初三英语作文30篇(热门20篇)

According to the WHO，2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand

from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public

places both inside and outside from May 1 on.

As is known to all, smoking is bad for peoples health. It may cause many

diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to

us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to

us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers

a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to

stop it. From now on, everyone of us should follow the law and say no to

smoking.

Its polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to

us.

Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who

is impolite. Its important for us to be polite. We should say “thank you” to

parents when they cook for us. We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes

for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out

questions ,we should say “thank you” to them. When we get bad grades and the

teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say “thank you”. When someone

open the door for us,we should say “thank you”. We should say “thank you” as

often as possible.

If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more

beautiful.

Dear editor,

亲爱的编辑：

I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs andlearning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

我看过校刊上的很多文章。我发现几乎校刊上所有的文章都是关于校园里的一些日常琐事。这对于我们了解整个校园的情况是很好的。但我想如果有一些关于时事和学习方法的文章一定会更好。时事可以开阔学生们的视野，了解世界。共享学习方法可以帮助一些学生找到最适合自己的学习方法。我希望你会觉得这些建议是有用的，并尽落实。

李磊

今天，妈妈让我一个人在家，我一个人十分烦，于是，我认认真真的看着妈妈的手机。

Today, my mother let me alone at home, I a person is very tired, so, I seriously looked at the mothers mobile phone.

妈妈的手机是白色的，白色的屏幕外内的边缘有着两条紫色的线条。显示出日期的圆形的边边有几颗小珍珠，小珍珠会发出红的光，白的光、紫的光、青的光、橙色的光、黄的光、蓝的光……五彩缤纷。美丽极了!长方形的屏幕挤在紫色中。

My mobile phone is white, white screen of inner and outer edge with two purple line. Show a few small pearls round the edges of the date, little pearl will emit red light, white light, red light, green light, orange light, yellow light, blue light...... A riot of colours. Very beautiful! Rectangular screen crowded in the color purple.

有一次，我一不小心把妈妈的手机上的一种功能玩环了，我心里十分害怕，所以一直没有告诉妈妈，终于有一天，我鼓起勇气去告诉妈妈，妈妈不但没有骂我，而且对我说了一句话：“知道自己做错事会认错，才是以个诚实的好孩子!”

Once, I accidentally put a function on the mobile phone to play the mother ring, I felt very scared, so has not told his mother, finally one day, I plucked up the courage to tell my mother, my mother did not scold me, and said to me: "know they have done something wrong will admit, is an honest boy!"

妈妈的手机有时尚，又美丽!

Mothers mobile phone fashion, and beautiful!

Computers have played an important part in our life. They can do most of the things people can do. Through computers, we can acquire knowledge and get the latest news. Computers have made the communication with our friends convenient and easy.But some young people are so interested in playing games on line that they even drop out of school. It is not the computers fault.It depends on the users. We should make good use of computers.

How to be Stronger

with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. everyone wants to have a strong body and good living habits. how can we do that?

first, get up early and keep doing exercises in the morning every day. its a good beginning of the day.

second, pay attention to daily diet and have balancedfood.it can ensure your health.

besides these, the most important thing is to be calm and good-natured. hope you will be happy forever.

with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. people wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. how shall we do?

first, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.

then have balanced food to ensure our health. eat more vegetables.

being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. hope you will be happy forever.

[How to be Stronger初三英语作文

I think smiling is as important as sunshine. Smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day. If you aren’t happy, you can smile, and then you will feel happy. Someone may say, “But I don’t feel happy.” Then I would say, “Please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily. You will really be happy again.”

You don’t like crying, right? So you must prefer smiling, because you know smiling will let people forget everything unhappy. Every day, we see teachers or students and say, “Hi/Hello! How are you?” At the same time, you are smiling, right?

Smiling can let you have more friends. With a smile, people will know you’re a kind person. They will talk with you, so you will have more and more friends.

So I say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth. It will give you happiness.

I have a small but warm family. There are only four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. We live in a city of Guizhou.

My father isn’t very tall. He has short straight black hair. And he always wears a pair of glasses. I think he is clever and kind. He likes watching TV and playing chess with me.

My mother is kind of short. But she is funny. She often tell jokes. Also she is sporty. She likes tennis,ping-pong and volleyball. She is good at cooking. She can cook kinds of different food. And we like eating them.

My sister is 6 years older than me. Now she is a university student. She can speak Chinese,English and a little Japanese. She usually teaches me English when we have free time. She also likes music. She is good at singing songs.

I wear a pair of glasses, too. My favorite subject is math and English. I think they’re interesting and easy for me.

I’m funny, too. I often make my parents and sister smile.

Everyone looks happy everyday in my family. And I love my family.

[关于初三英语优秀作文：My family

In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Miss, leave a long lament, I hope that the thoughts like the sky, forever bright......

At dusk there is a helpless figure, she is waiting for what. Who is that? Thats me, my friend. Will you come back?

In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Missing, leaving a long lament, I hope that the air color, forever bright.

紧张了一学期的学生们迎来了寒假。但对初三的考生们来说，距中考还有短短的几个月，寒假是一个查漏补缺的好机会。在这短短的三周时间里，怎样制定复习计划，怎样在有限的时间里提高效率?

通过这学期的几次月考，发现了学生们普遍存在的一些问题，针对这些问题在寒假里进行针对性的训练是很有必要的。

1、单词掌握得不错，却不会在填单词的句子中运用，失分很多。

2、能记住重点句型，但不会灵活变换句式。

3、了解语法，却不会做时态填空。

4、能读懂短文，却做不对选项。

5、知道如何写作文，却在写作时漏洞百出。

6、选择填空马马虎虎。

7、听力很差，失分很高，尤其是分析题。

所以，针对存在的问题，为避免以后重现类似错误，为复习考试奠定一个好的基础，特做计划如下：

1、加强听力训练。希望同学们每天听一套跟中考要求一样的听力材料。就像中考听力一样要求自己。听完后核对答案。看看失分在什么地方。然后合上书再听一遍，锻炼自己的听力。坚持听上一假期，肯定有收获。

2、培养良好的写作习惯。每天背上一篇好的范文，写上一篇类似的作文，用上里边的好词好句，对于连词成句部分，不妨每天写上5个连词成句，摸索里边的规律，在做这个题的时候，先看看里边有什么词组，什么句型，这样写起来就不会摸不着头绪了，集中练上一段时间会有提高的。

3、养成阅读的好习惯。由于阅读在考试中的比重很大，所以要加大阅读的力度。每天都要练习两个阅读两个完形。做完后核对答案，对做错的题分析原因，对里边出现的生词或短语要记录下来，有必要的要背过，以此来扩大自己的词汇量。此外，要限定时间以此来提高阅读的速度和能力。

4、强化重点题型训练。针对单选题和完形填空题错误较多的情况，同学们最好在寒假里把老师上课讲的专项练习好好看一遍，把老师讲的重点例题弄懂弄明白。每个学校都有一本复习指导的书，把书吃透了，里边的题弄明白了就可以了。题要精不要太多。把自己常错的题写在一个纠错本上，经常看看巩固巩固。

5、增加词汇量。有的学生平常的词汇量很少，在做阅读完形的时候看不懂文章，短时间增大词汇量不太容易。但假期是个好机会，可以集中来记忆。可以把几本书拿来把上边重要的黑体字部分的四会单词分期分批地记忆，每单元的重要词组也要背过。再配合着题做一些词型变换的题，学会灵活运用。

6、做几套中考模拟题。要重视往年中考题，在假期里给自己规定时间来做几套中考模拟题，做做往年的中考题有特别的作用。因为每年的中考命题难度相对稳定，风格相对一致，做中考题有助于同学们摸清中考命题的“套路”，明确复习方向，最后找出自己的不足之处，作为下一次的努力目标。

This afternoon, we play a game called Family Tree. This game is very interesting. Im very interested in it. Our teachers family is very large. She has many brothers and sisters.

But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too. When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.

When I was a child, I cant undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no bread house. Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think of this things. I will cry I cant use words to say I love them.

I love my family!

班主任评语：Excellent! Whenever you write with your heart and soul and pour your emotions, it will be the most beautiful work in the world!

I like to make friends, I can share my happiness and sorrow with friends.

Friends are very important part of our lives, without them, I will be very

lonely. I learn it when I was very small. It was Friday, I went to school to

join the English contest, before I went into the classroom, I found I did not

bring the admission card, I felt so worried, without admission card, I could not

walk into the classroom. My friend Li looked at me and asked me what happened, I

told him the truth, then he asked me to stay here and he rushed to our

classroom. Ten minutes later, he came back with my admission card. I was so

thankful, friends are very important.

This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating abanana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly. No sooner had I done thisthan I realized that I had done something bad to our environment. And maybe someone wouldstep on it and tumbleover. I must pick it up. Thinking of these, I asked father to stop. I jumpedoffthe bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. Seeingthis, father praised me and I felt very happy.

In future I will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.

上学路上

今天早晨，爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上，吃着香蕉。吃完后，我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境，或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒，我必须把它拾起来。想到这些，我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车，跑回去拾起香蕉皮，并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些，爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。

将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境，更多地为他人着想。

Have been to my classmates say my house is so big, indeed, my house is very big, because this way, more migrant workers they need to live in a house, we will let out most of the houses they live.

Entered the door is my small courtyard, often do homework, I will be with sisters downstairs rope skipping, shuttlecock kicking, playing games and so on.

Courtyard on the right side of the gate is the place where we eat, next to the stairs to the second floor, is the place where the family is the most warm. Entered the door of the sitting room, is a guzheng, guzheng class a lesson once a week, at home to do homework every day his mother would call me practice a few times. There is a very big TV in the living room and sofa, wall posted a lot of my testimonials from kindergarten to grade three.

Then take you into my bedroom, rely on a chest by the door is, beside the wardrobe is a single person sofa, next to me again big, soft big bed, bed above cross-stitch hang a picture of a little girl, is my mother help me. My big bed is my desk, there is my desk neat above reference books, as long as a free, I will be holding a book sitting on the bed with relish, it seems, are often attracted to the story in the book, as if I was that the hero, reference books beside is a desk lamp, as long as I do my homework, it will be with me, because it doesnt want to let me feel lonely. Is I to her pen container.

This is my home, welcome to you come to my home!

来过我家的同学都说我家好大啊，确实，我家很大，因为这边外来务工人员比较多，他们需要住房子，我们就把大部分房子租给他们住。

一走进大门就是我家的小院子，平常做好作业，我都会跟楼下的姐姐们一起跳绳，踢毽子，玩游戏等等。

院子右边大门进去就是我们吃饭的地方，旁边的楼梯上二楼，就是我们一家人最温馨的地方了。一走进客厅的门，映入眼帘的是一台古筝，古筝课一星期上一次课，在家做好作业每天妈妈会叫我练习几遍。客厅里还有一台非常大的电视和沙发，墙壁上贴了好多我从幼儿园到三年级的奖状。

接下来带你们走进我的卧室，靠门旁边是一排衣柜，衣柜旁边是一张单人沙发，再旁边就是我又大又软的大床了，床上面挂了一幅小女孩的十字绣，是我妈妈帮我绣的。我的大床旁边是我的写字台，写字台上面整齐的放着我的课外书，只要一有空，我就会捧着一本书坐在床上津津有味的看起来，经常会被书里的故事吸引进去，仿佛我就是那个主人公，课外书边上是一盏台灯，只要我做作业了，它都会陪着我，因为它不想让我感到孤单。旁边是我自己亲手做的笔筒。

这就是我的家，欢迎到你们来我家做客哦!

一、以形式主语it引导的句型。

句型1. It happened(chanced) that +clause. = sb. happened /chanced sth. = sb. did sth. by chance. 如：

It happened that he was out when I got there. 当我到那儿时，碰巧他不在。

句型2、It seems that sb. do/ be doing/ have done/ had done= Sb. seems to do/ be doing/ have done/ had done 如：(还有动词appear可这样使用)

It seemed that he had been to Beijing before.好象你以去过北京。

二、定语从句：

句型1、由as引导的非限定性的定语从句。如：

As we have known, he is a most good student.众所周知，他是个很好的学生。

句型2、由which引导的非限定性的定语从句。如：

He is a professor, which I have been looking forward to becoming.

他是个教授，那是我一直盼望的职业。(因为先行词professor是表示职业的名词，因此引导词用which，而不用who。(注意：关于which和as之间的比较请看语法的定语从句部分。)

三、让步状语从句

句型1、No matter what / which / who / where / when /

whose+从句，+主句。注意从句中的时态一般情况用一般现在时态。如：

No matter what you do, you must do it well.

四、条件状语从句

句型1、When / So long as / As long as / Once +从句，+主句。(从句也可以放在主句之后。)如：

As long as you give me some money, I will let you go.只要你给我一些钱，我就让你走。

句型2、主句+on condition that+从句。如：

I will go with you on condition that you give me some money.我和你一起去的条件是你给我一些钱。

句型3、主句+unless+从句.(注意：由于unless本身是否定词，所引导的从句的谓语动词用肯定。)如：

I will go there tomorrow unless it rains.我明天去那儿除非下雨。

五、原因状语从句

句型1、主句+in case+从句。(in case表示以免)如：

I will take my raincoat in case it rains.我要把雨衣带上以免下雨。

句型2、主句+due to / because of / owning to / + the fact that +从句。如：

He did not come to school because of the fact that he was

ill.由于他有病了，所以没有来上学。

六、时间状语从句

句型1、When / While / As +从句，+主句。(关于它们之间的区别请看语法。)如：

When I was in the country, I used to carry some water for you.当我在农村时，我常常给你打水。

句型2、主句+after / before +从句. 如：

They hadn’t been married four months before they were

devoiced.他们绘结婚不到四个月就离婚了。

We went home after we had finished the work.我们做完此工作就回家了。

七地点状语从句

句型1、Where +从句，+主句. 如：

Where there is no rain, farming is difficult or impossible.哪里没有雨水，种庄稼是很难的或者是不可能的。

句型2、Anywhere / wherever+从句，+主句. 如：

Anywhere I go, my wife goes too.无论我去哪儿，我的妻子也去哪儿。

八、目的状语从句

句型1、主句+in order that / so that +从句.如：www.yingyuzuowen.cn

I got up early in order that I could catch the first bus.我起得很早，以便能赶上早班车。

九、结果状语从句

句型1、主句+so that+从句. 如：

It was very cold, so that the river froze.天气很冷，因此河水结冰了。

句型2、So+形容词/ 副词+特定动词+主语+…+that+从句.

So interesting is this book that I would like to read it again.这本书那么有趣，我想再读一遍。

十、比较状语从句

句型1、The +形容词比较级……，(主句)the +形容词比较级+……如：

The sooner you do it, the better it will be.越早越好。

句型2、主语+谓语+as +形容词原级+as +被比较的对象. 如：

He is as busy as a bee.他非常忙。

希望以上的初中英语句型可以帮你在写作上解决一个大忙。

节日作文 关于春节的英语作文带翻译一：

The Lunar New Year

The Lunar New Year is a great occasion to the Chinese people. It lasts about the first four days of the year， during which people do not work except for the workers on duty. Students do not go to school， and shops are closed.

Several days before the new year， people begin to prepare. Farmers kill pigs， sheep， cocks and hens. City dwellers b

uy meat fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned； coupletsare posted on the doors. Colourful lanterns are hung at the gate. On the eve of the new year， each family has its members gatherd together and eats a family reunion dinner. After the meal they watch TV until the clock strickes twelve. Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers and other fire works to welcome the new year. On the first day of the new year， almost everyone is dressed in his or her best. When people meet on the way， they say to each other "Happy New Year".

Friends and relatives pay new year calls and gives presents to each other. Children indulge themselves in games.

关于春节的英语作文带翻译一：

农历新年

农历新年是一个伟大的时刻对中华民族来说。它大约持续了四天的第一年，在这期间不工作，除了值班的工人。学生不上学，和商店都已关闭。

前几天在新的一年，人们就开始准备。农民杀了猪，羊，公鸡和母鸡。城市居民买肉鱼和蔬菜。房子干净; coupletsare门上张贴。色彩缤纷的灯笼挂在门口。

在新的一年的前夕，每个家庭都有自己的成员一起吃gatherd家人吃团圆饭。吃饭后，他们看电视，直到时钟strickes十二。然后，每个家庭衬托小爆竹等消防工程，长字符串迎接新年。在新的一年的第一天，几乎每个人都穿着他或她最好的。当人们在路上相遇，他们互相说“新年快乐“。亲戚朋友拜年，并给出礼物给对方。孩子沉迷于游戏本身。

The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house. On the

evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily. At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away.

What a great festival!

中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日，在八月十五号。在节日来临的前几天，家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子，把房子装扮得漂漂亮亮的，灯笼挂在屋前。 晚上有一顿美餐，离家在外工作的人也要回来团圆。晚饭后，人们点亮灯笼，一般是红色的圆灯笼。孩子们会高高兴兴地玩他们的玩具灯笼。 晚上月亮又圆又大，人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特别的食品——月饼。人们在一起回顾过去，展望未来。据说天上有一条龙，它要把月亮吞下去。为了保护月亮，孩子们要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑。

中秋是个美好的节日啊!

Spring Festival

My best festival is Spring Festival. It is in Janurary or February. It is the most important festival for the Chinese people. On that day everybody dresses up. First they extend greetings to their parents. Then each child will get money as a New Year gift, wrapped up in red paper.

People in northern China will eat jiaozi, or dumplings, for breakfast, the shape of the dumpling is like gold ingot from ancient China. So people eat them and wish for money and treasure.Burning fireworks was once the most typical custom on the Spring Festival. I like spring festival very much. Its my favourite holiday.

我最喜爱的节日是春节，它在一月或者二月。对于中国人来说这是最重要的节日。在那天，每个人都认真打扮，他们会像父母问好，然后每个孩子会得到红包作为新年礼物。

北方人喜欢早上吃饺子或者汤圆。饺子的形状像中国的元宝，他们吃饺子来期盼财源广进。燃放烟花也曾一度是春节的传统习俗。我非常喜欢春节，它是我最喜欢的节日。

Lantern Festival

Lantern Festival is a Chinas traditional festival. It is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year.

I,antern Festival is one of the biggest holidays in China. Several days before Lantern Festival, people begin to make lanterns. Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many, other things. While making

lanterns people usually write riddles on lanterns. On the eve of Lantern Festival, all the lanterns are hung up.

On Lantern Festival people go outside to have a look at the lanterns and guess the riddles on the lanterns. Perhaps you call see some wonderful folk performances,Dragon Dance and Yangko. Everything is very interesting and everyone is very happy. Our life is rich and varied.

元宵节

元宵节是中国的一个传统节日。通常在阴历年的第一个月的第十五天庆祝。

This year, people across China carried out a variety of activities to learn from Lei Feng. Lei Feng is a great man, it’s well –known to us that Lei Feng is really friendly, he always helps other people. He works very hared, and he is willing to make other people fell warm. As students, I think we can learn a lot fromn Lei Feng . We should try our best to help others, just like Lei Feng , and we’re supposed to study hard. In a word, we should learn from Lei Feng.

[初三优秀英语作文：Learn from Lei Feng

I like to watch fictional movies and novels, because I am always attracted

by the unpredictable plots, which opens my vision. In the fiction movies, aliens

come to the earth and try to destroy the world. Human being have to fight

against the aliens with their wisdom. I can see the big world from these

stories. It triggers my interest to explore the world. At the same time, I gain

a lot of knowledge about the earth. I believe that aliens must exist in another

galaxy. When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we

can know more about the outer space. I have the great passion to explore the

universe.

The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard

for the purpose to enter a good university. In the first year, I made a lot of

new friends. All of them were so excellent that I wanted to learn from them. As

the second year has come, I felt great pressure. My scores went up and down and

I felt so worried. I told myself that I should find a way to relieve pressure.

Listening to music was a good way. I would sing with the music and shake my

body, which made me forget everything but the joyous music. Second, I would like

to talk to my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the

shop and then shared our secrets. When we laughed out loudly, all the annoyance

would disappear.

A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生，有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友，将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了，和我俩个好友的交往也会少了，所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧：一晃俩年过去了，我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初，你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清，你时常问我，我也耐心的告诉你，就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过，一起哭过，吵过架生过气，还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴，我永远也不回忘记。

易媱：在我的印象中你的脾气很好，也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉，我就会跑过去捏你的脸，你总是温柔的一笑，这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴，没有朋友就没有今天的我，真的感谢朋友分支持，也许我们会分开，但是缘分。

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。