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332写长城的英语作文初三80词
全文共 731 字
+ 加入清单The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon, It winds its way
from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last
it reaches the sea. Its the longest wall on the earth, also one of the wonders
in the world.The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years. The first part was
built during the Spring and Autumn Period.
All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by
hand.Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came
into existence.Since then, it has been rebuilt and repaired many times.
Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world, has taken on a new look.
Its visited by large numbers of people from all parts of the country and the
world.
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篇1:Howtokeepfit初三优秀英语作文
全文共 629 字
+ 加入清单As we can know,health is very important,but how to keep fit?
First,you should have a balancet diet.For example,you can eat less junk food and more vegetables.Next,doing sports is good for our health.If you like playing basketball,you can play it with your classmates after school.If you like riding bikes,please ride a bike to school every morning.Then,many students are stressed out all the day.So they should learn to relax themselves.Last,learning to communicate with qther people is very important,so you must learn it.
These are the easiest way to keep fit. I hope every student can have a good health。
篇2:初三关于长城的英语作文
全文共 1352 字
+ 加入清单The Great Wall, the worlds cultural heritage, is also the Chinese and the worlds only, majestic, magnificent, is enormous, engineering hard building, one of is also one of the wonders of the world, overlooking the astronauts in space to earth is the only building the Great Wall.
The Great Wall is the symbol of our country, it rolling, winding, east of shanhaiguan, west to jiayuguan, passed in liaoning, hebei, tianjin, Beijing, Inner Mongolia, shanxi, shaanxi, ningxia and gansu nine provinces, municipalities and autonomous regions, 7300 km, the walls of the Great Wall have different height, average 7.5 meters, the Great Wall and something important - beacon tower, beacon tower stood a man, if you have the army aggression, in the fire on the beacon tower, this is a reminder of the army have resistance.
The Great Wall is like a leap of the dragon, because we are all descendants of the dragon, the Great Wall is the pride of our Chinese people, also is our Chinese nation ancestors with sweat, blood and of wisdom, and Im proud of it.
长城——世界文化遗产,也是中国和世界唯一的,雄伟的,壮观,规模浩大,工程艰苦的建筑之一,也是世界奇迹之一,航天员在太空上可以俯瞰到地球唯一的建筑物就是长城。
长城是我们祖国的的象征,它连绵起伏,曲折蜿蜒,东起山海关,西到嘉峪关,经过了辽宁,河北,天津,北京,内蒙古,山西,陕西,宁夏和甘肃9个省,市和自治区全长7300千米,长城的城墙高低不一,平均7.5米,长城还有重要的东西——烽火台,烽火台上都站着一个人,如果有军队来侵略,就在在烽火台上放火,这就提醒了自己的军队有抵抗的准备。
万里长城就像一条飞跃的巨龙,因为我们都是龙的传人,长城就是我们中国人的骄傲,也是我们中华民族的祖先用汗水,心血和智慧换来的,我真为它感到自豪。
篇3:初三英语作文ThatDay-160字
全文共 833 字
+ 加入清单I am now a student of Dongzhou Middle School, but I still remember that day when I was in a primary school.
That day, the weather was so bad. When school was over, it began to rain. All of us looked very worried, so our teacher let us go home at once.
When I went out of the school gate, I saw my father standing there. I went to him at once. My father had a raincoat, because hed just had a meeting and he went to school as soon as the meeting finished, so he had no time to return home. When he saw me, he took his raincoat off and gave it to me. I didnt want to receive it. He looked at me and said, Take it. I had to put on the raincoat, but my heart was not still. I cried, and I couldnt let myself stop. Since that day, I knew my father loved me. Oh, I cant forget that day all my life.
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篇4:我的英语老师的初三作文900字
全文共 1023 字
+ 加入清单对我初中生涯影响很大的老师就是阎丽老师,她的姓很恐怖,她总是自称自己是阎罗王,要管住我们这群小鬼。
她是个很美的老师,有一种古典美女的气质。记得我刚进安外的时候,第一次离开家去外面读书,刚开学军训的时候,阎老师总是对我慈爱的微笑,她总是担心我们这群孩子军训累了,热了,时常跟着我们军训的列队,教官下命令休息时,我一个孤零零地坐在草地上,阎老师和教官聊天,然后我听到他们的交谈,阎老师对教官说我很像她之前认识的一个孩子,然后就朝我笑笑,当时心里说不出的暖,也许阎老师不曾记得,但我至今难忘。
因为我的小学不学英语,所以我的英语底子不好,进入安外有点跟不上,阎老师就放弃中午休息的时间给我补习,从最基础的教起,不耐烦的一遍又一遍,我清晰的记得当时办公室里就是我和阎老师,她就坐在我身边教我,当我一个知识点了解的时候,她就满足的笑笑,然后摸摸我的脑袋,那种近似母爱的感情让我至今心里充满温暖。
当然,阎老师凶的时候还真的很可怕(阎老师,得罪啦,呵呵)记得那时我和一个男生和另外两个一个女生负责早上扫楼梯,我和另外一个男生刘涛总是早早过来打扫,等到女生来的时候我们都已经打扫好了。我们心里很不平衡,所以,有一天早上我和刘涛都没扫,等女生扫,最后女生以为我们已经扫好了,也没有打扫。最后,阎老师发现楼梯很脏,就让我们值日生出去扫地,两个女生和刘涛都出去扫地了,就是我坐在座位上读书,因为我平时做的最多,心里很不平衡,所以有点火大就没去。阎老师最后知道我也是当天的值日生而没有出去一起扫地,就很气愤的直接在班里很多人面前发我的火,还把我叫到她办公室谈话,她很凶地问我为什么不和他们一起扫地,我心里很委屈,就说之前几乎都是我一个在扫地,两个女生几乎都没扫过,我的心里不平衡就没出去扫地。说话的时候,眼泪都是含着的,因为确实觉得很委屈。阎老师就对我说,老师一直很看重你,觉得你身上有一股正气,当她说到这里的时候,我哽咽的难受,心里更难受。然后又说“吃亏是福”我知道她对我的要求远远胜过其他人,我也不忍心让她失望,所以很努力地做人,很努力地做事。
还记得她的一句话对我影响很大“今日事,今日毕!”这么多年来,我一直谨记这句话,可以说这句话已经渗透到了我的生活,今天的脏衣服,我也从来不留到明天洗,呵呵,有点傻哦。
很感激有一个这么善良的老师引我英语入门,更重要的是那些品行影响我至今。阎老师,好久不见了,你还好吗,希望你幸福。还有,阎老师,知道吗,你笑起来比凶的时候美多了。
篇5:以爱为题的初三英语作文
全文共 821 字
+ 加入清单Every child is surrounded by the deep mother love. However, we often turn a blind eye to the love. One day I deeply felt the love.
One day I hurried home for lunch after school, because there would be an exam in the afternoon and I had expected to go back to school early to prepare for the exam. But when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt unhappy. When the dishes were served, I forund none I like. I ran out of my house angrily and wanderde on the street for a while,hungry. Then I walked to school.
When I got into the classroom, I saw a lunch box on my desk. One classmate told me that it was my mother ther that had brought it here.After opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes was moist with tears.
Mother gave me her love without asking for return, How deep mother love is!
篇6:Aidealfriend初三英语作文
全文共 906 字
+ 加入清单If you have many friends, your life might be more colorful.But it won’t be easier.Because you’ll have lots of things to do or think about.Things will make you feel happy,but they’ll also make you feel sad,and sometimes they’ll even make you get in crazy.
As you know,friends can be divided into bad one and good one.As an ideal friend,first,he must be your best friend,and he must be one of the most important persons in your whole life.Second,a real ideal friend will shave his happiness and sadness with you,and you should learn to share with him,of course,you’re allowed to have your own secrets.Third,if you’re in trouble,he will give you a hand in time,sometimes you are supposed to face the difficulties together and defeat them together.
Some people will meet their ideal friends and some people will not.If you meet yourideal friend,you’llfind that your life is changing quickly.
篇7:初三英语作文大全
全文共 686 字
+ 加入清单Im now living in a small house with my parents. Life for us is hard but
happy. I must study hard so that I can buy a big new house some day. I call it a
dream house.
It has three floors with five bedrooms, three bathrooms, two big dining
rooms and two living rooms. When my friends come to visit me, I will have enough
bedrooms for them. Well have a good time. Besides that, we will have a swimming
pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house. In the morning, my
parents can do some exercise in the garden. The air must be very fresh. When we
feel tired, we can have a swim in the swimming pool. Life will be easy for
us.
Ill study harder than before so that the dream can come true.
篇8:初三英语作文-HotPot
全文共 950 字
+ 加入清单Do you know what dish is the most popular in the cold winter in China? I know it s hot pot. Hot pot is a Chinese tasteful folk dish. No matter in the north or in the south, people like hot pot very much and every region has its local features. For example, Sihuan hot pot is hot while Guangdong hot pot is famous for its fresh. Usually, there is a metal hot pot in the middle of table. When the soup in the pot is kept simmering, dishes are put into the pot. Beef, mutton, fish and vegetables are the main dishes. It is extremely popular in winter because it can keep the dishes warm all the time. And the atmosphere is hot, too. Friends or relatives sit down together to have a feast. It s a good way to relax.
在我国,你知道冬天什么食物最受欢迎吗?我知道是火锅。火锅是我国的民间美食,不管是北方还是南方,人们都爱吃火锅,而每个地方的火锅也有自身的地域特点。比如,四川火锅是辣的而广东的火锅则以味道鲜美著称。通常来说,吃火锅时,会在桌子的中间放一个金属锅,当锅里的汤料沸腾时,就可以把菜放到火锅里了。牛肉、羊肉、鱼和蔬菜都是火锅的主要食材。火锅在冬天大受欢迎是因为它能一直保持热度,并且吃火锅的气氛很热烈,亲人朋友团座一桌,享受大餐,这是一种很放松的就餐方式。
篇9:初三英语作文带翻译:我的朋友
全文共 1366 字
+ 加入清单A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.
Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.
Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.
Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.
一个人的一生,有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友,将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了,和我俩个好友的交往也会少了,所以想写写她们。
黄婷慧:一晃俩年过去了,我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初,你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清,你时常问我,我也耐心的告诉你,就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过,一起哭过,吵过架生过气,还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴,我永远也不回忘记。
易媱:在我的印象中你的脾气很好,也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉,我就会跑过去捏你的脸,你总是温柔的一笑,这笑容中包括的有友谊。
一路上都有朋友的陪伴,没有朋友就没有今天的我,真的感谢朋友分支持,也许我们会分开,但是缘分。
篇10:初三年级英语作文:工作不是一切
全文共 466 字
+ 加入清单Working is important.We work to support our family and to promote ourselves.Therefore in order to prove his ability, someone work with all his might.
工作很重要。我们工作是为了养家糊口,也是为了自我发展。有的人为了更好地证明自己,就拼命地工作。
But the result might be that he probably lost many precious things,such as health and his family.So working is not everything of ones life.Besides working, we should enjoy life more and pay attention to our health.
到头来却有可能失去很多东西,比如健康、家庭。因此工作绝不是生命的全部。除了工作,我们还要学会享受生活,珍视身体。
篇11:关于初三英语写作技巧汇总
全文共 1728 字
+ 加入清单一、认真审题,切中题意
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容,在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
二、围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
三、语言通顺,表达准确
(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用
自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:①外表特征:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等;②内心境界:
glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等;③感情描写:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等;④动作描写:come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:①表示并列关系的过渡词:and,aswellas,or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词:but,yet,however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词:first,andthen,
finally,after,before,atlast,atthattime,later,inthepast,immediately,inthe
meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词:near(to),far(from),inthefrontof,beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词:inthesameway,justlike,justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词:but,still,yet,however,ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词:also,and,then,too,inaddition,moreover,again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词:because,since,then,thus,otherwise,so,therefore,asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词:forexample,infact,inthiscase,for,actually等。
四、不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
五、锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:(1)句型多样化,不要i(we)……到底,使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。
六、书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
七、检查错误
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。
篇12:初三年级关于世界环境日的英语作文
全文共 1946 字
+ 加入清单On June 5, 1972, the United Nations was held in Stockholm the United Nations conference on the human environment, the meeting adopted the declaration of the human environment, and puts forward 5 June every year would be a "world environment day". In October the same year, the 27th United Nations general assembly adopted a resolution to accept the proposal. World environment day, is the United Nations to promote global environmental awareness, improve government attention to environmental problems and take action to one of the major media.
The United Nations system and governments, every year on June 5 this day to carry out various activities to promote and stress the importance of protect and improve the human environment.
The United Nations environment programme (unep) announced at the beginning of each year the world environment day theme, and published in the annual world environment day annual report on environmental conditions. During this period of Chinas state environmental protection administration issued the environment bulletin.
From June 5, 1985, China began to commemorate the world environment day activities, with "youth population, environment" as the theme. Since then, every year on June 5, the country hold commemorative activities. 1993 Beijing was elected to the celebration of the city, its theme is "to break the cycle of poverty and environment". Released in April 2014 revision of the environmental protection law of the Peoples Republic of China, article 12: for environment day on 5 June every year.
1972年6月5日联合国在瑞典首都斯德哥尔摩召开了联合国人类环境会议,会议通过了《人类环境宣言》,并提出将每年的6月5日定为“世界环境日”。同年10月,第27届联合国大会通过决议接受了该建议。世界环境日,是联合国促进全球环境意识、提高政府对环境问题的注意并采取行动的主要媒介之一。
联合国系统和各国政府,每年都在6月5日的这一天开展各项活动来宣传与强调保护和改善人类环境的重要性。
联合国环境规划署在每年的年初公布当年的世界环境日主题,并在每年的世界环境日发表环境状况的年度报告书。中国国家环保总局在这期间发布中国环境状况公报。
中国从1985年6月5日开始举办纪念世界环境日的活动,以“青年人口,环境”为主题 。自此之后,每年的6月5日全国各地都要举办纪念活动。1993年北京被选为举办庆祝活动的城市,其主题是“打破贫穷与环境的怪圈”。2014年4月修订公布的《中华人民共和国环境保护法》第十二条:每年6月5日为环境日。
篇13:初三关于中国梦的英语作文
全文共 1709 字
+ 加入清单In the past twenty years, China has faced three American presidents, but till coming to Yale today, I never realized that China really just faced one university. Although, through these three presidents, I understand that the quality of Yale graduates is not so even.
在过去的二十年中,中国一直在跟美国的三任总统,但是今天到了耶鲁,我从来没有意识到,中国真的面临一个大学。虽然,透过这三位总统,我的理解是,耶鲁大学的毕业生的质量甚至是不。
Let me begin my main subject and let me give it a title, called “My Story and the Chinese Dream Behind It”. I want to talk about five particular years. The first is 1968. That year I was born. But it was also a chaotic year for the world. In France, there was this huge street disturbance, and in America, too. Then President Kennedy was assassinated. However, I really did not cause all of these! But that year what we remember more was the assassination of Mr. Martin Luther King. Although he fell that year, his words “I have a dream” stood up, not only stood up in America, but across the whole world.
让我开始我的主题,让我给它一个名称,叫《我的故事以及背后的中国梦”。我想谈五年份。第一个是1968。那年我出世。但它也是一个混乱的一年中为世界。在法国,有巨大的街头的骚乱,在美国,太。然后美国的总统甘乃迪遇刺。然而,我真的没有造成所有这些!但是那一年我们更应该记住的是马丁先生路德金遇刺。虽然那一年他倒下了,他说“我有一个梦想”的站了起来,不仅在美国,而且在全世界。
But sadly, not only for me, but for almost all Chinese, we did not know such a dream. It was hard to describe each Chinese as having his or her own dream. China and America were so far apart, no less far apart than the Moon and the Earth. But I didn’t care about any of that. All I cared about was could I have a full meal. Clearly, I was born at a very inconvenient time, not only for China, but even for the world, there were problems.
但可悲的是,不仅是我,但几乎所有的中国人,我们不知道这样一个梦想。很难描述每一个中国人拥有自己的梦想。中国和美国是到目前为止分开,没有比月球与地球相距远不如。但我不在乎那些。我关心的是我能吃上一顿饱饭。显然,我是出世在不方便的时间,不仅对中国,而且对世界,有问题。
篇14:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选
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+ 加入清单导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。
要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。
一、词汇选择——标新立异
在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。
1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。
2)在周末我们做很多作业。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。
3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。
在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。
二、结构造句——与众不同
在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。
1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。
2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)
2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)
4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)
3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。
5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。
A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、布局谋篇——独具匠心
在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。
2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。
3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。
4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。
写作技巧:
一、要善于模仿
对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。
最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。
二、要灵活变通
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。
三、要细心观察
要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。
比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
篇15:初三年级优秀英语作文friendship
全文共 1931 字
+ 加入清单I never thought ourFriendshipcould be so long. We are classmates, not only are still friends. We was like peas and carrots, no words do not say, learn from each other, to long for short.
Name is ling-ling jin, she is my good friend, she is fat, black hair like a black waterfall down vertically, a pair is eyes, his mouth with a knife. She commanded, considerate, in her heart is how to think how to say, serious and responsible. Speak is a disadvantage, but she is hurt others self-esteem.
We have two years of friendship, can be said to be my friend stay together life learning the longest time of friends. But sometimes, the cup of friendship, we sometimes jokes, but dont to heart. Until that time, we continue to cold for three days, meet dont say "hello", also no longer together, become a stranger, with indifference. Several times we all want to apologize, to lose me, she in and out of a person, very lonely, she and I justdont willing to give up this friendship. After days of ideological struggle, I decided to be friends, although the fault is not in me, we still made up. I often think: true friendship is to pass the test. From now on, we cherish the friendship
True friendship, it is purity transparent ice and snow, the cold the unity, the more tight.
True friendship is a clear spring water, not only to the column into the withered life vitality, but also can wash the stain of the mind
Original all stronger after the test of friendship, will never be apart.
我从来都没想过我们的友谊会如此长。我们不仅是同学,还是好朋友。我们形影不离,无话不说,相互学习,以长补短。
她是我的好朋友,叫金玲玲,她微胖,乌黑的头发像黑色的瀑布垂直下来,一双水灵灵是眼睛,嘴边有一条刀痕。她心直口快,体谅别人,在她心里是怎样想就怎样说,认真负责。不过她有个缺点,就是有是说话伤别人的自尊。
我们已两年的友谊,可以说是我的朋友当中待在一起生活学习最长时间的朋友。但有时,友谊之杯也会裂,我们有时开玩笑,但都没放在心上。直到那一次,我们持续三天冷漠,见面也不打招呼,也不再形影不离,成为陌生人,以冷漠相待。有好几次我们都想道歉,失去我以后,她进进出出都一个人,很孤独,我和她都舍不得放下这段友谊。经过几天的思想斗争,我决定和好,虽然错不在于我,我们还是和好如初。我经常想:真诚的友谊是要经过考验的吧。从此,我们更加珍惜这个友谊
真正的友谊,是冰雪纯洁透明,越冷越团结得越紧。
真正的友谊,是一涧清澈的泉水,不但给即将枯萎的生命柱入活力,而且还能洗涤心灵的污点
原天下所有人的友谊经过考验之后更加坚固,永不垮。
篇16:初三关于我的童年英语作文
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+ 加入清单Many people will be unforgettable, memorable things, unforgettable person, memorable day, a class to remember... I was the most memorable of my childhood. Childhood like a cup of milk, contains the fun of childhood. Childhood is like a stream, flowing childhood friendship; Childhood is like a song, the song with our happy childhood. How is not memorable to me?
My childhood was spent in liao home for transshipment. The scenery there is beautiful, green grass, green flowers, fresh air, we all immersed in the village in the mountains, compose a colorful picture. We have a few friend, three group, two group of son, play in the process of that sweet voice, echoed across the sky, wandering the midterm, for a long time cant stop!
During my childhood, I often pick wild flowers on the hill, looking for the bamboo shoots with friends, play games, back childhood that a few interesting childrens song...
很多人都会有难忘,难忘的事,难忘的人,难忘的日子,难忘的一节课……我最难忘的是我的童年。童年像一杯牛奶,蕴含着童年的乐趣;童年像小溪,流淌着童年的友谊;童年像一首歌,歌里有着童年我们的幸福。怎能不令我难忘?
我的童年是在廖家畈度过的。那里的风景格外的美,青的草、绿的花,新鲜的空气,我们整个村庄都沉浸在这青山绿水中,构成了一幅多姿多彩的画卷。我们几个小伙伴,三个一群,两个一伙儿,玩耍的过程中那甜美的声音,回响在整个上空,徘徊期中,久久不能停歇!
童年时,我经常和小伙伴们一起山上采野花、找竹笋、做游戏、背童年那几首生动有趣的儿歌……
篇17:InformationAge初三英语作文
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+ 加入清单It s the age of information now and information is very important in the society.we need verious of information to live a normal life.we need to know the lastest news ,listen to the weather forecast,learn about the newly published books and many other things we are interested in and want to know.
There are many way of acquiring information,for example we can watch TV,listen to radio, read newspaper and magazines and go on line which is to most popupar ,convienent and effective way now.
Living in such an age of information,what should we to to face up to the challenge of it?I think we should try our best to learn as much knowledge as we can and try to master the new techonology.
篇18:初三学生要不要参加体育的英语作文
全文共 540 字
+ 加入清单Dear classmates:
Im Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.
On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and its a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons. And its possible to be hurt while doing sports.
篇19:我的梦想初三英语
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+ 加入清单Every little girl will have her dream aboutprince. I always dream of a half-blood prince coming to me, just like the snowwhite and Cinderella in the fairy tale. I hope there will be a prince wearingwhite clothes to ask me to live happy life with him. And in the following days,I really have a happy life. Why I want a half-blood prince not just prince? Ithink half-blood prince would be more handsome. Hehe.
篇20:初三关于低碳生活英语作文
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+ 加入清单Low-carbon start small, "as long as I dont save, mom and dad will speak of the words in my ear. For this reason, I decided that I really want to be a low-carbon life. Remember once, mom after using the mask, just ready to throw away, just let me see, I hurriedly shouts to prevent a mother:" mom, cant throw it away! "Mom heard after, immediately stop. I ran over and took the mother in the hands of the mask. Then said to his mother:" mom you have finished using the mask cant throw, said on television the mask after use can wipe furniture, not only a bright shine, and its fragrance.
"After listening to his mother, smiled and patted my head say:" my daughter really understand low carbon life. "I cant agree in front of dad, in a few days ago, because our wardrobe very damp, mom and dad are there, then I thought of my grandma often use newspaper mat in the wardrobe, she told the newspaper can be moistureproof, still can absorb peculiar smell, so I went to the newspaper, but used the newspaper all let me away, now also really didnt have the newspaper in the home, the somebody else all say" books to time square hate less "but I want to say today" newspaper when hate nothing ". Well, by the way, today I thought I saw daddy came home from work with a newspaper, I hurriedly found the father, "dad you back a newspaper today? "Dad puzzled nodded, I cant wait to say:" quick contribution out, I have an idea. "
When dad see me the paper pad in the wardrobe, harm my dad cant find newspapers and buy one. Now, I walk to school every day, no longer let father motorcycle send me; Every time I go shopping bring your own bag... I want to live a low-carbon life. Low carbon starts from me, lets construction of a new civilization, happiness, charm, donggang.
低碳从小做起”,只要我不节约,爸爸妈妈就会在我耳边说起这句话。 为此,我决定真的要做个低碳生活的执行者。 记得有一次,妈妈用完面膜之后,刚准备要扔掉,恰巧让我看到了,我连忙大喊一声阻止妈妈:“妈妈,不能扔掉!”妈妈听见了之后,立即停下。我飞快跑过去,夺下了妈妈手中的面膜。然后对妈妈说:“妈妈你用完的面膜不能扔,电视上说面膜用完之后可以擦家具,不仅擦得亮,而且还有香味。
”妈妈听了后,微笑着拍拍我头的说:“我女儿真的懂得低碳生活了。” 在爸爸面前我也不能服输,就在前几天,因为我们家的衣柜很潮湿,爸爸和妈妈都无计可施,这时我想到了奶奶常常用报纸垫在衣柜里,她说过报纸可以防潮,还可以吸收异味,于是我就去找报纸,但是以前用过的报纸都让我扔掉了,现在家里还真的没有报纸,人家都说“书到用时方恨少”今天我却想说“报纸用时方恨无”。嗯,对了,今天我好像看见爸爸下班时拿回来了一张报纸,我连忙找到了爸爸:“爸爸你今天是不是拿回来一张报纸?”爸爸疑惑不解的点点头,我迫不及待的说:“快贡献出来,我有办法了。”
当爸爸看我把报纸垫在衣柜里时,害的我爸爸找不到报纸又买啦一张。 现在,每天上学我都步行,再也不让爸爸摩托车送我;我每次逛街都自备口袋……我要过真正的低碳生活。 低碳从我做起,让我们一起来建设文明、幸福、魅力、新东港吧。