商务英语正式自我介绍(精选20篇)

英语作文一般都是15-20分，你想指导你的分数被扣在哪些地方了吗?

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长[微博]和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

Hello, I am Cao Wanqian. I am a smart girl.I am 12 years old.

I have short and black hair and small eyes.

Purple is my favourite colour. Kangaroo is my favourite animal.

I have a good friend. It’s name’s Zhao Xhuanru, It’s funny. I like she.

In the Midwest of Guizhou Province, there is a beautiful city, which is my lovely hometown - Anshun.

Anshun is a famous historical and cultural city in Guizhou province. It is known as "the abdomen of Guizhou and the larynx of Yunnan".

In this land, storage of ancient culture, piercing Yelang Culture, unique culture of Tunpu culture. Known as the "mystery" of Guanling "Red Cliff mumbo-jumbo"; known as the "Oriental first dye" Anshun batik; known as the "living fossil Chinese drama" Anshun Dixi is digging on the land. Here is the hometown of Comrade Wang Ruofei, the old proletarian revolutionist of the old generation of our party.

In my hometown of Anshun, in a pleasant climate, where rich high-quality rice, rape, tea, ginger, fruit, there are a large number of cattle and chicken dog and so on moving animals. There are three national scenic area, which is the world famous Huangguoshu Waterfalls falls, Dragon Palace Getu River Scenic Area and national scenic area, here is the Jiulong Mountain national Forest Park, Huajiang gorge, Yelang lake, Ezra River Provincial Scenic area.

In these beautiful scenic spots, I dont know much about it. Here I would like to introduce to you a few of my most familiar attractions, they are:

The former residence of Wang Ruofei: This is my party early outstanding proletarian revolutionary, political activist, loyal communist fighter Wang Ruofei young life, a place of learning outstanding, it is located in the north of Anshun City, covers an area of more than 1000 square meters, from towards the door, corridor, gate, room, car, etc. to North and South hall. It is "the national patriotic education base", "the National Red Tourism classic scenic spot", "the Guizhou patriotic education base" and "the national defense education base". It is the Guizhou provincial cultural relic protection unit.

West Mountain Pagoda: located in Anshun City West southwest of Xiushan, trees around the tower is divided into nine stages, a wild profusion of vegetation, five cubits high, tower six, is one of the most important ancient buildings in Anshun.

Rainbow Lake: Rainbow Mountain Reservoir in Anshun city is important for flood control, irrigation, industrial and domestic water comprehensive water storage project. When the sun rises, the surface of the lake becomes glittering and glittering; when the spring comes, the lake appears particularly clear. There are jiukongqiao, peach forest and antique Pavilion, is a public rest, resort.

My hometown, Anshun, also allows many of the overwhelming majority of the customs, the natural landscape, which is also waiting for us to be familiar with, to find, to enjoy.

The the Imperial Palace in Beijing is a beautiful The Grand Palace. The the Imperial Palace is also called the Forbidden City. There are 24 emperors who have lived in the two dynasties of Ming and Qing Dynasties. The the Imperial Palace of the entire building beautiful decoration, magnificent, known as one of the worlds five palace.

When I entered, the first show in front of me is the lamps. The lamps are "living place, beautiful scenery here, green grass, flowers blooming like a piece of brocade. The Imperial Palace is the palace of ancient buildings Chinas largest and most complete, a total area of more than 720 thousand square meters, the temple palace has more than 90 million rooms, very spectacular.

Through the study to the palace, this is where the emperor on the morning, in front of the palace stood a gilded throne. The dragon carved on many dragons, some Shuanglongxizhu, some around each other is really vivid. I looked up and looked up, there is a large plaque on the wall, the plaque reads "open and aboveboard" four characters, four characters as if it is told ministers: "all things are open and aboveboard to do." I stand in the middle, also saw the emperor and ministers to negotiate the momentum of state.

Out of the Front Gate, I once again looking at the ancient palace, the grand vision is greatly! What a beautiful the Imperial Palace!

北京的故宫是个美丽的大皇宫。故宫也叫作“紫禁城”。这里居住过24个明清两代的皇帝呢！故宫的整个建筑金碧辉煌，庄严华丽，被誉为世界五大宫之一。

当我进去后，首先展现在我眼前的是坤宁宫。坤宁宫是皇妃住的地方，这里风景优美，绿草如茵，繁花似锦。故宫的宫殿建筑是中国现存最大、最完整的古老建筑，总面积达到72万多平方米，殿宇宫室有9000万多间，极为壮观。

穿过书斋就到了乾清宫，这是皇上上早朝的地方，乾清宫的正前方摆着一张镀金龙椅。龙椅上刻着许多龙，有的双龙戏珠，有的互相缠绕，真是惟妙惟肖。我抬头往上一看，墙上有一块大大的匾，匾上写着“正大光明”四个大字，仿佛这四个大字是告诫大臣们：“凡是做事，都要正大光明地做。”我站在这中间，也仿佛看到当时的皇上和大臣们商议朝政时的气势。

走出正门，我再一次遥望这座古老的宫殿，气魄宏伟令人赞叹不已！故宫真美啊！

Panda—the National Treasure

Panda is one of the scarcest animals.People in the world like it very much.There used to be many pandas in China long ago.As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer,pandas became less.But at present,the number of pandas is increasing year by year.There are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

Nowadays,the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan.There is a research centre for nature and wild life there.Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

Leaders and colleagues:

How do you do!

Im XXXs new XXX, and its a pleasure, and its a great honor to work with XXX

I am 20XX graduates of Computer College of XX University, is a professional repair information security. The school taught many things very complicated, learn things are "not exclusively Bo". The language, master the skilled C/C++, of course, in programming and predecessors than up, that it is the rookie. So the work in the future but also to all the senior colleagues learn, ask, hope to give guidance. In mistakes, please predecessors criticism that the "new" is not an excuse to avoid responsibility, I will remember this sentence.

In terms of hobbies, as computer science students, said it is a lie in the school do not play games, I love playing some games, Dota, CS, three, play some drama, horror, as a way of survival, biochemical crisis.

Love sports, swimming, as far as possible in order to enjoy the student discount, when graduation is to do a swimming card; also love playing table tennis, before every day to see colleagues after work in the table tennis room, play, want to go, but some feel shy.

For other hobbies, War Within Three Kingdoms is a board game. It can be said that War Within Three Kingdoms is the first batch of school started to play, that time is not that many people play. Often with classmates killed pitch-dark, Saturday on the weekend, because killing too late, often disturbing. Inside the company seems very many colleagues are playing later, with the exchange, exchange views and learn.

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​导语：小编最大的愿望就是看雪，第二个就是去哈尔滨看冰雕，你喜欢冰雕吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

AS This dragon-head event of Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival,the Ice Lantern Artistic Show is the earliest and largest one in the world. It has become a large-scale outdoor ice lantern show for the traditional activities of the Ice and Snow Festival of Harbin. The 28th Ice Lantern Artistic Show will still be he1d in Zhaolin Park this year. This session of ice and lantern snow shall take "Wonderful Garden 0n the Silk Road, and Ice and Snow on the North of the Great Wall" as its main theme. The show takes the great development of the west China as its topic, and presents the customs and long history and culture of the great northwest China to people. This ice lantern show will put emphasis on the products strategy and famous brand effect. Outstanting achievements will be obtained in cultural contents, technological application, artistic modeling, lighting effect, and mass participation. This ice lantern show will consist of 2O02 pieces 0f ice sculpture artistic works in 1O grand scenery zones. Totally 25,OOO cubic meters of ice will be used.

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作为哈尔滨国际冰雪节的龙头项目，冰灯艺术展是世界上最早、规模最大的一次。它已成为哈尔滨冰雪节传统活动的大型户外冰灯表演。第二十八冰灯艺术展今年仍在兆麟公园举行。这届冰灯以“美丽的花园在丝绸之路，与冰和雪在北方的长城”为主题。这个节目以中国西部大开发为主题，并提出了中国大西北的风情和悠久的历史和文化的人。冰灯展将注重产品战略和名牌效应。出血管的成就将在文化内涵、科技应用、艺术造型、灯光效果、群众参与。这冰灯展将包括2O02件0f冰雕艺术作品1大风景区。共25，OOO立方米的冰将被使用。

HI,my name is XXX, I 19 years old this year, Im from x, I love of reading and the Internet, I am a outgoing person, like making friends. In this university, I will actively participate in various activities to enrich my university life, I will also constantly exercise oneself, let oneself become more mature.

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m very happy to be here with all of you. Thank you for giving me such a great opportunity to present myself.

Well, may name is 马可(此处可替换), and you can call me Michael if you like. I am from Hangzhou, China. It is a wonderful tourist city. If you have a chance to visit my hometown, I will be glad to show you around.

Well, today I’m here to fight for a chance to work in your company. You know, to be a part of you is a dream that has taken roots in my heart, because your company has a very good reputation, and I heard you offer great conditions for the right person. So that’s why I’m here.

Finally, I sincerely hope my dream could come true. And I will prove myself to be a valuable asset to your company. Thank you.

Hi， everybody！My name is …. I study in  changan  central  primary  school  大家好，我叫… 我在长安中心小学学习

I  am in Class 4 Grade 1  I like English very much. 我在一年级4班，我很喜欢英语

I study English everyday ,  I read books ,I listen to the tapes and watch videos我每天都学习英语。我读英语书, 听英语磁带，看英语光碟

Hi, My name is Dawn, Im from the beautiful ancient city of Kaifeng. As you can see, I am a very casual girl, and a lot of people here, like 18-year-old, I love a lot, I love guitar, love to sing love dancing, very fond of English, I am very love to watch "Prison Break", like the actor micheal clever wit.

I like making friends, and hope you will be able to and I have become good friends, I think I will, and you get along with.

Henan province is a province of the great motherland, located on the plains of the central part of the motherland. It is one of the major cradles of Chinese civilization. Henan Province ancient Yuzhou, also called "Zhongzhou", "central plains".

Henan province is a big country of rail transportation hub connecting the four corners of the world. It is rich in wheat and is a famous "big granary" in china". "The ancient capital of Anyang, Luoyang known to the world, opened the" Temple (Shaolin Temple), central water conservancy project. Henans outstanding figures in history and contemporary heroes have added luster to their hometown.

The famous poet Du Fu, was later known as the "poet", he was born in Gongyi City, Henan Province, patriotic general Yue Feisheng in Tang Yang county. And Wu Daozi, Zhang Zhongjing, Xu Shiyou, Wu Huanxian......

Is located in Henan province Anyang huanshui river lake is Chinese Yin Ruins, found so far the earliest ancient ruins. 3300 years ago, as the king Pangeng moved to Yin capital. The land is flat, the soil is fertile, and the climate is pleasant. Since then, Yin has been the political, economic, military and cultural center of the late Shang Dynasty for 250 years. Now, because of the war the Yin Ruins, so called yin. Archaeologists have found the earliest inscriptions on oracle bones here. And unearthed a weighing 750 kg of the mother of the big tripod ding. Today, the Anyang old city, in the new era of rip writing new songs. There are nine in the ancient city of Luoyang, where the closed forest, the White Horse Temple, Longmen Grottoes, peony, jiguandong known to the world. One of the city, the ancient capital of seven dynasties, is a very beautiful city, where the famous "Dragon Park".

Having said so much, we havent mentioned our hometown yet. My hometown is in Puyang, where it is called "green home". It is very beautiful. The square is full of poetic culture and the Cultural Palace is full of cultural atmosphere. The Green Manor scenery is pleasant......

Henan Province, there are many famous brand products: red tractor, Sanquan food, Yutong Bus, Anbo group, Shuanghui food, Red-Cooked Chicken, Daokou Style, Nanyang beef, apple, Oriental Anyang steelmaking plant......

Henan, Im so proud of you! Proud of you!

As is known, there are 4 seasons in a year. We witness their changing. Spring is always the seson with all the plants and flowers growing. Summer is hot but a happy season to us because we can enjoy the long summer vocation. Autumn is cool and comfortable that we can enjoy doing sports. While winter sometimes makes us vexed because of the coldness. They are all beautiful!

Shanxi Province got its name due to its location to the west of Taihang Mountain.Shanxi neighbored on Hebei,Henan,Shaanxi and Inner Mongolia & Autonomous Region.It is located to the east of the Yellow River,and is also known as Hedong.Shanxi belonged to Jin State in Spring and Autumn Period,so it is abbreviated in Jin.Shanxi occupies an area of 156,000 square kilometers (about 60,000 square miles) and has a population of over 32 million,including its minority ethnic population.Its capital is Taiyuan City.

When to go

Being at a high altitude,Shanxi Province has a cold and dry climate and has an annual rainfall of between 400-600 millimeters.The province is also frequently plagued by sandstorms,especially in the spring,so it is often useful to bring along both sunglasses and a hat when visiting.Generally speaking,the provinces climate is the best between May and October.

History

Shanxi is one of the birth places of Chinese civilizations with a long history and traditional culture.As early as one hundred million years ago,the ancestors of the Chinese lived and propagated in this region.Legend tells us that the Yellow Emperor,founder of the Chinese nation,once lived in Shanxi for a certain period.Today,many Neolithic sites from that period can still be seen dotted across the vast expanse of the province.

What to see

Shanxi is endowed with an abundance of cultural sites from its long history.Most of the ancient structures were built before the Liao and Song Dynasties.So it is the reason why Shanxi is often called the Chinese Ancient Architecture Museum.The more obvious of these include:the Buddhist wonder of the Yungang Grottoes in Datong City,the ancient city of Pingyao which was listed as a World Cultural Heritage site by UNESCO in 1997,the oldest and tallest ancient wooden pagoda in China,the Wooden Pagoda of Yingxian County and the remote Shuanglin and Jinci Temples,which are well worth the long journeys for the visitors.

Of course,there are a number of natural magnificent and beautiful places that can also be seen in Shanxi.The most famous of them include Wutai Mountain with the longest and most prestigious history in the four most well-known Buddhist holy lands of China,the whistling rage of the Yellow Rivers Kettle Spout waterfalls (Hukou Waterfalls) and one of the Five Sacred Mountains in China - Mt Hengshan.

Everyone has his ideals. A businessman wishes to make greater profit; a farmer expects plumper harvests; a student tries to learn more and better.

However, one should be sensible about whether his ideal is well founded or not. If it is, one has to plan and work hard for its realization. Effort, skill and persistence are all necessary. And very often, one has to get help from others, including advice and support in one form or another.

My ideal is to become a doctor. It is said that the field of medicine is a well-paid profession, but I take it as a lofty profession entrusted with saving peoples lives. To realize my ideal I have concentrated on laboratory work to develop the analytical skills necessary to become a qualified doctor. Im sure Ill realize my ideal if I keep on striving for it.

Dad grew up in a single parent family, perhaps this is not perfect family created his fathers reticent character. Until there is me, my father will always have some smile.

Perhaps the boys heart and personality accounted for the upper hand, my father earnestly told me reason, I always disdain, turn a deaf ear, or severely refute a pass. In this regard, my father just silently smoking. I thought it was naive. Can learn no fathers urging, the results naturally fell. At that moment, although my father did not hit me, but the death of the general silence, desperately smoking, my father greeted his face showing disappointment look. I am determined, must be in the study and life to achieve success, by praise. Let my father show a rare smile.

Dads smile is more out of my sensible. That day at noon to eat fish, my father was a big fish caught, rice balls, water, steamed bread swallowed, are of no avail. Cross here is painful, my father kept moaning. I am very worried. Home school at night, I still do not worry that hateful fishbone, even homework is also absent-minded. Dad a home, I asked: "Dad, the fish did not go down?" "Go on!" Dad smiled, it seems very satisfied. Then I went to the study to get the book, I heard my father kept saying: "I am very happy today, because the daughter said a concern!" I suddenly realized that I should often give my father more care, so that my father has Sweet love and happiness!

Dad, your smile is an indispensable part of my growth. It makes me feel warm and happy. As your daughter, to see your white hair gradually increased, I must hard work, make achievements, so that your smile often!

I have my own room now. It is not big. There is a small blue bed in it. Because I love plants, I grow some sun flowers on the desk. Every time I am tired of doing homework, I will watch it. Then I will be relax and full of energy. Except for this, my room has a bookshelf. There are many books on it. There is a lovely rabbit clock on the bed to wake me up every morning. I finally have my own place. I love it very much.

现在我有我自己的房间了。房间不是很大。里面有一张蓝色的小床。因为我喜欢植物，所以桌子上种了一些太阳花。每次我讨厌做作业的时候，我就会看看它。然后我就会放松并充满活力。除了这些之外，我的房间里有一个书架。架子上有很多书。床上有一只可爱的兔子时钟，每天早上都是它叫醒我。我终于有了我自己的地方。我非常喜欢它。

This is my family。 There are four people in my family。 My grandmother， my father， my mother and me。

My grandmother has short white hair。 She looks very nice。 My father has short black hair and small eyes。 He looks very fat， so I often call him “fat man”。 He works at a factory。 My mother works at a L。D。T。 My mother has long black hair。 She likes sports and traveling， so I often go on sports with my mother。 On holidays my family often go to travel。 I study at Guiyuan Primary School。 We are very happy。

这是我的家。 有4人在家里。 奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我。

奶奶短白发。 她看起来很漂亮。 爸爸小眼睛，短黑发。 他看起来很肥，所以我常常称呼他为"肥人"。 他在一家工厂工作。 妈妈在工程船名妈妈早已黑发。 喜欢运动和旅游，所以经常去和妈妈锻炼身体。 我们假日经常出去旅行。 我在桂园小学上学。 我们感到非常高兴。

Gulangyu is an island separated from Xiamen city proper. Its like a garden on the water. The shade of the trees covers nearly the whole island. Cars, buses, bikes are not allowed to drive there. Everyone should walk. This makes the place very quiet so that music played by the violin or the piano can be heard here and there. It is the famous "Home of Music".

The Sunshine Rock is the highest place on the island, so it has become the symbol of Gulangyu. Standing at the top of the Sunshine Rock, one can see the landscape of the whole Xiamen ands other small islands. The sky and the sea meet on the horizon. Its said that people can see clearly the Jinmen Island through telescope when the sun is shining. There are gentle waves on the sea and lots of people are swimming.At the foot of the Sunshine Rock is Shuzhang Garden with its picturesque scenery. The Forty-four Bridge spans over the water like a white dragon. What a beautiful picture!

Lei Feng (雷锋; Léi Fēng) (December 18,1940 - August 15,1962) was a soldier of the Peoples Liberation Army of the PRC. He was characterized by propaganda as a selfless and modest figure after his death and consequently was an idol to many. Today Lei continues to serve as the idol to elementary school students who commemorate and "learn from" him in everyday life,and has become a resilient cultural icon,with many t-shirts printed with his picture on the front.

Born in Wangcheng,Hunan (near the Town of Leifeng,Changsha,Hunan,named in his honour),Lei joined the Communist youth corps when he was very young. Lei died in 1962 at the age of 22,when a telephone pole,struck by an army truck,killed him,when he was directing the truck in backing up. After Leis death,Mao Zedong began what was to be known as the *"Learn from Comrade Lei Feng" (向雷锋同志学习) Campaign,designed to use Lei as a good example to the Chinese people to be cheerfully selfless and noble in thought.

the Chinese word 学习，when translated literally,can be "to learn,or learn" however,given this context,it means something like "to follow",therefore,the slogan/phrase 向雷锋同志学习 means more of something like "follow the examples of comrade Lei-Feng."

Since,March 5th has become the official "Learn from Lei Feng Day". This day involves various community and school events where people go clean up parks,schools,and other community locations. Local news on that day usually has footage from these events.

Leis most recognizable image in popular culture is in t-shirt,hes in the same category as other revolutionary symbols including Mao Zedong and Che Guevera at street vendors. Some Lei Feng t-shirts have made their way into the United States as well. Hayden Christensens character in the movie Life as a House is wearing a Lei Feng t-shirt.

In March 2006,China released a game titled Learn From Lei Feng Online in which the player has to do good deeds,fight spies,and collect parts of Mao Zedongs collection. If the player wins,he or she gets to meet Chairman Mao in the game.

Cultural Importance

Communist Chinas leaders have praised Lei Feng as the personification of altruism,the truly selfless figure. Although the historicity and authenticity of the mans story is under dispute,his cultural importance is ingrained within everyday life in China. The importance of moral character was emphasized heavily during Maos era,but Deng-era reforms have seen a moral erosion where competitiveness in social networks has paved its path. Lei Fengs prominence from school textbooks have declined since the 1970s,although he remains part of the national curriculum and many of his deeds are taught in the elementary school curriculum. The term huo Lei Feng (literally Lei Feng alive) has become a noun (or adjective) for anyone that is seen as selfless,or anyone that goes out of their way to help others.

导语：微信可以说开启了给人与人之间的新时代，二维码扫描，视屏沟通，语音交流，微信上爆料，微信上公布最新的政策，最准的路况。这些方面可以说极大的方便了人们的生活。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Wechat is a new app that almost all the people use on their phone. you can video chat when every you want and its for free. also you can talk through that app. its very convience. You can sreach for people who live around you who are using the same app. but at the same time, people are addict to it. they can not live without it. and people are having less and less conversation face to face. even worse, some people got tricked in this app, and lost lots of money. so this app can be good or bad, depend which way you using it.

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微信是一个新的应用程序，几乎所有的人都使用他们的电话。你可以视频聊天时，你想要的，这是免费的。也可以通过该应用程序交谈。这是很方便的。你可以搜索生活在你身边的人谁使用相同的应用程序。但同时，人们也沉溺于此。他们不能没有它。人们面对面的交谈越来越少。更糟糕的是，有些人被骗了这个应用程序，并失去了很多钱。所以这个应用程序可以是好是坏，取决于你使用它的方式。