traffic regulations that we cannot put too much emphasis on the importance of traffic safety. Meanwhile, we can not ignore the fact that there are many problems existing in the design. They are all important reasons accounting for this phenomenon.

Some effective measures must be taken to slove this problem. The major cause for traffic accidents is people’s lack of safety awareness. Completing a safety driving education course is a very important way to reduce the number of traffic accidents. The key point for this issue is people’s awareness towards safety. It is a long-term goal rather than a single course for safety driving. The best way to solve the troubles is that we all abey the traffic rules. First, we cant get through red light and must observe traffic order. Secondly, tell our relatives not drive after drinking. Then, we should be care about road damage and inform relevant departments to solve the problems early. Finally, an active part in social activities, protect our order society! Another measure is improving the traffic condition by add traffic signal and other traffic safety facilities。Only when everybody takes traffic safety as their own business, can we achive safe driving and walking on road.

Last but not least, I hope we can have a good futere , and I believe we can do it！

Recently, the news about the famous fast food company got bankrupted in

Taiwan was spread in Wechat. While in mainland, less people know about the truth

and the fast food company still works well. Chinese food problem exists all the

time, even the government has made some rules to forbid the illegal business,

still many manufacturers produce bad food for making more profit. The fast food

company doesn’t care about the market in Taiwan. Its spokeman said that their

main market was in mainland, and a lot of people were eating their food. Hearing

this, we surely will be angry. If everybody join the team to refuse to buy their

products, then the fast food company will be kicked out. Only in this way can we

protect our health and benefit.

Teachers and parents are working together to ensure the health and well-being of all children.Schools are really safe places for children to be,and they are the heart of the community.Lets make sure they stay that way.Fortunately,schools,parents,and communities are finding practical ways to provide children the safe and disciplined conditions they need and should expect to find in school,such as by promoting smaller schools,respectful communities,fair and rigorously enforced discipline codes,teacher training to deal with violence,school uniforms,and after-school programs that keep kids productive and off the streets.We must get violence out of our schools,and we must put discipline and learning back in them.

老师和家长一起合作以确保所有儿童的健康和福祉.学校是真正安全的地方的孩子,他们是社会的中心.让我们确保他们保持这种方式.幸运的是,学校、家长和社区发现实际可行的方法来提供儿童安全、纪律严明的条件他们需要和应该期望发现在学校,如通过促进小型学校,尊重社区、公正、严格执行纪律规范,教师培训来应对暴力、学校制服,和课外项目,让孩子生产和上街.我们必须从我们的学校暴力,我们必须把纪律和学习回到他们.

现在正是酷暑天气非常炎热，大家都喜欢去凉爽的游泳池里游泳，但是要知道游泳特别要注意安全和文明。

我先来说一说安全吧！近期天热，大家都喜欢到有水的地方去游玩，因为这样会感到凉快些，特别是小孩，他们的安全意识较差，所以最近我经常听到一些、看到一些报导说小孩子因为在河边玩耍而不慎掉进河里淹死，每年暑假这些事就会不断发生，让人看了很伤心。所以说要注意安全，还有要学会游泳，万一遇到这种情况可以采取自救。

说完了安全，我再来说一说文明吧！这几天，我在报纸上看到了一条新闻，上面说，如果在游泳池里小便，会对人体有潜在危害。最近一项研究发现，使用不当消毒剂溴的游泳池会致癌，因为这些消毒剂和防晒霜、汗水、皮屑会产生化学反应，形成一种有毒的化学物质。

游泳池消毒剂用来消灭池水里的病菌，但如果用溴消毒的话，消毒同时会和游泳者的毛发、尿液产生化学反应，生成致癌物质，使游泳者患上膀胱癌、引发哮喘等。

又如防晒霜、防晒油之类的防晒用品，都含氮，会和游泳池消毒剂产生有毒的化学物质，这些化学物质有使基因变异的能力。

这些基因变异会导致婴儿出生缺陷，会加速衰老进程，会导致呼吸困难，如果长期变异，甚至会诱发癌症。消毒剂一般有氯、溴、臭氧、二氧化氯等。现在用的所有消毒剂为次氯酸钠。

通过资料认识，让我对游泳的安全和文明有了更深入的了解。

题目：On Dormitory Security

写作要求

Dormitories on campus were reported to be broken into and burglaries happened regularly.

What should both students and universities do to reduce this kind of crime?

Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

On Dormitory Security

You are to write in three parts.

In the rst part, state speci cally what your opinion is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriatenes. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

审题思路

本题是一道问题解决/建议型的题目，一般建议型题目的写法是复述题干内容 ，直截了当提出自己的建议, 然后摆事实讲道理说明该建议有什么好处 ，最后把文章引入一个自然的总结段中即可。但是根据这个题目的题干，重点不是用理由来支持某个建议，而是详述该建议是什么，即分小点说明学校和学生应该分别做些什么。

范文赏析

On Dormitory Security

It is reported that recently in quite a few universities, dormitories on campus have been broken into and burglaries have happened every now and then. In fact, students have complained a lot that burglaries are like nightmares in their college years. I think it’s high time that both students and universities did something to reduce and eliminate this kind of crime.

引言部分：作者先说明有报道说最近寝室遭窃的现象很多，困扰着学生们，然后提出学生和学校都应采取措施。

On the one hand, there are some measures which universities can take. First, universities should have all the dormitory doors and windows checked, find out and repair the broken ones so that thieves cannot go in easily. Second, the number of university security staff should be increased. Security personnel should patrol on campus and cross-question any suspicious person.

On the other hand, students should also do something to protect their belongings. First, when they leave their dormitories, they should keep doors and windows locked to keep out sneak10 thieves.Second, students should lock their valuables11 up in lockers12. In this way, they can reduce the risks of burglaries happening.

主体部分：作者分两方面来说，并在每方面下面又分了几个小点，这样一则可以丰富内容，二则使整篇文章逻辑清晰，衔接紧凑，成为一个完整的整体。

In one word, both students and universities should do something to reduce burglaries in dormitories. And only in a safe dormitory can a student live and study happily.

总结部分：作者用in one word自然而然地对上文进行了总结，并进一步说明只有寝室安全才能让学生生活和学习得更开心。

亮点回放

1. be broken into: “被闯入”，常用于指房子有窃贼闯入。

2. every now and then: “时而，不时” ;近义词有every now and again ，every so often, more often than not等 。

3. nightmare: “噩梦，使人特别痛苦的事情或经历”。

4. it s high time that: “该做某事的时候到了” ;如果在time前面有high ，the very等词 ，那么从句中要使用过去时。

5.eliminate: “除去，消除” ;这里还可以使用get rid of，root out ，wipe out ，weed out等来表示 同一意思。

6. personnel: “职员” ;作名词 ，注意personnel和personal(个人的)的区别。

7. patrol: “巡逻 ，巡查”。

8. cross-question: “盘问，审问” ;该词 的使用体现了作者词汇量的丰富和用词的精到。

9. suspicious: “可疑的，多疑的” ;也可以使用doubtable和questionable来代替 。

10. sneak : 常用作动词，表示 “偷偷摸摸做/走”，此处用作形容词，表示“出其不意的，暗中进行的”。

11. valuables: valuable常用作形容词 ，表示 “贵重的” ;当用作名词且为复数时 ，表示 “贵重物品”。

12. locker: “更衣箱，储物柜” ;该词用得非常到位 。

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