秋雨用英文怎么写（通用20篇）

新任的台湾地区领导人蔡英文：

您好！

话说您在选举时，便声称“要独立”，台湾人民大部分反映的都很响！果不其然，在马英九退位后，您直接同日本、美国交好，决心脱离大陆。

但“台独”对您和台湾有什么好处呢？

在您胜任之前，台湾人民与大陆交往甚好，不少大陆人飞往台湾欣赏美景，也有不少台湾人在大陆落地生根安居乐业，您为何要打破这种平静美好呢？

当然，您会觉得您不是大陆人，而是台湾人，但是你不能连累整个台湾岛。

您难道没有发现美国、日本虽然和你有来往，但他们却没有和您走的太近吗？在他们眼中，您和台湾就一棋子，台湾根本不是大陆的对手。

没错，台湾是后来才回归大陆的，你们虽然一直不认为自己是中国人，要独立，但大陆却一直把你们当做自己人呐。

你再想想，台湾如果真的独立了，中国身为“世界第二大经济体”，你们的日子会好过吗？

但如果您和台湾回归大陆，大陆必定以礼相待。虽然在短时间内台湾民众会产生怨念，说你“骗了他们”，但日子长了，他们就会感受到这样做带来的好处。

两岸的关系更进一步，是台湾和大陆都希望看到的。

大陆和台湾就像兄弟一样，之间不应该有缝隙。

大陆和台湾就像母子一样，大陆张开双臂，如台湾想回到母亲的怀抱，大陆会立刻送上火热的胸怀，迎接台湾这个浪子迷途知返，扑入母亲怀中。

回来吧，台湾，蔡英文，你想想。

此致

敬礼！

大陆的一名小学生：葛蕗萌

The Cobbler and the Banker

By La Fontaine

A cobbler passed his time in singing from morning till night;it was wonderful to see,wonderful to hear him;he was more contented in shoes,than was any of the seven sages.His neighbor,on the contrary,who was rolling in wealth,sung but little and slept less.He was a banker;when by chance he fell into a doze at day-break,the cobbler 12 awoke him with his song.The banker complained sadly that Providence had not made sleep a saleable commodity,like edibles or drinkables.

Having at length sent for the songster,he said to him,

"How much a year do you earn,Master Gregory?"

"How much a year,sir?"said the merry cobbler laughing,"I have reckon in that way,living as I do from one day to another;somehow I manage to reach the end of the year;each day brings its meal."

"Well then!How much a day do you earn,my friend?"

"Sometimes more,sometimes less;but the worst of it is,-and,without that our earnings would be very tolerable, a number of days occur in the year on which we are forbidden to work;and the curate,moreover,is constantly adding some new saint to the list.

The banker,laughing at his simplicity,said,"In the future I shall place you above want.Take this hundred crowns,preserve them carefully,and make use of them in time of need."

The cobbler fancied he beheld all the wealth which the earth had produced in the past century for the use of mankind.Returning home,he buried his money and his happiness at the same time,No more singin;he lost his voice,the moment he acquired that which is the source of so much grief.Sleep quitted his dwelling; and cares,suspicions,and false alarms took its place,All day,his eye wandered in the direction of his treasure;and at night,if some stray cat made a noise,the cat was robbing him.

At length the poor man ran to the house of his rich neighbor;"Give my back." said he,"sleep and my voice,and take your hundred crowns."

参考翻译

皮匠和银行家

拉.封丹

一个皮匠从早到晚在唱歌中度过。无论见到他本人或听见他的歌声都使人觉得很愉快。他对于制鞋工作比当上了希腊七圣还要满足。

于工作把他吵醒了。银行家郁郁寡欢地抱怨上帝没有睡眠也制成一种像食品或饮料那样可以买卖的商品。后来，银行家就叫人把这位 歌手请来，问道：“格列戈里师傅，你一年赚多少钱?”

“先生，你问我一年赚多少钱吗?”快乐的皮匠笑道：“我从来不算这笔帐，我是一天一天地过日子，总而言之坚持到年底，每天挣足三餐。”

“啊，朋友，那么你一天赚多少钱呢?”

“有时多一点，有时少一点;不过最糟糕的是一年中总有些日子不准我们做买卖，牧师又常常在圣徒名单上添新名字，否则我们的收入也还算不错的。”

银行家被皮匠的直率逗笑了，他说：“我要你从今以后不愁没钱用。这一百枚钱你拿去，小心放好，需要时拿来用吧。” 皮匠觉自己好像看到了过去几百年来大地为人类所需而制造出来的全部财富。他回到家中，埋藏好硬币，同时也埋葬了他的快乐。他不再唱歌了;从他得到这种痛苦的根源那一刻起，他的嗓子就哑了。睡眠与他分手;取而代之的却是担心、怀疑、虚惊。白天，他的 目光尽朝埋藏硬币的方向望;夜间，如果有只迷途的猫弄出一点声响，他就以为是有人来抢他的钱。最后，这个可怜的皮匠跑到他那富有的邻居家里说：“把你的一百枚钱拿回去，还我的睡眠和歌声来。”

[皮匠和银行家英文作文欣赏

We can get a Chinese New Year lucky money every year,but not all the reasonable use of it.I will get a part of to my parents,the other one is by their own bank.My parents also support me to do so.

In my opinion,this is a reasonable approach.Because many peoples self-control is not good,if all the money on his own,it will quickly spend it.But if he do not have any money,and no way to buy want to buy things.Therefore,it is to help parents keep a part of the money,other part of the money to retain our hands.

If my parents deposit New Years money in the bank,Ill spend in college when it as my living expenses.

天空乌云密布，天地之间一片昏暗却十分安静。我知道，这是暴风雨前的宁静。小燕子仿佛感觉到了老天的气场，变得焦躁不安。

忽然，远方的天空上出现了一道白光，紧接着，震耳欲聋的雷声随及而来。几声令人毛骨悚然的巨响后，天空下起了冰冷的雨水。这雨水，仿佛是老天感动的泪水，又仿佛是怜悯的.泪水，夹杂着欢乐与忧伤。

远处的夕阳在雨水的衬托下显得更加有意境，变得异常的红。与那些苍翠挺拔的杨树融为一体，仿佛一片茂密的树林。脚下的小草贪婪的吸吮这天地给它的恩赐。小花则在暴风雨中顽强的挺直身腰，在与暴风雨做抗衡。

雨停了。雨后的空气是那样清新，是那样让人心旷神怡。世间的万物经过雨水的洗礼后，变得更加迷人，更有着它们本该有的活力。

大自然的一切都是那么精美绝伦!

DearLucy,

Iam so glad to receive your letter and happy to know that you have a pleasantholiday. Please send my sincere wishes to your parents. I have a happy holidayjust like you do. This holiday, I visited to Guangzhou with my parents.Guangzhou, also known as the Flower City, there are many flowers along the bothsides of streets. It’s very beautiful. Besides, the environment is clean andthe climate is comfortable. There are many skyscrapers in Guangzhou, especiallyin the downtown. We visited to many tourist attractions. They are all worthvisiting. I hope you can visit there personally one day. You must like it.

Bestwishes.

Sincerely yours,

Alva

Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December.It is a very happy day

for many boys and girls .Before the term ends in some schools ,the children act

a nativity or “birth” play,showing how Jesus was born in a stable.

On the twenty-fourth of December,all children are very excited.Usually they

are sent to bed early so that their parents can get the presents ready.The

younger children think that Father Christmas will come down the chimney or

fireplace ,so they hang up a sock for him to put presents in.The greedy ones

even hang up a pillow-case or a sack to try to get more presents.Later that

night,Father or Mother will put presents in the sock,and leave others at the

side of the bed.

On Christmas morning,the children wake up very early.Some even turn on the

light at two oclock,and most of them are awake by six oclock although it is

not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.Children

look for their presents,and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared.At

about one oclock in the afternoon,the Christmas dinner is brought in.The turkey

or chicken is quickly eaten.Children search in their Christmas pudding for new

coins which are hidden in it.The rest of the day is full of games and eating

until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel very happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

幸福

幸福在我们的生活中很重要。实际上，如果你用心去做，幸福就一直在你身边。

我永远不会忘记一件事。有一次，我在数学考试中得了一个不好的分数。我很羞愧，不敢见我的父母。但当我回家晚了，我的父母就知道发生了什么事，他们对我说:“没关系，我的孩子。记住，当你需要帮助时，我们总在你身边。我们相信你下次能做得更好。永不放弃!”我被感动了，下定决心要更加努力学习。”

我感到很幸福。每当我遇到麻烦，我都能感受到父母的爱。我想成为我父母的好孩子。

[以幸福为题的英文作文

Iam a primary school student. In school, I have four classes in the morning andtwo in the afternoon. Usually, the classes are over at about half past four. SoI have much time to have fun. We students have many activities after class. Forexample, I like playing badminton and table tennis. Some of my classmates likeplaying basketball and football. There is a gym in my school. It’s a popularplace, too. My school encourages students to do exercise after class. So myschool provides us many places and equipment. I like taking part in variousactivities after class. It makes me happy.

我是一名小学生。每天我早上我有四节课下午有两节，下午四点半下课，所以我有很多时间去玩。在学校里，我们也有很多课后活动。我喜欢打羽毛球和乒乓球，我的同学喜欢打篮球和踢足球。我们学校还有一个游泳池，很多人喜欢去那里游泳。学校鼓励学生多参加课后活动，所以在学校里有很多锻炼的场地和器材。我喜欢参加课后活动，从中我能得到很多快乐。

[课后活动英文作文

The earth is our home.We should be kind to it.How does our earth turn better?Here are some tips.Firstly,we should know the important of environmental protection.Secondly,as a student,we shouldn’t litter paper and empty bottles everywhere.We should keep our environment clean and tidy.Thirdly,we can plant more kinds of trees in our spare time,they can make fresh air.

In a word,protecting the environment is very urgent.It is everyone’s responsibility.We should try our best to make our earth better and better.

Recently, I read a great book,Childhood,which is written byGorky. It’s a novel based on the experiences of the author’s tragic childhood, telling the stories about the author between his three to ten years old. Aliocha has a bad childhood. His father and mother die in his early ages, so that he has to live with his great-grandparents. His great-grandfather is bad tempered and his uncles hate him very much. Great-grandmother is the only person who cherished him. Besides, Aliocha also feel the pureness, friendship by his playmates. Through this book, we can see a poor, ugly society, but we also can see an adamant, compassionate little child who constantly pursuits of good things in life. It’s hard to imagine how he can stick to the faith of life in such bad environment. As for us, we live in a much better environment; of course we should cherish our happiness and be strong to face difficulties in life.

秋天的雨是温和的，颇像一位慈祥的老人，在用温暖的双手抚摸着你。它烁烁地闪着，像一片落叶般飘下来，在空中跳出优美的旋律，让人痴醉；像一颗晶莹的珍珠般闪亮，美丽，让人无可挑剔；像一串随风摇曳着的风铃，发出悦耳的音响，仿佛听到了大自然的声音。秋天的雨中夹杂着一丝香甜的气息，我喜欢秋天的雨……

秋天，雨的声音是丰富多彩的。就像一场永远也开不完的演唱会，吱吱作响的声音像“灵泉”一般涌了出来。这股“灵泉”不知为何总会流进我的心中，慢慢的，慢慢的，你脚下仿佛踩上了一片悠悠的白云，雨点成为了一位优雅的少女。我和她共舞起来——迈着轻盈的步伐，背上好像长了一双翅膀，飞着，舞着，飞着，舞着……雨声就像一群小精灵在云头上唱着动听的小曲。

雨，并不像银针一般刺在脸上，它是柔软的。像丝巾划过脸颊般滑嫩，像刚出生的婴儿的皮肤般有弹性。这，还是绵绵细雨。当雨大起来时，整个城市都像被一张硕大的蜘蛛网笼罩着，一滴滴雨水凝聚在这张网上，开始往下掉——哗啦哗啦，叮咚叮咚……又别有一番趣味。

雨中的城市，跟晴天的城市是不一样的，雨中的城市是一片灰蒙蒙的，整个城市仿佛披了一层水幕，云是淡灰色的，是被墨染了一样的颜色，它不像山雨一样绿绿的。似乎是一位画家在描绘着一幅清秀雅静的画儿一般，还时不时滴了几滴墨，人们行色匆匆地回家，一把把花色雨伞，像盛开的花朵，五彩斑斓，绚丽多彩。又为着单调的颜色增了几笔红颜，怎能不说美呢？

静静的，天空擦干了泪水，风也不再生气。几缕阳光透过还不忍离散的乌云，那种颜色，是夕阳下山时，整个天空金灿灿的颜色，是见过一次便再也不像忘却的颜色吧。这场秋雨，是我心灵的鸡汤，它就是一种全新的动力，是世界上最独特的雨，是我无法形容的雨……

自然界，雨是一种绚烂绮丽的色彩。有蒙蒙的细雨，有狂风怒吼的暴雨，有电闪雷鸣的阵雨。而我是淅淅沥沥的秋雨。

淅淅沥沥、淅淅沥沥，我霏霏的洒落在树林里。树枝被我打得微微发颤。低处的小坑里。刚刚积了一层水，我落下去泛起了一圈圈波纹。随着一阵风，我由小变大。“滴答滴答”豆大的我落下来，风吹的花草树木左摆右摆。他们都在我的滋润下尽情地跳舞。树叶上的我像坐滑梯一样滑到石头上，发出清脆的“叮叮当当”的响声。我飘呀飘，落到森林的池塘里，泛出一圈圈小小的波纹，青蛙们在岸上欢乐的跳着，“呱呱呱”的叫声此起彼伏，鱼儿们在水面上吐着泡泡发出“啪啪啪”的声音，好像唱着一曲快乐的林间小曲。“哗啦哗啦”整个森林经过我的洗礼，花草树木的色彩层次多的难以辨认，有墨绿，翠绿，有淡清，金黄，也有火一般的红色，在雨中，所有的色彩都融化在水淋淋的嫩绿之中，绿的耀眼，绿的透明。

“刷刷刷，刷刷刷”瞧，空中的我被风吹得斜斜的，我一会儿撞到了高楼大厦的墙壁上，一会儿撞到了屋檐上又被弹了起来，一会儿顺着窗玻璃流下来，像个感叹号. 我落在光溜溜的马路上，溅起一朵朵晶莹剔透的水花，好漂亮！又似一朵漂亮的莲花。我落在公园的湖里，泛起了一圈圈小小的波纹。一群群鸭子在湖上快乐的游着，仰着头仿佛接受着这光荣的洗礼。小鱼从水里跳跃出来摇着尾巴，仿佛也在欢迎我的到来。湖里有一只小船发出“滴滴”的鸣声，似乎是在呼唤游客，快来享受这清爽的秋雨。放学了我又赶快飘到校园里，有雨伞的小朋友们撑开了伞，整座校园一片花的世界。

我洒落在大地的每一个角落，他们期待着我，盼望着我，我给人们带来了欢乐、希望、幸福。

我最喜欢秋天的雨。

秋天的雨在我眼中是特别的，他远不如夏雨的热烈，粗犷，也不如冬天的雨，化妆之后成雪花的模样，秋天的雨是沉静的，为什么说它是沉静的呢？因为在秋高气爽的秋天伴随着甘甜的果实，迎来人们望着红彤彤的果实开心的样子，哪会记得秋雨怎么样呀？

就算这样，秋雨也不生气，这时的他就像一位端庄而又沉静的夫人，当人们想起黄灿灿的种子和红彤彤的果实需要放在需要放在山坡上晒干时。雨他来了，他来得又快又猛，他变得不再像之前那个端庄而又沉静的妇人了。

看来这突然让人们措不及防，没有半点准备。当半夜人们正在梦乡之中。被雨水的声音滴答滴答的吵醒。他们的心情是愤怒的。因为雨打扰了他们的睡眠，影响到他们明天工作的质量。可是他们有没有想过，究竟是什么让雨的情绪变得如此暴躁？这样的雨让人十分讨厌。可又有谁能感受得到他的愤怒、他的忧伤。雨声渐渐的小了，雨声滴答滴答的落在玻璃窗上。如果下雨的时候，你选择的是沉默的倾听他的诉说，而不是埋怨。那么此刻，他也会体会你，他会轻轻地带着你进入梦乡。

秋雨可以使人的灵魂净化，可以让人的思想升华。我喜欢秋雨。

The zoo is the most interesting place that I have ever seen in my whole

life。 It is like a garden which shows (exhibits) various kinds of animals， birds

and insects。

It is indeed a good idea to pay a visit to the zoo during school holidays。

The more you look at the animals， the happier you will bee。 Of (Among) all the

animals， the monkey is (monkeys are) the funniest。 That’s my opinion。 Do you

agree。

秋天的雨自古便是文人骚客言愁之物，秋雨有如此意境倒得感谢秋日萧条的景物和观者那充满萧条的心。

无尽的愁丝似乎化作了绵绵细雨夹杂微微寒意流回人们的心田。使离人落泪，让异客伤情。仰天长啸，想赶走胸中的郁闷，却尝到了秋雨的味道。咸咸的，不禁埋怨秋雨为何如此不解风情，闹得人人心碎是何意图？

雨依旧不停，良久亦未得答复，自嘲地笑了笑，秋雨无声，何苦呢。雨就是雨，我就是我吗！

写到这里，想到了稼轩那首《丑奴儿》：“少年不识愁滋味，爱上层楼，爱上层楼，为赋新词强说愁。而今识尽愁滋味，欲说还休，欲说还休，却道天凉好个秋。”雨中漫步也许是很傻的，仔细体会却也不失一种享受。

无意间看到了一棵光秃秃地梧桐树，满地落叶被秋雨摩挲地沙沙直响。渐渐地，梧桐似又长出了新叶，在雨水的滋润中慢慢地绿了。梧桐树恢复了生机，摇摆着绿得耀眼的枝叶和秋雨一同欢呼。好景不长，梧桐树的叶子开始变黄了，枯萎了，被秋雨打落。我的心不由一紧，难以接受这转瞬间的变化。正值伤神，梧桐芽又悄然冒出……叶生叶落间我仿佛明白了什么，看那棵树的心也变得平静了许多。

秋天的心是愁苦的，也许只是因为秋天！冬天来了，春天还会远吗？那么，秋天到了，只要走过冬天，还怕春天不会来吗？秋雨亦有声，只不过那并不是失意的凄诉，而是希望的赞歌！

人的一生总有不如意的时候，只要不在失落中沉沦，努力一搏总会看到希望的曙光。就让我们从失意的那一刻起，享受秋雨为我们的行礼吧！

莎啦啦，莎啦啦……

我正在做美梦的时候，外面的下雨声把我从睡梦中叫醒。我竖起耳朵，仔细地听着外面声音：滴答，滴答……雨落在了雨篷上，所有的雨点变成了轻捷柔软的手指，在雨篷上弹奏出一首又一首优美的乐曲，每一个音符都带着幻想的色彩。

上学的路上，小雨让路边的花草树木改变了颜色。阳光下，所有的颜色都融入在浓厚的黄色之中，使人感觉到了秋天的凉爽！

来到学校，我站在教室门口向外望，无数的雨丝像一面隐形的窗帘，等着朋友们去拉开她。下课了，慢慢地走进雨中，仿佛自己也是一滴雨，落在小朋友的身上。我回过神来，一颗颗雨滴像一个个小精灵在我的头上、脚上、脸上欢快地舞蹈，有的竟然把我当成了寄宿所，在我的身上美美的睡上一觉呢！

雨，使校园里增添了鲜艳的色彩。瞧！同学和老师们都打着五彩的雨伞进入校园，成了校园一道独特的风景。

雨，滋润着花草树木，更滋润着我们的心灵。

滴滴嗒，滴滴嗒。

姑娘伴随着嘀嗒的交响乐，悄然来临。一幅朦胧多彩的画卷顿时展现在我们的眼前。

瞧！那山顶，烟雨蒙蒙，雨水似段段丝绸悬挂在山间；又似珠帘，让人看不透山的模样，神秘色彩顿时而生。白茫茫的雾中，远远的，隐约有晶莹剔透的珠子在发光。咋看一眼，以为是水晶葡萄，走近一看，恍然大悟，原来是断线的雨珠勾勒出的生动画面。

秋雨中，风儿把枯黄的树叶唰唰地从树上吹落，秋雨中和着风儿，打着旋儿，落到池塘，像船一般装着雨水，在池塘的水面荡着秋千，跟秋雨应和着，弹奏出秋的交响乐；秋雨滴在成熟的果实上，让它们散发出诱人的香味。

秋雨，你把大地染成了金色，让人们在丰收中狂欢；你绣出生活烟雨图的锦缎；你弹出优美的乐曲，你是秋的一道线，大地欢迎你。

1、With the old wish that is ever new, may the greeting do its share toward making your Christmas a pleasant one.

老的祝福，却又常新，原此祝福，使你的圣诞更加愉快圆满。

2、May the bright and festive glow of Christmas candle warm the days all the year through. Hoping you will have a wonderful time enjoying Christmas Day and wishing you a New Year that is happy in every way.

愿明亮喜庆的圣诞烛光温暖一年中的每个日日夜夜，祝你欢欢喜喜度圣诞，高高兴兴过新年！

3、May the Christmas be a time of laughter and real enjoyment for you.Bestwishes.

愿圣诞不仅是你欢笑的时刻，更是你欣喜的日子。祝福你。

4、Christmastimeishere.IhopeyouhaveawonderfulNewYear.Mayeverydayholdhappyhoursforyou.

圣诞来临，祝新年快乐，愿你时时刻刻幸福欢乐！

5、Christmas is the most human and kindly of season，as the month of June with sunshine and the balmy breath of roses.

圣诞最有人情味，充满仁爱的时节，它如同阳光明媚、玫瑰吐露芬芳的六月。

6、A wish for a truly merry Christmas and may the joy of Christmas linger in your hear tall the year!

圣诞快乐！愿圣诞的喜悦整年萦绕你心间。

7、Thinking of you at Christmas with a wish that is warm and sincere.

Have a wonderful Christmas and joyous New Year!

以真挚热诚的祝福，在圣诞之际思念你。祝圣诞快乐，新年快乐！

8、May the beauty and joy of Christmas remain with you throughout the new year!

愿圣诞美景与欢乐常伴随你！

9、Christmas greetings and best wishes!

致圣诞贺忱与最美好的祝福！

10、Hope all your Christmas dreams come true!

愿你所有的圣诞梦想都成真！

My Winter Holiday Plans Well,winter holiday is coming. So what I am going go do? I am going go read English books，surf the Internet,play badmingoon every day.And first I am going go finish my homework.In addition,I am going go leave Shangou for Xiamen with my family and we are going go stay there for ten days.And after we are getting there, we are going go eat delicious food，climb the mountains in the Jin Bang Park.That must be a lot more fun and we will very excited.How about you?What are you going go do when the Winter Holiday is coming?

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

秋，让戏曲家马致远唱出了：“枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马，夕阳西下，断肠人在天涯。”雨，让军事家毛泽东写出了：“大雨落幽燕，白浪滔天，秦皇岛外打鱼船。一片汪洋都不见，知向谁边？”而秋雨则让女中豪杰李清照写出了：“梧桐更兼细雨，到黄昏，点点滴滴。”

秋雨没有“天街小雨润如酥，草色遥看近却无”的那样温柔；没有“黄梅时节家家雨，青草地塘处处蛙”的那样热闹；没有冬天的雨那样的寂寞；秋雨只有“梧桐树，三更雨，不道离情正苦。一叶叶，一声声，空阶滴到明”那样的愁苦。

“高楼目尽欲黄昏，梧桐叶上萧萧雨。”就是这样的秋雨让更多的人去品尝，去欣赏。这样的秋雨带给我们的是愁心、愁意，还有思念。

当时心事偷相许，宴罢兰堂肠断处，挑银灯，肩珠户，绣被微寒值秋雨。枕前各泪语，惊觉玉笼鹦鹉曙，忆君心似西江水，日夜东流无歇时。

别梦依依到谢家，小廊回合曲阑斜。多情只有秋庭月，犹为离人照落花。一阵风，一场雨，一场花落，在夜幕和掩饰下悄然而至。那丝微湿的气息，那丝凉凉的寒意，让天和地之间浸染着寂寞和孤寂。往时如烟，今时成江水，遮不住，毕竟东流去。窗外的雨淅淅沥沥的下着，那缠缠绵绵的秋雨，就像情人的呓语，诉说着无时不在的思恋。

汴水流，泗水流，流到瓜洲古渡头。吴山点点愁。思悠悠，恨悠悠，恨到归时方始休。月明人倚楼。