初二关于志愿者的英语作文（优秀20篇）

Volunteer, is an enviable work, can help others, to help the world. Today, I be a little volunteers.

Guess what is my volunteer work? That is the whole cleaning his living building stairs aisle.

Volunteer work, to start! I took a broom high-altitude climb it at the top of the building at once. This building has a total of six floors, there are one hundred and five steps, when I climb to the top of the roof, already tired panting, I climbed on the fourth floor to gasp at ordinary times, the sixth floor had killed me!

Sweep the floor, I used a while, the dust in the air, float in the sky, "ahem! Gosh! Choke dead!" Early know you dont have to so big of strength, is really dead tired, flicking the along while all bad, alas! Simply not swept!!!! Always spoil me and give up. Suddenly, I had a thought in my head: dont give up, the somebody else sanitation workers havent sigh, sweeping the street and I only swept a stairs aisle? Good, keep dry!

Learned the lesson just now, it seems to pay attention to methods. I suddenly thought of the sanitation workers in the street when sweeping gently, not too hard. So I also gently swept up, the method was very effective, half an hour I swept the ground. Standing on the first floor, looking at the I sweep the stairs aisle after, the in the mind particularly happy.

Through todays volunteer activities, I realized the sanitation workers hard, and I want to do such a volunteer activities more, after the home more beautiful.

志愿者，是一个让人羡慕的工作，可以帮助别人，帮助世界。今天，我就当了一个小小志愿者。

猜猜我的志愿者工作是什么?那就是打扫自己居住的整栋楼的楼梯走道。

志愿者工作，开始!我拿着扫把一鼓作气的一下子爬上了这栋楼的顶层。这栋楼一共有六楼，有一百零五个台阶，当我爬上楼顶后，已经累的气喘吁吁，平时我爬四楼就喘气，这六楼就已经要了我的命!

扫地了，我使用了一招龙飞凤舞，尘土在空中飞扬，“咳咳!天哪!呛死人啦!”早知道就不用那么大的力气了，真是累死了，扫了半天都扫不好，唉!干脆不扫了吧!一向娇惯的我又放弃了。突然，我脑袋里闪过一个念头：不能放弃，人家环卫工人扫整条街都没叹气，何况我只扫了一个楼梯走道呢?好，继续干!

吸取了刚才的教训，看来得讲究方法才行。我忽然想到街上的环卫工人在扫地时都轻轻的，没有用太大力气。于是我也轻轻的扫了起来，这个方法果然很有效，半个小时我就把地扫好了。站在一楼，望着我扫后的楼梯走道，心里格外的高兴。

通过今天的志愿者活动，我体会到了环卫工人的辛苦，以后我要多做这样的志愿者活动，把家园变得更美丽。

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera. Beijing Opera is very popular in China. It has a history of more than 200 years. During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera. In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing. Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration. In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes. The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera. Now is the performance. I hope you will like it.

现在让我说关于京剧。京剧在中国很受欢迎。它已经有200多年的历史。在清朝乾隆年间，乾隆对地方剧有兴趣。1790，为了庆祝他的八十岁生日，他从不同的地方戏曲剧团召唤到北京为他表演。来自安徽省的四个剧团表演完后留在了北京。1828年，一个湖北剧团来到北京，经常与安徽剧团一起演出。两种唱法混合在一起，逐渐成了一种新的类型被称为京剧。现在京剧就要开始了。我希望你会喜欢它。

20XX.X.X  晴

I live very happily today! In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!

今天我过得非常开心！早上，天气非常好！于是我和家人一起去登山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果，全家其乐融融！

[初二暑期英语短篇日记

A sunny Sunday, usually every day and sleep until the sun father-drying bottoms climb to get up early and get up in red, wake up my mother. Drowsily mother slowly said: "Today what the section, from Why so early?" Little Red said excitedly: "Mom, do not install confused, you said that today took me to the park!"

Came to park, mother and son were two beautiful scenery attract: kids, some kite-flying, and some shooting while playing ball ...... red bumper cars, while also playing slippery slides, played with enjoying themselves, was sweating profusely.

Little Red hobbled down to holding mothers hand while walking while singing. Suddenly, a banana peel, a red block of the avenue, little red slip banana skin reminded once again to see if the banana peel to her protest, then do not fight a gas, the foot kicked the banana peel. Mom saw, as if aware of her mind like, and did not criticize her, she just pulled the banana skin side next to her while saying with great earnestness: "I know you have been slipping on banana peel, very angry, but you should From the perspective of others think that if you somehow accidentally stepped on a banana peel how to do? red listened to, very ashamed, the banana peel thrown into the bin.

Little Red looked at the move, my mother smiled.

Yes ah! Would it not everyone should be protected?

初中英语作文:初二英语作文Football

Football is connected with the people throughout the world.

It has become a part of peoples life..Every day, man), football matches are going on here and there around the world.

Pick up a newspaper and you can learn the the results of the football matches. We enjoy playing football, watching football games after work. During the football matches of the World Cup,millions of people watch the matches on TV.

When their favorite teams win, they will give them three cheers. When they fail,they feel sad. We all hope our national team will be the strongest one in the world.

My birtiday is on 24th May. I always have both happy and sad feelings on my birthday. Why I am happy? I have group of friends that come over to celebrate with me. And they give me birthday presents, sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. Also, I can feel how much my family loves me because my parents always make a birthday cake for me. They do not go to buy one, but make one themselves. I feel so happy about that. However, I understand my mother was the one who suffered the most pain on the date I came to the world. I feel so sorry for my mother for what she had suffered. But I promise her, I will take good care of her when I have that ability.

我的生日是5月24日。我在我的生日时既有快乐也有悲伤的情感。我为什么开心?我的朋友来和我庆祝。他们给我的生日礼物,有时礼物非常让我吃惊。同时,我能感觉到我的家人多么爱我,因为我的父母总是为我做一个生日蛋糕。他们不去买一个,而是自己做。我感到很高兴。然而,让我明白的是我的母亲遭受了最痛苦的事让我来到了这个世界。我感到抱歉为我的母亲她遭遇了什么。但是我答应她,当我有能力时，我会好好照顾她,。

Home is a sweet, warm place, I always believe that each student has a happy family, home and have a naughty, I have a very love my dad, my amiable grandma and my grandpa white-haired...

I, this year 12 years old, is a naughty girl, love sports, love volleyball become lively, love life, love sports...

My father this year 38 years old, is a bus driver, he was above the square face, a head of jet-black hair, from time to time under dark, thick eyebrows with a pair of glasses...

My grandmother is 64 years old this year, is an amiable man to man, grandma in the dark, dark hair, dont know how many gray hair, she has small eyes, she laughed eyes like two thin small crescent, there are many wrinkles on her forehead...

My grandfather is 66 years old this year, he has a sparse hair, sparse hair has many wrinkles, under the forehead with white eyebrows, he has small eyes, a high nose bridge, his hands wrinkles but also couldnt be much more. Grandpa is very kind to me, I also very love my grandpa.

This is my family, it is a warm home, a warm home, it is a full of happy, full of happiness.

家，是一个温馨又温暖的地方，我始终相信每一位同学都有一个幸福的家庭，家里有一个调皮的我，有一个很爱我的老爸，有我和蔼可亲的奶奶，还有我那白发苍苍的爷爷……

我，今年12岁了，是一个淘气的女孩子，是热爱运动，热爱排球使自己变得活泼起来，爱生活，更爱体育……

我的爸爸今年38岁了，是一名公交车司机，他方形的脸的上方，一头乌黑发亮的短发，又黑又浓的眉毛下时不时带着一副眼镜……

我的奶奶今年64岁了，是一个对人和蔼可亲的人，奶奶黑黑的头发上，不知道有多少根白发，她有着那小小的眼睛，她笑起来时的眼睛就好像两个细细的小小的月牙，她的额头上有许多条皱纹……

我的爷爷今年66岁了，他有着稀少的头发，稀少的头发下有着许多道皱纹，额头下有着白白的眉毛，他有着小小的眼睛，有着高高的鼻梁，他那双手上的皱纹更是多得不能再多。爷爷对我很好，我也很爱我的爷爷。

这就是我的家庭，这是一个温馨的家，是一个温暖的家，更是一个充满快乐的，充满幸福的家。

Li Yan, an engineer, was born on February 9, 1965 in Beijing, China. After

he graduated from Qinghua University in 1987, he made an important decision in

his life. He decided to go to the United States for his further study. After

four years hard work, he mastered new management ideas an advanced technologies

in computer field. In 1992, he got his doctors degree. he made another

decision that to return to his motherland and started a company. However, his

wife and daughter had got used to the American way of life, so they still stay

in the United States. But they still can meet frequently, because of the

convenient transportation, and his wife and daughter often visit him in

holidays.

Dream, is a beacon of your life; dream, is your better vision; dream, is you ideal wings; and having dreams, you will have a future.www.zhlzw.com

“Now, everybody was discussing the Chinese dream, I think, realizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, is the greatest dream of the Chinese nation since the modern time.??the words are claimed by Xi Jinping. This is the general secretary of Xi jinping ?s Chinese dream. But as a contemporary college students, what is our Chinese dream? Can we dare to dream?

The answer is yes. We college students have no dare not dream, we not only need to bravely dream, but also hard to dream! As we all know, the highest honor of the nursing field is get the Nightingale prize. Each of years china had more or less people gotten this honor. Whenever I see the time that they wearing a silver medal and holding flowers standing on the podium to getting applause and glory, I couldnt help of imaging myself standing on the stage like them in future, that could be how glorious. This is my dream, my dream of Nightingale?s.

And I, a new era of college students, I am proud of my dream, proud of our motherland. When the dream into reality, in a era which let the youth realizing their ideal, I believe my dream will be realizing in the near future!www.zhlzw.com

Finally, I would like to inviting all of yours, please stretch out your hands, let us applause to achieve the dream of tomorrow!

梦想,是人生的灯塔,梦想,是你更好的远景;梦想,是你理想的翅膀,梦想,你会有一个future.www.zhlzw.com

“现在,每个人都在讨论中国梦,我认为,实现中华民族的伟大复兴,中华民族是最伟大的梦想自现代时间。? ?这句话是由习近平称。这是总书记习近平?年代的中国梦。但作为一个当代大学生,我们的中国梦是什么?我们敢于梦想吗?

答案是肯定的。我们大学生没有不敢梦想,我们不仅需要勇敢的梦想,但也很难梦想!我们都知道,护理领域的最高荣誉是南丁格尔奖。每一年中国已经或多或少的人得到这个荣誉。每当我看到他们穿着银牌和拿着鲜花站在领奖台上获得掌声和荣誉,我不禁想象自己站在舞台上就像他们在未来,这可能是光荣的。这是我的梦想,我的梦想的夜莺。

和我,一个新时代的大学生,我很自豪我的梦想,为我们的祖国感到骄傲。当梦想变成了现实,在一个时代,让青年实现自己的理想,我相信我的梦会实现在不久的将来! www.zhlzw.com

最后,我想邀请你,请伸出你的手,让我们掌声实现明天的梦想!

Volunteering

The volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people in recent years, especially among young people.

Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and society. Take the Wenchuan Earthquake as an example. Hundreds of thousands of volunteers play an active role in Wenchuan quake-hit areas. And they contribute daily necessaries, offer medical help and psychological help to the disaster relief work.

Besides, volunteering would be beneficial to the volunteers themselves~ Getting involved in volunteering, volunteers will be exposed to a new environment, and they can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve their interpersonal skills and organizational skills, all of which are critical for their professional growth.

As a college student, I sincerely hope that everyone would join the volunteering work. It is not only good to our society, but also a chance for us to grow and to learn.

Ten years ago, there were many narrow streets.But now many streets have been widened. So buses and cars can go more quickly than before. Ten years ago , it was not convenient to go from the north of the city to the south. But now, you are sure to reach anywhere in less than an hour. To our joy, we have two underground lines and many more are being built. We seldom find traffic jam in rush hours. So we dont have to worry about going out. With the development of science and technology, the transportation in Shanghai will become all the better.

mid-autumn day

mid-autumn day is a traditional festival in china. almost everyone likes to eat mooncakes on that day. most families have a dinner together to celebrate the festival. a saying goes, "the moon in your hometown is almost always the brightest and roundest". many people who live far away from homes want to go back to have a family reunion. how happy it is to enjoy the moon cakes while watching the full moon with your family members.

If I were a volunteer, I want to make a messenger of peace, think I dont see the sufferings of the war brings to people, the war destroyed a happy family, let them their families, look, the children are suffering from the pain of the war there, that we can as happy living here? Therefore, I want to make a messenger of peace, I want to call upon the humans of the world together to prevent war, in peace, let the days ahead, we can to live and work in peace and contentment, happy life!

If I were a volunteer, I want to help the disabled, because they cant like we are ordinary people, comfortable life, no-account cannot alive like us more. So, I want to help the disabled, when free, I can chat with them, with their share of happiness in life, with their share of the ordinary people at ease, have the money, I give them back to buy some books, and can enrich their lives, so that life is not monotonous tasteless.

假如我是自愿者，我要做和平的使者，以为我不原看见战争给人们带来的苦难，战争把一个幸福美满的家庭破坏了，让她们妻离子散，看，那里的孩子们正饱受着战争的痛苦，那能像我们这儿快乐幸福生活呢?因此，我要做和平的使者，我要号召全世界的人类一起来阻止战争，参与和平，让今后的日子，我们能安居乐业，快乐幸福的生活!

假如我是志愿者，我要帮助残疾人，因为他们不能像我们平凡人这样无悠无虑、轻松 自在的生活，更不能像我们这样活蹦乱跳。因此，我要帮助残疾人，有空时，我会和他们聊天，跟他们一起分享生活中的快乐，跟他们分享平凡人的轻松自在，有钱时，我回买几本书送给他们，可以充实他们的生活，这样生活就不会单调无味了。

When I grow up , I’m going to be a journalist(记者). I have been eager(渴望的)to do something benificial(有益的)to the world. And I think it suitable(适合的)for me to be a journalist.

To realise(实现)my dream, I will study harder. Whats more, I am going to write articles(文章)for magazines and newspaper in my free time, so I can know more about the job.

If I work hard enough, my dream will come ture.

With the improvement of people’s material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. People wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. How shall we do?

First, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. Then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.

Then have balanced food to ensure our health. Eat more vegetables.

Being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. Hope you will be happy forever.

随着人民物质条件的提高,人们对生活质量有了更高的要求。人们希望在健康和良好的生活习惯。我们应怎样做呢?

首先,每天应上床睡觉和起床早。然后做一些锻炼在户外呼吸早晨新鲜的空气,所以我们一天会有一个愉快的心情。

然后有平衡的膳食来保证我们的健康。多吃蔬菜。

除此外,心平气和对我们的健康是最重要的。希望你永远快乐。

Do you have a dictionary?I think almost everyone has one.But, how often do you use a dictionary? I dont believe that everyone makes good use of it.You may come across lots of new words in your study and you will ask someone for the answer.But if you have a dictionary, please dont let it sleep. You should make better use of it.

Dictionaries are very useful and important to us.They are like silent teachers.When you have a question,you can turn to them.They will give you the right answer.They are also like a trusted friend. You can learn a lot from them.

Dont be lazy.Dont let your dictionary sleep any more.

你有字典吗？我认为几乎每个人都有。但是，你经常使用字典吗？我不认为每个人都会很好的利用它。在学习中遇到了许多新单词时，你会问别人请教答案。但是如果你有一本字典，请不要让它睡眠。你应该好好利用它。

字典是非常有用和重要的。他们像无声的老师。当你有问题，你可以问他们。他们会给你正确的答案。他们也像一个值得信赖的朋友。你可以从他们身上学到很多。

不要偷懒。不要再让你的词典沉睡了。

初二英语作文：Friendship

A life without a friend is a life without a sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyones life.

Friends are who changes your life just by being a part of it, who makes you believe that there really is good in the world, who convinces you that there really is an unlock door just waiting for you to open it.

When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on.

So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches.for your friends till they are dead.Do not write them on their tombstones, speak them rather now instead

初二英语作文：Information Age

Its the age of information now and information is very important in the society.we need verious of information to live a normal life.we need to know the lastest news ,listen to the weather forecast,learn about the newly published books and many other things we are interested in and want to know.

There are many way of acquiring information,for example we can watch TV,listen to radio, read newspaper and magazines and go on line which is to most popupar ,convienent and effective way now.

Living in such an age of information,what should we to to face up to the challenge of it?I think we should try our best to learn as much knowledge as we can and try to master the new techonology.

奥运英语作文 北京奥运第一枚金牌属于谁？

北京奥运第一枚金牌属于谁？(Who will win the first gold medal?)

The suspense over who will win the first Olympic medal and in which event is really a interesting thing. Chinese officials are determined to make sure China, as the host country, wins the first gold of the Games. The womens 10m air rifle - which includes two Chinese medal favorites - has its final scheduled at 10:30 am on Aug 9 and should end about 20 minutes later.

If all goes as planned, either reigning gold medalist shooter Du Li or world champion Zhao Yinghui will raise 2008s first gold at the Beijing Shooting Range.

But if Du and Zhao are too far behind in points going into the final, the rumor says, organizers will delay the last ten shots of the final while the weightlifting final goes on as planned so China can secure the gold.

I think the first gold medal must belong to we Chinese, let wait this moment together.

奥运英语作文 关于北京奥运会开幕式的

关于北京奥运会开幕式的(About Beijing Olympic Opening Ceremony)

The Olympic Opening Ceremony was an international event and the whole world was watching! The event was held in a stadium designed to seat a large group of people.

The athletes entered the stadium in a specific order. The athletes from Greece entered first in honor of the original Olympics held in Greece. Then, the other athletes followed by nation in the alphabetical order of the host country’s language. The host country’s athletes came last. So for this coming Olympics 2008, the athletes from China will enter the stadium last.

The chief of state of the host country declared the games open, followed by the raising of the Olympic Flag. Music was played and fireworks were set off in salute. Then, doves were released into the air as a symbol of peace. Runners in cross-country relays brought in the Olympic torch. The running of the torch began four weeks before the Olympic ceremony and thousands of runners took part in this. Planes and ships transported the Olympic torch to each country that lies between Greece and the host country. The most exciting moment of the Olympic ceremony was when the torch entered the stadium and lit the Olympic Flame. The Flame was kept burning until the end of the Olympic games.

奥运英语作文 关于北京奥运会闭幕式的

关于北京奥运会闭幕式的(About Beijing Olympic Closing Ceremony)

The closing ceremony must take place in the stadium after the end of all the events. The flag bearers of the participating delegations and the name-board-bearers enter the stadium in single file. Behind them march the athletes, without distinction of nationality.

The flag bearers then form a semi-circle behind the rostrum.

The President of the IOC and the President of the OCOG mount the rostrum. To the sounds of the Greek national anthem, the Greek flag is hoisted on the flagpole that stands to the right of the central flagpole used for the winners flags. The flag of the host country is then hoisted on the central flagpole, while its anthem is played. Finally, the flag of the host country of the next Olympic Games is hoisted on the lefthand flagpole to the strains of its anthem.

The mayor of the host city joins the President of the IOC on the rostrum and returns to him the Olympic flag. The president of the IOC then entrusts it to the mayor of the host city of the following Olympic Games. This flag must be displayed in the latter citys main municipal building.

After an address by the President of the OCOG, the President of the IOC gives the closing speech of the Olympic Games, which he ends with these words:

"I declare the Games of the ... Olympiad closed and, in accordance with tradition, I call upon the youth of the world to assemble four years from now at ... to celebrate with us there the Games of the ... Olympiad".

A fanfare then sounds; the Olympic flame is extinguished, and while the Olympic anthem is being played, the Olympic flag is slowly lowered from the flagpole and, unfurled horizontally, carried out of the arena, followed by the flag bearers. A farewell song resounds.

奥运英语作文：我最喜欢的中国射击运动员

奥运英语作文：我最喜欢的中国射击运动员(The Chinese sport shooter I like best)

The Chinese sport shooter I like best is Wang Yifu who was in terms of Olympic medals one of the most successful sport shooters of all times. He specializes in the 50 m Pistol and 10 m Air Pistol events.

Wang won his first Olympic medal in the Los Angeles games at the age of 23. After this, the Air Pistol event was added to the program, and this is where he has achieved his greatest accomplishments. He won the 1992 gold medal only days after a new medal in the 50 m event. His three attempts to repeat the victory have provided impressive results and very tight duels:

In the 2004 competition, Wang scored 590 once more, but lost the Olympic record to Mikhail Nestruev (Russia) who achieved 591. However, Wang Yifu chased quickly and eventually won by a margin of 0.2 points to get his second Olympic gold.

I like Wang Yifu, and I also like his great sprite.

篇1：  One day,Xiao-Ming play in the water faucet open at washing-room,did not finish off later,the water spray to the body of Xiao-Ming,Xiao-Ming immediately ran away,or not related to the tap .water to flow out Huahua.Xiaoguang come to here,he see the tap did not closed,  ,immediately went on a closed,and also posted to a piece of paper on the wall .He wrote on:tosave water.In the near future,Xiao-Ming came to here,see the words on the wall,feel very ashamed .

篇2： As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference。

篇3： We are paying more attention on many environmental problems we made before, one of them is the water emergence. Long time ago, we never noticed that we are in a situation that the water on the earth is less than before, and the consequence is continuing.  Until recently, we have started to acknowledge that we should make the bigger efforts to save water. Therefore, so save water from every single person is important. That is why we should save water at home. If every one of us saves water at home, then the water saved together would bea huge amout. And I have some suggestions following: we could cycle the water we just used them to wash clothes to water the plants or to rush the toilet; when we wash our hands, we could turn the tap off for the moment we put soap on our hands etc.  So if we want to save water sincerely, we could save it at home .

[初二英语作文有关节约用水

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

Everyone has their own dreams, I am no exception, of course, some people think when scientists, some people want to be a inventor, others want to be a writer, but I do want to be a teacher.

If, I really became a teacher, I will do a student and become a good teacher, as long as one has the time I will be happy to play with them.

If, I really became a teacher, I go back to do a good teacher as classmates friends, as long as a have time, will talk with them, let them know their interesting things together.

If, I really became a teacher, I can make a good teacher, rewards and punishment and have the students progress, I will praise him and reward him some stationery, let him keep up the good work. If, who learn setbacks, I challenge him dont lose heart.

If, one day, I became a teacher, I would like I said: do a and students into a mix, become a bosom friend of the student, rewards and punishment points a good teacher.

每个人都有自己的梦想，当然我也不例外，有的人想当科学家，有的人想当发明家，还有的人想当作家，而我却想当一名教师。

如果，我真当上了一名教师，我会做一个和学生打成一片的好老师，只要一有时间我就要和他们一起快乐的玩耍。

如果，我真当上了一名教师，我回做一个成为同学门朋友们的好老师，只要一有时间，就和他们一起谈心，让他们把他们知道有趣的事一起说出来。

如果，我真当上了一名老师，我会做一个奖罚分明的好老师，有同学进步了，我会表扬他并奖励他一些文具，让他再接再励。如果，有谁学习退步了，我会激励让他不要灰心。

如果，有一天，我真当上了一名教师，我一定会像我说的那样：做一个和学生打成一个打成一片的，成为学生的知心朋友，奖罚分名的好老师。

dear henry,

i’m glad to receive your letter. it’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination.

first of all, a good rest is needed because i do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. of course, i’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. i’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. they’ve done so much for me, you know. if possible, i’ll take part in some social activities so that i can know more about the society.

best wishes!

li hua