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1000初中日记和写作教案
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+ 加入清单第一次作文训练
训练内容:
合理交代记叙的要素
训练目标:
1、全面掌握记叙的六个要素
2、学会交代记叙要素的基本方法
3、初步学会写人记事的方法
训练重点:
1、 全面掌握记叙的六个要素
2、 初步学会写人记事的方法
训练难点:
怎样掌握写人记事的方法
训练时数:三课时
第一课时
教学内容:
作文指导
教学步骤:
一、知识讲解:
(一)什么是记叙的要素
记叙文就是以记叙为主要表达方式的记人叙事的文章。一篇完整的记叙文一般应包括时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果这“六要素”。
那么为何称之为“要素”?
我们知道,记叙文主要是记人叙事的,这“人”和“事”自然包括在要素中,而这“人”和“事”又必须是特定时间、特定地点的“人”和“事”。如英雄刘胡兰是革命战争年代在山西从事革命工作的女共产党员;铁人王进喜是新中国成立不久奋战在大庆油田的劳模。没有时间、地点,也就无法记人与叙事。很显然,时间、地点是记叙文不可缺少的要素。要写人必定要写事,让人物在事件中凸现,在事件中丰满;写事件就必须交待清楚事件发生的原因和结果,没有原因和结果,人们就不知道它的来龙去脉,也就不是一篇完整的记叙文,显然,原因与结果也是记叙的要素。
(二)怎样合理地交待时间与地点
交待时间与地点,大致有以下几种方式:
1.开头交待。
这是人们叙述时时常采用的方法。例如,《竞选》的开头:
五月的天气有点阴。
龟峰乡石坳村的村民选举即将开始,321位选民端坐在会场上。
开头把竞选的时间、地点交待清楚了,为下面叙述竟选场面作了必要的交待。
2.连续交待。
有的记叙文,因事件的发生、发展时间跨度大,地点在不断转移,需要连续交待。如《驿路梨花》中的几处交待:
(1)一弯新月升起来了,我们借助淡淡的月光,在忽明忽暗的梨花林里走着。山间的夜风吹得人脸上凉凉的,梨花的白色花瓣轻轻飘落在我们身上。
(2)第二天早上,我们没有立即上路。老人也没有离开,我们决定把小茅屋修葺一下,给屋顶加点草,把房前屋后的排水沟再挖深一些。
(3)接着,小姑娘向我们讲述了房子的来历。十多年前,有一队解放军路过这里,在树林里过夜,半夜淋了大雨。他们说,这里要有一间给过路人避风雨的小屋就好了,第二天早晨就砍树割草盖起了房子。
(1)段交待的时间是夜晚,地点是梨树林;(2)段交待的时间是第二天早上,地点是(梨树林)茅屋旁;(3)段是补充交待,时间是十多年前,地点是树林。这样连续交待,所叙述的事情就显得脉络分明。
3.间接交待。
对于时间和地点的表示,不一定直接写某年某月某日,某省某市某区,如“桃花开了”“枫叶红了”“天空出现鱼肚白”“几颗寒星还在泛着冷光”,它们分别间接表示“春天”“秋天”“早晨”“夜晚”等时间概念,还有如“雪域高原”“春城”“板栗之乡”,分别间接表达了“西藏”“昆明”“罗田”等地点概念。
(三)怎样合理交待人物与事件
1.人物的正面描写与侧面描写。
(1)正面描写。外貌(肖像)、行动、语言、心理描写属正面描写。
A外貌描写。《背影》为例。
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How can a student love his country (be patriotic)? I find my answer very simple and clear. He must study hard and store up knowledge so as to serve his (the) country in the future. If every student can do according to what I said, the country will certainly be rich and powerful.
要使国家富强是每个公民的责任。为了达到此目的,必须爱国。我认为这是一条不易的定理。
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篇2:短篇英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单My father took me out fishing today. At the beginning, we spent a long time
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我父亲今天带我去钓鱼。一开始,我们花了好长时间都没有鱼。我很不耐烦,不想等了,想回家。爸爸对我说,做什么事情都不要轻易废弃。我们应该继续努力。
篇3:初中生成长感悟日记
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+ 加入清单Traveling is moer and more popular in the modern world.it helps us open our
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When we are free during the holiday ,we can go to some beautiful places to
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+ 加入清单Last Saturday--April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my
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上周六,4月28日,我和我的同学去了学校附近的公园里。你能猜猜我们去做什么了吗?不是去玩而是去参加公益劳动。
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+ 加入清单I am a love reading girl, since I was young, I very love books, and book
the indissoluble bond. I put the book as an indispensable nourishment, he saw a
book like the hungry to see bread, fondle admiringly. Because the book is the
source of human wisdom, is the ladder of human progress. Book give me knowledge
and wisdom, and also gave me strength and courage. In my room, there is a large
bookcase, there are all books, every birthday, mom and dad asked me to want what
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forget all about eating and sleeping, as if into another world.
Reading, can make us grow many knowledge, solve the problem. On one
occasion, grandmother domesticated some hares, hares to depilate, grandma see
hares like bite lice, gradually to open mouth, the neck fur with red meat, and
then use the tongue to the sides, and behind them in a hurry to say to me: "you
see how this rabbit. Red meat are exposed, it doing?" . I to grandma said with a
smile: "it is the hair removal, then fluff will regrow of glistening." My
grandma listened to, smiled and said to me: "how do you know?" I proudly said:
"from the book to see." It seems that these reading useless really big ah.
Colorful in the book, read the "lei feng diary let me know how people live
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always told me to study during my free time. I couldnt watch TV for more than
half an hour and I couldnt search the Internet or play games. Besides, I feel
depressed and I almost lost my heart. But yesterday, my friend came to see me.
She knew I was not happy. She encouaged me that nothing is impossible. If I
could try hard from now on, I would do good in my study. Where there is a will,
there is a way. Only confidence and hardwork can pull me out from failure. If I
want to be good as before, I have to let this failure go and restart again.
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Yesterday was Jacks shopping day. He went shopping with his mother.
They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4
yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at
Mr. Chens Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle
Eddys Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy
car. Its 105 yuan.
They were very happy.
篇12:英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单I woke up at two oclock in the afternoon today. There was nothing to eat
in the house so I went outside.
I wanted to go to a cheap restaurant and find some food to eat. When I got
to the restaurant, I realized that I forgot to bring money, so I went back
home.
Then I realized that I forgot my keys also, so I waited outside for my mom
to come home and starved the rest of the day.
参考翻译
我今天下午二点醒来。屋子里没东西吃,所以我出去了。
我想去一家便宜的餐馆找些吃的。当我到餐厅的时候,我意识到我忘记带钱了,所以我就回家了。
然后我意识到我也忘了带钥匙,所以我在外面等我妈妈回家,并在之后的时间里一直饿着。
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+ 加入清单来得突然——跟随着铺天盖地的乌云,跟随着撕心裂肺的电闪雷鸣,雨,大张旗鼓地来了。
先是听见它的声音,从很高的天空上传来,从很远的地平线上传来——“轰隆隆、轰隆隆”的声音……
仿佛一场战争前的冲锋号,充满激情,动人心魄。霎那间,雨就像百万大军般从四面八方袭来,向地面逐渐逼近过来,由远而近,由远而近……
一声天摇地动的雷声后,天公发怒了,仿佛用一把斧子劈开了厚厚的云层,紧接着,瓢泼似的雨柱带着狂怒的吼声自天而降,直扑到地面上来。一时间,雨与天相连,雨与地相接,氤氲一片逼近了。狂风卷起漫天沙雨打在玻璃上、车窗上,哗哗作响。整个天空像是拉上了一条灰色的篷布,昏天暗地的什么也看不见,只有耳边风魔吹奏的号角和狂风的喧嚣,令人胆寒。
雨改变了世界的颜色,阳光下城市的色彩,仿佛是画家受伤的调色板,色彩数不胜数。嫩绿、翠绿、青绿、粉红、桃红、大红、深红……总之你能想到的所有颜色你都可以在这里找到。但暴雨中的一切都不一样了,所有的颜色仿佛都被暴雨冲刷掉,代替它的是一层深似一层的灰色。灰的胆战心惊,灰的惊天动地。
不知过了多久,雨小了,它如一只垂死的蝴蝶,展了几下翅膀便永远地消失了。
被暴雨冲刷过的城市,清爽极了,天格外蓝,地格外绿。所有躲藏起来的鸟儿,一时间倾巢而出,仿佛是这个城市的精灵。太阳从云层中露出了一束束金光,刺穿云层的光芒就像根根金线,在空中纵横交错,织成一幅美丽的图案,满世界的绿叶都镶嵌上亮闪闪的水珠,一片晶莹……雨后的城市是那样的妩媚。
屋檐下的水滴“叮咚叮咚……”仿佛是战后胜利的号角!
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lives.
Growing up is not a very enjoyable time. It means I have to work hard in
studying and in family. There’s always so much homework given by teachers and so
many arguments between the parents and me. The time is fair, but it seems it
gives pains three quarters and only one quarter to gains.
But gains give me power and confidence. Successes and friendship make me
happy and enjoyable. We played with snow in the winter that seldom snows, we
flew kites in the night that usually belongs to homework, we ate several ice
creams that almost made us cold. We picked up leaven that no longer high up!
Although pains are always more than gains, I believe both of them make my
life more colorful.
篇15:2024年初中生开学第一周日记600字以上
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+ 加入清单“嗨!暑假过得可好啊?”在同学们彼此招呼声中,开学的第一周便随之拉开了帷幕。
九月一日那天,当我按照录取通知书的要求走进七里中学初一(五)班教室的时候,我原小学五年级的班王春晓老师正英姿飒爽地站在讲台上,我又惊又喜,兴奋地跑了过去,激动地说:“王老师,您教我们班吗?”王老师含笑点头示意。刹那间,我仿佛回到了小学时光,和王老师相处的点点滴滴映上心头。“王老师的幽默风趣,孜孜以求,让我在中感受到快乐,同时也学会了不少知识及许多做人的基本道理。王老师的课令我永远难忘、回味无穷。”
正当我在回忆小活美好时光的时候,王老师见同学们都到齐了,首先讲了一些我们小学生进中学后的注意事项。随后,王老师让我们同学自己推选班长,当大家一言我一语地议论时,王老师又问道:“谁有能力当好班长,请自荐。”我未加思考,毫不犹豫地站起来说:“我有能力!”王老师接口道:“我就喜欢这样有勇气的同学!”然后,王老师又征求同学们的意见,我这个自荐班长就走马上任了。
9月日晚,要求我们中、小学生收看部摄制的专题教育片《开学第一课》。这使我身受启发,我感到作为祖国的花朵,应该从现在开始,心中时刻有爱,在服务同学们的过程中,要用心关爱同学们。当个别同学犯了错误的时候,宽容他们;当成绩不好的同学在学习中遇到困难的时候,能“诲人不倦”,热心帮助学习成绩差的同学。和同学们和谐相处,快乐成长。协助班主任把班带好,提升教育水平,为学校争光。
步入初中后的第一周,我仿佛感觉自己真的长大了很多,处理班集体的各种事务也能得心应手,学习也上了一个新台阶。我感觉我真的没有辜负爸妈及老师对我的期望。
节来临之际,谨以此篇习作献给我们可亲可敬的老师们!
篇16:初中暑假英语日记
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+ 加入清单On the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery went in my sight. Both sides of the road stood plenty of trees, green and tall. When raising my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying freely in the blue sky. Then I was lost in thought.
How much I wished I were a bird, which could go wherever it wanted and do whatever it liked. Impossible as it was, I still felt very happy, for I was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoyed the happiness it brought!
As I walked on slowly, a bright simile bloomed on my face.
篇17:我的计划日记初中
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+ 加入清单转眼间,一个学期过去了,还有十多天就要开始一个崭新的生活。
上了初中,果然如同大人和学长,学姐所说“初中与小学大不相同。”以前,读小学的我,从来不会复习,天天过地无忧无虑,就算是考试的头一天,我也要和小伙伴们玩到九点多,即使不复习也能考得一个好成绩。可是,上了初中,真的与小学生活大不相同:
1、老师上课速度明显加快,不再像小学老师再一再二的讲同一个知识点(上课必须认真听讲);
2、需要记的知识点大大增多,每天必须复习当天的知识点(不能考试前开夜车);
3、不应该只惊现于书本上的知识,应该丰富知识面(试卷会有许多不是书本上的知识)……这些都是我总结出来的。
为了弥补我上学期放的不足,所以为下学期制定了这些计划:
1、每天必须完成复习、预习。
2、每天都要总结当天还有什么不足的地方。
3、上课必须认真听讲,不开小差。
4、每个月读完一本名著,周末多看新闻和科教频道。
5、在学校遵守规章制度,配合老师6、每天进步一点点,正如我们老班所说“每天进步一点点,不管是多是少,一天天进步一小步,积累起来就是一大步。”
一个学期过去了,自己在进步,当然别人也在进步;自己在努力,当然别人也在努力;因为每一次考试竞争力都会更加激烈,只有不断的努力,不断的吸取教训,不断的弥补错误,才能有所进步。
篇18:小学英语日记
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+ 加入清单忙碌的星期天
Last week , I had a busy Sunday.
I got up at six oclock at first ,Then ,I must washed my face and brushed
my teeth in ten minutes,Following,I need for breakfast .My breakfast was very
delicious ,so I ate them fast.After this,I went out and went played basketball
with my best friend ,Tom ,in the school playground .We knew many tempering is
good to health, so we can train each week together .In the noon,I went home and
cooked my lunch by myself ,then ate it .In the afternoon ,I stayed at home .I
read books and did my homework three hours .I n the evening ,it is mountain in
the sun ,I began to washed my dirty clothes .At the oclock ,I went to bed and
had a rest.
How a busy day it is !
篇19:2024年初中预防溺水日记
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+ 加入清单生命每人都只有一次,这唯一的一次需要倍加爱护。全国每年约有16万人死于意外,淹死的人每天就有40人左右。
水是人人都需要的东西,看表面它十分温顺,可它心中却暗藏杀机。水会无情的夺走你的生命,就像天上的流星一样一去不还。
我省某校4名初中生在还没有放暑假时结队偷偷去小溪里洗澡。在4人玩得开心的时候,死神悄悄地走近了他们的身旁。而他们丝毫没有注意到危险的来临,还是在那里享受着溪水的凉爽。突然一名学生扑腾着沉入水中,同伴看见了就用自己的手抓着同伴的手。本想救同伴上来,可不料都一一沉入了水中。他们人走了,却留下了父母无限的痛苦。
烈日当空照,照的人们都想去洗个冷水澡。在这个时候,悲剧就开始了。某校三年级3人独自到小溪里洗澡,一名学生的脚抽筋了,渐渐地沉入了水中。其他的两个同伴以为他在和他们玩捉迷藏就大声喊叫:“别玩了,快出来吧!”可同伴怎么会听到呢?两人渐渐感到事情不妙,就在水下找了几番,可就是找不到。在这危机的时刻,他们快速离开了小溪。
父母见自己的孩子这么久了都没有回来就报警了。而两人因为害怕不敢把真相告诉父母。一个活泼的生命像流星般的坠落了。他死前的救命声有谁听到过?他死前的扑腾又有谁感受到过呢?做错的到底是谁?是一个失去生命的孩子吗?是那两个年幼无知的孩子吗?还是那条流淌着的小溪?
水永远不会避开人,而人却可以避开水。让我们牢记这几个真实的教训。一失足成千古恨,别让自己的生命变成流星。
篇20:大学英语日记感恩节
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+ 加入清单Thanksgiving which falls on the fourth Thursday of November, is one of the
biggest American holidays. This holiday started in the early 1600s after
settlers arrived in America. These people who came from Europe didnt know how
to survive in the wild new country. Luckily, they met some friendly American
Indians, who showed them how to hunt turkeys and grow corn. In the fall, after
the harvest, the settlers had a great feast. They invited the Indians to thank
them for their help. Today the tradition continues. On Thanksgiving Day,
Americans invite their friends over for a turkey dinner and give thanks for what
they have.