关于端午节高中英语作文汇集20篇

It was Mother’s Day. Sun Zheng thought he should do something for his mother.

He decided to help his mother do some housework. After school he went to a shop

to buy some food on his way home.

When he got home, he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn’t

do the cooking well. Thenhe cleaned the room. He felt very tired, but he was

very happy.

When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes

which weren’t so nice, they were very happy.They had their supper together. His

mother said, "Thank you,my child!"

Traveling is a good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can breathe fresh air, and make some friends. But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes, you may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling. Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You had better find a companion, so that you can help each other.

The population of the world has already passed six billion. The population problem may be the greatest challenge of the world today. The earth has been very crowded and there will be standing room only before long.

China’s One Child Policy is a good way to solve this problem and stop the population from growing so fast. It also can help our country develop quickly then people’s standard of living will become higher and higher.

At the same time a lot of other problems will be done with, such as employment problems, food problems, water problems and so on…So I think it is necessary for China to carry out this policy.

An Enlightening Night

That was really an unforgettable night.I was waiting for buses at the station.There came an old lady, who was running to catch the bus.However,she was knocked down by a bike and the rider just ran away.The first thing came to my mind was the famous Pengyu’s incident,which shocked the ethic line of our society.All of a sudden,I was in a dilemma.I worried that I may be involved in troubles if I gave a hand to the

elderly,as Pengyu’s incident was like a warning.So I was frozen.What surprised me most was that a passer-by girl,rushing across the street without hesitation,putting the old lady on her back and carrying her to a hospital nearby.At that moment,I felt so embarrassed and ashamed that I wanted to crawl a hole and never come out.She was just a student but she did something what an adult like me was afraid of.

Never in my dream did I imagine that girl could have such an impact on my view of moral obligation.From then on,I decide to help strangers who is in need without hesitation and reservation.Because only in this way can our society become more harmonious.From my perspective,that little girl teaches me a lot that night.The

conscience of the many outweighs the wicked behaviors of the few.That’s what we should keep in mind no matter what we experience.

She’s Got Blank Space Again

Taylor Swift, one of the most popular female singers around the world, was broke up with her boyfriend again. It is known to all that this talented girl always gets inspiration to write songs from her relationships. All of these songs will become the hit songs. The fans play the jokes that they can hear the new song soon. As the media always reported Taylor had many relationships, she wrote a song called Blank Space to fight back. The song ranked No.1 in the most powerful music chart. In the song, she described that the girl had a long list of ex-boyfriends, while when she got broke up, there would be a blank space for the next boy. It sounds like her real life, but Taylor tell people’s the boys treat the relationship like a love game and don’t take it seriously.

泰勒斯威夫特,全世界最受欢迎的女歌手之一,又和她的男朋友分手了。众所周知,这个才华横溢的女孩写歌的灵感总是来自她的爱情。所有的这些歌曲都会成为热门歌曲。粉丝们开玩笑说他们很快就可以听到新歌了。媒体总是报道泰勒有很多段关系,她写了一首歌叫《空格》来反击。这首歌在最权威的音乐排行榜排名第一。在这首歌中,她描述了女孩有着一长串的前男友,而当她分手了,会留下空格等待下一个男孩。这听起来像她的现实生活,但泰勒告诉人们，男孩们对待他们的关系就像爱情游戏,并没有认真对待。

Body language is used by people for sending messages to one another. It is very useful because it can help you make yourself easily understood. When you are talking with others,you are not just using words, but also using expressions and gestures. For example, waving ones hand is to say "Good-bye." A smile and handshake show welcome, and clapping hands means congratulations. Nodding the head means agreement, but shaking the head means disagreement. The gestures are accepted both by Chinese and foreigners as having the same meanings.

Different countries have different body language. For example, men in Russia, France and Arab countries kiss each other when they meet, but men in China or Australia shake hands instead of kissing. People in Puerto Rio like touching each other, but people from English speaking countries do not touth each other. If you touch an English person, you should say "Sorry. People in Arab countries like standing close to one another when they are talking, but English people must keep a distance away when they are talking. In some Asian countries, you must not touch the head of another person. In Arab countries, you eat using the fingers of your right land;the left hand is not used at all. In parts of Asia you must not sit with your feet pointing at another person.

When you use a foreign language, it is very important to know the meanings of gestures and movements in the foreign country. Following the customs will help you communicate with people and make your stay there much more pleasant and comfortable.

Movie is my favorite that I always watch movies when I am free. Since I like English very much, so the English movie is my favorite, too. Among so many films I have watched, the one I like best is High School Musical. This film tells the stories about two high school juniors from rival cliques – Troy Bolton, captain of the basketball team, and Gabriella Montez, a beautiful and shy transfer student who is a hard working girl. Together, they try out for the lead parts in their high school musical. In this process, a series of stories happen, but in the end, the musical achieves great success and Troy and Gabriella fall in love with each other. It’s totally a happy ending. I like this movie because the high school life in that is so colorful and amazing, which I admire so much. Besides, everyone loves happy ending of love story.

我喜欢电影，平时有时间的时候我一般都是看电影。我非常喜欢英语，因此英语电影也是我喜欢看的。在我所看过的电影中，我最喜欢的是《歌舞青春》。这部电影讲述了两个高中生的故事——学校篮球队的队长Troy Bolton和性格害羞、长相甜美、成绩优异的新生Gabriella Montez。他们要一起主演学校的音乐剧。在这个过程中，发生了一系列的故事，而最终，音乐剧获得了成功，他们之间也碰撞出了爱的火花，完美落幕。我喜欢这部电影的原因是因为电影中展现的高中生活丰富多彩、奇妙无比，让我十分羡慕。再者，有谁不喜欢爱情故事的大圆满结局呢。

Waiter: This is menu. Are you ready to order now?

Tom: Sorry, we havent decided yet. Could you please give us a little longer?

Waiter: No problem.

Tom: Well, I think I would like to have a shrimp cocktail and the tomato sausage soup first. How about you, Jones.

Jones: The same for me, please.

Waiter: Yes, sir.

Jones: What main dish would you like, Tom?

Tom: Well, Id like the sole, please.

Jones: Ill have the sirloin steak.

Waiter: Yes. What would you like to drink?

Jones: Red wine for me. And you, Tom?

Tom: I think Ill have beer.

Jones: One goblet of red wine and one bottle of beer, please.

Waiter: Would you like a dessert?

Jones: What special kind of desserts do you have?

Waiter: Lemon pie, hot cake in syrup, chocolate sundae and custard pudding.

Tom: Well, I think well order after we finish the main course.

Waiter: All right, Ill bring the soup right away.

服务员:这是菜单。你准备好点菜了吗?

汤姆:对不起,我们还决定。你能请给我们一点时间吗?

侍者:没问题。

汤姆:嗯,我认为我想要一只虾鸡尾酒和第一个番茄红肠汤。你呢,琼斯。

琼斯:请同样的对我来说。

服务员:是的,先生。

琼斯:你喜欢什么主菜,汤姆?

汤姆:嗯,我想唯一,请。

琼斯:我沙朗牛排。

服务员:是的。你想喝点什么?

琼斯:红酒给我。而你,汤姆?

汤姆:我想我有啤酒。

琼斯:一个杯红酒,一瓶啤酒,谢谢。

服务员:你想要甜点吗?

琼斯:你们有什么特色甜品?

服务员:柠檬派,热糖水蛋糕,巧克力圣代和奶油布丁。

汤姆:嗯,我认为我们将订单完成后的主要课程。

服务员:好的,我马上把汤。

The sports meet of our university was held on a charming spring day.The stand around the playground was packed with spectators.Firt came the parade of the opening ceremony.Athletes walked into the field in orderly arrays.After the opening address was delivered,the athletes withdrew.Then there was a performance of group callisthenics.

The contests and races of track and field events were exciting.The runners of 100 metre race dashed to the terminal point.The winner took the lead only by a small fraction of second.A boy athlete gave a javelin a lorceful throw.It shot across the sky and arrived at a point far ahead of the former record.A girl athlete,in a long distance race,stumbled over the foot of another athlete and fell down.She rose to her feet,clenched her teeth,and continued her running.The most attractive is the relay race that was so intense that all spectators cheered,hailed and applaused.

The sports meet was over.Our athletes not only gained a good harvest of prizes,but also strengthened their body and tempered their will.

在迷人的春季我们学校举行了一场运动会，操场上挤满了观众，首先举行的是开幕式典礼。运动员们井然有序的在操场上排着队列， 开幕词发表之后运动员退出，团体操表演随之进行。

在比赛中田径比赛是令人兴奋的，百米赛跑运动员都奋力奔向终点，冠军仅以一秒只差领先。运动员中的一个扔标枪的小男孩，标枪划破天空远超越始前记录。在长跑比赛中，一个女孩绊了另一个运动员的脚摔倒了，她站起身咬咬牙继续比赛。最吸引人的接力赛跑让全场观众欢呼雀跃。

运动会结束了，运动员们不仅获得了好成绩，更锻炼了自己的神态和意志。

[高中英语作文：运动会

ChenMo is my desk mate who is a good student in the eyes of classmates andteachers.

She is the first one to get to school every day.

Usually, she spendshalf an hour in learning English that takes us much to remember vocabularies andread the articles. Moreover, she not only focuses on her own study, but alsohelps other students in need.

Classmates like asking her for help, because sheis always ready for help.

However, I prefer to regard her as my friend ratherthan desk mate.

We communicate with each other frequently after class.

We discussour study as well as share our lives. She is desperately interested in playingbadminton, so do I. We would play badminton very Friday after class, whichhelps us relax ourselves as well build our body. It’s so great to have a deskmate that has interest in common.

陈茉是我的同桌，她是老师和同学眼里的好学生。她每天都是第一个到教室的。

通常，她会花半个小时学习英语。英语需要花比较多的时间去记单词和读课文。陈茉不仅专注于自己的学习，也积极帮助其他有需要的同学。

同学们喜欢找她帮忙，因为她总是那么乐于助人。

但是，在我眼里，她不仅是我的同桌，更是我的朋友。课后，我们经常相互交流，讨论学习问题或是分享彼此的生活。她很喜欢打羽毛球，我也一样。我们常常会在周五下课后打羽毛球，这不仅能使我们得到放松，也有益于我们的身体健康。能有一个拥有相同兴趣爱好的同桌真是太好了。

[高中英语作文：我的同桌

导语：里奥·梅西，阿根廷足球运动员。2005赢得了金球奖和金靴奖双项大奖。2008年，阿根廷国奥队夺取了金牌。 2016年1月12日，梅西荣膺年度FIFA金球奖，五度得奖创纪录。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Lionel Andrés "Leo" Messi Cuccittini ( born 24 June 1987) is an Argentine professional footballer who plays as a forward for Spanish club FC Barcelona and is the captain for the Argentina national team.

By the age of 21, Messi had received Ballon dOr and FIFA World Player of the Year nominations. The following year, in 2009, he won his first Ballon dOr and FIFA World Player of the Year awards. He followed this up by winning the inaugural FIFA Ballon dOr in 2010, and then again in 2011 and 2012. He also won the 2010–11 UEFA Best Player in Europe Award. At the age of 24, Messi became Barcelonas all-time top scorer in all official club competitions. In September 2014 he scored his 400th senior career goal for club and country aged just 27. In November 2014, Messi became the all-time top scorer in La Liga, and the all-time leading goalscorer in the UEFA Champions League.

Often ranked as the best player in the world and rated by some in the sport as the greatest of all time, Messi is the first football player in history to win four FIFA/Ballons dOr, all of which he won consecutively, and the first to win three European Golden Shoe awards. With Barcelona, Messi has won six La Ligas, two Copas del Rey, six Supercopas de Espa?a, three UEFA Champions Leagues, two UEFA Super Cups and two FIFA Club World Cups.

Messi is the only player to top-score in four consecutive Champions League seasons, and also holds the record for the most hat-tricks scored in the competition with five. In March 2012 he made Champions League history by becoming the first player to score five goals in one match. He also matched José Altafinis record of 14 goals in a single Champions League season. In the 2011–12 season, Messi set the European record for most goals scored in a season with 73 goals, set the goalscoring record in a single La Liga season with 50 goals, and became the first player ever to score and assist in six different official competitions in one season. In February 2013 he scored his 300th Barcelona goal. On 30 March 2013, Messi scored in his 19th consecutive La Liga game, becoming the first footballer in history to net in consecutive matches against every team in a professional football league. He extended his record scoring streak to 21 consecutive league matches. In March 2014, with a hat-trick against Real Madrid, Messi became the player with the most goals and most hat-tricks in the history of El Clásico. In October 2014, Messi, aged 27, became the youngest player to score 250 goals in La Liga. In November 2014, Messi scored a hat-trick against Sevilla to reach 253 La Liga goals, becoming the all-time top scorer in La Liga. Later that month, he scored his 74th Champions League goal to become its all-time leading scorer.

Messi helped Argentina win the 2005 FIFA U-20 World Cup, finishing as both the best player and the top scorer (with six goals). In 2006, he became the youngest Argentine to play and score in the FIFA World Cup, and won a runners-up medal at the Copa América in 2007, in which he was named young player of the tournament. In 2008, he won an Olympic Gold Medal with the Argentina Olympic football team. At the 2014 World Cup, he led Argentina to the final, winning four consecutive Man of the Match awards in the process, and received the Golden Ball award as the best player of the tournament. In 2013, SportsPro rated him the second-most marketable athlete in the world. His playing style and stature have drawn comparisons to compatriot Diego Maradona, who himself declared Messi his "successor".

The street, people mountain people sea, beaming, against the colorful lights, neon lights, flash; Auto lamp, bright white, various, fantastic! Xinda street, heavy traffic, on both sides, the stall owners are selling beautiful balloon, different colors: red, yellow, blue, green, purple... . Form that vary: some blow grow winding, like a snake, somelike people smile face, there are various kinds of shape. Peoples vehicle is also different from ordinary, the car has a different decoration, like balloons, streamers and flowers and so on. Building, decorating, decorated, from the inside, outsidebusiness busy. Dance, the sky only colorful balloons, added the cheerful atmosphereto the Spring Festival. Most make a person happy that beautiful fireworks, firecrackers. Square, enthusiastic people putting the colorful fireworks, the best and the biggest shot a gun to shoot in the air, spread out a flower. And the flower on the ground, although it is small, power is also quite big, a light, spin, immediately issued a light, opened a little flower. Led adjustment by the smiling, like really, air spinning, then dance, finally finished BiBao shell exploded. A deafening noise, thefireworks blossom, beautiful!

Are happy New Year, Spring Festival is a festival, peoples life will be getting better and better.

I,m so glad to receive your letter, in which you wanted to know about the

Dragon Boat Festival in China.

I feel honored to tell you about it. Celebrated on May 5th in the lunar

calendar, it is a folk festival having a history of more than two thousand

years. Also, it is one of the most important festivals in China.

As for the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival, there are many beautiful

legends, of which the story about Qu Yuan is most widely accepted. Qu Yuan, a

Chinese poet who loved his country deeply, drowned himself in the Miluo River

after his country’s being defeated. To honor him, people in China hold various

activities every year, including eating zongzi and dragon boat racing.

I hope you can come to China to enjoy it for yourself.

The following words were written on the tomb of an Anglican Bishop in the Crypts of Westminister Abbey:

When I was young and free and my imagination had no limits, I dreamed of changing the world. As I grew older and wiser, I discovered the world would not change, so I shortened my sights somewhat and decided to change only my country.

But it, too, seemed immovable.

As I grew into my twilight years, in one last desperate attempt, I settled for changing only my family, those closest to me, but alas, they would have none of it.

And now as I lie on my deathbed, I suddenly realize: If I had only changed myself first, then by example I would have changed my family.

From their inspiration and encouragement, I would then have been able to better my country and, who knows, I may have even changed the world.

下面语句是刻在威斯敏斯特教堂英国圣公会主教坟墓上的话：

在懵懂的童年时期，我们胸怀梦想，相信自己的力量可以改变世界。后来，我们渐渐长大成熟，经历了生活的艰辛，明白了世无定事，感到了自己的渺小，我们的梦想也从“改变世界”降格成“改变家庭”，最终定位成“改变自己”。但我们实在不该低估自己，因为在我们改变自己的同时也潜移默化地影响着家庭，而作为世界的一分子，从某个角度来讲，我们也正改变着世界。

郭文斌的获奖小说《吉祥如意》我最初拿到手时一口气读了三遍，后来又陆续读了几遍，每读一遍，都有新的感受。这不仅仅是因为我与作者是同乡熟悉的缘故，更重要的是作品的意境紧紧地吸引了我。

作品描述的是端午节的清晨五月六月一家人按照传统习俗采集“吉祥如意”的过程，小主人公五月和弟弟六月被母亲煮在瓦罐里发酵的甜醅子“香”醒以后，“就呼地一下子从被筒里翻出来”，便开始了一早晨短暂而充实愉快地节日之旅。于是，插杨柳、上供、吃花馍、绑花绳、戴香包、上山采艾（其实还应当有抹雄黄和点高高山）等民俗活动便被抽丝剥茧般地徐徐绽开。童年的端午节便在《吉祥如意》里徜徉。

《吉祥如意》给我最大的感受是：心灵美升华为语言美，语言美构建了意境美，意境美揭示了生活美、人性美。

由于“美在心里”，所以满目皆是春风，皆是祥和。“甜醅发的，就像是好日子一样”，“不用吃，光闻着就能让人醉”；“长长的巷道里，散发着柳枝的清香味”；巷道里和山上的雾也是香的，就连跪在雨后“湿漉漉的”地下上供、磕头，“膝盖和额头挨到上面凉津津的，有种让人骨头过电的爽”。戴香包，绑花绳，吃花馍馍，采艾，作者都用了浓墨重彩，描绘出了一幅乡村节日风情画，让人在宁静恬淡中感受热烈狂欢，在清凉肃穆中体会温馨祥和，在纯朴含蓄中领略隽永庄重﹍﹍而这些感悟，集中表现在以下几组情节中。

戴香包香包（我们家乡叫荷包）本来是未过门的准媳妇绣好送给婆家人的，五月还小，没有订亲，就由娘代替。但为了及早培养“女靠一个巧”，娘就让还是幼女的五月戴了她的大顶针学做香包，以致因不熟练针扎破了她的小手。香包里装了棉花，棉花上撒了香料，这样的香包“既是鼓的，又是香的”，六月为了品味香气，竟抢夺了姐姐五月的香包尽情地吸息，“鼻孔一下一下张得更大了，窑洞一样。”他真感觉到“能把鼻子香炸”。香包对于节日里农村的孩子来说显得太重要了，六月因为看到姐姐的香包而想起自己忘了放在家里的香包，“一下子就崩溃了”，他不顾姐姐的感受，抢夺了她的香包，后来想象到爹给娘往口里吹香气可能用的是自己的香包时，断然要放弃采艾这样重要的事情回家去取。然而，他随后却大大方方地把姐姐的香包送给了女孩子白云。白云接到香包就“有点担当不起的样子”。而姐姐五月“胸前没有了香包一下子暗淡下来，就像是一个被摘掉了花的花杆儿，看上去可怜兮兮的。”

绑花绳端午节孩子在手腕脚腕和脖子上绑了花绳，就“像是布下了百万雄兵”，蛇蝎就会绕道而行，所以姐弟俩选购花花绳就格外地用心，“每人手里攥着两角钱，蜜蜂一样在这儿嗅嗅，那儿闻闻”。他们认为“街的新媳妇最漂亮”，因为它的“一个大胳膊上就戴了那么多的花绳儿”。当他们“手里各拿着五根花绳儿”的时候，“那个美啊，简直能把人美死。”绑了花花绳的胳膊是神圣的，就是在上山采艾的路上，他们也“不停地把手腕上的花绳亮出来看。”当他们真正遇到蛇时，尽管心里发虚，以致分别在手心和裤管上留下了紧张恐惧的体液，但在整个过程中还是以腕上绑的花绳作为心理防线为自己壮胆。

吃花馍馍花馍馍是端午节的特有食品。作品中有两段精彩的描写。我们倒过来先说它的做工吧？“花馍馍当然不同于平常的馍馍了，是娘用干面打成的，里面放了鸡蛋和清油，父亲用面杖压了一百次，娘用手团了一百次，又在盆里醒了一夜，才放到锅里慢火烙的。一年才能吃一次，嚼在口里面津津的，柔筋筋的，有些甜，又有些淡淡的咸。让人不忍心一下子咽到肚里去。”另一段是娘为姐弟俩分花馍馍，“先从中间的绿线上掰开，再从掰开的那半牙中间的红线上掰开，再从掰开的那小半牙中间的黄线上掰开，给五月和六月每人一牙儿﹍﹍”寥寥数语，把花馍馍近乎神圣的“不平常”描绘得入木三分。小时候，因家里生活困难，记得嫂嫂就是这样为我们姐弟叔侄分花馍馍的，好象作者就是在写我们。

采艾艾的药用功能十分广泛，有祛寒、中和、防腐、止痛、化瘀等疗效，相传还能避邪。在端午节凌晨带露采集的最好。这一点，作者是了解的，所以他用了相当的篇幅进行了细致入微地表述。这一点无疑是“吉祥如意”主题的点睛之笔。作者采用了拟人化的手法，以“太阳蛋蛋”和“露水蛋蛋”来形容晨光下露珠的纯洁、美好，也昭示生命的短暂。看见艾一株株倒在自己的手上，天真无邪的六月“就觉得有无数吉祥如意扑到他的怀里，潮水一样。”这里也写出了“黛玉葬花”般的意境，当六月“觉得这珠露儿太可怜”还是下不了手采割时，五月笑着提醒他：“如果你觉得它们可怜，你可以先把它们摇掉啊，让它们慢慢睡去，你再动手啊。”也许是因了姐姐的这句富有人情味儿的话，作为弟弟的六月才倏然生发出一种想象：姐姐就像一株艾。如果她真是一株艾，那么该由谁来采呢？这种依恋的怪怪的思维，正好与前面的“等我考上干部后，就让我姐嫁给我”相呼应。

《吉祥如意》中的亮点太多了，在有限的篇幅里是难以尽述的，许多评论家已经有过精辟地评论，这里就不再赘述。我倒想竭诚为这篇得意之作找点毛病，与作者和广大读者商榷交流。美玉尚有微瑕，《吉祥如意》也有不尽如意的地方。具体表现在以下三个方面。

一、一些措辞牵强，不附和人物身份

作品中的主人公五月和六月，尽管作者没有交待她和他的具体年龄，但从姐弟俩同睡一个被窝和他们天真的思想和举止来看，他们的年龄不会超过六岁，或者更小。这样小的年龄再加上身居偏僻农村，孤陋寡闻的环境，他们的思维和活动空间应该是很有限的，有些感受他们是体会不出来的，即使有过体会感悟，也不可能用丰富的词汇表达出来的。如绑花绳时，“六月就觉得绑了花绳的胳膊上像是布下了百万雄兵。”他们还没有上学念书，父母亲也没有文化，“百万雄兵”这个词语不可能出自六月的意念。后面还用了“崩溃”、“过电”、“委曲”、“美女蛇”、“崇拜”、“深不可测”、“遗憾”等只有有知识的大人才能感悟和说出口的词汇。如果是作者的直接表达倒也罢了，但上述词汇全都是通过小主人公的思维和意念表达出来的。当六月把艾株上的露珠用手摇掉后，他感到是自己的手“让这些美死去”时，就“突然觉得它不单单是一只手，它的里面还藏着一些深不可测的东西”。“深不可测”出自儿童六月的思维也是牵强。“过电”这个词在日常生活中比较常用，通常来形容身体的某个部位在接触某种现象时爽快的感觉，这是大人们常用的词语，六月用这样的词也不洽切。

二、一些词语和词义重复

不必要的重复和雷同是作品创作之大忌。《吉祥如意》中雷同的词语也有几处。一是上面提到的“过电”。一处是，当六月按照父亲的指点跪在湿漉漉的地上磕头时，膝盖和额头挨到上面凉津津的，“有种让人过电的爽”。另一处是，六月在父亲的指导下杵香料，当他领悟了杵香料的技巧时，“激动得头皮一阵阵过电。”一个小孩子他身体没有接触过电击电疗，也就不会有“过电”的感觉，况且“过电”也不爽，他一再产生“过电”的感觉不尽合理。二是对于花馍馍的表述。在如何做和怎么吃花馍馍这两个环节上，在不到百字的篇幅里，作品两次强调了“这么好看的花馍馍，让人怎么忍心下口啊”和“让人不忍心一下子咽到肚里去。”这样的类似雷同的情节和词语还有几处。如果是作品人物语言或行动举止，这样的表达是无可质疑的，因为有的人他在语言上行动上总是习惯成自然地重复自己的话和行动。但在一篇不长的作品中，作者还是应该严而又谨，惜墨如金，避免不必要的雷同与重复。

三、有一处不合时宜的“硬伤”

在作品的第三节，东家在桌子上供了甜醅子和花馍馍时，“还有新下来的梨和大枣，在蒙蒙的夜色里，有一种神秘的味道。”谁都知道，梨和大枣是秋果，一般在八九月份成熟，不可能在端午节“新下来”。这是一处“硬伤”。退一步说，如果上面的其它两点还可以找理由“忽悠”的话，这处“硬伤”却是没办法处理的，它像一块瑕疵一样醒目地镶嵌在美玉之中，尽管影响不了美玉的质底，但也让人感觉不尽其美。

笔者无意鸡蛋里面挑骨头，是抱着认真负责的态度“班门弄斧”。作者文斌是笔者的同乡和曾经的同事，还很年轻，今后创作的路子还很长，他不仅要以获得“鲁讯文学奖”为总结和荣耀，而更应当以此为里程碑、新起点，再次或多次获此殊荣，摘取其它文学奖项桂冠也应该是他刻意追求树立的目标。所以才“吹毛求疵”，提醒作者本人和所有作家，创作时精益求精，尽量不留遗憾。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.

导入句：

At present, Currently, Recently, Nowadays, a critical issue/problem/phenomenon has become the concern/attention of the public / has been brought into the focus / has aroused a wide concern of the public.

It is becoming increasingly popular for people to….. There is a growing tendency these days for students to…..

With the rapid/amazing/remarkable/steady development (advance, improvement, progress) of….., great changes have taken place.

With the increasingly rapid process of globalization (urbanization, internationalization, commercialization), ……

At present, nowadays, currently, there has been a heated (popular) discussion/debate on (over, concerning) …….

Scientific researches have shown that ……. According to a survey,…..

Plentiful evidence has shown/proved that?.. 中心论句：同意

Frankly speaking, I am in favor of / agree with …..

As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the point of ….. From my point of view, I support the statement above.

Straightforwardly, I cannot accept the point of……, and I strongly support the statement of …..

提高英语写作分数的88个词组

1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges 5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that? 6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention 8.不可否认 It is undeniable that?/ There is no denying that? 9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate 10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue 11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12.一些人?而另外一些人? Some people? while others? 13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally, 14.就?达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on?

15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons 16.双方的论点 argument on both sides

17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in? 18.对?必不可少 be indispensable to ? 19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes: 20.?也不例外?be no exception

21.对?产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on? 22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。 23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in 24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement 26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation 27. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision 28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden 30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration 31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective 32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33. 对?有益 be beneficial / conducive to? 34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society 35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for? 36.综合素质 comprehensive quality 37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach 39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to?

40. 应当承认 Admittedly,

41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty 42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of? 43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information 44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写) 46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly 49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology 51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue 52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion 53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence 54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way 55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice 56. ?必然趋势 an irresistible trend of?

57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition 58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest 59.长远利益. interest in the long run

60.?有其自身的优缺点? has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。 63.对?有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to 64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

65.跟上?的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of ?

66.采取有效措施来? take effective measures to do sth 67.?的健康发展 the healthy development of ? 68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。 No garden without weeds。

69.对?观点因人而异 Views on ?vary from person to person。 70.重视 attach great importance to? 71.社会地位 social status

72.把时间和精力放在?上 focus time and energy on? 73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge 74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally

75.有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to?

76. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal

77. 可以取代“think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden 79.优先考虑/发展? give (top) priority to sth。 80.与?比较 compared with?/ in comparison with 81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary。 82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of

83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water 84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities 85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress 86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that? 87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding 88.充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

范文：

Travel is a very good means of broadening a persons perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures， meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much， you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences， but also be aware of the vastness of nature.

Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience， which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later， you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences， thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.

整理:

The fields his study， nature was his book.

Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive， but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle， which， although slow， can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.

We all know that the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar is the Dragon Boat Festival! In my home, grandma will always be busy making zongzi.

In a few days, grandma will go to the supermarket to buy glutinous rice and rice dumplings, then put the dumplings in the pot to boil, and then brush them out with the brush, and wait until the Dragon Boat Festival day to bring the dumplings.

On the day of Dragon Boat Festival, my mother and I were still asleep. Grandma was calling zongzi. Grandma had prepared several kinds of stuffing, including jujube, peas and pork. I like jujube most, but my mother likes nothing to eat. "Do it!" Grandma said. My mother and I smiled, because my mother is the first time I have zongzi, certainly not the package. But I still want to learn from my grandmother and try it before I know it.

My mother and I pick up their leaves, according to grandma taught step by step. Because it was the first time to make zongzi, and the mother smiled and said, "how do we do it? It looks like a simple one. Its stupid to do it." I listened, looked at the shapeless dumpling in my mothers hands, and laughed loudly, just like mine. No corner of the corner, Mrs. Grandma encouraged us: "the first is not good, the second will surely improve." In this way, mother is better than a bag, but I still havent learned it.

I will not cook zongzi to cook zongzi, I will put the dumplings wrapped by grandma in the pot, add water, and then burn it up. After a while, a zongzi fragrance floated out, Im waiting for my favorite dumplings dates. I had an unforgettable Dragon Boat Festival. I wish I could be happy every year.

英语作文：

Of the fifth year, it is one of the most important traditional festival - Dragon Boat Festival in China.

On to this day, every family will eat rice dumplings, drink realgar wine, hang calamus, wormwood leaf, also held a rowing dragon boat game in some places...

On the Dragon Boat Festival, there are a very popular story. Have a great patriotic poet in ancient China, named qu yuan. In AD 278, on the day of the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, qu yuan under the despair and grief, in old luo, when a local people, immediately go fishing boat and always amiable form of dongting lake is always not see the body of qu yuan.

In order to show their grief, people swing the boat rivers, thereafter becomes for the dragon boat race. The people were afraid of river fish eat qu yuans body, from their home to rice into the river, lest the fish and shrimp spoiling of qu yuans body. Then formed the custom of eating zongzi...

According to the above story, these are all in memory of qu yuan and form a kind of custom. There are lots of traditional culture in our country, as a Chinese, I also to learn more about these splendid ancient culture.

China has many rich and colorful traditional culture, extensive and profound, has a long history. Because I grew up very love to eat dumplings, so the "Dragon Boat Festival" is very impressive.

中文翻译：

每年的五月初五，是我国的一个重要传统节日——端午节。

每逢到这一天，家家户户都要吃棕子、喝雄黄酒、挂菖蒲、艾叶、有些地方还举行划龙舟比赛……

关于端午节，有一个流传很广的故事。中国古代有一位伟大的爱国诗人，名叫屈原。在公元278年，农历五月初五的那天，屈原在绝望、悲愤之下，投入旧罗江，当地的百姓闻讯后，马上划船去打捞，一直行止洞庭湖始终不见屈原的尸体。

为了寄托哀思，人们荡舟江河之上，此后就变成为龙舟比赛。百姓又怕江河里的鱼吃掉屈原的身体，就纷纷从家里拿来米糰投入江中，以免鱼虾糟蹋屈原的尸体。后来就形成了吃粽子的习俗……

根据以上故事来看，这些都是为了纪念屈原而形成一种风俗习惯。我国还有许许多多的传统文化，作为一名中国人，我平时还要更多地去了解这些灿烂古代文化。

中国有许许多多丰富多彩的传统文化，博大精深，源远流长。由于我从小非常爱吃粽子，所以对“端午节”的印象非常深刻。

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