关于家乡的高中英语作文（汇编20篇）

人们常说，最美不过家乡的水。我的家乡虽然没有什么名胜古迹，也没有大都市的繁华，但风景如画，景色迷人。 在离我家屋后不远有一条清澈的小河。碧绿的河面在金色阳光的照射下，显得波光粼粼。小河两旁绿树成荫，树影婆娑，那些花花草草随风摇曳，令人赏心悦目，恋恋不舍。小河里成群的小白鹅排成一列，欢快地游来游去。岸边三三两两的人们一边洗衣服一边聊天;夏天伙伴们在水边嬉戏，打水仗。小河就是我们快乐的天堂。 近年来，我的家乡正在发生着翻天覆地的变化。从前狭窄的公路变得更宽阔了。一条条宽阔的水泥公路纵横交错，四通八达，川流不息的汽车在公路上飞快地驶过。公路两旁人来人往，一到晚上，一盏盏路灯把公路照得如同白昼。街道两旁一幢幢高楼拔地而起，家家户户都盖起了新楼房，取代了以前破烂不堪的小平房。形形色色的商店，一个个大型的超市，象雨后春笋一般出现在人们的面前，商店里的商品琳琅满目，让人目不暇接，真是应有尽有。店里的顾客摩肩接踵，络绎不绝，给人们日常生活带来了极大的方便。 我的家乡最有特色的建筑就是晏家广场。广场有一个大花园，分为里外两层，广场中央有三根大理石柱，最粗的石柱上刻着四个金光闪闪的大字。晏家广场左边石柱上顶着一个圆圆的太阳，右边石柱上有三颗亮晶晶的星星和一个弯弯的月亮，他们象征着日月同辉;中间的石柱上有一匹飞奔的骏马，高高的马头仰天长啸，目不转睛的注视着远方，你看它浑身每个部位都搭配的那么得当，每块肌肉都显得那么有力量，胖墩墩、圆滚滚的屁股上，长长的鬃毛上往后飞扬，四只蹄子平稳的停在空中，看起来那么雄壮威武。这匹骏马象征我们晏家明天更加美好!更加繁荣苍盛!每当夜幕降临的时候，广场成了人们聊天纳凉的好地方。晏家广场就像一颗耀眼的明珠镶嵌在晏家镇的中央。晏家广场是晏家人民的骄傲! 由于长寿经济大发展，我们这里的田地渐渐减少，取而代之的是鳞次接比的厂房，一座座美丽的厂房就像一座座美丽的大花园，厂房四周那一块块绿油油的草坪象一块块绿色的地毯，花坛里的花儿争奇斗艳、吐露芬芳。晏家可谓是旧貌换新颜!晏家人民真是有着敢叫日月换新天的壮志豪情呀!

听了我的一番介绍，你大概心动了吧，心动不如行动，请你快到我的家乡来吧!我的家乡比我描绘得更美丽，定会让你大饱眼福!

Good morning! My name is Somiar, and my Chinese name is Lu Ziyan. I’m from the Second Experiment Primary School in Jinyun. I study in Class 3, Grade 5. I like my teachers and classmates. And I like my family, too. That is a lovely family. There are three members in my family---my father, my mother and me. My mother is a teacher, my father is a cook. They all love me, and I love them, too. You see, I’m a lovely, easy-going and kind girl. I like reading books, singing songs and playing computer games, and also I’m fond of speaking English with my English teacher, Miss Chen. Because I like English. Do you like English? Do you love me? I hope I can not only improve my English but also make more friends by the speech.

早上好!我的名字是Somiar，我的中文名字叫卢紫嫣。我是来自缙云第二实验小学。我在5年级3班学习。我喜欢我的老师和同学们。我喜欢我的家庭，太。这是一个可爱的家庭。在我的家里--我的父亲有三个成员，我的妈妈和我。我的妈妈是一名老师，我的爸爸是一个厨师。他们都很爱我，我爱他们，太。你看，我是一个可爱的，随和，善良的女孩。我喜欢阅读，唱歌和玩电脑游戏，我也喜欢我的英语老师说英语，陈小姐。因为我喜欢英语。你喜欢英语吗?你爱我吗?我希望我不仅能提高我的英语，但也让更多的朋友的演讲。

Today, I’d like to talk about my hometown---Lishui. I love my hometown. It’s a beautiful land in the southwest of Zhejiang. It’s famous for green mountain and clean water. It’s the first country pictured in China. There are many great places of interest in my hometown, such as Sendo, Nanming Mountain, East-west Rock and so on. Every years, many people come to visit Lishui and take some beautiful photos. And you can see the photos in some books. How beautiful! Have you been there? It’s a pity really, if you not.

今天，我想谈谈我的家乡---溧水。我爱我的家乡。这是浙江西南部的一个美丽的土地。这是著名的绿山和干净的水。这是第一个国家在中国的照片。在我的家乡有很多伟大的名胜，如仙都，南明山，东西岩等。每一年，很多人来溧水参观、拍照。你可以看到一些书的照片。多么美丽!你去过那里吗?遗憾的是真的，如果你不。

Do you know Ou River? It’s a river of people’s life. It keeps running and running all the year round, just like a lively horse. There are many resources and special products in my hometown, like Qingtian stone carving, Longquan double-edged sword and Qingyuan mushroom. Do you know them? All of them are famous in the world. How cool! I love my hometown. It’s getting more and more beautiful now. One day, I think it will be the centre of shopping as well as traveling.

你知道欧江吗?这是一条河的人们的生活。它不停的奔跑一年四季，就像一个热闹的马。我的家乡有很多的资源和特殊的产品，比如青田石雕，龙泉宝剑、清远蘑菇。你认识他们吗?他们都是世界上著名的。多酷!我爱我的家乡。它变得越来越漂亮了。有一天，我认为这将是购物中心以及旅游。

Would you like to visit my hometown? I hope to see you soon. “One world one dream.” Let’s have a great time in my hometown Lishui.

你想去参观我的家乡吗?我希望不久能见到你。“同一个世界同一个梦想”。让我们在溧水度过一个美好的时间。

That’s all. Thank you!

这是所有。谢谢你!

Good morning. It is my honour to come here for this interview.

First let me introduce myself to you. My name is Wendy. I am 17 years old, and was born in Jinan, Shandong Province. I was graduated from ** Middle School.

I am always studying hard, and I have achieved lots of fruitful results, including many certifications.

I am optimistic and open-minded. I have made a lots of good friends in my school.

In my spare time, I like reading and listening to the music. Sometimes, I also like to play basketball.

I hope I have the chance to enter the school. And I also believe that where there is a will, there is a way.

That is all. Thanks for your attention.

导语：《茶花女》故事讲述了一个青年人与巴黎上流社会一位交际花曲折凄婉的爱情故事。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I read the Chinese version of “Camille” a few years ago. At that time I was deeply moved by the main character Marguerite Gautier. “Camille” or “The Lady of the Camellias” by Alexandre Dumas, fils, is the story of Marguerite Gautier, a young courtesan, or kept woman, in Paris in the mid 1800s, and how she falls in love with a young man, Armand Duval, and then tries to escape from her questionable past. Unfortunately, it comes back to haunt her and she ends up returning to that life and dies painfully and alone, but with the knowledge that she was a noble woman at heart. When I first began to read the book, I did not care for Marguerite or her attitude or lifestyle, but as I got further into the narrative, I realized that her saucy attitude was a front to cover the lonely woman that she really was. She felt used, abused and unloved, until the gentle Armand Duval came into her life and showed her that he loved her as a person and not for what she could do for him. It must have taken great courage for Marguerite to leave the life she had lived for so long, knowing all along that it was probably too good to be true and would not last indefinitely. And it also showed that Marguerite really loved Armand Duval for she could even change herself for him.

However, happiness didn’t last for long. When M. Duval, Armands father, came to her, pleading for her to leave Armand to save both Armands reputation and that of his younger innocent sister, Marguerite saw a way to become pure of heart, if not in body. She felt that it was her duty, because she loved Armand so much, to do this even though it meant giving up her own happiness and hurting Armand temporarily. She reluctantly returned to her former life, knowing that some day Armand would forgive her. Sadly, she died in debt and basically alone, except for her one female friend, Julie Duprat, who helped her during her illness. She had her journal sent to Armand after her death, explaining why she had made the choices she had. I think Dumass last few lines about Marguerite being the exception, not the rule were quite true, and I also agreed with his view that while her lifestyle could not be condoned, we as a society assume that all of these type of women are cold and heartless, while this may not always be the case. A person can make the wrong choices in life when they are young, and try to redeem themselves, but sometimes past situations prevent them from changing their lives, even though they desperately wish to do so. This applies to both men and women in many different types of circumstances: involvement in crime; drug or alcohol abuse; gambling; prostitution; financial problems; poor marriage choices; etc. And this is the fact, which exists in the whole society.

As far as the other characters in the book, I think Marguerite was right in saying that no one truly cared about her, but only wanted something from her, the only exceptions being Armand and Julie Duprat. Of course, the Comte de G. and Comte de N. wanted her body and appearance. The Duke needed to “wake up and smell the coffee” and realize that she could never replace his dead daughter. If he truly cared, he could have helped her leave her lifestyle without “keeping” her himself. And lastly, Prudence was a blood-sucking leech who used Marguerite almost worse than the men. I also think she was jealous of the fact that Marguerite had so much more courage than herself and someone truly loved her.

Last morning, when tiding my bookshelf, I took this book out of the shelf, and a dried flower flew away from the book. It was pale blue, very transparent, with thin fine veins. a dried flower flew away from the book. It was pale blue, very transparent, with thin fine veins. I held it against the morning light and blew on it. The soft breeze carried it away. Camille is just like the camellia, she could never escape from the destiny of withering. But it wasn’t her fault; it’s because of the evil of Capitalism and the hideousness of that society.

Suddenly, I remembered a saying: “Women are like the flowers”. Those pretty women are like those beautiful flowers; their delicate beauty makes people feel they are the miracle of life. However, even the God envies their beauty. It seems that beautiful women always have tragic endings. As we are normal persons, even we can see the hideousness of humanity that results in their fate of withering, we can at most ask quietly in our hearts: Where have those beautiful flowers gone? Where have they gone?

家乡的变化 Changes in My Hometown

Myhome town is in the center of Xuzhou which was a quiet and beautiful place. Inthe past, there were many animals. They were lovely and nice. The air was freshand there were many birds fly in the sky.

我的家乡在徐州，是一个安静而美丽的地方中心。在过去，有许多动物。他们是可爱的，漂亮的。空气清新，有许多鸟在天空飞翔。

Overthe past years, it has changed a lot. At the present, it becomes a modern town and developsa lot. Now, the people in Xuzhou are richer than before, so most of people goto work by bus or by underground. Sometimes, they also drive their private carsto work. Many people sell out their old houses and move into new flats.

过去的那些年，它已经发生了很大的变化。现在，它已经成为一个现代化城市，也得到了很大的发展。现在徐州的人都比以前富有，所以大多数人都是乘巴士或地铁去工作的。有时候，他们也开私家车去上班。很多人卖了他们的老房子，然后搬进新公寓。

Insome ways, the development has brought some good things, but it has also causesmuch environment pollution. I think we should take action to reduce thepollution.

在某些方面，发展带来了好处，但是也带来了环境污染。我认为我们应该采取措施来减少污染。

导语：随着人们生活水平的提高，私家车数量不断增加。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Private cars have become an important aspect of people‘s life in many parts of our country, especially in large cities such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. While they bring much convenience to people, they are also widely criticized. There are some arguments for owning private cars. In the first place, cars allow people to move around freely, which greatly improves our living standard. We can easily drive cars for sightseeing on weekends. In the second place, cars are a comfortable way to travel, especially in bad weather. Last but not least, the car industry can boost economy by creating many job opportunities in production of steel, rubber, glass and so on. However, there are also many good arguments against cars. First of all, they pollute the environment by emitting harmful gases and giving out loud noises. In addition, cars cause a large number of traffic accidents, which bring great misery to the victims‘ families. As far as I am concerned, we should limit the number of private cars by providing better mass transportation and better service for the people. Everyone should sacrifice his or her own interest for the common good of the society.

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私家车已成为我国许多地区人民生活的一个重要方面，特别是在北京、上海和中国等大城市。虽然他们给人们带来很多方便，但他们也被广泛批评。有一些理由拥有私家车。首先，汽车可以让人们自由走动，这大大提高了我们的生活水平。周末我们可以很容易地开车观光。其次，汽车是一种舒适的旅行方式，尤其是在恶劣的天气里。最后但并非最不重要的是，汽车工业可以通过创造钢铁、橡胶、玻璃等的就业机会来提振经济。然而，也有许多好论据反对汽车。首先，他们通过排放有害气体和发出大声的噪音来污染环境。此外，汽车造成了大量的交通事故，给遇难者家属带来了极大的痛苦。就我而言，我们应该通过提供更好的大众运输和更好的服务来限制私家车的数量。为了社会的共同利益，每个人都应该牺牲自己的利益。

Clothes are so significant in our daily life that we cant live without

them, because they are useful in many ways. For example, clothes could keep us

warm in winter and protect our skin from the heavy sunshine in summer. Whats

more, Clothes make a man just as a saddle makes a horse. Everyday we wear

different kinds of clothes to make ourselves more attractive. Suppose if we wore

the same clothes all the time, our life would be so boring.

As far as Im concerned, I know some kinds of clothes, such as formal

clothes, casual clothes, evening wears and uniforms. In different situations, we

wear different clothes. For example, we wear formal clothes to go to meetings;

we wear casual clothes at home; we wear evening wears to attend evening parties,

and we wear uniforms at school or at work.

Nevertheless, I prefer casual clothes, because they are comfortable. And

they are also very cheap. When I wear casual clothes, I can do a lot of sports.

It’s so cool. By the way, red is my favorite color, since Ive got a white skin.

If Im in red, Ill look kind and friendly. So I always buy red clothes when

shopping.

Many people like traveling. They just feel happy when traveling. But not many people will think the meaning of travel. What is the meaning of travel? Actually, one of the meanings is to find happiness. Putting aside all the trouble to enjoy themselves usually makes people happy. There is another important meaning. It is to learn things. To go out for a visit can enlarge people’s vision. People can learn a lot from it. Therefore, sometimes we will find that some people will be different after they return home from travel. It is because they learn the true meaning of travel.

很多人都喜欢旅行。他们就觉得旅行的时候很开心。但并不是很多人会想旅行的意义。旅行的意义是什么呢？实际上，其中一个就是去寻找快乐。抛开所有的烦恼去享受通常都能让人开心起来。还有一个重要的意义。那就是学习。出去走走可以拓宽人们的视野。人们可以从中学到很多东西。所以，有时我们会发现有些人在旅游回来后会变得不太一样。这是因为他们了解了旅行的真谛。

[高中英语作文：旅行的真谛

today is national day.we have no classes. in the morning,i went to the people‘s park with my mother.we had a good time. in the afternoon,i helped my parents to cook supper.i had a busy day today.

oct .1 xx sunny

today is national day,but i don’t feel any happy at all,just no reson. last night i download the english paper till 3am,sometime i want to give up.but in order to accomplish my dream.i can handle it.

today is national day on oct,1 xx,weiqun have 2 days as holiday,i just made a call to home but she still didn‘‘t get home,i asked mother to try to call her to confirm her position right now in order to be convenient for taking fetch by my father in 6-cross roadmouth. new house has been finished nearly. dad decided to resume working in houzai glass factory just for rmb350 monthly even actually i don‘‘t want him to work back. there are 7 days holiday i will take for chinese national day. but maybe i need on duty every day. linyunbin will come back to dongguan today.

The after-class activities in my school are colorful. Every day we play basketball, football, do rope skipping and so on. But I like the Month of Science and Technology and the Cultural Festival most. In those days, we have a chance: to show ourselves to all the students. We can invent something with some classmates. And we can act in a play or make a speech or take part in the competition of singing. I enjoy myseff in those activities.

我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩。每天我们打篮球、踢足球、跳绳等等。但是我最喜欢科技月和文化节。那时我们有机会向所有学生展示我们自己。我们可以和其他同学一起做小发明。我们还可以表演、演讲或参加唱歌比赛。我非常喜欢这些活动。

My hometown is Guiyang, a small city in Southwest China, surrounded by rolling green mountains. A river runs through it, with locust trees lining along both banks. In Spring the locust trees all blossom at the same time, spreading the delicate fragrance all around the city. In Summer there will be little boats floating on the river, the laughter of children resonating with the sound of the running water.

我的家乡是贵阳，一个中国西南的边的小城市，四周群山环绕。有一条护城河，两岸种植着槐树。春天槐树都在同一时间开花，全城都弥漫着淡淡的芳香。夏天的时候有小舟在河飘动，孩子们的笑声在在水流声间回荡。

I was born and grew up in the city, and Im very affectionate to it. It rains a lot, but the climate is very mild, neither too cold nor too hot throughout the year. It is small and not very prosperous, but people there are warm-hearted and straightforward. The life pace there is slow and peaceful. Its a good place for spending hot summer days.

我在这座城市出生、成长，我非常热爱它。贵阳常常下雨，但气候宜人，一年之间不会太冷、也不会太热。贵阳很小也不繁华，但是这里的人都很热情、直爽。这里的生活悠闲而安详。这是一个度过酷热暑假的好地方。

That is my hometown. I love her deeply from the bottom of my heart.

这就是我的家乡，我深爱的着的地方。

One day, Doras mother gave her a coin, It was a bit dirty, so Dora washed it. Then it started talking to Dora.

Today I talked to a coin, When it was made, it was nice and clean. People took the coin to a bank. It stayed there for a few days. A person at the bank gave the bank gave the coin to a man. My mother went to buy some cake from the mans shop. The man gave the coin to her as part of her change. She dropped the coin. A street cleaner saw it and picked it up. He returned it to my mother. She gave it to me as pocket money. I washed the coin to make it clean again.

一天，多拉的母亲给了她一枚硬币。它有点儿脏，所以多拉把它洗了洗。听听这个硬币的英语故事。

今天我和一枚硬币谈话了，当它被铸造的时候，它很好看而且干净.人们把钱存到银行。它在那儿待几天.银行的人把这枚硬币给了一名男子。我的母亲从这名男子的商店里买一些蛋糕。这名男子将这枚硬币作为零钱的一部分找给她。她掉了这枚硬币。一位街道清洁工看到了并把它捡起来。他把她还给了我母亲。母亲把它当零花钱给我了，我洗了这枚硬币，让它再次变干净。

There is a saying that man proposes, god disposes, which means man plan the

things and the rest of the outcome lies in the luck. This saying reflects the

connection between hard-work and luck, which is though sometimes we have worked

so hard, luck occupies great position, the unexpected things happen and refrain

us from succeeding. In order to be successful, people work so hard, they believe

they can achieve their goals, but lacking luck stops them achieving their goals.

So working hard doesn’t mean bringing people success directly, they just need to

try more times, without luck, they still can make their goals. Luck can help

people close to success, without hard-work, they can’t be successful. Hard-work

and luck make people realize their goals, but without luck, people still can

make it by trying more times.

What is the definition of a good neighbor?Well, in my opinion, a good neighbor should have the qualities: to care aboutother’s feeling, and help others unselfishly.

一个好邻居的定义是什么？在我看来，一个好邻居应该有这些品质：关心他人感受，无私的帮助别人。

I feel lucky to have a good neighbor. Sheis about 65 years old. I remember it clearly，one night, I wascaught in a pouring rain, and then I suffered from a high fever. My parentswere on business, so I turned to her for help, I recovered soon. I have anotherneighbor, we’re in the same age, went to the same school. We always playedtogether. I’m not good at Physics at that time. It was hard for me to pass theexam. After school, she always helped me with my Physics. With her help, I madea big process in my final exam.

我感到很幸运自己有位好邻居。她大概65岁。我记得很清楚，一个风雨交加的夜晚，我发烧了。我的父母正好出差，所以我向她求救，很快，我康复了。我还有一邻居，年龄和我一样，在同一学校上学。我们总是一起玩。那段时间，我的物理不是很好，考试很难通过。放学后，她总是帮助我补课。通过她的帮助，我在期末考试中取得了很大的进步。

Good neighbors create a comfortable andsafe living environment. They’re also our good friends. They make a bigdifference in our daily life.

好的邻居提供了舒适和安全的居住环境。他们也是我们的好朋友，让我们的生活变得与众不同。

[高中英语作文：好邻居

郭文斌的获奖小说《吉祥如意》我最初拿到手时一口气读了三遍，后来又陆续读了几遍，每读一遍，都有新的感受。这不仅仅是因为我与作者是同乡熟悉的缘故，更重要的是作品的意境紧紧地吸引了我。

作品描述的是端午节的清晨五月六月一家人按照传统习俗采集“吉祥如意”的过程，小主人公五月和弟弟六月被母亲煮在瓦罐里发酵的甜醅子“香”醒以后，“就呼地一下子从被筒里翻出来”，便开始了一早晨短暂而充实愉快地节日之旅。于是，插杨柳、上供、吃花馍、绑花绳、戴香包、上山采艾（其实还应当有抹雄黄和点高高山）等民俗活动便被抽丝剥茧般地徐徐绽开。童年的端午节便在《吉祥如意》里徜徉。

《吉祥如意》给我最大的感受是：心灵美升华为语言美，语言美构建了意境美，意境美揭示了生活美、人性美。

由于“美在心里”，所以满目皆是春风，皆是祥和。“甜醅发的，就像是好日子一样”，“不用吃，光闻着就能让人醉”；“长长的巷道里，散发着柳枝的清香味”；巷道里和山上的雾也是香的，就连跪在雨后“湿漉漉的”地下上供、磕头，“膝盖和额头挨到上面凉津津的，有种让人骨头过电的爽”。戴香包，绑花绳，吃花馍馍，采艾，作者都用了浓墨重彩，描绘出了一幅乡村节日风情画，让人在宁静恬淡中感受热烈狂欢，在清凉肃穆中体会温馨祥和，在纯朴含蓄中领略隽永庄重﹍﹍而这些感悟，集中表现在以下几组情节中。

戴香包香包（我们家乡叫荷包）本来是未过门的准媳妇绣好送给婆家人的，五月还小，没有订亲，就由娘代替。但为了及早培养“女靠一个巧”，娘就让还是幼女的五月戴了她的大顶针学做香包，以致因不熟练针扎破了她的小手。香包里装了棉花，棉花上撒了香料，这样的香包“既是鼓的，又是香的”，六月为了品味香气，竟抢夺了姐姐五月的香包尽情地吸息，“鼻孔一下一下张得更大了，窑洞一样。”他真感觉到“能把鼻子香炸”。香包对于节日里农村的孩子来说显得太重要了，六月因为看到姐姐的香包而想起自己忘了放在家里的香包，“一下子就崩溃了”，他不顾姐姐的感受，抢夺了她的香包，后来想象到爹给娘往口里吹香气可能用的是自己的香包时，断然要放弃采艾这样重要的事情回家去取。然而，他随后却大大方方地把姐姐的香包送给了女孩子白云。白云接到香包就“有点担当不起的样子”。而姐姐五月“胸前没有了香包一下子暗淡下来，就像是一个被摘掉了花的花杆儿，看上去可怜兮兮的。”

绑花绳端午节孩子在手腕脚腕和脖子上绑了花绳，就“像是布下了百万雄兵”，蛇蝎就会绕道而行，所以姐弟俩选购花花绳就格外地用心，“每人手里攥着两角钱，蜜蜂一样在这儿嗅嗅，那儿闻闻”。他们认为“街的新媳妇最漂亮”，因为它的“一个大胳膊上就戴了那么多的花绳儿”。当他们“手里各拿着五根花绳儿”的时候，“那个美啊，简直能把人美死。”绑了花花绳的胳膊是神圣的，就是在上山采艾的路上，他们也“不停地把手腕上的花绳亮出来看。”当他们真正遇到蛇时，尽管心里发虚，以致分别在手心和裤管上留下了紧张恐惧的体液，但在整个过程中还是以腕上绑的花绳作为心理防线为自己壮胆。

吃花馍馍花馍馍是端午节的特有食品。作品中有两段精彩的描写。我们倒过来先说它的做工吧？“花馍馍当然不同于平常的馍馍了，是娘用干面打成的，里面放了鸡蛋和清油，父亲用面杖压了一百次，娘用手团了一百次，又在盆里醒了一夜，才放到锅里慢火烙的。一年才能吃一次，嚼在口里面津津的，柔筋筋的，有些甜，又有些淡淡的咸。让人不忍心一下子咽到肚里去。”另一段是娘为姐弟俩分花馍馍，“先从中间的绿线上掰开，再从掰开的那半牙中间的红线上掰开，再从掰开的那小半牙中间的黄线上掰开，给五月和六月每人一牙儿﹍﹍”寥寥数语，把花馍馍近乎神圣的“不平常”描绘得入木三分。小时候，因家里生活困难，记得嫂嫂就是这样为我们姐弟叔侄分花馍馍的，好象作者就是在写我们。

采艾艾的药用功能十分广泛，有祛寒、中和、防腐、止痛、化瘀等疗效，相传还能避邪。在端午节凌晨带露采集的最好。这一点，作者是了解的，所以他用了相当的篇幅进行了细致入微地表述。这一点无疑是“吉祥如意”主题的点睛之笔。作者采用了拟人化的手法，以“太阳蛋蛋”和“露水蛋蛋”来形容晨光下露珠的纯洁、美好，也昭示生命的短暂。看见艾一株株倒在自己的手上，天真无邪的六月“就觉得有无数吉祥如意扑到他的怀里，潮水一样。”这里也写出了“黛玉葬花”般的意境，当六月“觉得这珠露儿太可怜”还是下不了手采割时，五月笑着提醒他：“如果你觉得它们可怜，你可以先把它们摇掉啊，让它们慢慢睡去，你再动手啊。”也许是因了姐姐的这句富有人情味儿的话，作为弟弟的六月才倏然生发出一种想象：姐姐就像一株艾。如果她真是一株艾，那么该由谁来采呢？这种依恋的怪怪的思维，正好与前面的“等我考上干部后，就让我姐嫁给我”相呼应。

《吉祥如意》中的亮点太多了，在有限的篇幅里是难以尽述的，许多评论家已经有过精辟地评论，这里就不再赘述。我倒想竭诚为这篇得意之作找点毛病，与作者和广大读者商榷交流。美玉尚有微瑕，《吉祥如意》也有不尽如意的地方。具体表现在以下三个方面。

一、一些措辞牵强，不附和人物身份

作品中的主人公五月和六月，尽管作者没有交待她和他的具体年龄，但从姐弟俩同睡一个被窝和他们天真的思想和举止来看，他们的年龄不会超过六岁，或者更小。这样小的年龄再加上身居偏僻农村，孤陋寡闻的环境，他们的思维和活动空间应该是很有限的，有些感受他们是体会不出来的，即使有过体会感悟，也不可能用丰富的词汇表达出来的。如绑花绳时，“六月就觉得绑了花绳的胳膊上像是布下了百万雄兵。”他们还没有上学念书，父母亲也没有文化，“百万雄兵”这个词语不可能出自六月的意念。后面还用了“崩溃”、“过电”、“委曲”、“美女蛇”、“崇拜”、“深不可测”、“遗憾”等只有有知识的大人才能感悟和说出口的词汇。如果是作者的直接表达倒也罢了，但上述词汇全都是通过小主人公的思维和意念表达出来的。当六月把艾株上的露珠用手摇掉后，他感到是自己的手“让这些美死去”时，就“突然觉得它不单单是一只手，它的里面还藏着一些深不可测的东西”。“深不可测”出自儿童六月的思维也是牵强。“过电”这个词在日常生活中比较常用，通常来形容身体的某个部位在接触某种现象时爽快的感觉，这是大人们常用的词语，六月用这样的词也不洽切。

二、一些词语和词义重复

不必要的重复和雷同是作品创作之大忌。《吉祥如意》中雷同的词语也有几处。一是上面提到的“过电”。一处是，当六月按照父亲的指点跪在湿漉漉的地上磕头时，膝盖和额头挨到上面凉津津的，“有种让人过电的爽”。另一处是，六月在父亲的指导下杵香料，当他领悟了杵香料的技巧时，“激动得头皮一阵阵过电。”一个小孩子他身体没有接触过电击电疗，也就不会有“过电”的感觉，况且“过电”也不爽，他一再产生“过电”的感觉不尽合理。二是对于花馍馍的表述。在如何做和怎么吃花馍馍这两个环节上，在不到百字的篇幅里，作品两次强调了“这么好看的花馍馍，让人怎么忍心下口啊”和“让人不忍心一下子咽到肚里去。”这样的类似雷同的情节和词语还有几处。如果是作品人物语言或行动举止，这样的表达是无可质疑的，因为有的人他在语言上行动上总是习惯成自然地重复自己的话和行动。但在一篇不长的作品中，作者还是应该严而又谨，惜墨如金，避免不必要的雷同与重复。

三、有一处不合时宜的“硬伤”

在作品的第三节，东家在桌子上供了甜醅子和花馍馍时，“还有新下来的梨和大枣，在蒙蒙的夜色里，有一种神秘的味道。”谁都知道，梨和大枣是秋果，一般在八九月份成熟，不可能在端午节“新下来”。这是一处“硬伤”。退一步说，如果上面的其它两点还可以找理由“忽悠”的话，这处“硬伤”却是没办法处理的，它像一块瑕疵一样醒目地镶嵌在美玉之中，尽管影响不了美玉的质底，但也让人感觉不尽其美。

笔者无意鸡蛋里面挑骨头，是抱着认真负责的态度“班门弄斧”。作者文斌是笔者的同乡和曾经的同事，还很年轻，今后创作的路子还很长，他不仅要以获得“鲁讯文学奖”为总结和荣耀，而更应当以此为里程碑、新起点，再次或多次获此殊荣，摘取其它文学奖项桂冠也应该是他刻意追求树立的目标。所以才“吹毛求疵”，提醒作者本人和所有作家，创作时精益求精，尽量不留遗憾。

My hometown Nanchang is the Peoples Republic of China Jiangxi Provinces provincial capital, Chinese one of 35 super cities, has the essence or quintessence of things tianbao, the human outstanding earth deities since the ancient times fine reputation.It has more than 2200 years history and the deep cultural inside story, is the Peoples Republic of China State Council names the historical city.Not only Nanchang is the ecological environment exquisite the Chiangnan region of rivers and lakes, Communist Party of China it the colors raise place.Has the honor to receive many times the Peoples Republic of China"the nation cultured and civilized city", "the national health cityadvanced city", "the Chinese outstanding traveling city", "thenational two supports model city" the title.

Nanchang is situated at middle and lower reaches Yangtze River, westPoyang Lake the Nanan, is only 11 the provincial capital city whichwith southeast the Yangtze River delta, the Zhujiang Delta and Fujianthe economic zone adjoin west, receives opens, north-south north andsouth. Beijing nine, Zhejiang and Jiangxi provinces, the Anhui Jianxithree bar iron routes connect to this, is Beijing nine on-line theonly provincial capital city; 105th, 320, 316 federal highways gothrough vertically Nanchang; The Changbei international airport mayreach national each big city; The water transportation enters YangtzeRiver after Ganjiang River to leave East China Sea. Looked from theeconomic significance that, Nanchang has become international andeastern part the coastal developed area industry gradient shift idealarea.

Before we go to school, we get our parents to supervise us all the time, so we live in a very safe environment.

While when we go to school, parents can’t keep their eyes on us all the time, they are so worried about us, so they begin to tell us how to keep ourselves safe.

The most important thing is that don’t talk to strangers, as a teenager, we haven’t had the ability to judge who is the good guy and who is the bad guy, so it is better not to talk to the strangers.

The bad guys will like to talk to the teenagers, they want to do something to pay the teenagers’ attention, thus they can induce the children to go with them and do the bad thing.

In order to protect teenagers’ security, teenagers are taught to keep distant from the stranger.

在我们上学前，我们一直有父母的照看，所以我们生长在一个很安全的环境。然而当我们上学以后，父母不能一直监视着我们，他们很担心我们，因此他们开始教导我们如何保持自身的安全。

最重要的事情就是不要和陌生人说话，作为一名青少年，我们还没有能力去判断好人和坏人，所以最好不要和陌生人讲话。

坏人会喜欢和青少年聊天，他们想要做一些事情来吸引青少年的注意，以此来引诱青少年跟他们走，做坏事。

为了保护青少年的安全，青少年应该和陌生人保持距离。

[高中英语作文：不要和陌生人说话

Today, as the economy develops fast, people can buy what they need, the

producers provide them all the new things, so the factory produce many products,

in order to make the biggest profit, they don’t deal with the pollution. Water

gets polluted, it does harm to people’s health, we drink water everyday, the

government controls the producers to figure out some ways to deal with the water

pollution.

I miss you very much, Mum.

I have left you for four days. Maybe it is really a short time. But I feel it is too long. I found that I couldn’t do a lot of things without you. For example, I couldn’t wash my clothes clean. It is too hard for me. I felt it is too troublesome and toilsome, but I’m sixteen years old now. I must be independent. So, Mum, I don’t know what’s what and I’m very stubborn. Sometimes, I disobeied your desire, which made you very angry. Now, I regret it. When I see some white hair in your head, I felt very sad. You are not young nay more. Sometimes you look very haggard. I know that’s because you give too much. You always concerned with my school record, healthy and a lot of other things. My school record always made you very sad. That’s my falt. I’m sorry.

Mum, you are too labbrious. You must have a good rest. I come of my ago now. I will correct my mistakes. You can rest assured!

Mum, I wish you good health and happy. I love you! Mum!(www.kuaidu.com.cn)

The Pregant Teenage Girl

Recently, a girl who was born after the year of 2000 showing a picture of her pregant image in Weibo. This teenage girl wrote down the words that she was busying giving birth to a child for her so called husband, who was also a teenager. Soon this picture became the hot issue. People were so shocked by the girl’s young face, which looked so innocent and she was just no more than 16!Such a young girl surely did not have the ability to raise a kid, what’s more, they even did not figure out the meaning of responsibility. The problem of family education was brought to the public again. The root of young pregancy lies in the parents’ caring. The lack of communication between parents and chidren is easy to have such problem. It is not appropriate to have baby at such early age.

最近,一个出生在2000年后的女孩在微博展示了她怀孕的照片。这少女写下一些话,她忙着为所谓的丈夫生孩子,他丈夫也是一个少年。很快这张照片成为了热点。人们如此震惊于这位女孩稚嫩的脸,她看上去很天真,不超过16 岁!这样一个年轻的女孩肯定没有能力抚养孩子,更重要的是,他们甚至没有弄清楚责任的意义。家庭教育的问题再次被带到公众面前。如此年轻就怀孕的根源在于父母的关怀程度。父母和子女之间缺乏沟通很容易有这样的问题。如此小的年纪就有孩子是不合适的。

[高中写人英语作文

My hometown is in xiushui county, jiangxi province, there is a beautiful place. Trees all the year round, flowers in full bloom.

Spring, connect dressed in colorful dress, lightly stepped onto the stage, she put the long sleeves, shrub land were stained green. Connect and dainty hand weave beautiful flowers, to go to the audience. Flower fly to the green earth, fly to the green trees, instantly, between the green leaves of green compose full of flowers.

In summer, the hot sun baked the earth mercilessly. The cook was JiaoFa very hot, the ground seemed to have been a huge steamed over, make a person to breathe. But, this is the charm of summer, it let me have a kind of place oneself in the warm feeling.

Autumn is a harvest season, look, on the apple tree in the orchard, one is big and red apple crowded high up in the tree. The grapes of the vine tree and violet is big, it seems, is flow saliva. The pomegranate tree full of red pomegranate on, them one by one to get, if carelessly will fall down.

The breath of winter quietly came to earth, he will blow the world turned white; He a blow off the goose feather snow; A blow to the people to love for the winter; It blows the trees the clothing to blow away; It blows... .

My hometown is like an exhibition hall, the beauty of spring, summer, autumn and winter even show come out, I love my hometown!

我的家乡在江西省修水县，那里是个美丽的地方。一年四季树木茂盛，鲜花盛开。

春天，春姑娘穿着五彩的霓裳，轻盈地走上了舞台，她把长袖一挥，大地上的草丛树木都被染上了绿色。春姑娘又纤巧的手编织出一朵朵美丽的小花，向台下撒去。鲜花飞向绿色的大地、飞向绿色的树木，立刻，嫩绿的翠叶间缀满了朵朵鲜花。

夏天，火热的太阳毫不留情地烤着大地上的一切。大地被烤得发焦发烫，地面上仿佛被一个巨大的蒸笼罩住了，使人透不过气来。但，这就是夏天的魅力所在，它让我有一种置身于温暖中的感觉。

秋天是个收获的季节，看，果园里的那棵苹果树上，一个个密密麻麻又大又红的苹果高高地挂在树上。那棵葡萄树上的葡萄又紫又大，看起来，可真叫人流口水。那两石榴树上结满了红彤彤的石榴，它们一个个挨挨挤挤，好像一不小心就会掉下来。

冬天的气息悄然来到人间，他一吹将整个世界变成了白色;他一吹吹下了鹅毛般的大雪;他一吹吹来了人们对冬天的喜爱;它一吹把树木的衣裳给吹掉了;它一吹……。

我的家乡好似一个展览馆，把春夏秋冬的美景依依展现出来了，我爱我的家乡!